Comments received on poems by Paul Bell
The Ghost Train
Neville said:
shh .. it happens ......... sounds more like a mantra than a lonely script .. sadly enjoyed ............................ Neville
March 3rd, 2022 08:18
Neville said:
shh .. it happens ......... sounds more like a mantra than a lonely script .. sadly enjoyed ............................ Neville
March 3rd, 2022 08:18
The Ghost Train
L. B. Mek said:
the truth of your words
makes this, Dark humour
the bitterness of regret
makes this, a difficult read
for some
for those blessed, other\'s
they\'ll laugh along, unknowingly...
(a write that hits home
for me, personally
thanks for sharing, dear Poet)
March 3rd, 2022 07:04
L. B. Mek said:
the truth of your words
makes this, Dark humour
the bitterness of regret
makes this, a difficult read
for some
for those blessed, other\'s
they\'ll laugh along, unknowingly...
(a write that hits home
for me, personally
thanks for sharing, dear Poet)
March 3rd, 2022 07:04
Mums Advice
Michael Edwards said:
Gosh - I\'d better go get some white Knickers - not that there are many buses in the country where i live. loved the write.
March 2nd, 2022 15:09
Michael Edwards said:
Gosh - I\'d better go get some white Knickers - not that there are many buses in the country where i live. loved the write.
March 2nd, 2022 15:09
Mums Advice
Rocky Lagou said:
Lovely and witty! A journey through time and a laugh. All that I wanted! Thanks! Follow Mums Advice! 😅💖
March 1st, 2022 10:43
Rocky Lagou said:
Lovely and witty! A journey through time and a laugh. All that I wanted! Thanks! Follow Mums Advice! 😅💖
March 1st, 2022 10:43
Mums Advice
L. B. Mek said:
it took me a few minutes, to breathe again
after reading that first line
what a contrast to your Title, I\'ll admit
you got me good! dear Poet
thanks for sharing..
what genius and kindness to gift smiles and chuckles
in this testing times, hope you never change
my kind friend
March 1st, 2022 06:09
L. B. Mek said:
it took me a few minutes, to breathe again
after reading that first line
what a contrast to your Title, I\'ll admit
you got me good! dear Poet
thanks for sharing..
what genius and kindness to gift smiles and chuckles
in this testing times, hope you never change
my kind friend
March 1st, 2022 06:09
The Cat Woman
Rocky Lagou said:
Very interesting and engaging. Timing is at the center of our actions. ✨
February 28th, 2022 09:54
Rocky Lagou said:
Very interesting and engaging. Timing is at the center of our actions. ✨
February 28th, 2022 09:54
The Cat Woman
spilleronsheet said:
A mystery
A tale
The detectives on trail
Looking for criminals on rail
Your story kept me absorbed,
Timing really plays it’s game…
February 28th, 2022 01:05
spilleronsheet said:
A mystery
A tale
The detectives on trail
Looking for criminals on rail
Your story kept me absorbed,
Timing really plays it’s game…
February 28th, 2022 01:05
The Cat Woman
Rozina said:
A very interesting story. Yes the timing was so crucial here.
February 27th, 2022 21:01
Rozina said:
A very interesting story. Yes the timing was so crucial here.
February 27th, 2022 21:01
The Cat Woman
Neville said:
Blimey mate ......................... timing is everything isn\'t it .................. well it seems it was in this case .. sometimes one just has to go with one\'s gut feeling ........ a compelling tale sir ........... thank you for posting .............................. Neville
February 27th, 2022 08:22
Neville said:
Blimey mate ......................... timing is everything isn\'t it .................. well it seems it was in this case .. sometimes one just has to go with one\'s gut feeling ........ a compelling tale sir ........... thank you for posting .............................. Neville
February 27th, 2022 08:22
The Children Of Time
Neville said:
She crammed a lot in .. in such a short space of time ...................... I have known several individuals who could very easily fit the bill ................. this is one of them that needs to be read over and over and once my foot has stopped tapping on its own .. I\'m pretty sure I will .. lets just call that a literary experiment for now shall we .. N :)
February 26th, 2022 13:16
Neville said:
She crammed a lot in .. in such a short space of time ...................... I have known several individuals who could very easily fit the bill ................. this is one of them that needs to be read over and over and once my foot has stopped tapping on its own .. I\'m pretty sure I will .. lets just call that a literary experiment for now shall we .. N :)
February 26th, 2022 13:16
The Children Of Time
spilleronsheet said:
Haunting and daunting poetry
Telling me tragedies as it weaves
I could see the war that sweeps
A good imagery with a number in count
Good one dear Paul
February 26th, 2022 11:39
spilleronsheet said:
Haunting and daunting poetry
Telling me tragedies as it weaves
I could see the war that sweeps
A good imagery with a number in count
Good one dear Paul
February 26th, 2022 11:39
The Children Of Time
dusk arising said:
What comes to mind having read your piece is that we all play some sort of a numbers gamble but nothing changes..... we are in perpetual motion.... history repeating.
A really enjoyable read with the events of today in ukraine haunting one\'s thoughts.
February 26th, 2022 10:49
dusk arising said:
What comes to mind having read your piece is that we all play some sort of a numbers gamble but nothing changes..... we are in perpetual motion.... history repeating.
A really enjoyable read with the events of today in ukraine haunting one\'s thoughts.
February 26th, 2022 10:49
Sex Addict
Richmondpomes said:
Very good, made me second think my sexuality
February 25th, 2022 16:36
Richmondpomes said:
Very good, made me second think my sexuality
February 25th, 2022 16:36
The Sacred Child
L. B. Mek said:
\'Touching her stomach in repentant hope\'
what a line! what a read
almost brought me to tears
if I wasn\'t half a man
and allowed myself to cry
it probably would have..
a great write, showcasing your poetic range
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
February 24th, 2022 06:40
L. B. Mek said:
\'Touching her stomach in repentant hope\'
what a line! what a read
almost brought me to tears
if I wasn\'t half a man
and allowed myself to cry
it probably would have..
a great write, showcasing your poetic range
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
February 24th, 2022 06:40
The Sacred Child
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
The implication here makes it all seem so uncanny, like something deeper behind it. Lets see to more poems like this in the future.
February 24th, 2022 05:12
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
The implication here makes it all seem so uncanny, like something deeper behind it. Lets see to more poems like this in the future.
February 24th, 2022 05:12
Assassinated
Bella Shepard said:
This takes me back to Nov. 22, 1963, sitting in my 8th grade chorus class and someone rushing in to tell us that Kennedy had been shot. Apr. 4, 1968 we lost MLK. My generation felt like we were coming apart. Very powerful piece, thank you.
February 23rd, 2022 12:44
Bella Shepard said:
This takes me back to Nov. 22, 1963, sitting in my 8th grade chorus class and someone rushing in to tell us that Kennedy had been shot. Apr. 4, 1968 we lost MLK. My generation felt like we were coming apart. Very powerful piece, thank you.
February 23rd, 2022 12:44
The Priest
Rozina said:
I’m joining Teddy with her handbag! I’ll carry 2! A really good laugh in the morning thank you.
February 22nd, 2022 18:23
Rozina said:
I’m joining Teddy with her handbag! I’ll carry 2! A really good laugh in the morning thank you.
February 22nd, 2022 18:23
The Priest
orchidee said:
I heard a true story.
One of the cloth, said \'I\'m a man of peace; and if you don\'t agree with me, I will punch ya on the nose!\'
February 22nd, 2022 15:04
orchidee said:
I heard a true story.
One of the cloth, said \'I\'m a man of peace; and if you don\'t agree with me, I will punch ya on the nose!\'
February 22nd, 2022 15:04
The Priest
Rocky Lagou said:
I feel like I can relate to this too much. As my father is a Christian, I\'m taken to church against my will, and every time a pastor looks at me, I feel like they have the power to just TELEPATHY into my brain and find out all my sins 🤣But honestly this was a witty poem. Kudos to you! 💖
February 22nd, 2022 13:53
Rocky Lagou said:
I feel like I can relate to this too much. As my father is a Christian, I\'m taken to church against my will, and every time a pastor looks at me, I feel like they have the power to just TELEPATHY into my brain and find out all my sins 🤣But honestly this was a witty poem. Kudos to you! 💖
February 22nd, 2022 13:53
The Last Ghost
Neville said:
Happy families eh .. as scary as one or two of my ex ghoul-friends :)
February 21st, 2022 15:56
Neville said:
Happy families eh .. as scary as one or two of my ex ghoul-friends :)
February 21st, 2022 15:56
The Plan
Neville said:
I bow before your pen, your sense of humour & your imagination .. this is another great post Paul ........ N :)
February 20th, 2022 05:28
Neville said:
I bow before your pen, your sense of humour & your imagination .. this is another great post Paul ........ N :)
February 20th, 2022 05:28
The Plan
Rozina said:
Hahaha I really enjoy these poetic stories you put up. I imagine your crime novel hero would be a funny guy too.
February 20th, 2022 05:11
Rozina said:
Hahaha I really enjoy these poetic stories you put up. I imagine your crime novel hero would be a funny guy too.
February 20th, 2022 05:11
Sonya.
Neville said:
this is so good, its better than breaking bad even & that was bloody great ....................... this is certainly your forte sir Rob ....... and no kiddin :)
February 19th, 2022 13:11
Neville said:
this is so good, its better than breaking bad even & that was bloody great ....................... this is certainly your forte sir Rob ....... and no kiddin :)
February 19th, 2022 13:11
The Last Ghost
Goldfinch60 said:
So many ghosts waiting in the graveyards, good write Paul.
Andy
February 19th, 2022 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
So many ghosts waiting in the graveyards, good write Paul.
Andy
February 19th, 2022 01:44
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