Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Riddle
Neville said:
So many possibilities, so little time .. I shall have to make a stab in the dark and run with time .. or reflecting upon it .. and therefore one\'s mortality .. maybe Neville
January 13th, 2025 03:20
Neville said:
So many possibilities, so little time .. I shall have to make a stab in the dark and run with time .. or reflecting upon it .. and therefore one\'s mortality .. maybe Neville
January 13th, 2025 03:20
Riddle
Thad Wilk said:
Terrific poem and
riddle indeed!! 😀
I see someone in a
multi mirrored room
like they have at the circus. 🎪
And all the shapes distorted.
That\'s the first thing that
Came to mind!¿😳
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 12th, 2025 21:09
Thad Wilk said:
Terrific poem and
riddle indeed!! 😀
I see someone in a
multi mirrored room
like they have at the circus. 🎪
And all the shapes distorted.
That\'s the first thing that
Came to mind!¿😳
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 12th, 2025 21:09
Riddle
NinjaGirl said:
sandy lair, hints to the making of glass. looking into another I see eternity, nods to two mirrors reflecting each other infinitely. silver stare shows that it is a mirror and not just glass, and plenty kids play peek-a-boo with themselves. I\'m not sure about the born an orphan from an infertile mother, but I love the detail that you put into each line.
January 12th, 2025 15:51
NinjaGirl said:
sandy lair, hints to the making of glass. looking into another I see eternity, nods to two mirrors reflecting each other infinitely. silver stare shows that it is a mirror and not just glass, and plenty kids play peek-a-boo with themselves. I\'m not sure about the born an orphan from an infertile mother, but I love the detail that you put into each line.
January 12th, 2025 15:51
Riddle
Bella Shepard said:
Like a hall of mirrors, no beginning and no end, how do we make sense of life. A remarkable brain teaser, Loved it!
January 12th, 2025 12:22
Bella Shepard said:
Like a hall of mirrors, no beginning and no end, how do we make sense of life. A remarkable brain teaser, Loved it!
January 12th, 2025 12:22
Riddle
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is a great poem with countless possible interpretations. Here\'s mine. The riddle: Life itself. This poem uses seeming impossibilities (birth out of infertility, confused directions, etc., to show the alluring and yet also trippy and even unsettling reality of life. That\'s what I get out of this. One but many interpretations, no doubt. A hallmark of brilliant work, Soren! 🌹👏
January 12th, 2025 12:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is a great poem with countless possible interpretations. Here\'s mine. The riddle: Life itself. This poem uses seeming impossibilities (birth out of infertility, confused directions, etc., to show the alluring and yet also trippy and even unsettling reality of life. That\'s what I get out of this. One but many interpretations, no doubt. A hallmark of brilliant work, Soren! 🌹👏
January 12th, 2025 12:05
What happened to beauty?
vicecream said:
Thisss is a sore spot in my heart- the disposableness of everything it seems, so hard to find something made to last. Awesome write thank you
January 12th, 2025 08:16
vicecream said:
Thisss is a sore spot in my heart- the disposableness of everything it seems, so hard to find something made to last. Awesome write thank you
January 12th, 2025 08:16
Riddle
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I\'m sure I know the answer to this riddle - the mother-in-law, well KP\'s mum then! lol.
January 12th, 2025 08:04
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I\'m sure I know the answer to this riddle - the mother-in-law, well KP\'s mum then! lol.
January 12th, 2025 08:04
Riddle
Teddy.15 said:
I see fate here, and no matter how hard we run we cannot escape it because it is there always and everywhere, oh how to play with your reader amazing in every way. 🌹
January 12th, 2025 05:32
Teddy.15 said:
I see fate here, and no matter how hard we run we cannot escape it because it is there always and everywhere, oh how to play with your reader amazing in every way. 🌹
January 12th, 2025 05:32
Riddle
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful piece of work, with a few interpretations, but i get reflections back through an old mirror, really enjoyed the read.
January 12th, 2025 05:24
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful piece of work, with a few interpretations, but i get reflections back through an old mirror, really enjoyed the read.
January 12th, 2025 05:24
Riddle
arqios said:
I\'m really no good with riddles but this looks like it\'s talking about some kind of looking glass or mirror... reflective surface.
January 12th, 2025 05:18
arqios said:
I\'m really no good with riddles but this looks like it\'s talking about some kind of looking glass or mirror... reflective surface.
January 12th, 2025 05:18
Riddle
David Wakeling said:
This one is well written.I must say it is a riddle.It has a number of interpretations.For me it is life through the looking glass.Alice in wonderland
January 12th, 2025 04:49
David Wakeling said:
This one is well written.I must say it is a riddle.It has a number of interpretations.For me it is life through the looking glass.Alice in wonderland
January 12th, 2025 04:49
Flies buzz
Neville said:
When its dead and gone, it might not be as quiet or quite as it seems .. there\'s always likely to be a certain amount of residual buzzing to contend with .. methinks .. Neville
January 12th, 2025 02:26
Neville said:
When its dead and gone, it might not be as quiet or quite as it seems .. there\'s always likely to be a certain amount of residual buzzing to contend with .. methinks .. Neville
January 12th, 2025 02:26
Flies buzz
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren but that love will always be there untarnished.
Andy
January 12th, 2025 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren but that love will always be there untarnished.
Andy
January 12th, 2025 02:23
The muse\'s dirge
NafisaSB said:
i think the muse is very much alive in you - keep it strong and safe
happy musing, and composing
January 12th, 2025 01:23
NafisaSB said:
i think the muse is very much alive in you - keep it strong and safe
happy musing, and composing
January 12th, 2025 01:23
Flies buzz
NafisaSB said:
images of past love come creeping up to us at the oddest ties - loved the way you have composed this - keepitup
January 12th, 2025 01:22
NafisaSB said:
images of past love come creeping up to us at the oddest ties - loved the way you have composed this - keepitup
January 12th, 2025 01:22
Flies buzz
Thad Wilk said:
Fantastic poem,
mind blowing imagery!! 😳
Really captured
the readers attention!!🤩
Thanks for sharing
love it!! 😍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 11th, 2025 21:43
Thad Wilk said:
Fantastic poem,
mind blowing imagery!! 😳
Really captured
the readers attention!!🤩
Thanks for sharing
love it!! 😍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 11th, 2025 21:43
Flies buzz
David Wakeling said:
Sounds like my Divorce. Death of love and fear.Powerful stuff.Some anger and sadness here.
January 11th, 2025 15:56
David Wakeling said:
Sounds like my Divorce. Death of love and fear.Powerful stuff.Some anger and sadness here.
January 11th, 2025 15:56
Flies buzz
Friendship said:
your poem explores the haunting nature of lost love and the emotional aftermath of heartbreak.
January 11th, 2025 15:18
Friendship said:
your poem explores the haunting nature of lost love and the emotional aftermath of heartbreak.
January 11th, 2025 15:18
Flies buzz
Bella Shepard said:
I get a feeling of love buried, but not necessarily dead, waiting in the recesses of the mind like bothersome flies buzzing, giving no peace. Brilliantly versed!
January 11th, 2025 14:05
Bella Shepard said:
I get a feeling of love buried, but not necessarily dead, waiting in the recesses of the mind like bothersome flies buzzing, giving no peace. Brilliantly versed!
January 11th, 2025 14:05
Flies buzz
NinjaGirl said:
This is lovely, such a powerful insight. Rot becomes perfume, and where there was once love, there is hate. So beautiful!
January 11th, 2025 14:02
NinjaGirl said:
This is lovely, such a powerful insight. Rot becomes perfume, and where there was once love, there is hate. So beautiful!
January 11th, 2025 14:02
What happened to beauty?
gray0328 said:
We toss things out just to get something new when the things we toss still have beauty. Enjoyed it Soren
January 11th, 2025 14:01
gray0328 said:
We toss things out just to get something new when the things we toss still have beauty. Enjoyed it Soren
January 11th, 2025 14:01
Flies buzz
gray0328 said:
Great depiction of the ghost of failed love that continues to linger. Well Done
January 11th, 2025 13:58
gray0328 said:
Great depiction of the ghost of failed love that continues to linger. Well Done
January 11th, 2025 13:58
Flies buzz
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I can relate to this in more ways than one, my friend. A graveyard of an old love. Some live in a graveyard of current love! ❤️ A well expressed and thought-provoking write. As for the buzzing sound...shoo flies! 🤣 Again, really enjoyed this Soren!
January 11th, 2025 12:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I can relate to this in more ways than one, my friend. A graveyard of an old love. Some live in a graveyard of current love! ❤️ A well expressed and thought-provoking write. As for the buzzing sound...shoo flies! 🤣 Again, really enjoyed this Soren!
January 11th, 2025 12:12
Flies buzz
Cassie58 said:
Strong metaphor to describe a dead romance that haunts. The greater the love that was, the more the haunting. Some very dark imagery here Soren. Quite a nightmare. Great description. Have a good weekend.
January 11th, 2025 09:46
Cassie58 said:
Strong metaphor to describe a dead romance that haunts. The greater the love that was, the more the haunting. Some very dark imagery here Soren. Quite a nightmare. Great description. Have a good weekend.
January 11th, 2025 09:46
Flies buzz
arqios said:
The decay and haunting with their emotional resonance! Here spread out before us is a vivid and intense poetic exploration of the aftermath of a lost love. The raw and evocative imagery captures the complex emotions of grief, decay, and the longing for closure. It speaks to the universal experience of dealing with the ghosts of past relationships and the struggle to find a way forward. Intense and impactful Soren!
January 11th, 2025 07:47
arqios said:
The decay and haunting with their emotional resonance! Here spread out before us is a vivid and intense poetic exploration of the aftermath of a lost love. The raw and evocative imagery captures the complex emotions of grief, decay, and the longing for closure. It speaks to the universal experience of dealing with the ghosts of past relationships and the struggle to find a way forward. Intense and impactful Soren!
January 11th, 2025 07:47
Flies buzz
Poetic Licence said:
Get a lot of haunting images of failed love reading this, though a bit dark very enjoyable read
January 11th, 2025 06:31
Poetic Licence said:
Get a lot of haunting images of failed love reading this, though a bit dark very enjoyable read
January 11th, 2025 06:31
Flies buzz
Teddy.15 said:
From the underside of love itself. Dead and buried incredible imagery and a most brilliant title🌹
January 11th, 2025 06:23
Teddy.15 said:
From the underside of love itself. Dead and buried incredible imagery and a most brilliant title🌹
January 11th, 2025 06:23
Flies buzz
Mutley Ravishes said:
I am not the memories in my head (or should that be body?), dammit!
A horribly good rhyme, Soren!
January 11th, 2025 05:26
Mutley Ravishes said:
I am not the memories in my head (or should that be body?), dammit!
A horribly good rhyme, Soren!
January 11th, 2025 05:26
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