Comments received on poems by Paul Bell
Chelsea\'s Playing Away
hzugman said:
Paul, you must have one Hell of a memory or else a first class spreadsheet. Doesn\'t look like you\'ve missed too many birds.
May 7th, 2022 08:38
hzugman said:
Paul, you must have one Hell of a memory or else a first class spreadsheet. Doesn\'t look like you\'ve missed too many birds.
May 7th, 2022 08:38
Told You
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Paul, that love that dies can be so emotive.
Andy
May 5th, 2022 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Paul, that love that dies can be so emotive.
Andy
May 5th, 2022 00:37
Told You
Distant View said:
Sad, and doubtless true for more than a few. Life and love both give hard lessons sometimes.
May 4th, 2022 07:23
Distant View said:
Sad, and doubtless true for more than a few. Life and love both give hard lessons sometimes.
May 4th, 2022 07:23
Told You
Nicholas Browning said:
I consider this poem to be a masterpiece. You\'ve displayed ability to weave so few words with heft, and meaning. To some it may be a simple story, but this represents the chronicle of multiple lives. If I could favorite it twice I would. Thank you for posting Paul.
May 4th, 2022 04:59
Nicholas Browning said:
I consider this poem to be a masterpiece. You\'ve displayed ability to weave so few words with heft, and meaning. To some it may be a simple story, but this represents the chronicle of multiple lives. If I could favorite it twice I would. Thank you for posting Paul.
May 4th, 2022 04:59
Lost In Souls
Paul Bell said:
I suppose if you\'ve got to go, a love poem suicide is the way to go.
May 3rd, 2022 10:07
Paul Bell said:
I suppose if you\'ve got to go, a love poem suicide is the way to go.
May 3rd, 2022 10:07
Lost In Souls
L. B. Mek said:
(and not a mention
of that, divine
spotlighted, G spot
Alien
what a feat..
lol
its funny, to me
how most couples
can\'t communicate, verbally
but think
their love making
is so eloquent
when
in reality, they\'ll get those same
sensationalised, sensual sensations
from their carpet burn, escapades..
miscommunication
begins, with words
and ends
with pathetic wrestling scenes
beneath the sheets...)
lol
as-ever, just a great write
on so many levels
thank you, dear Poet
(your wordsmith, talent
could make suicide notes
read like, love poems...
truly!)
keep that mighty Pen
ever-striving, my friend
May 3rd, 2022 05:27
L. B. Mek said:
(and not a mention
of that, divine
spotlighted, G spot
Alien
what a feat..
lol
its funny, to me
how most couples
can\'t communicate, verbally
but think
their love making
is so eloquent
when
in reality, they\'ll get those same
sensationalised, sensual sensations
from their carpet burn, escapades..
miscommunication
begins, with words
and ends
with pathetic wrestling scenes
beneath the sheets...)
lol
as-ever, just a great write
on so many levels
thank you, dear Poet
(your wordsmith, talent
could make suicide notes
read like, love poems...
truly!)
keep that mighty Pen
ever-striving, my friend
May 3rd, 2022 05:27
Death In The Rain
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. I literally adore the way you can metaphorize such deep scenarios. That \"her\" is most likely this soldier\'s wife and he\'s contemplating whether or not she\'ll stay faithful to him. Yet with those final lines, \"The animals began to accept him
/ He was part of the surroundings.\" Truly delivers the message home, an unfortunate demise.
May 2nd, 2022 09:24
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. I literally adore the way you can metaphorize such deep scenarios. That \"her\" is most likely this soldier\'s wife and he\'s contemplating whether or not she\'ll stay faithful to him. Yet with those final lines, \"The animals began to accept him
/ He was part of the surroundings.\" Truly delivers the message home, an unfortunate demise.
May 2nd, 2022 09:24
Death In The Rain
Rozina said:
What an interesting intriguing piece. I would love to know what really happened here. Thank you.
May 1st, 2022 18:23
Rozina said:
What an interesting intriguing piece. I would love to know what really happened here. Thank you.
May 1st, 2022 18:23
Death In The Rain
Neville said:
an intriguing & compelling read Paul ..
I leave the page wondering which is not a bad thing after my visit to the abattoir or slaughterhouse ... N
May 1st, 2022 07:23
Neville said:
an intriguing & compelling read Paul ..
I leave the page wondering which is not a bad thing after my visit to the abattoir or slaughterhouse ... N
May 1st, 2022 07:23
Death In The Rain
ChrisLynđź•Š said:
He was doomed like the others in d end .. if that’s the message .
Good one
May 1st, 2022 07:05
ChrisLynđź•Š said:
He was doomed like the others in d end .. if that’s the message .
Good one
May 1st, 2022 07:05
Death In The Rain
dusk arising said:
Wow. I\'m unsure of what\'s going on here but this is compelling reading and undoubtedly leaves me wanting more. Which means \'job well done\' in my humble judgement.
May 1st, 2022 06:48
dusk arising said:
Wow. I\'m unsure of what\'s going on here but this is compelling reading and undoubtedly leaves me wanting more. Which means \'job well done\' in my humble judgement.
May 1st, 2022 06:48
Death In The Rain
Nicholas Browning said:
A cryptic message hides somewhere in this. Is it reflection? Absolution? I can\'t quite say. It\'s a harrowing read, gives me \"Bloodborne\" vibes, and I love it. I\'ll keep reading it.
May 1st, 2022 06:45
Nicholas Browning said:
A cryptic message hides somewhere in this. Is it reflection? Absolution? I can\'t quite say. It\'s a harrowing read, gives me \"Bloodborne\" vibes, and I love it. I\'ll keep reading it.
May 1st, 2022 06:45
Paranoia
Crowns4Christ said:
Hahahahaha, there are always foreign instructions that we can\'t understand on the most important things
April 30th, 2022 18:02
Crowns4Christ said:
Hahahahaha, there are always foreign instructions that we can\'t understand on the most important things
April 30th, 2022 18:02
Paranoia
Rozina said:
Excuses aplenty! When you buy an Ikea product, the first thing it says is \"Keep calm when assembling, enjoy the process, don\'t get mad, have short breaks.\" Not a word about \'testing\'. Did the Chinese instructions mention \'testing\'?!
April 30th, 2022 17:34
Rozina said:
Excuses aplenty! When you buy an Ikea product, the first thing it says is \"Keep calm when assembling, enjoy the process, don\'t get mad, have short breaks.\" Not a word about \'testing\'. Did the Chinese instructions mention \'testing\'?!
April 30th, 2022 17:34
Paranoia
orchidee said:
A joke, I hope, now follows.
A guy or gal has paranoia.
Someone says to them \'hello\'.
He/she replies \'What do you mean hello? What you after? I\'ll punch you on the nose for that hello!\'
Doh! Such people are not worth talking to.
April 30th, 2022 12:10
orchidee said:
A joke, I hope, now follows.
A guy or gal has paranoia.
Someone says to them \'hello\'.
He/she replies \'What do you mean hello? What you after? I\'ll punch you on the nose for that hello!\'
Doh! Such people are not worth talking to.
April 30th, 2022 12:10
The Dark days
spilleronsheet said:
Nothing seems eternal
Not us
And maybe later not even our deeds
Amongst all, time shall remain supreme
Very well crafted dear Paul.
April 30th, 2022 05:58
spilleronsheet said:
Nothing seems eternal
Not us
And maybe later not even our deeds
Amongst all, time shall remain supreme
Very well crafted dear Paul.
April 30th, 2022 05:58
The Dark days
Bella Shepard said:
Knowing that something is imminent never truly prepares you for the reality when it hits. I think that you have captured the whole process of death and recovery with time, the healer, beautifully in your words.
April 27th, 2022 11:34
Bella Shepard said:
Knowing that something is imminent never truly prepares you for the reality when it hits. I think that you have captured the whole process of death and recovery with time, the healer, beautifully in your words.
April 27th, 2022 11:34
The Dark days
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow talk about a journey through words. I love the way you crafted and formatted this piece dear Paul. That build up to an eventual demise and then that refrain, \"But time was all (s)he had,\" being passed on from the initial speaker to the woman is spectacular. Amazing.
April 27th, 2022 09:11
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow talk about a journey through words. I love the way you crafted and formatted this piece dear Paul. That build up to an eventual demise and then that refrain, \"But time was all (s)he had,\" being passed on from the initial speaker to the woman is spectacular. Amazing.
April 27th, 2022 09:11
Guilt
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful words Paul, guilt can be so overwhelming.
Andy
April 25th, 2022 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful words Paul, guilt can be so overwhelming.
Andy
April 25th, 2022 00:43
Guilt
Neville said:
I really dig this Paul .. reminds me of something I have written about on numerous occasions over many years .. guilt really can tear you apart, can\'t it .. Neville
April 24th, 2022 06:50
Neville said:
I really dig this Paul .. reminds me of something I have written about on numerous occasions over many years .. guilt really can tear you apart, can\'t it .. Neville
April 24th, 2022 06:50
Yesterday
Rocky Lagou said:
\"He\'s gone, yet the clock keeps ticking.\" Lord this is amazing. Very well done dear Paul.
April 21st, 2022 08:45
Rocky Lagou said:
\"He\'s gone, yet the clock keeps ticking.\" Lord this is amazing. Very well done dear Paul.
April 21st, 2022 08:45
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