Comments received on poems by peto
Femme
Sunsetmet said:
Just incredible I love this poem power of words doesnt always have happy ending but great fine writing
July 31st, 2023 13:31
Sunsetmet said:
Just incredible I love this poem power of words doesnt always have happy ending but great fine writing
July 31st, 2023 13:31
Femme
Introverted Sage said:
Always brilliant flow!
Those with a soft heart have to be careful who they share it with.
Great work as always
July 31st, 2023 12:30
Introverted Sage said:
Always brilliant flow!
Those with a soft heart have to be careful who they share it with.
Great work as always
July 31st, 2023 12:30
Femme
Christina8 said:
Bringing in a hypnotic duo of rhyme and imagery, this is a great poem! Though she\'s toxic, he seems to have fallen for her. Wonderful and hypnotizing read, Stevie!
July 31st, 2023 07:52
Christina8 said:
Bringing in a hypnotic duo of rhyme and imagery, this is a great poem! Though she\'s toxic, he seems to have fallen for her. Wonderful and hypnotizing read, Stevie!
July 31st, 2023 07:52
Femme
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Wow! That was a hypnotic read! :)
July 31st, 2023 07:16
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Wow! That was a hypnotic read! :)
July 31st, 2023 07:16
Femme
LIZ said:
Ouch!! You just described destructive love so well. As sad as this is, it\'s oh so relatable!! I do however, feel like I\'m the one with the six inch high stiletto boot...literally!! But I promise I don\'t cause disasters...unless they\'re \"good\" disasters! 😉
July 31st, 2023 04:19
LIZ said:
Ouch!! You just described destructive love so well. As sad as this is, it\'s oh so relatable!! I do however, feel like I\'m the one with the six inch high stiletto boot...literally!! But I promise I don\'t cause disasters...unless they\'re \"good\" disasters! 😉
July 31st, 2023 04:19
Femme
Teddy.15 said:
Wow utterly beautiful although incredibly sad, falling for the wrong lover and even worse marriage with must be in the toxic zone finally turning ice cold in a divorce, a harsh lesson for anyone, I\'ll take my hat off though because you have expressed it so well not just in rhyme but in imagery. 💖
But also remember dwelling or being bitter makes them win every day. We only learn through pain and the only thing to do is rise from the ashes to choose a better lover.
July 31st, 2023 02:22
Teddy.15 said:
Wow utterly beautiful although incredibly sad, falling for the wrong lover and even worse marriage with must be in the toxic zone finally turning ice cold in a divorce, a harsh lesson for anyone, I\'ll take my hat off though because you have expressed it so well not just in rhyme but in imagery. 💖
But also remember dwelling or being bitter makes them win every day. We only learn through pain and the only thing to do is rise from the ashes to choose a better lover.
July 31st, 2023 02:22
Lap
Bobby O said:
From the cup that she keeps by her lap …
How perfect is that ? Defines all intent he hoped, she lured.
July 29th, 2023 00:16
Bobby O said:
From the cup that she keeps by her lap …
How perfect is that ? Defines all intent he hoped, she lured.
July 29th, 2023 00:16
21st century toy
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend you strike at the heart of remembrance with this one. I lament the loss of imagination in play, and even in toys. Looking back 65 years (guess I\'ve dated myself), we made up our games, and toys did not require batteries, or worse charging. Wonderfully written, and oh so true!
July 28th, 2023 14:28
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend you strike at the heart of remembrance with this one. I lament the loss of imagination in play, and even in toys. Looking back 65 years (guess I\'ve dated myself), we made up our games, and toys did not require batteries, or worse charging. Wonderfully written, and oh so true!
July 28th, 2023 14:28
Lap
Christina8 said:
Your rhymes are as sharp as ever but your meaning is mindblowing! I\'ll not tire of telling you how awesome your poems are!
July 28th, 2023 11:49
Christina8 said:
Your rhymes are as sharp as ever but your meaning is mindblowing! I\'ll not tire of telling you how awesome your poems are!
July 28th, 2023 11:49
21st century toy
Christina8 said:
Wow, a really deep write, I felt it in my bones. Thanks for always keeping me on my toes!
July 28th, 2023 11:47
Christina8 said:
Wow, a really deep write, I felt it in my bones. Thanks for always keeping me on my toes!
July 28th, 2023 11:47
21st century toy
LIZ said:
The good old days....when children were actually....well, children. It\'s not the same anymore. Beautifully written!
July 28th, 2023 03:01
LIZ said:
The good old days....when children were actually....well, children. It\'s not the same anymore. Beautifully written!
July 28th, 2023 03:01
21st century toy
Teddy.15 said:
You just brought some childhood memories back to me dear Peto. Wonderful imagery. 💖
July 28th, 2023 02:17
Teddy.15 said:
You just brought some childhood memories back to me dear Peto. Wonderful imagery. 💖
July 28th, 2023 02:17
21st century toy
Bobby O said:
And if they don’t as your words succinctly express the absence of that vigor and freshly invented determination of a tactile sort would leave a portion remiss.
July 28th, 2023 02:02
Bobby O said:
And if they don’t as your words succinctly express the absence of that vigor and freshly invented determination of a tactile sort would leave a portion remiss.
July 28th, 2023 02:02
Lap
Bella Shepard said:
I read several times, and each time I discovered more. The first 6 lines, I think, set the stage for a woman disillusioned with life. I found this very powerful. Her journey from life among the herd to a singular existence in the freedom of being is exceptional. Maybe I got it wrong, but I so enjoyed the process. Incredible write my friend.
July 27th, 2023 13:21
Bella Shepard said:
I read several times, and each time I discovered more. The first 6 lines, I think, set the stage for a woman disillusioned with life. I found this very powerful. Her journey from life among the herd to a singular existence in the freedom of being is exceptional. Maybe I got it wrong, but I so enjoyed the process. Incredible write my friend.
July 27th, 2023 13:21
Lap
Introverted Sage said:
Great rhyme and flow as usual!
Love it!
Thanks for sharing
July 27th, 2023 12:28
Introverted Sage said:
Great rhyme and flow as usual!
Love it!
Thanks for sharing
July 27th, 2023 12:28
Lap
LIZ said:
Mmmmm incredible! Really enjoyed this one! The first word that comes to me is \"trust\". Isn\'t this what happens when a person is guarded, decides to take a risk, and trusts again? Or is it just my personal perception?
July 27th, 2023 03:59
LIZ said:
Mmmmm incredible! Really enjoyed this one! The first word that comes to me is \"trust\". Isn\'t this what happens when a person is guarded, decides to take a risk, and trusts again? Or is it just my personal perception?
July 27th, 2023 03:59
Lap
Teddy.15 said:
Nothing but perfection from you as always Peto, your poetic heart is right up there with some of the greats.
Splinters puncture her porcelain skin
Empty eyes try so hard
As she lowers her guard
To keep up with a head in full spin
You may not be surprised that I have chosen these lines they are truly exquisite 💖
July 27th, 2023 03:35
Teddy.15 said:
Nothing but perfection from you as always Peto, your poetic heart is right up there with some of the greats.
Splinters puncture her porcelain skin
Empty eyes try so hard
As she lowers her guard
To keep up with a head in full spin
You may not be surprised that I have chosen these lines they are truly exquisite 💖
July 27th, 2023 03:35
Smooth talker
Christina8 said:
I agree with Bella Shepard, so many relationships begin with \"hi\" or something like it. A shame she turned you down, you dazzle with words, my friend!
July 26th, 2023 14:45
Christina8 said:
I agree with Bella Shepard, so many relationships begin with \"hi\" or something like it. A shame she turned you down, you dazzle with words, my friend!
July 26th, 2023 14:45
Smooth talker
Bella Shepard said:
Loved this write my friend. Your description of this damsel is quite striking, and your reaction so self effacing that it makes the encounter a wonderfully incredible read. More\'s the pity she turned and walked away, many a romance has begun with such a simple word as \"hi\". Could be she\'s beautiful but a bit dense, maybe?
July 26th, 2023 11:53
Bella Shepard said:
Loved this write my friend. Your description of this damsel is quite striking, and your reaction so self effacing that it makes the encounter a wonderfully incredible read. More\'s the pity she turned and walked away, many a romance has begun with such a simple word as \"hi\". Could be she\'s beautiful but a bit dense, maybe?
July 26th, 2023 11:53
Smooth talker
LIZ said:
Very nice! Vulnerable! You don\'t have to be smooth...just be you. If hi is all you got...and it\'s meant to be, that will be enough!! Maybe the giggle means you left an impression, and deep down she\'s shy too?
July 26th, 2023 02:45
LIZ said:
Very nice! Vulnerable! You don\'t have to be smooth...just be you. If hi is all you got...and it\'s meant to be, that will be enough!! Maybe the giggle means you left an impression, and deep down she\'s shy too?
July 26th, 2023 02:45
Smooth talker
Parisab said:
Such an in-depth look at your muse with full commitment and vulnerability-pure sentiments never fail in poetry in my opinion
July 26th, 2023 02:10
Parisab said:
Such an in-depth look at your muse with full commitment and vulnerability-pure sentiments never fail in poetry in my opinion
July 26th, 2023 02:10
Smooth talker
Caring dove said:
A Good and engaging writing , peto 🙂 sometimes it’s difficult to make conversation of feeling shy or anxious ,
I especially like the mention of a mouse in a maze and light reflecting from her nails
A nicely written poem
July 26th, 2023 01:53
Caring dove said:
A Good and engaging writing , peto 🙂 sometimes it’s difficult to make conversation of feeling shy or anxious ,
I especially like the mention of a mouse in a maze and light reflecting from her nails
A nicely written poem
July 26th, 2023 01:53
Angel heart
AuburnScribbler said:
Brilliantly written here peto, this is penned with epic tones, and describes a cosmic scene, which is both savage and beautiful.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
July 25th, 2023 09:36
AuburnScribbler said:
Brilliantly written here peto, this is penned with epic tones, and describes a cosmic scene, which is both savage and beautiful.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
July 25th, 2023 09:36
Angel heart
Christina8 said:
There are parts and pieces of this poem that ring so true for me so I favorited it. Just written with such understanding of your muse, truly a great great poem!
July 25th, 2023 09:12
Christina8 said:
There are parts and pieces of this poem that ring so true for me so I favorited it. Just written with such understanding of your muse, truly a great great poem!
July 25th, 2023 09:12
Angel heart
Caring dove said:
Seems she’s found her strength and moved from her past pain
Like how you moved from a few sad lines into positivity
Some lovely words in this .. especially like the last lines with mention of the fairy’s 🙂
Good writing , peto ))
Sounds like she has protection
July 25th, 2023 03:42
Caring dove said:
Seems she’s found her strength and moved from her past pain
Like how you moved from a few sad lines into positivity
Some lovely words in this .. especially like the last lines with mention of the fairy’s 🙂
Good writing , peto ))
Sounds like she has protection
July 25th, 2023 03:42
Angel heart
LIZ said:
Oh my!!! I love this one! It started really gore, which I appreciate! But, my favorite lines: \"Fairy\'s massage her feet\"- mmmmm yes please!!! \"Cherubs dance to the beat\"--I\'m in!!! Beautiful!!!
July 25th, 2023 02:17
LIZ said:
Oh my!!! I love this one! It started really gore, which I appreciate! But, my favorite lines: \"Fairy\'s massage her feet\"- mmmmm yes please!!! \"Cherubs dance to the beat\"--I\'m in!!! Beautiful!!!
July 25th, 2023 02:17
Hold
peto said:
Such a kind review Christina
Then again
You always have encouraged me
Truly appreciate you
Extremely grateful
July 24th, 2023 14:44
peto said:
Such a kind review Christina
Then again
You always have encouraged me
Truly appreciate you
Extremely grateful
July 24th, 2023 14:44
Hold
Christina8 said:
\"search every inch of outer space\" Awwww, this is again a favorite of mine because of the rhyme scheme and the sweet content conveyed. Just when I thought I\'d found the best, you go and put out another one!!
July 24th, 2023 08:57
Christina8 said:
\"search every inch of outer space\" Awwww, this is again a favorite of mine because of the rhyme scheme and the sweet content conveyed. Just when I thought I\'d found the best, you go and put out another one!!
July 24th, 2023 08:57
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