Comments received on poems by peto



Poetess
Teddy.15 said:

I liked this last week but I was too shy to come by and write something, you seriously could have written this for me, my goodness so powerful and almost identical to my first love. I love your title is so damn powerful and your imagery truly is spectacular Peto. Thank you. You have a Dante Alighieri streak my friend I can just feel it when you write. ❤️ Maybe it\'s just the passion you use in your pen, what ever it really works

July 11th, 2023 12:58

Herself
LIZ said:

Beautiful!! Picking ourselves back up...difficult. Thank you for sharing!

July 11th, 2023 10:24

Herself
hzugman said:

Wonderful poem.

July 11th, 2023 10:12

Herself
2781 said:

Vengeance is mine! saith the Lord.

July 11th, 2023 07:53

Pact
Introverted Sage said:

Another evocative read!
To live in a place like that..
Great work.
I\'ve come to anticipate your upcoming pieces!


July 10th, 2023 19:15

Pact
Teddy.15 said:

Somewhat Dante\'s inferno verses paradise here, that\'s how it feels. A tug of war between good and bad. ❤️


July 10th, 2023 10:29

Pact
Christina8 said:

Wow, what a sad ending but an epic poem all in all! The images you left me with are so powerful...Wonderful job dear Stevie!!

July 10th, 2023 09:23

Ride
Introverted Sage said:

Nice write and rhyme.
To be a \'light\' for another.. metaphorically or otherwise..
I particularly liked
\'His hands had done the rounds to find
An emptiness that filled his mind\'
Great work!!


July 9th, 2023 14:30

Ride
Bella Shepard said:

There\'s something about the beautiful rhyming scheme of this poem that I love, especially when I read aloud. A chance meeting that provided such wonderful inspiration. Such a good write dear poet!

July 9th, 2023 11:18

Ride
Teddy.15 said:

I once asked for a light to a guy who instantly fell in love with one of my girly friends I was with in a night club and they\'ve been married 20 years.. a very poetic write dear Peto ❤️

July 9th, 2023 10:46

Ride
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

She sounds a bit scary .. and not very nice .. a good and engaging writing sometimes it’s best to walk away from certain people

July 9th, 2023 10:22

Ride
Christina8 said:

This is such a descriptive poem, you did an amazing job on this!! I liked it a lot, keep on writing!!!

July 9th, 2023 07:42

She
Introverted Sage said:

Another beautiful write!
She\'s lucky to have you in her corner.
Thanks for sharing!

July 8th, 2023 16:01

Tech
Introverted Sage said:

The things we do to \'get by\' that end up robbing us of our lives...
Such a deep reflective write.
Enjoyable read!

July 8th, 2023 15:55

She
hzugman said:

Beautifully written, peto, and applicable to so many who walked that path. It takes enormous strength to not let the past screw up the present and cloud the future. But fortunately it is not impossible.

July 8th, 2023 10:36

She
Christina8 said:

She\'s a lucky girl...I hope she knows that, to have you on her side. Wonderful cadence and rhyme to this poem, just absolutely wonderful!! Your #1 fan--Christina

July 8th, 2023 07:55

She
Bobby O said:

You’ve been on fire. I admire how proliferate you are. I go in stages but have these uninspired intervals that you found a way to burst through. Salute my friend. Much admiration for the way you blast. You’re a high level talent.

July 8th, 2023 03:11

She
Teddy.15 said:

Peto this is just beautiful, you could have written this for me in the 90\'s you know us women we always almost see the light in the end. Ham on the eyes in the end the ham falls off in other words love is blind depends on each of us when that ham falls ❤️ I absolutely love this ❤️ you show true empathy and compassion

July 8th, 2023 02:50

She
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Sad yet beautifully expressed ! ))

I liked reading your poem

Some people get very hurt in life .. don’t they

July 8th, 2023 02:40

Tech
peto said:

Matters not how you say it
Appreciate it very much
Thank you Bobby

July 7th, 2023 13:16

Tech
Bobby O said:

Allegorical. Pushes up thoughts that sway. That’s another way to say
Nice write. Good read

July 7th, 2023 12:10

Tech
Christina8 said:

Wow, this is a great example of what not to do, huh? I am not a fan of tech either....you wove your words wonderfully through another poetic marvel!

July 7th, 2023 09:32

Tech
LIZ said:

There is so much to say about this topic. It can be good and bad. Tech helps us stay \"connected\", when our family is far away, AND work from anywhere (some of us). But it could never replace a true, physical/emotional interaction. There needs to be a balance....although it can be hard to find. Thank you for sharing!


July 7th, 2023 05:26

Tech
Teddy.15 said:

Can I just tell you I really am not a fan of tech, hands are always best those Tesla cars are on another level. I can barely make.my way around MPS. And I hate what it\'s done to our kids. I remember playing with the weebles when I was a kid but today the children sit on the sofa head in an app. Gosh sorry to go on this is a wonderful poem with a truly wonderful subject so powerful and worthy of a conversation anytime. ❤️

July 7th, 2023 04:57

Wedding toast
Christina8 said:

This is just a beautiful poem all around!! I bet they loved it! Wonderful job....you knocked it outta the park again!!...Christina

July 6th, 2023 06:38

Wedding toast
Teddy.15 said:

We rarely ever meet our soulmate full stop such a charming speech dear Peto. I bet it was a fun day. ❤️

July 6th, 2023 04:21

Wedding toast
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Lovely words 🙂
Lucky to be at a wedding

Like the mention of stars and dancing

July 6th, 2023 04:18

Stalked
Introverted Sage said:

Such an enigmatic read. Intriguing with a smooth flow.
Brilliant again

July 6th, 2023 00:12

Stalked
Teddy.15 said:

A thriller! lol this made me shiver and excellent and intriguing read dear Peto. ❤️

July 5th, 2023 15:48

Radiate
Garth Rakumakoe said:

Beautiful piece, Peto... Loved every line!

July 5th, 2023 06:05



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