Comments received on poems by peto
21st century toy
Teddy.15 said:
You just brought some childhood memories back to me dear Peto. Wonderful imagery. 💖
July 28th, 2023 02:17
Teddy.15 said:
You just brought some childhood memories back to me dear Peto. Wonderful imagery. 💖
July 28th, 2023 02:17
21st century toy
Bobby O said:
And if they don’t as your words succinctly express the absence of that vigor and freshly invented determination of a tactile sort would leave a portion remiss.
July 28th, 2023 02:02
Bobby O said:
And if they don’t as your words succinctly express the absence of that vigor and freshly invented determination of a tactile sort would leave a portion remiss.
July 28th, 2023 02:02
Lap
Bella Shepard said:
I read several times, and each time I discovered more. The first 6 lines, I think, set the stage for a woman disillusioned with life. I found this very powerful. Her journey from life among the herd to a singular existence in the freedom of being is exceptional. Maybe I got it wrong, but I so enjoyed the process. Incredible write my friend.
July 27th, 2023 13:21
Bella Shepard said:
I read several times, and each time I discovered more. The first 6 lines, I think, set the stage for a woman disillusioned with life. I found this very powerful. Her journey from life among the herd to a singular existence in the freedom of being is exceptional. Maybe I got it wrong, but I so enjoyed the process. Incredible write my friend.
July 27th, 2023 13:21
Lap
Introverted Sage said:
Great rhyme and flow as usual!
Love it!
Thanks for sharing
July 27th, 2023 12:28
Introverted Sage said:
Great rhyme and flow as usual!
Love it!
Thanks for sharing
July 27th, 2023 12:28
Lap
LIZ said:
Mmmmm incredible! Really enjoyed this one! The first word that comes to me is \"trust\". Isn\'t this what happens when a person is guarded, decides to take a risk, and trusts again? Or is it just my personal perception?
July 27th, 2023 03:59
LIZ said:
Mmmmm incredible! Really enjoyed this one! The first word that comes to me is \"trust\". Isn\'t this what happens when a person is guarded, decides to take a risk, and trusts again? Or is it just my personal perception?
July 27th, 2023 03:59
Lap
Teddy.15 said:
Nothing but perfection from you as always Peto, your poetic heart is right up there with some of the greats.
Splinters puncture her porcelain skin
Empty eyes try so hard
As she lowers her guard
To keep up with a head in full spin
You may not be surprised that I have chosen these lines they are truly exquisite 💖
July 27th, 2023 03:35
Teddy.15 said:
Nothing but perfection from you as always Peto, your poetic heart is right up there with some of the greats.
Splinters puncture her porcelain skin
Empty eyes try so hard
As she lowers her guard
To keep up with a head in full spin
You may not be surprised that I have chosen these lines they are truly exquisite 💖
July 27th, 2023 03:35
Smooth talker
Christina8 said:
I agree with Bella Shepard, so many relationships begin with \"hi\" or something like it. A shame she turned you down, you dazzle with words, my friend!
July 26th, 2023 14:45
Christina8 said:
I agree with Bella Shepard, so many relationships begin with \"hi\" or something like it. A shame she turned you down, you dazzle with words, my friend!
July 26th, 2023 14:45
Smooth talker
Bella Shepard said:
Loved this write my friend. Your description of this damsel is quite striking, and your reaction so self effacing that it makes the encounter a wonderfully incredible read. More\'s the pity she turned and walked away, many a romance has begun with such a simple word as \"hi\". Could be she\'s beautiful but a bit dense, maybe?
July 26th, 2023 11:53
Bella Shepard said:
Loved this write my friend. Your description of this damsel is quite striking, and your reaction so self effacing that it makes the encounter a wonderfully incredible read. More\'s the pity she turned and walked away, many a romance has begun with such a simple word as \"hi\". Could be she\'s beautiful but a bit dense, maybe?
July 26th, 2023 11:53
Smooth talker
LIZ said:
Very nice! Vulnerable! You don\'t have to be smooth...just be you. If hi is all you got...and it\'s meant to be, that will be enough!! Maybe the giggle means you left an impression, and deep down she\'s shy too?
July 26th, 2023 02:45
LIZ said:
Very nice! Vulnerable! You don\'t have to be smooth...just be you. If hi is all you got...and it\'s meant to be, that will be enough!! Maybe the giggle means you left an impression, and deep down she\'s shy too?
July 26th, 2023 02:45
Smooth talker
Parisab said:
Such an in-depth look at your muse with full commitment and vulnerability-pure sentiments never fail in poetry in my opinion
July 26th, 2023 02:10
Parisab said:
Such an in-depth look at your muse with full commitment and vulnerability-pure sentiments never fail in poetry in my opinion
July 26th, 2023 02:10
Smooth talker
Caring dove said:
A Good and engaging writing , peto 🙂 sometimes it’s difficult to make conversation of feeling shy or anxious ,
I especially like the mention of a mouse in a maze and light reflecting from her nails
A nicely written poem
July 26th, 2023 01:53
Caring dove said:
A Good and engaging writing , peto 🙂 sometimes it’s difficult to make conversation of feeling shy or anxious ,
I especially like the mention of a mouse in a maze and light reflecting from her nails
A nicely written poem
July 26th, 2023 01:53
Angel heart
AuburnScribbler said:
Brilliantly written here peto, this is penned with epic tones, and describes a cosmic scene, which is both savage and beautiful.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
July 25th, 2023 09:36
AuburnScribbler said:
Brilliantly written here peto, this is penned with epic tones, and describes a cosmic scene, which is both savage and beautiful.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
July 25th, 2023 09:36
Angel heart
Christina8 said:
There are parts and pieces of this poem that ring so true for me so I favorited it. Just written with such understanding of your muse, truly a great great poem!
July 25th, 2023 09:12
Christina8 said:
There are parts and pieces of this poem that ring so true for me so I favorited it. Just written with such understanding of your muse, truly a great great poem!
July 25th, 2023 09:12
Angel heart
Caring dove said:
Seems she’s found her strength and moved from her past pain
Like how you moved from a few sad lines into positivity
Some lovely words in this .. especially like the last lines with mention of the fairy’s 🙂
Good writing , peto ))
Sounds like she has protection
July 25th, 2023 03:42
Caring dove said:
Seems she’s found her strength and moved from her past pain
Like how you moved from a few sad lines into positivity
Some lovely words in this .. especially like the last lines with mention of the fairy’s 🙂
Good writing , peto ))
Sounds like she has protection
July 25th, 2023 03:42
Angel heart
LIZ said:
Oh my!!! I love this one! It started really gore, which I appreciate! But, my favorite lines: \"Fairy\'s massage her feet\"- mmmmm yes please!!! \"Cherubs dance to the beat\"--I\'m in!!! Beautiful!!!
July 25th, 2023 02:17
LIZ said:
Oh my!!! I love this one! It started really gore, which I appreciate! But, my favorite lines: \"Fairy\'s massage her feet\"- mmmmm yes please!!! \"Cherubs dance to the beat\"--I\'m in!!! Beautiful!!!
July 25th, 2023 02:17
Hold
peto said:
Such a kind review Christina
Then again
You always have encouraged me
Truly appreciate you
Extremely grateful
July 24th, 2023 14:44
peto said:
Such a kind review Christina
Then again
You always have encouraged me
Truly appreciate you
Extremely grateful
July 24th, 2023 14:44
Hold
Christina8 said:
\"search every inch of outer space\" Awwww, this is again a favorite of mine because of the rhyme scheme and the sweet content conveyed. Just when I thought I\'d found the best, you go and put out another one!!
July 24th, 2023 08:57
Christina8 said:
\"search every inch of outer space\" Awwww, this is again a favorite of mine because of the rhyme scheme and the sweet content conveyed. Just when I thought I\'d found the best, you go and put out another one!!
July 24th, 2023 08:57
Taker
Christina8 said:
Another amazing but dark poem, just a wonderful job all in all, Stevie!
July 21st, 2023 05:50
Christina8 said:
Another amazing but dark poem, just a wonderful job all in all, Stevie!
July 21st, 2023 05:50
Beth
Christina8 said:
This was petrifyingly great! Should post again around Halloween. Dark rhymes but so descriptive. I love it!!
July 21st, 2023 05:47
Christina8 said:
This was petrifyingly great! Should post again around Halloween. Dark rhymes but so descriptive. I love it!!
July 21st, 2023 05:47
Empty arms
Christina8 said:
this is quite the poem! So vividly felt. Can\'t wait to get ahold of your other poems!!
July 20th, 2023 17:51
Christina8 said:
this is quite the poem! So vividly felt. Can\'t wait to get ahold of your other poems!!
July 20th, 2023 17:51
Empty arms
Caring dove said:
A great engaging writing 🙂 nicely expressed
I think we all need that something or someone to make us feel that little less empty
July 19th, 2023 07:29
Caring dove said:
A great engaging writing 🙂 nicely expressed
I think we all need that something or someone to make us feel that little less empty
July 19th, 2023 07:29
Beth
Introverted Sage said:
Interesting write!
I read a passage recently referring to \'Beth\' as the body or temple of the Soul. Reading this with both meanings piques the mind!
Love it
July 15th, 2023 16:39
Introverted Sage said:
Interesting write!
I read a passage recently referring to \'Beth\' as the body or temple of the Soul. Reading this with both meanings piques the mind!
Love it
July 15th, 2023 16:39
Empty arms
Teddy.15 said:
Stunning the way you rhyme, and as you can see you are never alone, this one pulled at my heart dear fellow 💖
July 15th, 2023 11:29
Teddy.15 said:
Stunning the way you rhyme, and as you can see you are never alone, this one pulled at my heart dear fellow 💖
July 15th, 2023 11:29
Empty arms
Poetic Dan said:
I know of these times so well and still most days my life starts with your opening line!
No rest for the wicked but there is plenty of love if they keep looking!
....oooo think I\'ll keep that one.
Thanks for the inspiration my friend and hope if this comes from currently struggling affairs you keep that head above the water!
Much peace and respect
July 15th, 2023 07:19
Poetic Dan said:
I know of these times so well and still most days my life starts with your opening line!
No rest for the wicked but there is plenty of love if they keep looking!
....oooo think I\'ll keep that one.
Thanks for the inspiration my friend and hope if this comes from currently struggling affairs you keep that head above the water!
Much peace and respect
July 15th, 2023 07:19
Empty arms
LIZ said:
Your words are so vivid! Really enjoyed this one! By the way, arms are full.. look again!!! You\'re not alone! ❤️
July 15th, 2023 06:06
LIZ said:
Your words are so vivid! Really enjoyed this one! By the way, arms are full.. look again!!! You\'re not alone! ❤️
July 15th, 2023 06:06
Beth
LIZ said:
WOW!! \"Purgatory\'s grip\", deep suffering! Don\'t let Beth (black beauty) get you back under her grip! \"I saw her scare a ghost to death\" UFFFFF! Mercy!! Incredible rhyme! Dark and captivating!
July 14th, 2023 04:55
LIZ said:
WOW!! \"Purgatory\'s grip\", deep suffering! Don\'t let Beth (black beauty) get you back under her grip! \"I saw her scare a ghost to death\" UFFFFF! Mercy!! Incredible rhyme! Dark and captivating!
July 14th, 2023 04:55
Beth
Bobby O said:
You’ve been sailing at a high level. I look for your pieces though I also from now w keep an eye out for Beth. I just went back to reread, it got better. Dude!!
July 14th, 2023 03:21
Bobby O said:
You’ve been sailing at a high level. I look for your pieces though I also from now w keep an eye out for Beth. I just went back to reread, it got better. Dude!!
July 14th, 2023 03:21
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