Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Thoughts
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Boy...and that makes all the difference! Wow. Love this rhyme scheme, the internal rhyme and the outright musicality of this piece, Soren. This one soars in so many different ways...plus so relatable literally and metaphorically. 🔥🌹👏 Well done, my friend!
April 2nd, 2025 08:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Boy...and that makes all the difference! Wow. Love this rhyme scheme, the internal rhyme and the outright musicality of this piece, Soren. This one soars in so many different ways...plus so relatable literally and metaphorically. 🔥🌹👏 Well done, my friend!
April 2nd, 2025 08:30
Thoughts
Friendship said:
The speaker is driven by a sense of purpose and determination, as the key symbolizes access to something vital, reflecting the universal human aspiration to overcome loss and regain what has been misplaced. The poem captures the emotional state of the speaker as they navigate their feelings of confusion and frustration, ultimately revealing a resilient spirit. The poem centers on searching for a lost key, which serves as a metaphor for the quest for clarity or resolution, illuminating the potential for transformation and growth. It encompasses feelings of determination, hope, and the desire to reclaim control over a situation, inviting a sense of empowerment and renewal. That\'s how I felt empowered yesterday when someone said they were guiding me towards a positive path, and they truly weren\'t!
April 2nd, 2025 08:19
Friendship said:
The speaker is driven by a sense of purpose and determination, as the key symbolizes access to something vital, reflecting the universal human aspiration to overcome loss and regain what has been misplaced. The poem captures the emotional state of the speaker as they navigate their feelings of confusion and frustration, ultimately revealing a resilient spirit. The poem centers on searching for a lost key, which serves as a metaphor for the quest for clarity or resolution, illuminating the potential for transformation and growth. It encompasses feelings of determination, hope, and the desire to reclaim control over a situation, inviting a sense of empowerment and renewal. That\'s how I felt empowered yesterday when someone said they were guiding me towards a positive path, and they truly weren\'t!
April 2nd, 2025 08:19
Thoughts
Poetic Licence said:
Looking and living in the dark is a lot harder than doing so in the light I sense is the message here, enjoyed the read
April 2nd, 2025 04:48
Poetic Licence said:
Looking and living in the dark is a lot harder than doing so in the light I sense is the message here, enjoyed the read
April 2nd, 2025 04:48
A grip too tight
Jan bach said:
Very effective. Using fewer words emphasis the situation.
Very well written.
Jan
April 2nd, 2025 04:18
Jan bach said:
Very effective. Using fewer words emphasis the situation.
Very well written.
Jan
April 2nd, 2025 04:18
A grip too tight
Jan bach said:
Effective, harrowing but true.
Love your style of writing.
April 2nd, 2025 04:15
Jan bach said:
Effective, harrowing but true.
Love your style of writing.
April 2nd, 2025 04:15
Thoughts
orchidee said:
Found it now? I was delivering some leaflets. A house had keys left in front door and no one was home. The person had popped out - very risky. I called back later to enquire, and the person had returned home and all was safe.
April 2nd, 2025 02:29
orchidee said:
Found it now? I was delivering some leaflets. A house had keys left in front door and no one was home. The person had popped out - very risky. I called back later to enquire, and the person had returned home and all was safe.
April 2nd, 2025 02:29
Broken toys
Goldfinch60 said:
That innocence of young days is so wonderful soren, if only we could all remain with that innocence as part of our lives the world would be wonderful.
Andy
April 2nd, 2025 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
That innocence of young days is so wonderful soren, if only we could all remain with that innocence as part of our lives the world would be wonderful.
Andy
April 2nd, 2025 01:26
Broken toys
Lorenz said:
All those disembodied childhood sweets give taste of unease and feeling of dizziness !
April 1st, 2025 16:47
Lorenz said:
All those disembodied childhood sweets give taste of unease and feeling of dizziness !
April 1st, 2025 16:47
Broken toys
Salvia.S said:
Another truth stated in a beautiful way. Well written!!!
April 1st, 2025 11:47
Salvia.S said:
Another truth stated in a beautiful way. Well written!!!
April 1st, 2025 11:47
Broken toys
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Man if I could return to my early childhood...but then I would have to go through the shitstorm called life again. Still, if only...and if only we could go back and avoid all of the things that took our innocence and childhood way. If only. Well done, Soren. This brought me there, if not forever, for a little bit. And in that, I found a little bit of heaven. Thank you!
April 1st, 2025 11:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Man if I could return to my early childhood...but then I would have to go through the shitstorm called life again. Still, if only...and if only we could go back and avoid all of the things that took our innocence and childhood way. If only. Well done, Soren. This brought me there, if not forever, for a little bit. And in that, I found a little bit of heaven. Thank you!
April 1st, 2025 11:21
Broken toys
RSM0812 said:
It explains a form of social conditioning. We are born innocent, like a sponge. Experiences can definitely shape a man.
April 1st, 2025 10:24
RSM0812 said:
It explains a form of social conditioning. We are born innocent, like a sponge. Experiences can definitely shape a man.
April 1st, 2025 10:24
Broken toys
Poetic Licence said:
We should organise a coach trip back to those days that many remember fondly, the innocence before it is taken by the reality of life, lovely write
April 1st, 2025 06:25
Poetic Licence said:
We should organise a coach trip back to those days that many remember fondly, the innocence before it is taken by the reality of life, lovely write
April 1st, 2025 06:25
Broken toys
MDStone said:
Steal your eyes poison your brain schooled to be insane
Wow, love these lines. I feel like in the space where we create, we have a little time to be that innocent and imaginative child again. As always, thanks for sharing your gift with us.
April 1st, 2025 05:17
MDStone said:
Steal your eyes poison your brain schooled to be insane
Wow, love these lines. I feel like in the space where we create, we have a little time to be that innocent and imaginative child again. As always, thanks for sharing your gift with us.
April 1st, 2025 05:17
Broken toys
arqios said:
I do want to return there as well! How much are the tickets? One way please🙏🏻🕊️
April 1st, 2025 03:49
arqios said:
I do want to return there as well! How much are the tickets? One way please🙏🏻🕊️
April 1st, 2025 03:49
Broken toys
Teddy.15 said:
How very different the world does seem when we are so young and innocent of all the things our parents and peers try to protect us from. Every day is a lesson I do believe. Beautiful rhyme and a wonderful subject, if we are lucky we get Tom experience it all. 💜
April 1st, 2025 03:48
Teddy.15 said:
How very different the world does seem when we are so young and innocent of all the things our parents and peers try to protect us from. Every day is a lesson I do believe. Beautiful rhyme and a wonderful subject, if we are lucky we get Tom experience it all. 💜
April 1st, 2025 03:48
Fallen sand
Goldfinch60 said:
Holding hands throughout our times together is so meaningful soren, as are your words.
Andy
April 1st, 2025 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Holding hands throughout our times together is so meaningful soren, as are your words.
Andy
April 1st, 2025 01:48
Fallen sand
Mutley Ravishes said:
I once read that Christ can be seen as a symbol of Imagination. I sometimes wonder if all those games we played in our imaginations as children were, in fact, training.
March 31st, 2025 18:58
Mutley Ravishes said:
I once read that Christ can be seen as a symbol of Imagination. I sometimes wonder if all those games we played in our imaginations as children were, in fact, training.
March 31st, 2025 18:58
Fallen sand
Lorenz said:
It\'s a deep and complex poem that pass through the senses !
March 31st, 2025 13:06
Lorenz said:
It\'s a deep and complex poem that pass through the senses !
March 31st, 2025 13:06
Fallen sand
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My imagination was captured and taken on a most fantastically beautiful and rapturing journey. Thank you Soren! I loved this and fave it to reflect that! Wonderful job! 🌹👏
March 31st, 2025 12:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My imagination was captured and taken on a most fantastically beautiful and rapturing journey. Thank you Soren! I loved this and fave it to reflect that! Wonderful job! 🌹👏
March 31st, 2025 12:29
Fallen sand
NinjaGirl said:
So beautiful; a story of love and life...it really does give a sense of flavor and purpose to the world.
March 31st, 2025 12:20
NinjaGirl said:
So beautiful; a story of love and life...it really does give a sense of flavor and purpose to the world.
March 31st, 2025 12:20
Fallen sand
Salvia.S said:
A beautiful, nostalgic, and poignant reflection on love, loss, and the passage of time. Well written!!!
March 31st, 2025 07:32
Salvia.S said:
A beautiful, nostalgic, and poignant reflection on love, loss, and the passage of time. Well written!!!
March 31st, 2025 07:32
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