Comments received on poems by peto
Crying
Caring dove said:
A great poem 🙂
Like how you have expressed yourself in this poem
She sounds like a kind person tho quite sad
Nice way to tell a story of a girl
June 26th, 2023 15:45
Caring dove said:
A great poem 🙂
Like how you have expressed yourself in this poem
She sounds like a kind person tho quite sad
Nice way to tell a story of a girl
June 26th, 2023 15:45
Have you ever
LIZ said:
Mmmm so much, but to answer your questions, yes, to all of the above! However,
I\'ll focus on the ending. \"Would you ever allow me to take your sweet hand, to a place where the sun kisses toes in the sand, instantly you\'d receive the respect you command, On our first fated magical night\" -YES sir! Thank you!
June 26th, 2023 11:48
LIZ said:
Mmmm so much, but to answer your questions, yes, to all of the above! However,
I\'ll focus on the ending. \"Would you ever allow me to take your sweet hand, to a place where the sun kisses toes in the sand, instantly you\'d receive the respect you command, On our first fated magical night\" -YES sir! Thank you!
June 26th, 2023 11:48
Have you ever
Caring dove said:
A deep writing with a lot of questions yet well expressed )
Yes I’ve felt low in self esteem before , and in a place of fear . And it’s never nice , is it
A good poem especially like the last few lines
June 26th, 2023 10:20
Caring dove said:
A deep writing with a lot of questions yet well expressed )
Yes I’ve felt low in self esteem before , and in a place of fear . And it’s never nice , is it
A good poem especially like the last few lines
June 26th, 2023 10:20
Fulfillment
Caring dove said:
Great writing I especially like the ending verse 🙂
June 25th, 2023 16:00
Caring dove said:
Great writing I especially like the ending verse 🙂
June 25th, 2023 16:00
Walking
Caring dove said:
An engaging interesting and nicely expressed writing .. some really lovely words in this ))
June 25th, 2023 15:57
Caring dove said:
An engaging interesting and nicely expressed writing .. some really lovely words in this ))
June 25th, 2023 15:57
Velvet
LIZ said:
Oh \"A chandelier of broken glass, She took away his back stage pass\"....broken promises, lost love?
Really enjoyed this one!! Thank you for sharing!
June 25th, 2023 06:58
LIZ said:
Oh \"A chandelier of broken glass, She took away his back stage pass\"....broken promises, lost love?
Really enjoyed this one!! Thank you for sharing!
June 25th, 2023 06:58
Velvet
Christina8 said:
Oh, goodness they just keep getting better!! The last stanza is so rewarding, when she makes a toast and he feels her velvet touch! Another favorite!! Christina
June 25th, 2023 01:55
Christina8 said:
Oh, goodness they just keep getting better!! The last stanza is so rewarding, when she makes a toast and he feels her velvet touch! Another favorite!! Christina
June 25th, 2023 01:55
Ferry man
Parisab said:
I truly enjoy the contrast between the tone and the content! Tender it bleeds with elegance…Good write
June 25th, 2023 01:28
Parisab said:
I truly enjoy the contrast between the tone and the content! Tender it bleeds with elegance…Good write
June 25th, 2023 01:28
Crying
Christina8 said:
This is so powerful and if I\'m not mistaken, I\'ve seen this one before and I had the same reaction to it then. Thanks for continuing to post these, my favorites of all!!
June 24th, 2023 05:06
Christina8 said:
This is so powerful and if I\'m not mistaken, I\'ve seen this one before and I had the same reaction to it then. Thanks for continuing to post these, my favorites of all!!
June 24th, 2023 05:06
Crying
Bobby O said:
Building tension to climactic finish. Admiralty when first I read segue jumping womb to groom I worried but you not only 911 rescued you ran w stride over Mile
26. Nice job.
June 24th, 2023 03:27
Bobby O said:
Building tension to climactic finish. Admiralty when first I read segue jumping womb to groom I worried but you not only 911 rescued you ran w stride over Mile
26. Nice job.
June 24th, 2023 03:27
Goddess
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... Best left alone unless you want one last good night!
Fantastic write
June 23rd, 2023 08:27
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... Best left alone unless you want one last good night!
Fantastic write
June 23rd, 2023 08:27
Goddess
peto said:
Sure is
As a scot I hope your ashes team are catchy next week
June 23rd, 2023 04:39
peto said:
Sure is
As a scot I hope your ashes team are catchy next week
June 23rd, 2023 04:39
Goddess
Christina8 said:
This is just excellent!! Wonder who this mystery goddess it, she is so lucky! l love how her heart thaws every time she takes a slice! So many great metaphors, hard to pick just one. Great job!!
June 23rd, 2023 04:26
Christina8 said:
This is just excellent!! Wonder who this mystery goddess it, she is so lucky! l love how her heart thaws every time she takes a slice! So many great metaphors, hard to pick just one. Great job!!
June 23rd, 2023 04:26
Honey trap
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Wow! The form the character, the treasure of expression, at some points it even reads like a song! - Marvelous... A most definite fave! ❤
June 22nd, 2023 10:45
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Wow! The form the character, the treasure of expression, at some points it even reads like a song! - Marvelous... A most definite fave! ❤
June 22nd, 2023 10:45
Fag ash lil
Christina8 said:
This is so well written...from addiction to cutting, a story that gets straight to the heart. Thats the thing, you aren\'t just a great poet, you are the best storyteller!
June 22nd, 2023 10:41
Christina8 said:
This is so well written...from addiction to cutting, a story that gets straight to the heart. Thats the thing, you aren\'t just a great poet, you are the best storyteller!
June 22nd, 2023 10:41
Honey trap
Christina8 said:
Stevie, you never disappoint! A well written poem and story that was gripping till the end!! This is an inspired masterpiece!!
June 22nd, 2023 10:37
Christina8 said:
Stevie, you never disappoint! A well written poem and story that was gripping till the end!! This is an inspired masterpiece!!
June 22nd, 2023 10:37
Honey trap
Laura🌻 said:
Dear peto,
This poem is
‘off the charts’
indeed!
A great read for this reader.
Laura🌻
June 22nd, 2023 06:29
Laura🌻 said:
Dear peto,
This poem is
‘off the charts’
indeed!
A great read for this reader.
Laura🌻
June 22nd, 2023 06:29
I\'ll see you
Christina8 said:
IDK how I missed this poem but it is fabulous!! Your intended gal is a very lucky gal indeed!
June 21st, 2023 08:37
Christina8 said:
IDK how I missed this poem but it is fabulous!! Your intended gal is a very lucky gal indeed!
June 21st, 2023 08:37
Candlewitch you tube version
Christina8 said:
Your poetry is so magnificent, I really hope you add more here, like \"Imagine\", I would love to hear you recite that! Anyway, wonderful poem and the music that accompanied it!!
June 21st, 2023 08:28
Christina8 said:
Your poetry is so magnificent, I really hope you add more here, like \"Imagine\", I would love to hear you recite that! Anyway, wonderful poem and the music that accompanied it!!
June 21st, 2023 08:28
Broken wing
Christina8 said:
I made this a favorite so I can reread this epic poem! Any lady would be lucky to have this written about her. So much emotion put into this! Love the rhyme scheme, as always, my fav.!
June 19th, 2023 09:20
Christina8 said:
I made this a favorite so I can reread this epic poem! Any lady would be lucky to have this written about her. So much emotion put into this! Love the rhyme scheme, as always, my fav.!
June 19th, 2023 09:20
Gave up the ghost
Christina8 said:
OMG this blows my mind!! Love the rhyme but love the meaning more. I wish I could see you write everyday! Love it! Love it! Love it!!!!!!-- Christina
June 18th, 2023 05:41
Christina8 said:
OMG this blows my mind!! Love the rhyme but love the meaning more. I wish I could see you write everyday! Love it! Love it! Love it!!!!!!-- Christina
June 18th, 2023 05:41
Ferry man
Christina8 said:
I love your poems and I wish you would write more of them. They each tell such a vivid story. This one, so sad. But genius. You know I\'m a big fan of your rhymes!
February 21st, 2022 09:23
Christina8 said:
I love your poems and I wish you would write more of them. They each tell such a vivid story. This one, so sad. But genius. You know I\'m a big fan of your rhymes!
February 21st, 2022 09:23
Ferry man
L. B. Mek said:
that inevitable freefall, or so it seems
from a distance;
but when \'the addict\', is a friend or kin
I\'ll bet you\'ll fight, till the end
if there\'s even a glimmer of hope
of changing their fate...
thank for sharing
July 15th, 2021 03:51
L. B. Mek said:
that inevitable freefall, or so it seems
from a distance;
but when \'the addict\', is a friend or kin
I\'ll bet you\'ll fight, till the end
if there\'s even a glimmer of hope
of changing their fate...
thank for sharing
July 15th, 2021 03:51
Walking
Suresh said:
If I had a memory like yours, I would re re re-post it as well
December 29th, 2020 07:16
Suresh said:
If I had a memory like yours, I would re re re-post it as well
December 29th, 2020 07:16
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