Comments received on poems by A Boy With Roses
The Moonlight Is Disintegrating Into Ashes
L. B. Mek said:
\'I see the morning and its sharp teeth
The orange glow of the sunrise in the distance
I hear a saxophone
I see a city made out of synthetic organs
Bleeding like a symphony
The sea is jutting back and forth
Voiceless \'
A Brilliant read
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
November 14th, 2022 04:59
L. B. Mek said:
\'I see the morning and its sharp teeth
The orange glow of the sunrise in the distance
I hear a saxophone
I see a city made out of synthetic organs
Bleeding like a symphony
The sea is jutting back and forth
Voiceless \'
A Brilliant read
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
November 14th, 2022 04:59
Deep-Sea Diver
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Sad but so nicely expressed .. beautiful words especially this
In dreams of gold and blue,’
November 10th, 2022 04:49
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Sad but so nicely expressed .. beautiful words especially this
In dreams of gold and blue,’
November 10th, 2022 04:49
Pedal Steel and Ribbons
arqios said:
Very cinematic and quite connected to the senses. Spiderwebs are quite a thing to contend with and so are sticky emotions. TFS
November 10th, 2022 04:26
arqios said:
Very cinematic and quite connected to the senses. Spiderwebs are quite a thing to contend with and so are sticky emotions. TFS
November 10th, 2022 04:26
Deep-Sea Diver
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
I pictured the, night, the mood and colors in your poem. Nice work.
November 8th, 2022 18:58
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
I pictured the, night, the mood and colors in your poem. Nice work.
November 8th, 2022 18:58
Learning To Let the Past Go
jarcher54 said:
Don\'t be naive... there ARE monsters under the bed!
November 5th, 2022 19:28
jarcher54 said:
Don\'t be naive... there ARE monsters under the bed!
November 5th, 2022 19:28
Rabbit In A Labyrinth
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
That is quite the sky!
November 1st, 2022 18:18
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
That is quite the sky!
November 1st, 2022 18:18
Rabbit In A Labyrinth
arqios said:
Oh dear, oh my, yay. It also made me think about Jefferson the Mad Hatter!
November 1st, 2022 08:56
arqios said:
Oh dear, oh my, yay. It also made me think about Jefferson the Mad Hatter!
November 1st, 2022 08:56
Rabbit In A Labyrinth
Neville said:
I am so glad I chose to meander this mane, otherwise I may not have stumbled upon these fine words ..
November 1st, 2022 04:14
Neville said:
I am so glad I chose to meander this mane, otherwise I may not have stumbled upon these fine words ..
November 1st, 2022 04:14
October Poem
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
your last stanza\'s imagery
and fully realised grey metaphor
was a joy of a poetic treat, to read
October 31st, 2022 06:57
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
your last stanza\'s imagery
and fully realised grey metaphor
was a joy of a poetic treat, to read
October 31st, 2022 06:57
My Tears Die Like Stars
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
I agree with Rocky Lagou! Rocky expressed so well what you are trying to say. Very visual writing as well!
October 26th, 2022 16:30
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
I agree with Rocky Lagou! Rocky expressed so well what you are trying to say. Very visual writing as well!
October 26th, 2022 16:30
My Tears Die Like Stars
Rocky Lagou said:
This is the most explosive poem I\'ve read in a while. Wow. From the loveless sentiments, to the words that are so impassioned yet to no avail, to the self-destruction, it\'s so relatable. It\'s like you poured your heart onto a paper, and here we are. That finale when you begin to list the things you are, \"butterfly,\" \"wolf,\" \"apathy,\" etc. is so climactic. I hope you had a breather after writing this. Regardless, it\'s beautiful and so emotional, and that\'s why I love it.
October 26th, 2022 14:24
Rocky Lagou said:
This is the most explosive poem I\'ve read in a while. Wow. From the loveless sentiments, to the words that are so impassioned yet to no avail, to the self-destruction, it\'s so relatable. It\'s like you poured your heart onto a paper, and here we are. That finale when you begin to list the things you are, \"butterfly,\" \"wolf,\" \"apathy,\" etc. is so climactic. I hope you had a breather after writing this. Regardless, it\'s beautiful and so emotional, and that\'s why I love it.
October 26th, 2022 14:24
Invisible Clocks
L. B. Mek said:
\'You leave the house just to go missing\'
(while some go missing, standing right by our side...)
such a vivid scene your words emote
thanks for sharing dear poet
October 24th, 2022 04:10
L. B. Mek said:
\'You leave the house just to go missing\'
(while some go missing, standing right by our side...)
such a vivid scene your words emote
thanks for sharing dear poet
October 24th, 2022 04:10
With Every Glittering Sea
Goldfinch60 said:
Home is so real and wonderful in life Jordan.
Andy
October 15th, 2022 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Home is so real and wonderful in life Jordan.
Andy
October 15th, 2022 00:51
Touch and Go Ache
jarcher54 said:
I am enjoying your recent pieces for their apparent simplicity and brooding deep impact. In some of your longer, more \"rambling\" and image-packed poems, all the emotions and ups and downs are literally present as we experience them. This little piece works more indirectly, while ultimately reaching the same honesty and richness.
We all talk to our pain, and comparing that to how one might talk to another person (present?
more likely not present?) or maybe to oneself is a virtuoso line. I don\'t talk to my pleasure, that I know of, but what a bittersweet idea!
October 14th, 2022 18:58
jarcher54 said:
I am enjoying your recent pieces for their apparent simplicity and brooding deep impact. In some of your longer, more \"rambling\" and image-packed poems, all the emotions and ups and downs are literally present as we experience them. This little piece works more indirectly, while ultimately reaching the same honesty and richness.
We all talk to our pain, and comparing that to how one might talk to another person (present?
more likely not present?) or maybe to oneself is a virtuoso line. I don\'t talk to my pleasure, that I know of, but what a bittersweet idea!
October 14th, 2022 18:58
With Every Glittering Sea
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Lovely!
October 14th, 2022 14:51
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Lovely!
October 14th, 2022 14:51
Touch and Go Ache
Ninkasi said:
I think this piece is so all encompassing and causes an ebb and flow in minds of the reader.. Its actually a surreal flow of emotions and metaphors dotting the read are exquisite.
October 14th, 2022 03:11
Ninkasi said:
I think this piece is so all encompassing and causes an ebb and flow in minds of the reader.. Its actually a surreal flow of emotions and metaphors dotting the read are exquisite.
October 14th, 2022 03:11
Conversations With the Moon
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like your choice of words )) sad yet beautiful
October 10th, 2022 23:53
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like your choice of words )) sad yet beautiful
October 10th, 2022 23:53
Be Weird, Eat Cake
arqios said:
Brings brass knuckles to the poetry fight! Hard hitting and yet tender to the emotions that it projects. A perfect slice of contemporary life.
October 10th, 2022 01:26
arqios said:
Brings brass knuckles to the poetry fight! Hard hitting and yet tender to the emotions that it projects. A perfect slice of contemporary life.
October 10th, 2022 01:26
Be Weird, Eat Cake
Moom said:
Wow I really felt this one. Lovely writing, emotional and raw in a very tidy way.
October 9th, 2022 16:17
Moom said:
Wow I really felt this one. Lovely writing, emotional and raw in a very tidy way.
October 9th, 2022 16:17
How To Make Eye Contact
J.H.Byron-Nuel said:
Making up worlds to feel content is what I do everyday day.
October 7th, 2022 21:46
J.H.Byron-Nuel said:
Making up worlds to feel content is what I do everyday day.
October 7th, 2022 21:46
Reverie
arqios said:
The depth of loves that shouldn\'t have been, the drama is toiling and boiling in this one. Solid!
September 26th, 2022 18:30
arqios said:
The depth of loves that shouldn\'t have been, the drama is toiling and boiling in this one. Solid!
September 26th, 2022 18:30
Touch-Me-Not, Come Back To Me
Rocky Lagou said:
This is so neatly written dear poet! I\'m enamored by this journey. It\'s so relatable too. As a loner I\'ve been accustomed to being my own best friend. This poem also has a lingering sense of regret and recklessness that is lived when one is \"young and dumb.\" I love this. My favorite lines are:
\"Let us live like kids again
And be wild in the night, full of wonder and sin
Tomorrow we will live up to our promises\"
September 23rd, 2022 09:58
Rocky Lagou said:
This is so neatly written dear poet! I\'m enamored by this journey. It\'s so relatable too. As a loner I\'ve been accustomed to being my own best friend. This poem also has a lingering sense of regret and recklessness that is lived when one is \"young and dumb.\" I love this. My favorite lines are:
\"Let us live like kids again
And be wild in the night, full of wonder and sin
Tomorrow we will live up to our promises\"
September 23rd, 2022 09:58
Touch-Me-Not, Come Back To Me
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A great writing )) love the mention of colours and nature in this . And it’s important to be our own best friend .. we need to find some sense of comfort from ourselves , I guess
September 22nd, 2022 02:15
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A great writing )) love the mention of colours and nature in this . And it’s important to be our own best friend .. we need to find some sense of comfort from ourselves , I guess
September 22nd, 2022 02:15
Outward to Otherworlds
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
And it can get easier ) a good writing . Like your mention of nature in this I think nature can bring a lot of comfort . And I love your last line about the angels .. they are there to comfort us and help us .. and I believe in them so much
September 18th, 2022 12:39
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
And it can get easier ) a good writing . Like your mention of nature in this I think nature can bring a lot of comfort . And I love your last line about the angels .. they are there to comfort us and help us .. and I believe in them so much
September 18th, 2022 12:39
As I Lay Dying
jarcher54 said:
You often sing songs of heartbreak... I\'ll reread this one later. It\'s full of moving images, your gift of combining the unexpected into intriguing, coded messages! Missed you my complicated songbird!
September 6th, 2022 22:22
jarcher54 said:
You often sing songs of heartbreak... I\'ll reread this one later. It\'s full of moving images, your gift of combining the unexpected into intriguing, coded messages! Missed you my complicated songbird!
September 6th, 2022 22:22
This Landscape is Changing
L. B. Mek said:
all the best!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 28th, 2022 01:29
L. B. Mek said:
all the best!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 28th, 2022 01:29
Orange Tree
Bella Shepard said:
I find that the beauty of poetry is expression without reservation, where else can you feel so free. I had to read this aloud with the timbre and tone it deserves. It is soul searching and heart-felt. Wonderful words arranged perfectly.
July 16th, 2022 09:07
Bella Shepard said:
I find that the beauty of poetry is expression without reservation, where else can you feel so free. I had to read this aloud with the timbre and tone it deserves. It is soul searching and heart-felt. Wonderful words arranged perfectly.
July 16th, 2022 09:07
Orange Tree
Draven said:
Oh wow, this is beautifully written, heart wrenching full of imagery and so melancholic. Nicely done.
July 16th, 2022 07:47
Draven said:
Oh wow, this is beautifully written, heart wrenching full of imagery and so melancholic. Nicely done.
July 16th, 2022 07:47
Youth and Decay
L. B. Mek said:
really like your purposed use
of repetition, to add
a different depth, aside
the wisdom of your poetry..
brilliantly realised!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(still
at least you made it, to page 7
some
get lost, seven syllables
in...)
July 8th, 2022 03:50
L. B. Mek said:
really like your purposed use
of repetition, to add
a different depth, aside
the wisdom of your poetry..
brilliantly realised!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(still
at least you made it, to page 7
some
get lost, seven syllables
in...)
July 8th, 2022 03:50
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