Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Empathy
Soman Ragavan said:
“Can they hear the drops of tears?...” Tears are the product of suffering. The cause of the suffering might be loud, but tears themselves are noiseless...
Similarly in the next line, there is the splash of pain. Both tears and pain are the product of suffering.
“the flavor of a broken dream?...” “ this is sure a poetic way to describe the characteristic of a dream.
“I like walking in the rain, because nobody can see my tears.”
--Charlie Chaplin (1889-1977)
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May 20th, 2025 11:11
Soman Ragavan said:
“Can they hear the drops of tears?...” Tears are the product of suffering. The cause of the suffering might be loud, but tears themselves are noiseless...
Similarly in the next line, there is the splash of pain. Both tears and pain are the product of suffering.
“the flavor of a broken dream?...” “ this is sure a poetic way to describe the characteristic of a dream.
“I like walking in the rain, because nobody can see my tears.”
--Charlie Chaplin (1889-1977)
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May 20th, 2025 11:11
Empathy
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write around the subject so lacking these days, genuine empathy towards living things. The one good thing that ever came out of my childhood is I have always cared and had empathy for other\'s, especially those less fortunate. Have never understood the justification of some people\'s lack of empathy to others due their childhood, it should make you care because you understand and have been there, if I didn\'t have empathy I could be a mass murderer and justify it on my past. Well needed and meaning write
May 20th, 2025 06:02
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write around the subject so lacking these days, genuine empathy towards living things. The one good thing that ever came out of my childhood is I have always cared and had empathy for other\'s, especially those less fortunate. Have never understood the justification of some people\'s lack of empathy to others due their childhood, it should make you care because you understand and have been there, if I didn\'t have empathy I could be a mass murderer and justify it on my past. Well needed and meaning write
May 20th, 2025 06:02
Empathy
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
This is a powerful exploration of empathy, questioning the sensitivity of our senses to the emotional pain and struggles of others..
It highlights the importance of being attuned to others\' emotional pain. Well done!!!
May 20th, 2025 05:15
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
This is a powerful exploration of empathy, questioning the sensitivity of our senses to the emotional pain and struggles of others..
It highlights the importance of being attuned to others\' emotional pain. Well done!!!
May 20th, 2025 05:15
Empathy
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words weave raw emotion so deep,
a mirror to souls that ache and weep.
May 20th, 2025 04:19
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words weave raw emotion so deep,
a mirror to souls that ache and weep.
May 20th, 2025 04:19
Empathy
David Wakeling said:
Empathy is what makes us good human beings and what makes life worth living.Take that away and we have Hitler and the gas chambers.Wonderful poem raising the ultimate questions about sympathy.
May 20th, 2025 04:07
David Wakeling said:
Empathy is what makes us good human beings and what makes life worth living.Take that away and we have Hitler and the gas chambers.Wonderful poem raising the ultimate questions about sympathy.
May 20th, 2025 04:07
Empathy
arqios said:
That is a regret that strikes hard and lasts an eternity.🕊️🙏🏻
May 20th, 2025 03:51
arqios said:
That is a regret that strikes hard and lasts an eternity.🕊️🙏🏻
May 20th, 2025 03:51
Empathy
Teddy.15 said:
A beautiful reminder of empathy, unfortunately not everyone has this life tool, putting ones feet in the shoes of another to really see and feel is a true gift and life lesson, to those who acknowledge the world of another human. 🌹
May 20th, 2025 03:33
Teddy.15 said:
A beautiful reminder of empathy, unfortunately not everyone has this life tool, putting ones feet in the shoes of another to really see and feel is a true gift and life lesson, to those who acknowledge the world of another human. 🌹
May 20th, 2025 03:33
Floral memories
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful floral words soren, may they always bring joy to all.
Andy
May 20th, 2025 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful floral words soren, may they always bring joy to all.
Andy
May 20th, 2025 01:19
Floral memories
Soman Ragavan said:
Please see my comments on the poem \"Cobra chemistry 2\" by Mutley Ravishes. Thanks.
May 19th, 2025 22:13
Soman Ragavan said:
Please see my comments on the poem \"Cobra chemistry 2\" by Mutley Ravishes. Thanks.
May 19th, 2025 22:13
Old closet
Kevin Hulme said:
I think we all have a Closet like that . Very good.
May 19th, 2025 19:04
Kevin Hulme said:
I think we all have a Closet like that . Very good.
May 19th, 2025 19:04
Floral memories
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s lovely that scent has so much influence on our memory. And lovelier still the garden planted of lessons, memories, and hopes.
May 19th, 2025 12:09
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s lovely that scent has so much influence on our memory. And lovelier still the garden planted of lessons, memories, and hopes.
May 19th, 2025 12:09
Floral memories
Soman Ragavan said:
Clearly you have a good grasp of flowers\' names and their characteristics. Good rhyming as well.
May 19th, 2025 11:02
Soman Ragavan said:
Clearly you have a good grasp of flowers\' names and their characteristics. Good rhyming as well.
May 19th, 2025 11:02
Floral memories
orchidee said:
This is a good write in fact, SB, even a good olfactory write!
May 19th, 2025 09:26
orchidee said:
This is a good write in fact, SB, even a good olfactory write!
May 19th, 2025 09:26
Floral memories
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
Beautifully written—each flower carries so much emotion and memory. The imagery and scents really bring the past to life. Very nice !!!!
May 19th, 2025 07:54
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
Beautifully written—each flower carries so much emotion and memory. The imagery and scents really bring the past to life. Very nice !!!!
May 19th, 2025 07:54
Floral memories
Poetic Licence said:
Amazing how smells of all sorts awaken those memories, lovely write, enjoyed the read
May 19th, 2025 05:10
Poetic Licence said:
Amazing how smells of all sorts awaken those memories, lovely write, enjoyed the read
May 19th, 2025 05:10
Floral memories
David Wakeling said:
I love the fragrance of flowers and this is a great list that I will have to check out.Excellent structure here.Enjoyable to read
May 19th, 2025 04:38
David Wakeling said:
I love the fragrance of flowers and this is a great list that I will have to check out.Excellent structure here.Enjoyable to read
May 19th, 2025 04:38
Floral memories
arqios said:
A whole field and garden of blooms and memories, beautiful 🤩🙏🏻🕊️
May 19th, 2025 03:19
arqios said:
A whole field and garden of blooms and memories, beautiful 🤩🙏🏻🕊️
May 19th, 2025 03:19
Old closet
Goldfinch60 said:
Those old memories return at unexpected moments in our lives soren .
Andy
May 19th, 2025 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Those old memories return at unexpected moments in our lives soren .
Andy
May 19th, 2025 01:46
Old closet
RefugeInRain said:
Beautiful.
You have portrayed this feeling so well.
Thank you for sharing, Soren. -
May 18th, 2025 23:01
RefugeInRain said:
Beautiful.
You have portrayed this feeling so well.
Thank you for sharing, Soren. -
May 18th, 2025 23:01
Give and take
Soman Ragavan said:
\"leaves of rejected words ...\"
\"Our sweetest songs are those of the saddest thought.\"
--P. B. Shelley (1792-1822)
May 18th, 2025 20:25
Soman Ragavan said:
\"leaves of rejected words ...\"
\"Our sweetest songs are those of the saddest thought.\"
--P. B. Shelley (1792-1822)
May 18th, 2025 20:25
Leader of a country
Kevin Hulme said:
Wonderful Words to live by. If only all leaders took them to heart.
\'Politicians and diapers must be changed often, and for the same reason\'. Mark Twain.
May 18th, 2025 16:01
Kevin Hulme said:
Wonderful Words to live by. If only all leaders took them to heart.
\'Politicians and diapers must be changed often, and for the same reason\'. Mark Twain.
May 18th, 2025 16:01
Old closet
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
A hauntingly tender elegy for lost love—each line aches with quiet nostalgia, stitching sorrow into beauty..Wonderful!
May 18th, 2025 14:25
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
A hauntingly tender elegy for lost love—each line aches with quiet nostalgia, stitching sorrow into beauty..Wonderful!
May 18th, 2025 14:25
Old closet
Lorenz said:
I find the deep echo of some of my poetic contemplations...
May 18th, 2025 09:28
Lorenz said:
I find the deep echo of some of my poetic contemplations...
May 18th, 2025 09:28
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