Comments received on poems by Saxon Crow



A pythonesque poem..... Well sort of.... Well I thought I\'d give it a go..... Shh!........ Sorry
Teddy.15 said:

LOL top marks for originality, and for making my tummy rumble, how funny just the other day I was talking about rhubarb crumble rhubarb it\'s hard to find here, Love the entire list even marmite lol 🀣 top marks as usual, genius poet you, I was mesmerized. I really did think you were.speaking of ancient things and indeed they are to me in foreign lands lol πŸ˜‚

September 9th, 2021 01:22

A pythonesque poem..... Well sort of.... Well I thought I\'d give it a go..... Shh!........ Sorry
Goldfinch60 said:

You forgot the Roast Beef, Yorkshire Pudding covered in onion gravy SC.
Good fun write.

Andy

September 9th, 2021 00:13

State of Grace (a serial killers tale)
AuburnScribbler said:

A tremendously penned piece of macabre here Saxon Crow, bravo!

The flow here definitely tells me, that you had fun writing this, but naturally, just continue to \"kill it\" on the page, yeah! Haha!

September 8th, 2021 14:14

State of Grace (a serial killers tale)
Robert Haigh said:

A grisly but highly amusing tale. Horror and comedy beautifully combined!

September 8th, 2021 08:39

State of Grace (a serial killers tale)
Neil Higgins said:

Reminds me a little of a Monty Python sketch,where architect\'s are interviewing perspective job seekers.John Cleese applies and says\" as you can see,as the tenants use the lifts,the rotating knives slice them into a hundred pieces,and the flesh and...\"
Terry Jones stops him and says\"Are you proposing to slaughter our tenants?\"
John Cleese replies\"Yes.Is that not what you want?\"
Startled looks all around
John Cleese\"Oh I see.I\'m sorry.I thought you wanted an slaughterhouse,.I can build you a nice abattoir if you want\"
Madness is probably in all of us It\'s just how you use it 😱

What a great poem,for er.....all the wrong reasons SC.

September 8th, 2021 04:44

State of Grace (a serial killers tale)
Teddy.15 said:

lol it could be you, on the bbq? thats what i got from your last line. oh i am terrified you gave me goosebumps, your dark muse has posessed you and i love it! brilliant and so intimidating and convincing. yes yes yes. genius poet you.

September 8th, 2021 02:23

State of Grace (a serial killers tale)
Goldfinch60 said:

The truth can be seen in peoples eyes but if you kill them and save the eyes their Spirit will go on and never die

Andy

September 8th, 2021 02:07

State of Grace (a serial killers tale)
orchidee said:

This is the fanaticism of some minds, who justify killing even, by saying \'God told me to\'.
Meanwhile - quite a bad hair-day!

September 8th, 2021 01:58

State of Grace (a serial killers tale)
Arvy said:

it was all games and fun until the last lineπŸ™‚

September 8th, 2021 00:52

Murderers Lament
Neil Higgins said:

This is superb stuff SC.Up there with the best.What a masterful write.

September 7th, 2021 10:42

Murderers Lament
L. B. Mek said:

\'And never shall I return again
To the light of freedom and a happy land
For the forest is within my mind
No peace in here I shall ever find
And madness is my truest north
A compass for my unabsolved soul
Deserved these woes I heavily carry
My burden alone to do nought but tarry
And so this journey will forever be
One of abject misery \'
sometimes we need to expel, those tormenting doubts we carry with us, from remnants of obstacles we surpassed,
before they accumulate and create a new obstacle for us to confront...
\'know! thy self\'
truly, purposed introspection is key
(indeed, a morose read, mainly because so many of its points are universally relatable)
thanks for sharing, dear poet

September 7th, 2021 05:18

Murderers Lament
Teddy.15 said:

Oh Sax, what a deliciously dark piece so very beautifully written a confession from a poet, lol I love the dark stuff I hope not to meet you in an ally one evening, this is a bit to frightful for.my poor soul. Brilliant.

September 7th, 2021 02:17

Murderers Lament
Doggerel Dave said:

I\'d suggest a torch with some long life batteries plus spares....

I need cheering up, for crying out loud, as in.....😊

September 7th, 2021 02:01

Murderers Lament
orchidee said:

You \'in\' a mood? A bad-hair day? Or meaning a \'moody write\'?! lol.

September 7th, 2021 01:47

Murderers Lament
Arvy said:

Really interesting write dear Sax!

September 7th, 2021 01:24

Murderers Lament
Goldfinch60 said:

Those two murders may have taken place but luckily it was not my murder so all is fine with me.
Good dark write SC.

Strangely I am going to a Murder Mystery evening on Friday!

Andy

September 7th, 2021 00:57

Murderers Lament
dusk arising said:

Yea forsooth though thee doth walk thine deathly path through woodland\'s woe, tis reassuring that the evil wind, which follows thine steps, be a reassurance that thy digestion still doth handle an evenings biryani with aplomb and fortitude.

Love the olde worlde style Saxon and darkness doth suite thy pen..... I sense dark days ahead Master Crow. Doth thee have a cunning plan?

Great fun Sax, got me well into the spirit as u can see.

September 7th, 2021 00:48

The Stars are Jellyfish
Vacancy said:

Love the inspiration photo and a great poem.

September 5th, 2021 19:35

The Stars are Jellyfish
Jayasree said:

That\'s a beautiful way of looking at the stars. Loved it :)

September 5th, 2021 05:47

The Stars are Jellyfish
Teddy.15 said:

Wow, I wasn\'t expecting the last lines at all, totally mesmerized me this one did. Wonderful Sax.

September 5th, 2021 03:08

The Stars are Jellyfish
dusk arising said:

Mushrooms mate, thats wot they are and the moons a huge toad\'s tool.

I saw it all in a dream.

September 5th, 2021 02:32

The Stars are Jellyfish
Fay Slimm. said:

Interesting questions put to the stars viewed from a window. Surely not so mad Sax when inspired by that picture the star-crazy Vincent produced. Good read.

September 5th, 2021 02:17

The Stars are Jellyfish
orchidee said:

Good write SC.

September 5th, 2021 01:51

The Stars are Jellyfish
Thekkinkkattil said:

Your stars and jellyfish paint a beautiful picture.As you said if we had eyes to look into the sea bottom and the sky what vision it will make at night . Thank you poet for taking me to all these places

September 5th, 2021 01:27

The Stars are Jellyfish
Doggerel Dave said:

Sax - \'Surreal\' is not a sufficient or even adequate descriptor for your piece here.
\"So many......answered\" is a truth which comes shining through.
Block up the window, lock and bolt the door... 😊 πŸ‘

September 5th, 2021 01:25

The Stars are Jellyfish
yellowrose said:

Good writing inspired by this picture . I like to use pictures sometimes to write a poem .



September 5th, 2021 01:22

The Stars are Jellyfish
Goldfinch60 said:

I too see the stars and see my lover amongst them, am I also mad.

Good words SC.

Andy

September 5th, 2021 01:08

Autumnal Leaves
hotidris said:

Beautiful poem about autumnal leaves.

September 3rd, 2021 20:43

Autumnal Leaves
dusk arising said:

Copper crested crowns adorn natures statues heralding triumphant entry into the trial of all seasons - winter. Unwasted artistry returns to feed the roots of mother earth\'s springtime bounty and our rejoicing.

Lovely inspiring words from you today Saxon in such a powerful and beautiful short piece.

September 3rd, 2021 10:33

Behind Green Eyes
Robert Haigh said:

Love can cause any man, or woman, to wax poetic. Nicely penned.

September 3rd, 2021 08:25

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