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AuburnScribbler said:
A masterfully written poetic story here peto.
The treble stanzas you\'ve penned, paint intricate scenes of a mini epic.
Also, this poem reminds me of the song \"Her Ghost in the Fog\" by Cradle of Filth, which touches on similar themes, which to me, is a very good thing indeed.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
July 1st, 2023 10:47
AuburnScribbler said:
A masterfully written poetic story here peto.
The treble stanzas you\'ve penned, paint intricate scenes of a mini epic.
Also, this poem reminds me of the song \"Her Ghost in the Fog\" by Cradle of Filth, which touches on similar themes, which to me, is a very good thing indeed.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
July 1st, 2023 10:47
Writers block
Bobby O said:
On some days go you feel like maybe there’s enough room to dance a little in your head. Cuz it must have room w those phrases springing free?
July 1st, 2023 10:34
Bobby O said:
On some days go you feel like maybe there’s enough room to dance a little in your head. Cuz it must have room w those phrases springing free?
July 1st, 2023 10:34
Writers block
Christina8 said:
We all get writers block and I\'ve got a case of it now, and I\'m sure yours will resolve itself soon! You write so well and I\'m patiently waiting for your next inspired poem!!
July 1st, 2023 07:39
Christina8 said:
We all get writers block and I\'ve got a case of it now, and I\'m sure yours will resolve itself soon! You write so well and I\'m patiently waiting for your next inspired poem!!
July 1st, 2023 07:39
Writers block
Caring dove said:
A good writing , peto )) nicely expressed poem
I think sometimes it can ‘ feel ‘ difficult to see write or atleast we can feel stuck ..
I know sometimes when I feel certain ways .. that I just feel I’m not even in the right place to write
July 1st, 2023 04:01
Caring dove said:
A good writing , peto )) nicely expressed poem
I think sometimes it can ‘ feel ‘ difficult to see write or atleast we can feel stuck ..
I know sometimes when I feel certain ways .. that I just feel I’m not even in the right place to write
July 1st, 2023 04:01
The king is dead
Christina8 said:
I love this tale, so descriptive! There are so many favorite parts of this poem, I can\'t pick just one! You are doing phenomenal work on your poetry!!
June 30th, 2023 07:15
Christina8 said:
I love this tale, so descriptive! There are so many favorite parts of this poem, I can\'t pick just one! You are doing phenomenal work on your poetry!!
June 30th, 2023 07:15
The king is dead
Bobby O said:
True but with a wonderful mythological twist. Love it.
June 30th, 2023 02:39
Bobby O said:
True but with a wonderful mythological twist. Love it.
June 30th, 2023 02:39
Honey trap
Caring dove said:
I love the rhyming in this writing and the way it flows .. great read 🙂
June 30th, 2023 00:43
Caring dove said:
I love the rhyming in this writing and the way it flows .. great read 🙂
June 30th, 2023 00:43
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Garth Rakumakoe said:
Intense and gripingly real with imagery. The metaphors are strong. An attractive work of craft. I\'m loving your writing Peto. An absolute favorite this one!
June 29th, 2023 14:43
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Intense and gripingly real with imagery. The metaphors are strong. An attractive work of craft. I\'m loving your writing Peto. An absolute favorite this one!
June 29th, 2023 14:43
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Bobby O said:
P.S. I can’t imagine what she scribbled and that aspect of keeping tension and mystery engulfs readers.
June 29th, 2023 14:04
Bobby O said:
P.S. I can’t imagine what she scribbled and that aspect of keeping tension and mystery engulfs readers.
June 29th, 2023 14:04
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Bobby O said:
You , my friend, have a style that is at a real nice level. This is a power pice and I like how you are consistent with driving fir a certain movement in your work without the cliche’ often seen in this site. Head and shoulders above most displaying a dedication to the art. You don’t “ mail stuff in” many props
June 29th, 2023 14:02
Bobby O said:
You , my friend, have a style that is at a real nice level. This is a power pice and I like how you are consistent with driving fir a certain movement in your work without the cliche’ often seen in this site. Head and shoulders above most displaying a dedication to the art. You don’t “ mail stuff in” many props
June 29th, 2023 14:02
Note
Christina8 said:
\"she pours a drink while counting pills\"....Such a dark turn after looking in his phone...I\'d like to read that note....Another brilliant poem from my fav. poet!!
June 29th, 2023 10:08
Christina8 said:
\"she pours a drink while counting pills\"....Such a dark turn after looking in his phone...I\'d like to read that note....Another brilliant poem from my fav. poet!!
June 29th, 2023 10:08
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LIZ said:
Betrayal....\"The pictures in his unlocked phone, Engulfed her every fibre in red mist, Initial anger turned to shock\". Strong emotions! Thank you for sharing!
June 29th, 2023 09:48
LIZ said:
Betrayal....\"The pictures in his unlocked phone, Engulfed her every fibre in red mist, Initial anger turned to shock\". Strong emotions! Thank you for sharing!
June 29th, 2023 09:48
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Caring dove said:
Some strong words in this .. so much anger and sadness
‘ Engulfed her every fibre in red mist
Initial anger turned to shock’
A good poem .. tho sad .
Some people let us down and cause a lot of pain
June 29th, 2023 08:53
Caring dove said:
Some strong words in this .. so much anger and sadness
‘ Engulfed her every fibre in red mist
Initial anger turned to shock’
A good poem .. tho sad .
Some people let us down and cause a lot of pain
June 29th, 2023 08:53
Memories
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A splendid read, musical almost, even. The closing is marvelous and beautiful. The stuff acoustic love songs are made of. Well done dear poet.
June 29th, 2023 02:59
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A splendid read, musical almost, even. The closing is marvelous and beautiful. The stuff acoustic love songs are made of. Well done dear poet.
June 29th, 2023 02:59
Memories
Christina8 said:
I do remember it, so remarkable how you were able to put it into rhyme!! Thank you again! Christina
June 28th, 2023 07:33
Christina8 said:
I do remember it, so remarkable how you were able to put it into rhyme!! Thank you again! Christina
June 28th, 2023 07:33
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Christina8 said:
\"her painted face hides more than it shows\"......thats why I don\'t really wear makeup. What a brillant and heartfelt write, Stevie! I so enjoy reading your poetry!
June 28th, 2023 07:30
Christina8 said:
\"her painted face hides more than it shows\"......thats why I don\'t really wear makeup. What a brillant and heartfelt write, Stevie! I so enjoy reading your poetry!
June 28th, 2023 07:30
Memories
Caring dove said:
I remember reading this on ‘ all poetry ‘ a while back ..
A great writing , strong words
I think some people are selfish /thoughtless and they don’t care if they hurt someone .. at least this is what your poem made me think of
Some things seem so nice then they go all wrong .. and you realise the person isn’t as nice you thought they were ..
June 28th, 2023 04:51
Caring dove said:
I remember reading this on ‘ all poetry ‘ a while back ..
A great writing , strong words
I think some people are selfish /thoughtless and they don’t care if they hurt someone .. at least this is what your poem made me think of
Some things seem so nice then they go all wrong .. and you realise the person isn’t as nice you thought they were ..
June 28th, 2023 04:51
Have you ever
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I know the feeling. You called it by name. Literally. A moving piece, Peto. 🙏🏼
June 27th, 2023 20:24
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I know the feeling. You called it by name. Literally. A moving piece, Peto. 🙏🏼
June 27th, 2023 20:24
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Garth Rakumakoe said:
Abstract, compelling in the way it unfolds. Calls for another read, and another one... - A favorite.
June 27th, 2023 10:07
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Abstract, compelling in the way it unfolds. Calls for another read, and another one... - A favorite.
June 27th, 2023 10:07
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Laura🌻 said:
Dear peto,
Your written words are astounding. Such a pleasure to read.
One of my favorite lines:
‘The prayers offered up in church
Had burst the dam and washed away her fear’
Laura🌻
June 27th, 2023 10:03
Laura🌻 said:
Dear peto,
Your written words are astounding. Such a pleasure to read.
One of my favorite lines:
‘The prayers offered up in church
Had burst the dam and washed away her fear’
Laura🌻
June 27th, 2023 10:03
Have you ever
Christina8 said:
I know I say this a lot but this has got to be one of your best!! I still find myself \"in a world full of fright\". The last stanza is just the sweetest! I mean, WOW!
June 27th, 2023 02:12
Christina8 said:
I know I say this a lot but this has got to be one of your best!! I still find myself \"in a world full of fright\". The last stanza is just the sweetest! I mean, WOW!
June 27th, 2023 02:12
Crying
Caring dove said:
A great poem 🙂
Like how you have expressed yourself in this poem
She sounds like a kind person tho quite sad
Nice way to tell a story of a girl
June 26th, 2023 15:45
Caring dove said:
A great poem 🙂
Like how you have expressed yourself in this poem
She sounds like a kind person tho quite sad
Nice way to tell a story of a girl
June 26th, 2023 15:45
Have you ever
LIZ said:
Mmmm so much, but to answer your questions, yes, to all of the above! However,
I\'ll focus on the ending. \"Would you ever allow me to take your sweet hand, to a place where the sun kisses toes in the sand, instantly you\'d receive the respect you command, On our first fated magical night\" -YES sir! Thank you!
June 26th, 2023 11:48
LIZ said:
Mmmm so much, but to answer your questions, yes, to all of the above! However,
I\'ll focus on the ending. \"Would you ever allow me to take your sweet hand, to a place where the sun kisses toes in the sand, instantly you\'d receive the respect you command, On our first fated magical night\" -YES sir! Thank you!
June 26th, 2023 11:48
Have you ever
Caring dove said:
A deep writing with a lot of questions yet well expressed )
Yes I’ve felt low in self esteem before , and in a place of fear . And it’s never nice , is it
A good poem especially like the last few lines
June 26th, 2023 10:20
Caring dove said:
A deep writing with a lot of questions yet well expressed )
Yes I’ve felt low in self esteem before , and in a place of fear . And it’s never nice , is it
A good poem especially like the last few lines
June 26th, 2023 10:20
Fulfillment
Caring dove said:
Great writing I especially like the ending verse 🙂
June 25th, 2023 16:00
Caring dove said:
Great writing I especially like the ending verse 🙂
June 25th, 2023 16:00
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