Comments received on poems by Paul Bell



Charlotte.
Goldfinch60 said:

Great fun write Paul, I will try and keep out of her way.

Andy

August 28th, 2022 01:22

Charlotte.
Bella Shepard said:

A great story, from a great story teller. It\'s dark, twisted and thoroughly macabre. It holds a strange fascination from beginning to end. Bizarre, but truly a great write!

August 27th, 2022 12:21

The Light Bulb
mfhanyx_ said:

Bruh, you\'re scary😭

August 27th, 2022 07:19

Poison Ivy.
mfhanyx_ said:

Ooooh. Hey, was that woman Grimaldin?

August 27th, 2022 07:16

Marie
mfhanyx_ said:

Pretty sure I wanna be Marie now

August 27th, 2022 07:10

Charlotte.
mfhanyx_ said:

oh. my. GOSH. what the hell? i LOVE this

August 27th, 2022 07:08

Charlotte.
Doggerel Dave said:

Gross black humor - what more can be said?

August 27th, 2022 07:01

Marie
Bella Shepard said:

The question; is it lust or love, the trappings of a relationship, what is the foundation built upon? I enjoyed this journey in verse.

August 20th, 2022 09:56

Marie
Jonas Robinson said:

Good stuff. :)

August 20th, 2022 07:46

The Rules
jenny.g said:

The subtleties of sexuality are beautifully expressed here.

August 18th, 2022 16:49

Last 5
Bella Shepard said:

This wonderful conversation peaks my interest, and I\'m left wanting more. You have a real talent for storytelling my friend, this one is a gem!

August 12th, 2022 13:41

The Grim Reaper
Doggerel Dave said:

Bit grim, that one -Why didn\'t they get it together and have a rollicking good time - you are good at that, even if it doesn\'t work out in the end....

August 10th, 2022 20:29

The Grim Reaper
Bella Shepard said:

Oh, twists and turns, the build up and then the exquisite twist at the end. Loved it!

August 10th, 2022 15:13

The Grim Reaper
Paul Bell said:

Summer heat is getting to me. lol

August 10th, 2022 09:03

Birthday Blues
Bella Shepard said:

Let the party begin. Really made me sit up and pay attention. Just remember next day, who\'s who, and what\'s what. By the way, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!



August 6th, 2022 12:28

Birthday Blues
tallisman said:

Loved this!

August 6th, 2022 12:20

Poison Ivy.
AlitaOpal said:

More like a metaphor of a woman\'s past that she can be optimistic about regardless of the morbidity.. one can only look at it as moving on.. great write Mr Bell 🌹

August 6th, 2022 00:28

Poison Ivy.
KRWonder said:

What a ghost story! This was a fun read, I liked the details and vivid imageries. Thanks for sharing!

August 1st, 2022 08:30

Poison Ivy.
Neil Higgins said:

Morning Paul.Ghost stories,and \"dead bodies\" A sure fire way to start Monday.Cleverly crafted as always.
And talking of the dead.I\'m back 😱

August 1st, 2022 04:54

Someday
Neville said:


I\'m bloomin glad I\'m not the only one .. life is full of em isn\'t it sir .. disappointments I mean & you have done a sterling job drawing attention to so many ....... Neville


July 26th, 2022 10:24

Someday
Paul Bell said:

I think we all start out with our rose-coloured glasses, then life gets us.

July 25th, 2022 03:59

Someday
Bella Shepard said:

What happens to our hopes and wishes? Do we recognize the person we are, or do we hold onto what it seems we never quite achieve? And how can we solve the conundrum? Too many questions, not enough time. What a great write, hit the nail on the proverbial head.

July 24th, 2022 10:26

The Light Bulb
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes, that will teach her.

Andy

July 21st, 2022 00:22

The Light Bulb
Bella Shepard said:

A lesson learned does not necessarily make us wiser? lol

July 20th, 2022 14:38

The Light Bulb
AlitaOpal said:

I found your piece so amusing as I recently attended a friend\'s wedding, only to find four men in her past whom she had turned down..

July 20th, 2022 08:53

The Light Bulb
lalalaEulalie said:

I think the last verse is quite clever!

July 20th, 2022 08:10

Our Kelly
Doggerel Dave said:

Yeh - I can\'t find fault in that.
I covered much the same ground from a slightly different perspective in \'Peter\'s Complaint\' way back and it\'s a bloody mess. I believe smack to be slightly out of favour today compared with the Seventies, the era in which Pete and I were located, having been superseded in popularity by other substances. Can\'t stop progress, can yer...........

July 18th, 2022 07:29

Our Kelly
orchidee said:

Sad in a way - poisoning the body for yet another \'high\'.
Fido guards any drug cabinets from me fiercely! lol.

July 18th, 2022 06:26

Our Kelly
Neville said:



I sincerely hope every single MPS participant, regardless of whether they be a regular poster, or just visiting, and passing through find these words Paul .. I know lots of Kelly\'s and you tell her tale so bloody well and true .......... Neville


July 18th, 2022 05:46

The Little Yellow Pill
Raven333 said:

I just loved your poem, I thought it was well written and loved the rhyme it made it flow with ease

July 17th, 2022 12:45

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