Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
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arqios said:
Alice has got nothing to this wonderland, and the wonders never cease🕊🙏🏻
March 25th, 2025 04:05
arqios said:
Alice has got nothing to this wonderland, and the wonders never cease🕊🙏🏻
March 25th, 2025 04:05
Winged shoes or meat mittens
Goldfinch60 said:
We must survive and hopefully one day peace and love will be all around our world soren.
Andy
March 25th, 2025 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
We must survive and hopefully one day peace and love will be all around our world soren.
Andy
March 25th, 2025 02:46
Winged shoes or meat mittens
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Well penned. Always love reading your work
March 24th, 2025 13:24
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Well penned. Always love reading your work
March 24th, 2025 13:24
Winged shoes or meat mittens
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, beautifully written and I love the rhyming. Somehow (don\'t ask why, the mind is a curious thing) the lyrics of the song \'the gambler\' by Kenny Rogers popped into my head when reading. \"Know when to hold, know when to fold....\"
March 24th, 2025 10:33
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, beautifully written and I love the rhyming. Somehow (don\'t ask why, the mind is a curious thing) the lyrics of the song \'the gambler\' by Kenny Rogers popped into my head when reading. \"Know when to hold, know when to fold....\"
March 24th, 2025 10:33
Hands that grasp
Tom Dylan said:
A thought-provoking piece. Thanks for sharing.
March 24th, 2025 08:30
Tom Dylan said:
A thought-provoking piece. Thanks for sharing.
March 24th, 2025 08:30
Winged shoes or meat mittens
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This flows so beautifully, the rhyming, the internal rhyming. Beautiful. As for me, I used to think I would have no courage when I was younger but it turns out I am much more meat mittens than winged shoes. Still, I have also found myself sitting like stone...and you\'re right, regardless of the way chosen, you either survive or you don\'t! Part luck and part how good you are at your choice. Well done on this, Soren. A fave for sure! 🌹👏
March 24th, 2025 06:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This flows so beautifully, the rhyming, the internal rhyming. Beautiful. As for me, I used to think I would have no courage when I was younger but it turns out I am much more meat mittens than winged shoes. Still, I have also found myself sitting like stone...and you\'re right, regardless of the way chosen, you either survive or you don\'t! Part luck and part how good you are at your choice. Well done on this, Soren. A fave for sure! 🌹👏
March 24th, 2025 06:59
Winged shoes or meat mittens
Poetic Licence said:
The write got with the wonderful title, enjoyed the read
March 24th, 2025 05:49
Poetic Licence said:
The write got with the wonderful title, enjoyed the read
March 24th, 2025 05:49
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David Wakeling said:
This is remarkable.So well constructed.The rhyme and cadence are impectible.Well done commendatore
March 24th, 2025 05:13
David Wakeling said:
This is remarkable.So well constructed.The rhyme and cadence are impectible.Well done commendatore
March 24th, 2025 05:13
Winged shoes or meat mittens
arqios said:
Or in my case, sometimes freeze, maybe more so when I was younger🙏🏻🕊️
March 24th, 2025 03:40
arqios said:
Or in my case, sometimes freeze, maybe more so when I was younger🙏🏻🕊️
March 24th, 2025 03:40
Hands that grasp
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words soren, rancour must not exist in life.
Andy
March 24th, 2025 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words soren, rancour must not exist in life.
Andy
March 24th, 2025 02:43
Too bad (metaphor)
whats write for me said:
A wonderful lyrical write. Very enjoyable.
March 23rd, 2025 09:20
whats write for me said:
A wonderful lyrical write. Very enjoyable.
March 23rd, 2025 09:20
Hands that grasp
Salvia.S said:
Powerful and thought-provoking! Your poem masterfully explores the destructive nature of jealousy and the liberating power of forgiveness and love.
March 23rd, 2025 07:45
Salvia.S said:
Powerful and thought-provoking! Your poem masterfully explores the destructive nature of jealousy and the liberating power of forgiveness and love.
March 23rd, 2025 07:45
Hands that grasp
RSM0812 said:
Visually astonishing. It captures so many emotions nicely. My favorite of the day.
March 23rd, 2025 07:09
RSM0812 said:
Visually astonishing. It captures so many emotions nicely. My favorite of the day.
March 23rd, 2025 07:09
Hands that grasp
Poetic Licence said:
That will put the cat among the pigeons, jealously, love, hate, control, for some controlling the green eyed monster is incredibly difficult, are they seeking or expecting forgiveness, one to ponder over my Sunday cup of tea, enjoyed
March 23rd, 2025 05:38
Poetic Licence said:
That will put the cat among the pigeons, jealously, love, hate, control, for some controlling the green eyed monster is incredibly difficult, are they seeking or expecting forgiveness, one to ponder over my Sunday cup of tea, enjoyed
March 23rd, 2025 05:38
Hands that grasp
David Wakeling said:
Jealousy,Love Hate and Forgiveness.This poem has it all. Well done.
March 23rd, 2025 04:59
David Wakeling said:
Jealousy,Love Hate and Forgiveness.This poem has it all. Well done.
March 23rd, 2025 04:59
Hands that grasp
arqios said:
Makes one wonder and ponder with much interest wherein the metaphor lies and points. 🙏🏻🕊
March 23rd, 2025 03:50
arqios said:
Makes one wonder and ponder with much interest wherein the metaphor lies and points. 🙏🏻🕊
March 23rd, 2025 03:50
Too bad (metaphor)
Goldfinch60 said:
It can be so awful when others don\'t show up soren but go away believing you are better than them as you were there.
Andy
March 23rd, 2025 02:31
Goldfinch60 said:
It can be so awful when others don\'t show up soren but go away believing you are better than them as you were there.
Andy
March 23rd, 2025 02:31
Too bad (metaphor)
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, I took KP out for an evening, but I didn\'t turn up. Eh?! Heehee.
March 22nd, 2025 09:09
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, I took KP out for an evening, but I didn\'t turn up. Eh?! Heehee.
March 22nd, 2025 09:09
Too bad (metaphor)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah, the spirit of apathy exudes in this poem. When people just stop engaging and caring to engage. A wonderful metaphor that makes its point well, Soren! Well done, my friend! 👏🐦⬛🖤
March 22nd, 2025 08:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah, the spirit of apathy exudes in this poem. When people just stop engaging and caring to engage. A wonderful metaphor that makes its point well, Soren! Well done, my friend! 👏🐦⬛🖤
March 22nd, 2025 08:28
Too bad (metaphor)
Poetic Licence said:
Achieving anything by default is invalid really, I played for a football team once that won the last game of the season by the other team not turning up because they thought they would lose anyway, we won the league because of that, but the opposition not showing took all the shine of off it, enjoyed the read
March 22nd, 2025 06:29
Poetic Licence said:
Achieving anything by default is invalid really, I played for a football team once that won the last game of the season by the other team not turning up because they thought they would lose anyway, we won the league because of that, but the opposition not showing took all the shine of off it, enjoyed the read
March 22nd, 2025 06:29
Too bad (metaphor)
arqios said:
That indeed is sad. Not so sure if that’s gonna change anytime soon. 🙏🏻🕊️
March 22nd, 2025 05:36
arqios said:
That indeed is sad. Not so sure if that’s gonna change anytime soon. 🙏🏻🕊️
March 22nd, 2025 05:36
Too bad (metaphor)
David Wakeling said:
I can\'t image how annoying it would be if the other team didn\'t turn up.Interesting poem about the challenge being taken away when the opposition doesn\'t get involved.Excellent
March 22nd, 2025 05:19
David Wakeling said:
I can\'t image how annoying it would be if the other team didn\'t turn up.Interesting poem about the challenge being taken away when the opposition doesn\'t get involved.Excellent
March 22nd, 2025 05:19
Flies
Jan bach said:
Loved this poem. Enjoyed the style of writing. Very clever and subtle.
The content really sums up my thoughts about flies in the kitchen. ( Why can\'t they stay outside?)
Extremely well written, you feel the frustration of a delicious meal spoilt.
Jan W
March 22nd, 2025 03:56
Jan bach said:
Loved this poem. Enjoyed the style of writing. Very clever and subtle.
The content really sums up my thoughts about flies in the kitchen. ( Why can\'t they stay outside?)
Extremely well written, you feel the frustration of a delicious meal spoilt.
Jan W
March 22nd, 2025 03:56
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