Comments received on poems by peto



Goddess
Christina8 said:

This is just excellent!! Wonder who this mystery goddess it, she is so lucky! l love how her heart thaws every time she takes a slice! So many great metaphors, hard to pick just one. Great job!!

June 23rd, 2023 04:26

I\'ll see you
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

This is a lovely nicely expressed poem 🙂

June 22nd, 2023 14:23

Honey trap
Garth Rakumakoe said:

Wow! The form the character, the treasure of expression, at some points it even reads like a song! - Marvelous... A most definite fave! ❤

June 22nd, 2023 10:45

Fag ash lil
Christina8 said:

This is so well written...from addiction to cutting, a story that gets straight to the heart. Thats the thing, you aren\'t just a great poet, you are the best storyteller!

June 22nd, 2023 10:41

Honey trap
Christina8 said:

Stevie, you never disappoint! A well written poem and story that was gripping till the end!! This is an inspired masterpiece!!

June 22nd, 2023 10:37

Honey trap
2781 said:

To good to be great story telling.

June 22nd, 2023 09:06

Honey trap
Laura🌻 said:

Dear peto,

This poem is
‘off the charts’
indeed!

A great read for this reader.

Laura🌻

June 22nd, 2023 06:29

Fag ash lil
2781 said:

Good right.
He might!

June 21st, 2023 10:19

I\'ll see you
Christina8 said:

IDK how I missed this poem but it is fabulous!! Your intended gal is a very lucky gal indeed!

June 21st, 2023 08:37

Candlewitch you tube version
Christina8 said:

Your poetry is so magnificent, I really hope you add more here, like \"Imagine\", I would love to hear you recite that! Anyway, wonderful poem and the music that accompanied it!!

June 21st, 2023 08:28

Broken wing
Christina8 said:

I made this a favorite so I can reread this epic poem! Any lady would be lucky to have this written about her. So much emotion put into this! Love the rhyme scheme, as always, my fav.!

June 19th, 2023 09:20

Gave up the ghost
Christina8 said:

OMG this blows my mind!! Love the rhyme but love the meaning more. I wish I could see you write everyday! Love it! Love it! Love it!!!!!!-- Christina

June 18th, 2023 05:41

Ferry man
Christina8 said:

I love your poems and I wish you would write more of them. They each tell such a vivid story. This one, so sad. But genius. You know I\'m a big fan of your rhymes!

February 21st, 2022 09:23

Ferry man
L. B. Mek said:

that inevitable freefall, or so it seems
from a distance;
but when \'the addict\', is a friend or kin
I\'ll bet you\'ll fight, till the end
if there\'s even a glimmer of hope
of changing their fate...
thank for sharing

July 15th, 2021 03:51

Walking
Suresh said:

If I had a memory like yours, I would re re re-post it as well

December 29th, 2020 07:16

Walking
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful loving words Peto.

Andy

December 15th, 2020 01:44

Walking
Doggerel Dave said:

New material next time? I\'ll have the old material if it\'s like that...
Connected with every bit of it - that\'s the manner of interpersonal poetry I can feel and....enjoy.

Dave

December 15th, 2020 00:39

I\'ll see you
Poetic Dan said:

Wow.....

December 14th, 2020 12:13

Caged
Poetic Dan said:

Wow... Ain\'t nobody even touched or going to touch my key! This flow was explosive and left with something big than me...

So many views but not one comment? Stranger times are coming!

Much peace and respect

December 14th, 2020 12:11

Walking
Poetic Dan said:

That was one awesome walk I must say! I wasn\'t sure if I even took a breath, with I thank you for the magic in your words to take it away!!

Great stuff!

December 14th, 2020 12:05

Walking
Christina8 said:

Bravo! Thanks for making a post, I put it in my faves, because this is truly a top notch poem!!! Christina

December 14th, 2020 07:18

Walking
L. B. Mek said:

what a wonderful way to capture an experience many can relate to,
a beginning tied to an ending: all in that pulsating phoenix of once dormant sensation,
good read

December 14th, 2020 06:33

Walking
dusk arising said:

Those first two lines are classic. Nice one.

December 14th, 2020 05:20

Candlewitch
Christina8 said:

This is fantastic, what the hell, only 2 reviews? I\'m telling ya, this is just amazing work, hope you post something real soon!!

December 13th, 2020 19:05

Imagine
Christina8 said:

You never cease to amaze!!

December 13th, 2020 19:03

Candlewitch
Suresh said:

Alas! It only happens once a year
So heed to what so eloquently said here.



December 9th, 2020 06:27

Candlewitch
Goldfinch60 said:

Don\'t worry Peto, I will be out there.


October 31st, 2020 01:42

You could
Goldfinch60 said:

That good in others can make us good to so that we can then share it even more.

Andy

July 12th, 2020 00:41

Imagine
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Wow wow wow what a charming imaginative romantic poem and I was admiring all the awesome imagery and muse you depicted to express the love and longing so poetically. One of your best!! Kudos.!

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too. Thanks

July 7th, 2020 09:58

Imagine
Neville said:


oh yes, what a wonderful world that would be..........

July 6th, 2020 09:20



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