Comments received on poems by Paul Bell
The Room. (It\'s that time again.)
orchidee said:
Oohh, I shouldn\'t go in that room, gal. Sounds like a bad hair day to me. lol.
October 9th, 2022 08:57
orchidee said:
Oohh, I shouldn\'t go in that room, gal. Sounds like a bad hair day to me. lol.
October 9th, 2022 08:57
No Looking Back
arqios said:
Never really got around this in my head. A shrink would probably say that it has to do with my parents\' imperfect relationship. So an affair is like taking leave of one\'s senses for a somewhat momentary period and eventually come back to one\'s senses else it wouldn\'t be an \'affair\' and be some other form of infidelity. It seems a strange category, perhaps that shrouds it in mystery and thus makes a very useful topic to write about. Thanks for sharing.
October 9th, 2022 08:44
arqios said:
Never really got around this in my head. A shrink would probably say that it has to do with my parents\' imperfect relationship. So an affair is like taking leave of one\'s senses for a somewhat momentary period and eventually come back to one\'s senses else it wouldn\'t be an \'affair\' and be some other form of infidelity. It seems a strange category, perhaps that shrouds it in mystery and thus makes a very useful topic to write about. Thanks for sharing.
October 9th, 2022 08:44
The Room. (It\'s that time again.)
Harsh_Raj said:
I literally got shivers while reading this. Amazing work dude.
October 9th, 2022 05:35
Harsh_Raj said:
I literally got shivers while reading this. Amazing work dude.
October 9th, 2022 05:35
The 49 Bus
Cheeky Missy said:
[Having read this aloud to my close friend (poetry is, perforce, supposed to be read aloud for best compression and indulgence) she quipped \"Okay..?\"]
Lovely little essay. Reminiscent of the perhaps lesser known tale titled \" I Saw Goolie Fly,\" it\'s thought-provoking. Were we likewise supposed to rewatch the movie Speed again at this juncture? No. That is hardly related.
Remember the psalmist\'s cry, \"...oh that I had the wings of a dove! Then would I fly away and be at rest--\" eh?
Or just a bit of reckless musing?
Thank you for sharing.
October 8th, 2022 21:35
Cheeky Missy said:
[Having read this aloud to my close friend (poetry is, perforce, supposed to be read aloud for best compression and indulgence) she quipped \"Okay..?\"]
Lovely little essay. Reminiscent of the perhaps lesser known tale titled \" I Saw Goolie Fly,\" it\'s thought-provoking. Were we likewise supposed to rewatch the movie Speed again at this juncture? No. That is hardly related.
Remember the psalmist\'s cry, \"...oh that I had the wings of a dove! Then would I fly away and be at rest--\" eh?
Or just a bit of reckless musing?
Thank you for sharing.
October 8th, 2022 21:35
The 49 Bus
orchidee said:
Ahh, will that be the 49 bus to Mars and back?! Good write Paul. lol.
October 8th, 2022 11:05
orchidee said:
Ahh, will that be the 49 bus to Mars and back?! Good write Paul. lol.
October 8th, 2022 11:05
Secret Lady
Bella Shepard said:
As I read I could feel the mysterious enchantment in each line. What could have been, that slipped away. Beautifully and lovingly penned my dear friend.
October 2nd, 2022 11:19
Bella Shepard said:
As I read I could feel the mysterious enchantment in each line. What could have been, that slipped away. Beautifully and lovingly penned my dear friend.
October 2nd, 2022 11:19
Secret Lady
bellflower said:
A beautiful composition and a sincere try to know the secret lady....but you gave up before you know the secret saying her goodbye....a heartfelt emotional poem.
October 2nd, 2022 09:54
bellflower said:
A beautiful composition and a sincere try to know the secret lady....but you gave up before you know the secret saying her goodbye....a heartfelt emotional poem.
October 2nd, 2022 09:54
Secret Lady
Fay Slimm. said:
A gem of penned lament for lost lady of beauty - great piece of heart-tugging poetry Paul and thanks for posting it.
October 2nd, 2022 05:58
Fay Slimm. said:
A gem of penned lament for lost lady of beauty - great piece of heart-tugging poetry Paul and thanks for posting it.
October 2nd, 2022 05:58
No Looking Back
Goldfinch60 said:
In life you must always look forward Paul.
Andy
October 2nd, 2022 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
In life you must always look forward Paul.
Andy
October 2nd, 2022 01:38
Odds
Bella Shepard said:
I must say that you gave me a wry smile with this one. You always offer something new and, dare I say unexpected, in the most delightful way. Thank you!
September 30th, 2022 15:33
Bella Shepard said:
I must say that you gave me a wry smile with this one. You always offer something new and, dare I say unexpected, in the most delightful way. Thank you!
September 30th, 2022 15:33
Odds
Doggerel Dave said:
I think Teddy\'s right - I think we should gently tiptoe round it....
Steady Paul.....
September 30th, 2022 08:39
Doggerel Dave said:
I think Teddy\'s right - I think we should gently tiptoe round it....
Steady Paul.....
September 30th, 2022 08:39
Brad and Sally
Doggerel Dave said:
Ran through the tenses there didn\'t ya? Understandable really - You\'re going to get yourself into trouble one day, son . Tact and diplomacy wasn\'t in the mix woz it? LObloodyL
You embody \'That\'s Entertainment\' Paul.
September 29th, 2022 00:33
Doggerel Dave said:
Ran through the tenses there didn\'t ya? Understandable really - You\'re going to get yourself into trouble one day, son . Tact and diplomacy wasn\'t in the mix woz it? LObloodyL
You embody \'That\'s Entertainment\' Paul.
September 29th, 2022 00:33
Brad and Sally
Paul Bell said:
Glad I made your journey home fun. Were you laughing cos you\'ve done this.
September 28th, 2022 16:38
Paul Bell said:
Glad I made your journey home fun. Were you laughing cos you\'ve done this.
September 28th, 2022 16:38
Brad and Sally
orchidee said:
I was gonna swoon, but they didn\'t get that far. Fido never lets me have \'excitement\' anyway! lol.
September 28th, 2022 06:07
orchidee said:
I was gonna swoon, but they didn\'t get that far. Fido never lets me have \'excitement\' anyway! lol.
September 28th, 2022 06:07
The Conversation
Ryszard said:
I felt for both antagonists and the banter felt real, unforced, and fresh. This is a conversation between people that really like each other (if not love each other).
September 27th, 2022 17:39
Ryszard said:
I felt for both antagonists and the banter felt real, unforced, and fresh. This is a conversation between people that really like each other (if not love each other).
September 27th, 2022 17:39
The Conversation
Doggerel Dave said:
Kudos for the civilized way that was achieved ....no legal eagles making a fortune...You need to be a marriage councilor, Paul; Oh, I see - you are already....
September 27th, 2022 05:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Kudos for the civilized way that was achieved ....no legal eagles making a fortune...You need to be a marriage councilor, Paul; Oh, I see - you are already....
September 27th, 2022 05:02
Vodka& Coke
Doggerel Dave said:
Another bent conversation you do so well Paul, which has certain insights into human nature.... I\'ll find them in a minute ....they behind the bar? ...in the ceiling cavity...? They are very close and I do value them muchly.
September 25th, 2022 07:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Another bent conversation you do so well Paul, which has certain insights into human nature.... I\'ll find them in a minute ....they behind the bar? ...in the ceiling cavity...? They are very close and I do value them muchly.
September 25th, 2022 07:09
Queens and Kings.
Goldfinch60 said:
that is the one certainty in all our lives Paul.
Andy
September 20th, 2022 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
that is the one certainty in all our lives Paul.
Andy
September 20th, 2022 01:29
Queens and Kings.
Doggerel Dave said:
And so it does, Paul - my point precisely.
September 19th, 2022 06:19
Doggerel Dave said:
And so it does, Paul - my point precisely.
September 19th, 2022 06:19
The Game. Part 1.
Doggerel Dave said:
Let\'s see parts 2....3? - though I wouldn\'t put it past you, Paul to just leave us hanging.... 🙂
September 12th, 2022 08:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Let\'s see parts 2....3? - though I wouldn\'t put it past you, Paul to just leave us hanging.... 🙂
September 12th, 2022 08:10
Touched By An Angel
Doggerel Dave said:
Although I\'m no fan of magical realism Paul, you\'ve got a talent for the prose and it kept me engaged to the end - give it more of a go.
September 10th, 2022 20:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Although I\'m no fan of magical realism Paul, you\'ve got a talent for the prose and it kept me engaged to the end - give it more of a go.
September 10th, 2022 20:02
The Reunion
shaa said:
I hope there\'s a sequel to this, literally scrolled till I couldn\'t anymore. Also I want that voodoo doll 😅. I enjoyed this, great work
September 5th, 2022 17:18
shaa said:
I hope there\'s a sequel to this, literally scrolled till I couldn\'t anymore. Also I want that voodoo doll 😅. I enjoyed this, great work
September 5th, 2022 17:18
The Reunion
Bella Shepard said:
I thought the story line engaging and wonderfully sentimental. As always, I want to know how they ended up, because there\'s a sequel here. Thank you for such a lovely read!
September 5th, 2022 12:54
Bella Shepard said:
I thought the story line engaging and wonderfully sentimental. As always, I want to know how they ended up, because there\'s a sequel here. Thank you for such a lovely read!
September 5th, 2022 12:54
Nelson
Doggerel Dave said:
Never mind, Paul I\'m sure that out there, somewhere, there\'s someone with whom you can associate in perfect harmony, abandon the poetry lark, put on the jolly old carpet slippers and know tranquility.... 😀 😀 😀
September 4th, 2022 07:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Never mind, Paul I\'m sure that out there, somewhere, there\'s someone with whom you can associate in perfect harmony, abandon the poetry lark, put on the jolly old carpet slippers and know tranquility.... 😀 😀 😀
September 4th, 2022 07:34
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