Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
We are all one
Kevin Hulme said:
Reminds me of \'Breath of Caesar\'.
Another Fave.
March 20th, 2026 20:05
Kevin Hulme said:
Reminds me of \'Breath of Caesar\'.
Another Fave.
March 20th, 2026 20:05
We are all one
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren this carries both scale and weight…moving from distant stars to shared atoms, then grounding it in bone and blood. “Atoms shed from bodies of the dead” really anchors that idea. It leaves me thinking about how connected everything truly is. Fantastic write and a fave.🌹🖤🙏🕯️
March 20th, 2026 10:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren this carries both scale and weight…moving from distant stars to shared atoms, then grounding it in bone and blood. “Atoms shed from bodies of the dead” really anchors that idea. It leaves me thinking about how connected everything truly is. Fantastic write and a fave.🌹🖤🙏🕯️
March 20th, 2026 10:03
We are all one
Demar Desu said:
The other day a person told me we all are breathing the same air recycled from centuries and now… great poem to reflect our interconnection
March 20th, 2026 08:22
Demar Desu said:
The other day a person told me we all are breathing the same air recycled from centuries and now… great poem to reflect our interconnection
March 20th, 2026 08:22
Adrift
RSM0812 said:
This poem reminds me of taking a beating from the nature of the world but yet getting another chance to get back on healed feet and begin anew. Nice ✍️
March 20th, 2026 06:27
RSM0812 said:
This poem reminds me of taking a beating from the nature of the world but yet getting another chance to get back on healed feet and begin anew. Nice ✍️
March 20th, 2026 06:27
We are all one
Carmen Luca said:
Beautiful reflections. Maybe we are star dust temporarily clumped together in human form, too focused on the separation from other beings.
March 20th, 2026 04:17
Carmen Luca said:
Beautiful reflections. Maybe we are star dust temporarily clumped together in human form, too focused on the separation from other beings.
March 20th, 2026 04:17
We are all one
orchidee said:
Yes, KP\'s just a pile of dust. \'Who you calling a pile of dust?\' she asks me! lol.
March 20th, 2026 03:38
orchidee said:
Yes, KP\'s just a pile of dust. \'Who you calling a pile of dust?\' she asks me! lol.
March 20th, 2026 03:38
Cuts
Goldfinch60 said:
Those cuts in our life may always be there soren but in life they teach us how to move on in a better way.
Andy
March 20th, 2026 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Those cuts in our life may always be there soren but in life they teach us how to move on in a better way.
Andy
March 20th, 2026 02:19
Cuts
Kevin Hulme said:
Is there an equal balance between Good and Bad Memories? Depends on the person.
Maybe we focus on the Bad ones
Nice one again.
March 19th, 2026 19:23
Kevin Hulme said:
Is there an equal balance between Good and Bad Memories? Depends on the person.
Maybe we focus on the Bad ones
Nice one again.
March 19th, 2026 19:23
Cuts
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this carries a raw, physical sense of pain…from “shells of memory’s beaches” to those scars worn as trophies. It feels like movement through damage rather than away from it. And by the end…“Blood long dried seals pain inside” just closes it in. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 19th, 2026 10:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this carries a raw, physical sense of pain…from “shells of memory’s beaches” to those scars worn as trophies. It feels like movement through damage rather than away from it. And by the end…“Blood long dried seals pain inside” just closes it in. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 19th, 2026 10:25
Cuts
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I wondered if this would be about people \'cutting up\', which makes me shudder if reading anything on that theme.
March 19th, 2026 03:21
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I wondered if this would be about people \'cutting up\', which makes me shudder if reading anything on that theme.
March 19th, 2026 03:21
Enlightenment
Teddy.15 said:
Even in your last two lines a lesson so great for all to learn in this rollercoaster of life. Kudos! Love the creativity in the layout and the highlights in the words so very important, literally a tool box in a poem dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
March 18th, 2026 16:53
Teddy.15 said:
Even in your last two lines a lesson so great for all to learn in this rollercoaster of life. Kudos! Love the creativity in the layout and the highlights in the words so very important, literally a tool box in a poem dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
March 18th, 2026 16:53
Enlightenment
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t know how you find the time Soren, but clearly a tribute is applicable here.
March 18th, 2026 16:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t know how you find the time Soren, but clearly a tribute is applicable here.
March 18th, 2026 16:07
Enlightenment
Demar Desu said:
“In poverty one becomes rich” you must have been reading my poetry lately LOL. I definitely enjoy this poem though, great job. Interesting choice of font
March 18th, 2026 10:33
Demar Desu said:
“In poverty one becomes rich” you must have been reading my poetry lately LOL. I definitely enjoy this poem though, great job. Interesting choice of font
March 18th, 2026 10:33
Enlightenment
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this carries a deep, steady weight…each line building on the last like lived truth, not theory. The form holds it all together…those echoed end words give it a rhythm of return while the ideas keep moving forward. “In kneeling one is worshiped” anchors it for me. Really strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 18th, 2026 09:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this carries a deep, steady weight…each line building on the last like lived truth, not theory. The form holds it all together…those echoed end words give it a rhythm of return while the ideas keep moving forward. “In kneeling one is worshiped” anchors it for me. Really strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 18th, 2026 09:32
Enlightenment
Neville said:
You are quite the sage when ya puts yer mind to it don\'tcha .. ⭐🌟✨⭐🌟😎👍
March 18th, 2026 09:23
Neville said:
You are quite the sage when ya puts yer mind to it don\'tcha .. ⭐🌟✨⭐🌟😎👍
March 18th, 2026 09:23
Enlightenment
David Wakeling said:
An amazing piece with a truck load of wisdom. Ultimately for me it highlights the \"contrary\"nature of life.Opposites are shone.Poverty can make you rich and the Sun must die to be re-born.A wonderful poem.Got me thinking
March 18th, 2026 05:09
David Wakeling said:
An amazing piece with a truck load of wisdom. Ultimately for me it highlights the \"contrary\"nature of life.Opposites are shone.Poverty can make you rich and the Sun must die to be re-born.A wonderful poem.Got me thinking
March 18th, 2026 05:09
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