Comments received on poems by peto
Miss
Bella Shepard said:
I just smiled all the way through this beautiful poem of love and pure rapture. Lucky the \"Miss\", and lucky the fellow who treasures a gift such as this. Superb!
August 9th, 2023 13:34
Bella Shepard said:
I just smiled all the way through this beautiful poem of love and pure rapture. Lucky the \"Miss\", and lucky the fellow who treasures a gift such as this. Superb!
August 9th, 2023 13:34
Miss
Introverted Sage said:
Such a beautiful write!
The love and deep feelings for this person is felt and well expressed through your words.
Thanks for sharing!
August 9th, 2023 10:57
Introverted Sage said:
Such a beautiful write!
The love and deep feelings for this person is felt and well expressed through your words.
Thanks for sharing!
August 9th, 2023 10:57
Miss
LIZ said:
Wow!!! I love this one!!! This type of
connection is rare! Cherish it!
August 9th, 2023 10:23
LIZ said:
Wow!!! I love this one!!! This type of
connection is rare! Cherish it!
August 9th, 2023 10:23
Things
Introverted Sage said:
Beautiful write!
Sounds like a true friend, unconditional love and support.
A love we could all hope to experience and give one day.
Thanks for sharing!
August 3rd, 2023 15:51
Introverted Sage said:
Beautiful write!
Sounds like a true friend, unconditional love and support.
A love we could all hope to experience and give one day.
Thanks for sharing!
August 3rd, 2023 15:51
Things
Christina8 said:
i tried making this a favorite--computer is acting up. Will try again later. ANYWAY, \'the things my love will give you\" simply melts the heart!! \"Some respite from the pain you wear\",yes please!! You have a gift! And this is just another example of that. Pleasure to read!
August 3rd, 2023 00:41
Christina8 said:
i tried making this a favorite--computer is acting up. Will try again later. ANYWAY, \'the things my love will give you\" simply melts the heart!! \"Some respite from the pain you wear\",yes please!! You have a gift! And this is just another example of that. Pleasure to read!
August 3rd, 2023 00:41
Things
Bella Shepard said:
This poem has everything, from beautifully rhyming flow, to unbounded love and support. Can\'t help but love the love here. Extraordinary dear poet!
August 2nd, 2023 16:13
Bella Shepard said:
This poem has everything, from beautifully rhyming flow, to unbounded love and support. Can\'t help but love the love here. Extraordinary dear poet!
August 2nd, 2023 16:13
Things
Teddy.15 said:
The thing I\'d love to give you Peto is my applause, a spirited rhymer and such beauty in your lines, are you sure you are not a big softy at heart? lol 💖 I\'d gladly take it all.
August 2nd, 2023 10:49
Teddy.15 said:
The thing I\'d love to give you Peto is my applause, a spirited rhymer and such beauty in your lines, are you sure you are not a big softy at heart? lol 💖 I\'d gladly take it all.
August 2nd, 2023 10:49
Things
Parisab said:
Chivalry in its truest form, in small and grand gestures-Great use of a refrain, a reminder for her ears…
August 2nd, 2023 10:13
Parisab said:
Chivalry in its truest form, in small and grand gestures-Great use of a refrain, a reminder for her ears…
August 2nd, 2023 10:13
Things
Caring dove said:
Beautiful writing 🙂 really like the words in this poem
August 2nd, 2023 05:41
Caring dove said:
Beautiful writing 🙂 really like the words in this poem
August 2nd, 2023 05:41
Things
LIZ said:
Mmmm and I will gladly reciprocate!!! \"You\'ve learned so much the time to teach\", yes! Loved it!! ❤️
August 2nd, 2023 05:21
LIZ said:
Mmmm and I will gladly reciprocate!!! \"You\'ve learned so much the time to teach\", yes! Loved it!! ❤️
August 2nd, 2023 05:21
Femme
Bella Shepard said:
Wow! It would appear that fatal attraction is hard to avoid. Mezmerizing write my friend.
August 1st, 2023 15:10
Bella Shepard said:
Wow! It would appear that fatal attraction is hard to avoid. Mezmerizing write my friend.
August 1st, 2023 15:10
Femme
Sunsetmet said:
Just incredible I love this poem power of words doesnt always have happy ending but great fine writing
July 31st, 2023 13:31
Sunsetmet said:
Just incredible I love this poem power of words doesnt always have happy ending but great fine writing
July 31st, 2023 13:31
Femme
Introverted Sage said:
Always brilliant flow!
Those with a soft heart have to be careful who they share it with.
Great work as always
July 31st, 2023 12:30
Introverted Sage said:
Always brilliant flow!
Those with a soft heart have to be careful who they share it with.
Great work as always
July 31st, 2023 12:30
Femme
Christina8 said:
Bringing in a hypnotic duo of rhyme and imagery, this is a great poem! Though she\'s toxic, he seems to have fallen for her. Wonderful and hypnotizing read, Stevie!
July 31st, 2023 07:52
Christina8 said:
Bringing in a hypnotic duo of rhyme and imagery, this is a great poem! Though she\'s toxic, he seems to have fallen for her. Wonderful and hypnotizing read, Stevie!
July 31st, 2023 07:52
Femme
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Wow! That was a hypnotic read! :)
July 31st, 2023 07:16
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Wow! That was a hypnotic read! :)
July 31st, 2023 07:16
Femme
LIZ said:
Ouch!! You just described destructive love so well. As sad as this is, it\'s oh so relatable!! I do however, feel like I\'m the one with the six inch high stiletto boot...literally!! But I promise I don\'t cause disasters...unless they\'re \"good\" disasters! 😉
July 31st, 2023 04:19
LIZ said:
Ouch!! You just described destructive love so well. As sad as this is, it\'s oh so relatable!! I do however, feel like I\'m the one with the six inch high stiletto boot...literally!! But I promise I don\'t cause disasters...unless they\'re \"good\" disasters! 😉
July 31st, 2023 04:19
Femme
Teddy.15 said:
Wow utterly beautiful although incredibly sad, falling for the wrong lover and even worse marriage with must be in the toxic zone finally turning ice cold in a divorce, a harsh lesson for anyone, I\'ll take my hat off though because you have expressed it so well not just in rhyme but in imagery. 💖
But also remember dwelling or being bitter makes them win every day. We only learn through pain and the only thing to do is rise from the ashes to choose a better lover.
July 31st, 2023 02:22
Teddy.15 said:
Wow utterly beautiful although incredibly sad, falling for the wrong lover and even worse marriage with must be in the toxic zone finally turning ice cold in a divorce, a harsh lesson for anyone, I\'ll take my hat off though because you have expressed it so well not just in rhyme but in imagery. 💖
But also remember dwelling or being bitter makes them win every day. We only learn through pain and the only thing to do is rise from the ashes to choose a better lover.
July 31st, 2023 02:22
Lap
Bobby O said:
From the cup that she keeps by her lap …
How perfect is that ? Defines all intent he hoped, she lured.
July 29th, 2023 00:16
Bobby O said:
From the cup that she keeps by her lap …
How perfect is that ? Defines all intent he hoped, she lured.
July 29th, 2023 00:16
21st century toy
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend you strike at the heart of remembrance with this one. I lament the loss of imagination in play, and even in toys. Looking back 65 years (guess I\'ve dated myself), we made up our games, and toys did not require batteries, or worse charging. Wonderfully written, and oh so true!
July 28th, 2023 14:28
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend you strike at the heart of remembrance with this one. I lament the loss of imagination in play, and even in toys. Looking back 65 years (guess I\'ve dated myself), we made up our games, and toys did not require batteries, or worse charging. Wonderfully written, and oh so true!
July 28th, 2023 14:28
Lap
Christina8 said:
Your rhymes are as sharp as ever but your meaning is mindblowing! I\'ll not tire of telling you how awesome your poems are!
July 28th, 2023 11:49
Christina8 said:
Your rhymes are as sharp as ever but your meaning is mindblowing! I\'ll not tire of telling you how awesome your poems are!
July 28th, 2023 11:49
21st century toy
Christina8 said:
Wow, a really deep write, I felt it in my bones. Thanks for always keeping me on my toes!
July 28th, 2023 11:47
Christina8 said:
Wow, a really deep write, I felt it in my bones. Thanks for always keeping me on my toes!
July 28th, 2023 11:47
21st century toy
LIZ said:
The good old days....when children were actually....well, children. It\'s not the same anymore. Beautifully written!
July 28th, 2023 03:01
LIZ said:
The good old days....when children were actually....well, children. It\'s not the same anymore. Beautifully written!
July 28th, 2023 03:01
21st century toy
Teddy.15 said:
You just brought some childhood memories back to me dear Peto. Wonderful imagery. 💖
July 28th, 2023 02:17
Teddy.15 said:
You just brought some childhood memories back to me dear Peto. Wonderful imagery. 💖
July 28th, 2023 02:17
21st century toy
Bobby O said:
And if they don’t as your words succinctly express the absence of that vigor and freshly invented determination of a tactile sort would leave a portion remiss.
July 28th, 2023 02:02
Bobby O said:
And if they don’t as your words succinctly express the absence of that vigor and freshly invented determination of a tactile sort would leave a portion remiss.
July 28th, 2023 02:02
Lap
Bella Shepard said:
I read several times, and each time I discovered more. The first 6 lines, I think, set the stage for a woman disillusioned with life. I found this very powerful. Her journey from life among the herd to a singular existence in the freedom of being is exceptional. Maybe I got it wrong, but I so enjoyed the process. Incredible write my friend.
July 27th, 2023 13:21
Bella Shepard said:
I read several times, and each time I discovered more. The first 6 lines, I think, set the stage for a woman disillusioned with life. I found this very powerful. Her journey from life among the herd to a singular existence in the freedom of being is exceptional. Maybe I got it wrong, but I so enjoyed the process. Incredible write my friend.
July 27th, 2023 13:21
Lap
Introverted Sage said:
Great rhyme and flow as usual!
Love it!
Thanks for sharing
July 27th, 2023 12:28
Introverted Sage said:
Great rhyme and flow as usual!
Love it!
Thanks for sharing
July 27th, 2023 12:28
Lap
LIZ said:
Mmmmm incredible! Really enjoyed this one! The first word that comes to me is \"trust\". Isn\'t this what happens when a person is guarded, decides to take a risk, and trusts again? Or is it just my personal perception?
July 27th, 2023 03:59
LIZ said:
Mmmmm incredible! Really enjoyed this one! The first word that comes to me is \"trust\". Isn\'t this what happens when a person is guarded, decides to take a risk, and trusts again? Or is it just my personal perception?
July 27th, 2023 03:59
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