Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
The wash
Goldfinch60 said:
Opposites seem to attract in strange ways in our lives soren nut all comes clear in the end.
Andy
July 19th, 2024 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Opposites seem to attract in strange ways in our lives soren nut all comes clear in the end.
Andy
July 19th, 2024 01:18
The wash
Bella Shepard said:
Each day begins anew my friend? In the dark of night the clutter of mind is washed away, that we may begin anew to face each day. The cycle of life, beautifully written.
July 18th, 2024 10:25
Bella Shepard said:
Each day begins anew my friend? In the dark of night the clutter of mind is washed away, that we may begin anew to face each day. The cycle of life, beautifully written.
July 18th, 2024 10:25
The wash
Neville said:
This, or these could very easily be two separate but otherwise inextricably linked poems ..
Conversely as one, they comprise more than the sum of its secular parts .. Neville
July 18th, 2024 07:22
Neville said:
This, or these could very easily be two separate but otherwise inextricably linked poems ..
Conversely as one, they comprise more than the sum of its secular parts .. Neville
July 18th, 2024 07:22
The wash
orchidee said:
It has to be symbolic when it says in the Bible - they washed their garments clean in the blood of the Lamb (Jesus). Otherwise, blood will stain and not clean.
Or is it a metaphor? Or an analogy? Something like that anyway. I\'m not sure of the differences.
July 18th, 2024 07:15
orchidee said:
It has to be symbolic when it says in the Bible - they washed their garments clean in the blood of the Lamb (Jesus). Otherwise, blood will stain and not clean.
Or is it a metaphor? Or an analogy? Something like that anyway. I\'m not sure of the differences.
July 18th, 2024 07:15
Doubt
Cassie58 said:
A thought provoking write. Guilt isn’t an easy emotion to deal with for most people. It leaves them suffering. I wonder how people who have committed heinous crimes deal with it? Maybe they have the power to click off the thinking switch altogether. Great write and visuals.
July 18th, 2024 01:44
Cassie58 said:
A thought provoking write. Guilt isn’t an easy emotion to deal with for most people. It leaves them suffering. I wonder how people who have committed heinous crimes deal with it? Maybe they have the power to click off the thinking switch altogether. Great write and visuals.
July 18th, 2024 01:44
Doubt
Goldfinch60 said:
Guilt needs to admitted and the world would be a better place soren.
Andy
July 18th, 2024 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Guilt needs to admitted and the world would be a better place soren.
Andy
July 18th, 2024 01:24
Friends, Republicans, Countrymen
Accidental Poet said:
A great read soren. Trump or Biden, either way we lose. What if there was an election, and no one showed up to vote? Think that would get the message across? 🫤
July 17th, 2024 21:18
Accidental Poet said:
A great read soren. Trump or Biden, either way we lose. What if there was an election, and no one showed up to vote? Think that would get the message across? 🫤
July 17th, 2024 21:18
Doubt
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning, 🖋️
very evocative indeed!
Great rhyme, flow
and blend and my
pleasure to read!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad
July 17th, 2024 19:53
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning, 🖋️
very evocative indeed!
Great rhyme, flow
and blend and my
pleasure to read!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad
July 17th, 2024 19:53
Doubt
Neville said:
Guilt is undoubtedly the most destructive of all emotions .. a great analysis in poetic form ..
July 17th, 2024 12:56
Neville said:
Guilt is undoubtedly the most destructive of all emotions .. a great analysis in poetic form ..
July 17th, 2024 12:56
Doubt
Teddy.15 said:
Guilt has a way of smoldering the mind. Wonderful imagery 🌹
July 17th, 2024 06:02
Teddy.15 said:
Guilt has a way of smoldering the mind. Wonderful imagery 🌹
July 17th, 2024 06:02
Timeless
Dan Williams said:
Clocks? You mean those clunky things our grandfathers used? Kidding. Nice work.
July 17th, 2024 00:21
Dan Williams said:
Clocks? You mean those clunky things our grandfathers used? Kidding. Nice work.
July 17th, 2024 00:21
Friends, Republicans, Countrymen
Doggerel Dave said:
For days in far off Oz the airwaves have been clogged with accounts, pictures, analysis of the implications now and into the future. Our national broadcaster interrupted midway through a regular programme to bring news which was being broadcast on the news channel.
Her Majesty was forced to die in order to gain that kind of publicity…
July 16th, 2024 18:16
Doggerel Dave said:
For days in far off Oz the airwaves have been clogged with accounts, pictures, analysis of the implications now and into the future. Our national broadcaster interrupted midway through a regular programme to bring news which was being broadcast on the news channel.
Her Majesty was forced to die in order to gain that kind of publicity…
July 16th, 2024 18:16
Friends, Republicans, Countrymen
orchidee said:
He was only trying to shoot off that dodgy..... wig?! I don\'t like it, but that\'s going too far. The guy was shot dead who did it.
July 16th, 2024 14:52
orchidee said:
He was only trying to shoot off that dodgy..... wig?! I don\'t like it, but that\'s going too far. The guy was shot dead who did it.
July 16th, 2024 14:52
Friends, Republicans, Countrymen
Bella Shepard said:
Let us hope my friend that he will, upon his substantial rump, come to RIP, politically. If he doesn\'t ,we may all be SOL, lol. Thank you for bringing some wit to lighten the day, into what seems a very foreboding time for all of us in the good old USA.
July 16th, 2024 13:29
Bella Shepard said:
Let us hope my friend that he will, upon his substantial rump, come to RIP, politically. If he doesn\'t ,we may all be SOL, lol. Thank you for bringing some wit to lighten the day, into what seems a very foreboding time for all of us in the good old USA.
July 16th, 2024 13:29
Friends, Republicans, Countrymen
2781 said:
I don\'t know if any ear has ever had as much attention?
July 16th, 2024 08:04
2781 said:
I don\'t know if any ear has ever had as much attention?
July 16th, 2024 08:04
Friends, Republicans, Countrymen
Teddy.15 said:
lol hilarious. I\'m aware you have a home in the USA 🩷
July 16th, 2024 06:08
Teddy.15 said:
lol hilarious. I\'m aware you have a home in the USA 🩷
July 16th, 2024 06:08
Timeless
Doggerel Dave said:
Another memory: My grandmother owned a very old, battered bedside clock which she wound up religiously every night. The clock had no hands, it’s sole function to send Gran to sleep via a special familiar tick.
Timeless nostalgia, Soren. Many thanks.
July 15th, 2024 18:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Another memory: My grandmother owned a very old, battered bedside clock which she wound up religiously every night. The clock had no hands, it’s sole function to send Gran to sleep via a special familiar tick.
Timeless nostalgia, Soren. Many thanks.
July 15th, 2024 18:10
Timeless
Cassie58 said:
You reminded me of a grandfather clock owned by my grandparents. It fascinated me as a child. The mechanics of it and the sounds of the ticking and the chimes every fifteen minutes. All inside a beautiful mahogany case. Clicks these days just don’t compare. You brought me some lovely nostalgia and imagery. Thank you.
July 15th, 2024 14:57
Cassie58 said:
You reminded me of a grandfather clock owned by my grandparents. It fascinated me as a child. The mechanics of it and the sounds of the ticking and the chimes every fifteen minutes. All inside a beautiful mahogany case. Clicks these days just don’t compare. You brought me some lovely nostalgia and imagery. Thank you.
July 15th, 2024 14:57
Timeless
Teddy.15 said:
How very beautiful and mechanical I saw deep within the clock face and this also reminded me of my dear Mother who absolutely loved clocks. A profound write that has so many angles. Wonderful sorrenbarret 🌹
July 15th, 2024 06:33
Teddy.15 said:
How very beautiful and mechanical I saw deep within the clock face and this also reminded me of my dear Mother who absolutely loved clocks. A profound write that has so many angles. Wonderful sorrenbarret 🌹
July 15th, 2024 06:33
Corpses
Goldfinch60 said:
Such sorrowful words in a world where this is so true soren.
Andy
July 15th, 2024 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Such sorrowful words in a world where this is so true soren.
Andy
July 15th, 2024 01:17
Corpses
Christina8 said:
A vivid bit of imagery! Sincerely, I think this is very good.
July 14th, 2024 16:30
Christina8 said:
A vivid bit of imagery! Sincerely, I think this is very good.
July 14th, 2024 16:30
Corpses
Teddy.15 said:
I credibly dark and powerful, kudos dear friend. What imagery you have painted. 🌹
July 14th, 2024 13:44
Teddy.15 said:
I credibly dark and powerful, kudos dear friend. What imagery you have painted. 🌹
July 14th, 2024 13:44
Corpses
Bella Shepard said:
Our world has become a place of such conflict and division, that we fail to see what we are daily creating. We are the architects of the future, God help us. A wonderfully true write my friend.
July 14th, 2024 10:14
Bella Shepard said:
Our world has become a place of such conflict and division, that we fail to see what we are daily creating. We are the architects of the future, God help us. A wonderfully true write my friend.
July 14th, 2024 10:14
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