Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Flies buzz
gray0328 said:
Great depiction of the ghost of failed love that continues to linger. Well Done
January 11th, 2025 13:58
gray0328 said:
Great depiction of the ghost of failed love that continues to linger. Well Done
January 11th, 2025 13:58
Flies buzz
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I can relate to this in more ways than one, my friend. A graveyard of an old love. Some live in a graveyard of current love! ❤️ A well expressed and thought-provoking write. As for the buzzing sound...shoo flies! 🤣 Again, really enjoyed this Soren!
January 11th, 2025 12:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I can relate to this in more ways than one, my friend. A graveyard of an old love. Some live in a graveyard of current love! ❤️ A well expressed and thought-provoking write. As for the buzzing sound...shoo flies! 🤣 Again, really enjoyed this Soren!
January 11th, 2025 12:12
Flies buzz
Cassie58 said:
Strong metaphor to describe a dead romance that haunts. The greater the love that was, the more the haunting. Some very dark imagery here Soren. Quite a nightmare. Great description. Have a good weekend.
January 11th, 2025 09:46
Cassie58 said:
Strong metaphor to describe a dead romance that haunts. The greater the love that was, the more the haunting. Some very dark imagery here Soren. Quite a nightmare. Great description. Have a good weekend.
January 11th, 2025 09:46
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arqios said:
The decay and haunting with their emotional resonance! Here spread out before us is a vivid and intense poetic exploration of the aftermath of a lost love. The raw and evocative imagery captures the complex emotions of grief, decay, and the longing for closure. It speaks to the universal experience of dealing with the ghosts of past relationships and the struggle to find a way forward. Intense and impactful Soren!
January 11th, 2025 07:47
arqios said:
The decay and haunting with their emotional resonance! Here spread out before us is a vivid and intense poetic exploration of the aftermath of a lost love. The raw and evocative imagery captures the complex emotions of grief, decay, and the longing for closure. It speaks to the universal experience of dealing with the ghosts of past relationships and the struggle to find a way forward. Intense and impactful Soren!
January 11th, 2025 07:47
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Poetic Licence said:
Get a lot of haunting images of failed love reading this, though a bit dark very enjoyable read
January 11th, 2025 06:31
Poetic Licence said:
Get a lot of haunting images of failed love reading this, though a bit dark very enjoyable read
January 11th, 2025 06:31
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Teddy.15 said:
From the underside of love itself. Dead and buried incredible imagery and a most brilliant title🌹
January 11th, 2025 06:23
Teddy.15 said:
From the underside of love itself. Dead and buried incredible imagery and a most brilliant title🌹
January 11th, 2025 06:23
Flies buzz
Mutley Ravishes said:
I am not the memories in my head (or should that be body?), dammit!
A horribly good rhyme, Soren!
January 11th, 2025 05:26
Mutley Ravishes said:
I am not the memories in my head (or should that be body?), dammit!
A horribly good rhyme, Soren!
January 11th, 2025 05:26
Flies buzz
orchidee said:
Ahh, you\'ve included some more recipe ideas for foods for me to give to KP! lol
January 11th, 2025 04:24
orchidee said:
Ahh, you\'ve included some more recipe ideas for foods for me to give to KP! lol
January 11th, 2025 04:24
What happened to beauty?
Goldfinch60 said:
Beauty is still out there soren but not many people look for it nowadays, I do though.
Andy
January 11th, 2025 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Beauty is still out there soren but not many people look for it nowadays, I do though.
Andy
January 11th, 2025 02:53
What happened to beauty?
Dan Williams said:
\"\"quality poured in a draught of a drought\" is so pretty, so effective. The eye of too many beholders is behind blinders. Noce work.
January 11th, 2025 01:31
Dan Williams said:
\"\"quality poured in a draught of a drought\" is so pretty, so effective. The eye of too many beholders is behind blinders. Noce work.
January 11th, 2025 01:31
What happened to beauty?
Thad Wilk said:
Yes, true beauty in
this world 🌎 today
Seems to be just
throw away.. 😢
Powerful penning
my friend!! ,💯👌
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 10th, 2025 22:51
Thad Wilk said:
Yes, true beauty in
this world 🌎 today
Seems to be just
throw away.. 😢
Powerful penning
my friend!! ,💯👌
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 10th, 2025 22:51
What happened to beauty?
David Wakeling said:
This is a honest and sad commentary on modern life.Where is the Beauty indeed. Well written
January 10th, 2025 15:28
David Wakeling said:
This is a honest and sad commentary on modern life.Where is the Beauty indeed. Well written
January 10th, 2025 15:28
What happened to beauty?
Bella Shepard said:
As we have become creatures of consumption, everything must be disposable or have a shelf life. You rightly ask the question \"What happened to beauty\"? I fear we have lost a true appreciation of it, for what we call beautiful today is nothing at all. Bravo!!
January 10th, 2025 10:54
Bella Shepard said:
As we have become creatures of consumption, everything must be disposable or have a shelf life. You rightly ask the question \"What happened to beauty\"? I fear we have lost a true appreciation of it, for what we call beautiful today is nothing at all. Bravo!!
January 10th, 2025 10:54
The muse\'s dirge
Tom Dylan said:
A great piece, Soren. Some cracking lines. The image of poems pouring through cracks in the floor. Just fantastic.
January 10th, 2025 10:36
Tom Dylan said:
A great piece, Soren. Some cracking lines. The image of poems pouring through cracks in the floor. Just fantastic.
January 10th, 2025 10:36
What happened to beauty?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The title poses a great question and the poem delivers quite the societal critique. Nothing is lasting and the trivial seems to be all that is valued in this topsy turvy world. Great poem, my friend! 🌹👏
January 10th, 2025 10:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The title poses a great question and the poem delivers quite the societal critique. Nothing is lasting and the trivial seems to be all that is valued in this topsy turvy world. Great poem, my friend! 🌹👏
January 10th, 2025 10:27
What happened to beauty?
Poetic Licence said:
I got the impression of todays society becoming a throw away society and nothing appears to be valued anymore, beauty is ignored. Enjoyed the read
January 10th, 2025 07:57
Poetic Licence said:
I got the impression of todays society becoming a throw away society and nothing appears to be valued anymore, beauty is ignored. Enjoyed the read
January 10th, 2025 07:57
What happened to beauty?
arqios said:
Here I found a powerful critique of modern society\'s disposable nature and the erosion of lasting value and beauty. It surrounds us and pervades our lives. Every 6 months or so we have to force upgrade to keep up with the techno-Joneses or be left behind in the dust of madness.
January 10th, 2025 07:25
arqios said:
Here I found a powerful critique of modern society\'s disposable nature and the erosion of lasting value and beauty. It surrounds us and pervades our lives. Every 6 months or so we have to force upgrade to keep up with the techno-Joneses or be left behind in the dust of madness.
January 10th, 2025 07:25
What happened to beauty?
Teddy.15 said:
It can all change in a click of a moment, for better or for worse. Powerful and poetic as your work always is. 🌹
January 10th, 2025 05:23
Teddy.15 said:
It can all change in a click of a moment, for better or for worse. Powerful and poetic as your work always is. 🌹
January 10th, 2025 05:23
The muse\'s dirge
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, we all have those lost poems but in time they will come back when our Muse finds them within us.
Andy
January 10th, 2025 02:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, we all have those lost poems but in time they will come back when our Muse finds them within us.
Andy
January 10th, 2025 02:13
The muse\'s dirge
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning 💪
kind of poignant 😢
I must say!
A muse lost can
make blue skies
turn gray. 🗿
Awesome penning
great rhyme and flow,
I don\'t think 🤔 your muse
will ever go!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 9th, 2025 23:03
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning 💪
kind of poignant 😢
I must say!
A muse lost can
make blue skies
turn gray. 🗿
Awesome penning
great rhyme and flow,
I don\'t think 🤔 your muse
will ever go!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 9th, 2025 23:03
The muse\'s dirge
NinjaGirl said:
I absolutely love this, I feel I\'ve got rooms that look like this--writing on the walls and broken mirrors.
January 9th, 2025 21:48
NinjaGirl said:
I absolutely love this, I feel I\'ve got rooms that look like this--writing on the walls and broken mirrors.
January 9th, 2025 21:48
The muse\'s dirge
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. It looks like youe muse is back.
January 9th, 2025 18:13
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. It looks like youe muse is back.
January 9th, 2025 18:13
Chickens
Tom Dylan said:
Love this! Your words blew me away! I can relate to so much in this. To quote Bob Dylan, I try my best to be just like I am, but everybody wants me to be just like them.
January 9th, 2025 10:36
Tom Dylan said:
Love this! Your words blew me away! I can relate to so much in this. To quote Bob Dylan, I try my best to be just like I am, but everybody wants me to be just like them.
January 9th, 2025 10:36
The muse\'s dirge
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah the muse. Sometimes there, but then sometimes on vacation. But where would we be without the inspiration...and I do believe that the breaks often spark seasons of even greater productivity. Well expressed, my friend! Here\'s to the craft! 🌹👏
January 9th, 2025 09:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah the muse. Sometimes there, but then sometimes on vacation. But where would we be without the inspiration...and I do believe that the breaks often spark seasons of even greater productivity. Well expressed, my friend! Here\'s to the craft! 🌹👏
January 9th, 2025 09:53
The muse\'s dirge
arqios said:
The muse does tend to come and go at will! Still trying to figure out how to entice them to stay. Thanks for this splendid read 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 9th, 2025 06:52
arqios said:
The muse does tend to come and go at will! Still trying to figure out how to entice them to stay. Thanks for this splendid read 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 9th, 2025 06:52
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