Comments received on poems by peto
Ride
Introverted Sage said:
Nice write and rhyme.
To be a \'light\' for another.. metaphorically or otherwise..
I particularly liked
\'His hands had done the rounds to find
An emptiness that filled his mind\'
Great work!!
July 9th, 2023 14:30
Introverted Sage said:
Nice write and rhyme.
To be a \'light\' for another.. metaphorically or otherwise..
I particularly liked
\'His hands had done the rounds to find
An emptiness that filled his mind\'
Great work!!
July 9th, 2023 14:30
Ride
Bella Shepard said:
There\'s something about the beautiful rhyming scheme of this poem that I love, especially when I read aloud. A chance meeting that provided such wonderful inspiration. Such a good write dear poet!
July 9th, 2023 11:18
Bella Shepard said:
There\'s something about the beautiful rhyming scheme of this poem that I love, especially when I read aloud. A chance meeting that provided such wonderful inspiration. Such a good write dear poet!
July 9th, 2023 11:18
Ride
Teddy.15 said:
I once asked for a light to a guy who instantly fell in love with one of my girly friends I was with in a night club and they\'ve been married 20 years.. a very poetic write dear Peto ❤️
July 9th, 2023 10:46
Teddy.15 said:
I once asked for a light to a guy who instantly fell in love with one of my girly friends I was with in a night club and they\'ve been married 20 years.. a very poetic write dear Peto ❤️
July 9th, 2023 10:46
Ride
Caring dove said:
She sounds a bit scary .. and not very nice .. a good and engaging writing sometimes it’s best to walk away from certain people
July 9th, 2023 10:22
Caring dove said:
She sounds a bit scary .. and not very nice .. a good and engaging writing sometimes it’s best to walk away from certain people
July 9th, 2023 10:22
Ride
Christina8 said:
This is such a descriptive poem, you did an amazing job on this!! I liked it a lot, keep on writing!!!
July 9th, 2023 07:42
Christina8 said:
This is such a descriptive poem, you did an amazing job on this!! I liked it a lot, keep on writing!!!
July 9th, 2023 07:42
She
Introverted Sage said:
Another beautiful write!
She\'s lucky to have you in her corner.
Thanks for sharing!
July 8th, 2023 16:01
Introverted Sage said:
Another beautiful write!
She\'s lucky to have you in her corner.
Thanks for sharing!
July 8th, 2023 16:01
Tech
Introverted Sage said:
The things we do to \'get by\' that end up robbing us of our lives...
Such a deep reflective write.
Enjoyable read!
July 8th, 2023 15:55
Introverted Sage said:
The things we do to \'get by\' that end up robbing us of our lives...
Such a deep reflective write.
Enjoyable read!
July 8th, 2023 15:55
She
hzugman said:
Beautifully written, peto, and applicable to so many who walked that path. It takes enormous strength to not let the past screw up the present and cloud the future. But fortunately it is not impossible.
July 8th, 2023 10:36
hzugman said:
Beautifully written, peto, and applicable to so many who walked that path. It takes enormous strength to not let the past screw up the present and cloud the future. But fortunately it is not impossible.
July 8th, 2023 10:36
She
Christina8 said:
She\'s a lucky girl...I hope she knows that, to have you on her side. Wonderful cadence and rhyme to this poem, just absolutely wonderful!! Your #1 fan--Christina
July 8th, 2023 07:55
Christina8 said:
She\'s a lucky girl...I hope she knows that, to have you on her side. Wonderful cadence and rhyme to this poem, just absolutely wonderful!! Your #1 fan--Christina
July 8th, 2023 07:55
She
Bobby O said:
You’ve been on fire. I admire how proliferate you are. I go in stages but have these uninspired intervals that you found a way to burst through. Salute my friend. Much admiration for the way you blast. You’re a high level talent.
July 8th, 2023 03:11
Bobby O said:
You’ve been on fire. I admire how proliferate you are. I go in stages but have these uninspired intervals that you found a way to burst through. Salute my friend. Much admiration for the way you blast. You’re a high level talent.
July 8th, 2023 03:11
She
Teddy.15 said:
Peto this is just beautiful, you could have written this for me in the 90\'s you know us women we always almost see the light in the end. Ham on the eyes in the end the ham falls off in other words love is blind depends on each of us when that ham falls ❤️ I absolutely love this ❤️ you show true empathy and compassion
July 8th, 2023 02:50
Teddy.15 said:
Peto this is just beautiful, you could have written this for me in the 90\'s you know us women we always almost see the light in the end. Ham on the eyes in the end the ham falls off in other words love is blind depends on each of us when that ham falls ❤️ I absolutely love this ❤️ you show true empathy and compassion
July 8th, 2023 02:50
She
Caring dove said:
Sad yet beautifully expressed ! ))
I liked reading your poem
Some people get very hurt in life .. don’t they
July 8th, 2023 02:40
Caring dove said:
Sad yet beautifully expressed ! ))
I liked reading your poem
Some people get very hurt in life .. don’t they
July 8th, 2023 02:40
Tech
peto said:
Matters not how you say it
Appreciate it very much
Thank you Bobby
July 7th, 2023 13:16
peto said:
Matters not how you say it
Appreciate it very much
Thank you Bobby
July 7th, 2023 13:16
Tech
Bobby O said:
Allegorical. Pushes up thoughts that sway. That’s another way to say
Nice write. Good read
July 7th, 2023 12:10
Bobby O said:
Allegorical. Pushes up thoughts that sway. That’s another way to say
Nice write. Good read
July 7th, 2023 12:10
Tech
Christina8 said:
Wow, this is a great example of what not to do, huh? I am not a fan of tech either....you wove your words wonderfully through another poetic marvel!
July 7th, 2023 09:32
Christina8 said:
Wow, this is a great example of what not to do, huh? I am not a fan of tech either....you wove your words wonderfully through another poetic marvel!
July 7th, 2023 09:32
Tech
LIZ said:
There is so much to say about this topic. It can be good and bad. Tech helps us stay \"connected\", when our family is far away, AND work from anywhere (some of us). But it could never replace a true, physical/emotional interaction. There needs to be a balance....although it can be hard to find. Thank you for sharing!
July 7th, 2023 05:26
LIZ said:
There is so much to say about this topic. It can be good and bad. Tech helps us stay \"connected\", when our family is far away, AND work from anywhere (some of us). But it could never replace a true, physical/emotional interaction. There needs to be a balance....although it can be hard to find. Thank you for sharing!
July 7th, 2023 05:26
Tech
Teddy.15 said:
Can I just tell you I really am not a fan of tech, hands are always best those Tesla cars are on another level. I can barely make.my way around MPS. And I hate what it\'s done to our kids. I remember playing with the weebles when I was a kid but today the children sit on the sofa head in an app. Gosh sorry to go on this is a wonderful poem with a truly wonderful subject so powerful and worthy of a conversation anytime. ❤️
July 7th, 2023 04:57
Teddy.15 said:
Can I just tell you I really am not a fan of tech, hands are always best those Tesla cars are on another level. I can barely make.my way around MPS. And I hate what it\'s done to our kids. I remember playing with the weebles when I was a kid but today the children sit on the sofa head in an app. Gosh sorry to go on this is a wonderful poem with a truly wonderful subject so powerful and worthy of a conversation anytime. ❤️
July 7th, 2023 04:57
Wedding toast
Christina8 said:
This is just a beautiful poem all around!! I bet they loved it! Wonderful job....you knocked it outta the park again!!...Christina
July 6th, 2023 06:38
Christina8 said:
This is just a beautiful poem all around!! I bet they loved it! Wonderful job....you knocked it outta the park again!!...Christina
July 6th, 2023 06:38
Wedding toast
Teddy.15 said:
We rarely ever meet our soulmate full stop such a charming speech dear Peto. I bet it was a fun day. ❤️
July 6th, 2023 04:21
Teddy.15 said:
We rarely ever meet our soulmate full stop such a charming speech dear Peto. I bet it was a fun day. ❤️
July 6th, 2023 04:21
Wedding toast
Caring dove said:
Lovely words 🙂
Lucky to be at a wedding
Like the mention of stars and dancing
July 6th, 2023 04:18
Caring dove said:
Lovely words 🙂
Lucky to be at a wedding
Like the mention of stars and dancing
July 6th, 2023 04:18
Stalked
Introverted Sage said:
Such an enigmatic read. Intriguing with a smooth flow.
Brilliant again
July 6th, 2023 00:12
Introverted Sage said:
Such an enigmatic read. Intriguing with a smooth flow.
Brilliant again
July 6th, 2023 00:12
Stalked
Teddy.15 said:
A thriller! lol this made me shiver and excellent and intriguing read dear Peto. ❤️
July 5th, 2023 15:48
Teddy.15 said:
A thriller! lol this made me shiver and excellent and intriguing read dear Peto. ❤️
July 5th, 2023 15:48
Stalked
Christina8 said:
Super creepy yet phenomenal write, Stevie! Wonderful way of telling a story through poetry, so realistic!!....Christina
July 5th, 2023 02:56
Christina8 said:
Super creepy yet phenomenal write, Stevie! Wonderful way of telling a story through poetry, so realistic!!....Christina
July 5th, 2023 02:56
Radiate
Introverted Sage said:
I read this so many times!
It\'s so melodic.. like there is a background melody as I read it..
Maybe it\'s just me? lol
The flow is so smooth.
Brilliant work!
🪶Happy writing
July 4th, 2023 15:54
Introverted Sage said:
I read this so many times!
It\'s so melodic.. like there is a background melody as I read it..
Maybe it\'s just me? lol
The flow is so smooth.
Brilliant work!
🪶Happy writing
July 4th, 2023 15:54
Radiate
Bella Shepard said:
I read this poem several times aloud, and each time its rhyming cadence became more beautiful in its expression of love and compassion. It is such a fav!
July 4th, 2023 14:57
Bella Shepard said:
I read this poem several times aloud, and each time its rhyming cadence became more beautiful in its expression of love and compassion. It is such a fav!
July 4th, 2023 14:57
Radiate
peto said:
Bobby
Thanks man
Your last line was a belter
Truly appreciate it
Btw,, have lost your pen
July 4th, 2023 05:40
peto said:
Bobby
Thanks man
Your last line was a belter
Truly appreciate it
Btw,, have lost your pen
July 4th, 2023 05:40
Radiate
Bobby O said:
Nice and tight. I was anticipating the last line would be some type of shift from the three , that’s absolute proof of a successful piece when a reader is moving along the plot and anticipates potential direction especially when it here’s no right or wrong , just fun.
BTW-!my guess was “celebrate” but you were tricky. Nice write Good read
July 4th, 2023 05:35
Bobby O said:
Nice and tight. I was anticipating the last line would be some type of shift from the three , that’s absolute proof of a successful piece when a reader is moving along the plot and anticipates potential direction especially when it here’s no right or wrong , just fun.
BTW-!my guess was “celebrate” but you were tricky. Nice write Good read
July 4th, 2023 05:35
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