Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Little bird
JD Boye said:
I can relate completely to the sentiment. This one struck home for me. Excellent write. Thank you
July 4th, 2025 11:03
JD Boye said:
I can relate completely to the sentiment. This one struck home for me. Excellent write. Thank you
July 4th, 2025 11:03
Turn out the lights
JD Boye said:
Excellent technique that really forced me to slow down and process the conflicting themes. A very good mind stretch!
July 4th, 2025 10:59
JD Boye said:
Excellent technique that really forced me to slow down and process the conflicting themes. A very good mind stretch!
July 4th, 2025 10:59
Turn out the lights
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Erm, I\'ve not quite got the hang of the title - argghhh! do ya hear me? I turned out the lights and fell down the stairs! (Did I? heehee). It\'s that old Orchi mucking about again, says Fido. Of course, I deeply MISunderstood the poem. heehee.
July 4th, 2025 08:46
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Erm, I\'ve not quite got the hang of the title - argghhh! do ya hear me? I turned out the lights and fell down the stairs! (Did I? heehee). It\'s that old Orchi mucking about again, says Fido. Of course, I deeply MISunderstood the poem. heehee.
July 4th, 2025 08:46
Turn out the lights
Teddy.15 said:
In a war, murderer a hero, if his side should win, in loss his act a sin
Kudos my friend 🌹
July 4th, 2025 08:09
Teddy.15 said:
In a war, murderer a hero, if his side should win, in loss his act a sin
Kudos my friend 🌹
July 4th, 2025 08:09
Turn out the lights
arqios said:
“Turn out the lights” feels like a challenge to how we define progress, truth, and morality. It warns that technology and power, when used without wisdom, can lead us to destroy nature and lose our values. It shows how victory often decides what’s considered right or wrong, and how we use belief to protect ourselves from truths we don’t want to face. In the end, it reminds us that we hold the power to choose between creation and destruction. 🕊️🙏🏻
July 4th, 2025 06:25
arqios said:
“Turn out the lights” feels like a challenge to how we define progress, truth, and morality. It warns that technology and power, when used without wisdom, can lead us to destroy nature and lose our values. It shows how victory often decides what’s considered right or wrong, and how we use belief to protect ourselves from truths we don’t want to face. In the end, it reminds us that we hold the power to choose between creation and destruction. 🕊️🙏🏻
July 4th, 2025 06:25
Turn out the lights
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write carefully placing opposites together, highlighting many ways the world and us need to change, otherwise there will be only one answer to the question asked, enjoyed the read
July 4th, 2025 05:27
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write carefully placing opposites together, highlighting many ways the world and us need to change, otherwise there will be only one answer to the question asked, enjoyed the read
July 4th, 2025 05:27
Turn out the lights
David Wakeling said:
Wow creation or devastation? What a choice. This is a powerful poem that explores the many ways that the world should undergo change. Many strange opposites are placed together here. I enjoyed reading it. It made me think at every line. Well done compadre
July 4th, 2025 04:25
David Wakeling said:
Wow creation or devastation? What a choice. This is a powerful poem that explores the many ways that the world should undergo change. Many strange opposites are placed together here. I enjoyed reading it. It made me think at every line. Well done compadre
July 4th, 2025 04:25
Slumbering light
Goldfinch60 said:
That truth will always show its light soren.
Andy
July 4th, 2025 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
That truth will always show its light soren.
Andy
July 4th, 2025 01:16
Slumbering light
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh where oh where did that little hope go? Along with with truth, of course, out the forking window! 😂 Or so it seems anymore. Great write, dear friend. A fave! 🌹👏
July 3rd, 2025 20:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh where oh where did that little hope go? Along with with truth, of course, out the forking window! 😂 Or so it seems anymore. Great write, dear friend. A fave! 🌹👏
July 3rd, 2025 20:12
Slumbering light
arqios said:
Your poem breathes a haunting yet gentle melancholy, capturing the weight of a world cloaked in endless night. The imagery of hope asleep, unable to shed its covering, evokes a poignant stillness, while frost\'s creeping bite underscores the quiet ache of vulnerability. In truth\'s weeping light, there is both sorrow and defiance; a sense that even through veils of darkness, its essence endures, waiting for the dawn to lift the shroud. A deeply stirring and evocative piece!
July 3rd, 2025 17:12
arqios said:
Your poem breathes a haunting yet gentle melancholy, capturing the weight of a world cloaked in endless night. The imagery of hope asleep, unable to shed its covering, evokes a poignant stillness, while frost\'s creeping bite underscores the quiet ache of vulnerability. In truth\'s weeping light, there is both sorrow and defiance; a sense that even through veils of darkness, its essence endures, waiting for the dawn to lift the shroud. A deeply stirring and evocative piece!
July 3rd, 2025 17:12
Slumbering light
Damaso said:
The first line reminds me of a horror drama. Incredible writing. Cheers!
July 3rd, 2025 16:43
Damaso said:
The first line reminds me of a horror drama. Incredible writing. Cheers!
July 3rd, 2025 16:43
Slumbering light
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Such a profound sleep of light and shadow—your imagery lingers like a dream one doesn’t wish to leave. Lovely work.
July 3rd, 2025 13:41
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Such a profound sleep of light and shadow—your imagery lingers like a dream one doesn’t wish to leave. Lovely work.
July 3rd, 2025 13:41
Slumbering light
Salvia.S said:
Haunting and beautiful. This captures a sense of stillness and quiet sorrow with elegance, like a moment suspended in time where even light has chosen to rest. Well written!
July 3rd, 2025 11:56
Salvia.S said:
Haunting and beautiful. This captures a sense of stillness and quiet sorrow with elegance, like a moment suspended in time where even light has chosen to rest. Well written!
July 3rd, 2025 11:56
Slumbering light
Teddy.15 said:
And here it is in all its glory, yes dearest sorrenbarret a very talented pen indeed, sends hope to all. 🌹
July 3rd, 2025 11:10
Teddy.15 said:
And here it is in all its glory, yes dearest sorrenbarret a very talented pen indeed, sends hope to all. 🌹
July 3rd, 2025 11:10
Slumbering light
Poetic Licence said:
Hope and truth finding life a bit difficult at the moment, enjoyed the read
July 3rd, 2025 05:59
Poetic Licence said:
Hope and truth finding life a bit difficult at the moment, enjoyed the read
July 3rd, 2025 05:59
Slumbering light
David Wakeling said:
For me this is the cold winter days where Hope and Truth are struggling. A Fascinating poem mi amigo
July 3rd, 2025 04:22
David Wakeling said:
For me this is the cold winter days where Hope and Truth are struggling. A Fascinating poem mi amigo
July 3rd, 2025 04:22
I love roses
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Our Highest Assurance of the goodness of Providence seems to me to rest in the Flowers\'.
Sherlock Holmes. The Naval Treaty.
A Rose is Perfection. Fine Poem.
July 2nd, 2025 14:21
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Our Highest Assurance of the goodness of Providence seems to me to rest in the Flowers\'.
Sherlock Holmes. The Naval Treaty.
A Rose is Perfection. Fine Poem.
July 2nd, 2025 14:21
I love roses
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sensual and natural. Naturally sensual. This poem sings to the soul and I could feel that inner rose blooming. Well done on this. An absolute fave, Soren. 🌹👏
July 2nd, 2025 12:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sensual and natural. Naturally sensual. This poem sings to the soul and I could feel that inner rose blooming. Well done on this. An absolute fave, Soren. 🌹👏
July 2nd, 2025 12:28
I love roses
arqios said:
What a lush and wistful meditation on the rose—not merely as bloom, but as metaphor for time, desire, and loss.🕊️🙏🏻
July 2nd, 2025 07:44
arqios said:
What a lush and wistful meditation on the rose—not merely as bloom, but as metaphor for time, desire, and loss.🕊️🙏🏻
July 2nd, 2025 07:44
I love roses
Soman Ragavan said:
Flowers display their beauty, and their days are numbered. In the short while that they will last, they must attract bees, butterflies, pollinators. Though the beauty is short-lived, we remember and we write about it.
July 2nd, 2025 05:54
Soman Ragavan said:
Flowers display their beauty, and their days are numbered. In the short while that they will last, they must attract bees, butterflies, pollinators. Though the beauty is short-lived, we remember and we write about it.
July 2nd, 2025 05:54
I love roses
David Wakeling said:
That is the plight of the gardener. They see the beauty and the decay. But roses are worth the effort. I am tempted to see this as a metaphor for a beauty partner but the poem stands on its own either way.Wonderful piece
July 2nd, 2025 04:33
David Wakeling said:
That is the plight of the gardener. They see the beauty and the decay. But roses are worth the effort. I am tempted to see this as a metaphor for a beauty partner but the poem stands on its own either way.Wonderful piece
July 2nd, 2025 04:33
I love roses
Poetic Licence said:
I love the beauty of flowers but never had success at looking after them, I sense though this could also refer to people, really enjoyable read
July 2nd, 2025 04:32
Poetic Licence said:
I love the beauty of flowers but never had success at looking after them, I sense though this could also refer to people, really enjoyable read
July 2nd, 2025 04:32
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