Comments received on poems by A Boy With Roses
Nocturnal Creature
arqios said:
The image of sticking sea urchins is a sensory overload! Rhyming lichen and radio static raises the bar thereinafter! Quite the delight to read.
June 6th, 2022 04:12
arqios said:
The image of sticking sea urchins is a sensory overload! Rhyming lichen and radio static raises the bar thereinafter! Quite the delight to read.
June 6th, 2022 04:12
Polyrhythm
_Daisy said:
this is such a lovely poem with magical performance of language!
June 1st, 2022 19:30
_Daisy said:
this is such a lovely poem with magical performance of language!
June 1st, 2022 19:30
Blackbird
arqios said:
Very liquidy and somewhat blue.
Quite fluidly moving in its hues.
May 27th, 2022 20:20
arqios said:
Very liquidy and somewhat blue.
Quite fluidly moving in its hues.
May 27th, 2022 20:20
Study in Watercolour
arqios said:
Reading it felt like a painting that one goes into. Kinda Mary Poppins like but with a more continental feel -VanGogh, Vermeer and the French and Italians too.
May 27th, 2022 20:17
arqios said:
Reading it felt like a painting that one goes into. Kinda Mary Poppins like but with a more continental feel -VanGogh, Vermeer and the French and Italians too.
May 27th, 2022 20:17
Hanging Garden
Crowns4Christ said:
Oh Jordan, this is so sad it makes me emotional, and not many things do that, haha,
But this piece did, love is so sacred, and beautiful,it makes me sad when I hear of lost love, keep being you, you\'re a great writer and a great person, be persistent in what you want,
Persistence IS key, like my husband always says
April 30th, 2022 14:29
Crowns4Christ said:
Oh Jordan, this is so sad it makes me emotional, and not many things do that, haha,
But this piece did, love is so sacred, and beautiful,it makes me sad when I hear of lost love, keep being you, you\'re a great writer and a great person, be persistent in what you want,
Persistence IS key, like my husband always says
April 30th, 2022 14:29
Vanitas
Crowns4Christ said:
Good write, our heart is truly like a violin string, depending on the tune we play, determines our lives, whether happy or sad, it\'s really up to our perception of ourselves
April 25th, 2022 19:19
Crowns4Christ said:
Good write, our heart is truly like a violin string, depending on the tune we play, determines our lives, whether happy or sad, it\'s really up to our perception of ourselves
April 25th, 2022 19:19
To Close the Mouth of a Wound
Distant View said:
A highly inventive poem, full of interesting imagery! I love the line, \"I hear the voices of loved ones sewn into time.\" Reading this poem is almost like being thrown into a Salvador Dali painting, and everything within it coming alive with unexpected qualities! A richly rewarding poem!
April 23rd, 2022 03:24
Distant View said:
A highly inventive poem, full of interesting imagery! I love the line, \"I hear the voices of loved ones sewn into time.\" Reading this poem is almost like being thrown into a Salvador Dali painting, and everything within it coming alive with unexpected qualities! A richly rewarding poem!
April 23rd, 2022 03:24
Meadow Song
jarcher54 said:
JD, this may be your most haunting and coherently complex journey yet. Every line, every image, sparks with extravagant yet well-tempered imagery. You made my week... may I post this (with credit) on our work feed where people post poetry? This is moving, creative, beautiful, and sincere...
April 15th, 2022 12:14
jarcher54 said:
JD, this may be your most haunting and coherently complex journey yet. Every line, every image, sparks with extravagant yet well-tempered imagery. You made my week... may I post this (with credit) on our work feed where people post poetry? This is moving, creative, beautiful, and sincere...
April 15th, 2022 12:14
Manic Pixie Boy
sophin said:
Incredible write, fellow poet! Your words conveyed such a vivid picture in my mind, like a rippling canvas of some painting. Perfectly blends in human emotion and the mysterious darkness of nature. Well done.
April 5th, 2022 19:18
sophin said:
Incredible write, fellow poet! Your words conveyed such a vivid picture in my mind, like a rippling canvas of some painting. Perfectly blends in human emotion and the mysterious darkness of nature. Well done.
April 5th, 2022 19:18
Manic Pixie Boy
Crystal Hope said:
excellent description to the sensual writing . well done
April 5th, 2022 15:10
Crystal Hope said:
excellent description to the sensual writing . well done
April 5th, 2022 15:10
Those Days Are Long Gone
jarcher54 said:
You stunned me with \"Life is out of reach.\" Such a beautiful dark expression. Only you... thanks
April 5th, 2022 11:18
jarcher54 said:
You stunned me with \"Life is out of reach.\" Such a beautiful dark expression. Only you... thanks
April 5th, 2022 11:18
Moth Scars
James Michael said:
Quite a ride of imagery. Very well written with emotional power.
I must ask, how long did it take to write this? My withered mind would’ve taken a month!
March 26th, 2022 21:01
James Michael said:
Quite a ride of imagery. Very well written with emotional power.
I must ask, how long did it take to write this? My withered mind would’ve taken a month!
March 26th, 2022 21:01
Vincent
Buzz Bray said:
\"Art is the death of us, the last train to nowhere.\"
Wow! Powerful words. I like your use of structure and vocabulary. Makes for en engaging read.
March 16th, 2022 22:03
Buzz Bray said:
\"Art is the death of us, the last train to nowhere.\"
Wow! Powerful words. I like your use of structure and vocabulary. Makes for en engaging read.
March 16th, 2022 22:03
Dead Flowers
jarcher54 said:
Sympathy is my downfall too... very keen observation! It\'s like you are out of control and completely sober at the same time. I adore that about your poems.
March 11th, 2022 20:38
jarcher54 said:
Sympathy is my downfall too... very keen observation! It\'s like you are out of control and completely sober at the same time. I adore that about your poems.
March 11th, 2022 20:38
Waxen Wings
jarcher54 said:
Jordan, I am excited to see you returning to a veritable explosion of images in what reads like spontaneous and irresistible utterance from your heart. Bravo today!
March 11th, 2022 20:35
jarcher54 said:
Jordan, I am excited to see you returning to a veritable explosion of images in what reads like spontaneous and irresistible utterance from your heart. Bravo today!
March 11th, 2022 20:35
Dead Flowers
Buzz Bray said:
Wow! Wonderful imagery. \"you know my heart grows fonder with every lasting sun beat \"
Beautifully written!
March 10th, 2022 17:37
Buzz Bray said:
Wow! Wonderful imagery. \"you know my heart grows fonder with every lasting sun beat \"
Beautifully written!
March 10th, 2022 17:37
Soft Skin
L. B. Mek said:
its a crime, your poetry
doesn\'t get the attention
and appreciation it deserves
on MPS..
thank you! for choosing to share
dear Poet
March 10th, 2022 04:17
L. B. Mek said:
its a crime, your poetry
doesn\'t get the attention
and appreciation it deserves
on MPS..
thank you! for choosing to share
dear Poet
March 10th, 2022 04:17
Lovers to Strangers
L. B. Mek said:
\'tomorrow in the deepest ocean, no last goodbye
purple rays tie us together like ribbons of sunlight\'
March 7th, 2022 05:17
L. B. Mek said:
\'tomorrow in the deepest ocean, no last goodbye
purple rays tie us together like ribbons of sunlight\'
March 7th, 2022 05:17
Love Too Good To Be True
L. B. Mek said:
\'I\'ve been picking apple seeds from my pockets
and turning them into memories
letters
I never read, and forgot to respond
love bigger than a temporary song
I haven\'t heard from him in thirteen days
I\'ve been counting them, blindsided
oh, crim mercy
sweeter than pink lemonade, 20 units a day
smoking until I can\'t breathe, I dissolve
like
ecstasy on my tongue
nothing, is sacred\'
February 28th, 2022 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'I\'ve been picking apple seeds from my pockets
and turning them into memories
letters
I never read, and forgot to respond
love bigger than a temporary song
I haven\'t heard from him in thirteen days
I\'ve been counting them, blindsided
oh, crim mercy
sweeter than pink lemonade, 20 units a day
smoking until I can\'t breathe, I dissolve
like
ecstasy on my tongue
nothing, is sacred\'
February 28th, 2022 05:09
Not That Type of Guy
Richmondpomes said:
If everyone was the \"perfect type\" I feel like the world would be so bland
February 25th, 2022 20:45
Richmondpomes said:
If everyone was the \"perfect type\" I feel like the world would be so bland
February 25th, 2022 20:45
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