Comments received on poems by Cassie58
Moments
Goldfinch60 said:
Fie emotive words Cassie but that cloud will lift and light will once again be in your life.
Andy
January 31st, 2025 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Fie emotive words Cassie but that cloud will lift and light will once again be in your life.
Andy
January 31st, 2025 02:25
Moments
Dan Williams said:
Starts with sunbeams and laughter, then so sad. I guess all too often life is like that. Nicely done.
January 30th, 2025 23:46
Dan Williams said:
Starts with sunbeams and laughter, then so sad. I guess all too often life is like that. Nicely done.
January 30th, 2025 23:46
Future Days
NafisaSB said:
Congratulations on the new arrival so beautifully described. Wishing both mother and daughter good health and lots of blessings π
January 30th, 2025 23:06
NafisaSB said:
Congratulations on the new arrival so beautifully described. Wishing both mother and daughter good health and lots of blessings π
January 30th, 2025 23:06
Moments
Mutley Ravishes said:
I remember reading in a Joseph Campbell book about a god pictured shedding tears as the universe comes into being.
I treasure the sunbeams play on water.
A beautiful poem, Cassie.
January 30th, 2025 19:01
Mutley Ravishes said:
I remember reading in a Joseph Campbell book about a god pictured shedding tears as the universe comes into being.
I treasure the sunbeams play on water.
A beautiful poem, Cassie.
January 30th, 2025 19:01
Moments
Teddy.15 said:
Loosing a child for any reason is devastating I know first hand and I saw my mother lose a son. From the celebration of birth to the dark side of losing a babe. I truly saw this in your magnificent imagery your arms and all. Kudos. πΉ Your title is perfect, moments well they certainly are. π
January 30th, 2025 12:23
Teddy.15 said:
Loosing a child for any reason is devastating I know first hand and I saw my mother lose a son. From the celebration of birth to the dark side of losing a babe. I truly saw this in your magnificent imagery your arms and all. Kudos. πΉ Your title is perfect, moments well they certainly are. π
January 30th, 2025 12:23
Moments
Poetic Licence said:
That`s a very emotional write for many reasons, have a good evening
January 30th, 2025 12:08
Poetic Licence said:
That`s a very emotional write for many reasons, have a good evening
January 30th, 2025 12:08
Moments
LP2187 said:
Beautifully written, loved reading this. Have a great day.
January 30th, 2025 11:58
LP2187 said:
Beautifully written, loved reading this. Have a great day.
January 30th, 2025 11:58
Moments
Thoughtless said:
A sad world we live in. The little ones everywhere helpless because of adults who are themselves caught in a conflict between wisdom and noise. Perhaps poetry can help.
January 30th, 2025 09:03
Thoughtless said:
A sad world we live in. The little ones everywhere helpless because of adults who are themselves caught in a conflict between wisdom and noise. Perhaps poetry can help.
January 30th, 2025 09:03
Moments
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Such a beautifully heartbreaking poem, Cassie. It\'s so sad when we lose anyone, let alone children. This reminds me of the awful gun violence epidemic in my country and the countless kids who get slaughtered at schools due to it. No matter what the circumstances of this poem are, the loss of children is tragically painful. Well done in this expression, dearest poet. β€οΈπΉπ
January 30th, 2025 08:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Such a beautifully heartbreaking poem, Cassie. It\'s so sad when we lose anyone, let alone children. This reminds me of the awful gun violence epidemic in my country and the countless kids who get slaughtered at schools due to it. No matter what the circumstances of this poem are, the loss of children is tragically painful. Well done in this expression, dearest poet. β€οΈπΉπ
January 30th, 2025 08:54
Moments
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of sadness with such a sense of longing for what might have been. Difficult to read. Great write Cassie it moved the emotions
January 30th, 2025 08:34
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of sadness with such a sense of longing for what might have been. Difficult to read. Great write Cassie it moved the emotions
January 30th, 2025 08:34
Moments
Neville said:
such sad moments surely .. those that last a lifetime .. or indeed, more
January 30th, 2025 08:15
Neville said:
such sad moments surely .. those that last a lifetime .. or indeed, more
January 30th, 2025 08:15
Moments
Cheeky Missy said:
Superb. What\'s so exquisite about this delicate little number whose weighty essence is heavier than its delicacy is how adroitly the simile flips to the painful reality. Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a hard-hitting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing. Reminds me of what my late mother said about my \"baby\"/ youngest brother...after miscarrying the pregnancy before him she\'d begged the LORD to give her just one more baby to hold in her arms. Thank you again.
January 30th, 2025 08:15
Cheeky Missy said:
Superb. What\'s so exquisite about this delicate little number whose weighty essence is heavier than its delicacy is how adroitly the simile flips to the painful reality. Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a hard-hitting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing. Reminds me of what my late mother said about my \"baby\"/ youngest brother...after miscarrying the pregnancy before him she\'d begged the LORD to give her just one more baby to hold in her arms. Thank you again.
January 30th, 2025 08:15
Future Days
Caring dove said:
Thatβs nice and nice writing too , Cassie π
January 30th, 2025 04:59
Caring dove said:
Thatβs nice and nice writing too , Cassie π
January 30th, 2025 04:59
Rise and Shine
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Cassie
Soothing With Sweet Sunshine
January 30th, 2025 03:34
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Cassie
Soothing With Sweet Sunshine
January 30th, 2025 03:34
Future Days
Goldfinch60 said:
She will be loved so much by you Cassie, of that I am sure.
Andy
January 30th, 2025 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
She will be loved so much by you Cassie, of that I am sure.
Andy
January 30th, 2025 02:27
Future Days
David Wakeling said:
Lovely news.It is not always easy but it is a blessing.Well written
January 29th, 2025 15:42
David Wakeling said:
Lovely news.It is not always easy but it is a blessing.Well written
January 29th, 2025 15:42
Future Days
sorenbarrett said:
A perfect poem for a most precious period of life. Lovely Cassie
January 29th, 2025 13:12
sorenbarrett said:
A perfect poem for a most precious period of life. Lovely Cassie
January 29th, 2025 13:12
Future Days
Teddy.15 said:
You bring so much joy dearest Cassie, congratulations to you and your beautiful family, and for sharing your joy with us here. You bring me nothing but smiles with this. Future days indeed with your new darling π πΉ
January 29th, 2025 10:54
Teddy.15 said:
You bring so much joy dearest Cassie, congratulations to you and your beautiful family, and for sharing your joy with us here. You bring me nothing but smiles with this. Future days indeed with your new darling π πΉ
January 29th, 2025 10:54
Future Days
Poetic Licence said:
A dedication to the greatest gift any one can receive, beautiful piece.
January 29th, 2025 10:36
Poetic Licence said:
A dedication to the greatest gift any one can receive, beautiful piece.
January 29th, 2025 10:36
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