Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Fallen leaves
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Soren. Works on many levels. For some reason, this had the feel of Bob Dylan to it. Could imagine these as song lyrics. Well done.
January 3rd, 2025 06:12
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Soren. Works on many levels. For some reason, this had the feel of Bob Dylan to it. Could imagine these as song lyrics. Well done.
January 3rd, 2025 06:12
Tree of life
Poetic Licence said:
I see the slow decay and passing of the beauty of life, then to be slowly reborn. Beautifully written piece of work which i really enjoyed reading.
January 3rd, 2025 05:51
Poetic Licence said:
I see the slow decay and passing of the beauty of life, then to be slowly reborn. Beautifully written piece of work which i really enjoyed reading.
January 3rd, 2025 05:51
Tree of life
Mutley Ravishes said:
This rhyme
Brought to mind
Tolkien.
Beautifully woven words, Soren
January 3rd, 2025 05:17
Mutley Ravishes said:
This rhyme
Brought to mind
Tolkien.
Beautifully woven words, Soren
January 3rd, 2025 05:17
Tree of life
Teddy.15 said:
I see humanity in this with an outstanding metaphor I see protection pride knowledge and wisdom. That\'s just what I see, all entwined into some elegant beautiful poetry. 🌹
January 3rd, 2025 03:54
Teddy.15 said:
I see humanity in this with an outstanding metaphor I see protection pride knowledge and wisdom. That\'s just what I see, all entwined into some elegant beautiful poetry. 🌹
January 3rd, 2025 03:54
Fallen leaves
Goldfinch60 said:
Such emotive words soren, taking ones own life is so heartfelt for others left wondering why.
Andy
January 3rd, 2025 02:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Such emotive words soren, taking ones own life is so heartfelt for others left wondering why.
Andy
January 3rd, 2025 02:30
Fallen leaves
Thad Wilk said:
A terrific poem
on the cycle of life. 🙏
Great imagery,
love the title \'Fallen Leaves\'
outstanding use of metaphor!👍
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
January 2nd, 2025 22:53
Thad Wilk said:
A terrific poem
on the cycle of life. 🙏
Great imagery,
love the title \'Fallen Leaves\'
outstanding use of metaphor!👍
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
January 2nd, 2025 22:53
New gods
2781 said:
I am the Lord, and there is none else, there is no God besides me: I girded thee, though thou hast not known me:
January 2nd, 2025 20:17
2781 said:
I am the Lord, and there is none else, there is no God besides me: I girded thee, though thou hast not known me:
January 2nd, 2025 20:17
Shadows
NinjaGirl said:
I do love shadows, seems to be the ever-evolving existence and then end to humanity. the humans don\'t die at night like the shadows do, but in a day or two, it seems the humanity does
January 2nd, 2025 17:50
NinjaGirl said:
I do love shadows, seems to be the ever-evolving existence and then end to humanity. the humans don\'t die at night like the shadows do, but in a day or two, it seems the humanity does
January 2nd, 2025 17:50
Bugged out
NinjaGirl said:
as much as I hate insects, this poem makes their life sound sad, and tragically beautiful--a nod to traditional poetry that i enjoy!
January 2nd, 2025 17:47
NinjaGirl said:
as much as I hate insects, this poem makes their life sound sad, and tragically beautiful--a nod to traditional poetry that i enjoy!
January 2nd, 2025 17:47
Fallen leaves
NinjaGirl said:
very tragic, another one gone...death holds the victim in its arms but breaks the heart of friends and family
January 2nd, 2025 17:45
NinjaGirl said:
very tragic, another one gone...death holds the victim in its arms but breaks the heart of friends and family
January 2nd, 2025 17:45
Hole
NinjaGirl said:
Love seems to be a battle which ages us, suddenly you can\'t make sense of their texts or calls, no better than a stone tablet and chalk
January 2nd, 2025 17:40
NinjaGirl said:
Love seems to be a battle which ages us, suddenly you can\'t make sense of their texts or calls, no better than a stone tablet and chalk
January 2nd, 2025 17:40
Fallen leaves
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem speaks of life\'s incessant march onward (to what exactl?) as we remain haunted by the sins of our past as well as the ones yet to be perpetrated. In this poem, I read of a lynching or an execution of a run away slave...but that is, for me, while time and people may have forgotten that event long ago, while no body was found, and no tracks left behind...the breeze knows of it, the ghosts of the birds flying overhead know of it. And, truthfully, those collective skeletons, they always come out eventually...often times through history repeating itself. So, in this I see that cycle. I could be way off here with my interpretation, but that is how it I am reading it right now. Regardless, well done, my Soren! 🌹👏
January 2nd, 2025 15:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem speaks of life\'s incessant march onward (to what exactl?) as we remain haunted by the sins of our past as well as the ones yet to be perpetrated. In this poem, I read of a lynching or an execution of a run away slave...but that is, for me, while time and people may have forgotten that event long ago, while no body was found, and no tracks left behind...the breeze knows of it, the ghosts of the birds flying overhead know of it. And, truthfully, those collective skeletons, they always come out eventually...often times through history repeating itself. So, in this I see that cycle. I could be way off here with my interpretation, but that is how it I am reading it right now. Regardless, well done, my Soren! 🌹👏
January 2nd, 2025 15:14
Fallen leaves
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely read about the cycle of life and the contrasts of pain and suffering that go with it a long the way, enjoyed the read
January 2nd, 2025 09:25
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely read about the cycle of life and the contrasts of pain and suffering that go with it a long the way, enjoyed the read
January 2nd, 2025 09:25
Fallen leaves
arqios said:
“Fallen leaves\" being a picture of life cycle’s ending, curtailed by the season in which it “lives’’ powerfully intertwines nature and human suffering, creating a poignant narrative. The imagery and symbolism effectively capture the pain and loss experienced. A strong and meaningful vice ringing clear from you pen, Soren!
January 2nd, 2025 06:47
arqios said:
“Fallen leaves\" being a picture of life cycle’s ending, curtailed by the season in which it “lives’’ powerfully intertwines nature and human suffering, creating a poignant narrative. The imagery and symbolism effectively capture the pain and loss experienced. A strong and meaningful vice ringing clear from you pen, Soren!
January 2nd, 2025 06:47
Fallen leaves
rin said:
It looks like it\'s peaceful, but it\'s difficult to carry on.
Strange things still happen.
There\'s one thing I don\'t understand. I would appreciate it if you could tell me why you chose the title \"Fallen Leaves.\"
January 2nd, 2025 05:32
rin said:
It looks like it\'s peaceful, but it\'s difficult to carry on.
Strange things still happen.
There\'s one thing I don\'t understand. I would appreciate it if you could tell me why you chose the title \"Fallen Leaves.\"
January 2nd, 2025 05:32
Fallen leaves
Teddy.15 said:
The very importance of life, very apt for today. Superbly powerful. 🌹
January 2nd, 2025 05:31
Teddy.15 said:
The very importance of life, very apt for today. Superbly powerful. 🌹
January 2nd, 2025 05:31
Bugged out
Cassie58 said:
I hate to see the death of any living thing. I would pause and reflect on its living, insect or not. Some would label me nuts 😂
Happy new year Soren.
January 1st, 2025 15:30
Cassie58 said:
I hate to see the death of any living thing. I would pause and reflect on its living, insect or not. Some would label me nuts 😂
Happy new year Soren.
January 1st, 2025 15:30
New gods
David Wakeling said:
This is quite good.It captures the changing nature of Mythology.Excellent rhyme as well
January 1st, 2025 15:25
David Wakeling said:
This is quite good.It captures the changing nature of Mythology.Excellent rhyme as well
January 1st, 2025 15:25
New gods
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend, we grapple with belief systems all our lives, if we are thinking beings. If we are not, we follow the herd in relative bliss which is far easier. Your poem speaks tof thoughts we should not fear, but embrace, that we may come to our own understanding and find peace within ourselves. I applaud you.!
January 1st, 2025 10:41
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend, we grapple with belief systems all our lives, if we are thinking beings. If we are not, we follow the herd in relative bliss which is far easier. Your poem speaks tof thoughts we should not fear, but embrace, that we may come to our own understanding and find peace within ourselves. I applaud you.!
January 1st, 2025 10:41
New gods
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I would offer something to say, except our friend arqios said it...and better than I would have at that! LOL! A wonderful, thought-provoking write, Soren. Happy New Year my friend! 🥂🍾
January 1st, 2025 09:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I would offer something to say, except our friend arqios said it...and better than I would have at that! LOL! A wonderful, thought-provoking write, Soren. Happy New Year my friend! 🥂🍾
January 1st, 2025 09:26
New gods
orchidee said:
Zeus will be idolatry, though he never existed in my view.
January 1st, 2025 05:19
orchidee said:
Zeus will be idolatry, though he never existed in my view.
January 1st, 2025 05:19
New gods
Poetic Licence said:
I have no doubt this will raise a few eyebrows and questions, but i enjoyed the piece, well written.
January 1st, 2025 04:57
Poetic Licence said:
I have no doubt this will raise a few eyebrows and questions, but i enjoyed the piece, well written.
January 1st, 2025 04:57
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