Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Trapped
Teddy.15 said:

Oh I see 🤣 for a moment I thought this was a poem about marriage 🤣 we have nutria here but I confess I had to Google Muskrat, seems they are quite similar. What a poetic piece of brilliance. 🌹

June 22nd, 2024 08:19

Lost images
Teddy.15 said:

Slumberbashing at its finest dearest sorrenbarret, where would we be if we couldn\'t dream. 🌹 Beautiful.

June 22nd, 2024 05:29

Lost images
Goldfinch60 said:

Super words soren.

Andy

June 22nd, 2024 01:49

Lost images
Bella Shepard said:

I had to read this twice aloud, taking in each beautiful line, a rhyming pattern smooth as silk. The images you conjure, breathtaking. This is a true work of art my friend!

June 21st, 2024 09:02

Lost images
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

June 21st, 2024 08:48

The machine
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true soren but not in my world, I still speak to people face to face.

Andy

June 21st, 2024 01:42

The machine
Doggerel Dave said:

Yes, it is embryonic, Soren. I really enjoyed this – you make your justified reservations very clear. But there is hope. Some folks are detoxifying from their smart phones, eschewing social media.
I haven’t read ‘Brave New World’ for over sixty years; I must give it another go…..


June 20th, 2024 21:17

The machine
Teddy.15 said:

I never use the word hate but if I did it would be for technology. It\'s ruined the world and brought Pandora back from the dead. Yet there are some nice reasons to have it. A superb discussion from your wonderful lines. 🌹

June 20th, 2024 17:17

The machine
MLHnow said:

Love this poem!
I t is valuable for us to consider ourselves in the bigger picture and so removed from our natural connections

June 20th, 2024 16:11

The machine
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic work.

June 20th, 2024 13:30

The machine
2781 said:

It\'s a beast.

June 20th, 2024 09:31

The machine
orchidee said:

I\'m controlled by an old trout KP! lol.

June 20th, 2024 08:10

The machine
Mutley Ravishes said:

Right on the money, Soren.
Steiner and co saw this coming
All those years ago

June 20th, 2024 07:14

Smoke of dreams
Goldfinch60 said:

Dreams come from very many palces soren.

Andy

June 20th, 2024 01:28

Smoke of dreams
Cassie58 said:

Visually stunning in its movement and unpredictability. Beautifully penned stanzas sorenbarrett.

June 19th, 2024 23:44

Smoke of dreams
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

June 19th, 2024 11:31

Smoke of dreams
Teddy.15 said:

Burning dreams up in smoke, don\'t we all relate to that dearest sorrenbarret. Brilliant lines as they always are and a wonderful ending from what I remember. Authentic beauty in this poem. 🌹

June 19th, 2024 10:17

Smoke of dreams
2781 said:

Purging the dross?

June 19th, 2024 05:45

Imagination
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful fun write soren.

Andy

June 19th, 2024 01:10

Imagination
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic work. You make the scene come alive.

June 18th, 2024 15:11

Imagination
Alan R said:

Ah that bittersweet!

June 18th, 2024 13:21

Imagination
2781 said:

I feel the frustration.

June 18th, 2024 08:03

Imagination
Doggerel Dave said:

So let\'s misinterpret, Soren - not every hot randy coupling is smooth and easy.....😓💦

June 18th, 2024 07:51

Imagination
orchidee said:

Fido warned me about anything \'hot\' - real or imaginary - in my poem for today! lol.

June 18th, 2024 05:05

Best friend
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words soren showing the love that can exist between us and dogs.

Andy

June 18th, 2024 01:45

Best friend
2781 said:

God spelt backwards

June 17th, 2024 19:18

Best friend
Teddy.15 said:

Dearest sorrenbarret charming and so full of wisdom, just because one may be old we still have feelings, and we always deserve love, animals the same. 🌹

June 17th, 2024 15:33

Best friend
Cassie58 said:

A beautiful reminder of the loyalty and unconditional love you can receive from a four legged friend. My dog Solo is amazing. Lovely , warming write sorenbarrett. All the best.

June 17th, 2024 11:07

Best friend
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful and poignant. Man\'s best friend.

June 17th, 2024 10:16

Best friend
Bella Shepard said:

This is a wonderful poem dedicated to incredible sentient, self aware creatures who love us no matter what , and deserve our unconditional love in return. You\'ve brightened my morning, and I thank you my friend. Have a wonderful day!

June 17th, 2024 08:47



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