Comments received on poems by Paul Bell
Engraved In Stone
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Paul! You certainly know how to deliver an emotional gut punch! I was thoroughly invested by the end, and I suspect this one will stay with me for a while. Wonderful storytelling, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏
October 12th, 2026 19:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Paul! You certainly know how to deliver an emotional gut punch! I was thoroughly invested by the end, and I suspect this one will stay with me for a while. Wonderful storytelling, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏
October 12th, 2026 19:36
Engraved In Stone
sorenbarrett said:
A great story with a hidden epitaph left to the reader to guess. The best way to end a story. Well done Paul
October 12th, 2026 05:57
sorenbarrett said:
A great story with a hidden epitaph left to the reader to guess. The best way to end a story. Well done Paul
October 12th, 2026 05:57
Night Terrors
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What the hell, Paul…LOL! I was laughing already, but that ending finished me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 11th, 2026 22:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What the hell, Paul…LOL! I was laughing already, but that ending finished me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 11th, 2026 22:59
Night Terrors
sorenbarrett said:
I just knew that was going to cum. I love word play poems and this was a good one Paul and I need that sense of humor on a Sunday to counter balance the holy part. I guess he will be looking for a victim but it might be a bit harder for him because you can put a peg in an empty hole but putting a hole into a missing peg might be more difficult.
October 11th, 2026 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
I just knew that was going to cum. I love word play poems and this was a good one Paul and I need that sense of humor on a Sunday to counter balance the holy part. I guess he will be looking for a victim but it might be a bit harder for him because you can put a peg in an empty hole but putting a hole into a missing peg might be more difficult.
October 11th, 2026 04:38
Last Five
Doggerel Dave said:
Paul, how many times do I have to tell ya?
A yarn with twists and turns which left me amused all the way.
October 9th, 2026 20:26
Doggerel Dave said:
Paul, how many times do I have to tell ya?
A yarn with twists and turns which left me amused all the way.
October 9th, 2026 20:26
Last Five
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh hell, Paul...I wouldn’t trust this lot to organise lunch, and now my survival depends on them. I’d better get my affairs in order. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 9th, 2026 11:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh hell, Paul...I wouldn’t trust this lot to organise lunch, and now my survival depends on them. I’d better get my affairs in order. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 9th, 2026 11:49
The Last Ghost
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Paul, bloody hell! That\'s a wonderfully chilling little tale! And I hate to break it to you, but your last ghost didn\'t hold that distinction very long. I published another one this morning! 🤣 Apparently, the dead are getting rather competitive! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 9th, 2026 09:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Paul, bloody hell! That\'s a wonderfully chilling little tale! And I hate to break it to you, but your last ghost didn\'t hold that distinction very long. I published another one this morning! 🤣 Apparently, the dead are getting rather competitive! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 9th, 2026 09:47
Last Five
sorenbarrett said:
Paul your writes are always full of dark humor and well placed as well. Another smile today and well needed
October 9th, 2026 06:13
sorenbarrett said:
Paul your writes are always full of dark humor and well placed as well. Another smile today and well needed
October 9th, 2026 06:13
The Last Ghost
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Paul,
It\'s like reading those headstones, Unknown, RIP and their ghosts, no one to mourn them, no flowers on their graves, a club, as it were for the unknowns and now sadly, a new member. I found it to be awfully sad, five lonesome souls in an awfully good poem. Well done.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 8th, 2026 15:19
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Paul,
It\'s like reading those headstones, Unknown, RIP and their ghosts, no one to mourn them, no flowers on their graves, a club, as it were for the unknowns and now sadly, a new member. I found it to be awfully sad, five lonesome souls in an awfully good poem. Well done.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 8th, 2026 15:19
The Last Ghost
sorenbarrett said:
I liked the pacing on this one Paul the slow line for line delivery added to the tension and gave the last line more power. The mystery of who these were remains to hold the poem in the mind of the reader. Nicely done
October 8th, 2026 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
I liked the pacing on this one Paul the slow line for line delivery added to the tension and gave the last line more power. The mystery of who these were remains to hold the poem in the mind of the reader. Nicely done
October 8th, 2026 05:05
The Last Ghost
Teddy.15 said:
And just like that... Your imagery is very good, I hope those ghosts weren\'t ex\'s 🤣
October 8th, 2026 04:44
Teddy.15 said:
And just like that... Your imagery is very good, I hope those ghosts weren\'t ex\'s 🤣
October 8th, 2026 04:44
The Black Angel
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Paul,
Is Britian that bad, that virgins are fleeing to the brothels of Europe. You really got me with this one, the opening half being so dark and then; what the hell is going on here. I wonder has Brexit got anything to with the flight of the virgins. Well done indeed.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 7th, 2026 09:36
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Paul,
Is Britian that bad, that virgins are fleeing to the brothels of Europe. You really got me with this one, the opening half being so dark and then; what the hell is going on here. I wonder has Brexit got anything to with the flight of the virgins. Well done indeed.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 7th, 2026 09:36
The Black Angel
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Paul, I should have known you weren’t going to let that sinister opening behave itself for long. 😂 The Black Angel storming off in disgust finished me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 6th, 2026 23:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Paul, I should have known you weren’t going to let that sinister opening behave itself for long. 😂 The Black Angel storming off in disgust finished me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 6th, 2026 23:09
The Black Angel
Teddy.15 said:
So she\'s a Dutch pancake? 🤣 This is hilarious, I do believe that COVID helped the slump. 🌹
October 6th, 2026 12:37
Teddy.15 said:
So she\'s a Dutch pancake? 🤣 This is hilarious, I do believe that COVID helped the slump. 🌹
October 6th, 2026 12:37
The Black Angel
sorenbarrett said:
Starts so serious then the punch. I wonder if there are more virgins in Amsterdam. A fun read Paul
October 6th, 2026 09:44
sorenbarrett said:
Starts so serious then the punch. I wonder if there are more virgins in Amsterdam. A fun read Paul
October 6th, 2026 09:44
Big Boy
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn funny verbal sparring match here, because the inflated language keeps crashing into the bloke’s gloriously literal interpretation of everything, especially the way he translates “subjugate,” “propensity,” and “sententious” straight into sex and body talk. The ending is the keeper for me, because the barmaid/owner revelation suddenly reframes the whole conversation, and “you’re an entrepreneur” becomes the perfect deadpan excuse for getting the hell out of there.
October 6th, 2026 08:00
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn funny verbal sparring match here, because the inflated language keeps crashing into the bloke’s gloriously literal interpretation of everything, especially the way he translates “subjugate,” “propensity,” and “sententious” straight into sex and body talk. The ending is the keeper for me, because the barmaid/owner revelation suddenly reframes the whole conversation, and “you’re an entrepreneur” becomes the perfect deadpan excuse for getting the hell out of there.
October 6th, 2026 08:00
Silk Sheets
sandyyyyyyana said:
um ok guys
this is um so good just the third line.... S*X
October 5th, 2026 18:35
sandyyyyyyana said:
um ok guys
this is um so good just the third line.... S*X
October 5th, 2026 18:35
Tough Girl
sandyyyyyyana said:
same here I was her my cousin did but
that just made me cry cause about thinking about it I am 15 now when I was 12 that\'s when that happend I\'m scared and cold but there is nothing I could do
I guess....
October 5th, 2026 18:32
sandyyyyyyana said:
same here I was her my cousin did but
that just made me cry cause about thinking about it I am 15 now when I was 12 that\'s when that happend I\'m scared and cold but there is nothing I could do
I guess....
October 5th, 2026 18:32
Living Souls
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Jesus, Paul. 😂 From “Sounds like insurance to me” to THAT ending. I should\'ve known better than to trust anybody dressed entirely in black who rings the doorbell to Rule Britannia. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 4th, 2026 23:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Jesus, Paul. 😂 From “Sounds like insurance to me” to THAT ending. I should\'ve known better than to trust anybody dressed entirely in black who rings the doorbell to Rule Britannia. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 4th, 2026 23:58
Living Souls
Doggerel Dave said:
You could write absolute nonsense and still make it enjoyable...
(Please note I only wrote \'could\')
October 4th, 2026 22:29
Doggerel Dave said:
You could write absolute nonsense and still make it enjoyable...
(Please note I only wrote \'could\')
October 4th, 2026 22:29
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