Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
True story (to be or not to be)
Doggerel Dave said:
A read I could relate to, if only because it contained no detectable (by me) metaphor, Soren.
Chock full of irony, though. Great fun as a result.
February 25th, 2025 05:12
Doggerel Dave said:
A read I could relate to, if only because it contained no detectable (by me) metaphor, Soren.
Chock full of irony, though. Great fun as a result.
February 25th, 2025 05:12
True story (to be or not to be)
Teddy.15 said:
๐คฃ amusing and true how we live for standards for others and not for ourselves, I could have told you that, and I\'m not even a psychiatrist. Sorry he felt the need to die for who he really was though ๐น
February 25th, 2025 04:10
Teddy.15 said:
๐คฃ amusing and true how we live for standards for others and not for ourselves, I could have told you that, and I\'m not even a psychiatrist. Sorry he felt the need to die for who he really was though ๐น
February 25th, 2025 04:10
Roll of the dice
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, that empty chamber has always seemed to be the one that I fire.
Andy
February 25th, 2025 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, that empty chamber has always seemed to be the one that I fire.
Andy
February 25th, 2025 02:14
Roll of the dice
RSM0812 said:
A 5 bullet Russian roulette. Can\'t win, can\'t loose. A poets muse.
February 24th, 2025 23:54
RSM0812 said:
A 5 bullet Russian roulette. Can\'t win, can\'t loose. A poets muse.
February 24th, 2025 23:54
Night of dream dust
Bloomingdale said:
Thereโs just something about the way you write manโฆI really love reading your poems
February 24th, 2025 11:41
Bloomingdale said:
Thereโs just something about the way you write manโฆI really love reading your poems
February 24th, 2025 11:41
Roll of the dice
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes. It certainly is. What else can be said. Great metaphor that speaks truth. An easy fave! ๐น๐
February 24th, 2025 10:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes. It certainly is. What else can be said. Great metaphor that speaks truth. An easy fave! ๐น๐
February 24th, 2025 10:48
Roll of the dice
Friendship said:
Soren, your poem is a masterpiece, transcending. It transcends time to capture the essence of love and risk that, which resonates deeply across various contexts and eras. The powerful metaphor of Russian roulette conveys the exhilarating thrill and potential heartbreak that can accompany romantic relationships, illuminating the uncertainty and emotional stakes involved. You inspire a person to contemplate the profound beauty and danger of emotional investment, reflecting on the paradox of seeking liberation and joy through a potentially transformative force.
February 24th, 2025 09:33
Friendship said:
Soren, your poem is a masterpiece, transcending. It transcends time to capture the essence of love and risk that, which resonates deeply across various contexts and eras. The powerful metaphor of Russian roulette conveys the exhilarating thrill and potential heartbreak that can accompany romantic relationships, illuminating the uncertainty and emotional stakes involved. You inspire a person to contemplate the profound beauty and danger of emotional investment, reflecting on the paradox of seeking liberation and joy through a potentially transformative force.
February 24th, 2025 09:33
Roll of the dice
Poetic Licence said:
Life could not be described better, enjoyed the read.
February 24th, 2025 06:00
Poetic Licence said:
Life could not be described better, enjoyed the read.
February 24th, 2025 06:00
Flies
Neville said:
Today\'s main course left a distinctly unpleasant aftertaste & got me thinking .. when I was in Africa, Dembe used to hang plastic bottles half filled with water and prawn shells from the trees to keep the flies off the table .. it worked .. Neville
February 24th, 2025 04:05
Neville said:
Today\'s main course left a distinctly unpleasant aftertaste & got me thinking .. when I was in Africa, Dembe used to hang plastic bottles half filled with water and prawn shells from the trees to keep the flies off the table .. it worked .. Neville
February 24th, 2025 04:05
Roll of the dice
orchidee said:
I\'m sure someone one was cheating when they played a dice betting game with me. Their (single) dice kept rolling a 7. Eh?! lol.
February 24th, 2025 03:11
orchidee said:
I\'m sure someone one was cheating when they played a dice betting game with me. Their (single) dice kept rolling a 7. Eh?! lol.
February 24th, 2025 03:11
Night of dream dust
Goldfinch60 said:
True words soren in such awful times in our world.
Andy
February 24th, 2025 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
True words soren in such awful times in our world.
Andy
February 24th, 2025 02:50
Roll of the dice
arqios said:
Brings out the shadowy cast of this reader. It has brought an alteration to the old ticker ๐๐ป๐๏ธ
February 24th, 2025 02:21
arqios said:
Brings out the shadowy cast of this reader. It has brought an alteration to the old ticker ๐๐ป๐๏ธ
February 24th, 2025 02:21
Roll of the dice
Teddy.15 said:
Oh yes, don\'t you just love, love ๐คฃ superb imagery and emotionally and physically felt this. Once the gun goes off anything can happen. ๐น Brilliant.
February 24th, 2025 02:08
Teddy.15 said:
Oh yes, don\'t you just love, love ๐คฃ superb imagery and emotionally and physically felt this. Once the gun goes off anything can happen. ๐น Brilliant.
February 24th, 2025 02:08
Night of dream dust
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"comfort, the enemy of poetry, a sleepiness without a dream\". Indeed! Very true, my friend. This actually, has sparked an idea! So, well done...and thank you! This one, btw, is one of my more faves of yours and that says a lot because you have so many great ones to choose from! Bravo, friend! ๐๐น
February 23rd, 2025 19:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"comfort, the enemy of poetry, a sleepiness without a dream\". Indeed! Very true, my friend. This actually, has sparked an idea! So, well done...and thank you! This one, btw, is one of my more faves of yours and that says a lot because you have so many great ones to choose from! Bravo, friend! ๐๐น
February 23rd, 2025 19:33
Night of dream dust
Neville said:
Made me feel a tad sad mate .. not sure whether it\'s my age or the weather .. every now and then certain words get me like this .. N
February 23rd, 2025 14:07
Neville said:
Made me feel a tad sad mate .. not sure whether it\'s my age or the weather .. every now and then certain words get me like this .. N
February 23rd, 2025 14:07
Night of dream dust
Poetic Licence said:
Discomfort keeps the mind alert and alive, yet I was very comfortable reading this piece on a lazy Sunday, enjoyed
February 23rd, 2025 06:47
Poetic Licence said:
Discomfort keeps the mind alert and alive, yet I was very comfortable reading this piece on a lazy Sunday, enjoyed
February 23rd, 2025 06:47
Night of dream dust
arqios said:
What a punch and a drop! The last line just picked it all up and blew it all away๐๐ป๐
February 23rd, 2025 06:21
arqios said:
What a punch and a drop! The last line just picked it all up and blew it all away๐๐ป๐
February 23rd, 2025 06:21
Night of dream dust
Teddy.15 said:
Exquisite poetry an infinity of imagery and made me feel really sad, they say the truth hurts and your words are marvelous beautiful poetry my dear sorrenbarret ๐น
February 23rd, 2025 05:09
Teddy.15 said:
Exquisite poetry an infinity of imagery and made me feel really sad, they say the truth hurts and your words are marvelous beautiful poetry my dear sorrenbarret ๐น
February 23rd, 2025 05:09
Night of dream dust
Mutley Ravishes said:
Here\'s the deal Mutley : You can be comfortable all the time, but you will be numb!
February 23rd, 2025 04:42
Mutley Ravishes said:
Here\'s the deal Mutley : You can be comfortable all the time, but you will be numb!
February 23rd, 2025 04:42
Reeling one in
Salvia.S said:
Beautiful poem with a soothing and uplifting quality!
February 23rd, 2025 01:24
Salvia.S said:
Beautiful poem with a soothing and uplifting quality!
February 23rd, 2025 01:24
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