Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Smell of color
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This my friend, is a lovely shape. At first I saw a mushroom, or it could be a tree, but it looks like a fully bloomed mushroom or tree, which totally mirrors the content. Bravo on this, my friend! 🌹👏 Instant fave.
March 16th, 2025 07:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This my friend, is a lovely shape. At first I saw a mushroom, or it could be a tree, but it looks like a fully bloomed mushroom or tree, which totally mirrors the content. Bravo on this, my friend! 🌹👏 Instant fave.
March 16th, 2025 07:51
Smell of color
aDarkerMind said:
yet another from the pen of Soren to add to my favourites list.
a stunning write;
March 16th, 2025 06:11
aDarkerMind said:
yet another from the pen of Soren to add to my favourites list.
a stunning write;
March 16th, 2025 06:11
Smell of color
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of the positive impact colours and smells can have on us, and a nice smell can open up a wonderful world in your mind, enjoyed the read
March 16th, 2025 05:31
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of the positive impact colours and smells can have on us, and a nice smell can open up a wonderful world in your mind, enjoyed the read
March 16th, 2025 05:31
Smell of color
Friendship said:
Beautifully written, sorenbarrett, Your poem captures the sensory experience of nature and the joy of simple pleasures. It presents nature as a nurturing force that offers comfort and satisfaction, suggesting a deep connection between the self and the natural world. Your poem may aim to celebrate the beauty of nature and its ability to provide joy and satisfaction, encouraging readers to appreciate the simple pleasures in life. It invites reflection on the relationship between humans and the natural world, emphasizing the nourishment found in both physical and emotional realms.
March 16th, 2025 04:47
Friendship said:
Beautifully written, sorenbarrett, Your poem captures the sensory experience of nature and the joy of simple pleasures. It presents nature as a nurturing force that offers comfort and satisfaction, suggesting a deep connection between the self and the natural world. Your poem may aim to celebrate the beauty of nature and its ability to provide joy and satisfaction, encouraging readers to appreciate the simple pleasures in life. It invites reflection on the relationship between humans and the natural world, emphasizing the nourishment found in both physical and emotional realms.
March 16th, 2025 04:47
Smell of color
arqios said:
Smells and colours have a magic in the music 🎶 of the day 🙏🏻🕊️
March 16th, 2025 03:19
arqios said:
Smells and colours have a magic in the music 🎶 of the day 🙏🏻🕊️
March 16th, 2025 03:19
Leaves
cellinic said:
very deep work with philosophical connotations. Liked it.
March 15th, 2025 20:45
cellinic said:
very deep work with philosophical connotations. Liked it.
March 15th, 2025 20:45
Leaves
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing .. sometimes we feel so close to someone or someone can feel a part of us ..
I like how you wrote this
March 15th, 2025 15:50
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing .. sometimes we feel so close to someone or someone can feel a part of us ..
I like how you wrote this
March 15th, 2025 15:50
Leaves
David Wakeling said:
This is so poetic.I like the metaphor of leaves.There is a sadness here but hey thats life.
March 15th, 2025 15:23
David Wakeling said:
This is so poetic.I like the metaphor of leaves.There is a sadness here but hey thats life.
March 15th, 2025 15:23
Leaves
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great job, Soren. This rings so nicely and the poem is beautiful, using nature to symbolize any number of things from loving relationships to our hopes and aspirations. Wonderful job, my friend! 🌹👏
March 15th, 2025 14:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great job, Soren. This rings so nicely and the poem is beautiful, using nature to symbolize any number of things from loving relationships to our hopes and aspirations. Wonderful job, my friend! 🌹👏
March 15th, 2025 14:31
Leaves
Ellen Marsell said:
Through the metaphor of a tree and its leaves, you delicately expressed the evolution of human relationships, marked by growth, separation, and ultimately, the acceptance of fate that leads each to different horizons. Beautiful poem!
March 15th, 2025 14:30
Ellen Marsell said:
Through the metaphor of a tree and its leaves, you delicately expressed the evolution of human relationships, marked by growth, separation, and ultimately, the acceptance of fate that leads each to different horizons. Beautiful poem!
March 15th, 2025 14:30
Leaves
Salvia.S said:
Beautifully written! Your poem captures the bittersweet pain of growing apart and the memories that remain, with words that dance like leaves in the wind....
March 15th, 2025 10:56
Salvia.S said:
Beautifully written! Your poem captures the bittersweet pain of growing apart and the memories that remain, with words that dance like leaves in the wind....
March 15th, 2025 10:56
Leaves
Friendship said:
Well written, Your poem is a poignant reflection on the bond between siblings, employing the metaphor of two leaves on a tree to illustrate a close relationship that evolves over time, leading to both distance and acceptance. You explore the transition from youthful intimacy to the inevitable divergence that comes with personal growth and change. Ultimately, it reflects on the memories of a past connection while acknowledging the separate paths individuals take in life. Your poem delves into the complexities of relationships, emphasizing the inevitability of growth and change while cherishing memories of intimacy. It seeks to resonate with anyone who has experienced the bittersweet nature of moving on from a close bond.
March 15th, 2025 08:34
Friendship said:
Well written, Your poem is a poignant reflection on the bond between siblings, employing the metaphor of two leaves on a tree to illustrate a close relationship that evolves over time, leading to both distance and acceptance. You explore the transition from youthful intimacy to the inevitable divergence that comes with personal growth and change. Ultimately, it reflects on the memories of a past connection while acknowledging the separate paths individuals take in life. Your poem delves into the complexities of relationships, emphasizing the inevitability of growth and change while cherishing memories of intimacy. It seeks to resonate with anyone who has experienced the bittersweet nature of moving on from a close bond.
March 15th, 2025 08:34
Leaves
Teddy.15 said:
How truly beautiful, a child\'s friendship with a tree, how it\'s so different yet very similar in so many ways. Such imagery has given me a glimpse of a young boy and his huge appreciation of life. 🌹
March 15th, 2025 07:13
Teddy.15 said:
How truly beautiful, a child\'s friendship with a tree, how it\'s so different yet very similar in so many ways. Such imagery has given me a glimpse of a young boy and his huge appreciation of life. 🌹
March 15th, 2025 07:13
Verses of dust
rebellion_in_sanity said:
So nice! Felt like personification of the poems and telling each has its own life.
March 15th, 2025 06:13
rebellion_in_sanity said:
So nice! Felt like personification of the poems and telling each has its own life.
March 15th, 2025 06:13
Leaves
arqios said:
Sometimes I feel that one or both of us was grafted and replanted elsewhere and our common roots and main trunk no longer shared. Speaks the state of several of my bygone younger relationships. 🙏🏻🕊
March 15th, 2025 05:51
arqios said:
Sometimes I feel that one or both of us was grafted and replanted elsewhere and our common roots and main trunk no longer shared. Speaks the state of several of my bygone younger relationships. 🙏🏻🕊
March 15th, 2025 05:51
Leaves
Poetic Licence said:
I get the sense of siblings growing up together but gradually drifting apart, then the loss of one while the other remembers fondly of their youth, enjoyed the read
March 15th, 2025 05:47
Poetic Licence said:
I get the sense of siblings growing up together but gradually drifting apart, then the loss of one while the other remembers fondly of their youth, enjoyed the read
March 15th, 2025 05:47
Verses of dust
Goldfinch60 said:
We all write poems and hope others read them as I do yours soren.
Andy
March 15th, 2025 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
We all write poems and hope others read them as I do yours soren.
Andy
March 15th, 2025 02:10
Verses of dust
Ellen Marsell said:
Not everything created will endure; some will crumble, but the process of creation remains meaningful.
March 14th, 2025 14:05
Ellen Marsell said:
Not everything created will endure; some will crumble, but the process of creation remains meaningful.
March 14th, 2025 14:05
Verses of dust
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, the poet\'s craft. Not every piece will be of the same quality, but they will be crafted all the same. Wonderful poem, my friend. 🌹👏
March 14th, 2025 09:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, the poet\'s craft. Not every piece will be of the same quality, but they will be crafted all the same. Wonderful poem, my friend. 🌹👏
March 14th, 2025 09:58
Verses of dust
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting and enjoyable read, I have had many days like that with my poetry and emotions, the complexity is sometimes to daunting,
March 14th, 2025 09:22
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting and enjoyable read, I have had many days like that with my poetry and emotions, the complexity is sometimes to daunting,
March 14th, 2025 09:22
Verses of dust
Teddy.15 said:
And that is everything that makes you into a great poet. 🌹 Love this. 🌹
March 14th, 2025 08:55
Teddy.15 said:
And that is everything that makes you into a great poet. 🌹 Love this. 🌹
March 14th, 2025 08:55
Verses of dust
Friendship said:
You use clay as a metaphor for experiences and emotions. The act of molding clay parallels the way we shape our thoughts and feelings into art. Your poem seeks to express the complexities of creation, acknowledging both the ephemeral and lasting aspects of artistic endeavors and inviting readers to consider their own creative journeys.
March 14th, 2025 05:49
Friendship said:
You use clay as a metaphor for experiences and emotions. The act of molding clay parallels the way we shape our thoughts and feelings into art. Your poem seeks to express the complexities of creation, acknowledging both the ephemeral and lasting aspects of artistic endeavors and inviting readers to consider their own creative journeys.
March 14th, 2025 05:49
Verses of dust
arqios said:
Amazing 🤩 a vivid portrayal that I’ve myself experienced 🙏🏻🕊Liked and Faved
March 14th, 2025 05:35
arqios said:
Amazing 🤩 a vivid portrayal that I’ve myself experienced 🙏🏻🕊Liked and Faved
March 14th, 2025 05:35
Verses of dust
Salvia.S said:
Your words are like clay, molded into a beautiful, poignant reflection on the human experience. Every line is a testament to the fragile, yet resilient nature of life.
March 14th, 2025 05:25
Salvia.S said:
Your words are like clay, molded into a beautiful, poignant reflection on the human experience. Every line is a testament to the fragile, yet resilient nature of life.
March 14th, 2025 05:25
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