Comments received on poems by peto
Angel heart
AuburnScribbler said:
Brilliantly written here peto, this is penned with epic tones, and describes a cosmic scene, which is both savage and beautiful.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
July 25th, 2023 09:36
AuburnScribbler said:
Brilliantly written here peto, this is penned with epic tones, and describes a cosmic scene, which is both savage and beautiful.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
July 25th, 2023 09:36
Angel heart
Christina8 said:
There are parts and pieces of this poem that ring so true for me so I favorited it. Just written with such understanding of your muse, truly a great great poem!
July 25th, 2023 09:12
Christina8 said:
There are parts and pieces of this poem that ring so true for me so I favorited it. Just written with such understanding of your muse, truly a great great poem!
July 25th, 2023 09:12
Angel heart
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Seems she’s found her strength and moved from her past pain
Like how you moved from a few sad lines into positivity
Some lovely words in this .. especially like the last lines with mention of the fairy’s 🙂
Good writing , peto ))
Sounds like she has protection
July 25th, 2023 03:42
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Seems she’s found her strength and moved from her past pain
Like how you moved from a few sad lines into positivity
Some lovely words in this .. especially like the last lines with mention of the fairy’s 🙂
Good writing , peto ))
Sounds like she has protection
July 25th, 2023 03:42
Angel heart
LIZ said:
Oh my!!! I love this one! It started really gore, which I appreciate! But, my favorite lines: \"Fairy\'s massage her feet\"- mmmmm yes please!!! \"Cherubs dance to the beat\"--I\'m in!!! Beautiful!!!
July 25th, 2023 02:17
LIZ said:
Oh my!!! I love this one! It started really gore, which I appreciate! But, my favorite lines: \"Fairy\'s massage her feet\"- mmmmm yes please!!! \"Cherubs dance to the beat\"--I\'m in!!! Beautiful!!!
July 25th, 2023 02:17
Hold
peto said:
Such a kind review Christina
Then again
You always have encouraged me
Truly appreciate you
Extremely grateful
July 24th, 2023 14:44
peto said:
Such a kind review Christina
Then again
You always have encouraged me
Truly appreciate you
Extremely grateful
July 24th, 2023 14:44
Hold
Christina8 said:
\"search every inch of outer space\" Awwww, this is again a favorite of mine because of the rhyme scheme and the sweet content conveyed. Just when I thought I\'d found the best, you go and put out another one!!
July 24th, 2023 08:57
Christina8 said:
\"search every inch of outer space\" Awwww, this is again a favorite of mine because of the rhyme scheme and the sweet content conveyed. Just when I thought I\'d found the best, you go and put out another one!!
July 24th, 2023 08:57
Taker
Christina8 said:
Another amazing but dark poem, just a wonderful job all in all, Stevie!
July 21st, 2023 05:50
Christina8 said:
Another amazing but dark poem, just a wonderful job all in all, Stevie!
July 21st, 2023 05:50
Beth
Christina8 said:
This was petrifyingly great! Should post again around Halloween. Dark rhymes but so descriptive. I love it!!
July 21st, 2023 05:47
Christina8 said:
This was petrifyingly great! Should post again around Halloween. Dark rhymes but so descriptive. I love it!!
July 21st, 2023 05:47
Empty arms
Christina8 said:
this is quite the poem! So vividly felt. Can\'t wait to get ahold of your other poems!!
July 20th, 2023 17:51
Christina8 said:
this is quite the poem! So vividly felt. Can\'t wait to get ahold of your other poems!!
July 20th, 2023 17:51
Empty arms
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A great engaging writing 🙂 nicely expressed
I think we all need that something or someone to make us feel that little less empty
July 19th, 2023 07:29
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A great engaging writing 🙂 nicely expressed
I think we all need that something or someone to make us feel that little less empty
July 19th, 2023 07:29
Beth
Introverted Sage said:
Interesting write!
I read a passage recently referring to \'Beth\' as the body or temple of the Soul. Reading this with both meanings piques the mind!
Love it
July 15th, 2023 16:39
Introverted Sage said:
Interesting write!
I read a passage recently referring to \'Beth\' as the body or temple of the Soul. Reading this with both meanings piques the mind!
Love it
July 15th, 2023 16:39
Empty arms
Teddy.15 said:
Stunning the way you rhyme, and as you can see you are never alone, this one pulled at my heart dear fellow 💖
July 15th, 2023 11:29
Teddy.15 said:
Stunning the way you rhyme, and as you can see you are never alone, this one pulled at my heart dear fellow 💖
July 15th, 2023 11:29
Empty arms
Poetic Dan said:
I know of these times so well and still most days my life starts with your opening line!
No rest for the wicked but there is plenty of love if they keep looking!
....oooo think I\'ll keep that one.
Thanks for the inspiration my friend and hope if this comes from currently struggling affairs you keep that head above the water!
Much peace and respect
July 15th, 2023 07:19
Poetic Dan said:
I know of these times so well and still most days my life starts with your opening line!
No rest for the wicked but there is plenty of love if they keep looking!
....oooo think I\'ll keep that one.
Thanks for the inspiration my friend and hope if this comes from currently struggling affairs you keep that head above the water!
Much peace and respect
July 15th, 2023 07:19
Empty arms
LIZ said:
Your words are so vivid! Really enjoyed this one! By the way, arms are full.. look again!!! You\'re not alone! ❤️
July 15th, 2023 06:06
LIZ said:
Your words are so vivid! Really enjoyed this one! By the way, arms are full.. look again!!! You\'re not alone! ❤️
July 15th, 2023 06:06
Beth
LIZ said:
WOW!! \"Purgatory\'s grip\", deep suffering! Don\'t let Beth (black beauty) get you back under her grip! \"I saw her scare a ghost to death\" UFFFFF! Mercy!! Incredible rhyme! Dark and captivating!
July 14th, 2023 04:55
LIZ said:
WOW!! \"Purgatory\'s grip\", deep suffering! Don\'t let Beth (black beauty) get you back under her grip! \"I saw her scare a ghost to death\" UFFFFF! Mercy!! Incredible rhyme! Dark and captivating!
July 14th, 2023 04:55
Beth
Bobby O said:
You’ve been sailing at a high level. I look for your pieces though I also from now w keep an eye out for Beth. I just went back to reread, it got better. Dude!!
July 14th, 2023 03:21
Bobby O said:
You’ve been sailing at a high level. I look for your pieces though I also from now w keep an eye out for Beth. I just went back to reread, it got better. Dude!!
July 14th, 2023 03:21
Taker
AuburnScribbler said:
Magnificently written here peto, I love the juxtaposition of the cheerful rhyme against the savage content.
Though mother nature be the mistress of mistresses, I hope that there can be some consolation from her; towards a species that doesn\'t really know what it\'s doing.
Bravo again, and I hope that all is well!
July 13th, 2023 10:26
AuburnScribbler said:
Magnificently written here peto, I love the juxtaposition of the cheerful rhyme against the savage content.
Though mother nature be the mistress of mistresses, I hope that there can be some consolation from her; towards a species that doesn\'t really know what it\'s doing.
Bravo again, and I hope that all is well!
July 13th, 2023 10:26
Spellbound
Bella Shepard said:
WOW! The imagery of this poem is very powerful, frightening and incredible. Another rhyming masterpiece. I may have nightmares tonight, but it\'s a fav!
July 12th, 2023 11:25
Bella Shepard said:
WOW! The imagery of this poem is very powerful, frightening and incredible. Another rhyming masterpiece. I may have nightmares tonight, but it\'s a fav!
July 12th, 2023 11:25
Spellbound
Teddy.15 said:
Seems we have the same title yet this is truly spellbinding. Kudos my friend 💖
July 12th, 2023 08:27
Teddy.15 said:
Seems we have the same title yet this is truly spellbinding. Kudos my friend 💖
July 12th, 2023 08:27
Spellbound
LIZ said:
Magic! \"The wink that beckoned me to dance\", in a trance! Exquisite, but evil? It\'s like you go back and forth, while still enjoying the play! A one time experience! Unable to repeat? Love this!!!
July 12th, 2023 07:57
LIZ said:
Magic! \"The wink that beckoned me to dance\", in a trance! Exquisite, but evil? It\'s like you go back and forth, while still enjoying the play! A one time experience! Unable to repeat? Love this!!!
July 12th, 2023 07:57
Spellbound
Christina8 said:
\"martyrs/starters, what a great rhyming pair! Love this rhyme scheme, it is my personal favorite, can be hard to do! But this poem was grand and I love all your poems but this was an extra special story and difficulty level. Awesome!
July 12th, 2023 06:45
Christina8 said:
\"martyrs/starters, what a great rhyming pair! Love this rhyme scheme, it is my personal favorite, can be hard to do! But this poem was grand and I love all your poems but this was an extra special story and difficulty level. Awesome!
July 12th, 2023 06:45
Herself
Christina8 said:
Wow, this is an amazingly good poem and read! I\'m sorry I missed this yesterday. You have such a way with words!
July 12th, 2023 06:40
Christina8 said:
Wow, this is an amazingly good poem and read! I\'m sorry I missed this yesterday. You have such a way with words!
July 12th, 2023 06:40
Herself
Teddy.15 said:
A beginning a middle and a very delicious end actually once again Peto sounds a bit like a scene form my first experience with love. LoL ❤️
July 11th, 2023 13:44
Teddy.15 said:
A beginning a middle and a very delicious end actually once again Peto sounds a bit like a scene form my first experience with love. LoL ❤️
July 11th, 2023 13:44
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