Comments received on poems by A Boy With Roses
Waxen Wings
jarcher54 said:
Jordan, I am excited to see you returning to a veritable explosion of images in what reads like spontaneous and irresistible utterance from your heart. Bravo today!
March 11th, 2022 20:35
jarcher54 said:
Jordan, I am excited to see you returning to a veritable explosion of images in what reads like spontaneous and irresistible utterance from your heart. Bravo today!
March 11th, 2022 20:35
Dead Flowers
Buzz Bray said:
Wow! Wonderful imagery. \"you know my heart grows fonder with every lasting sun beat \"
Beautifully written!
March 10th, 2022 17:37
Buzz Bray said:
Wow! Wonderful imagery. \"you know my heart grows fonder with every lasting sun beat \"
Beautifully written!
March 10th, 2022 17:37
Soft Skin
L. B. Mek said:
its a crime, your poetry
doesn\'t get the attention
and appreciation it deserves
on MPS..
thank you! for choosing to share
dear Poet
March 10th, 2022 04:17
L. B. Mek said:
its a crime, your poetry
doesn\'t get the attention
and appreciation it deserves
on MPS..
thank you! for choosing to share
dear Poet
March 10th, 2022 04:17
Lovers to Strangers
L. B. Mek said:
\'tomorrow in the deepest ocean, no last goodbye
purple rays tie us together like ribbons of sunlight\'
March 7th, 2022 05:17
L. B. Mek said:
\'tomorrow in the deepest ocean, no last goodbye
purple rays tie us together like ribbons of sunlight\'
March 7th, 2022 05:17
Love Too Good To Be True
L. B. Mek said:
\'I\'ve been picking apple seeds from my pockets
and turning them into memories
letters
I never read, and forgot to respond
love bigger than a temporary song
I haven\'t heard from him in thirteen days
I\'ve been counting them, blindsided
oh, crim mercy
sweeter than pink lemonade, 20 units a day
smoking until I can\'t breathe, I dissolve
like
ecstasy on my tongue
nothing, is sacred\'
February 28th, 2022 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'I\'ve been picking apple seeds from my pockets
and turning them into memories
letters
I never read, and forgot to respond
love bigger than a temporary song
I haven\'t heard from him in thirteen days
I\'ve been counting them, blindsided
oh, crim mercy
sweeter than pink lemonade, 20 units a day
smoking until I can\'t breathe, I dissolve
like
ecstasy on my tongue
nothing, is sacred\'
February 28th, 2022 05:09
Not That Type of Guy
Richmondpomes said:
If everyone was the \"perfect type\" I feel like the world would be so bland
February 25th, 2022 20:45
Richmondpomes said:
If everyone was the \"perfect type\" I feel like the world would be so bland
February 25th, 2022 20:45
Untravelled Waters
L. B. Mek said:
\'slipping away with every blink
drag these waters to your grave and never speak
gilded, wistful
Nairobi
Eridanus
looking out the window in the car
the sunset tonight reminds me of your dancing feet
the broken sinew of your archaic body
a mind\'s symphony
every harvest is another moon, a reminder of you
February 25th, 2022 05:10
L. B. Mek said:
\'slipping away with every blink
drag these waters to your grave and never speak
gilded, wistful
Nairobi
Eridanus
looking out the window in the car
the sunset tonight reminds me of your dancing feet
the broken sinew of your archaic body
a mind\'s symphony
every harvest is another moon, a reminder of you
February 25th, 2022 05:10
Cold Sun
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
Love your imagery, lets hope your love life sees better skies!
February 23rd, 2022 19:00
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
Love your imagery, lets hope your love life sees better skies!
February 23rd, 2022 19:00
Black Roses
Hailey Black said:
I really enjoyed reading it has a lot of hard feelings put in it, and the repeating lines are just perfectly written. It is an amazing poem and you are very talented as well. :))
February 8th, 2022 09:56
Hailey Black said:
I really enjoyed reading it has a lot of hard feelings put in it, and the repeating lines are just perfectly written. It is an amazing poem and you are very talented as well. :))
February 8th, 2022 09:56
Greenwich Equinox
Draven said:
Beautiful yet haunting and drowning imagery. Nicely written once again xx
February 5th, 2022 17:23
Draven said:
Beautiful yet haunting and drowning imagery. Nicely written once again xx
February 5th, 2022 17:23
An Angel Without Wings
Almost said:
Your poetry is always beautiful. Even this one, very nicely written.
February 4th, 2022 04:07
Almost said:
Your poetry is always beautiful. Even this one, very nicely written.
February 4th, 2022 04:07
An Angel Without Wings
sophin said:
beautiful words, truly. the prose so is so well written and so vivid. great write, blue
February 3rd, 2022 23:33
sophin said:
beautiful words, truly. the prose so is so well written and so vivid. great write, blue
February 3rd, 2022 23:33
Somewhere In A Poem Tonight
Almost said:
Wonderful poem. Beautifully written.
January 30th, 2022 22:16
Almost said:
Wonderful poem. Beautifully written.
January 30th, 2022 22:16
Dreamclouds
jarcher54 said:
I think we\'ve all cried all night over a love that isn\'t gonna work, or can\'t happen, or is unrequited. Love the way you put it, the world is gone in a blink. When your thoughts collapse on themselves and you are oblivious to the rest!
January 29th, 2022 23:25
jarcher54 said:
I think we\'ve all cried all night over a love that isn\'t gonna work, or can\'t happen, or is unrequited. Love the way you put it, the world is gone in a blink. When your thoughts collapse on themselves and you are oblivious to the rest!
January 29th, 2022 23:25
Tortured Love
jarcher54 said:
Our angels, our warriors... a succinct, hard-hitting description... perhaps the two perfect facets of our ideal being, the soul we hope is within us, or the spirit watching over us... angelic and ferocious, gentle yet powerful. When one thinks of the Miltonian battles between the forces of heaven and hell, one pictures warrior-angels. I ramble, but you made me do it!
January 22nd, 2022 01:29
jarcher54 said:
Our angels, our warriors... a succinct, hard-hitting description... perhaps the two perfect facets of our ideal being, the soul we hope is within us, or the spirit watching over us... angelic and ferocious, gentle yet powerful. When one thinks of the Miltonian battles between the forces of heaven and hell, one pictures warrior-angels. I ramble, but you made me do it!
January 22nd, 2022 01:29
Like the Inside of an Orange
sophin said:
stunning prose, blue. \"I was learning to appreciate the magic in mundane beauty, straying from the darkness which propels me into distorted motion, this unthinkable thirst, but it all fell apart. Every so often I hear a car passing by. The room is dark but I\'m sure it\'s morning. The daylight is echoing. This is a test.\" - so beautiful.
January 20th, 2022 22:58
sophin said:
stunning prose, blue. \"I was learning to appreciate the magic in mundane beauty, straying from the darkness which propels me into distorted motion, this unthinkable thirst, but it all fell apart. Every so often I hear a car passing by. The room is dark but I\'m sure it\'s morning. The daylight is echoing. This is a test.\" - so beautiful.
January 20th, 2022 22:58
Earth to Dust
Draven said:
Such rawness in this poem. xx Beautifully written.
January 17th, 2022 02:58
Draven said:
Such rawness in this poem. xx Beautifully written.
January 17th, 2022 02:58
I Don\'t See What You See
L. B. Mek said:
\'You\'re acting like someone I don\'t know
Saying things I don\'t mean, with your haughty smile
My body trembles and I remember why
The sky illuminated on a dark night is more silent
Than my treacherous mind, devouring time \'
January 13th, 2022 04:11
L. B. Mek said:
\'You\'re acting like someone I don\'t know
Saying things I don\'t mean, with your haughty smile
My body trembles and I remember why
The sky illuminated on a dark night is more silent
Than my treacherous mind, devouring time \'
January 13th, 2022 04:11
GuaranĂ¡
jarcher54 said:
Lots of choice images here. Your work is often like a puzzle, challenges to the mind and the heart... can hills spill moonlight? Yes, they can, you nailed it! And cries can be an orchestra... and if you say so, butterflies can whisper!
January 12th, 2022 01:06
jarcher54 said:
Lots of choice images here. Your work is often like a puzzle, challenges to the mind and the heart... can hills spill moonlight? Yes, they can, you nailed it! And cries can be an orchestra... and if you say so, butterflies can whisper!
January 12th, 2022 01:06
LIMBS
L. B. Mek said:
\'But our youth, our youth
was wasted
All the drinks we had, *left
thirsty desert\'s behind
All the laughs we had, *faded
in-to clown masks
Now we\'re left
with this undying, bruise
There\'s no light in us, just
a vibrant darkness
Sailing
in these rough *Time\'s
alone
Billowing o\'er clouded hills
Billowing o\'er clouded hills\'
(Brilliant!
I humbly apologise, for my rude suggestions
I meant no disrespect, dear Poet
just overzealously, sharing
how your poignantly immersive poetry
revealed itself, to me)
January 11th, 2022 04:37
L. B. Mek said:
\'But our youth, our youth
was wasted
All the drinks we had, *left
thirsty desert\'s behind
All the laughs we had, *faded
in-to clown masks
Now we\'re left
with this undying, bruise
There\'s no light in us, just
a vibrant darkness
Sailing
in these rough *Time\'s
alone
Billowing o\'er clouded hills
Billowing o\'er clouded hills\'
(Brilliant!
I humbly apologise, for my rude suggestions
I meant no disrespect, dear Poet
just overzealously, sharing
how your poignantly immersive poetry
revealed itself, to me)
January 11th, 2022 04:37
Quiet Observer
Caring dove said:
Really Amazing )) the way you express yourself in this ..,
Liking your words …
January 8th, 2022 18:04
Caring dove said:
Really Amazing )) the way you express yourself in this ..,
Liking your words …
January 8th, 2022 18:04
Unholy Sanctuary
Caring dove said:
Such beautiful words .. especially in the second half of this poem . tho sad .
So creative you are , with your words
January 8th, 2022 17:53
Caring dove said:
Such beautiful words .. especially in the second half of this poem . tho sad .
So creative you are , with your words
January 8th, 2022 17:53
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