Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Two daughters
Tom Dylan said:

Lovely words, Soren. The affection comes though so strongly. Thanks for sharing.

March 31st, 2025 06:59

Fallen sand
Poetic Licence said:

That is a truly beautiful love poem, enjoyed thoroughly

March 31st, 2025 05:39

Fallen sand
MDStone said:

Soren,
I was transported to that mystical shore. Thank you for the nostalgic trip to a place and time where time no longer matters. A great write and one that strums the heart strings.

March 31st, 2025 05:34

Fallen sand
arqios said:

Enjoyed this so much ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธLiked and Faved๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

March 31st, 2025 04:14

Two daughters
Goldfinch60 said:

Two beautiful pieces soren.

Andy

March 31st, 2025 01:46

Two daughters
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful.

March 30th, 2025 18:44

Two daughters
John Prophet said:

Heartfelt write. Wonderful!

March 30th, 2025 18:40

Two daughters
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Had to be a favr

March 30th, 2025 12:13

Two daughters
RSM0812 said:

Your daughter is a sunbeam in your heart. As mine is to me. A beautiful. Write.

March 30th, 2025 10:46

Two daughters
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

March 30th, 2025 10:42

Two daughters
Neilton said:

\"Your faults in my blind eyes decay and into dreams melt away\"
What an amazing line ! Your kids are very lucky! Beautiful poem

March 30th, 2025 09:19

Two daughters
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Parental love is different, being a parent of two adult daughters, this really resonates. The love is equal and yet different people equal different expressions of that love. This moved me, my friend. A most wonderful write! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

March 30th, 2025 07:57

Two daughters
MDStone said:

Soren,
Beautiful expression of a father of daughter(s). I have found that the two might even be one but at different times. A parents love and longing for his childrenโ€™s success and their presence in his life, never wanes.

March 30th, 2025 07:37

Two daughters
Lorenz said:

Sublime last line ! wonderful text !

March 30th, 2025 07:25

Two daughters
Poetic Licence said:

A beautiful read of a parents love and dedication to their children, very enjoyable

March 30th, 2025 04:05

Two daughters
arqios said:

That is beautiful to read. One day I shall write about my own brood. ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š

March 30th, 2025 03:37

Lines on the floor
Goldfinch60 said:

Those words come from some amazing places soren.

Andy

March 30th, 2025 01:52

Poems in the wind
rrodriguez said:

Beautiful!

March 29th, 2025 19:57

Lines on the floor
NinjaGirl said:

\"but not before it leaves marks on the floor\" what a beautiful closing line!

March 29th, 2025 14:34

Lines on the floor
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Indeed, the materials that go into all that been written and read. A wonderful read, my friend! ๐ŸŒน

March 29th, 2025 11:21

Lines on the floor
orchidee said:

I make the mess, and KP clears up after me - soot, dust, dirt, etc. lol.

March 29th, 2025 09:38

Lines on the floor
MDStone said:



March 29th, 2025 08:41

Lines on the floor
MDStone said:

Soren,
I love the depth and meaning found here in smoke and ashes. The imagery stirs and connects with the fires of other trees burned into souls ; and like the smell of burning leaves delight the nose, these words delight the soul. Thanks for sharing.

March 29th, 2025 08:41

Lines on the floor
John Prophet said:

We done. This one made me smile.

March 29th, 2025 07:18

Lines on the floor
arqios said:

We donโ€™t always think of it that way but books were once forests and reeds and fibres. That just blew my mind away! ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

March 29th, 2025 05:31

Lines on the floor
Poetic Licence said:

A very enjoyable read while relaxing with me tea, lovely write

March 29th, 2025 04:45

Sweet and bitter
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words soren but the sweetness of cake will always come to us all in time.

Andy

March 29th, 2025 02:55

Sweet and bitter
Lorenz said:

ha! ha ! Indigestible menu !

March 28th, 2025 13:13

Sweet and bitter
Thomas W Case said:

I li9ke the symbolism and metaphors. Great work.

March 28th, 2025 09:29

Sweet and bitter
rebellion_in_sanity said:

An absolute gem. You may laugh but it teansported me to a state of mind when I listen to gothic rock - dark and deep. The contrasts are masterful and they feel absolutely natural - a rare feat.

March 28th, 2025 08:10



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