Comments received on poems by peto
Real
LIZ said:
Ohhhhh this....\"Still that age old romantic Who\'s under my skin, Hopes one day you\'ll return, With the demons within\" ACCEPTANCE? Raw and real! I\'m a hopeless romantic too! I\'m currently writing a piece that resonates with this one! I love it!!! ❤️
September 7th, 2023 04:32
LIZ said:
Ohhhhh this....\"Still that age old romantic Who\'s under my skin, Hopes one day you\'ll return, With the demons within\" ACCEPTANCE? Raw and real! I\'m a hopeless romantic too! I\'m currently writing a piece that resonates with this one! I love it!!! ❤️
September 7th, 2023 04:32
Real
Teddy.15 said:
Oh Peto, your very last stanza brings this beautifully to a hopeful end. ❤️
September 7th, 2023 03:26
Teddy.15 said:
Oh Peto, your very last stanza brings this beautifully to a hopeful end. ❤️
September 7th, 2023 03:26
Eclipse
Bella Shepard said:
I found that reading this poem aloud gave it a whole new dimension. Speak it quickly and feel its intensity. Speak it slowly and savour every nuance of its beauty. Stunning!
September 6th, 2023 13:49
Bella Shepard said:
I found that reading this poem aloud gave it a whole new dimension. Speak it quickly and feel its intensity. Speak it slowly and savour every nuance of its beauty. Stunning!
September 6th, 2023 13:49
Eclipse
Teddy.15 said:
How stunning and your imagery and the northern lights wow I have never seen yet. 💖 a poetic gem my friend.
September 6th, 2023 05:55
Teddy.15 said:
How stunning and your imagery and the northern lights wow I have never seen yet. 💖 a poetic gem my friend.
September 6th, 2023 05:55
Eclipse
LIZ said:
Oh my!! What a sight! I think you know by now I love the moon...all its phases! So, you\'re pulling at my heart strings! \"I\'m not expecting us to wed, But let\'s indulge each other for a while\" Mmmmm delicious!! 🌙 🌚 🌔 🌕 🌖 🌛
September 6th, 2023 04:26
LIZ said:
Oh my!! What a sight! I think you know by now I love the moon...all its phases! So, you\'re pulling at my heart strings! \"I\'m not expecting us to wed, But let\'s indulge each other for a while\" Mmmmm delicious!! 🌙 🌚 🌔 🌕 🌖 🌛
September 6th, 2023 04:26
Colour
Christina8 said:
As one who knows a broken heart when she sees it, this is just an excellent piece! She \"ditched the shame\" and is ready to be healed by her own love......Powerful!!
September 4th, 2023 08:37
Christina8 said:
As one who knows a broken heart when she sees it, this is just an excellent piece! She \"ditched the shame\" and is ready to be healed by her own love......Powerful!!
September 4th, 2023 08:37
Colour
Bella Shepard said:
Bruised and battered, her raw heart the colour of love, evokes powerful images and emotions. This is a wonderful poem of self realization, with exquisite rhyming and flow from one stanza to the next. Kudos my friend, great write!
September 3rd, 2023 14:06
Bella Shepard said:
Bruised and battered, her raw heart the colour of love, evokes powerful images and emotions. This is a wonderful poem of self realization, with exquisite rhyming and flow from one stanza to the next. Kudos my friend, great write!
September 3rd, 2023 14:06
Colour
Introverted Sage said:
This is beautiful. Healing comes turning pain to love. Great write!
September 3rd, 2023 10:01
Introverted Sage said:
This is beautiful. Healing comes turning pain to love. Great write!
September 3rd, 2023 10:01
Colour
LIZ said:
I really like how clearly you display the fact that....yes, she\'s been through hell...but she fought back, and survived! \"She is glowing again getting ready to shine-Put herself a bit closer to front of the line -Ditched the shame she took on with her no entry sign\" Strong independent woman! I relate to this piece so much! Loved it!!
September 3rd, 2023 01:50
LIZ said:
I really like how clearly you display the fact that....yes, she\'s been through hell...but she fought back, and survived! \"She is glowing again getting ready to shine-Put herself a bit closer to front of the line -Ditched the shame she took on with her no entry sign\" Strong independent woman! I relate to this piece so much! Loved it!!
September 3rd, 2023 01:50
Colour
Parisab said:
Such rare empathy to tell the story of this woman-your words carry compassion and hope for her-amazing that you identify so closely
September 3rd, 2023 01:37
Parisab said:
Such rare empathy to tell the story of this woman-your words carry compassion and hope for her-amazing that you identify so closely
September 3rd, 2023 01:37
Colour
kai-leah said:
“Pushed the rapids toward a sheer drop waterfall “ - I like this line a lot.
September 3rd, 2023 01:26
kai-leah said:
“Pushed the rapids toward a sheer drop waterfall “ - I like this line a lot.
September 3rd, 2023 01:26
Colour
Caring dove said:
I really like the words in this )
I especially like ‘ colour of love ‘ how you repeat these words in every verse
And these lines
‘ Cut to ribbons she tied in a butterfly bow
Sorrow\'s bouquet’
‘dancing free in the rain
She is glowing again getting ready to shine
A good writing .. and yes love can be healing .. love from others , and ‘ self love ‘
An engaging well written poem
September 3rd, 2023 01:10
Caring dove said:
I really like the words in this )
I especially like ‘ colour of love ‘ how you repeat these words in every verse
And these lines
‘ Cut to ribbons she tied in a butterfly bow
Sorrow\'s bouquet’
‘dancing free in the rain
She is glowing again getting ready to shine
A good writing .. and yes love can be healing .. love from others , and ‘ self love ‘
An engaging well written poem
September 3rd, 2023 01:10
Lunar
Bella Shepard said:
We have always been fascinated by the myth of the wolf howling at the full moon, unable to resist its pull. Your poem, full of mystery and intrigue, paints a graphic and eerie picture with wonderful imagery. Great write!
September 2nd, 2023 15:48
Bella Shepard said:
We have always been fascinated by the myth of the wolf howling at the full moon, unable to resist its pull. Your poem, full of mystery and intrigue, paints a graphic and eerie picture with wonderful imagery. Great write!
September 2nd, 2023 15:48
Lunar
lenore_inNeverland said:
The moon as always being the muse to some of the greatest poets since time immemorial!
September 2nd, 2023 05:13
lenore_inNeverland said:
The moon as always being the muse to some of the greatest poets since time immemorial!
September 2nd, 2023 05:13
Lunar
Bobby O said:
I thought this…
All alone with conquered prey
He howls and his haunches sway…
Dead deer , hmmmm
September 1st, 2023 16:21
Bobby O said:
I thought this…
All alone with conquered prey
He howls and his haunches sway…
Dead deer , hmmmm
September 1st, 2023 16:21
Lunar
Bobby O said:
I thought this…
All alone with conquered prey
He howls and his haunches sway…
Dead deer , hmmmm
September 1st, 2023 16:09
Bobby O said:
I thought this…
All alone with conquered prey
He howls and his haunches sway…
Dead deer , hmmmm
September 1st, 2023 16:09
Lunar
Christina8 said:
The supermoon in this poem and the description makes me think of a werewolf. Beautiful imagery throughout. Love this poem!!
September 1st, 2023 14:33
Christina8 said:
The supermoon in this poem and the description makes me think of a werewolf. Beautiful imagery throughout. Love this poem!!
September 1st, 2023 14:33
Massage
Christina8 said:
This is an incredible poem! It invokes so many emotions. Is it hot in here? Loved the last line! She deserves an 0 for the third time! Awesome job!
September 1st, 2023 14:28
Christina8 said:
This is an incredible poem! It invokes so many emotions. Is it hot in here? Loved the last line! She deserves an 0 for the third time! Awesome job!
September 1st, 2023 14:28
Lunar
Introverted Sage said:
Vivid imagery! The magic of the Moon and how it evokes dormant remnants of our Soul or our deepest desires.. Letting our inner out to play has its benefits!
Great write!
September 1st, 2023 13:17
Introverted Sage said:
Vivid imagery! The magic of the Moon and how it evokes dormant remnants of our Soul or our deepest desires.. Letting our inner out to play has its benefits!
Great write!
September 1st, 2023 13:17
Lunar
peto said:
Lol I took a couple of pics also
Not great results
Thanks for the education re super moon
Totally agree
If not released they are caged
September 1st, 2023 06:06
peto said:
Lol I took a couple of pics also
Not great results
Thanks for the education re super moon
Totally agree
If not released they are caged
September 1st, 2023 06:06
Lunar
peto said:
Not the only one LIZ
Couldn\'t help but admire it
I don\'t know what defines a \"super moon \" as this one is classified
It did seem so much brighter last night
Glad this struck a chord with you
Nothing wrong with scattered emotions
We\'d be a bit robotic otherwise
Thank you very much for such encouragement
It\'s priceless
September 1st, 2023 05:33
peto said:
Not the only one LIZ
Couldn\'t help but admire it
I don\'t know what defines a \"super moon \" as this one is classified
It did seem so much brighter last night
Glad this struck a chord with you
Nothing wrong with scattered emotions
We\'d be a bit robotic otherwise
Thank you very much for such encouragement
It\'s priceless
September 1st, 2023 05:33
Lunar
LIZ said:
OH MY GOD! I love this one!! I thought I was the only one who saw or even noticed the full moon!!! This is so descriptive and vivid! I found myself hunting with the pack! Pisces ♓️ Full moon!! That\'s why all the love and lust poems. Emotions all over the place! All the poets are in their feelings! 😆
September 1st, 2023 05:14
LIZ said:
OH MY GOD! I love this one!! I thought I was the only one who saw or even noticed the full moon!!! This is so descriptive and vivid! I found myself hunting with the pack! Pisces ♓️ Full moon!! That\'s why all the love and lust poems. Emotions all over the place! All the poets are in their feelings! 😆
September 1st, 2023 05:14
I need your love
Introverted Sage said:
A love that is addicting..
I hope your match is equally addicted!
Nice write!
August 31st, 2023 15:47
Introverted Sage said:
A love that is addicting..
I hope your match is equally addicted!
Nice write!
August 31st, 2023 15:47
Massage
Bella Shepard said:
In Greek phylosophy the number 3 was considered as the perfect number of harmony, wisdom and understanding. I\'d say you hit all three with a bang (no pun intended) in this one. Wow!
August 31st, 2023 14:10
Bella Shepard said:
In Greek phylosophy the number 3 was considered as the perfect number of harmony, wisdom and understanding. I\'d say you hit all three with a bang (no pun intended) in this one. Wow!
August 31st, 2023 14:10
Massage
Parisab said:
‘The tenderness that lust evokes’ capturing the right balance between, is talent, in your poem-and then my favorite is the stanza about treating the canvas for more oil-nicely done poet peer-
August 31st, 2023 09:22
Parisab said:
‘The tenderness that lust evokes’ capturing the right balance between, is talent, in your poem-and then my favorite is the stanza about treating the canvas for more oil-nicely done poet peer-
August 31st, 2023 09:22
Massage
Pop64 said:
The imagery in this really allows the reader to be part of the write, the actual stimulating sensation of the massage. Wonderful read!
August 31st, 2023 06:39
Pop64 said:
The imagery in this really allows the reader to be part of the write, the actual stimulating sensation of the massage. Wonderful read!
August 31st, 2023 06:39
Massage
MissD said:
uuhhhhhmmmm SO WELL WRIITTEN
it made me take a deep breath after reading it
August 31st, 2023 05:39
MissD said:
uuhhhhhmmmm SO WELL WRIITTEN
it made me take a deep breath after reading it
August 31st, 2023 05:39
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