Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Space pirate speed demons
Poetic Licence said:
Science i am ignorant to, enjoyment i am not, I don\'t understand this write completely but i did enjoy reading it, very creative
March 1st, 2025 06:34
Poetic Licence said:
Science i am ignorant to, enjoyment i am not, I don\'t understand this write completely but i did enjoy reading it, very creative
March 1st, 2025 06:34
Space pirate speed demons
David Wakeling said:
This may sound odd but I think at the quantum level the universe performs Magic. Not just like magic.It is real Magic.Its God\'s way of making sure we never understand the jail we live in. This poem is very clever.Made me think
March 1st, 2025 06:15
David Wakeling said:
This may sound odd but I think at the quantum level the universe performs Magic. Not just like magic.It is real Magic.Its God\'s way of making sure we never understand the jail we live in. This poem is very clever.Made me think
March 1st, 2025 06:15
Space pirate speed demons
Salvia.S said:
Wow! Your creativity in blending science, imagination and poetry is spot on. Loved it ❤️!
March 1st, 2025 05:10
Salvia.S said:
Wow! Your creativity in blending science, imagination and poetry is spot on. Loved it ❤️!
March 1st, 2025 05:10
Space pirate speed demons
orchidee said:
You already there, as those photons are? I met myself coming back from town (did I?) - is that similar? lol.
March 1st, 2025 04:18
orchidee said:
You already there, as those photons are? I met myself coming back from town (did I?) - is that similar? lol.
March 1st, 2025 04:18
Too much
Teddy.15 said:
So wonderful, i believe you with all my heart
Love every line especially the ending
Too many of sun\'s hot demons, I spent too much time in the shade
Oh I like this very much, inspiring words.
🌹
February 28th, 2025 15:02
Teddy.15 said:
So wonderful, i believe you with all my heart
Love every line especially the ending
Too many of sun\'s hot demons, I spent too much time in the shade
Oh I like this very much, inspiring words.
🌹
February 28th, 2025 15:02
It doesn\'t matter anymore
whats write for me said:
This piece has mountain top highs and valley lows. An incredible journey in words, Bravo.
February 28th, 2025 09:48
whats write for me said:
This piece has mountain top highs and valley lows. An incredible journey in words, Bravo.
February 28th, 2025 09:48
Too much
Poetic Licence said:
The good and the bad, the successes and the failure\'s, the love and the hate, the despair and the hope, all wrapped up in this wonderful write, enjoyed the read
February 28th, 2025 07:57
Poetic Licence said:
The good and the bad, the successes and the failure\'s, the love and the hate, the despair and the hope, all wrapped up in this wonderful write, enjoyed the read
February 28th, 2025 07:57
Too much
Friendship said:
Life is a journey, Soren, and your poem reminds me that every experience, no matter how challenging, is an opportunity for growth. The metaphor of \'more than my share of lemons\' beautifully illustrates life\'s hardships, while \'lemonade\' symbolizes our resilience and ability to find sweetness in adversity. Phrases like \'hope building\'\' and \'false friendships by the ton\' encourage us to stay hopeful and focused on meaningful connections. Your poem inspires us to tap into our imagination and creativity, embracing the power to shape our reality. By exploring themes of nostalgia, the passage of time, and the emotional toll of relationships and experiences, your poem reminds us that joy and sorrow are intertwined and that every moment is a chance to learn, grow, and find beauty.
February 28th, 2025 07:43
Friendship said:
Life is a journey, Soren, and your poem reminds me that every experience, no matter how challenging, is an opportunity for growth. The metaphor of \'more than my share of lemons\' beautifully illustrates life\'s hardships, while \'lemonade\' symbolizes our resilience and ability to find sweetness in adversity. Phrases like \'hope building\'\' and \'false friendships by the ton\' encourage us to stay hopeful and focused on meaningful connections. Your poem inspires us to tap into our imagination and creativity, embracing the power to shape our reality. By exploring themes of nostalgia, the passage of time, and the emotional toll of relationships and experiences, your poem reminds us that joy and sorrow are intertwined and that every moment is a chance to learn, grow, and find beauty.
February 28th, 2025 07:43
Too much
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Flows and rings beautifully. A wonderful expression of time, struggle, and the beautiful yet puzzling futility of it all. 🌹👏 Well done, Soren. This gets a fave!
February 28th, 2025 07:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Flows and rings beautifully. A wonderful expression of time, struggle, and the beautiful yet puzzling futility of it all. 🌹👏 Well done, Soren. This gets a fave!
February 28th, 2025 07:28
Too much
arqios said:
Sweetened citrus acids can have challenging effects when taken in large quantities 🙏🏻🕊
February 28th, 2025 07:21
arqios said:
Sweetened citrus acids can have challenging effects when taken in large quantities 🙏🏻🕊
February 28th, 2025 07:21
Too much
Mutley Ravishes said:
The last two lines, Soren. Really hit.
Life? I guess we all seen more than enough of this one. Time for a different dimension?!
February 28th, 2025 06:52
Mutley Ravishes said:
The last two lines, Soren. Really hit.
Life? I guess we all seen more than enough of this one. Time for a different dimension?!
February 28th, 2025 06:52
Too much
Salvia.S said:
This is so powerful and emotional. Your words paint a vivid picture of resilience and the human struggle. Very moving.
February 28th, 2025 06:35
Salvia.S said:
This is so powerful and emotional. Your words paint a vivid picture of resilience and the human struggle. Very moving.
February 28th, 2025 06:35
Too much
MDStone said:
Soren,
We certainly live in days and times where too much happens too often. Ah, but taking time to reflect, that can remind that this too shall pass. There is too much yet to be seen, too much good to do, too much to say and write, to give up on the beautiful life. Thanks for taking me through this time to reflection and refocus.
February 28th, 2025 06:33
MDStone said:
Soren,
We certainly live in days and times where too much happens too often. Ah, but taking time to reflect, that can remind that this too shall pass. There is too much yet to be seen, too much good to do, too much to say and write, to give up on the beautiful life. Thanks for taking me through this time to reflection and refocus.
February 28th, 2025 06:33
It doesn\'t matter anymore
Goldfinch60 said:
We need to form our own ways in life and not be life others soren, if we believed all the lies we are told it could be even a worse world.
Andy
February 28th, 2025 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
We need to form our own ways in life and not be life others soren, if we believed all the lies we are told it could be even a worse world.
Andy
February 28th, 2025 02:49
It doesn\'t matter anymore
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great job, Soren. This is a deep exploration of time, disillusionment, and existential inquiry, of which you know I am a fan of. 🤣 This poem causes readers to reflect on their own beliefs about truth, morality, and the passage of time, leaving them with profound questions about life’s meaning…rather than answers, the hallmark of great philosophical thought and poetry. Again, well done on this my friend. 🌹👏
February 27th, 2025 18:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great job, Soren. This is a deep exploration of time, disillusionment, and existential inquiry, of which you know I am a fan of. 🤣 This poem causes readers to reflect on their own beliefs about truth, morality, and the passage of time, leaving them with profound questions about life’s meaning…rather than answers, the hallmark of great philosophical thought and poetry. Again, well done on this my friend. 🌹👏
February 27th, 2025 18:10
It doesn\'t matter anymore
David Wakeling said:
This is brilliant.Rhyme cadence and purpose.What more could they want.Exceptional
February 27th, 2025 15:00
David Wakeling said:
This is brilliant.Rhyme cadence and purpose.What more could they want.Exceptional
February 27th, 2025 15:00
It doesn\'t matter anymore
Salvia.S said:
Beautifully written, thought-provoking, and emotionally resonant. Your poem explores complex themes and emotions with simplicity and clarity. Well done!
February 27th, 2025 11:59
Salvia.S said:
Beautifully written, thought-provoking, and emotionally resonant. Your poem explores complex themes and emotions with simplicity and clarity. Well done!
February 27th, 2025 11:59
It doesn\'t matter anymore
NinjaGirl said:
And time continues to pass...until we do. But one day it will be better...but it will get worse first. Beautifully written, I love this poem.
February 27th, 2025 10:34
NinjaGirl said:
And time continues to pass...until we do. But one day it will be better...but it will get worse first. Beautifully written, I love this poem.
February 27th, 2025 10:34
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whats write for me said:
A stark remembrance of indigenous peoples in North America. Great writing and a good read.
February 27th, 2025 09:14
whats write for me said:
A stark remembrance of indigenous peoples in North America. Great writing and a good read.
February 27th, 2025 09:14
It doesn\'t matter anymore
Friendship said:
What you feel, you attract. Well written, Soren, Your poem seems to revolve around the passage of time and the transient nature of life, love, and truth. I love how you explore your youth fades, love becomes elusive, and the distinctions between right and wrong blur over time. You seem to reflect a sense of nostalgia and resignation, emphasizing the inevitability of change and the complexities of human experience. I enjoy how you include the natural elements (sun, rain), the emotional landscape (love, truth), and the philosophical considerations of existence (time, morality).
February 27th, 2025 09:05
Friendship said:
What you feel, you attract. Well written, Soren, Your poem seems to revolve around the passage of time and the transient nature of life, love, and truth. I love how you explore your youth fades, love becomes elusive, and the distinctions between right and wrong blur over time. You seem to reflect a sense of nostalgia and resignation, emphasizing the inevitability of change and the complexities of human experience. I enjoy how you include the natural elements (sun, rain), the emotional landscape (love, truth), and the philosophical considerations of existence (time, morality).
February 27th, 2025 09:05
It doesn\'t matter anymore
Poetic Licence said:
As we age with time I guess we get a little wiser and knowledgeable and learn to see the world as it really is, not how we wished or believe, and sadly that does make for good viewing, really enjoyed today\'s offering
February 27th, 2025 08:02
Poetic Licence said:
As we age with time I guess we get a little wiser and knowledgeable and learn to see the world as it really is, not how we wished or believe, and sadly that does make for good viewing, really enjoyed today\'s offering
February 27th, 2025 08:02
It doesn\'t matter anymore
MDStone said:
What a great reminder of how ephemeral our lives are. Like looking into the mirror and seeing past, present, and future all at the same time. Thanks for giving me a time of reflection as I read your words. As always, masterfully written.
February 27th, 2025 07:38
MDStone said:
What a great reminder of how ephemeral our lives are. Like looking into the mirror and seeing past, present, and future all at the same time. Thanks for giving me a time of reflection as I read your words. As always, masterfully written.
February 27th, 2025 07:38
It doesn\'t matter anymore
Teddy.15 said:
Us humans have a lot in common with sunset, they are each unique and full of fiery colour, yet as we grow old they do not
A very powerful piece and sad what with your very brilliant title,
Years through a torn sieve pour
Day melts to night, night condenses into day
A frown, just a wilted smile I once wore
Black of night, light of day all turn to gray
I guess this will always depend on if our glass was half empty or full. Such wonderful reflection of an incredible time of day when that sun comes to rest leaving the day behind. 🌹
February 27th, 2025 05:26
Teddy.15 said:
Us humans have a lot in common with sunset, they are each unique and full of fiery colour, yet as we grow old they do not
A very powerful piece and sad what with your very brilliant title,
Years through a torn sieve pour
Day melts to night, night condenses into day
A frown, just a wilted smile I once wore
Black of night, light of day all turn to gray
I guess this will always depend on if our glass was half empty or full. Such wonderful reflection of an incredible time of day when that sun comes to rest leaving the day behind. 🌹
February 27th, 2025 05:26
It doesn\'t matter anymore
Cassie58 said:
Sadly when you look at the news and what is going on in the world your title seems very apt. In the UK everything seems topsy turvy. We have to make our own happiness, especially as we age. Still trying to see blue sky through rose tinted glasses. A lovely poem sorenbarrett. Fine imagery.
February 27th, 2025 04:03
Cassie58 said:
Sadly when you look at the news and what is going on in the world your title seems very apt. In the UK everything seems topsy turvy. We have to make our own happiness, especially as we age. Still trying to see blue sky through rose tinted glasses. A lovely poem sorenbarrett. Fine imagery.
February 27th, 2025 04:03
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Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderfully true words soren, such an awful shame.
Andy
February 27th, 2025 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderfully true words soren, such an awful shame.
Andy
February 27th, 2025 02:49
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David Wakeling said:
The history of the native indians is quite sad. Quite a nice tribute here though.Well done
February 26th, 2025 16:58
David Wakeling said:
The history of the native indians is quite sad. Quite a nice tribute here though.Well done
February 26th, 2025 16:58
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