Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Foggy morning
teardrop said:
Waking up sucks sometimes especially when in a good dream. You penned a morning wake up so vividly real! I truly enjoyed this read.. Good job poet.
April 21st, 2025 04:40
teardrop said:
Waking up sucks sometimes especially when in a good dream. You penned a morning wake up so vividly real! I truly enjoyed this read.. Good job poet.
April 21st, 2025 04:40
Lies of romance
Goldfinch60 said:
We must always keep our hearts open soren.
Andy
April 21st, 2025 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
We must always keep our hearts open soren.
Andy
April 21st, 2025 01:55
Lies of romance
rrodriguez said:
Your message is one to decipher. Lies can become truths if told often enough. This is a philosophical take on life—history repeats itself, and people continue to be fooled by the demagoguery of crooked leaders. I hope I understood the message correctly. Thank you for sharing.
April 20th, 2025 18:14
rrodriguez said:
Your message is one to decipher. Lies can become truths if told often enough. This is a philosophical take on life—history repeats itself, and people continue to be fooled by the demagoguery of crooked leaders. I hope I understood the message correctly. Thank you for sharing.
April 20th, 2025 18:14
Lies of romance
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah, intuition is a much needed ingredient, like rich, Belgian chocolate…sadly far too many hearts are not guided by it. Brilliant metaphor, my friend.
April 20th, 2025 15:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah, intuition is a much needed ingredient, like rich, Belgian chocolate…sadly far too many hearts are not guided by it. Brilliant metaphor, my friend.
April 20th, 2025 15:04
Blinded by the light
Sylvia Somaduroff said:
Tough crowd, great poem,
\'Nuff light—you showed \'em.
Black bent, guide all \'em,
Light dark—a poem owe \'em.
Poem paid, truth wrote \'em,
Echo heard, headed off then—
Unless I\'m off, one ahead of \'em.
Hard missleed—I miss often;
If indeed I\'m off by lots, them—
Please forgive my playful poem,
Just here to say: the image you evoked
Through poem echoes this comment window.
April 20th, 2025 11:58
Sylvia Somaduroff said:
Tough crowd, great poem,
\'Nuff light—you showed \'em.
Black bent, guide all \'em,
Light dark—a poem owe \'em.
Poem paid, truth wrote \'em,
Echo heard, headed off then—
Unless I\'m off, one ahead of \'em.
Hard missleed—I miss often;
If indeed I\'m off by lots, them—
Please forgive my playful poem,
Just here to say: the image you evoked
Through poem echoes this comment window.
April 20th, 2025 11:58
Redeemer pains through window panes
NafisaSB said:
wonderfully worded - enjoyed reading it. used to read the classics a lot in my youth, then passed on to fiction - now striving to find time to read as wapp and fb messages flow in like a flood daily
April 20th, 2025 06:09
NafisaSB said:
wonderfully worded - enjoyed reading it. used to read the classics a lot in my youth, then passed on to fiction - now striving to find time to read as wapp and fb messages flow in like a flood daily
April 20th, 2025 06:09
Lies of romance
David Wakeling said:
This is quite beautifully written.Very well constructed.Enjoyable read
April 20th, 2025 05:13
David Wakeling said:
This is quite beautifully written.Very well constructed.Enjoyable read
April 20th, 2025 05:13
Not what it seems
Goldfinch60 said:
Wondefrful words showing the colour that each of them can present to us soren.
Andy
April 20th, 2025 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Wondefrful words showing the colour that each of them can present to us soren.
Andy
April 20th, 2025 01:48
You will argue
Parisab said:
Coming from your heart, it will land
on the reader’s mind
-it’s tricky to talk about the truth by challenging others to think-your poems are heart felt , so it must do the trick -best on your published book -I’m looking forward to it …
April 19th, 2025 13:58
Parisab said:
Coming from your heart, it will land
on the reader’s mind
-it’s tricky to talk about the truth by challenging others to think-your poems are heart felt , so it must do the trick -best on your published book -I’m looking forward to it …
April 19th, 2025 13:58
A grip too tight
maydanae said:
Ugh I love this!!! Definitely adding to my favorites because I agree: the grip of dependency is really hard to deal with but it may be even worse without it as you mention in the last part of the poem. The last line is really well written, though scary to think about.
April 19th, 2025 11:43
maydanae said:
Ugh I love this!!! Definitely adding to my favorites because I agree: the grip of dependency is really hard to deal with but it may be even worse without it as you mention in the last part of the poem. The last line is really well written, though scary to think about.
April 19th, 2025 11:43
Unknot the not
justyouraveragewriter said:
Wow really love this. So very true to all of it
April 19th, 2025 09:38
justyouraveragewriter said:
Wow really love this. So very true to all of it
April 19th, 2025 09:38
Not what it seems
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Metaphors are hidden, no doubt—and that’s what rewards close readings. What always amazes me, however, are the metaphors hidden even from the author. There are times when I write something with a clear metaphor in mind—and that metaphor is definitely present—but then someone else sees another metaphor I didn’t initially intend. For me, that’s when the reader isn’t just rewarded by their close read—their close read ends up rewarding the poet. Wonderful poem, truly—and a magical appearance on the page. A fave from me, my friend. 🌹👏
April 19th, 2025 09:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Metaphors are hidden, no doubt—and that’s what rewards close readings. What always amazes me, however, are the metaphors hidden even from the author. There are times when I write something with a clear metaphor in mind—and that metaphor is definitely present—but then someone else sees another metaphor I didn’t initially intend. For me, that’s when the reader isn’t just rewarded by their close read—their close read ends up rewarding the poet. Wonderful poem, truly—and a magical appearance on the page. A fave from me, my friend. 🌹👏
April 19th, 2025 09:00
Not what it seems
Tony Grannell said:
The many colours of the chameleon as there are in the array of metaphors that enhance the flavours of poetry or as you so perfectly describe it: \'Camouflaged eloquence\'. Delightfully light in its narrative with a mellow flow and rhymed off to perfection. Excellent - accolades galore.
Kind regards,
Tony.
April 19th, 2025 08:33
Tony Grannell said:
The many colours of the chameleon as there are in the array of metaphors that enhance the flavours of poetry or as you so perfectly describe it: \'Camouflaged eloquence\'. Delightfully light in its narrative with a mellow flow and rhymed off to perfection. Excellent - accolades galore.
Kind regards,
Tony.
April 19th, 2025 08:33
Broken toys
teardrop said:
Ice cream boats on lemonade seas , you penned a very beautiful piece here poet. Looking forward to
reading more of your work.
April 19th, 2025 06:56
teardrop said:
Ice cream boats on lemonade seas , you penned a very beautiful piece here poet. Looking forward to
reading more of your work.
April 19th, 2025 06:56
Who died and made you God
teardrop said:
Words penned perfectly. Message well spoken. Judge not, throw the first stone, etc. Thank you for a beautiful read this morning.
April 19th, 2025 05:51
teardrop said:
Words penned perfectly. Message well spoken. Judge not, throw the first stone, etc. Thank you for a beautiful read this morning.
April 19th, 2025 05:51
Not what it seems
Teddy.15 said:
Absolutely wonderful, I\'ve actually had the priveliage to hold a chameleon in my very hands and watch it change colour in Madagascar in the wild, your metaphor is truly graceful. Whether is the serpent or the angel. 🌹
April 19th, 2025 03:46
Teddy.15 said:
Absolutely wonderful, I\'ve actually had the priveliage to hold a chameleon in my very hands and watch it change colour in Madagascar in the wild, your metaphor is truly graceful. Whether is the serpent or the angel. 🌹
April 19th, 2025 03:46
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