Comments received on poems by peto
Cuts
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful write petp with a finalé to bring signs of better things coming to a life so formerly abused. The read brought me near tears as you captured the nightmare that had to be fought.
July 1st, 2020 15:07
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful write petp with a finalé to bring signs of better things coming to a life so formerly abused. The read brought me near tears as you captured the nightmare that had to be fought.
July 1st, 2020 15:07
Cuts
dusk arising said:
Here is hoping that you both find you are the right person to belong in her heart.
July 1st, 2020 11:27
dusk arising said:
Here is hoping that you both find you are the right person to belong in her heart.
July 1st, 2020 11:27
Cecilia Beryl
Laura🌻 said:
peto,
A beautifully penned eulogy for CECILIA BERYL. Your eulogy reminded me of a quote a friend of mine send me when my dad departed this life.
“There are some who bring a light so great to the world that even after they are gone, the light remains.”
I love the whole poem; especially,
‘Lines of angels are forming to savour your touch.’
My deepest condolences for the loss of
CECILIA BERYL.
Laura🌻
June 23rd, 2020 12:37
Laura🌻 said:
peto,
A beautifully penned eulogy for CECILIA BERYL. Your eulogy reminded me of a quote a friend of mine send me when my dad departed this life.
“There are some who bring a light so great to the world that even after they are gone, the light remains.”
I love the whole poem; especially,
‘Lines of angels are forming to savour your touch.’
My deepest condolences for the loss of
CECILIA BERYL.
Laura🌻
June 23rd, 2020 12:37
Easing
MaddieJ said:
Touches on so many matters of the world, and the heart of the individual human. Thanks for this emotionally provoking write!
June 12th, 2020 10:34
MaddieJ said:
Touches on so many matters of the world, and the heart of the individual human. Thanks for this emotionally provoking write!
June 12th, 2020 10:34
Easing
Suresh said:
.....without those who we love.
No, no more needs to be said.
June 10th, 2020 15:59
Suresh said:
.....without those who we love.
No, no more needs to be said.
June 10th, 2020 15:59
Easing
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, I live in a world like that since my wife passed recently.
June 10th, 2020 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, I live in a world like that since my wife passed recently.
June 10th, 2020 01:00
Easing
Neville said:
I thoroughly enjoyed this timely post
and your last stanza is to die for....
I suspect tho the second wave is only just around the corner....
Neville
June 9th, 2020 11:15
Neville said:
I thoroughly enjoyed this timely post
and your last stanza is to die for....
I suspect tho the second wave is only just around the corner....
Neville
June 9th, 2020 11:15
Creep
Samreen Chowdhury said:
Great write! i enjoyed this one. excellent imagery and rhythm used.
June 8th, 2020 07:47
Samreen Chowdhury said:
Great write! i enjoyed this one. excellent imagery and rhythm used.
June 8th, 2020 07:47
I\'ll see you
Samreen Chowdhury said:
so much excellent pathos in this one. very eloquently written and a tribute to romanticism. Beautiful write!
June 8th, 2020 07:44
Samreen Chowdhury said:
so much excellent pathos in this one. very eloquently written and a tribute to romanticism. Beautiful write!
June 8th, 2020 07:44
Fulfillment
Samreen Chowdhury said:
Well written Neville and a heart warming ending to it! keep up.
June 8th, 2020 07:42
Samreen Chowdhury said:
Well written Neville and a heart warming ending to it! keep up.
June 8th, 2020 07:42
Fulfillment
Neville said:
seems to me you have successfully got back into writing my friend...
well written and enjoyed…
Neville
May 28th, 2020 10:16
Neville said:
seems to me you have successfully got back into writing my friend...
well written and enjoyed…
Neville
May 28th, 2020 10:16
Creep
Laura🌻 said:
Peto,
Overstepping a boundary can be dangerously intriguing and alluring.
Forewarned is forearmed!
I enjoyed the read.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura
May 26th, 2020 21:48
Laura🌻 said:
Peto,
Overstepping a boundary can be dangerously intriguing and alluring.
Forewarned is forearmed!
I enjoyed the read.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura
May 26th, 2020 21:48
I\'ll see you
sylviasearcher said:
What I likes about this most was the journey through nature that I was taken upon, yet it was behind my closed eyes. And I wonder what crime and punishment it is, to only be able to venture to beauty, when the eyes are closed. To only have strength to reach into dreams when the light of the world is shut out, and that of the soul is left to lead.
Made me wonder I guess. About stardust and stuff.
May 4th, 2020 03:02
sylviasearcher said:
What I likes about this most was the journey through nature that I was taken upon, yet it was behind my closed eyes. And I wonder what crime and punishment it is, to only be able to venture to beauty, when the eyes are closed. To only have strength to reach into dreams when the light of the world is shut out, and that of the soul is left to lead.
Made me wonder I guess. About stardust and stuff.
May 4th, 2020 03:02
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