Comments received on poems by A Boy With Roses
His Pale Skin
orchidee said:
I don\'t know about the spacing - it happened to me too! Not fixed it yet - if we can?!
June 15th, 2022 02:03
orchidee said:
I don\'t know about the spacing - it happened to me too! Not fixed it yet - if we can?!
June 15th, 2022 02:03
His Pale Skin
arqios said:
A menagerie of images and movement, a kaleidoscope of emotion.
June 14th, 2022 21:04
arqios said:
A menagerie of images and movement, a kaleidoscope of emotion.
June 14th, 2022 21:04
His Pale Skin
a thousand wishes said:
Wow. Very descriptive and emotional. Nice use of imagery. This poem is a true work of art
June 14th, 2022 21:02
a thousand wishes said:
Wow. Very descriptive and emotional. Nice use of imagery. This poem is a true work of art
June 14th, 2022 21:02
Amore
A Boy With Roses said:
Appreciate the sweet comment... very sweet...
♥♥♥
However, I don\'t necessarily care for views posting here. I actually used to post on other poetry sites (where I was more popular than here) and get upwards to fifty views and more on each poem, with the most being around 400 views. I deleted my old account on All Poetry and the owner emailed me. I prefer the layout of this site I guess, with how it feels more like a portfolio which is why I\'m more consistent with posting. (Although there seems to be a lot of conservative and prudish cunts here). So I don\'t mind getting low clicks whatsoever. I\'d consider my writings quite evocative and some stuff homoerotic, so I can understand why some just don\'t care. But I write for myself.
Besides, I\'m in the process of hand writing and editing poems. Sometimes I post here for the space, but this isn\'t long term nor my endgame. One day I will vanish, lol.
June 9th, 2022 19:17
A Boy With Roses said:
Appreciate the sweet comment... very sweet...
♥♥♥
However, I don\'t necessarily care for views posting here. I actually used to post on other poetry sites (where I was more popular than here) and get upwards to fifty views and more on each poem, with the most being around 400 views. I deleted my old account on All Poetry and the owner emailed me. I prefer the layout of this site I guess, with how it feels more like a portfolio which is why I\'m more consistent with posting. (Although there seems to be a lot of conservative and prudish cunts here). So I don\'t mind getting low clicks whatsoever. I\'d consider my writings quite evocative and some stuff homoerotic, so I can understand why some just don\'t care. But I write for myself.
Besides, I\'m in the process of hand writing and editing poems. Sometimes I post here for the space, but this isn\'t long term nor my endgame. One day I will vanish, lol.
June 9th, 2022 19:17
Ysolla
arqios said:
Solid as the paragraph gives that concrete look the words give that concrete feel. Deeply moving write.
June 8th, 2022 18:34
arqios said:
Solid as the paragraph gives that concrete look the words give that concrete feel. Deeply moving write.
June 8th, 2022 18:34
Nocturnal Creature
arqios said:
The image of sticking sea urchins is a sensory overload! Rhyming lichen and radio static raises the bar thereinafter! Quite the delight to read.
June 6th, 2022 04:12
arqios said:
The image of sticking sea urchins is a sensory overload! Rhyming lichen and radio static raises the bar thereinafter! Quite the delight to read.
June 6th, 2022 04:12
Polyrhythm
_Daisy said:
this is such a lovely poem with magical performance of language!
June 1st, 2022 19:30
_Daisy said:
this is such a lovely poem with magical performance of language!
June 1st, 2022 19:30
Blackbird
arqios said:
Very liquidy and somewhat blue.
Quite fluidly moving in its hues.
May 27th, 2022 20:20
arqios said:
Very liquidy and somewhat blue.
Quite fluidly moving in its hues.
May 27th, 2022 20:20
Study in Watercolour
arqios said:
Reading it felt like a painting that one goes into. Kinda Mary Poppins like but with a more continental feel -VanGogh, Vermeer and the French and Italians too.
May 27th, 2022 20:17
arqios said:
Reading it felt like a painting that one goes into. Kinda Mary Poppins like but with a more continental feel -VanGogh, Vermeer and the French and Italians too.
May 27th, 2022 20:17
Hanging Garden
Crowns4Christ said:
Oh Jordan, this is so sad it makes me emotional, and not many things do that, haha,
But this piece did, love is so sacred, and beautiful,it makes me sad when I hear of lost love, keep being you, you\'re a great writer and a great person, be persistent in what you want,
Persistence IS key, like my husband always says
April 30th, 2022 14:29
Crowns4Christ said:
Oh Jordan, this is so sad it makes me emotional, and not many things do that, haha,
But this piece did, love is so sacred, and beautiful,it makes me sad when I hear of lost love, keep being you, you\'re a great writer and a great person, be persistent in what you want,
Persistence IS key, like my husband always says
April 30th, 2022 14:29
Vanitas
Crowns4Christ said:
Good write, our heart is truly like a violin string, depending on the tune we play, determines our lives, whether happy or sad, it\'s really up to our perception of ourselves
April 25th, 2022 19:19
Crowns4Christ said:
Good write, our heart is truly like a violin string, depending on the tune we play, determines our lives, whether happy or sad, it\'s really up to our perception of ourselves
April 25th, 2022 19:19
To Close the Mouth of a Wound
Distant View said:
A highly inventive poem, full of interesting imagery! I love the line, \"I hear the voices of loved ones sewn into time.\" Reading this poem is almost like being thrown into a Salvador Dali painting, and everything within it coming alive with unexpected qualities! A richly rewarding poem!
April 23rd, 2022 03:24
Distant View said:
A highly inventive poem, full of interesting imagery! I love the line, \"I hear the voices of loved ones sewn into time.\" Reading this poem is almost like being thrown into a Salvador Dali painting, and everything within it coming alive with unexpected qualities! A richly rewarding poem!
April 23rd, 2022 03:24
Meadow Song
jarcher54 said:
JD, this may be your most haunting and coherently complex journey yet. Every line, every image, sparks with extravagant yet well-tempered imagery. You made my week... may I post this (with credit) on our work feed where people post poetry? This is moving, creative, beautiful, and sincere...
April 15th, 2022 12:14
jarcher54 said:
JD, this may be your most haunting and coherently complex journey yet. Every line, every image, sparks with extravagant yet well-tempered imagery. You made my week... may I post this (with credit) on our work feed where people post poetry? This is moving, creative, beautiful, and sincere...
April 15th, 2022 12:14
Manic Pixie Boy
sophin said:
Incredible write, fellow poet! Your words conveyed such a vivid picture in my mind, like a rippling canvas of some painting. Perfectly blends in human emotion and the mysterious darkness of nature. Well done.
April 5th, 2022 19:18
sophin said:
Incredible write, fellow poet! Your words conveyed such a vivid picture in my mind, like a rippling canvas of some painting. Perfectly blends in human emotion and the mysterious darkness of nature. Well done.
April 5th, 2022 19:18
Manic Pixie Boy
Crystal Hope said:
excellent description to the sensual writing . well done
April 5th, 2022 15:10
Crystal Hope said:
excellent description to the sensual writing . well done
April 5th, 2022 15:10
Those Days Are Long Gone
jarcher54 said:
You stunned me with \"Life is out of reach.\" Such a beautiful dark expression. Only you... thanks
April 5th, 2022 11:18
jarcher54 said:
You stunned me with \"Life is out of reach.\" Such a beautiful dark expression. Only you... thanks
April 5th, 2022 11:18
Moth Scars
James Michael said:
Quite a ride of imagery. Very well written with emotional power.
I must ask, how long did it take to write this? My withered mind would’ve taken a month!
March 26th, 2022 21:01
James Michael said:
Quite a ride of imagery. Very well written with emotional power.
I must ask, how long did it take to write this? My withered mind would’ve taken a month!
March 26th, 2022 21:01
Vincent
Buzz Bray said:
\"Art is the death of us, the last train to nowhere.\"
Wow! Powerful words. I like your use of structure and vocabulary. Makes for en engaging read.
March 16th, 2022 22:03
Buzz Bray said:
\"Art is the death of us, the last train to nowhere.\"
Wow! Powerful words. I like your use of structure and vocabulary. Makes for en engaging read.
March 16th, 2022 22:03
Dead Flowers
jarcher54 said:
Sympathy is my downfall too... very keen observation! It\'s like you are out of control and completely sober at the same time. I adore that about your poems.
March 11th, 2022 20:38
jarcher54 said:
Sympathy is my downfall too... very keen observation! It\'s like you are out of control and completely sober at the same time. I adore that about your poems.
March 11th, 2022 20:38
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