Comments received on poems by peto
Have you ever
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I know the feeling. You called it by name. Literally. A moving piece, Peto. 🙏🏼
June 27th, 2023 20:24
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I know the feeling. You called it by name. Literally. A moving piece, Peto. 🙏🏼
June 27th, 2023 20:24
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Garth Rakumakoe said:
Abstract, compelling in the way it unfolds. Calls for another read, and another one... - A favorite.
June 27th, 2023 10:07
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Abstract, compelling in the way it unfolds. Calls for another read, and another one... - A favorite.
June 27th, 2023 10:07
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Laura🌻 said:
Dear peto,
Your written words are astounding. Such a pleasure to read.
One of my favorite lines:
‘The prayers offered up in church
Had burst the dam and washed away her fear’
Laura🌻
June 27th, 2023 10:03
Laura🌻 said:
Dear peto,
Your written words are astounding. Such a pleasure to read.
One of my favorite lines:
‘The prayers offered up in church
Had burst the dam and washed away her fear’
Laura🌻
June 27th, 2023 10:03
Have you ever
Christina8 said:
I know I say this a lot but this has got to be one of your best!! I still find myself \"in a world full of fright\". The last stanza is just the sweetest! I mean, WOW!
June 27th, 2023 02:12
Christina8 said:
I know I say this a lot but this has got to be one of your best!! I still find myself \"in a world full of fright\". The last stanza is just the sweetest! I mean, WOW!
June 27th, 2023 02:12
Crying
Caring dove said:
A great poem 🙂
Like how you have expressed yourself in this poem
She sounds like a kind person tho quite sad
Nice way to tell a story of a girl
June 26th, 2023 15:45
Caring dove said:
A great poem 🙂
Like how you have expressed yourself in this poem
She sounds like a kind person tho quite sad
Nice way to tell a story of a girl
June 26th, 2023 15:45
Have you ever
LIZ said:
Mmmm so much, but to answer your questions, yes, to all of the above! However,
I\'ll focus on the ending. \"Would you ever allow me to take your sweet hand, to a place where the sun kisses toes in the sand, instantly you\'d receive the respect you command, On our first fated magical night\" -YES sir! Thank you!
June 26th, 2023 11:48
LIZ said:
Mmmm so much, but to answer your questions, yes, to all of the above! However,
I\'ll focus on the ending. \"Would you ever allow me to take your sweet hand, to a place where the sun kisses toes in the sand, instantly you\'d receive the respect you command, On our first fated magical night\" -YES sir! Thank you!
June 26th, 2023 11:48
Have you ever
Caring dove said:
A deep writing with a lot of questions yet well expressed )
Yes I’ve felt low in self esteem before , and in a place of fear . And it’s never nice , is it
A good poem especially like the last few lines
June 26th, 2023 10:20
Caring dove said:
A deep writing with a lot of questions yet well expressed )
Yes I’ve felt low in self esteem before , and in a place of fear . And it’s never nice , is it
A good poem especially like the last few lines
June 26th, 2023 10:20
Fulfillment
Caring dove said:
Great writing I especially like the ending verse 🙂
June 25th, 2023 16:00
Caring dove said:
Great writing I especially like the ending verse 🙂
June 25th, 2023 16:00
Walking
Caring dove said:
An engaging interesting and nicely expressed writing .. some really lovely words in this ))
June 25th, 2023 15:57
Caring dove said:
An engaging interesting and nicely expressed writing .. some really lovely words in this ))
June 25th, 2023 15:57
Velvet
LIZ said:
Oh \"A chandelier of broken glass, She took away his back stage pass\"....broken promises, lost love?
Really enjoyed this one!! Thank you for sharing!
June 25th, 2023 06:58
LIZ said:
Oh \"A chandelier of broken glass, She took away his back stage pass\"....broken promises, lost love?
Really enjoyed this one!! Thank you for sharing!
June 25th, 2023 06:58
Velvet
Christina8 said:
Oh, goodness they just keep getting better!! The last stanza is so rewarding, when she makes a toast and he feels her velvet touch! Another favorite!! Christina
June 25th, 2023 01:55
Christina8 said:
Oh, goodness they just keep getting better!! The last stanza is so rewarding, when she makes a toast and he feels her velvet touch! Another favorite!! Christina
June 25th, 2023 01:55
Ferry man
Parisab said:
I truly enjoy the contrast between the tone and the content! Tender it bleeds with elegance…Good write
June 25th, 2023 01:28
Parisab said:
I truly enjoy the contrast between the tone and the content! Tender it bleeds with elegance…Good write
June 25th, 2023 01:28
Crying
Christina8 said:
This is so powerful and if I\'m not mistaken, I\'ve seen this one before and I had the same reaction to it then. Thanks for continuing to post these, my favorites of all!!
June 24th, 2023 05:06
Christina8 said:
This is so powerful and if I\'m not mistaken, I\'ve seen this one before and I had the same reaction to it then. Thanks for continuing to post these, my favorites of all!!
June 24th, 2023 05:06
Crying
Bobby O said:
Building tension to climactic finish. Admiralty when first I read segue jumping womb to groom I worried but you not only 911 rescued you ran w stride over Mile
26. Nice job.
June 24th, 2023 03:27
Bobby O said:
Building tension to climactic finish. Admiralty when first I read segue jumping womb to groom I worried but you not only 911 rescued you ran w stride over Mile
26. Nice job.
June 24th, 2023 03:27
Goddess
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... Best left alone unless you want one last good night!
Fantastic write
June 23rd, 2023 08:27
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... Best left alone unless you want one last good night!
Fantastic write
June 23rd, 2023 08:27
Goddess
peto said:
Sure is
As a scot I hope your ashes team are catchy next week
June 23rd, 2023 04:39
peto said:
Sure is
As a scot I hope your ashes team are catchy next week
June 23rd, 2023 04:39
Goddess
Christina8 said:
This is just excellent!! Wonder who this mystery goddess it, she is so lucky! l love how her heart thaws every time she takes a slice! So many great metaphors, hard to pick just one. Great job!!
June 23rd, 2023 04:26
Christina8 said:
This is just excellent!! Wonder who this mystery goddess it, she is so lucky! l love how her heart thaws every time she takes a slice! So many great metaphors, hard to pick just one. Great job!!
June 23rd, 2023 04:26
Honey trap
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Wow! The form the character, the treasure of expression, at some points it even reads like a song! - Marvelous... A most definite fave! ❤
June 22nd, 2023 10:45
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Wow! The form the character, the treasure of expression, at some points it even reads like a song! - Marvelous... A most definite fave! ❤
June 22nd, 2023 10:45
Fag ash lil
Christina8 said:
This is so well written...from addiction to cutting, a story that gets straight to the heart. Thats the thing, you aren\'t just a great poet, you are the best storyteller!
June 22nd, 2023 10:41
Christina8 said:
This is so well written...from addiction to cutting, a story that gets straight to the heart. Thats the thing, you aren\'t just a great poet, you are the best storyteller!
June 22nd, 2023 10:41
Honey trap
Christina8 said:
Stevie, you never disappoint! A well written poem and story that was gripping till the end!! This is an inspired masterpiece!!
June 22nd, 2023 10:37
Christina8 said:
Stevie, you never disappoint! A well written poem and story that was gripping till the end!! This is an inspired masterpiece!!
June 22nd, 2023 10:37
Honey trap
Laura🌻 said:
Dear peto,
This poem is
‘off the charts’
indeed!
A great read for this reader.
Laura🌻
June 22nd, 2023 06:29
Laura🌻 said:
Dear peto,
This poem is
‘off the charts’
indeed!
A great read for this reader.
Laura🌻
June 22nd, 2023 06:29
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