Comments received on poems by Paul Bell
The Journey
Neville said:
for so many bloomin reasons, this is some of the best prose I have clapped eyes on for quite a while Paul .. N :)
April 12th, 2022 09:41
Neville said:
for so many bloomin reasons, this is some of the best prose I have clapped eyes on for quite a while Paul .. N :)
April 12th, 2022 09:41
Wrong Body
Sophenia said:
Beautifully written Paul!!! I\'m glad I got to read it! It definitely shifted my perspective
April 11th, 2022 01:07
Sophenia said:
Beautifully written Paul!!! I\'m glad I got to read it! It definitely shifted my perspective
April 11th, 2022 01:07
The Little Black Book
Rozina said:
Really enjoyed reading your funny, creative story. I read a novel where the driverless car was programmed (by the owner husband) to kill the passenger (his wife) by driving into a wall or something. You could write a funny crime novel with this!
April 11th, 2022 00:42
Rozina said:
Really enjoyed reading your funny, creative story. I read a novel where the driverless car was programmed (by the owner husband) to kill the passenger (his wife) by driving into a wall or something. You could write a funny crime novel with this!
April 11th, 2022 00:42
The Little Black Book
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Don’t get me started on the cars of today. OMG!😂 Good humour here Paul. It really gave me a good chuckle😜Cheers🍻🕊🌞👍
April 9th, 2022 15:00
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Don’t get me started on the cars of today. OMG!😂 Good humour here Paul. It really gave me a good chuckle😜Cheers🍻🕊🌞👍
April 9th, 2022 15:00
The Little Black Book
LMTobin said:
I really enjoyed this. There was a strong rhythm that pulled me Into this new world nightmare.
Really good!
April 9th, 2022 14:41
LMTobin said:
I really enjoyed this. There was a strong rhythm that pulled me Into this new world nightmare.
Really good!
April 9th, 2022 14:41
The Little Black Book
dusk arising said:
Decree nisi granted on the grounds that Mrs X\'s coffee grinder was sharing a double socket power outlet with Mr Y\'s smoothie blender. Custody of the toasters, kettle and car charger cable to Mrs X.
Great imaginitive, creative writing - i had to join in with my little bit LOL because your piece really oiled my juices.
April 9th, 2022 10:40
dusk arising said:
Decree nisi granted on the grounds that Mrs X\'s coffee grinder was sharing a double socket power outlet with Mr Y\'s smoothie blender. Custody of the toasters, kettle and car charger cable to Mrs X.
Great imaginitive, creative writing - i had to join in with my little bit LOL because your piece really oiled my juices.
April 9th, 2022 10:40
Wrong Body
Bella Shepard said:
It\'s strange how we accept death, we plan for it, but we\'re never really ready for it. How can we be? We honor the lost one, and keep the memory alive. So well penned, thank you.
April 8th, 2022 14:23
Bella Shepard said:
It\'s strange how we accept death, we plan for it, but we\'re never really ready for it. How can we be? We honor the lost one, and keep the memory alive. So well penned, thank you.
April 8th, 2022 14:23
Wrong Body
dusk arising said:
This truly brings to the fore what beauty is all about.. our beauty is within and not the body we occupy.
So heartbreakingly sad when a beautiful person is taken by a physical ailment (for sake of a better word).
But if our path is to continue without their presence then so be it until such time as all will be revealed in another place.
Your words really soaked into me today. Thank you for sharing what looks like a very personal write.
April 8th, 2022 11:41
dusk arising said:
This truly brings to the fore what beauty is all about.. our beauty is within and not the body we occupy.
So heartbreakingly sad when a beautiful person is taken by a physical ailment (for sake of a better word).
But if our path is to continue without their presence then so be it until such time as all will be revealed in another place.
Your words really soaked into me today. Thank you for sharing what looks like a very personal write.
April 8th, 2022 11:41
The Outcast
Bella Shepard said:
The end of something, making something else stronger? It can be. Intriguing and thought provoking. Good write!
April 6th, 2022 13:45
Bella Shepard said:
The end of something, making something else stronger? It can be. Intriguing and thought provoking. Good write!
April 6th, 2022 13:45
The Outcast
Dahlia said:
nicely expressed
the sacrifices we make
enjoyed
Dahlia
April 6th, 2022 12:54
Dahlia said:
nicely expressed
the sacrifices we make
enjoyed
Dahlia
April 6th, 2022 12:54
The Face In The Crowd
Goldfinch60 said:
The trouble with time is that it can be so variable in our lives.
Andy
April 6th, 2022 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
The trouble with time is that it can be so variable in our lives.
Andy
April 6th, 2022 01:07
The Face In The Crowd
Rocky Lagou said:
I really don’t know many “gothic” poets here on MPS and I feel that the dark theme is quite interesting and almost losing its value. This was a great statement that proved that this style still works greatly. Well done!
April 5th, 2022 10:00
Rocky Lagou said:
I really don’t know many “gothic” poets here on MPS and I feel that the dark theme is quite interesting and almost losing its value. This was a great statement that proved that this style still works greatly. Well done!
April 5th, 2022 10:00
The Face In The Crowd
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, like I said before
you get published, I\'m buying
without even glimpsing
the tint of your cover, cos I just know
whatever its theme
it will be so well written...!
(this read
had me thinking of Oscar Wilde\'s
\'Dorian Gray\'
one of my favourite books\')
thank you, dear poet
April 5th, 2022 05:50
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, like I said before
you get published, I\'m buying
without even glimpsing
the tint of your cover, cos I just know
whatever its theme
it will be so well written...!
(this read
had me thinking of Oscar Wilde\'s
\'Dorian Gray\'
one of my favourite books\')
thank you, dear poet
April 5th, 2022 05:50
Autopsy.
Rocky Lagou said:
Yeah I agree with Teddy on this one. We\'re all being drained of our beings like a darn mop being wrung. Where\'s the humanity?
April 4th, 2022 13:02
Rocky Lagou said:
Yeah I agree with Teddy on this one. We\'re all being drained of our beings like a darn mop being wrung. Where\'s the humanity?
April 4th, 2022 13:02
Autopsy.
Bella Shepard said:
Very powerfully written! There is the autopsy of the dead and the living, metaphorically speaking, and I think you have captured this so well in your recurring refrain. Well done dear poet.
April 4th, 2022 11:00
Bella Shepard said:
Very powerfully written! There is the autopsy of the dead and the living, metaphorically speaking, and I think you have captured this so well in your recurring refrain. Well done dear poet.
April 4th, 2022 11:00
Autopsy.
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(crazy how some people, gag
at the thought of cutting-up
flesh and poking around
its, grimy inner workings..
then simultaneously, hail
Science\'s
life saving, Medicine
as their Progressive, new religion...
erm - Yeah, now
that\'s my definition
of a selective, Reality...)
lol
April 4th, 2022 06:38
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(crazy how some people, gag
at the thought of cutting-up
flesh and poking around
its, grimy inner workings..
then simultaneously, hail
Science\'s
life saving, Medicine
as their Progressive, new religion...
erm - Yeah, now
that\'s my definition
of a selective, Reality...)
lol
April 4th, 2022 06:38
Behind The Wire
spilleronsheet said:
Powerful poetry
Where justice speaks
The cries are heard
And the courageous strokes are made
Hats off dear Paul
April 2nd, 2022 14:46
spilleronsheet said:
Powerful poetry
Where justice speaks
The cries are heard
And the courageous strokes are made
Hats off dear Paul
April 2nd, 2022 14:46
Behind The Wire
Bella Shepard said:
Written with passion, and I think courage. Wonderful!
April 2nd, 2022 12:40
Bella Shepard said:
Written with passion, and I think courage. Wonderful!
April 2nd, 2022 12:40
Vampires Delight
Neville said:
.... more cerebral than many might at first imagine .. this has got everything a ghoul could possibly wish for and a few blokes too ....
March 31st, 2022 16:08
Neville said:
.... more cerebral than many might at first imagine .. this has got everything a ghoul could possibly wish for and a few blokes too ....
March 31st, 2022 16:08
Lost Without A soul
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
So relatable. Beautifully written words!
March 31st, 2022 14:35
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
So relatable. Beautifully written words!
March 31st, 2022 14:35
Vampires Delight
Bella Shepard said:
Cheeky, witty, and irresistibly clever. You\'ve hit the trifecta of excellence. Loved every naughty word!
March 31st, 2022 13:51
Bella Shepard said:
Cheeky, witty, and irresistibly clever. You\'ve hit the trifecta of excellence. Loved every naughty word!
March 31st, 2022 13:51
Vampires Delight
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow I love this vampire theme. I mean your poems are always so gritty and real and I enjoy that. Btw I can\'t help but mention that one line, \"come-sation.\" A witty genius we have.
March 31st, 2022 08:27
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow I love this vampire theme. I mean your poems are always so gritty and real and I enjoy that. Btw I can\'t help but mention that one line, \"come-sation.\" A witty genius we have.
March 31st, 2022 08:27
Vampires Delight
L. B. Mek said:
\'Do you fancy doing it in the shower?
Did you see Psycho?\'
(No! I\'m Dead
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
thanks to you,
I\'m a percent closer
to dreaming of a six pack)
thank you! dear poet
ahhh, that line killed me
🤣
March 31st, 2022 05:36
L. B. Mek said:
\'Do you fancy doing it in the shower?
Did you see Psycho?\'
(No! I\'m Dead
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
thanks to you,
I\'m a percent closer
to dreaming of a six pack)
thank you! dear poet
ahhh, that line killed me
🤣
March 31st, 2022 05:36
Three In The Morning
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Paul.
For me three in the morning is the time I awake and the answer to a question comes to me that I have been tying to get answered all day.
Andy
March 31st, 2022 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Paul.
For me three in the morning is the time I awake and the answer to a question comes to me that I have been tying to get answered all day.
Andy
March 31st, 2022 00:37
Three In The Morning
Bella Shepard said:
Your waking at three in the morning truly sets the stage. Early morning seems to be a more vulnerable time, given what is going on in the brain and circulatory system, for people to suffer a heart attack. An attack of the heart can come in many forms. You have expressed that so poignantly.
March 30th, 2022 10:20
Bella Shepard said:
Your waking at three in the morning truly sets the stage. Early morning seems to be a more vulnerable time, given what is going on in the brain and circulatory system, for people to suffer a heart attack. An attack of the heart can come in many forms. You have expressed that so poignantly.
March 30th, 2022 10:20
Three In The Morning
Rocky Lagou said:
Shucks. A sad ending. It was short-lived but may there be many more dalliances to come.
March 30th, 2022 08:58
Rocky Lagou said:
Shucks. A sad ending. It was short-lived but may there be many more dalliances to come.
March 30th, 2022 08:58
Forever Young
Doggerel Dave said:
Feels like bonking in bed is bad for you. Wot about behind the altar or the choir loft?
March 28th, 2022 19:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Feels like bonking in bed is bad for you. Wot about behind the altar or the choir loft?
March 28th, 2022 19:42
Forever Young
Rocky Lagou said:
Oh you witty Paul! I mean it truly seems like this man cares though, most men are slaves to sex.
March 28th, 2022 13:08
Rocky Lagou said:
Oh you witty Paul! I mean it truly seems like this man cares though, most men are slaves to sex.
March 28th, 2022 13:08
Forever Young
Paul Bell said:
I\'m thinking of coming back as a Priest. It\'s like the gossip is piped into you.
March 28th, 2022 06:35
Paul Bell said:
I\'m thinking of coming back as a Priest. It\'s like the gossip is piped into you.
March 28th, 2022 06:35
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