Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave
Final Funny – (not funny at all - a Cautionary Tale…)
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks Teddy - you aren\'t singing my praises by any chance, are you?
Watch for them big cats, they could be more dangerous than dragons......
May 26th, 2021 06:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks Teddy - you aren\'t singing my praises by any chance, are you?
Watch for them big cats, they could be more dangerous than dragons......
May 26th, 2021 06:59
Three Palms
Neville said:
... I thought I might pop back for another viewing ... and yes .. it was worth it ..
Cheers, Neville
May 26th, 2021 03:16
Neville said:
... I thought I might pop back for another viewing ... and yes .. it was worth it ..
Cheers, Neville
May 26th, 2021 03:16
Notice of absence
Neville said:
After nine days away with the penguins sir, I\'m surprised you came back at all ..
I really enjoyed this little offering DD
May 20th, 2021 03:26
Neville said:
After nine days away with the penguins sir, I\'m surprised you came back at all ..
I really enjoyed this little offering DD
May 20th, 2021 03:26
Notice of absence
Goldfinch60 said:
You may have to go back in silence and maybe they will come out for you.
Andy
May 20th, 2021 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
You may have to go back in silence and maybe they will come out for you.
Andy
May 20th, 2021 00:19
CRISIS AT THE ‘CROSS
Neville said:
.. in truth, one really ought not to mess with bears ...
Very funny nevertheless ... Bbb barely time to draw breath between giggles ..
May 12th, 2021 03:05
Neville said:
.. in truth, one really ought not to mess with bears ...
Very funny nevertheless ... Bbb barely time to draw breath between giggles ..
May 12th, 2021 03:05
Not Here – better elsewhere.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very powerful four lines Dave.
Andy
May 11th, 2021 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Very powerful four lines Dave.
Andy
May 11th, 2021 00:15
Not Here – better elsewhere.
Neville said:
Tis true even the most timely of warnings may not be wholly heeded until its too late ...
Yes indeed, very clever & very much enjoyed ...
Neville
...
May 10th, 2021 12:34
Neville said:
Tis true even the most timely of warnings may not be wholly heeded until its too late ...
Yes indeed, very clever & very much enjoyed ...
Neville
...
May 10th, 2021 12:34
Not Here – better elsewhere.
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh Dave this rhyme is CLEVER - - - four lines of warning and so very telling.
May 10th, 2021 11:11
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh Dave this rhyme is CLEVER - - - four lines of warning and so very telling.
May 10th, 2021 11:11
Not Here – better elsewhere.
AuburnScribbler said:
A superb stanza here Doggerel Dave, and I totally agree with your sentiment.
Bravo, and I hope all is well.
May 10th, 2021 10:09
AuburnScribbler said:
A superb stanza here Doggerel Dave, and I totally agree with your sentiment.
Bravo, and I hope all is well.
May 10th, 2021 10:09
A Relationship
Neville said:
that\'s cats for ya innit ... and just a few of the many reasons I\'m gonna stick with dogs sir thank you very much................ Neville
May 7th, 2021 08:25
Neville said:
that\'s cats for ya innit ... and just a few of the many reasons I\'m gonna stick with dogs sir thank you very much................ Neville
May 7th, 2021 08:25
The Joys of Apartment Living.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah oh my, door banging and any neighbour noises can get on my hibby\'s nerves so i understand your lamenting super fantastic rhyming poem wow! Towards the end she learnt her lesson, how crafty a way to teach her. Kudos!!
May 6th, 2021 14:35
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah oh my, door banging and any neighbour noises can get on my hibby\'s nerves so i understand your lamenting super fantastic rhyming poem wow! Towards the end she learnt her lesson, how crafty a way to teach her. Kudos!!
May 6th, 2021 14:35
Great Expectations
Andy Hunter said:
Kept me on the edge of my seat. Great rhyme, really enjoyed it.
May 6th, 2021 14:26
Andy Hunter said:
Kept me on the edge of my seat. Great rhyme, really enjoyed it.
May 6th, 2021 14:26
The Joys of Apartment Living.
Fay Slimm. said:
Good to hear the prob. with door-slams is being sorted Dave - - - - your telling title got me ready for reading more on apartment living and will send you a medal for your patient solution - - extra thanks too
for the story of how to handle close neighbours who can tend to be thoughtless .Hope that bit of late night action will do the trick - -
\"There\'s nowt so thick as folk\" as they say around here.
May 5th, 2021 16:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Good to hear the prob. with door-slams is being sorted Dave - - - - your telling title got me ready for reading more on apartment living and will send you a medal for your patient solution - - extra thanks too
for the story of how to handle close neighbours who can tend to be thoughtless .Hope that bit of late night action will do the trick - -
\"There\'s nowt so thick as folk\" as they say around here.
May 5th, 2021 16:42
Time Just Disappears When Having Fun
Neville said:
The marriage between prose & poem work extremely well here .. no illusion .. just a matter of fact and my own perception .......................... Neville
May 5th, 2021 15:03
Neville said:
The marriage between prose & poem work extremely well here .. no illusion .. just a matter of fact and my own perception .......................... Neville
May 5th, 2021 15:03
The Joys of Apartment Living.
Neville said:
I had no neighbours for eight years .. having just moved, I now have two sets of them .. both pairs are quite lovely ........ I enjoyed todays offering Dave .. .. very muchly
.. Neville
May 4th, 2021 01:48
Neville said:
I had no neighbours for eight years .. having just moved, I now have two sets of them .. both pairs are quite lovely ........ I enjoyed todays offering Dave .. .. very muchly
.. Neville
May 4th, 2021 01:48
The Joys of Apartment Living.
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometime neighbours can be so annoying, in my time I have come across them but the ones I have at present are wonderful.
Andy
May 3rd, 2021 00:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometime neighbours can be so annoying, in my time I have come across them but the ones I have at present are wonderful.
Andy
May 3rd, 2021 00:08
The Dog Next Door (plus bonus)
Neville said:
I kinda liked these DD .. well slightly .. but very much enjoyed ...........
Neville
May 2nd, 2021 02:10
Neville said:
I kinda liked these DD .. well slightly .. but very much enjoyed ...........
Neville
May 2nd, 2021 02:10
The Afterlife – A Case Study
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Great write Doggerel. Light enough to remind me of the great, all time classic “The Great Divorce” by C.S. Lewis. A brilliant, contemporary American author to read regarding what heaven may be like (where faith and hope inform) is Dr. Peter Kreeft. Finally, and your wonderful write spurred this flow, I like American Bishop Robert Barron’s reply to Canadian Dr. Jordan Peterson that, according to the monotheist traditions of one God - the flames in Hell itself are part of His creation as He has created it All (Hell being freely chosen by its inhabitants and merely a privation of the Ultimate Good - eternity with One God).
April 29th, 2021 19:58
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Great write Doggerel. Light enough to remind me of the great, all time classic “The Great Divorce” by C.S. Lewis. A brilliant, contemporary American author to read regarding what heaven may be like (where faith and hope inform) is Dr. Peter Kreeft. Finally, and your wonderful write spurred this flow, I like American Bishop Robert Barron’s reply to Canadian Dr. Jordan Peterson that, according to the monotheist traditions of one God - the flames in Hell itself are part of His creation as He has created it All (Hell being freely chosen by its inhabitants and merely a privation of the Ultimate Good - eternity with One God).
April 29th, 2021 19:58
The Night Male
Neville said:
a little bird told me that he has neva yet failed to find a solution, all be it too late to do any good ....................
I\'m glad Neville was a lion and not a centipede or sumfink :)
April 27th, 2021 01:55
Neville said:
a little bird told me that he has neva yet failed to find a solution, all be it too late to do any good ....................
I\'m glad Neville was a lion and not a centipede or sumfink :)
April 27th, 2021 01:55
The Afterlife – A Case Study
Neville said:
its true innit .. you\'ve been there ...
never heard this one before DD or even any variant thereof .. however, I do know that what you\'ve just writ is a bloomin fact ...
April 25th, 2021 02:53
Neville said:
its true innit .. you\'ve been there ...
never heard this one before DD or even any variant thereof .. however, I do know that what you\'ve just writ is a bloomin fact ...
April 25th, 2021 02:53
Finale
Gary Edward Geraci said:
In addition to the Catholic intelectual tradition among Catholic Christians worldwide, I love the great traditions of the Sacraments and Holy Mass. Granted, I was away from the Church for nearly 30 years and reluctant to engage with anyone that proclaimed to be religious and so I feel like I know where you’re coming from. This is a superb write with a fantastic cadence to it ... my favorite type of poem to read as well ... one that explores the deepest questions concerning our very meaning or in the case of nihilism - no meaning what-so-ever. When you ask this question, even to an atheist, nearly all will respond in the affirmative: wouldn’t you want there to be an afterlife so that you could meet your loved ones again after your departure from this life?
April 24th, 2021 19:02
Gary Edward Geraci said:
In addition to the Catholic intelectual tradition among Catholic Christians worldwide, I love the great traditions of the Sacraments and Holy Mass. Granted, I was away from the Church for nearly 30 years and reluctant to engage with anyone that proclaimed to be religious and so I feel like I know where you’re coming from. This is a superb write with a fantastic cadence to it ... my favorite type of poem to read as well ... one that explores the deepest questions concerning our very meaning or in the case of nihilism - no meaning what-so-ever. When you ask this question, even to an atheist, nearly all will respond in the affirmative: wouldn’t you want there to be an afterlife so that you could meet your loved ones again after your departure from this life?
April 24th, 2021 19:02
The Afterlife – A Case Study
Doggerel Dave said:
You have done me the world of good, Andy; the Flying Pickets and Dave Allen - nostalgically two of my favourite entertainers today...my cup runneth....
Many thanks.
April 24th, 2021 02:14
Doggerel Dave said:
You have done me the world of good, Andy; the Flying Pickets and Dave Allen - nostalgically two of my favourite entertainers today...my cup runneth....
Many thanks.
April 24th, 2021 02:14
The Afterlife – A Case Study
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Dave.
https://youtu.be/Ku8yw57ZZFI
Andy
April 24th, 2021 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Dave.
https://youtu.be/Ku8yw57ZZFI
Andy
April 24th, 2021 01:44
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