Comments received on poems by Saxon Crow
The Tale of Mr Frumpadiddle and Sister Ann
Saxon Crow said:
Wooooooooaaahhhhhhh there LB. It\'s just a light-hearted ditty with no hidden meaning my friend
June 27th, 2022 07:04
Saxon Crow said:
Wooooooooaaahhhhhhh there LB. It\'s just a light-hearted ditty with no hidden meaning my friend
June 27th, 2022 07:04
The Tale of Mr Frumpadiddle and Sister Ann
L. B. Mek said:
Nun\'s don\'t need a cock
to satisfy themselves
just like a cock, doesn\'t
need to \'be first\'
and \'conquer a virgin\'
to prove, worth..
(the day we can appreciate
each other\'s choices
and not revel in belittling
those, who hurt us
because our fortunes have
reversed..
is the day, we can hope for us
to evolve and learn
from our past mistakes
and end humanity\'s cyclical
self-hindering, petty mindsets)
a great write, dear Poet
really like the way your didactive, tale
highlighted
our fallibility\'s need to seek revenge
and thus, insure
the cycle of inhumanity, continues
a wonderful demonstration
of regressive mindsets
tainting our opportunity for progress..
\'a bit of sex\'
is why a war is waging
between
the pro life and pro right\'s
when
a little self control and consideration
to the consequences of our actions
would fix it all..
and I\'m sure there is a lot more
to being a nun or priest, than simply abstinence
lol
(sorry if I interpreted your words too seriously
and got this all wrong
I\'m often too conceited in my reading
of other people\'s work
so think it best to apologise in advance
but you already know
what a fool I can be)
lol
thanks for sharing
June 27th, 2022 05:11
L. B. Mek said:
Nun\'s don\'t need a cock
to satisfy themselves
just like a cock, doesn\'t
need to \'be first\'
and \'conquer a virgin\'
to prove, worth..
(the day we can appreciate
each other\'s choices
and not revel in belittling
those, who hurt us
because our fortunes have
reversed..
is the day, we can hope for us
to evolve and learn
from our past mistakes
and end humanity\'s cyclical
self-hindering, petty mindsets)
a great write, dear Poet
really like the way your didactive, tale
highlighted
our fallibility\'s need to seek revenge
and thus, insure
the cycle of inhumanity, continues
a wonderful demonstration
of regressive mindsets
tainting our opportunity for progress..
\'a bit of sex\'
is why a war is waging
between
the pro life and pro right\'s
when
a little self control and consideration
to the consequences of our actions
would fix it all..
and I\'m sure there is a lot more
to being a nun or priest, than simply abstinence
lol
(sorry if I interpreted your words too seriously
and got this all wrong
I\'m often too conceited in my reading
of other people\'s work
so think it best to apologise in advance
but you already know
what a fool I can be)
lol
thanks for sharing
June 27th, 2022 05:11
The Tale of Mr Frumpadiddle and Sister Ann
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful amusing write SC, thank you for my first laugh of the day.
Andy
June 27th, 2022 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful amusing write SC, thank you for my first laugh of the day.
Andy
June 27th, 2022 01:45
The Tale of Mr Frumpadiddle and Sister Ann
dusk arising said:
Well now there\'s a tale of mirth
will there be a follow on, celebrating the birth?
Nice one saxon.
June 27th, 2022 00:30
dusk arising said:
Well now there\'s a tale of mirth
will there be a follow on, celebrating the birth?
Nice one saxon.
June 27th, 2022 00:30
Manifestation #1
dusk arising said:
Playing... the preparation for life. Then we become life\'s plaything.
June 26th, 2022 09:26
dusk arising said:
Playing... the preparation for life. Then we become life\'s plaything.
June 26th, 2022 09:26
Manifestation #1
arqios said:
Something we do well to go back to on occasion when it occasion finds. Play, such a ring to that word! Thanks for sharing.
June 26th, 2022 08:55
arqios said:
Something we do well to go back to on occasion when it occasion finds. Play, such a ring to that word! Thanks for sharing.
June 26th, 2022 08:55
I Forgive You
Raven333 said:
very nice read, and some very true statements mostly the last line. nicely penned with a good flow.
June 25th, 2022 10:00
Raven333 said:
very nice read, and some very true statements mostly the last line. nicely penned with a good flow.
June 25th, 2022 10:00
I Forgive You
Caring dove said:
When we hold onto things .. it can weigh us down and affect our happiness . A good writing .. and nicely expressed too . ))
June 25th, 2022 09:20
Caring dove said:
When we hold onto things .. it can weigh us down and affect our happiness . A good writing .. and nicely expressed too . ))
June 25th, 2022 09:20
I Forgive You
dusk arising said:
The burden of unforgiving is too heavy to carry. It is a cloud around the sunshine, a shadow bespoiling our fulfillment.
Forgiving is as much a gift we give ourselves as it is to the other party. Indeed it will often be a gift for us alone. But those near to us will benefit tebfold from our new freedom of spirit.
An enlightening post.
June 25th, 2022 05:24
dusk arising said:
The burden of unforgiving is too heavy to carry. It is a cloud around the sunshine, a shadow bespoiling our fulfillment.
Forgiving is as much a gift we give ourselves as it is to the other party. Indeed it will often be a gift for us alone. But those near to us will benefit tebfold from our new freedom of spirit.
An enlightening post.
June 25th, 2022 05:24
I Forgive You
arqios said:
There is something freeing and pure and unshackling about forgiveness to the forgiver that is quite under rated in our contemporary worldview. Thanks for sharing.
June 25th, 2022 04:38
arqios said:
There is something freeing and pure and unshackling about forgiveness to the forgiver that is quite under rated in our contemporary worldview. Thanks for sharing.
June 25th, 2022 04:38
I Forgive You
orchidee said:
You forgive me? What did I do?! heehee.
Do shut up, Orchi, says Fido! lol.
June 25th, 2022 02:17
orchidee said:
You forgive me? What did I do?! heehee.
Do shut up, Orchi, says Fido! lol.
June 25th, 2022 02:17
I Forgive You
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true and thoughtful words SC, we must leave the past behind us and move forward in our lives.
Andy
June 25th, 2022 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true and thoughtful words SC, we must leave the past behind us and move forward in our lives.
Andy
June 25th, 2022 01:28
Wisdom of Children
Raven333 said:
great poem, said a lot to me and so true if only people would stop and take a little interest in the little people
June 25th, 2022 00:23
Raven333 said:
great poem, said a lot to me and so true if only people would stop and take a little interest in the little people
June 25th, 2022 00:23
Wisdom of Children
Accidental Poet said:
Another masterpiece Sax, but really just a walk in the park for you. 😉
June 24th, 2022 22:09
Accidental Poet said:
Another masterpiece Sax, but really just a walk in the park for you. 😉
June 24th, 2022 22:09
Wisdom of Children
Michael Edwards said:
So well crafted and expressed - great write.
June 24th, 2022 13:50
Michael Edwards said:
So well crafted and expressed - great write.
June 24th, 2022 13:50
Wisdom of Children
dusk arising said:
It aint often I\'m moved to tears by MPS but your words today hit the spot saxon.
Apart from that, so well structured with a buy line to die for.
Of course, a must for my favourites.
June 24th, 2022 10:49
dusk arising said:
It aint often I\'m moved to tears by MPS but your words today hit the spot saxon.
Apart from that, so well structured with a buy line to die for.
Of course, a must for my favourites.
June 24th, 2022 10:49
Wisdom of Children
arqios said:
\"soulvolution\" that is a concept that we need to take a hold of and live by. Many a young person have often enough gone far and wide to \'find themselves.\' But we could start with small things at almost no cost. Thanks for sharing.
June 24th, 2022 06:46
arqios said:
\"soulvolution\" that is a concept that we need to take a hold of and live by. Many a young person have often enough gone far and wide to \'find themselves.\' But we could start with small things at almost no cost. Thanks for sharing.
June 24th, 2022 06:46
Grumblings of a young old man!
arqios said:
Same sentiments, exactly. In a few, the half century is quite a milestone in the psyche, as well. See you there!
June 23rd, 2022 18:02
arqios said:
Same sentiments, exactly. In a few, the half century is quite a milestone in the psyche, as well. See you there!
June 23rd, 2022 18:02
Grumblings of a young old man!
Morwenna said:
Yes I guess we\'ve all had times feeling like this. But I\'m much nearer 80 than you are, and yes the old body crumbles, but I think life gets better. My fifties were great. as were my sixties. Unexpectedly. I thought it would be all downhill. Not. It\'s an eloquent poem that is expressive of feelings without just being a bit of prose cut up into lines - difficult to do, I think.
June 23rd, 2022 16:34
Morwenna said:
Yes I guess we\'ve all had times feeling like this. But I\'m much nearer 80 than you are, and yes the old body crumbles, but I think life gets better. My fifties were great. as were my sixties. Unexpectedly. I thought it would be all downhill. Not. It\'s an eloquent poem that is expressive of feelings without just being a bit of prose cut up into lines - difficult to do, I think.
June 23rd, 2022 16:34
Grumblings of a young old man!
hzugman said:
Saxon Your poem is very descriptive and I like that style. I\'ve got 35 years on you and having the time of my life. I took up amatuer singing three decades ago and poetry this year. If you\'d like to give a listen, here\'s the youtube channel link: https://www.youtube.com/user/hzugman
June 23rd, 2022 12:46
hzugman said:
Saxon Your poem is very descriptive and I like that style. I\'ve got 35 years on you and having the time of my life. I took up amatuer singing three decades ago and poetry this year. If you\'d like to give a listen, here\'s the youtube channel link: https://www.youtube.com/user/hzugman
June 23rd, 2022 12:46
Grumblings of a young old man!
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah fantastic unique poem as most wish for youth, while you seem so tired and achy that you wish to beold as 80 dahh. I enjoyed the poem for its wry dry humour and witty poetic remarks. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
June 23rd, 2022 11:33
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah fantastic unique poem as most wish for youth, while you seem so tired and achy that you wish to beold as 80 dahh. I enjoyed the poem for its wry dry humour and witty poetic remarks. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
June 23rd, 2022 11:33
Grumblings of a young old man!
Doggerel Dave said:
You Sir, are nothing but a pup.
Get out there dancing and prancing or whatever floats your boat.
Leave the moans and groans for the genuine article
Good write Sax.
June 23rd, 2022 07:19
Doggerel Dave said:
You Sir, are nothing but a pup.
Get out there dancing and prancing or whatever floats your boat.
Leave the moans and groans for the genuine article
Good write Sax.
June 23rd, 2022 07:19
Grumblings of a young old man!
L. B. Mek said:
I too, dear Poet
don\'t get, this whole health trip
and extending life
# façade
I mean, if you\'re fated a lengthy life
so be it
we traverse it, as best we can
but why prolong it?
when all we\'re promised is
endless funerals
an ailing physical state
and a mind that can\'t remember
if it\'s 56 or 64 for 8 times 8
or
has it always, felt
like theirs eight days in a week...?
lol
but then, I wouldn\'t mind sticking around
to take a sip of something strong, that\'s
aged
for as long as, I\'ve survived...
(\'they say age
ain\'t nothing but a number\'
and I can\'t help
but stare back
blankly
and scream, back
loud
\'That\'s the fuckin, Point!\')
🤬😒🤷♂️🍾🥂😎
lol
such a fun read
June 23rd, 2022 05:20
L. B. Mek said:
I too, dear Poet
don\'t get, this whole health trip
and extending life
# façade
I mean, if you\'re fated a lengthy life
so be it
we traverse it, as best we can
but why prolong it?
when all we\'re promised is
endless funerals
an ailing physical state
and a mind that can\'t remember
if it\'s 56 or 64 for 8 times 8
or
has it always, felt
like theirs eight days in a week...?
lol
but then, I wouldn\'t mind sticking around
to take a sip of something strong, that\'s
aged
for as long as, I\'ve survived...
(\'they say age
ain\'t nothing but a number\'
and I can\'t help
but stare back
blankly
and scream, back
loud
\'That\'s the fuckin, Point!\')
🤬😒🤷♂️🍾🥂😎
lol
such a fun read
June 23rd, 2022 05:20
Grumblings of a young old man!
dusk arising said:
None of us had an easy ride after 47 sax. Someone said to me rather cruelly when i was on a major downer \"life\'s a bitch - then you die\" which is one way of looking at our existence. But it speaks of bitterness and failure to revel in the joys of life and it\'s many rewards.
I can\'t visualise that you as an expressive and creative poet take a negative viewpoint on life\'s rewards.
A well written piece but I feel you took a devil\'s advocate stance here.
June 23rd, 2022 03:26
dusk arising said:
None of us had an easy ride after 47 sax. Someone said to me rather cruelly when i was on a major downer \"life\'s a bitch - then you die\" which is one way of looking at our existence. But it speaks of bitterness and failure to revel in the joys of life and it\'s many rewards.
I can\'t visualise that you as an expressive and creative poet take a negative viewpoint on life\'s rewards.
A well written piece but I feel you took a devil\'s advocate stance here.
June 23rd, 2022 03:26
Grumblings of a young old man!
orchidee said:
A fine write SC. A younger person was worried about becoming 30, and said \'Arrgghhh - too old!\'
June 23rd, 2022 02:11
orchidee said:
A fine write SC. A younger person was worried about becoming 30, and said \'Arrgghhh - too old!\'
June 23rd, 2022 02:11
Grumblings of a young old man!
Poetic Dan said:
This was my second read and wow what a hit and I\'ll think my next write will go a bit like this, thank you for the inspiration my friend.
I turned 40 last year and I\'ve just spent the last to weeks in and out of A&E
This body will be the death of me but I\'ll cross over running, you wait and see...
Truly an honour to receive your gift, catch you at the finish line!
June 23rd, 2022 01:24
Poetic Dan said:
This was my second read and wow what a hit and I\'ll think my next write will go a bit like this, thank you for the inspiration my friend.
I turned 40 last year and I\'ve just spent the last to weeks in and out of A&E
This body will be the death of me but I\'ll cross over running, you wait and see...
Truly an honour to receive your gift, catch you at the finish line!
June 23rd, 2022 01:24
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