Comments received on poems by peto
She
Caring dove said:
Sad yet beautifully expressed ! ))
I liked reading your poem
Some people get very hurt in life .. don’t they
July 8th, 2023 02:40
Caring dove said:
Sad yet beautifully expressed ! ))
I liked reading your poem
Some people get very hurt in life .. don’t they
July 8th, 2023 02:40
Tech
peto said:
Matters not how you say it
Appreciate it very much
Thank you Bobby
July 7th, 2023 13:16
peto said:
Matters not how you say it
Appreciate it very much
Thank you Bobby
July 7th, 2023 13:16
Tech
Bobby O said:
Allegorical. Pushes up thoughts that sway. That’s another way to say
Nice write. Good read
July 7th, 2023 12:10
Bobby O said:
Allegorical. Pushes up thoughts that sway. That’s another way to say
Nice write. Good read
July 7th, 2023 12:10
Tech
Christina8 said:
Wow, this is a great example of what not to do, huh? I am not a fan of tech either....you wove your words wonderfully through another poetic marvel!
July 7th, 2023 09:32
Christina8 said:
Wow, this is a great example of what not to do, huh? I am not a fan of tech either....you wove your words wonderfully through another poetic marvel!
July 7th, 2023 09:32
Tech
LIZ said:
There is so much to say about this topic. It can be good and bad. Tech helps us stay \"connected\", when our family is far away, AND work from anywhere (some of us). But it could never replace a true, physical/emotional interaction. There needs to be a balance....although it can be hard to find. Thank you for sharing!
July 7th, 2023 05:26
LIZ said:
There is so much to say about this topic. It can be good and bad. Tech helps us stay \"connected\", when our family is far away, AND work from anywhere (some of us). But it could never replace a true, physical/emotional interaction. There needs to be a balance....although it can be hard to find. Thank you for sharing!
July 7th, 2023 05:26
Tech
Teddy.15 said:
Can I just tell you I really am not a fan of tech, hands are always best those Tesla cars are on another level. I can barely make.my way around MPS. And I hate what it\'s done to our kids. I remember playing with the weebles when I was a kid but today the children sit on the sofa head in an app. Gosh sorry to go on this is a wonderful poem with a truly wonderful subject so powerful and worthy of a conversation anytime. ❤️
July 7th, 2023 04:57
Teddy.15 said:
Can I just tell you I really am not a fan of tech, hands are always best those Tesla cars are on another level. I can barely make.my way around MPS. And I hate what it\'s done to our kids. I remember playing with the weebles when I was a kid but today the children sit on the sofa head in an app. Gosh sorry to go on this is a wonderful poem with a truly wonderful subject so powerful and worthy of a conversation anytime. ❤️
July 7th, 2023 04:57
Wedding toast
Christina8 said:
This is just a beautiful poem all around!! I bet they loved it! Wonderful job....you knocked it outta the park again!!...Christina
July 6th, 2023 06:38
Christina8 said:
This is just a beautiful poem all around!! I bet they loved it! Wonderful job....you knocked it outta the park again!!...Christina
July 6th, 2023 06:38
Wedding toast
Teddy.15 said:
We rarely ever meet our soulmate full stop such a charming speech dear Peto. I bet it was a fun day. ❤️
July 6th, 2023 04:21
Teddy.15 said:
We rarely ever meet our soulmate full stop such a charming speech dear Peto. I bet it was a fun day. ❤️
July 6th, 2023 04:21
Wedding toast
Caring dove said:
Lovely words 🙂
Lucky to be at a wedding
Like the mention of stars and dancing
July 6th, 2023 04:18
Caring dove said:
Lovely words 🙂
Lucky to be at a wedding
Like the mention of stars and dancing
July 6th, 2023 04:18
Stalked
Introverted Sage said:
Such an enigmatic read. Intriguing with a smooth flow.
Brilliant again
July 6th, 2023 00:12
Introverted Sage said:
Such an enigmatic read. Intriguing with a smooth flow.
Brilliant again
July 6th, 2023 00:12
Stalked
Teddy.15 said:
A thriller! lol this made me shiver and excellent and intriguing read dear Peto. ❤️
July 5th, 2023 15:48
Teddy.15 said:
A thriller! lol this made me shiver and excellent and intriguing read dear Peto. ❤️
July 5th, 2023 15:48
Stalked
Christina8 said:
Super creepy yet phenomenal write, Stevie! Wonderful way of telling a story through poetry, so realistic!!....Christina
July 5th, 2023 02:56
Christina8 said:
Super creepy yet phenomenal write, Stevie! Wonderful way of telling a story through poetry, so realistic!!....Christina
July 5th, 2023 02:56
Radiate
Introverted Sage said:
I read this so many times!
It\'s so melodic.. like there is a background melody as I read it..
Maybe it\'s just me? lol
The flow is so smooth.
Brilliant work!
🪶Happy writing
July 4th, 2023 15:54
Introverted Sage said:
I read this so many times!
It\'s so melodic.. like there is a background melody as I read it..
Maybe it\'s just me? lol
The flow is so smooth.
Brilliant work!
🪶Happy writing
July 4th, 2023 15:54
Radiate
Bella Shepard said:
I read this poem several times aloud, and each time its rhyming cadence became more beautiful in its expression of love and compassion. It is such a fav!
July 4th, 2023 14:57
Bella Shepard said:
I read this poem several times aloud, and each time its rhyming cadence became more beautiful in its expression of love and compassion. It is such a fav!
July 4th, 2023 14:57
Radiate
peto said:
Bobby
Thanks man
Your last line was a belter
Truly appreciate it
Btw,, have lost your pen
July 4th, 2023 05:40
peto said:
Bobby
Thanks man
Your last line was a belter
Truly appreciate it
Btw,, have lost your pen
July 4th, 2023 05:40
Radiate
Bobby O said:
Nice and tight. I was anticipating the last line would be some type of shift from the three , that’s absolute proof of a successful piece when a reader is moving along the plot and anticipates potential direction especially when it here’s no right or wrong , just fun.
BTW-!my guess was “celebrate” but you were tricky. Nice write Good read
July 4th, 2023 05:35
Bobby O said:
Nice and tight. I was anticipating the last line would be some type of shift from the three , that’s absolute proof of a successful piece when a reader is moving along the plot and anticipates potential direction especially when it here’s no right or wrong , just fun.
BTW-!my guess was “celebrate” but you were tricky. Nice write Good read
July 4th, 2023 05:35
Radiate
Christina8 said:
Oh I just wanna drink this in!!! What a spectacular write! \"he prayed one day they\'d be a pair, she recreates his love\"Had me melting and I\'m not even your muse! Encore! Thanks for making me smile this morning.....Christina
July 4th, 2023 05:24
Christina8 said:
Oh I just wanna drink this in!!! What a spectacular write! \"he prayed one day they\'d be a pair, she recreates his love\"Had me melting and I\'m not even your muse! Encore! Thanks for making me smile this morning.....Christina
July 4th, 2023 05:24
Poetess
Caring dove said:
Yeah , I don’t mind that I lost it .. it was ‘ sad ‘ and to be honest not something I’d want to share again .. I probably wouldn’t want to even read it again .. myself
Maybe I could try to write another one about a cave , that sounds nicer
July 4th, 2023 04:35
Caring dove said:
Yeah , I don’t mind that I lost it .. it was ‘ sad ‘ and to be honest not something I’d want to share again .. I probably wouldn’t want to even read it again .. myself
Maybe I could try to write another one about a cave , that sounds nicer
July 4th, 2023 04:35
Radiate
Caring dove said:
Love the repeat of this line
She radiates pure love ‘
A lovely writing .. some people are very kind and caring in this world
July 4th, 2023 03:40
Caring dove said:
Love the repeat of this line
She radiates pure love ‘
A lovely writing .. some people are very kind and caring in this world
July 4th, 2023 03:40
Poetess
Caring dove said:
I think we have to find a way out of the hole / dark place .. because we are worthy of finding our way into light and feeling happier
I once wrote a poem about a cave and finding my way out of darkness .. tho I don’t think I have the poem anymore
Such strong words in this .. you express so well .. how unkind some people can be .. and it comes through strongly in your words
We all deserve more than to be treated like rubbish
July 3rd, 2023 12:33
Caring dove said:
I think we have to find a way out of the hole / dark place .. because we are worthy of finding our way into light and feeling happier
I once wrote a poem about a cave and finding my way out of darkness .. tho I don’t think I have the poem anymore
Such strong words in this .. you express so well .. how unkind some people can be .. and it comes through strongly in your words
We all deserve more than to be treated like rubbish
July 3rd, 2023 12:33
Poetess
Christina8 said:
I really enjoyed reading this, felt an awful lot like my own story. But you are right, you gain power in writing about it not hating. Thanks for sharing your beautiful gift!!!
July 3rd, 2023 10:27
Christina8 said:
I really enjoyed reading this, felt an awful lot like my own story. But you are right, you gain power in writing about it not hating. Thanks for sharing your beautiful gift!!!
July 3rd, 2023 10:27
Lady
Bobby O said:
That brand new notebook made her rise. Perfect. Not even afraid of the blank page. Nice write hood read
PS/- I’m on my fifth reference book and an no closer to deciphering those ladder pants. I mean they gotta be better than a shirt skirt but that’s all I got.??
July 2nd, 2023 22:58
Bobby O said:
That brand new notebook made her rise. Perfect. Not even afraid of the blank page. Nice write hood read
PS/- I’m on my fifth reference book and an no closer to deciphering those ladder pants. I mean they gotta be better than a shirt skirt but that’s all I got.??
July 2nd, 2023 22:58
Note
peto said:
Should that so read 2?
We all do what we think is right
Triumphs as well as mistakes are part of life
Thank you Maxine
A lovely comment
Much appreciated
July 2nd, 2023 15:39
peto said:
Should that so read 2?
We all do what we think is right
Triumphs as well as mistakes are part of life
Thank you Maxine
A lovely comment
Much appreciated
July 2nd, 2023 15:39
Lady
Christina8 said:
I love the writing (as always) but the ending blew me away...Great job!!
July 2nd, 2023 08:14
Christina8 said:
I love the writing (as always) but the ending blew me away...Great job!!
July 2nd, 2023 08:14
Lady
peto said:
And that comment is a lovely way to start my day
Thank you Violet
Much obliged
July 2nd, 2023 04:36
peto said:
And that comment is a lovely way to start my day
Thank you Violet
Much obliged
July 2nd, 2023 04:36
Lady
Caring dove said:
Hi Peto , I really like your writing .. like how you have started the poem wjth mention of the lady and the lamp as if this lady has a nice caring energy to her
Especially like the ending verse
The lady found some space to think
A brand new notepad pleads for ink
Discarding every fear and kink
She rose up from her knees
Lovely way to end the poem
July 2nd, 2023 04:34
Caring dove said:
Hi Peto , I really like your writing .. like how you have started the poem wjth mention of the lady and the lamp as if this lady has a nice caring energy to her
Especially like the ending verse
The lady found some space to think
A brand new notepad pleads for ink
Discarding every fear and kink
She rose up from her knees
Lovely way to end the poem
July 2nd, 2023 04:34
Writers block
Garth Rakumakoe said:
An all too familiar feeling Peto. Well depicted sir.🙏🏼
July 2nd, 2023 02:57
Garth Rakumakoe said:
An all too familiar feeling Peto. Well depicted sir.🙏🏼
July 2nd, 2023 02:57
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