Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Fear
orchidee said:
I\'ll give KP, not pieces of glass under the skin (that\'s going too far, says Fido to me), but bug prickles across the flesh - as in creepy crawlies lol.
November 24th, 2024 13:01
orchidee said:
I\'ll give KP, not pieces of glass under the skin (that\'s going too far, says Fido to me), but bug prickles across the flesh - as in creepy crawlies lol.
November 24th, 2024 13:01
Fear
Teddy.15 said:
Painful reading my friend, brilliantly executed as always, packing a massive punch and reflection. 🌹 Something I have suffered from is definitely fear but I always try to overcome even if it takes a while.
November 24th, 2024 10:14
Teddy.15 said:
Painful reading my friend, brilliantly executed as always, packing a massive punch and reflection. 🌹 Something I have suffered from is definitely fear but I always try to overcome even if it takes a while.
November 24th, 2024 10:14
Metal cage
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful words soren, may that Spirit rise from the cage and go onto a great life.
Andy
November 24th, 2024 02:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful words soren, may that Spirit rise from the cage and go onto a great life.
Andy
November 24th, 2024 02:17
Whispers
A.H. Browning said:
Very nice. What was the inspiration, if you don’t mind me asking. Kindest regards.
November 23rd, 2024 20:27
A.H. Browning said:
Very nice. What was the inspiration, if you don’t mind me asking. Kindest regards.
November 23rd, 2024 20:27
Little bird
Teddy.15 said:
Such an honest look at life and also as a child, most innocent yet painfully stuck within the soul, I saw a boy throw a stone at a seagull once and it died, I\'m not sure he was ever remorseful. ❤️
November 23rd, 2024 18:12
Teddy.15 said:
Such an honest look at life and also as a child, most innocent yet painfully stuck within the soul, I saw a boy throw a stone at a seagull once and it died, I\'m not sure he was ever remorseful. ❤️
November 23rd, 2024 18:12
Metal cage
Teddy.15 said:
Your imagery was like taking a walk into my future somewhat, by the end I had goosebumps, beautiful dear sorrenbarret 🌹
November 23rd, 2024 17:29
Teddy.15 said:
Your imagery was like taking a walk into my future somewhat, by the end I had goosebumps, beautiful dear sorrenbarret 🌹
November 23rd, 2024 17:29
Metal cage
David Wakeling said:
This is powerful. It summarizes the human condition perfectly. Wonderful. reminds me of my honeymoon.Just kidding
November 23rd, 2024 14:18
David Wakeling said:
This is powerful. It summarizes the human condition perfectly. Wonderful. reminds me of my honeymoon.Just kidding
November 23rd, 2024 14:18
Metal cage
RSM0812 said:
Sounds like a trip to an airport. Lol. Your vivid imagery is excellent. It paints a perfect picture.
November 23rd, 2024 13:12
RSM0812 said:
Sounds like a trip to an airport. Lol. Your vivid imagery is excellent. It paints a perfect picture.
November 23rd, 2024 13:12
Metal cage
Neville said:
This reminds me of Poe .. and Madonna very scary stuff ..😎👍
November 23rd, 2024 10:43
Neville said:
This reminds me of Poe .. and Madonna very scary stuff ..😎👍
November 23rd, 2024 10:43
Metal cage
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Aging is not for the faint of heart, and yet even the faint of heart can’t avoid aging. A conundrum! Wonderfully painted, Soren! 👏🌹
November 23rd, 2024 08:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Aging is not for the faint of heart, and yet even the faint of heart can’t avoid aging. A conundrum! Wonderfully painted, Soren! 👏🌹
November 23rd, 2024 08:35
Metal cage
arqios said:
A powerfully evocative image. Reminded me of Nana in her last days, I refused to directly look at her so as not to mar the memory I chose to keep of her. So I approached her as always but relied on my peripheral vision, she was mostly blind by then, cataract cloud in one eye and a failed corneal transplant in the other. Strange how this particular reading brought me there. It may take me elsewhere on another day.
November 23rd, 2024 06:53
arqios said:
A powerfully evocative image. Reminded me of Nana in her last days, I refused to directly look at her so as not to mar the memory I chose to keep of her. So I approached her as always but relied on my peripheral vision, she was mostly blind by then, cataract cloud in one eye and a failed corneal transplant in the other. Strange how this particular reading brought me there. It may take me elsewhere on another day.
November 23rd, 2024 06:53
Distant drumes
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words soren, reminding us of times gone by.
Andy
November 23rd, 2024 02:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words soren, reminding us of times gone by.
Andy
November 23rd, 2024 02:39
Distant drumes
Thomas W Case said:
You take the reader on the journey with you. Excellent work.
November 22nd, 2024 13:25
Thomas W Case said:
You take the reader on the journey with you. Excellent work.
November 22nd, 2024 13:25
Distant drumes
arqios said:
Reminds me of what I consider a classic with Spencer Tracy as well as the Oregon Trail.
November 22nd, 2024 08:58
arqios said:
Reminds me of what I consider a classic with Spencer Tracy as well as the Oregon Trail.
November 22nd, 2024 08:58
Distant drumes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem feels of the wild west and the ills of Western expansion! Great poem! Instant fave! 🌹👏🖤❤️🖤
November 22nd, 2024 08:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem feels of the wild west and the ills of Western expansion! Great poem! Instant fave! 🌹👏🖤❤️🖤
November 22nd, 2024 08:38
Kiss of death
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a different way to look at life soren, intriguing words.
Andy
November 22nd, 2024 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a different way to look at life soren, intriguing words.
Andy
November 22nd, 2024 02:22
Kiss of death
Dan Williams said:
Long distant mind meld my friend. Excellent.
November 22nd, 2024 00:09
Dan Williams said:
Long distant mind meld my friend. Excellent.
November 22nd, 2024 00:09
Little bird
Dan Williams said:
soren, this is just beautiful. Well-meaning intent railroaded by reality but so eloquently put. Bravo.
November 22nd, 2024 00:00
Dan Williams said:
soren, this is just beautiful. Well-meaning intent railroaded by reality but so eloquently put. Bravo.
November 22nd, 2024 00:00
Kiss of death
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very through-provoking. Love the juxtaposition used in this piece. Very effective! 👏🌹
November 21st, 2024 11:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very through-provoking. Love the juxtaposition used in this piece. Very effective! 👏🌹
November 21st, 2024 11:38
Little bird
Cassie58 said:
Children can be cruel simply because they haven’t been taught compassion. Reminds me of animals kept in zoos and canaries in cages. Both touching and sad Soren.
November 21st, 2024 08:53
Cassie58 said:
Children can be cruel simply because they haven’t been taught compassion. Reminds me of animals kept in zoos and canaries in cages. Both touching and sad Soren.
November 21st, 2024 08:53
Kiss of death
arqios said:
Wow! Jam packed, vitriolic almost, seeping with cynicism. Powerfully expressed, evocative and provocative. So much to unpack in such a tiny package 📦
November 21st, 2024 06:15
arqios said:
Wow! Jam packed, vitriolic almost, seeping with cynicism. Powerfully expressed, evocative and provocative. So much to unpack in such a tiny package 📦
November 21st, 2024 06:15
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