Comments received on poems by peto
Taker
AuburnScribbler said:
Magnificently written here peto, I love the juxtaposition of the cheerful rhyme against the savage content.
Though mother nature be the mistress of mistresses, I hope that there can be some consolation from her; towards a species that doesn\'t really know what it\'s doing.
Bravo again, and I hope that all is well!
July 13th, 2023 10:26
AuburnScribbler said:
Magnificently written here peto, I love the juxtaposition of the cheerful rhyme against the savage content.
Though mother nature be the mistress of mistresses, I hope that there can be some consolation from her; towards a species that doesn\'t really know what it\'s doing.
Bravo again, and I hope that all is well!
July 13th, 2023 10:26
Spellbound
Bella Shepard said:
WOW! The imagery of this poem is very powerful, frightening and incredible. Another rhyming masterpiece. I may have nightmares tonight, but it\'s a fav!
July 12th, 2023 11:25
Bella Shepard said:
WOW! The imagery of this poem is very powerful, frightening and incredible. Another rhyming masterpiece. I may have nightmares tonight, but it\'s a fav!
July 12th, 2023 11:25
Spellbound
Teddy.15 said:
Seems we have the same title yet this is truly spellbinding. Kudos my friend 💖
July 12th, 2023 08:27
Teddy.15 said:
Seems we have the same title yet this is truly spellbinding. Kudos my friend 💖
July 12th, 2023 08:27
Spellbound
LIZ said:
Magic! \"The wink that beckoned me to dance\", in a trance! Exquisite, but evil? It\'s like you go back and forth, while still enjoying the play! A one time experience! Unable to repeat? Love this!!!
July 12th, 2023 07:57
LIZ said:
Magic! \"The wink that beckoned me to dance\", in a trance! Exquisite, but evil? It\'s like you go back and forth, while still enjoying the play! A one time experience! Unable to repeat? Love this!!!
July 12th, 2023 07:57
Spellbound
Christina8 said:
\"martyrs/starters, what a great rhyming pair! Love this rhyme scheme, it is my personal favorite, can be hard to do! But this poem was grand and I love all your poems but this was an extra special story and difficulty level. Awesome!
July 12th, 2023 06:45
Christina8 said:
\"martyrs/starters, what a great rhyming pair! Love this rhyme scheme, it is my personal favorite, can be hard to do! But this poem was grand and I love all your poems but this was an extra special story and difficulty level. Awesome!
July 12th, 2023 06:45
Herself
Christina8 said:
Wow, this is an amazingly good poem and read! I\'m sorry I missed this yesterday. You have such a way with words!
July 12th, 2023 06:40
Christina8 said:
Wow, this is an amazingly good poem and read! I\'m sorry I missed this yesterday. You have such a way with words!
July 12th, 2023 06:40
Herself
Teddy.15 said:
A beginning a middle and a very delicious end actually once again Peto sounds a bit like a scene form my first experience with love. LoL ❤️
July 11th, 2023 13:44
Teddy.15 said:
A beginning a middle and a very delicious end actually once again Peto sounds a bit like a scene form my first experience with love. LoL ❤️
July 11th, 2023 13:44
Poetess
peto said:
Or maybe its the tiger/ libra thing
A wonderful humbling comment Teddy
So glad you ditched the shyness
Appreciate your input very much
July 11th, 2023 13:15
peto said:
Or maybe its the tiger/ libra thing
A wonderful humbling comment Teddy
So glad you ditched the shyness
Appreciate your input very much
July 11th, 2023 13:15
Poetess
Teddy.15 said:
I liked this last week but I was too shy to come by and write something, you seriously could have written this for me, my goodness so powerful and almost identical to my first love. I love your title is so damn powerful and your imagery truly is spectacular Peto. Thank you. You have a Dante Alighieri streak my friend I can just feel it when you write. ❤️ Maybe it\'s just the passion you use in your pen, what ever it really works
July 11th, 2023 12:58
Teddy.15 said:
I liked this last week but I was too shy to come by and write something, you seriously could have written this for me, my goodness so powerful and almost identical to my first love. I love your title is so damn powerful and your imagery truly is spectacular Peto. Thank you. You have a Dante Alighieri streak my friend I can just feel it when you write. ❤️ Maybe it\'s just the passion you use in your pen, what ever it really works
July 11th, 2023 12:58
Herself
LIZ said:
Beautiful!! Picking ourselves back up...difficult. Thank you for sharing!
July 11th, 2023 10:24
LIZ said:
Beautiful!! Picking ourselves back up...difficult. Thank you for sharing!
July 11th, 2023 10:24
Pact
Introverted Sage said:
Another evocative read!
To live in a place like that..
Great work.
I\'ve come to anticipate your upcoming pieces!
July 10th, 2023 19:15
Introverted Sage said:
Another evocative read!
To live in a place like that..
Great work.
I\'ve come to anticipate your upcoming pieces!
July 10th, 2023 19:15
Pact
Teddy.15 said:
Somewhat Dante\'s inferno verses paradise here, that\'s how it feels. A tug of war between good and bad. ❤️
July 10th, 2023 10:29
Teddy.15 said:
Somewhat Dante\'s inferno verses paradise here, that\'s how it feels. A tug of war between good and bad. ❤️
July 10th, 2023 10:29
Pact
Christina8 said:
Wow, what a sad ending but an epic poem all in all! The images you left me with are so powerful...Wonderful job dear Stevie!!
July 10th, 2023 09:23
Christina8 said:
Wow, what a sad ending but an epic poem all in all! The images you left me with are so powerful...Wonderful job dear Stevie!!
July 10th, 2023 09:23
Ride
Introverted Sage said:
Nice write and rhyme.
To be a \'light\' for another.. metaphorically or otherwise..
I particularly liked
\'His hands had done the rounds to find
An emptiness that filled his mind\'
Great work!!
July 9th, 2023 14:30
Introverted Sage said:
Nice write and rhyme.
To be a \'light\' for another.. metaphorically or otherwise..
I particularly liked
\'His hands had done the rounds to find
An emptiness that filled his mind\'
Great work!!
July 9th, 2023 14:30
Ride
Bella Shepard said:
There\'s something about the beautiful rhyming scheme of this poem that I love, especially when I read aloud. A chance meeting that provided such wonderful inspiration. Such a good write dear poet!
July 9th, 2023 11:18
Bella Shepard said:
There\'s something about the beautiful rhyming scheme of this poem that I love, especially when I read aloud. A chance meeting that provided such wonderful inspiration. Such a good write dear poet!
July 9th, 2023 11:18
Ride
Teddy.15 said:
I once asked for a light to a guy who instantly fell in love with one of my girly friends I was with in a night club and they\'ve been married 20 years.. a very poetic write dear Peto ❤️
July 9th, 2023 10:46
Teddy.15 said:
I once asked for a light to a guy who instantly fell in love with one of my girly friends I was with in a night club and they\'ve been married 20 years.. a very poetic write dear Peto ❤️
July 9th, 2023 10:46
Ride
Caring dove said:
She sounds a bit scary .. and not very nice .. a good and engaging writing sometimes it’s best to walk away from certain people
July 9th, 2023 10:22
Caring dove said:
She sounds a bit scary .. and not very nice .. a good and engaging writing sometimes it’s best to walk away from certain people
July 9th, 2023 10:22
Ride
Christina8 said:
This is such a descriptive poem, you did an amazing job on this!! I liked it a lot, keep on writing!!!
July 9th, 2023 07:42
Christina8 said:
This is such a descriptive poem, you did an amazing job on this!! I liked it a lot, keep on writing!!!
July 9th, 2023 07:42
She
Introverted Sage said:
Another beautiful write!
She\'s lucky to have you in her corner.
Thanks for sharing!
July 8th, 2023 16:01
Introverted Sage said:
Another beautiful write!
She\'s lucky to have you in her corner.
Thanks for sharing!
July 8th, 2023 16:01
Tech
Introverted Sage said:
The things we do to \'get by\' that end up robbing us of our lives...
Such a deep reflective write.
Enjoyable read!
July 8th, 2023 15:55
Introverted Sage said:
The things we do to \'get by\' that end up robbing us of our lives...
Such a deep reflective write.
Enjoyable read!
July 8th, 2023 15:55
She
hzugman said:
Beautifully written, peto, and applicable to so many who walked that path. It takes enormous strength to not let the past screw up the present and cloud the future. But fortunately it is not impossible.
July 8th, 2023 10:36
hzugman said:
Beautifully written, peto, and applicable to so many who walked that path. It takes enormous strength to not let the past screw up the present and cloud the future. But fortunately it is not impossible.
July 8th, 2023 10:36
She
Christina8 said:
She\'s a lucky girl...I hope she knows that, to have you on her side. Wonderful cadence and rhyme to this poem, just absolutely wonderful!! Your #1 fan--Christina
July 8th, 2023 07:55
Christina8 said:
She\'s a lucky girl...I hope she knows that, to have you on her side. Wonderful cadence and rhyme to this poem, just absolutely wonderful!! Your #1 fan--Christina
July 8th, 2023 07:55
She
Bobby O said:
You’ve been on fire. I admire how proliferate you are. I go in stages but have these uninspired intervals that you found a way to burst through. Salute my friend. Much admiration for the way you blast. You’re a high level talent.
July 8th, 2023 03:11
Bobby O said:
You’ve been on fire. I admire how proliferate you are. I go in stages but have these uninspired intervals that you found a way to burst through. Salute my friend. Much admiration for the way you blast. You’re a high level talent.
July 8th, 2023 03:11
She
Teddy.15 said:
Peto this is just beautiful, you could have written this for me in the 90\'s you know us women we always almost see the light in the end. Ham on the eyes in the end the ham falls off in other words love is blind depends on each of us when that ham falls ❤️ I absolutely love this ❤️ you show true empathy and compassion
July 8th, 2023 02:50
Teddy.15 said:
Peto this is just beautiful, you could have written this for me in the 90\'s you know us women we always almost see the light in the end. Ham on the eyes in the end the ham falls off in other words love is blind depends on each of us when that ham falls ❤️ I absolutely love this ❤️ you show true empathy and compassion
July 8th, 2023 02:50
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