Comments received on poems by peto
Stalked
Christina8 said:
Super creepy yet phenomenal write, Stevie! Wonderful way of telling a story through poetry, so realistic!!....Christina
July 5th, 2023 02:56
Christina8 said:
Super creepy yet phenomenal write, Stevie! Wonderful way of telling a story through poetry, so realistic!!....Christina
July 5th, 2023 02:56
Radiate
Introverted Sage said:
I read this so many times!
It\'s so melodic.. like there is a background melody as I read it..
Maybe it\'s just me? lol
The flow is so smooth.
Brilliant work!
šŖ¶Happy writing
July 4th, 2023 15:54
Introverted Sage said:
I read this so many times!
It\'s so melodic.. like there is a background melody as I read it..
Maybe it\'s just me? lol
The flow is so smooth.
Brilliant work!
šŖ¶Happy writing
July 4th, 2023 15:54
Radiate
Bella Shepard said:
I read this poem several times aloud, and each time its rhyming cadence became more beautiful in its expression of love and compassion. It is such a fav!
July 4th, 2023 14:57
Bella Shepard said:
I read this poem several times aloud, and each time its rhyming cadence became more beautiful in its expression of love and compassion. It is such a fav!
July 4th, 2023 14:57
Radiate
peto said:
Bobby
Thanks man
Your last line was a belter
Truly appreciate it
Btw,, have lost your pen
July 4th, 2023 05:40
peto said:
Bobby
Thanks man
Your last line was a belter
Truly appreciate it
Btw,, have lost your pen
July 4th, 2023 05:40
Radiate
Bobby O said:
Nice and tight. I was anticipating the last line would be some type of shift from the three , thatās absolute proof of a successful piece when a reader is moving along the plot and anticipates potential direction especially when it hereās no right or wrong , just fun.
BTW-!my guess was ācelebrateā but you were tricky. Nice write Good read
July 4th, 2023 05:35
Bobby O said:
Nice and tight. I was anticipating the last line would be some type of shift from the three , thatās absolute proof of a successful piece when a reader is moving along the plot and anticipates potential direction especially when it hereās no right or wrong , just fun.
BTW-!my guess was ācelebrateā but you were tricky. Nice write Good read
July 4th, 2023 05:35
Radiate
Christina8 said:
Oh I just wanna drink this in!!! What a spectacular write! \"he prayed one day they\'d be a pair, she recreates his love\"Had me melting and I\'m not even your muse! Encore! Thanks for making me smile this morning.....Christina
July 4th, 2023 05:24
Christina8 said:
Oh I just wanna drink this in!!! What a spectacular write! \"he prayed one day they\'d be a pair, she recreates his love\"Had me melting and I\'m not even your muse! Encore! Thanks for making me smile this morning.....Christina
July 4th, 2023 05:24
Poetess
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Yeah , I donāt mind that I lost it .. it was ā sad ā and to be honest not something Iād want to share again .. I probably wouldnāt want to even read it again .. myself
Maybe I could try to write another one about a cave , that sounds nicer
July 4th, 2023 04:35
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Yeah , I donāt mind that I lost it .. it was ā sad ā and to be honest not something Iād want to share again .. I probably wouldnāt want to even read it again .. myself
Maybe I could try to write another one about a cave , that sounds nicer
July 4th, 2023 04:35
Radiate
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Love the repeat of this line
She radiates pure love ā
A lovely writing .. some people are very kind and caring in this world
July 4th, 2023 03:40
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Love the repeat of this line
She radiates pure love ā
A lovely writing .. some people are very kind and caring in this world
July 4th, 2023 03:40
Poetess
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I think we have to find a way out of the hole / dark place .. because we are worthy of finding our way into light and feeling happier
I once wrote a poem about a cave and finding my way out of darkness .. tho I donāt think I have the poem anymore
Such strong words in this .. you express so well .. how unkind some people can be .. and it comes through strongly in your words
We all deserve more than to be treated like rubbish
July 3rd, 2023 12:33
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I think we have to find a way out of the hole / dark place .. because we are worthy of finding our way into light and feeling happier
I once wrote a poem about a cave and finding my way out of darkness .. tho I donāt think I have the poem anymore
Such strong words in this .. you express so well .. how unkind some people can be .. and it comes through strongly in your words
We all deserve more than to be treated like rubbish
July 3rd, 2023 12:33
Poetess
Christina8 said:
I really enjoyed reading this, felt an awful lot like my own story. But you are right, you gain power in writing about it not hating. Thanks for sharing your beautiful gift!!!
July 3rd, 2023 10:27
Christina8 said:
I really enjoyed reading this, felt an awful lot like my own story. But you are right, you gain power in writing about it not hating. Thanks for sharing your beautiful gift!!!
July 3rd, 2023 10:27
Lady
Bobby O said:
That brand new notebook made her rise. Perfect. Not even afraid of the blank page. Nice write hood read
PS/- Iām on my fifth reference book and an no closer to deciphering those ladder pants. I mean they gotta be better than a shirt skirt but thatās all I got.??
July 2nd, 2023 22:58
Bobby O said:
That brand new notebook made her rise. Perfect. Not even afraid of the blank page. Nice write hood read
PS/- Iām on my fifth reference book and an no closer to deciphering those ladder pants. I mean they gotta be better than a shirt skirt but thatās all I got.??
July 2nd, 2023 22:58
Note
peto said:
Should that so read 2?
We all do what we think is right
Triumphs as well as mistakes are part of life
Thank you Maxine
A lovely comment
Much appreciated
July 2nd, 2023 15:39
peto said:
Should that so read 2?
We all do what we think is right
Triumphs as well as mistakes are part of life
Thank you Maxine
A lovely comment
Much appreciated
July 2nd, 2023 15:39
Lady
Christina8 said:
I love the writing (as always) but the ending blew me away...Great job!!
July 2nd, 2023 08:14
Christina8 said:
I love the writing (as always) but the ending blew me away...Great job!!
July 2nd, 2023 08:14
Lady
peto said:
And that comment is a lovely way to start my day
Thank you Violet
Much obliged
July 2nd, 2023 04:36
peto said:
And that comment is a lovely way to start my day
Thank you Violet
Much obliged
July 2nd, 2023 04:36
Lady
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Hi Peto , I really like your writing .. like how you have started the poem wjth mention of the lady and the lamp as if this lady has a nice caring energy to her
Especially like the ending verse
The lady found some space to think
A brand new notepad pleads for ink
Discarding every fear and kink
She rose up from her knees
Lovely way to end the poem
July 2nd, 2023 04:34
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Hi Peto , I really like your writing .. like how you have started the poem wjth mention of the lady and the lamp as if this lady has a nice caring energy to her
Especially like the ending verse
The lady found some space to think
A brand new notepad pleads for ink
Discarding every fear and kink
She rose up from her knees
Lovely way to end the poem
July 2nd, 2023 04:34
Writers block
Garth Rakumakoe said:
An all too familiar feeling Peto. Well depicted sir.šš¼
July 2nd, 2023 02:57
Garth Rakumakoe said:
An all too familiar feeling Peto. Well depicted sir.šš¼
July 2nd, 2023 02:57
More
AuburnScribbler said:
A masterfully written poetic story here peto.
The treble stanzas you\'ve penned, paint intricate scenes of a mini epic.
Also, this poem reminds me of the song \"Her Ghost in the Fog\" by Cradle of Filth, which touches on similar themes, which to me, is a very good thing indeed.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
July 1st, 2023 10:47
AuburnScribbler said:
A masterfully written poetic story here peto.
The treble stanzas you\'ve penned, paint intricate scenes of a mini epic.
Also, this poem reminds me of the song \"Her Ghost in the Fog\" by Cradle of Filth, which touches on similar themes, which to me, is a very good thing indeed.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
July 1st, 2023 10:47
Writers block
Bobby O said:
On some days go you feel like maybe thereās enough room to dance a little in your head. Cuz it must have room w those phrases springing free?
July 1st, 2023 10:34
Bobby O said:
On some days go you feel like maybe thereās enough room to dance a little in your head. Cuz it must have room w those phrases springing free?
July 1st, 2023 10:34
Writers block
Christina8 said:
We all get writers block and I\'ve got a case of it now, and I\'m sure yours will resolve itself soon! You write so well and I\'m patiently waiting for your next inspired poem!!
July 1st, 2023 07:39
Christina8 said:
We all get writers block and I\'ve got a case of it now, and I\'m sure yours will resolve itself soon! You write so well and I\'m patiently waiting for your next inspired poem!!
July 1st, 2023 07:39
Writers block
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A good writing , peto )) nicely expressed poem
I think sometimes it can ā feel ā difficult to see write or atleast we can feel stuck ..
I know sometimes when I feel certain ways .. that I just feel Iām not even in the right place to write
July 1st, 2023 04:01
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A good writing , peto )) nicely expressed poem
I think sometimes it can ā feel ā difficult to see write or atleast we can feel stuck ..
I know sometimes when I feel certain ways .. that I just feel Iām not even in the right place to write
July 1st, 2023 04:01
The king is dead
Christina8 said:
I love this tale, so descriptive! There are so many favorite parts of this poem, I can\'t pick just one! You are doing phenomenal work on your poetry!!
June 30th, 2023 07:15
Christina8 said:
I love this tale, so descriptive! There are so many favorite parts of this poem, I can\'t pick just one! You are doing phenomenal work on your poetry!!
June 30th, 2023 07:15
The king is dead
Bobby O said:
True but with a wonderful mythological twist. Love it.
June 30th, 2023 02:39
Bobby O said:
True but with a wonderful mythological twist. Love it.
June 30th, 2023 02:39
Honey trap
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I love the rhyming in this writing and the way it flows .. great read š
June 30th, 2023 00:43
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I love the rhyming in this writing and the way it flows .. great read š
June 30th, 2023 00:43
Note
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Intense and gripingly real with imagery. The metaphors are strong. An attractive work of craft. I\'m loving your writing Peto. An absolute favorite this one!
June 29th, 2023 14:43
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Intense and gripingly real with imagery. The metaphors are strong. An attractive work of craft. I\'m loving your writing Peto. An absolute favorite this one!
June 29th, 2023 14:43
Note
Bobby O said:
P.S. I canāt imagine what she scribbled and that aspect of keeping tension and mystery engulfs readers.
June 29th, 2023 14:04
Bobby O said:
P.S. I canāt imagine what she scribbled and that aspect of keeping tension and mystery engulfs readers.
June 29th, 2023 14:04
Note
Bobby O said:
You , my friend, have a style that is at a real nice level. This is a power pice and I like how you are consistent with driving fir a certain movement in your work without the clicheā often seen in this site. Head and shoulders above most displaying a dedication to the art. You donāt ā mail stuff inā many props
June 29th, 2023 14:02
Bobby O said:
You , my friend, have a style that is at a real nice level. This is a power pice and I like how you are consistent with driving fir a certain movement in your work without the clicheā often seen in this site. Head and shoulders above most displaying a dedication to the art. You donāt ā mail stuff inā many props
June 29th, 2023 14:02
Note
Christina8 said:
\"she pours a drink while counting pills\"....Such a dark turn after looking in his phone...I\'d like to read that note....Another brilliant poem from my fav. poet!!
June 29th, 2023 10:08
Christina8 said:
\"she pours a drink while counting pills\"....Such a dark turn after looking in his phone...I\'d like to read that note....Another brilliant poem from my fav. poet!!
June 29th, 2023 10:08
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