Comments received on poems by A Boy With Roses
Manic Pixie Boy
sophin said:
Incredible write, fellow poet! Your words conveyed such a vivid picture in my mind, like a rippling canvas of some painting. Perfectly blends in human emotion and the mysterious darkness of nature. Well done.
April 5th, 2022 19:18
sophin said:
Incredible write, fellow poet! Your words conveyed such a vivid picture in my mind, like a rippling canvas of some painting. Perfectly blends in human emotion and the mysterious darkness of nature. Well done.
April 5th, 2022 19:18
Manic Pixie Boy
Crystal Hope said:
excellent description to the sensual writing . well done
April 5th, 2022 15:10
Crystal Hope said:
excellent description to the sensual writing . well done
April 5th, 2022 15:10
Those Days Are Long Gone
jarcher54 said:
You stunned me with \"Life is out of reach.\" Such a beautiful dark expression. Only you... thanks
April 5th, 2022 11:18
jarcher54 said:
You stunned me with \"Life is out of reach.\" Such a beautiful dark expression. Only you... thanks
April 5th, 2022 11:18
Moth Scars
James Michael said:
Quite a ride of imagery. Very well written with emotional power.
I must ask, how long did it take to write this? My withered mind would’ve taken a month!
March 26th, 2022 21:01
James Michael said:
Quite a ride of imagery. Very well written with emotional power.
I must ask, how long did it take to write this? My withered mind would’ve taken a month!
March 26th, 2022 21:01
Vincent
Buzz Bray said:
\"Art is the death of us, the last train to nowhere.\"
Wow! Powerful words. I like your use of structure and vocabulary. Makes for en engaging read.
March 16th, 2022 22:03
Buzz Bray said:
\"Art is the death of us, the last train to nowhere.\"
Wow! Powerful words. I like your use of structure and vocabulary. Makes for en engaging read.
March 16th, 2022 22:03
Dead Flowers
jarcher54 said:
Sympathy is my downfall too... very keen observation! It\'s like you are out of control and completely sober at the same time. I adore that about your poems.
March 11th, 2022 20:38
jarcher54 said:
Sympathy is my downfall too... very keen observation! It\'s like you are out of control and completely sober at the same time. I adore that about your poems.
March 11th, 2022 20:38
Waxen Wings
jarcher54 said:
Jordan, I am excited to see you returning to a veritable explosion of images in what reads like spontaneous and irresistible utterance from your heart. Bravo today!
March 11th, 2022 20:35
jarcher54 said:
Jordan, I am excited to see you returning to a veritable explosion of images in what reads like spontaneous and irresistible utterance from your heart. Bravo today!
March 11th, 2022 20:35
Dead Flowers
Buzz Bray said:
Wow! Wonderful imagery. \"you know my heart grows fonder with every lasting sun beat \"
Beautifully written!
March 10th, 2022 17:37
Buzz Bray said:
Wow! Wonderful imagery. \"you know my heart grows fonder with every lasting sun beat \"
Beautifully written!
March 10th, 2022 17:37
Soft Skin
L. B. Mek said:
its a crime, your poetry
doesn\'t get the attention
and appreciation it deserves
on MPS..
thank you! for choosing to share
dear Poet
March 10th, 2022 04:17
L. B. Mek said:
its a crime, your poetry
doesn\'t get the attention
and appreciation it deserves
on MPS..
thank you! for choosing to share
dear Poet
March 10th, 2022 04:17
Lovers to Strangers
L. B. Mek said:
\'tomorrow in the deepest ocean, no last goodbye
purple rays tie us together like ribbons of sunlight\'
March 7th, 2022 05:17
L. B. Mek said:
\'tomorrow in the deepest ocean, no last goodbye
purple rays tie us together like ribbons of sunlight\'
March 7th, 2022 05:17
Love Too Good To Be True
L. B. Mek said:
\'I\'ve been picking apple seeds from my pockets
and turning them into memories
letters
I never read, and forgot to respond
love bigger than a temporary song
I haven\'t heard from him in thirteen days
I\'ve been counting them, blindsided
oh, crim mercy
sweeter than pink lemonade, 20 units a day
smoking until I can\'t breathe, I dissolve
like
ecstasy on my tongue
nothing, is sacred\'
February 28th, 2022 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'I\'ve been picking apple seeds from my pockets
and turning them into memories
letters
I never read, and forgot to respond
love bigger than a temporary song
I haven\'t heard from him in thirteen days
I\'ve been counting them, blindsided
oh, crim mercy
sweeter than pink lemonade, 20 units a day
smoking until I can\'t breathe, I dissolve
like
ecstasy on my tongue
nothing, is sacred\'
February 28th, 2022 05:09
Not That Type of Guy
Richmondpomes said:
If everyone was the \"perfect type\" I feel like the world would be so bland
February 25th, 2022 20:45
Richmondpomes said:
If everyone was the \"perfect type\" I feel like the world would be so bland
February 25th, 2022 20:45
Untravelled Waters
L. B. Mek said:
\'slipping away with every blink
drag these waters to your grave and never speak
gilded, wistful
Nairobi
Eridanus
looking out the window in the car
the sunset tonight reminds me of your dancing feet
the broken sinew of your archaic body
a mind\'s symphony
every harvest is another moon, a reminder of you
February 25th, 2022 05:10
L. B. Mek said:
\'slipping away with every blink
drag these waters to your grave and never speak
gilded, wistful
Nairobi
Eridanus
looking out the window in the car
the sunset tonight reminds me of your dancing feet
the broken sinew of your archaic body
a mind\'s symphony
every harvest is another moon, a reminder of you
February 25th, 2022 05:10
Cold Sun
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
Love your imagery, lets hope your love life sees better skies!
February 23rd, 2022 19:00
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
Love your imagery, lets hope your love life sees better skies!
February 23rd, 2022 19:00
Black Roses
Hailey Black said:
I really enjoyed reading it has a lot of hard feelings put in it, and the repeating lines are just perfectly written. It is an amazing poem and you are very talented as well. :))
February 8th, 2022 09:56
Hailey Black said:
I really enjoyed reading it has a lot of hard feelings put in it, and the repeating lines are just perfectly written. It is an amazing poem and you are very talented as well. :))
February 8th, 2022 09:56
Greenwich Equinox
Draven said:
Beautiful yet haunting and drowning imagery. Nicely written once again xx
February 5th, 2022 17:23
Draven said:
Beautiful yet haunting and drowning imagery. Nicely written once again xx
February 5th, 2022 17:23
An Angel Without Wings
Almost said:
Your poetry is always beautiful. Even this one, very nicely written.
February 4th, 2022 04:07
Almost said:
Your poetry is always beautiful. Even this one, very nicely written.
February 4th, 2022 04:07
An Angel Without Wings
sophin said:
beautiful words, truly. the prose so is so well written and so vivid. great write, blue
February 3rd, 2022 23:33
sophin said:
beautiful words, truly. the prose so is so well written and so vivid. great write, blue
February 3rd, 2022 23:33
Somewhere In A Poem Tonight
Almost said:
Wonderful poem. Beautifully written.
January 30th, 2022 22:16
Almost said:
Wonderful poem. Beautifully written.
January 30th, 2022 22:16
Dreamclouds
jarcher54 said:
I think we\'ve all cried all night over a love that isn\'t gonna work, or can\'t happen, or is unrequited. Love the way you put it, the world is gone in a blink. When your thoughts collapse on themselves and you are oblivious to the rest!
January 29th, 2022 23:25
jarcher54 said:
I think we\'ve all cried all night over a love that isn\'t gonna work, or can\'t happen, or is unrequited. Love the way you put it, the world is gone in a blink. When your thoughts collapse on themselves and you are oblivious to the rest!
January 29th, 2022 23:25
Tortured Love
jarcher54 said:
Our angels, our warriors... a succinct, hard-hitting description... perhaps the two perfect facets of our ideal being, the soul we hope is within us, or the spirit watching over us... angelic and ferocious, gentle yet powerful. When one thinks of the Miltonian battles between the forces of heaven and hell, one pictures warrior-angels. I ramble, but you made me do it!
January 22nd, 2022 01:29
jarcher54 said:
Our angels, our warriors... a succinct, hard-hitting description... perhaps the two perfect facets of our ideal being, the soul we hope is within us, or the spirit watching over us... angelic and ferocious, gentle yet powerful. When one thinks of the Miltonian battles between the forces of heaven and hell, one pictures warrior-angels. I ramble, but you made me do it!
January 22nd, 2022 01:29
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