Comments received on poems by Paul Bell
The Vultures Dance
Doggerel Dave said:
Visceral, Paul - Where did that come from?
September 26th, 2025 06:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Visceral, Paul - Where did that come from?
September 26th, 2025 06:57
The Night Dancer
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Paul, what a piece. The beauty, the longing, the repetition...all suspended under that constant shadow of death breaking in. It’s tender and tragic, radiant and ruined, a dance both intimate and impossible. Stunning work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 23rd, 2025 07:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Paul, what a piece. The beauty, the longing, the repetition...all suspended under that constant shadow of death breaking in. It’s tender and tragic, radiant and ruined, a dance both intimate and impossible. Stunning work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 23rd, 2025 07:53
The Night Dancer
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting and eerie this poem speaks out of darkness unveiling as the dancer herself its message. Dark as death it carries with it a voyeuristic sense of satisfaction and the frustration of interruption. A wonderful write. Loved it
September 23rd, 2025 07:35
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting and eerie this poem speaks out of darkness unveiling as the dancer herself its message. Dark as death it carries with it a voyeuristic sense of satisfaction and the frustration of interruption. A wonderful write. Loved it
September 23rd, 2025 07:35
Mummy
Fred1794 said:
Your poems read like a British sitcom. Very entertaining.
September 17th, 2025 20:36
Fred1794 said:
Your poems read like a British sitcom. Very entertaining.
September 17th, 2025 20:36
Bins
Doggerel Dave said:
Keep \'em coming Paul, particularly if the topic is as serious as this....
In our block of flats, I live upstairs. Bloke downstairs got bin duty. I must admit he does always look a bit frayed around the edges..... I try to avoid him - always got some story about the bins and his back, or idiots who put the wrong stuff in the wrong bin... obviously hasn\'t found Julie\'s phone number yet....
September 17th, 2025 19:15
Doggerel Dave said:
Keep \'em coming Paul, particularly if the topic is as serious as this....
In our block of flats, I live upstairs. Bloke downstairs got bin duty. I must admit he does always look a bit frayed around the edges..... I try to avoid him - always got some story about the bins and his back, or idiots who put the wrong stuff in the wrong bin... obviously hasn\'t found Julie\'s phone number yet....
September 17th, 2025 19:15
Bins
sorenbarrett said:
Good pick of topic. The bins are getting smaller and smaller so that they can charge extra for what used to be a regular pick up. A fun read
September 17th, 2025 18:11
sorenbarrett said:
Good pick of topic. The bins are getting smaller and smaller so that they can charge extra for what used to be a regular pick up. A fun read
September 17th, 2025 18:11
Bins
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
✨Hilariously, dark comedy at its finest! The bins and Mr. Bell’s reactions make it surreal and funny. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 17:25
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
✨Hilariously, dark comedy at its finest! The bins and Mr. Bell’s reactions make it surreal and funny. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 17:25
Mummy
Doggerel Dave said:
The family - Society\'s primary unit of socialisation...........
August 27th, 2025 15:52
Doggerel Dave said:
The family - Society\'s primary unit of socialisation...........
August 27th, 2025 15:52
Mummy
sorenbarrett said:
This one is so close to real that it makes it hard to laugh but so well written it gets a fave
August 27th, 2025 15:52
sorenbarrett said:
This one is so close to real that it makes it hard to laugh but so well written it gets a fave
August 27th, 2025 15:52
Dolly
Doggerel Dave said:
Maybe the child shouldn\'t be there anyway....hardly her fault though...
PS: Like the new straight from the shoulder stuff, but wouldn\'t mind a salting of the old schtick occasionally - I need a good laugh sometimes....
August 18th, 2025 16:56
Doggerel Dave said:
Maybe the child shouldn\'t be there anyway....hardly her fault though...
PS: Like the new straight from the shoulder stuff, but wouldn\'t mind a salting of the old schtick occasionally - I need a good laugh sometimes....
August 18th, 2025 16:56
Dolly
Poetic Licence said:
This is packed with raw emotion and real sadness, a child`s view on living through war, the reality of it and what becomes normal to the child. Very nicely crafted write.
August 18th, 2025 15:41
Poetic Licence said:
This is packed with raw emotion and real sadness, a child`s view on living through war, the reality of it and what becomes normal to the child. Very nicely crafted write.
August 18th, 2025 15:41
Dolly
sorenbarrett said:
The horrors of war seen through the eyes of a child so accustomed to death that anything short of maimed was not normal. A tragic and sad write. Nicely done with hard hitting emotion
August 18th, 2025 15:36
sorenbarrett said:
The horrors of war seen through the eyes of a child so accustomed to death that anything short of maimed was not normal. A tragic and sad write. Nicely done with hard hitting emotion
August 18th, 2025 15:36
Final Fall
Poetic Licence said:
A tragic and sad tail but so well crafted and written, nicely done
August 17th, 2025 09:44
Poetic Licence said:
A tragic and sad tail but so well crafted and written, nicely done
August 17th, 2025 09:44
Final Fall
sorenbarrett said:
In short bites the poem is eaten and digested. Bit by bit differences are spit out and the commonalities outweighed by the dissimilarity tips the scale. A tragic read and uniquely presented. Loved it a fave
August 17th, 2025 07:33
sorenbarrett said:
In short bites the poem is eaten and digested. Bit by bit differences are spit out and the commonalities outweighed by the dissimilarity tips the scale. A tragic read and uniquely presented. Loved it a fave
August 17th, 2025 07:33
Enterprising Girl
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely crafted humourous write, enjoyed the read
August 16th, 2025 17:59
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely crafted humourous write, enjoyed the read
August 16th, 2025 17:59
Enterprising Girl
sorenbarrett said:
Clever rhyming in a most humorous poem. A fun read.
August 16th, 2025 17:40
sorenbarrett said:
Clever rhyming in a most humorous poem. A fun read.
August 16th, 2025 17:40
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