Comments received on poems by Saxon Crow
I Forgive You
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true and thoughtful words SC, we must leave the past behind us and move forward in our lives.
Andy
June 25th, 2022 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true and thoughtful words SC, we must leave the past behind us and move forward in our lives.
Andy
June 25th, 2022 01:28
Wisdom of Children
Raven333 said:
great poem, said a lot to me and so true if only people would stop and take a little interest in the little people
June 25th, 2022 00:23
Raven333 said:
great poem, said a lot to me and so true if only people would stop and take a little interest in the little people
June 25th, 2022 00:23
Wisdom of Children
Accidental Poet said:
Another masterpiece Sax, but really just a walk in the park for you. 😉
June 24th, 2022 22:09
Accidental Poet said:
Another masterpiece Sax, but really just a walk in the park for you. 😉
June 24th, 2022 22:09
Wisdom of Children
Michael Edwards said:
So well crafted and expressed - great write.
June 24th, 2022 13:50
Michael Edwards said:
So well crafted and expressed - great write.
June 24th, 2022 13:50
Wisdom of Children
dusk arising said:
It aint often I\'m moved to tears by MPS but your words today hit the spot saxon.
Apart from that, so well structured with a buy line to die for.
Of course, a must for my favourites.
June 24th, 2022 10:49
dusk arising said:
It aint often I\'m moved to tears by MPS but your words today hit the spot saxon.
Apart from that, so well structured with a buy line to die for.
Of course, a must for my favourites.
June 24th, 2022 10:49
Wisdom of Children
arqios said:
\"soulvolution\" that is a concept that we need to take a hold of and live by. Many a young person have often enough gone far and wide to \'find themselves.\' But we could start with small things at almost no cost. Thanks for sharing.
June 24th, 2022 06:46
arqios said:
\"soulvolution\" that is a concept that we need to take a hold of and live by. Many a young person have often enough gone far and wide to \'find themselves.\' But we could start with small things at almost no cost. Thanks for sharing.
June 24th, 2022 06:46
Grumblings of a young old man!
arqios said:
Same sentiments, exactly. In a few, the half century is quite a milestone in the psyche, as well. See you there!
June 23rd, 2022 18:02
arqios said:
Same sentiments, exactly. In a few, the half century is quite a milestone in the psyche, as well. See you there!
June 23rd, 2022 18:02
Grumblings of a young old man!
Morwenna said:
Yes I guess we\'ve all had times feeling like this. But I\'m much nearer 80 than you are, and yes the old body crumbles, but I think life gets better. My fifties were great. as were my sixties. Unexpectedly. I thought it would be all downhill. Not. It\'s an eloquent poem that is expressive of feelings without just being a bit of prose cut up into lines - difficult to do, I think.
June 23rd, 2022 16:34
Morwenna said:
Yes I guess we\'ve all had times feeling like this. But I\'m much nearer 80 than you are, and yes the old body crumbles, but I think life gets better. My fifties were great. as were my sixties. Unexpectedly. I thought it would be all downhill. Not. It\'s an eloquent poem that is expressive of feelings without just being a bit of prose cut up into lines - difficult to do, I think.
June 23rd, 2022 16:34
Grumblings of a young old man!
hzugman said:
Saxon Your poem is very descriptive and I like that style. I\'ve got 35 years on you and having the time of my life. I took up amatuer singing three decades ago and poetry this year. If you\'d like to give a listen, here\'s the youtube channel link: https://www.youtube.com/user/hzugman
June 23rd, 2022 12:46
hzugman said:
Saxon Your poem is very descriptive and I like that style. I\'ve got 35 years on you and having the time of my life. I took up amatuer singing three decades ago and poetry this year. If you\'d like to give a listen, here\'s the youtube channel link: https://www.youtube.com/user/hzugman
June 23rd, 2022 12:46
Grumblings of a young old man!
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah fantastic unique poem as most wish for youth, while you seem so tired and achy that you wish to beold as 80 dahh. I enjoyed the poem for its wry dry humour and witty poetic remarks. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
June 23rd, 2022 11:33
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah fantastic unique poem as most wish for youth, while you seem so tired and achy that you wish to beold as 80 dahh. I enjoyed the poem for its wry dry humour and witty poetic remarks. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
June 23rd, 2022 11:33
Grumblings of a young old man!
Doggerel Dave said:
You Sir, are nothing but a pup.
Get out there dancing and prancing or whatever floats your boat.
Leave the moans and groans for the genuine article
Good write Sax.
June 23rd, 2022 07:19
Doggerel Dave said:
You Sir, are nothing but a pup.
Get out there dancing and prancing or whatever floats your boat.
Leave the moans and groans for the genuine article
Good write Sax.
June 23rd, 2022 07:19
Grumblings of a young old man!
L. B. Mek said:
I too, dear Poet
don\'t get, this whole health trip
and extending life
# façade
I mean, if you\'re fated a lengthy life
so be it
we traverse it, as best we can
but why prolong it?
when all we\'re promised is
endless funerals
an ailing physical state
and a mind that can\'t remember
if it\'s 56 or 64 for 8 times 8
or
has it always, felt
like theirs eight days in a week...?
lol
but then, I wouldn\'t mind sticking around
to take a sip of something strong, that\'s
aged
for as long as, I\'ve survived...
(\'they say age
ain\'t nothing but a number\'
and I can\'t help
but stare back
blankly
and scream, back
loud
\'That\'s the fuckin, Point!\')
🤬😒🤷♂️🍾🥂😎
lol
such a fun read
June 23rd, 2022 05:20
L. B. Mek said:
I too, dear Poet
don\'t get, this whole health trip
and extending life
# façade
I mean, if you\'re fated a lengthy life
so be it
we traverse it, as best we can
but why prolong it?
when all we\'re promised is
endless funerals
an ailing physical state
and a mind that can\'t remember
if it\'s 56 or 64 for 8 times 8
or
has it always, felt
like theirs eight days in a week...?
lol
but then, I wouldn\'t mind sticking around
to take a sip of something strong, that\'s
aged
for as long as, I\'ve survived...
(\'they say age
ain\'t nothing but a number\'
and I can\'t help
but stare back
blankly
and scream, back
loud
\'That\'s the fuckin, Point!\')
🤬😒🤷♂️🍾🥂😎
lol
such a fun read
June 23rd, 2022 05:20
Grumblings of a young old man!
dusk arising said:
None of us had an easy ride after 47 sax. Someone said to me rather cruelly when i was on a major downer \"life\'s a bitch - then you die\" which is one way of looking at our existence. But it speaks of bitterness and failure to revel in the joys of life and it\'s many rewards.
I can\'t visualise that you as an expressive and creative poet take a negative viewpoint on life\'s rewards.
A well written piece but I feel you took a devil\'s advocate stance here.
June 23rd, 2022 03:26
dusk arising said:
None of us had an easy ride after 47 sax. Someone said to me rather cruelly when i was on a major downer \"life\'s a bitch - then you die\" which is one way of looking at our existence. But it speaks of bitterness and failure to revel in the joys of life and it\'s many rewards.
I can\'t visualise that you as an expressive and creative poet take a negative viewpoint on life\'s rewards.
A well written piece but I feel you took a devil\'s advocate stance here.
June 23rd, 2022 03:26
Grumblings of a young old man!
orchidee said:
A fine write SC. A younger person was worried about becoming 30, and said \'Arrgghhh - too old!\'
June 23rd, 2022 02:11
orchidee said:
A fine write SC. A younger person was worried about becoming 30, and said \'Arrgghhh - too old!\'
June 23rd, 2022 02:11
Grumblings of a young old man!
Poetic Dan said:
This was my second read and wow what a hit and I\'ll think my next write will go a bit like this, thank you for the inspiration my friend.
I turned 40 last year and I\'ve just spent the last to weeks in and out of A&E
This body will be the death of me but I\'ll cross over running, you wait and see...
Truly an honour to receive your gift, catch you at the finish line!
June 23rd, 2022 01:24
Poetic Dan said:
This was my second read and wow what a hit and I\'ll think my next write will go a bit like this, thank you for the inspiration my friend.
I turned 40 last year and I\'ve just spent the last to weeks in and out of A&E
This body will be the death of me but I\'ll cross over running, you wait and see...
Truly an honour to receive your gift, catch you at the finish line!
June 23rd, 2022 01:24
Grumblings of a young old man!
Goldfinch60 said:
You will never catch me up SC but i am sure with the love and beauty in your life you will last a long long time.
Andy
June 23rd, 2022 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
You will never catch me up SC but i am sure with the love and beauty in your life you will last a long long time.
Andy
June 23rd, 2022 00:50
Freedom #2
Morwenna said:
Free from your conscience perhaps. But not from whoever/whatever makes you upset/angry/indignant/frustrated/sad. And anyway, just write it - you don\'t need to publish it. I find it very therapeutic when any of the above. It a great thought-provoking stanza.
June 22nd, 2022 16:22
Morwenna said:
Free from your conscience perhaps. But not from whoever/whatever makes you upset/angry/indignant/frustrated/sad. And anyway, just write it - you don\'t need to publish it. I find it very therapeutic when any of the above. It a great thought-provoking stanza.
June 22nd, 2022 16:22
Freedom #2
orchidee said:
Ohh, the only freedom is getting away from my singing. That\'s what folk tell me anyway! lol.
June 22nd, 2022 01:40
orchidee said:
Ohh, the only freedom is getting away from my singing. That\'s what folk tell me anyway! lol.
June 22nd, 2022 01:40
Freedom #2
Goldfinch60 said:
Many of us feel like this SC but that freedom is always in our mind and heart.
Andy
June 22nd, 2022 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Many of us feel like this SC but that freedom is always in our mind and heart.
Andy
June 22nd, 2022 00:43
Who Will Be Waiting?
Goldfinch60 said:
I will be waiting, sitting in a bar with my dad, Mozart, Chet Baker and Johnny Cash, you will be very welcome to join us SC.
Andy
June 22nd, 2022 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
I will be waiting, sitting in a bar with my dad, Mozart, Chet Baker and Johnny Cash, you will be very welcome to join us SC.
Andy
June 22nd, 2022 00:23
Inspiration\'s on Holiday Again!
Goldfinch60 said:
Those times when Calliope goes on holiday do happen but she will return with more wondrous words for you SC.
Andy
June 15th, 2022 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Those times when Calliope goes on holiday do happen but she will return with more wondrous words for you SC.
Andy
June 15th, 2022 00:34
Inspiration\'s on Holiday Again!
Morwenna said:
Well it certainly came back today for you - and struck a chord in your readers. I love the half rhymes and gentle metr.e
June 14th, 2022 16:13
Morwenna said:
Well it certainly came back today for you - and struck a chord in your readers. I love the half rhymes and gentle metr.e
June 14th, 2022 16:13
Inspiration\'s on Holiday Again!
Doggerel Dave said:
.....And fulfillment - great stuff, Sax.
June 14th, 2022 07:10
Doggerel Dave said:
.....And fulfillment - great stuff, Sax.
June 14th, 2022 07:10
Inspiration\'s on Holiday Again!
dusk arising said:
Excellent Saxon. I\'d never have though of writing about how barren i feel when my inspiration has drifted from me.
You have inspired me here though. And right now i have thoughts of penning my loss though I have to admit inspiration rose again in me this morning.
I find an amazing lift of spirit once i have been seduced by inspiration and produced a piece - I\'m sure it must be similar for you and all us poets.
Great work, I\'m going to indulge in a re-read now.
June 14th, 2022 05:33
dusk arising said:
Excellent Saxon. I\'d never have though of writing about how barren i feel when my inspiration has drifted from me.
You have inspired me here though. And right now i have thoughts of penning my loss though I have to admit inspiration rose again in me this morning.
I find an amazing lift of spirit once i have been seduced by inspiration and produced a piece - I\'m sure it must be similar for you and all us poets.
Great work, I\'m going to indulge in a re-read now.
June 14th, 2022 05:33
Inspiration\'s on Holiday Again!
L. B. Mek said:
\'It\'s like inspiration takes a break\'
or
\'It\'s like inspiration allows, us
a break\'..
so relatable, dear Poet
thank you! (phew
so it\'s not just me then...)
lol
June 14th, 2022 04:59
L. B. Mek said:
\'It\'s like inspiration takes a break\'
or
\'It\'s like inspiration allows, us
a break\'..
so relatable, dear Poet
thank you! (phew
so it\'s not just me then...)
lol
June 14th, 2022 04:59
Inspiration\'s on Holiday Again!
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
It’s difficult when we feel we cannot write , or are lost and don’t even know what to write about . Sometimes a picture can inspire me to write ,
I look around me wandering if there’s anything around me I can write about .
I’m sure youl feel able to write soon .. hope so )
June 14th, 2022 03:10
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
It’s difficult when we feel we cannot write , or are lost and don’t even know what to write about . Sometimes a picture can inspire me to write ,
I look around me wandering if there’s anything around me I can write about .
I’m sure youl feel able to write soon .. hope so )
June 14th, 2022 03:10
Inspiration\'s on Holiday Again!
orchidee said:
Agghh, yes, the brain cells gone on holiday. All 3 of mine have gone.
When will yours be back? lol.
June 14th, 2022 03:03
orchidee said:
Agghh, yes, the brain cells gone on holiday. All 3 of mine have gone.
When will yours be back? lol.
June 14th, 2022 03:03
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