Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Bearded sonnet
Demar Desu said:
I was telling my wife yesterday how I wanted to trim my beard down. Now reading this poem I would rather grow it out. Thanks for the inspiration
August 24th, 2025 03:51
Demar Desu said:
I was telling my wife yesterday how I wanted to trim my beard down. Now reading this poem I would rather grow it out. Thanks for the inspiration
August 24th, 2025 03:51
Bearded sonnet
Teddy.15 said:
I love this! My husband has a beard that\'s going white-grey it\'s beautiful. How very true you facial hair is part of you my friend all that you have weathered and all that you will weather. Such a beautiful sonnet, and absolutely not I would never ever shave father Christmas\'s beard it simply would be him. đź’ś
August 24th, 2025 03:47
Teddy.15 said:
I love this! My husband has a beard that\'s going white-grey it\'s beautiful. How very true you facial hair is part of you my friend all that you have weathered and all that you will weather. Such a beautiful sonnet, and absolutely not I would never ever shave father Christmas\'s beard it simply would be him. đź’ś
August 24th, 2025 03:47
Mirrored pool of Hermes
Neville said:
Such exquisite ink my friend .. absolutely .. and not a drop of it wasted .. Neville
August 24th, 2025 03:10
Neville said:
Such exquisite ink my friend .. absolutely .. and not a drop of it wasted .. Neville
August 24th, 2025 03:10
Traps
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s always the ones in the nicest suits with the sweetest smile
August 24th, 2025 01:43
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s always the ones in the nicest suits with the sweetest smile
August 24th, 2025 01:43
Wind
NinjaGirl said:
Is the wind satan\'s rage or God\'s righteous anger? I really like this poem a lot.
August 24th, 2025 01:42
NinjaGirl said:
Is the wind satan\'s rage or God\'s righteous anger? I really like this poem a lot.
August 24th, 2025 01:42
Seasons
NinjaGirl said:
I love living in a place where I can experience all four seasons! It\'s really such a joy.
August 24th, 2025 01:41
NinjaGirl said:
I love living in a place where I can experience all four seasons! It\'s really such a joy.
August 24th, 2025 01:41
Mirrored pool of Hermes
NinjaGirl said:
I don\'t know how to explain that I really like it...so there it is.
August 24th, 2025 01:29
NinjaGirl said:
I don\'t know how to explain that I really like it...so there it is.
August 24th, 2025 01:29
Mirrored pool of Hermes
arqios said:
This ripples with alchemy; lightning etching mortal traces, language liquefying into streams that both reveal and distort. What’s upright bends in the reflection, truth and falsehood trading places, while the delicate drag of a quill ferries the remnants of thought into the current, carrying them toward some unseen confluence.
August 23rd, 2025 18:06
arqios said:
This ripples with alchemy; lightning etching mortal traces, language liquefying into streams that both reveal and distort. What’s upright bends in the reflection, truth and falsehood trading places, while the delicate drag of a quill ferries the remnants of thought into the current, carrying them toward some unseen confluence.
August 23rd, 2025 18:06
Mirrored pool of Hermes
Keeter C said:
I guess in the end it’s all just words? Nice.
August 23rd, 2025 16:52
Keeter C said:
I guess in the end it’s all just words? Nice.
August 23rd, 2025 16:52
Mirrored pool of Hermes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That image of “letters fall in drops of words forming streams into puddles of nouns and verbs” caught me most. It’s vivid, almost tactile…language becoming liquid. Brilliant, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏
August 23rd, 2025 16:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That image of “letters fall in drops of words forming streams into puddles of nouns and verbs” caught me most. It’s vivid, almost tactile…language becoming liquid. Brilliant, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏
August 23rd, 2025 16:37
Mirrored pool of Hermes
Friendship said:
The poem touches on themes of memory, mortality, and the fluidity of meaning. It suggests that as individuals navigate life, the way they articulate their experiences—through language—can alter perceptions of right and wrong, as well as reality itself. Your poem aims to provoke thought about the relationship between language, memory, and identity, encouraging readers to reflect on how they communicate their own experiences and perceptions.
August 23rd, 2025 12:03
Friendship said:
The poem touches on themes of memory, mortality, and the fluidity of meaning. It suggests that as individuals navigate life, the way they articulate their experiences—through language—can alter perceptions of right and wrong, as well as reality itself. Your poem aims to provoke thought about the relationship between language, memory, and identity, encouraging readers to reflect on how they communicate their own experiences and perceptions.
August 23rd, 2025 12:03
Wind
jim56 said:
wow thats some poem stunning
got everything power feeling
amazing use of words
beautifully expressed wow
August 23rd, 2025 11:40
jim56 said:
wow thats some poem stunning
got everything power feeling
amazing use of words
beautifully expressed wow
August 23rd, 2025 11:40
Mirrored pool of Hermes
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Great, enjoyed the flow of this.
August 23rd, 2025 10:24
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Great, enjoyed the flow of this.
August 23rd, 2025 10:24
Mirrored pool of Hermes
Teddy.15 said:
I\'d like to say a legacy was born. 🌹
August 23rd, 2025 09:23
Teddy.15 said:
I\'d like to say a legacy was born. 🌹
August 23rd, 2025 09:23
Mirrored pool of Hermes
Priya Tomar said:
Meloncholic tone.
Spicy melody.
wonderful creation !
August 23rd, 2025 05:16
Priya Tomar said:
Meloncholic tone.
Spicy melody.
wonderful creation !
August 23rd, 2025 05:16
Mirrored pool of Hermes
Salvia.S said:
This piece is hauntingly lyrical and deeply evocative. Truly beautiful work!!!!
August 23rd, 2025 03:31
Salvia.S said:
This piece is hauntingly lyrical and deeply evocative. Truly beautiful work!!!!
August 23rd, 2025 03:31
Traps
Salvia.S said:
This vividly depicts the harsh realities of nature with powerful imagery. Very nicely written!
August 23rd, 2025 03:18
Salvia.S said:
This vividly depicts the harsh realities of nature with powerful imagery. Very nicely written!
August 23rd, 2025 03:18
Traps
Goldfinch60 said:
The world is like this at present soren, perhaps one day we will all sing from the same songsheet.
Andy
August 23rd, 2025 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
The world is like this at present soren, perhaps one day we will all sing from the same songsheet.
Andy
August 23rd, 2025 01:26
What is greatness
Golnarmoinamini.Standbypoet said:
Interesting pen up u did at this catchy poem. \"How fickle tongues of acclaim that one poem shame and another give fame\", I đź‘Ťđź’Ż
August 22nd, 2025 20:07
Golnarmoinamini.Standbypoet said:
Interesting pen up u did at this catchy poem. \"How fickle tongues of acclaim that one poem shame and another give fame\", I đź‘Ťđź’Ż
August 22nd, 2025 20:07
Traps
Kevin Hulme said:
Enjoyed. Many a time I look at a peaceful field that looks so quiet and still. But within the Grass and bushes there\'s a War going on where all sorts of insects are fighting for survival and for food. Something we never realise. Good one.
August 22nd, 2025 19:05
Kevin Hulme said:
Enjoyed. Many a time I look at a peaceful field that looks so quiet and still. But within the Grass and bushes there\'s a War going on where all sorts of insects are fighting for survival and for food. Something we never realise. Good one.
August 22nd, 2025 19:05
Traps
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Traps\" revolves around the brutal and unyielding nature of predation in the animal kingdom. It highlights the instinctual behaviors of predators and their prey, emphasizing themes of survival, violence, and the inevitability of death. This poem may aim to reflect on the nature of life, the inevitability of death, and the primal instincts that govern survival in the animal kingdom. It invites readers to consider the moral implications of predation and the lack of mercy in nature and the world.
August 22nd, 2025 07:37
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Traps\" revolves around the brutal and unyielding nature of predation in the animal kingdom. It highlights the instinctual behaviors of predators and their prey, emphasizing themes of survival, violence, and the inevitability of death. This poem may aim to reflect on the nature of life, the inevitability of death, and the primal instincts that govern survival in the animal kingdom. It invites readers to consider the moral implications of predation and the lack of mercy in nature and the world.
August 22nd, 2025 07:37
Traps
arqios said:
Your poem coils with primal inevitability: a world where hunter and hunted are bound in silent tension. Each image is a trap sprung by nature’s own design, where mercy is absent, and survival is written in shadow and strike. I used to have this tug within while watching naturist documentaries where the preying process is observed to its completion. Still gives me the shivers.
August 22nd, 2025 06:58
arqios said:
Your poem coils with primal inevitability: a world where hunter and hunted are bound in silent tension. Each image is a trap sprung by nature’s own design, where mercy is absent, and survival is written in shadow and strike. I used to have this tug within while watching naturist documentaries where the preying process is observed to its completion. Still gives me the shivers.
August 22nd, 2025 06:58
Traps
Teddy.15 said:
Has more than the obvious meaning to me dearest sorrenbarrett although nature takes its course this can refer also to the current state of our world. Kudos magnificent imagery powerful poetry. 🌹
August 22nd, 2025 04:48
Teddy.15 said:
Has more than the obvious meaning to me dearest sorrenbarrett although nature takes its course this can refer also to the current state of our world. Kudos magnificent imagery powerful poetry. 🌹
August 22nd, 2025 04:48
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