Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
My brother
orchidee said:
I was troubled by Jeus\' saying \'In as much have you have not done it unto one of the least of my brethren - helped, assisted, etc - you have not done it unto me\'.
But it does not mean - forget to help just ONE person, and it\'s damnation for you. But rather \'If you do not help ANYone, not even one person\'.
The reverse is true too, if we help anyone, we do it as unto Jesus, He says.
September 7th, 2024 13:35
orchidee said:
I was troubled by Jeus\' saying \'In as much have you have not done it unto one of the least of my brethren - helped, assisted, etc - you have not done it unto me\'.
But it does not mean - forget to help just ONE person, and it\'s damnation for you. But rather \'If you do not help ANYone, not even one person\'.
The reverse is true too, if we help anyone, we do it as unto Jesus, He says.
September 7th, 2024 13:35
My brother
orchidee said:
Well, KP never gets off her throne, so I best get off mine! In her case \'throne\' means \'the loo\'! It\'s the sewage I feed her, you see (heehee).
September 7th, 2024 13:32
orchidee said:
Well, KP never gets off her throne, so I best get off mine! In her case \'throne\' means \'the loo\'! It\'s the sewage I feed her, you see (heehee).
September 7th, 2024 13:32
My brother
Cassie58 said:
How could you not show compassion to the suffering? Whether it is our own or the animal kingdom, how can you ignore them?
There but for the grace of God go I.
This is a beautiful poem which touches the heartstrings sorenbarrett. Fine stanzas.
September 7th, 2024 11:47
Cassie58 said:
How could you not show compassion to the suffering? Whether it is our own or the animal kingdom, how can you ignore them?
There but for the grace of God go I.
This is a beautiful poem which touches the heartstrings sorenbarrett. Fine stanzas.
September 7th, 2024 11:47
My brother
Teddy.15 said:
This is wonderful, I\'d be the one that gives the dollar with a smile and a kind heart, but I\'d also like to say that there are sadly so many in our world of today that truly need that help in hand. We should all rise to the occasion to be kind and charitable when we can. 🌹 Kudos 🌹
September 7th, 2024 09:33
Teddy.15 said:
This is wonderful, I\'d be the one that gives the dollar with a smile and a kind heart, but I\'d also like to say that there are sadly so many in our world of today that truly need that help in hand. We should all rise to the occasion to be kind and charitable when we can. 🌹 Kudos 🌹
September 7th, 2024 09:33
Tattoos and scars
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, we are what we are and will continue to be that way.
Andy
September 7th, 2024 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, we are what we are and will continue to be that way.
Andy
September 7th, 2024 01:51
Tattoos and scars
Dan Williams said:
No tattoos but a nice selection of scars; History \"etched in flesh, tapestry of life\" indeed. They tell my story well.
September 7th, 2024 01:17
Dan Williams said:
No tattoos but a nice selection of scars; History \"etched in flesh, tapestry of life\" indeed. They tell my story well.
September 7th, 2024 01:17
Tattoos and scars
MendedFences27 said:
A great display of life\'s scaring and bruising. Hopefully no permanent damage was done.
Your poem says a lot in a few words. One of poetry\'s hallmarks, - Phil A.
September 6th, 2024 12:59
MendedFences27 said:
A great display of life\'s scaring and bruising. Hopefully no permanent damage was done.
Your poem says a lot in a few words. One of poetry\'s hallmarks, - Phil A.
September 6th, 2024 12:59
Tattoos and scars
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes Soren - if anyone is going to pierce my skin it has to be a fully qualified experienced surgeon with a meaningful purpose.
Tapestry of REAL life......
September 6th, 2024 11:55
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes Soren - if anyone is going to pierce my skin it has to be a fully qualified experienced surgeon with a meaningful purpose.
Tapestry of REAL life......
September 6th, 2024 11:55
Tattoos and scars
orchidee said:
I would faint even before they started giving me a real tattoo!
September 6th, 2024 09:57
orchidee said:
I would faint even before they started giving me a real tattoo!
September 6th, 2024 09:57
Tattoos and scars
Teddy.15 said:
Oh I could never have a tattoo 🤣 too much of a baby for that, I have got my ears pierced, and my belly button that I no longer wear as the spice girls much like me are almost 50 now lol love your tapestry of your beauty and scars of life. Wonderful dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
September 6th, 2024 09:40
Teddy.15 said:
Oh I could never have a tattoo 🤣 too much of a baby for that, I have got my ears pierced, and my belly button that I no longer wear as the spice girls much like me are almost 50 now lol love your tapestry of your beauty and scars of life. Wonderful dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
September 6th, 2024 09:40
Tattoos and scars
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done, some cracking lines in this one.
September 6th, 2024 06:46
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done, some cracking lines in this one.
September 6th, 2024 06:46
Tattoos and scars
2781 said:
What\'s that saying-by the time you get old you have the face that you deserve!
September 6th, 2024 06:19
2781 said:
What\'s that saying-by the time you get old you have the face that you deserve!
September 6th, 2024 06:19
Tattoos and scars
Neilton said:
Great write once again! I\'m glad I stopped by
September 6th, 2024 04:08
Neilton said:
Great write once again! I\'m glad I stopped by
September 6th, 2024 04:08
Majesty
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, that light will always be in your life.
Andy
September 6th, 2024 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, that light will always be in your life.
Andy
September 6th, 2024 01:18
Majesty
Dan Williams said:
This has echos of, what, optimistic paganism? Your usual fine imagery. But \"Elysium\"? goes the opposite way.
September 6th, 2024 01:06
Dan Williams said:
This has echos of, what, optimistic paganism? Your usual fine imagery. But \"Elysium\"? goes the opposite way.
September 6th, 2024 01:06
Majesty
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
What I want to know now is - Does the No.7 bus go too Elysium? lol. Or it might be the No.10 bus. heehee.
September 5th, 2024 08:52
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
What I want to know now is - Does the No.7 bus go too Elysium? lol. Or it might be the No.10 bus. heehee.
September 5th, 2024 08:52
Majesty
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, your poem really paints a picture! I love how you describe the sky changing and the way you connect day and night to life and death. You capture the cycle brilliantly. The rhymes flow nicely, and your words create strong images..Great write all around!
September 5th, 2024 07:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, your poem really paints a picture! I love how you describe the sky changing and the way you connect day and night to life and death. You capture the cycle brilliantly. The rhymes flow nicely, and your words create strong images..Great write all around!
September 5th, 2024 07:48
Majesty
Teddy.15 said:
I just blew all the lights in my house by saying wow. Utterly superb poetry sorrenbarret I have a feeling the fire means so much to you as you have written a lot lately, I can feel it. 🌹
September 5th, 2024 06:52
Teddy.15 said:
I just blew all the lights in my house by saying wow. Utterly superb poetry sorrenbarret I have a feeling the fire means so much to you as you have written a lot lately, I can feel it. 🌹
September 5th, 2024 06:52
Dust of dreams
Goldfinch60 said:
That gutter of time is with us all but the longer the gutter the brighter our life will be soren.
Andy
September 5th, 2024 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
That gutter of time is with us all but the longer the gutter the brighter our life will be soren.
Andy
September 5th, 2024 01:39
Dust of dreams
Dan Williams said:
I could make a rubber stamp for your work; Clear, concise, tasteful\" Keep them coming.
September 5th, 2024 00:10
Dan Williams said:
I could make a rubber stamp for your work; Clear, concise, tasteful\" Keep them coming.
September 5th, 2024 00:10
Inferno
Rocky Lagou said:
This is top notch, Sorren. I\'m glad to see you still posting whenever I pop back on this site. The inferno is real. The fire is real. The scariest part isn\'t coming to terms with this reality, but what to do with it.
September 4th, 2024 22:20
Rocky Lagou said:
This is top notch, Sorren. I\'m glad to see you still posting whenever I pop back on this site. The inferno is real. The fire is real. The scariest part isn\'t coming to terms with this reality, but what to do with it.
September 4th, 2024 22:20
Dust of dreams
jim56 said:
like the way you wrote this
and words you have chosen
to express your poem
you have a talent for writing
brilliant work xxx
September 4th, 2024 13:04
jim56 said:
like the way you wrote this
and words you have chosen
to express your poem
you have a talent for writing
brilliant work xxx
September 4th, 2024 13:04
Dust of dreams
Teddy.15 said:
We must trust in destiny because in the end at least for me, it\'s always what it was meant to be
The dust of dreams blows in destiny‘s winds
This lines is just wonderful. 🌹
September 4th, 2024 09:16
Teddy.15 said:
We must trust in destiny because in the end at least for me, it\'s always what it was meant to be
The dust of dreams blows in destiny‘s winds
This lines is just wonderful. 🌹
September 4th, 2024 09:16
Inferno
Tom Dylan said:
A cracking piece, Soren. Works on so many levels. The words flow so well. Really enjoyed.
September 4th, 2024 05:45
Tom Dylan said:
A cracking piece, Soren. Works on so many levels. The words flow so well. Really enjoyed.
September 4th, 2024 05:45
Dust of dreams
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
The words are deeply felt my friend. I sense sadness and lack of hope.
But one should always be optimistic my friend.
I liked your rhymes.
September 4th, 2024 05:44
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
The words are deeply felt my friend. I sense sadness and lack of hope.
But one should always be optimistic my friend.
I liked your rhymes.
September 4th, 2024 05:44
Inferno
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words soren. We all seem to be heading for that darker place but in the place I seem to be I see the light and I am sure many others will see that light as well.
Andy
September 4th, 2024 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words soren. We all seem to be heading for that darker place but in the place I seem to be I see the light and I am sure many others will see that light as well.
Andy
September 4th, 2024 01:13
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