Comments received on poems by Cassie58
A Losing Game
Thoughtless said:
I do not drink alcohol but have suffered the effects of family members who were addicted, Thankfully, they have their acts together today. Your composition is a service.
November 19th, 2024 09:43
Thoughtless said:
I do not drink alcohol but have suffered the effects of family members who were addicted, Thankfully, they have their acts together today. Your composition is a service.
November 19th, 2024 09:43
The Colour of Void
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. Beautiful work. Love the imagery.
November 18th, 2024 16:18
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. Beautiful work. Love the imagery.
November 18th, 2024 16:18
When Words Bleed
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Great work, Cassie.
November 18th, 2024 16:10
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Great work, Cassie.
November 18th, 2024 16:10
When Words Bleed
Tom Dylan said:
Such a moving write. And thanks for sharing about Tichborne. I will have to do a little digging myself.
November 18th, 2024 04:01
Tom Dylan said:
Such a moving write. And thanks for sharing about Tichborne. I will have to do a little digging myself.
November 18th, 2024 04:01
When Words Bleed
Goldfinch60 said:
Words can be like that Cassie, they can bring all emotions into our hearts.
Andy
November 18th, 2024 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Words can be like that Cassie, they can bring all emotions into our hearts.
Andy
November 18th, 2024 02:21
When Words Bleed
Dan Williams said:
\"traitor or a martyr \", fine line. Fine sentiment also. Well done.
November 18th, 2024 00:57
Dan Williams said:
\"traitor or a martyr \", fine line. Fine sentiment also. Well done.
November 18th, 2024 00:57
When Words Bleed
NafisaSB said:
what a poignant and moving piece of verse. .touched me to the core..beautiful write.
November 18th, 2024 00:41
NafisaSB said:
what a poignant and moving piece of verse. .touched me to the core..beautiful write.
November 18th, 2024 00:41
When Words Bleed
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
A very poignant and
heart rendering poem
and story my friend!! 😢
I read his elegy,
what a way for a young
poets life to end! 😞
Thanks for sharing poetess!!
Best wishes 🍀🤗🌹 🐦. Thad
November 17th, 2024 17:43
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
A very poignant and
heart rendering poem
and story my friend!! 😢
I read his elegy,
what a way for a young
poets life to end! 😞
Thanks for sharing poetess!!
Best wishes 🍀🤗🌹 🐦. Thad
November 17th, 2024 17:43
When Words Bleed
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friend, you have moved me! \"let me tell you this / tears dripped unrestrained / a poem penetrated tissue / of resistant pain\". I can find my home in these words. I have never been a supporter of the death penalty. Reading any of these stories haunts me, and should haunt all of us, frankly. Very, very exquisitely written! Beautiful! 🌹👏
November 17th, 2024 17:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friend, you have moved me! \"let me tell you this / tears dripped unrestrained / a poem penetrated tissue / of resistant pain\". I can find my home in these words. I have never been a supporter of the death penalty. Reading any of these stories haunts me, and should haunt all of us, frankly. Very, very exquisitely written! Beautiful! 🌹👏
November 17th, 2024 17:07
The Leaves Are Down
Caring dove said:
Some people really don’t take notice of those type of things .. when I walk around town sometimes I see a lot of pigeons and hardly anybody takes notice( or at least doesn’t seem that way ) .. I always do. Say hello to them ‘ sometimes ‘
A good writing I like how you have personified the trees ‘ crying out ‘
Don’t know why people don’t take notice
November 17th, 2024 16:43
Caring dove said:
Some people really don’t take notice of those type of things .. when I walk around town sometimes I see a lot of pigeons and hardly anybody takes notice( or at least doesn’t seem that way ) .. I always do. Say hello to them ‘ sometimes ‘
A good writing I like how you have personified the trees ‘ crying out ‘
Don’t know why people don’t take notice
November 17th, 2024 16:43
When Words Bleed
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth, thank you so very much indeed for introducing me to this transient englishman tragically lost before his prime, thanks to that damning entanglement. Beautifully rendered with haunting poignancy and excellent details, thank you again very much.
November 17th, 2024 16:40
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth, thank you so very much indeed for introducing me to this transient englishman tragically lost before his prime, thanks to that damning entanglement. Beautifully rendered with haunting poignancy and excellent details, thank you again very much.
November 17th, 2024 16:40
When Words Bleed
Doggerel Dave said:
History is for me where all truth begins…. but not that early. Hard to understand the mindset of your man and Guy Fawkes and the place of a religious belief so important to them. An introduction for me to a period I knew little about.
Given my feelings/attitude to capital punishment I found Tichborne’s poem, as you say, particularly poignant.
So many thanks for that Cassie aka Lassie.
November 17th, 2024 16:31
Doggerel Dave said:
History is for me where all truth begins…. but not that early. Hard to understand the mindset of your man and Guy Fawkes and the place of a religious belief so important to them. An introduction for me to a period I knew little about.
Given my feelings/attitude to capital punishment I found Tichborne’s poem, as you say, particularly poignant.
So many thanks for that Cassie aka Lassie.
November 17th, 2024 16:31
When Words Bleed
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words \"a poem penetrated tissue of restraint pain\" a great line
November 17th, 2024 14:29
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words \"a poem penetrated tissue of restraint pain\" a great line
November 17th, 2024 14:29
When Words Bleed
Neville said:
I\'m sure you won\'t be surprised, shocked or offended that I just had to go check for me .. and Oh\' my word near shed a tear myself .. what a guy he must surely have been .. Now I\'m going to have to scribble a reet sad un .. Another little gem from Mistress C\'s golden pen .. Neville
November 17th, 2024 08:58
Neville said:
I\'m sure you won\'t be surprised, shocked or offended that I just had to go check for me .. and Oh\' my word near shed a tear myself .. what a guy he must surely have been .. Now I\'m going to have to scribble a reet sad un .. Another little gem from Mistress C\'s golden pen .. Neville
November 17th, 2024 08:58
When Words Bleed
Demar Desu said:
I never agreed with the death penalty… it’s unfortunate
November 17th, 2024 08:48
Demar Desu said:
I never agreed with the death penalty… it’s unfortunate
November 17th, 2024 08:48
Keep A Lid On It
jim56 said:
love this have just been through possessions
and sorting them its sad to do but has to be done
your poem is beautiful and powerful
nice flow and well written to
your talent is really amazing keep writing
November 17th, 2024 08:32
jim56 said:
love this have just been through possessions
and sorting them its sad to do but has to be done
your poem is beautiful and powerful
nice flow and well written to
your talent is really amazing keep writing
November 17th, 2024 08:32
Keep A Lid On It
Neville said:
You have an incredible talent to convey sentiments and emotions utilising poetry Cassie .. I felt every word .. and I\'m glad you didn\'t but rather found inspiration from your recent undertakings .. here, have another of these & with much respect💜
November 16th, 2024 11:24
Neville said:
You have an incredible talent to convey sentiments and emotions utilising poetry Cassie .. I felt every word .. and I\'m glad you didn\'t but rather found inspiration from your recent undertakings .. here, have another of these & with much respect💜
November 16th, 2024 11:24
Keep A Lid On It
Neilton said:
Wow! Really impressed with this one !!great poem Cassie
November 16th, 2024 08:59
Neilton said:
Wow! Really impressed with this one !!great poem Cassie
November 16th, 2024 08:59
The Colour of Void
RickthePoetWarrior said:
Good rhythm. Did you mean \'bass\' instead of \'base\' or was that intentionally abstracted.
November 15th, 2024 15:30
RickthePoetWarrior said:
Good rhythm. Did you mean \'bass\' instead of \'base\' or was that intentionally abstracted.
November 15th, 2024 15:30
Keep A Lid On It
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write. A moving poem, Cassie, with some lovely lines.
November 15th, 2024 09:15
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write. A moving poem, Cassie, with some lovely lines.
November 15th, 2024 09:15
Keep A Lid On It
Goldfinch60 said:
This will happen to us all Cassie, but not yet.
Andy
November 15th, 2024 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
This will happen to us all Cassie, but not yet.
Andy
November 15th, 2024 02:50
Keep A Lid On It
Teddy.15 said:
This simply stunning, such imagery and reflection. Beautiful poetry. 🌹 ❤️
November 15th, 2024 02:38
Teddy.15 said:
This simply stunning, such imagery and reflection. Beautiful poetry. 🌹 ❤️
November 15th, 2024 02:38
Keep A Lid On It
David Wakeling said:
This is a heart-felt poem questioning your legacy. I\'m sure you will leave wonderful memories in those who were lucky enough to know you.
November 15th, 2024 02:12
David Wakeling said:
This is a heart-felt poem questioning your legacy. I\'m sure you will leave wonderful memories in those who were lucky enough to know you.
November 15th, 2024 02:12
Keep A Lid On It
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderfully touching
and emotional poem,
thoughts and
feelings poetess!!😢
A collection of your wonderful
poems, will be
saved for sure I\'d guess!!!💯👍
Thanks for sharing, loved it!love😍
Best wishes 🍀 🤗 🌹 🐦 Thad
November 14th, 2024 17:48
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderfully touching
and emotional poem,
thoughts and
feelings poetess!!😢
A collection of your wonderful
poems, will be
saved for sure I\'d guess!!!💯👍
Thanks for sharing, loved it!love😍
Best wishes 🍀 🤗 🌹 🐦 Thad
November 14th, 2024 17:48
Keep A Lid On It
MendedFences27 said:
So sorry to hear of your losses. A difficult chore to rummage through family treasures and decide on their future. One never knows the degree of meaning they had for the owner. What generally happens is to keep what has meaning for you and offer the rest up to family members.
Your poem built a tragic scene very skillfully, with wonderful wording. Your closing lines were most effective. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
November 14th, 2024 17:17
MendedFences27 said:
So sorry to hear of your losses. A difficult chore to rummage through family treasures and decide on their future. One never knows the degree of meaning they had for the owner. What generally happens is to keep what has meaning for you and offer the rest up to family members.
Your poem built a tragic scene very skillfully, with wonderful wording. Your closing lines were most effective. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
November 14th, 2024 17:17
Keep A Lid On It
Doggerel Dave said:
I felt the depth of this. It lead me to wonder what of myself I should leave behind....perhaps not much or nothing? But have I got the will and strength for disposal right now? Thanks Cassie for opening up the question.
November 14th, 2024 16:26
Doggerel Dave said:
I felt the depth of this. It lead me to wonder what of myself I should leave behind....perhaps not much or nothing? But have I got the will and strength for disposal right now? Thanks Cassie for opening up the question.
November 14th, 2024 16:26
Keep A Lid On It
sorenbarrett said:
Vivid and its imagery, I felt as though I was there sorting through the items. I particularly loved the last. To ride the waves of loss rolling into shore on the back of memories
November 14th, 2024 14:38
sorenbarrett said:
Vivid and its imagery, I felt as though I was there sorting through the items. I particularly loved the last. To ride the waves of loss rolling into shore on the back of memories
November 14th, 2024 14:38
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