Comments received on poems by A Boy With Roses
Blackbird
arqios said:
Very liquidy and somewhat blue.
Quite fluidly moving in its hues.
May 27th, 2022 20:20
arqios said:
Very liquidy and somewhat blue.
Quite fluidly moving in its hues.
May 27th, 2022 20:20
Study in Watercolour
arqios said:
Reading it felt like a painting that one goes into. Kinda Mary Poppins like but with a more continental feel -VanGogh, Vermeer and the French and Italians too.
May 27th, 2022 20:17
arqios said:
Reading it felt like a painting that one goes into. Kinda Mary Poppins like but with a more continental feel -VanGogh, Vermeer and the French and Italians too.
May 27th, 2022 20:17
Hanging Garden
Crowns4Christ said:
Oh Jordan, this is so sad it makes me emotional, and not many things do that, haha,
But this piece did, love is so sacred, and beautiful,it makes me sad when I hear of lost love, keep being you, you\'re a great writer and a great person, be persistent in what you want,
Persistence IS key, like my husband always says
April 30th, 2022 14:29
Crowns4Christ said:
Oh Jordan, this is so sad it makes me emotional, and not many things do that, haha,
But this piece did, love is so sacred, and beautiful,it makes me sad when I hear of lost love, keep being you, you\'re a great writer and a great person, be persistent in what you want,
Persistence IS key, like my husband always says
April 30th, 2022 14:29
Vanitas
Crowns4Christ said:
Good write, our heart is truly like a violin string, depending on the tune we play, determines our lives, whether happy or sad, it\'s really up to our perception of ourselves
April 25th, 2022 19:19
Crowns4Christ said:
Good write, our heart is truly like a violin string, depending on the tune we play, determines our lives, whether happy or sad, it\'s really up to our perception of ourselves
April 25th, 2022 19:19
To Close the Mouth of a Wound
Distant View said:
A highly inventive poem, full of interesting imagery! I love the line, \"I hear the voices of loved ones sewn into time.\" Reading this poem is almost like being thrown into a Salvador Dali painting, and everything within it coming alive with unexpected qualities! A richly rewarding poem!
April 23rd, 2022 03:24
Distant View said:
A highly inventive poem, full of interesting imagery! I love the line, \"I hear the voices of loved ones sewn into time.\" Reading this poem is almost like being thrown into a Salvador Dali painting, and everything within it coming alive with unexpected qualities! A richly rewarding poem!
April 23rd, 2022 03:24
Meadow Song
jarcher54 said:
JD, this may be your most haunting and coherently complex journey yet. Every line, every image, sparks with extravagant yet well-tempered imagery. You made my week... may I post this (with credit) on our work feed where people post poetry? This is moving, creative, beautiful, and sincere...
April 15th, 2022 12:14
jarcher54 said:
JD, this may be your most haunting and coherently complex journey yet. Every line, every image, sparks with extravagant yet well-tempered imagery. You made my week... may I post this (with credit) on our work feed where people post poetry? This is moving, creative, beautiful, and sincere...
April 15th, 2022 12:14
Manic Pixie Boy
sophin said:
Incredible write, fellow poet! Your words conveyed such a vivid picture in my mind, like a rippling canvas of some painting. Perfectly blends in human emotion and the mysterious darkness of nature. Well done.
April 5th, 2022 19:18
sophin said:
Incredible write, fellow poet! Your words conveyed such a vivid picture in my mind, like a rippling canvas of some painting. Perfectly blends in human emotion and the mysterious darkness of nature. Well done.
April 5th, 2022 19:18
Manic Pixie Boy
Crystal Hope said:
excellent description to the sensual writing . well done
April 5th, 2022 15:10
Crystal Hope said:
excellent description to the sensual writing . well done
April 5th, 2022 15:10
Those Days Are Long Gone
jarcher54 said:
You stunned me with \"Life is out of reach.\" Such a beautiful dark expression. Only you... thanks
April 5th, 2022 11:18
jarcher54 said:
You stunned me with \"Life is out of reach.\" Such a beautiful dark expression. Only you... thanks
April 5th, 2022 11:18
Moth Scars
James Michael said:
Quite a ride of imagery. Very well written with emotional power.
I must ask, how long did it take to write this? My withered mind would’ve taken a month!
March 26th, 2022 21:01
James Michael said:
Quite a ride of imagery. Very well written with emotional power.
I must ask, how long did it take to write this? My withered mind would’ve taken a month!
March 26th, 2022 21:01
Vincent
Buzz Bray said:
\"Art is the death of us, the last train to nowhere.\"
Wow! Powerful words. I like your use of structure and vocabulary. Makes for en engaging read.
March 16th, 2022 22:03
Buzz Bray said:
\"Art is the death of us, the last train to nowhere.\"
Wow! Powerful words. I like your use of structure and vocabulary. Makes for en engaging read.
March 16th, 2022 22:03
Dead Flowers
jarcher54 said:
Sympathy is my downfall too... very keen observation! It\'s like you are out of control and completely sober at the same time. I adore that about your poems.
March 11th, 2022 20:38
jarcher54 said:
Sympathy is my downfall too... very keen observation! It\'s like you are out of control and completely sober at the same time. I adore that about your poems.
March 11th, 2022 20:38
Waxen Wings
jarcher54 said:
Jordan, I am excited to see you returning to a veritable explosion of images in what reads like spontaneous and irresistible utterance from your heart. Bravo today!
March 11th, 2022 20:35
jarcher54 said:
Jordan, I am excited to see you returning to a veritable explosion of images in what reads like spontaneous and irresistible utterance from your heart. Bravo today!
March 11th, 2022 20:35
Dead Flowers
Buzz Bray said:
Wow! Wonderful imagery. \"you know my heart grows fonder with every lasting sun beat \"
Beautifully written!
March 10th, 2022 17:37
Buzz Bray said:
Wow! Wonderful imagery. \"you know my heart grows fonder with every lasting sun beat \"
Beautifully written!
March 10th, 2022 17:37
Soft Skin
L. B. Mek said:
its a crime, your poetry
doesn\'t get the attention
and appreciation it deserves
on MPS..
thank you! for choosing to share
dear Poet
March 10th, 2022 04:17
L. B. Mek said:
its a crime, your poetry
doesn\'t get the attention
and appreciation it deserves
on MPS..
thank you! for choosing to share
dear Poet
March 10th, 2022 04:17
Lovers to Strangers
L. B. Mek said:
\'tomorrow in the deepest ocean, no last goodbye
purple rays tie us together like ribbons of sunlight\'
March 7th, 2022 05:17
L. B. Mek said:
\'tomorrow in the deepest ocean, no last goodbye
purple rays tie us together like ribbons of sunlight\'
March 7th, 2022 05:17
Love Too Good To Be True
L. B. Mek said:
\'I\'ve been picking apple seeds from my pockets
and turning them into memories
letters
I never read, and forgot to respond
love bigger than a temporary song
I haven\'t heard from him in thirteen days
I\'ve been counting them, blindsided
oh, crim mercy
sweeter than pink lemonade, 20 units a day
smoking until I can\'t breathe, I dissolve
like
ecstasy on my tongue
nothing, is sacred\'
February 28th, 2022 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'I\'ve been picking apple seeds from my pockets
and turning them into memories
letters
I never read, and forgot to respond
love bigger than a temporary song
I haven\'t heard from him in thirteen days
I\'ve been counting them, blindsided
oh, crim mercy
sweeter than pink lemonade, 20 units a day
smoking until I can\'t breathe, I dissolve
like
ecstasy on my tongue
nothing, is sacred\'
February 28th, 2022 05:09
Not That Type of Guy
Richmondpomes said:
If everyone was the \"perfect type\" I feel like the world would be so bland
February 25th, 2022 20:45
Richmondpomes said:
If everyone was the \"perfect type\" I feel like the world would be so bland
February 25th, 2022 20:45
Untravelled Waters
L. B. Mek said:
\'slipping away with every blink
drag these waters to your grave and never speak
gilded, wistful
Nairobi
Eridanus
looking out the window in the car
the sunset tonight reminds me of your dancing feet
the broken sinew of your archaic body
a mind\'s symphony
every harvest is another moon, a reminder of you
February 25th, 2022 05:10
L. B. Mek said:
\'slipping away with every blink
drag these waters to your grave and never speak
gilded, wistful
Nairobi
Eridanus
looking out the window in the car
the sunset tonight reminds me of your dancing feet
the broken sinew of your archaic body
a mind\'s symphony
every harvest is another moon, a reminder of you
February 25th, 2022 05:10
Cold Sun
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
Love your imagery, lets hope your love life sees better skies!
February 23rd, 2022 19:00
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
Love your imagery, lets hope your love life sees better skies!
February 23rd, 2022 19:00
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