Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Junkyard of time
Bobby O said:

I really like it.
A font sublime ?
Slime through me off but WTF do I know. I really like it

September 20th, 2024 23:38

Junkyard of time
aDarkerMind said:

you have a gift for words Soren.
of that, there is no doubt.
am a fan and will always be my friend.

September 20th, 2024 13:00

Junkyard of time
Neville said:


I have sipped from that very same cup .. excellent sir .. brimming over in fact

September 20th, 2024 10:28

Junkyard of time
Thad Wilk said:

A captivating poem
great use of metaphor,
rhyme spot on poet!! ๐Ÿ‘
Much enjoyed!! ๐Ÿ˜Š
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ. Thad

September 20th, 2024 10:24

Junkyard of time
Teddy.15 said:

I absolutely love your title too. โค๏ธ

September 20th, 2024 10:04

Junkyard of time
Accidental Poet said:

So glad I took the time to read this, time not wasted soren. ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ‘

September 20th, 2024 08:35

Junkyard of time
Tony36 said:

Amazing write

September 20th, 2024 07:41

Junkyard of time
Teddy.15 said:

Such wonderful metaphor for living and making memories here I see a beginning a middle and an end. Beautiful dearest sorrenbarret ๐ŸŒน

September 20th, 2024 07:40

Junkyard of time
orchidee said:

Ahh, a drink for KP, though invisible - a cup of rhyme. I\'m still feeding her sewage. lol.

September 20th, 2024 07:08

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Tom Dylan said:

An intriguing piece, Soren, with some fantastic lines.

September 20th, 2024 05:21

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Neville said:


I like this very much ..
I also think the whole thing could work if the word kill replaced save in the summative line .. just saying on behalf of a friend .. Neville

September 20th, 2024 01:32

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Goldfinch60 said:

Good words soren, humans should not interfere with Nature as it has its own way of progressing.

Andy

September 20th, 2024 01:20

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Dan Williams said:

Smooth, evocative, typical. Yet another winner.

September 20th, 2024 01:03

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Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant work.

September 19th, 2024 17:37

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orchidee said:

Good write SB.

September 19th, 2024 13:02

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Cassie58 said:

Itโ€™s a dog eat dog world out there. Nature is nature. Has a mind of its own, canโ€™t be controlled. We are forever trying to save something. Maybe more effort should be put in to saving ourselves. As a species we can be pitiful. Great write Soren

September 19th, 2024 10:32

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Accidental Poet said:

So true soren, we can\'t save them all. All we can do is live and do our very best. ๐Ÿ˜‰

September 19th, 2024 08:43

What I left behind
Tom Dylan said:

A fine write, Soren. You really paint the picture. The poem flows really well.

September 19th, 2024 07:39

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aDarkerMind said:

and up dreams creek we seem to be these days soren.

as impressed as always with your words.

September 19th, 2024 05:00

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Teddy.15 said:

A good sharp shake of the booty, yes reality is right in front of me reading this, the guanciale Is my favourite part of the hog ๐Ÿคฃ brilliant as always ๐ŸŒน

September 19th, 2024 04:39

What I left behind
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words soren, that trail you are walking is the same for all of is in different directions though.

Andy

September 19th, 2024 01:51

What I left behind
Dan Williams said:

Sting would love this. I do too. Very nice work.

September 19th, 2024 00:48

What I left behind
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful imagery. You bring the scene to life.

September 18th, 2024 20:40

What I left behind
rrodriguez said:

I want to leave a blessing. I believe you did so too. I enjoyed reading your poem. I thought about the new place I\'m moving to, in the woods.

September 18th, 2024 19:05

What I left behind
Neville said:



We all leave a trail whether we like it or not .. I like it .. it has a kinda familiar ring to it .. or could that be a siren by any chance .. Neville


September 18th, 2024 07:43

What I left behind
Teddy.15 said:

Beautiful with a great sense of nostalgia and a great sense of pride, and Mr sorrenbarret reminds me of a song sting wrote. ๐ŸŒน

September 18th, 2024 06:42

What I left behind
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

September 18th, 2024 06:24

Once a mighty tree
Goldfinch60 said:

Such a sad sight when trees are felled ,good words soren.

Andy

September 18th, 2024 01:55

Once a mighty tree
Dan Williams said:

\"where once towered mighty trees\" seems to be more and more places wherever I look. Humans too readily forget that without trees, and grass and bushes and such, there will be no us.

September 18th, 2024 00:33

Once a mighty tree
Bobby O said:

Youโ€™re in that kind of mood. I mean, those falling leaves alone represent the chaos is scattered destruction

September 17th, 2024 23:50



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