Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Corpses
orchidee said:

\'Tis what I give KP for tea time - line 2. lol.

July 14th, 2024 09:15

Corpses
2781 said:

You prophesying now.

July 14th, 2024 07:49

Corpses
Cassie58 said:

This four line poem paints a horror story which breaks the heart. Tragic.

July 14th, 2024 07:13

Corpses
Maplespal said:

the flies are born
because a child has died
while the parents morn
life\'s circle is applied.

July 14th, 2024 06:43

Become what is not
Teddy.15 said:

I see a glass half empty soon to be full. Brilliant imagery and emotion dear sorrenbarret 🌹

July 14th, 2024 03:12

Become what is not
Goldfinch60 said:

That life will be always with us soren.

Andy

July 14th, 2024 01:24

Become what is not
Bella Shepard said:

Love the juxtaposition in these lines, beautifully penned!

July 13th, 2024 11:44

Become what is not
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

July 13th, 2024 10:23

Cold rain
Thomas W Case said:

Great use of the senses. I felt this.

July 12th, 2024 18:21

Cold rain
Cassie58 said:

Beautifully conveyed. Touches the emotions and tells a story about relationships in stormy weather.

July 12th, 2024 15:39

Cold rain
orchidee said:

Ooh not yet, thanks. We\'re in Summer in the UK. lol.

July 12th, 2024 11:29

Cold rain
Teddy.15 said:

Beautiful, your emotion and imagery just beautiful. 🌹

July 12th, 2024 11:10

Cold rain
2781 said:

Did you see the weather report, down here.

July 12th, 2024 08:25

I once had a coat
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words soren, it may be gone but it is within your memory.

Andy

July 12th, 2024 01:12

I once had a coat
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work.

July 11th, 2024 22:52

I once had a coat
Teddy.15 said:

Gone by in a flash, but I saw it all. Stunning dear sorrenbarret 🌹

July 11th, 2024 10:41

I once had a coat
orchidee said:

Good write SB. I want one! lol.

July 11th, 2024 09:42

Words of smoke
Goldfinch60 said:

Those billowing emotions will always rise with the smoke soren.

Andy

July 11th, 2024 01:19

Words of smoke
Dan Williams said:

Short, but the message is clear.

July 11th, 2024 00:25

Words of smoke
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work.

July 10th, 2024 14:15

Words of smoke
Teddy.15 said:

A fight between two, even when the heart pounds sadness and disappointment at the end of the day the air is cleared. Truly beautiful and speaks loud and clear to me. 🌹

July 10th, 2024 08:34

Words of smoke
orchidee said:

Well, I want to breathe in fresh air, not 2781\'s air! lol.
KP is full of hot air, not thin air. lol.

July 10th, 2024 07:35

Words of smoke
2781 said:

Breath in the good shit
Breath out the bullshit! X

July 10th, 2024 06:31

Twilight Man
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

July 10th, 2024 00:18

Twilight Man
Teddy.15 said:

Beautiful, dear sorrenbarret beautiful. 🌹 I absolutely love your last stanza

July 9th, 2024 10:43

Twilight Man
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

July 9th, 2024 10:23

Leaves
2781 said:

Bringing forth his fruit in his season...

July 8th, 2024 09:24

Leaves
Goldfinch60 said:

Such fine true words soren.

Andy

July 8th, 2024 01:21

Leaves
Teddy.15 said:

Picture perfect, the world is filled with different colour and shape and size leaves, a metaphor stunning on my eyes. 🌹

July 7th, 2024 16:42

Leaves
Doggerel Dave said:

Leaves = poems....\'some dead, some alive\' says it all . Thanks Soren.

July 7th, 2024 16:28

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