Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Dark things
Teddy.15 said:

Deliciously dark with a dream like sense. 🌹

July 5th, 2024 16:58

Dark things
Parisab said:

That’s a stunning description of a night terror-great method with the dream analysis…

July 5th, 2024 10:09

Dark things
sorenbarrett said:

Thanks Orchi.

July 5th, 2024 09:08

Dark things
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

July 5th, 2024 09:05

Caviar
Goldfinch60 said:

The bad things in the world can be overcome in time soren.

Andy

July 5th, 2024 01:24

Caviar
Parisab said:

That’s what I feel like….

July 4th, 2024 16:30

Caviar
Teddy.15 said:

Well that is exactly how I would describe caviar. I\'m curious to know did you mean to write champagne the way you did? I\'m just being curious here. 🤣 🌹 Brilliant as ever

July 4th, 2024 12:16

Caviar
Thomas W Case said:

wow. Powerful stuff. Lots of emotion.

July 4th, 2024 11:46

Caviar
orchidee said:

A bad hair day?! lol.

July 4th, 2024 08:30

Caviar
Manslick said:

hell no. Sounds like a call to chaos.

July 4th, 2024 07:34

Human?
Goldfinch60 said:

Dogs can be true friends soren.

Andy

July 4th, 2024 01:15

Human?
Doggerel Dave said:

This seems to me to be less a portrait of a dog than an oblique critique with respect to human frailty, Soren. True?

July 3rd, 2024 22:00

Human?
orchidee said:

A quiz now - ooh! Since when was [insert name of person who is not human - or only just] human?! lol.
My answer is KP. heehee.

July 3rd, 2024 11:12

Human?
Teddy.15 said:

Ah, I thought this was a poem about me! lol 🤣

July 3rd, 2024 10:31

Drunken lullabies
Doggerel Dave said:

Could become an anthem for AA, Soren.
The above within your poem highlighting \'home a wrecker\' and the correct point in comments re self motivation cover all I wanted to contribute.
Poem shot straight and true.

July 2nd, 2024 18:28

Drunken lullabies
peto said:

As a recovering alkie I applaud this message
When the singing stops the problems are only too evident

July 2nd, 2024 14:15

Drunken lullabies
Teddy.15 said:

With a very seriously powerful end, alcoholism can wreck lives for sure. So very poetic, unfortunately one can only be helped if they agree to help themselves. 🌹

July 2nd, 2024 11:23

Drunken lullabies
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

July 2nd, 2024 10:13

Drunken lullabies
Neilton said:

great work !!!

July 2nd, 2024 08:17

Time\'s price
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work.

July 1st, 2024 19:53

Time\'s price
Teddy.15 said:

Oh I just love this and what a piece of Truth

New years can not be cooked boiled or baked

No matter how many pretty coats we put upon time it will forever be moving and changing
🌹


July 1st, 2024 15:23

Time\'s price
orchidee said:

And also - what is the price of fish these days?\' as the saying goes! lol.

July 1st, 2024 08:48

Time\'s price
2781 said:

I see a generation caught in the net.

July 1st, 2024 07:50

Alive
NafisaSB said:

lovely message there - need to remind self to look around and observe the beauty around us

July 1st, 2024 07:45

Smoke signals
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous metaphor. Thoroughly enjoyed this.

June 30th, 2024 12:26

Smoke signals
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

June 30th, 2024 12:03

Smoke signals
Teddy.15 said:

Ah, your last lines made me chuckle 🤭 wonderful imagery, a poem can be interpreted in which ever way the reader may see it. That\'s why I simply love poetry. 🌹

June 30th, 2024 09:03

Innocence of a poet
Dan Williams said:

\"Doily in a spiderweb spun\" is just as imagery evoking as can be. Nice work.

June 30th, 2024 01:10

Innocence of a poet
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work. You nailed this.

June 29th, 2024 21:45

Innocence of a poet
Mase ♪ said:

If a poets innocent, I ain\'t no poet. lol.

June 29th, 2024 13:58



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