Comments received on poems by Paul Bell
Yesterday
L. B. Mek said:
so much raw emotionality
\'seething\', yet \'deflated\'
that\'s the mindset
your poetic voice captured..
to me at least, dear Poet
a relatable read, thank you
(I just hope it\'s fiction)
April 21st, 2022 06:33
L. B. Mek said:
so much raw emotionality
\'seething\', yet \'deflated\'
that\'s the mindset
your poetic voice captured..
to me at least, dear Poet
a relatable read, thank you
(I just hope it\'s fiction)
April 21st, 2022 06:33
The Wrong Day
Goldfinch60 said:
Confusion reigns in my mind and obviously yours as sell Paul.
Andy
April 21st, 2022 00:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Confusion reigns in my mind and obviously yours as sell Paul.
Andy
April 21st, 2022 00:01
The Wrong Day
Rozina said:
What a complicated life you lead! You need a mathematical formula to sort this out perfectly!
April 20th, 2022 17:45
Rozina said:
What a complicated life you lead! You need a mathematical formula to sort this out perfectly!
April 20th, 2022 17:45
The House
Rozina said:
Hilarious poem! Might be a good idea to buy real estate in Mars - there\'s increasing transport to space, from Bezos and Musk and Branson. Not sure about Uber.
April 19th, 2022 18:01
Rozina said:
Hilarious poem! Might be a good idea to buy real estate in Mars - there\'s increasing transport to space, from Bezos and Musk and Branson. Not sure about Uber.
April 19th, 2022 18:01
The House
Bella Shepard said:
Your story telling is amazing! What can I say, you capture me from beginning to end, and when it\'s over I wish there were more.
April 19th, 2022 09:31
Bella Shepard said:
Your story telling is amazing! What can I say, you capture me from beginning to end, and when it\'s over I wish there were more.
April 19th, 2022 09:31
The House
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow, talk about a journey through words. I mean I love how you tie in the conversational style with the oddity that is your amazing writing. The line \"What, who the hell’s building it, the seven dwarfs.
It’s on the planet Mars.\" really got a kick out of me. I love your humurous tone!
April 19th, 2022 09:06
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow, talk about a journey through words. I mean I love how you tie in the conversational style with the oddity that is your amazing writing. The line \"What, who the hell’s building it, the seven dwarfs.
It’s on the planet Mars.\" really got a kick out of me. I love your humurous tone!
April 19th, 2022 09:06
The House
L. B. Mek said:
\'I should have married Geoffrey, he lives in a big house, and he’s sane.
He’s also gay.
I don’t care, I would have straightened him.
You really can be melodramatic at times.
Melodramatic, that’s it, you’re so dumped.
Right then, I’m going.
Great, if you hurry, you’ll catch the 65 doing the planet\'s run.
Phone rings, It’s mummy.
Hi honey, how you doing.
Terrible mum, I’ve just thrown Paul out.
You should have done it years ago, the boys, a moron.
I know, I’ll not tell you what he did.
Knowing him, it’ll be something spectacular, have you seen the news.
No, I’m depressed enough.
You wouldn’t believe this, that estate agent up the high st was selling plots of land on Mars, they were going like hot cakes, they sold out in minutes.
That\'s why I threw him out mum, the idiot bought one.
Oh darling, get him back, they tripled in price after ten minutes, they were saying they could be worth a million pounds in ten years time.
What, are you sure.
Yes, check the news.
Phone call to you know who.
Hi Paul where are you, sorry about throwing a wobbler, you sort of caught me on the hop.
Geoffrey’s putting me up.
What, did anybody see you going in.
Why.
You know why.
I don’t know why.\'
🤣🤣🤣🤣
I can\'t breath, help!
\'you know why!!!!\'
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
April 19th, 2022 06:32
L. B. Mek said:
\'I should have married Geoffrey, he lives in a big house, and he’s sane.
He’s also gay.
I don’t care, I would have straightened him.
You really can be melodramatic at times.
Melodramatic, that’s it, you’re so dumped.
Right then, I’m going.
Great, if you hurry, you’ll catch the 65 doing the planet\'s run.
Phone rings, It’s mummy.
Hi honey, how you doing.
Terrible mum, I’ve just thrown Paul out.
You should have done it years ago, the boys, a moron.
I know, I’ll not tell you what he did.
Knowing him, it’ll be something spectacular, have you seen the news.
No, I’m depressed enough.
You wouldn’t believe this, that estate agent up the high st was selling plots of land on Mars, they were going like hot cakes, they sold out in minutes.
That\'s why I threw him out mum, the idiot bought one.
Oh darling, get him back, they tripled in price after ten minutes, they were saying they could be worth a million pounds in ten years time.
What, are you sure.
Yes, check the news.
Phone call to you know who.
Hi Paul where are you, sorry about throwing a wobbler, you sort of caught me on the hop.
Geoffrey’s putting me up.
What, did anybody see you going in.
Why.
You know why.
I don’t know why.\'
🤣🤣🤣🤣
I can\'t breath, help!
\'you know why!!!!\'
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
April 19th, 2022 06:32
The Jesus Girl
Rocky Lagou said:
Love this. Sometimes all one needs is another who sees the world a little clearer to guide them towards the right direction. I delight in your splendor.
April 18th, 2022 10:11
Rocky Lagou said:
Love this. Sometimes all one needs is another who sees the world a little clearer to guide them towards the right direction. I delight in your splendor.
April 18th, 2022 10:11
Mere Mortal
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow Paul. That line, \"Cut you with those razor eyes of beauty.\" I love this poem. We\'re all searching for love and it kinda seems like it slips through our hands every time. You\'ve crafted this finely.
April 18th, 2022 08:54
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow Paul. That line, \"Cut you with those razor eyes of beauty.\" I love this poem. We\'re all searching for love and it kinda seems like it slips through our hands every time. You\'ve crafted this finely.
April 18th, 2022 08:54
The Jesus Girl
L. B. Mek said:
\"The true Soldier fights
not because he hates
what is in front of him, but
because he loves
what is behind him.\"
G. K. Chesterton
(yet still, that added weight
of a life, taken - stolen
even in the name of loved ones
those, \'True\' soldiers
carry back, with them
after surviving, hell on earth..
is deceptive in its capacity
to poison, the very love
they fought to protect..
alas
it takes, someone with immense
empathy and humility
to patiently, soak their fingers
with tears of sincerity
and unfurl
those clotted
\'nightmares, as relived thoughts\'
and wrangled hair knots
from despair\'s, gaping abyss
of freefall, defeat..
it takes someone, whose cultivated
their own faith
into a fishing rode, of unwavering belief
in goodness, prevailing
over
the abundant atrocities, of life..)
simply Brilliant, dear Poet
April 18th, 2022 06:34
L. B. Mek said:
\"The true Soldier fights
not because he hates
what is in front of him, but
because he loves
what is behind him.\"
G. K. Chesterton
(yet still, that added weight
of a life, taken - stolen
even in the name of loved ones
those, \'True\' soldiers
carry back, with them
after surviving, hell on earth..
is deceptive in its capacity
to poison, the very love
they fought to protect..
alas
it takes, someone with immense
empathy and humility
to patiently, soak their fingers
with tears of sincerity
and unfurl
those clotted
\'nightmares, as relived thoughts\'
and wrangled hair knots
from despair\'s, gaping abyss
of freefall, defeat..
it takes someone, whose cultivated
their own faith
into a fishing rode, of unwavering belief
in goodness, prevailing
over
the abundant atrocities, of life..)
simply Brilliant, dear Poet
April 18th, 2022 06:34
Mere Mortal
Rozina said:
I agree with Teddy about your poem and the story itself. Very well penned.
April 17th, 2022 17:48
Rozina said:
I agree with Teddy about your poem and the story itself. Very well penned.
April 17th, 2022 17:48
Mere Mortal
Neville said:
its what we are and do .......... well penned my friend ..
April 17th, 2022 10:32
Neville said:
its what we are and do .......... well penned my friend ..
April 17th, 2022 10:32
Mere Mortal
Michael Edwards said:
A journey I\'ve been on for 60 years and I wouldn\'t change a minute of it. So well expressed Paul.
April 17th, 2022 06:19
Michael Edwards said:
A journey I\'ve been on for 60 years and I wouldn\'t change a minute of it. So well expressed Paul.
April 17th, 2022 06:19
Doc Drake
Rozina said:
Your stories are simply amazing, so funny, yet many truths in the lines. By the way I just read \'The Other People\' and the hero was just about to jump and kill himself when a man suddenly appeared and pointed a gun at him and said \"Jump or I\'ll shoot you!\" Of course he didn\'t and was saved by this encounter. And eventually a happy ending in the book.
April 16th, 2022 18:14
Rozina said:
Your stories are simply amazing, so funny, yet many truths in the lines. By the way I just read \'The Other People\' and the hero was just about to jump and kill himself when a man suddenly appeared and pointed a gun at him and said \"Jump or I\'ll shoot you!\" Of course he didn\'t and was saved by this encounter. And eventually a happy ending in the book.
April 16th, 2022 18:14
Doc Drake
Bella Shepard said:
Did this Doc have a situation comedy somewhere, if not he should have. As always, lots of fun and a rib tickler.
April 16th, 2022 12:36
Bella Shepard said:
Did this Doc have a situation comedy somewhere, if not he should have. As always, lots of fun and a rib tickler.
April 16th, 2022 12:36
Doc Drake
Bella Shepard said:
Did this Doc have a situation comedy somewhere, if not he should have. As always, lots of fun and a rib tickler.
April 16th, 2022 12:23
Bella Shepard said:
Did this Doc have a situation comedy somewhere, if not he should have. As always, lots of fun and a rib tickler.
April 16th, 2022 12:23
The Little Black Book
Neville said:
one of the few things I enjoy more than a little black dress, is a little black book .................. do keep em coming Paul .................... N :)
April 16th, 2022 04:45
Neville said:
one of the few things I enjoy more than a little black dress, is a little black book .................. do keep em coming Paul .................... N :)
April 16th, 2022 04:45
The Device
Neville said:
there\'s still some lead in ya pencil I see sir ............. seriously good stuff and funny as hell ............... N :)
April 16th, 2022 01:24
Neville said:
there\'s still some lead in ya pencil I see sir ............. seriously good stuff and funny as hell ............... N :)
April 16th, 2022 01:24
The Device
Bella Shepard said:
Humor with a delightful edge! Loved it, had me chuckling all the way to the zinger at the end. Will this be available on Amazon?
April 15th, 2022 15:02
Bella Shepard said:
Humor with a delightful edge! Loved it, had me chuckling all the way to the zinger at the end. Will this be available on Amazon?
April 15th, 2022 15:02
The Device
dusk arising said:
Necessity is the mother of invention if he ain\'t cutting it.
April 15th, 2022 10:36
dusk arising said:
Necessity is the mother of invention if he ain\'t cutting it.
April 15th, 2022 10:36
The Device
L. B. Mek said:
yeah...
the term \'dickhead\'s\', fits
some of us men, on so many levels
lol
(I like how this genuinely
reads like the backstory
to a start-up business..
its funny, but
on some levels
completely tangible, as well
including Jenny\'s\'
executive decision...)
just so much fun
got me grinning, on my way
to a sun kissed
long, bank holiday weekend..
thank you, dear Poet
April 15th, 2022 05:27
L. B. Mek said:
yeah...
the term \'dickhead\'s\', fits
some of us men, on so many levels
lol
(I like how this genuinely
reads like the backstory
to a start-up business..
its funny, but
on some levels
completely tangible, as well
including Jenny\'s\'
executive decision...)
just so much fun
got me grinning, on my way
to a sun kissed
long, bank holiday weekend..
thank you, dear Poet
April 15th, 2022 05:27
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