Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Sacrifice, take the hit
MDStone said:

There are so many ways to protect and preserve. Often it is our own pain that develops us into those roles for others. Becoming bolder, stronger, sharper, selfless… all to try to keep others from accident and pain. A beautiful snapshot of life, Soren. Thanks for sharing.

May 4th, 2025 06:39

Sacrifice, take the hit
David Wakeling said:

A wonderful essay on the virtue of sacrifice.So many ways inanimate objects suffer for the common good.This could be taken as a metaphor for the human experience.For examples in War time.

May 4th, 2025 05:32

Sacrifice, take the hit
Salvia.S said:

A beautifully crafted reflection on selflessness—quiet strength shown through vivid, humble imagery.


May 4th, 2025 03:55

Good taste
Shandi said:

That was a fun read! Thank you for sharing :)

May 4th, 2025 03:47

Sacrifice, take the hit
arqios said:

Most engaging read Soren🙏🏻🕊️

May 4th, 2025 03:42

Sacrifice, take the hit
dimpy said:

great...

May 4th, 2025 03:37

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Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun words soren, keep kickin\' those butts.

Andy

May 4th, 2025 01:19

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Tony36 said:

Excellent write

May 3rd, 2025 18:08

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Lorenz said:

Jesus is back riding a bike !

May 3rd, 2025 10:10

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

Now this made me laugh, dearest Soren, and that was much needed today. Thank you so much, my friend! 🌹👏

May 3rd, 2025 08:20

Pick a page
Reynaldo Casison said:

Nice one Soren

Timeless and Sublime rhythms

May 3rd, 2025 06:46

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arqios said:

Now here’s one to keep🙏🏻🕊️

May 3rd, 2025 05:12

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David Wakeling said:

I had to smile at this one. Well constructed and a fun read

May 3rd, 2025 03:29

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Salvia.S said:

LOL, pure comedy gold!

May 3rd, 2025 03:13

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Teddy.15 said:

lol imagery rich an hilarious scene indeed. 🌹

May 3rd, 2025 03:09

Poems in the wind
Bibekanand \'Agyat\' said:

💕 lovely 🌹

May 3rd, 2025 03:03

A lot of wind
Goldfinch60 said:

We must all keep sailing in our lives soren no matter which way we go.

Andy

May 3rd, 2025 01:29

Hands that grasp
jarcher54 said:

Brilliant ring composition... first the chains and bonds and abuse tighten and oppress, then forgiveness cuts the chains and we all begin to be free, oppressor as well as oppressed. Love this!

May 2nd, 2025 21:09

Acts
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Would I be wrong if I said it evoked the memory of Gone With the Wind? The gaity in the beginning followed by the tragedy of war?

May 2nd, 2025 12:34

A lot of wind
Tristan Robert Lange said:

I believe every family must have a great storyteller. Perhaps not, but that is hard to imagine. Mine has had a few. This was such a wonderful write that I am sure is a fitting tribute to your Uncle. Well done, Soren! 🌹👏

May 2nd, 2025 10:46

A lot of wind
MDStone said:

I hasten to say, I was blown away! Great story with vivid expression. For a moment it brought back that childlike imagination. Thoroughly enjoyed it.

May 2nd, 2025 10:17

A lot of wind
hzugman said:

Good write. Brings up the question does time flow both ways.

May 2nd, 2025 09:59

A lot of wind
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

May 2nd, 2025 09:59

A lot of wind
David Wakeling said:

an amazing tale of the wind creating havoc, An enjoyable read.Excellent

May 2nd, 2025 05:11

A lot of wind
Teddy.15 said:

A story teller, how truly wonderful and in all this imagery a very windy journey absolutely magical last stanza 🌹 I\'ll be wanting to rent it too. 🌬️

May 2nd, 2025 05:02

A lot of wind
Victor Bolshov said:

Holy Carroll! Innit something?! This one\'s probably the best I read here so far. Surrealistic, rich imagery. The idea of a storm that comes in as a constructive force (mills flour, holds a whole lake in place, all at right angles!) - is brilliant. It\'s like this is the storm of very reason!

May 2nd, 2025 05:02

A lot of wind
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful work. Full of power.

May 2nd, 2025 04:13

A lot of wind
dimpy said:

good writing

May 2nd, 2025 03:40

A lot of wind
Salvia.S said:

Wonderful!

May 2nd, 2025 03:38

Ponderings
Goldfinch60 said:

Insanity seems to rulke the world nowadays soren.

Andy

May 2nd, 2025 01:45



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