Comments received on poems by Cassie58
Keep A Lid On It
Neilton said:
Wow! Really impressed with this one !!great poem Cassie
November 16th, 2024 08:59
Neilton said:
Wow! Really impressed with this one !!great poem Cassie
November 16th, 2024 08:59
The Colour of Void
RickthePoetWarrior said:
Good rhythm. Did you mean \'bass\' instead of \'base\' or was that intentionally abstracted.
November 15th, 2024 15:30
RickthePoetWarrior said:
Good rhythm. Did you mean \'bass\' instead of \'base\' or was that intentionally abstracted.
November 15th, 2024 15:30
Keep A Lid On It
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write. A moving poem, Cassie, with some lovely lines.
November 15th, 2024 09:15
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write. A moving poem, Cassie, with some lovely lines.
November 15th, 2024 09:15
Keep A Lid On It
Goldfinch60 said:
This will happen to us all Cassie, but not yet.
Andy
November 15th, 2024 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
This will happen to us all Cassie, but not yet.
Andy
November 15th, 2024 02:50
Keep A Lid On It
Teddy.15 said:
This simply stunning, such imagery and reflection. Beautiful poetry. 🌹 ❤️
November 15th, 2024 02:38
Teddy.15 said:
This simply stunning, such imagery and reflection. Beautiful poetry. 🌹 ❤️
November 15th, 2024 02:38
Keep A Lid On It
David Wakeling said:
This is a heart-felt poem questioning your legacy. I\'m sure you will leave wonderful memories in those who were lucky enough to know you.
November 15th, 2024 02:12
David Wakeling said:
This is a heart-felt poem questioning your legacy. I\'m sure you will leave wonderful memories in those who were lucky enough to know you.
November 15th, 2024 02:12
Keep A Lid On It
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderfully touching
and emotional poem,
thoughts and
feelings poetess!!😢
A collection of your wonderful
poems, will be
saved for sure I\'d guess!!!💯👍
Thanks for sharing, loved it!love😍
Best wishes 🍀 🤗 🌹 🐦 Thad
November 14th, 2024 17:48
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderfully touching
and emotional poem,
thoughts and
feelings poetess!!😢
A collection of your wonderful
poems, will be
saved for sure I\'d guess!!!💯👍
Thanks for sharing, loved it!love😍
Best wishes 🍀 🤗 🌹 🐦 Thad
November 14th, 2024 17:48
Keep A Lid On It
MendedFences27 said:
So sorry to hear of your losses. A difficult chore to rummage through family treasures and decide on their future. One never knows the degree of meaning they had for the owner. What generally happens is to keep what has meaning for you and offer the rest up to family members.
Your poem built a tragic scene very skillfully, with wonderful wording. Your closing lines were most effective. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
November 14th, 2024 17:17
MendedFences27 said:
So sorry to hear of your losses. A difficult chore to rummage through family treasures and decide on their future. One never knows the degree of meaning they had for the owner. What generally happens is to keep what has meaning for you and offer the rest up to family members.
Your poem built a tragic scene very skillfully, with wonderful wording. Your closing lines were most effective. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
November 14th, 2024 17:17
Keep A Lid On It
Doggerel Dave said:
I felt the depth of this. It lead me to wonder what of myself I should leave behind....perhaps not much or nothing? But have I got the will and strength for disposal right now? Thanks Cassie for opening up the question.
November 14th, 2024 16:26
Doggerel Dave said:
I felt the depth of this. It lead me to wonder what of myself I should leave behind....perhaps not much or nothing? But have I got the will and strength for disposal right now? Thanks Cassie for opening up the question.
November 14th, 2024 16:26
Keep A Lid On It
sorenbarrett said:
Vivid and its imagery, I felt as though I was there sorting through the items. I particularly loved the last. To ride the waves of loss rolling into shore on the back of memories
November 14th, 2024 14:38
sorenbarrett said:
Vivid and its imagery, I felt as though I was there sorting through the items. I particularly loved the last. To ride the waves of loss rolling into shore on the back of memories
November 14th, 2024 14:38
The Colour of Void
Tom Dylan said:
Such a moving piece, Cassie. You had me at losing the base notes to your song. Wow. A powerful, beautiful write.
November 14th, 2024 03:22
Tom Dylan said:
Such a moving piece, Cassie. You had me at losing the base notes to your song. Wow. A powerful, beautiful write.
November 14th, 2024 03:22
The Colour of Void
Goldfinch60 said:
That leaf may leave you Cassie but spring will come and new life will grow.
Andy
November 14th, 2024 03:01
Goldfinch60 said:
That leaf may leave you Cassie but spring will come and new life will grow.
Andy
November 14th, 2024 03:01
The Colour of Void
Dan Williams said:
This really hits home. Pirouette missing from the dance, and all that. Nice.
November 14th, 2024 00:23
Dan Williams said:
This really hits home. Pirouette missing from the dance, and all that. Nice.
November 14th, 2024 00:23
The Colour of Void
MendedFences27 said:
No punctuation, no capitalization, sets the scene for the sadness in this poem. A sensitive subject, the passing of friends and loved ones as we age in life. Some, go so far as to feel guilty for living. Not me, I\'m going to die laughing. - Phil A.
November 13th, 2024 21:23
MendedFences27 said:
No punctuation, no capitalization, sets the scene for the sadness in this poem. A sensitive subject, the passing of friends and loved ones as we age in life. Some, go so far as to feel guilty for living. Not me, I\'m going to die laughing. - Phil A.
November 13th, 2024 21:23
The Colour of Void
Alan R said:
I like the respect for grieving that this poem highlights!
November 13th, 2024 19:35
Alan R said:
I like the respect for grieving that this poem highlights!
November 13th, 2024 19:35
The Colour of Void
Teddy.15 said:
You are without doubt a golden leaf,
with age comes loss
too many gone
i’ve lost the base notes
from my song
I don\'t know how to tell you in words how inspiring this is, whether you lost someone yesterday or 50 years ago it still feels like this. Stunning dearest Cassie 🌹
November 13th, 2024 14:13
Teddy.15 said:
You are without doubt a golden leaf,
with age comes loss
too many gone
i’ve lost the base notes
from my song
I don\'t know how to tell you in words how inspiring this is, whether you lost someone yesterday or 50 years ago it still feels like this. Stunning dearest Cassie 🌹
November 13th, 2024 14:13
The Colour of Void
Neville said:
I know that feeling well Cassie or at least I think I do .. we can never really know how bad someone else\'s shoes pinch .. but some of us try .. and I reckon the colour of void is a pretty pastel blue 💙
November 13th, 2024 12:25
Neville said:
I know that feeling well Cassie or at least I think I do .. we can never really know how bad someone else\'s shoes pinch .. but some of us try .. and I reckon the colour of void is a pretty pastel blue 💙
November 13th, 2024 12:25
The Colour of Void
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Cassie. Meanwhile, I\'m ready for Christmas next week (eh?). See my recent poems. lol.
November 13th, 2024 11:16
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Cassie. Meanwhile, I\'m ready for Christmas next week (eh?). See my recent poems. lol.
November 13th, 2024 11:16
The Colour of Void
Doggerel Dave said:
At that early time my life, it\'s structure and relationships seemed so permanent....
November 13th, 2024 07:47
Doggerel Dave said:
At that early time my life, it\'s structure and relationships seemed so permanent....
November 13th, 2024 07:47
The Colour of Void
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful poem Cassie. The loss of the ones we love increases over time and that is a very hard reality to cope with, along with the other intricacies of aging. Beautifully written poem
Of the grief that comes with our passing years. 🌹👏
November 13th, 2024 07:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful poem Cassie. The loss of the ones we love increases over time and that is a very hard reality to cope with, along with the other intricacies of aging. Beautifully written poem
Of the grief that comes with our passing years. 🌹👏
November 13th, 2024 07:17
A River Song
Caring dove said:
Sometimes those little moments in nature are the prettiest ))
Nice writing
November 13th, 2024 05:30
Caring dove said:
Sometimes those little moments in nature are the prettiest ))
Nice writing
November 13th, 2024 05:30
The Colour of Void
Caring dove said:
‘ that golden leaf fall from my tree ‘ such a beautiful line
I think sometimes we lose ourselves and our connection to our true self .. those last lines make me think of that .
November 13th, 2024 05:28
Caring dove said:
‘ that golden leaf fall from my tree ‘ such a beautiful line
I think sometimes we lose ourselves and our connection to our true self .. those last lines make me think of that .
November 13th, 2024 05:28
The Colour of Void
sorenbarrett said:
Some beautiful lines in this poem, Cassie” i’ve lost the base notes from my song” A beautiful poem on aging setting metaphor
November 13th, 2024 05:21
sorenbarrett said:
Some beautiful lines in this poem, Cassie” i’ve lost the base notes from my song” A beautiful poem on aging setting metaphor
November 13th, 2024 05:21
The Colour of Void
arqios said:
I can only hope that as of this time and day that poetry and wonderful webpoets accompany me at this stage of life then in a way we aren’t ever truly alone. 🙏🏻
November 13th, 2024 05:14
arqios said:
I can only hope that as of this time and day that poetry and wonderful webpoets accompany me at this stage of life then in a way we aren’t ever truly alone. 🙏🏻
November 13th, 2024 05:14
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