Comments received on poems by Paul Bell
Forever Young
L. B. Mek said:
\'After that, did you not say it was out of this world.
I could have said anything, I was still traumatised.\'
(with your brilliant, rib tickling humour
book ending, my work week
all I can do, is smile - wide
count my lucky, cats
and thank you! oh kind Poet)
March 28th, 2022 06:32
L. B. Mek said:
\'After that, did you not say it was out of this world.
I could have said anything, I was still traumatised.\'
(with your brilliant, rib tickling humour
book ending, my work week
all I can do, is smile - wide
count my lucky, cats
and thank you! oh kind Poet)
March 28th, 2022 06:32
Lost Without A soul
Bella Shepard said:
Despair, tinged with a little hope for the lost soul? Very thoughtfully written.
March 27th, 2022 07:02
Bella Shepard said:
Despair, tinged with a little hope for the lost soul? Very thoughtfully written.
March 27th, 2022 07:02
The Death Train
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words. Yes we are all on the death train and I have been on it for a long time but mine will never come to an end.
Andy
March 26th, 2022 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words. Yes we are all on the death train and I have been on it for a long time but mine will never come to an end.
Andy
March 26th, 2022 01:50
The Dream
rrodriguez said:
This is quite a dream. If it would happen, perhaps the world would be different. As of now, the dream is percolating in dreamland to be resurrected to reality or maybe not. Excellent work!
March 25th, 2022 13:18
rrodriguez said:
This is quite a dream. If it would happen, perhaps the world would be different. As of now, the dream is percolating in dreamland to be resurrected to reality or maybe not. Excellent work!
March 25th, 2022 13:18
The Death Train
dusk arising said:
Sadly there are no platform tickets to watch the train depart. We take our seat and hope the view from our window covers a full life\'s worth before we are shunted into the terminus.
March 25th, 2022 07:22
dusk arising said:
Sadly there are no platform tickets to watch the train depart. We take our seat and hope the view from our window covers a full life\'s worth before we are shunted into the terminus.
March 25th, 2022 07:22
The Death Train
L. B. Mek said:
I wonder what Rabelais, found
after crossing over, in his journey
to find, existences \'great perhaps\'
...
a part of me - soberly, knows already
he probably found your train, dear Poet
\'You see the sign before you
To be or not to be
The answer was the question
The conductor says with glee\'
indeed!
March 25th, 2022 06:39
L. B. Mek said:
I wonder what Rabelais, found
after crossing over, in his journey
to find, existences \'great perhaps\'
...
a part of me - soberly, knows already
he probably found your train, dear Poet
\'You see the sign before you
To be or not to be
The answer was the question
The conductor says with glee\'
indeed!
March 25th, 2022 06:39
Comfort and Joy
Neville said:
You were a very norty boy .. & it aint hard to see that there\'s more than just a little bit of residual lingering, just waiting to .......... :)
March 23rd, 2022 14:11
Neville said:
You were a very norty boy .. & it aint hard to see that there\'s more than just a little bit of residual lingering, just waiting to .......... :)
March 23rd, 2022 14:11
Comfort and Joy
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful fun write Paul.
I must remember not to come your way.
Andy
March 23rd, 2022 02:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful fun write Paul.
I must remember not to come your way.
Andy
March 23rd, 2022 02:08
The Toaster
Doggerel Dave said:
Gotta be a brown toaster. Something to grade your toast with.
Some relationships thrive on a bit of to and fro (or fro and to if you must) Keeps the heart pumping...
March 23rd, 2022 01:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Gotta be a brown toaster. Something to grade your toast with.
Some relationships thrive on a bit of to and fro (or fro and to if you must) Keeps the heart pumping...
March 23rd, 2022 01:02
Comfort and Joy
Doggerel Dave said:
Attachment - what a burden, what a curse.... a shed, a daughter..... a life curdled by these two. Still, you did your best to liberate him, Paul - no one could have asked more of you than that.
March 22nd, 2022 20:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Attachment - what a burden, what a curse.... a shed, a daughter..... a life curdled by these two. Still, you did your best to liberate him, Paul - no one could have asked more of you than that.
March 22nd, 2022 20:24
Comfort and Joy
Gingerpoetryman said:
A pretty funny poem, great job.
Just kind of inconvenient timing, right when I upload a poem about my grandad dying last weekend but hey! What can ya do?
March 22nd, 2022 14:19
Gingerpoetryman said:
A pretty funny poem, great job.
Just kind of inconvenient timing, right when I upload a poem about my grandad dying last weekend but hey! What can ya do?
March 22nd, 2022 14:19
The Toaster
Goldfinch60 said:
God fun write Paul, some relationships can be a bit up and down.
I have a red toaster if you would like it to go with your decor.
Andy
March 22nd, 2022 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
God fun write Paul, some relationships can be a bit up and down.
I have a red toaster if you would like it to go with your decor.
Andy
March 22nd, 2022 01:51
The Toaster
dusk arising said:
Love it. Underneath it all lies the idiocy of our mixed feelings in a relationship but here srved up like a true sitcom.
Youre very talented, a joy to read. (dont tell Teddy but I make my own marmalade).
March 21st, 2022 19:10
dusk arising said:
Love it. Underneath it all lies the idiocy of our mixed feelings in a relationship but here srved up like a true sitcom.
Youre very talented, a joy to read. (dont tell Teddy but I make my own marmalade).
March 21st, 2022 19:10
The Toaster
Bella Shepard said:
I love the way you\'ve portray the serve and volley nature of this relationship. Love your biting wit, nicely done.
March 21st, 2022 14:00
Bella Shepard said:
I love the way you\'ve portray the serve and volley nature of this relationship. Love your biting wit, nicely done.
March 21st, 2022 14:00
The Dream
Neville said:
I feel sure that there are many out there who are keeping their fingers crossed and hoping that that dream was really a premonition .... N
March 20th, 2022 02:58
Neville said:
I feel sure that there are many out there who are keeping their fingers crossed and hoping that that dream was really a premonition .... N
March 20th, 2022 02:58
The Dream
Bella Shepard said:
Eerie, haunting as dreams can be, a premonition that is hard to shake. Would that a dream could do the deed. Great write!
March 19th, 2022 12:40
Bella Shepard said:
Eerie, haunting as dreams can be, a premonition that is hard to shake. Would that a dream could do the deed. Great write!
March 19th, 2022 12:40
The Dream
Michael Edwards said:
I found this such an emotive read and despite my best humsnist beliefs I found myself hoping it would come to pass.
March 19th, 2022 08:36
Michael Edwards said:
I found this such an emotive read and despite my best humsnist beliefs I found myself hoping it would come to pass.
March 19th, 2022 08:36
The Past
Bella Shepard said:
Loves, relationships are what life is built upon. They touch us, shape us, and always leave their shadow. Hopefully time helps us put things in perspective. A wonderful read!
March 16th, 2022 12:27
Bella Shepard said:
Loves, relationships are what life is built upon. They touch us, shape us, and always leave their shadow. Hopefully time helps us put things in perspective. A wonderful read!
March 16th, 2022 12:27
The Past
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow! I think that is the most clever and vivid analogy of a lost love that I\'ve ever seen. The way love will always be in the middle, but if the third floor is walked upon, it\'ll just be a \"thing of the past.\" Bravo!
March 16th, 2022 08:48
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow! I think that is the most clever and vivid analogy of a lost love that I\'ve ever seen. The way love will always be in the middle, but if the third floor is walked upon, it\'ll just be a \"thing of the past.\" Bravo!
March 16th, 2022 08:48
VPL
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes! This is gold Paul. I love the conversational style of your poems and they\'re always so witty! ✨
March 14th, 2022 13:28
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes! This is gold Paul. I love the conversational style of your poems and they\'re always so witty! ✨
March 14th, 2022 13:28
VPL
Doggerel Dave said:
A larf a minute....no hang on.....more frequent than that...
Being an innocent (yeh?) I was forced to look up VPL.... and this sent me down a rabbit.. well you know wot I mean... not sure I\'m the same man I woz when I emerged (pretty sure you are)----- : bracketed sections save you in response time, Paul...
March 13th, 2022 20:15
Doggerel Dave said:
A larf a minute....no hang on.....more frequent than that...
Being an innocent (yeh?) I was forced to look up VPL.... and this sent me down a rabbit.. well you know wot I mean... not sure I\'m the same man I woz when I emerged (pretty sure you are)----- : bracketed sections save you in response time, Paul...
March 13th, 2022 20:15
VPL
Neville said:
If you keep these coming Paul, then I for one will keep on visiting your pages as posted .. Your sense of humour, timing and observational skills are second to none ............................... send cheque or postal order to .......... :)
March 13th, 2022 07:54
Neville said:
If you keep these coming Paul, then I for one will keep on visiting your pages as posted .. Your sense of humour, timing and observational skills are second to none ............................... send cheque or postal order to .......... :)
March 13th, 2022 07:54
The Fridge
Neville said:
gotta larf tho dont ya squire ...
reminds me of my very own \'Alphabetical Infidelities\' but with beer and a fridge taking the lead roles ....................................... :)
March 6th, 2022 06:52
Neville said:
gotta larf tho dont ya squire ...
reminds me of my very own \'Alphabetical Infidelities\' but with beer and a fridge taking the lead roles ....................................... :)
March 6th, 2022 06:52
The Fridge
Palebluecardigan said:
Haha, the first humorous poem I read, and already love this category thanks to you!!
March 6th, 2022 04:42
Palebluecardigan said:
Haha, the first humorous poem I read, and already love this category thanks to you!!
March 6th, 2022 04:42
The Fridge
Doggerel Dave said:
I kept up with the fridge (I think...) Seemed safest. But wot about the beer?
March 5th, 2022 21:48
Doggerel Dave said:
I kept up with the fridge (I think...) Seemed safest. But wot about the beer?
March 5th, 2022 21:48
The Fridge
Rozina said:
Yes I agree Teddy, she can keep the fridge! Thanks Paul for a good laugh in the morning.
March 5th, 2022 18:34
Rozina said:
Yes I agree Teddy, she can keep the fridge! Thanks Paul for a good laugh in the morning.
March 5th, 2022 18:34
The Ghost Train
Rozina said:
This is truly a piece of dark humour. I enjoyed your great lines.
March 4th, 2022 00:29
Rozina said:
This is truly a piece of dark humour. I enjoyed your great lines.
March 4th, 2022 00:29
The Ghost Train
spilleronsheet said:
Engulfed is the harshest tales of the life that fate weaves…humour it maybe, but tragedy in another kind… a story though with no happy ending in life…witty poetry dear Paul
March 3rd, 2022 19:39
spilleronsheet said:
Engulfed is the harshest tales of the life that fate weaves…humour it maybe, but tragedy in another kind… a story though with no happy ending in life…witty poetry dear Paul
March 3rd, 2022 19:39
The Ghost Train
Rocky Lagou said:
L.B. Mek said this best, \"dark humor.\" All the ups and downs of life and the evolution of character. Great poem and I hope the next stop is soon to come for I\'ll be staying by the subway station from now on, I\'m scared of ghosts. 😅💖
March 3rd, 2022 10:07
Rocky Lagou said:
L.B. Mek said this best, \"dark humor.\" All the ups and downs of life and the evolution of character. Great poem and I hope the next stop is soon to come for I\'ll be staying by the subway station from now on, I\'m scared of ghosts. 😅💖
March 3rd, 2022 10:07
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