Comments received on poems by Cassie58



Blue Eyes, Blue Eggs, Lost Love.
MendedFences27 said:

Saw them in what was supposed to be a joint concert on Boston Common in the early sixties. Joan sang beautifully for nearly all the time of the concert and Bob was explained as being ill. When nearly all the crowd had left, Bob showed up, stoned out of his mind, and mumbled a couple of songs until security grabbed him and took him to safety. Still two of the greats of the \"Folk\" era, and Bob a supreme poet, ahead of his time.
Needless to say, your poem brought back memories for me. I\'ve been a fan of both, all my life. Your poem was a wonderful adaptation of \"Diamonds and Rust.\" Very inventive. Loved it. - Phil A.

August 11th, 2024 16:03

Blue Eyes, Blue Eggs, Lost Love.
aDarkerMind said:

a wonderfuly expressive write Cassie.

am most impressed.



August 11th, 2024 11:43

Blue Eyes, Blue Eggs, Lost Love.
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful.

August 11th, 2024 10:25

Blue Eyes, Blue Eggs, Lost Love.
Teddy.15 said:

Dear Cassie, even without ever hearing this album I know this poem is amazing, such imagery woven in emotion, I\'m going to read up on Dylon and joan for sure and find the album, you\'ve inspired my curiosity too. Absolutely wonderful poetry as always. 🌹

August 11th, 2024 09:43

Blue Eyes, Blue Eggs, Lost Love.
sorenbarrett said:

Joan Baez and her song Diamonds and Rust has always been a favorite of mine. She tells of her relationship with Bob Dylan and it applies so well in this poem metaphor or not. Wonderful wording and flow with a bit of a question at the end. Very nice Cassie

August 11th, 2024 09:36

Blue Eyes, Blue Eggs, Lost Love.
orchidee said:

Good write Cassie.

August 11th, 2024 09:36

Blue Eyes, Blue Eggs, Lost Love.
2781 said:

I\'ve been listening to Dylan this week.

August 11th, 2024 09:07

In Spirit
DLewis88 said:

This is a wonderful poem. I love it.

August 11th, 2024 08:10

Forget Me Not
sorenbarrett said:

A most sweet and hauntingly innocent poem of love and loss through the fanciful eyes of a child. The imagery was wonderful and the rhyme scheme was perfect for this piece. Brilliant!

August 11th, 2024 05:05

In Spirit
Goldfinch60 said:

We will all join you above the clouds Cassie.

Andy

August 10th, 2024 01:17

In Spirit
Dan Williams said:

Dance and pin prick, wings and spirit. Nice work.

August 9th, 2024 23:51

In Spirit
Dan Williams said:

I don\'t know who to attribute to, I kind of borrowed it \"The price of living is death\" sums thing up. Nice work.

August 9th, 2024 23:40

There Lingers Dignity
Thad Wilk said:

A stunning poem,
such eye pleasing
and inviting imagery!! 🙏
Poetic perfection,
penned superbly!
Much enjoyed poetess!!
Best wishes 🤗 🌹 🐦. Thad

August 9th, 2024 22:16

In Spirit
Doggerel Dave said:

Swung through that in no time, Cassie; the smoothness of the ride was something special.
And IF your second stanza should come to pass, I\'d love to dance with you.

August 9th, 2024 07:28

In Spirit
John Prophet said:

Actually, you just did those things. Nice write!

August 9th, 2024 05:54

In Spirit
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful write with great rhyme. Loved the playfulness in this piece as it traverses the heavens in a comet over oceans, mountains, clouds and sky. Lovely!

August 9th, 2024 05:16

In Spirit
Tom Dylan said:

An absolute delight to read. Love it. Thanks for sharing. Cheers, Tom.

August 9th, 2024 03:36

In Spirit
Accidental Poet said:

Close your eyes, you\'re all these things and more. 😉👍

August 9th, 2024 02:32

In Spirit
Neville said:



Now then, don\'t that feels so much better .. I could feel it coming .. thank you Cassie



August 9th, 2024 02:23

In Spirit
orchidee said:

A fine write Cassie.
I will have to wait, to grow my wings, though I try now to be \'The Birdman\'. Do ya hear me fall off the cliff? - \'arrghhhhhh! Mrs Botox causes me to do mad things. lol.

August 9th, 2024 02:20

In Spirit
Teddy.15 said:

Wow I can only say Magnificent, you just took me on the ride of my life. Wow. Your imagery is outstanding dearest Cassie, and yes so is your theme, I definitely believe in reincarnation I too would like to be an Angel. Breathtaking truly beautiful 🌹

August 9th, 2024 02:20

Perfect Integration
Doggerel Dave said:

Neva tried a Haiku before....So....

Although I don’t know
The starlings of which you speak
Thanks for the window.

I believe rhyming\'s banned - couldn\'t help myself...🙃

Crits welcome _ Thanks also for popping in, Cassie.



August 9th, 2024 00:04

Perfect Integration
Thad Wilk said:

An awesome haiku thank you!
Lovely imagery I must say! 🕊️ ☁️
Eloquently penned poetess,
a treat to read today! ☺️
Best wishes 🌹 🐦 🤗 Thad


August 8th, 2024 21:32

Interlude
Caring dove said:

Especially love this line …


gentle waves of crystal kindness
edging closer to my feet

A lovely writing

August 8th, 2024 19:20

Gratitude
rrodriguez said:

Excellent! Poignant message! Thank you for sharing. Be bleseed!

August 7th, 2024 20:26

If Your Face Doesn’t Fit
MendedFences27 said:

And so it is. My, but you captured the
way some less fortunate are forced to live. Your poem is beautiful in that way. It also hammers out much of the cause. Your last lines sum it all up. Well done. Loved it.- Phil A.

August 3rd, 2024 09:01

Forget Me Not
Cocamedo said:

I can’t… this brings a sense of sadness and love swirling together. Wonderful work.

August 3rd, 2024 00:31

When The Heart Chooses
Cocamedo said:

Your poetry is awesome. Great job. What a wonderful description

August 3rd, 2024 00:29

Things I Wish I’d Said
Cocamedo said:

Beautiful…

August 3rd, 2024 00:27

If Your Face Doesn’t Fit
Alan R said:

This is remarkable!!! What a warm sentiment…

August 2nd, 2024 14:50

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