Comments received on poems by peto
Crying
Bobby O said:
Building tension to climactic finish. Admiralty when first I read segue jumping womb to groom I worried but you not only 911 rescued you ran w stride over Mile
26. Nice job.
June 24th, 2023 03:27
Bobby O said:
Building tension to climactic finish. Admiralty when first I read segue jumping womb to groom I worried but you not only 911 rescued you ran w stride over Mile
26. Nice job.
June 24th, 2023 03:27
Goddess
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... Best left alone unless you want one last good night!
Fantastic write
June 23rd, 2023 08:27
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... Best left alone unless you want one last good night!
Fantastic write
June 23rd, 2023 08:27
Goddess
peto said:
Sure is
As a scot I hope your ashes team are catchy next week
June 23rd, 2023 04:39
peto said:
Sure is
As a scot I hope your ashes team are catchy next week
June 23rd, 2023 04:39
Goddess
Christina8 said:
This is just excellent!! Wonder who this mystery goddess it, she is so lucky! l love how her heart thaws every time she takes a slice! So many great metaphors, hard to pick just one. Great job!!
June 23rd, 2023 04:26
Christina8 said:
This is just excellent!! Wonder who this mystery goddess it, she is so lucky! l love how her heart thaws every time she takes a slice! So many great metaphors, hard to pick just one. Great job!!
June 23rd, 2023 04:26
Honey trap
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Wow! The form the character, the treasure of expression, at some points it even reads like a song! - Marvelous... A most definite fave! ❤
June 22nd, 2023 10:45
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Wow! The form the character, the treasure of expression, at some points it even reads like a song! - Marvelous... A most definite fave! ❤
June 22nd, 2023 10:45
Fag ash lil
Christina8 said:
This is so well written...from addiction to cutting, a story that gets straight to the heart. Thats the thing, you aren\'t just a great poet, you are the best storyteller!
June 22nd, 2023 10:41
Christina8 said:
This is so well written...from addiction to cutting, a story that gets straight to the heart. Thats the thing, you aren\'t just a great poet, you are the best storyteller!
June 22nd, 2023 10:41
Honey trap
Christina8 said:
Stevie, you never disappoint! A well written poem and story that was gripping till the end!! This is an inspired masterpiece!!
June 22nd, 2023 10:37
Christina8 said:
Stevie, you never disappoint! A well written poem and story that was gripping till the end!! This is an inspired masterpiece!!
June 22nd, 2023 10:37
Honey trap
Laura🌻 said:
Dear peto,
This poem is
‘off the charts’
indeed!
A great read for this reader.
Laura🌻
June 22nd, 2023 06:29
Laura🌻 said:
Dear peto,
This poem is
‘off the charts’
indeed!
A great read for this reader.
Laura🌻
June 22nd, 2023 06:29
I\'ll see you
Christina8 said:
IDK how I missed this poem but it is fabulous!! Your intended gal is a very lucky gal indeed!
June 21st, 2023 08:37
Christina8 said:
IDK how I missed this poem but it is fabulous!! Your intended gal is a very lucky gal indeed!
June 21st, 2023 08:37
Candlewitch you tube version
Christina8 said:
Your poetry is so magnificent, I really hope you add more here, like \"Imagine\", I would love to hear you recite that! Anyway, wonderful poem and the music that accompanied it!!
June 21st, 2023 08:28
Christina8 said:
Your poetry is so magnificent, I really hope you add more here, like \"Imagine\", I would love to hear you recite that! Anyway, wonderful poem and the music that accompanied it!!
June 21st, 2023 08:28
Broken wing
Christina8 said:
I made this a favorite so I can reread this epic poem! Any lady would be lucky to have this written about her. So much emotion put into this! Love the rhyme scheme, as always, my fav.!
June 19th, 2023 09:20
Christina8 said:
I made this a favorite so I can reread this epic poem! Any lady would be lucky to have this written about her. So much emotion put into this! Love the rhyme scheme, as always, my fav.!
June 19th, 2023 09:20
Gave up the ghost
Christina8 said:
OMG this blows my mind!! Love the rhyme but love the meaning more. I wish I could see you write everyday! Love it! Love it! Love it!!!!!!-- Christina
June 18th, 2023 05:41
Christina8 said:
OMG this blows my mind!! Love the rhyme but love the meaning more. I wish I could see you write everyday! Love it! Love it! Love it!!!!!!-- Christina
June 18th, 2023 05:41
Ferry man
Christina8 said:
I love your poems and I wish you would write more of them. They each tell such a vivid story. This one, so sad. But genius. You know I\'m a big fan of your rhymes!
February 21st, 2022 09:23
Christina8 said:
I love your poems and I wish you would write more of them. They each tell such a vivid story. This one, so sad. But genius. You know I\'m a big fan of your rhymes!
February 21st, 2022 09:23
Ferry man
L. B. Mek said:
that inevitable freefall, or so it seems
from a distance;
but when \'the addict\', is a friend or kin
I\'ll bet you\'ll fight, till the end
if there\'s even a glimmer of hope
of changing their fate...
thank for sharing
July 15th, 2021 03:51
L. B. Mek said:
that inevitable freefall, or so it seems
from a distance;
but when \'the addict\', is a friend or kin
I\'ll bet you\'ll fight, till the end
if there\'s even a glimmer of hope
of changing their fate...
thank for sharing
July 15th, 2021 03:51
Walking
Suresh said:
If I had a memory like yours, I would re re re-post it as well
December 29th, 2020 07:16
Suresh said:
If I had a memory like yours, I would re re re-post it as well
December 29th, 2020 07:16
Walking
Doggerel Dave said:
New material next time? I\'ll have the old material if it\'s like that...
Connected with every bit of it - that\'s the manner of interpersonal poetry I can feel and....enjoy.
Dave
December 15th, 2020 00:39
Doggerel Dave said:
New material next time? I\'ll have the old material if it\'s like that...
Connected with every bit of it - that\'s the manner of interpersonal poetry I can feel and....enjoy.
Dave
December 15th, 2020 00:39
Caged
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... Ain\'t nobody even touched or going to touch my key! This flow was explosive and left with something big than me...
So many views but not one comment? Stranger times are coming!
Much peace and respect
December 14th, 2020 12:11
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... Ain\'t nobody even touched or going to touch my key! This flow was explosive and left with something big than me...
So many views but not one comment? Stranger times are coming!
Much peace and respect
December 14th, 2020 12:11
Walking
Poetic Dan said:
That was one awesome walk I must say! I wasn\'t sure if I even took a breath, with I thank you for the magic in your words to take it away!!
Great stuff!
December 14th, 2020 12:05
Poetic Dan said:
That was one awesome walk I must say! I wasn\'t sure if I even took a breath, with I thank you for the magic in your words to take it away!!
Great stuff!
December 14th, 2020 12:05
Walking
Christina8 said:
Bravo! Thanks for making a post, I put it in my faves, because this is truly a top notch poem!!! Christina
December 14th, 2020 07:18
Christina8 said:
Bravo! Thanks for making a post, I put it in my faves, because this is truly a top notch poem!!! Christina
December 14th, 2020 07:18
Walking
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderful way to capture an experience many can relate to,
a beginning tied to an ending: all in that pulsating phoenix of once dormant sensation,
good read
December 14th, 2020 06:33
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderful way to capture an experience many can relate to,
a beginning tied to an ending: all in that pulsating phoenix of once dormant sensation,
good read
December 14th, 2020 06:33
Candlewitch
Christina8 said:
This is fantastic, what the hell, only 2 reviews? I\'m telling ya, this is just amazing work, hope you post something real soon!!
December 13th, 2020 19:05
Christina8 said:
This is fantastic, what the hell, only 2 reviews? I\'m telling ya, this is just amazing work, hope you post something real soon!!
December 13th, 2020 19:05
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