Comments received on poems by peto
Witches brew
Christina8 said:
Oh wow, Stevie! This is truly a masterpiece! As I read it aloud, I had to slow down so I could get in all the detail. Superb! Simply excellent! What more can I say? This really took the cake! Christina
August 29th, 2023 13:50
Christina8 said:
Oh wow, Stevie! This is truly a masterpiece! As I read it aloud, I had to slow down so I could get in all the detail. Superb! Simply excellent! What more can I say? This really took the cake! Christina
August 29th, 2023 13:50
Witches brew
Bella Shepard said:
She\'s intense, electrifying, dangerous, all wrapped up in wonderful verse, with a great zinger at the end. Love it all!
August 29th, 2023 12:49
Bella Shepard said:
She\'s intense, electrifying, dangerous, all wrapped up in wonderful verse, with a great zinger at the end. Love it all!
August 29th, 2023 12:49
Witches brew
Introverted Sage said:
This flows like a spell or a song. Great rhythm!
August 29th, 2023 11:27
Introverted Sage said:
This flows like a spell or a song. Great rhythm!
August 29th, 2023 11:27
Witches brew
LIZ said:
Ohhhhh boy!! Dangerous!! I love the title too (Witches brew). FYI I have a cauldron where I burn letters and create spells. 😆 Loved it!
August 29th, 2023 05:39
LIZ said:
Ohhhhh boy!! Dangerous!! I love the title too (Witches brew). FYI I have a cauldron where I burn letters and create spells. 😆 Loved it!
August 29th, 2023 05:39
Line
Introverted Sage said:
The duality and darkness this shows is intense! There\'s always another side to the spectrum.
Thanks for sharing!
August 27th, 2023 01:45
Introverted Sage said:
The duality and darkness this shows is intense! There\'s always another side to the spectrum.
Thanks for sharing!
August 27th, 2023 01:45
Line
Christina8 said:
Despite the negatives, this woman sounds strong to me! She\'s gone through a lot but has come out the other side. \"still the star of the show, And the reason we all stand in line\" such a wonderful homage to this woman! She sounds wonderful. Awesome poem, Stevie!! x
August 24th, 2023 03:13
Christina8 said:
Despite the negatives, this woman sounds strong to me! She\'s gone through a lot but has come out the other side. \"still the star of the show, And the reason we all stand in line\" such a wonderful homage to this woman! She sounds wonderful. Awesome poem, Stevie!! x
August 24th, 2023 03:13
Leap year
hzugman said:
Great poem, peto. It reminds me how very grateful I am to have a wonderful friend and lover without any of the encumbrances that your poem outlines. I read your poem twice. I wanted to \"user favorite\" it but don\'t know how to do so.
August 14th, 2023 09:53
hzugman said:
Great poem, peto. It reminds me how very grateful I am to have a wonderful friend and lover without any of the encumbrances that your poem outlines. I read your poem twice. I wanted to \"user favorite\" it but don\'t know how to do so.
August 14th, 2023 09:53
Ace spades
Christina8 said:
This poem/story is mindblowing! You pay such attention to detail. I tend to agree with Bobby O on this one! Thank you for entertaining us with poetry beyond what one would expect on a site like this....x
August 14th, 2023 09:12
Christina8 said:
This poem/story is mindblowing! You pay such attention to detail. I tend to agree with Bobby O on this one! Thank you for entertaining us with poetry beyond what one would expect on a site like this....x
August 14th, 2023 09:12
Leap year
Christina8 said:
I will re-read these words while you take your break, you will be missed!! This rhyme scheme is different than your usual. It was quite nice! Nothing better than a romantic poem! It\'s so sweet! x
August 14th, 2023 09:07
Christina8 said:
I will re-read these words while you take your break, you will be missed!! This rhyme scheme is different than your usual. It was quite nice! Nothing better than a romantic poem! It\'s so sweet! x
August 14th, 2023 09:07
Leap year
LIZ said:
I love it!!! This is so beautifully sad. My kind of poetry. Forbidden or distant love. But hey, looks like a risk was taken; and that\'s better than wondering what if...maybe you opened a portal for her to get inspired, and give love/romance a chance? Thank you for sharing! ✨️
August 14th, 2023 06:37
LIZ said:
I love it!!! This is so beautifully sad. My kind of poetry. Forbidden or distant love. But hey, looks like a risk was taken; and that\'s better than wondering what if...maybe you opened a portal for her to get inspired, and give love/romance a chance? Thank you for sharing! ✨️
August 14th, 2023 06:37
Leap year
Bobby O said:
Both at once.
An honest chronicle of reaching fir the brass ting and the visualization ir ‘what ifs” that can be real and definitive.
And it’s because he asked her. Proactive behavior encouraged do maybe this is just a cool way to deliver advice?
August 14th, 2023 04:02
Bobby O said:
Both at once.
An honest chronicle of reaching fir the brass ting and the visualization ir ‘what ifs” that can be real and definitive.
And it’s because he asked her. Proactive behavior encouraged do maybe this is just a cool way to deliver advice?
August 14th, 2023 04:02
Leap year
Caring dove said:
Great writing especially like these lines
‘This year is for leaping
And letting of steam
With heads full of wonder
And stomachs in knots
They\'ll wade through the thunder
To join up the dots
What it will fashion
When push comes to shove
Is an unbridled passion
And beautiful love
I like the choice of words
Love those last lines
August 14th, 2023 03:42
Caring dove said:
Great writing especially like these lines
‘This year is for leaping
And letting of steam
With heads full of wonder
And stomachs in knots
They\'ll wade through the thunder
To join up the dots
What it will fashion
When push comes to shove
Is an unbridled passion
And beautiful love
I like the choice of words
Love those last lines
August 14th, 2023 03:42
Ace spades
Teddy.15 said:
I do believe and I have no idea why, but yes your silver tongue could rescue your very soul lol such poetic beauty right down to the last line. Your imagery is Definately a kudos dear Peto. 💖
August 13th, 2023 15:46
Teddy.15 said:
I do believe and I have no idea why, but yes your silver tongue could rescue your very soul lol such poetic beauty right down to the last line. Your imagery is Definately a kudos dear Peto. 💖
August 13th, 2023 15:46
Ace spades
Bella Shepard said:
This one just begged to be read aloud, emphasizing each beautifully rhyming line, reading faster and faster to the culmination of this spellbinding tale. Superb!
August 13th, 2023 14:39
Bella Shepard said:
This one just begged to be read aloud, emphasizing each beautifully rhyming line, reading faster and faster to the culmination of this spellbinding tale. Superb!
August 13th, 2023 14:39
Ace spades
LIZ said:
TEMPTATION...well dressed? Why do I feel like you invaded one of my dreams...or nightmare? Depending on how you look at it. \"Clad in fine silks and lace\"---oh boy!!! I coul read this one over and over...and find hidden meanings...every time! You took me far!!! Thank you!
August 13th, 2023 04:27
LIZ said:
TEMPTATION...well dressed? Why do I feel like you invaded one of my dreams...or nightmare? Depending on how you look at it. \"Clad in fine silks and lace\"---oh boy!!! I coul read this one over and over...and find hidden meanings...every time! You took me far!!! Thank you!
August 13th, 2023 04:27
Ace spades
Bobby O said:
Minuscule role…
Crimson salty blood
And so much more. I admire how you can jump into a world and as you deliver to us metaphorical tales that take in this otherworldly place we immediately see the relevancy measured in current day to day real world. That’s a style that you visit with the legacy akin to fables of AESOP. I enjoyed.
August 13th, 2023 03:17
Bobby O said:
Minuscule role…
Crimson salty blood
And so much more. I admire how you can jump into a world and as you deliver to us metaphorical tales that take in this otherworldly place we immediately see the relevancy measured in current day to day real world. That’s a style that you visit with the legacy akin to fables of AESOP. I enjoyed.
August 13th, 2023 03:17
Snakey
Bella Shepard said:
I love the way you have framed the profile of one who seems to need constant gratification/validation. Who knows why they do it, but it seems she\'s stumbled upon the one person who holds the key. Great write my friend!
August 12th, 2023 12:02
Bella Shepard said:
I love the way you have framed the profile of one who seems to need constant gratification/validation. Who knows why they do it, but it seems she\'s stumbled upon the one person who holds the key. Great write my friend!
August 12th, 2023 12:02
Snakey
Christina8 said:
For women or for men, this message is sad until the final stanza. The first two lines are very catchy! Hey. some people are out for the adrenaline rush. An excellent poem here, Stevie, a pleasure to read!!!! x
August 12th, 2023 08:01
Christina8 said:
For women or for men, this message is sad until the final stanza. The first two lines are very catchy! Hey. some people are out for the adrenaline rush. An excellent poem here, Stevie, a pleasure to read!!!! x
August 12th, 2023 08:01
Snakey
Teddy.15 said:
Ah, I have a sister like this, I do find this incredibly sad how a women can manipulate her way through life and I often wonder if some even realize they are doing it, but then it\'s the same way for men, my first love was.like this. I learnt so much from him, I was lucky never to have married him or have children. But I do feel for men and women who go that much further hoping it\'s love and it turns out to be a poetry book. ❤️
August 12th, 2023 07:20
Teddy.15 said:
Ah, I have a sister like this, I do find this incredibly sad how a women can manipulate her way through life and I often wonder if some even realize they are doing it, but then it\'s the same way for men, my first love was.like this. I learnt so much from him, I was lucky never to have married him or have children. But I do feel for men and women who go that much further hoping it\'s love and it turns out to be a poetry book. ❤️
August 12th, 2023 07:20
Ice
Sunsetmet said:
Lovely written poem how it melts to the ice but the warmth comes through the lovely skin Thanks
August 11th, 2023 15:17
Sunsetmet said:
Lovely written poem how it melts to the ice but the warmth comes through the lovely skin Thanks
August 11th, 2023 15:17
Bad blood
Bobby O said:
So eager to feast.
This moves with folly and reality both at once. Nice job good write nice read
August 11th, 2023 14:36
Bobby O said:
So eager to feast.
This moves with folly and reality both at once. Nice job good write nice read
August 11th, 2023 14:36
Ice
Christina8 said:
Again, I think this is your best and you go and write another! \"she melts his tears of ice\"---must be a special woman! A wonderful, wonderful work of art dear stevie! x
August 11th, 2023 09:05
Christina8 said:
Again, I think this is your best and you go and write another! \"she melts his tears of ice\"---must be a special woman! A wonderful, wonderful work of art dear stevie! x
August 11th, 2023 09:05
Bad blood
Christina8 said:
I was going to suggest that this sounded like a song, others beat me to it. And I highly doubt that you lack compassion though it does make for a fantastic rhyme!! Awesome job! x
August 11th, 2023 09:01
Christina8 said:
I was going to suggest that this sounded like a song, others beat me to it. And I highly doubt that you lack compassion though it does make for a fantastic rhyme!! Awesome job! x
August 11th, 2023 09:01
Bad blood
LIZ said:
Ok first, this is incredible! I have to agree with Teddy....I was half singing/rapping 😆. BUT...these lines: \"Who turned off all the lights, Turned my days into nights, And my nights into hell on this land, Why would angels attack, Thought they covered my back, Guess it\'s all on my own I must stand\" are amazing! I\'m a little goth, so I feel this is right up my alley! Truly enjoyed it!
August 11th, 2023 05:53
LIZ said:
Ok first, this is incredible! I have to agree with Teddy....I was half singing/rapping 😆. BUT...these lines: \"Who turned off all the lights, Turned my days into nights, And my nights into hell on this land, Why would angels attack, Thought they covered my back, Guess it\'s all on my own I must stand\" are amazing! I\'m a little goth, so I feel this is right up my alley! Truly enjoyed it!
August 11th, 2023 05:53
Ice
peto said:
Aww Cheers parisa
Bottoms up
Extremely grateful for your input
Always a joy to see
Many thanks
August 10th, 2023 11:54
peto said:
Aww Cheers parisa
Bottoms up
Extremely grateful for your input
Always a joy to see
Many thanks
August 10th, 2023 11:54
Ice
Parisab said:
So the ‘toothless grinned’ man did not meet the same faith as your ‘songbird’ You created the icy environment consistently and succinctly! I may even sip on a tonic and ‘bitter’ gin to your health and to a fine write!
August 10th, 2023 11:46
Parisab said:
So the ‘toothless grinned’ man did not meet the same faith as your ‘songbird’ You created the icy environment consistently and succinctly! I may even sip on a tonic and ‘bitter’ gin to your health and to a fine write!
August 10th, 2023 11:46
Ice
Caring dove said:
Some beautiful words in this I liked reading your poem 🙂
So much in your writing .. speaks to me of how sometimes things are just wrong and not the way their meant to be .. there’s something missing which should be there
‘ A mountain top without a peak
A linguist struggling to speak ‘
A good writing ..
August 10th, 2023 05:52
Caring dove said:
Some beautiful words in this I liked reading your poem 🙂
So much in your writing .. speaks to me of how sometimes things are just wrong and not the way their meant to be .. there’s something missing which should be there
‘ A mountain top without a peak
A linguist struggling to speak ‘
A good writing ..
August 10th, 2023 05:52
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