Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
No sugar
Teddy.15 said:
Computer Generated Imagery
Not my cup of tea, but yes a craze, I guess people have forgotten how to use their hands. A wonderful write and subject. 🌹
November 29th, 2024 12:03
Teddy.15 said:
Computer Generated Imagery
Not my cup of tea, but yes a craze, I guess people have forgotten how to use their hands. A wonderful write and subject. 🌹
November 29th, 2024 12:03
No sugar
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Black when I could drink coffee! Now RLS has ruined that, but this poem friend, I will take any way you give it to me! As for the strings on a puppet…so true. 💯 Well done! 🌹👏
November 29th, 2024 10:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Black when I could drink coffee! Now RLS has ruined that, but this poem friend, I will take any way you give it to me! As for the strings on a puppet…so true. 💯 Well done! 🌹👏
November 29th, 2024 10:48
No sugar
Mutley Ravishes said:
I’ve been thinking of writing about Big Sugar lately. And I need to contemplate what you’ve just written. Black magic at work?!
November 29th, 2024 07:51
Mutley Ravishes said:
I’ve been thinking of writing about Big Sugar lately. And I need to contemplate what you’ve just written. Black magic at work?!
November 29th, 2024 07:51
No sugar
arqios said:
Technology seamlessly integrates into our lives, becoming both magical and omnipresent. The poem seems to highlight how these invisible tools shape our perceptions, much like CGI in movies or cream in coffee. It could be a reminder to us to appreciate the subtle yet profound influence of innovation.
November 29th, 2024 05:57
arqios said:
Technology seamlessly integrates into our lives, becoming both magical and omnipresent. The poem seems to highlight how these invisible tools shape our perceptions, much like CGI in movies or cream in coffee. It could be a reminder to us to appreciate the subtle yet profound influence of innovation.
November 29th, 2024 05:57
No sugar
Neville said:
Hold the sweeteners, I always take mine strong and black & with no strings attached .. technology eh\' who would have it .. I don\'t mind a couple of rich teas tho\'
November 29th, 2024 04:37
Neville said:
Hold the sweeteners, I always take mine strong and black & with no strings attached .. technology eh\' who would have it .. I don\'t mind a couple of rich teas tho\'
November 29th, 2024 04:37
All American turkey
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I don\'t remember the last time read such scathing critique of overindulgence in such crisp and almost comical tone. Reminnded me of Charlie Chaplin,\'s style. Truely remarkable. Advanced apologies for any misinterpretation
November 29th, 2024 01:48
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I don\'t remember the last time read such scathing critique of overindulgence in such crisp and almost comical tone. Reminnded me of Charlie Chaplin,\'s style. Truely remarkable. Advanced apologies for any misinterpretation
November 29th, 2024 01:48
All American turkey
rin said:
\'Sit and slurp as we belch and burp
Shifting our ass to pass gas\'
I think this is a great perspective, focusing on how it is an integral part of life, even if at first glance it appears to be a dirty operation.
November 28th, 2024 10:24
rin said:
\'Sit and slurp as we belch and burp
Shifting our ass to pass gas\'
I think this is a great perspective, focusing on how it is an integral part of life, even if at first glance it appears to be a dirty operation.
November 28th, 2024 10:24
All American turkey
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! You and I are viewing this day through the same lens my friend! A wonderfully poignant and truthful poem friend! 👏🌹 That said, I do wish you and family a very Happy Thanksgiving Day.
November 28th, 2024 09:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! You and I are viewing this day through the same lens my friend! A wonderfully poignant and truthful poem friend! 👏🌹 That said, I do wish you and family a very Happy Thanksgiving Day.
November 28th, 2024 09:03
All American turkey
Doggerel Dave said:
Am I looking at the same post? I felt that there was a subtle (not too subtle surely) critique of gluttony there, Soren....
A rich write.
November 28th, 2024 08:16
Doggerel Dave said:
Am I looking at the same post? I felt that there was a subtle (not too subtle surely) critique of gluttony there, Soren....
A rich write.
November 28th, 2024 08:16
All American turkey
2781 said:
I think if we had to kill and clean the pet turkey, before cooking, we might be more grateful.
Or just take the pumpkin pie. Which, if like grammar pie, is more to my liking.
November 28th, 2024 06:18
2781 said:
I think if we had to kill and clean the pet turkey, before cooking, we might be more grateful.
Or just take the pumpkin pie. Which, if like grammar pie, is more to my liking.
November 28th, 2024 06:18
All American turkey
arqios said:
Oh, so you know about that shift! Not to be indelicate but even cushioned seats appear impervious to passing gases.
November 28th, 2024 05:28
arqios said:
Oh, so you know about that shift! Not to be indelicate but even cushioned seats appear impervious to passing gases.
November 28th, 2024 05:28
All American turkey
Teddy.15 said:
A very very happy Thanksgiving to you and all whom you love my dearest sorrenbarret 🦃🦃🦃🦃🦃🦃🦃🦃🦃🦃🦃 💙 🎄
I absolutely love pumpkin pie, and banoffee just in case your making them lol 🤣
November 28th, 2024 04:00
Teddy.15 said:
A very very happy Thanksgiving to you and all whom you love my dearest sorrenbarret 🦃🦃🦃🦃🦃🦃🦃🦃🦃🦃🦃 💙 🎄
I absolutely love pumpkin pie, and banoffee just in case your making them lol 🤣
November 28th, 2024 04:00
All American turkey
orchidee said:
Veggies will have pumpkin pie, yes?! Happy Thanksgiving Day there :)
November 28th, 2024 03:43
orchidee said:
Veggies will have pumpkin pie, yes?! Happy Thanksgiving Day there :)
November 28th, 2024 03:43
All American turkey
David Wakeling said:
Sounds like a lot of fun. A lot to be thankful for. Good fun poem
November 28th, 2024 02:09
David Wakeling said:
Sounds like a lot of fun. A lot to be thankful for. Good fun poem
November 28th, 2024 02:09
All American turkey
Goldfinch60 said:
Never had pumpkin pie on any day soren but I would eat it if placed before me.
Andy
November 28th, 2024 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Never had pumpkin pie on any day soren but I would eat it if placed before me.
Andy
November 28th, 2024 01:53
Nursery mantra
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren taking me back to my childhood days of wonder.
Andy
November 28th, 2024 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren taking me back to my childhood days of wonder.
Andy
November 28th, 2024 01:39
Nursery mantra
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
Wonderfully expressed
feelings and emotions painted
with nursery rhymes penned
to fit this very evocative
piece of art!! 🎨 👍
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
November 27th, 2024 21:23
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
Wonderfully expressed
feelings and emotions painted
with nursery rhymes penned
to fit this very evocative
piece of art!! 🎨 👍
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
November 27th, 2024 21:23
Nursery mantra
Teddy.15 said:
Protected by the hand of unconditional love from the wolf, LoL I find much humour in this but maybe because my humour is dry ❤️
November 27th, 2024 13:35
Teddy.15 said:
Protected by the hand of unconditional love from the wolf, LoL I find much humour in this but maybe because my humour is dry ❤️
November 27th, 2024 13:35
Nursery mantra
orchidee said:
Is my old repetition appreciated?! lol. As I say, I may get no further than \'good/fine write\'. (lol) I never thought of juxtaposing, narcissism, etc, in some of the other educated comments!
November 27th, 2024 09:57
orchidee said:
Is my old repetition appreciated?! lol. As I say, I may get no further than \'good/fine write\'. (lol) I never thought of juxtaposing, narcissism, etc, in some of the other educated comments!
November 27th, 2024 09:57
Drip from the tap
rebellion_in_sanity said:
What a poem! Beauty in brutal honesty - it felt like a painting of alienation, a potrate of understanding and pain of rejection. Please correct me if the understanding was off.
November 27th, 2024 09:41
rebellion_in_sanity said:
What a poem! Beauty in brutal honesty - it felt like a painting of alienation, a potrate of understanding and pain of rejection. Please correct me if the understanding was off.
November 27th, 2024 09:41
Nursery mantra
Michael Edwards said:
Love this - it has an element of the surreal but with prophetic undercurrents.
November 27th, 2024 08:43
Michael Edwards said:
Love this - it has an element of the surreal but with prophetic undercurrents.
November 27th, 2024 08:43
Ads
2781 said:
It rings true to me, what was despised is certainty now idealised. I dropped out a while ago.
November 27th, 2024 08:06
2781 said:
It rings true to me, what was despised is certainty now idealised. I dropped out a while ago.
November 27th, 2024 08:06
Nursery mantra
arqios said:
Too enjoyable, trying to make out the barbs from the hilarity! Here’s a couple in response:
Hickory, dickory, dock,
The rat ran up the corporate clock.
Strikes one, strikes two, strikes three,
Climbing fast, no time for glee.
Little Bo-Peep has lost her sheep,
In a world where promises don\'t keep.
Look and find, they say in jest,
In life\'s maze, we all do our best.
November 27th, 2024 07:24
arqios said:
Too enjoyable, trying to make out the barbs from the hilarity! Here’s a couple in response:
Hickory, dickory, dock,
The rat ran up the corporate clock.
Strikes one, strikes two, strikes three,
Climbing fast, no time for glee.
Little Bo-Peep has lost her sheep,
In a world where promises don\'t keep.
Look and find, they say in jest,
In life\'s maze, we all do our best.
November 27th, 2024 07:24
Nursery mantra
Neville said:
such nursery crimes are all the rage write now .. I think its something to do with being woke too late in the day .. nicely penned & then some
November 27th, 2024 06:23
Neville said:
such nursery crimes are all the rage write now .. I think its something to do with being woke too late in the day .. nicely penned & then some
November 27th, 2024 06:23
Nursery mantra
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent, Soren! The juxtaposition in brilliant in this, not t to mention the fresh take in classic nursery rhymes to serve th poems central point. Bravo! 🌹👏
November 27th, 2024 04:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent, Soren! The juxtaposition in brilliant in this, not t to mention the fresh take in classic nursery rhymes to serve th poems central point. Bravo! 🌹👏
November 27th, 2024 04:27
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