Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
It burns
David Wakeling said:
A powerful piece that made me think,I think I learned something.Well done
March 18th, 2025 05:21
David Wakeling said:
A powerful piece that made me think,I think I learned something.Well done
March 18th, 2025 05:21
It burns
orchidee said:
Good write SB. There\'s something about \'heaping burning coals on an enemies head\', so that they turn from their wrong ways. Meant symbolically.
March 18th, 2025 03:51
orchidee said:
Good write SB. There\'s something about \'heaping burning coals on an enemies head\', so that they turn from their wrong ways. Meant symbolically.
March 18th, 2025 03:51
Darker than black
Friendship said:
A powerful poem,sorenbarrett, Your poem explores themes of pain, longing, and the dichotomy between dreams and reality. The imagery of suffering, such as \"ants beaten by cane poles\" and \"broken glass,\" suggests a struggle or hardship. The juxtaposition of dreams and reality indicates a desire for escape, with dreams serving as a refuge from the harshness of waking life. Ultimately, the poem conveys a sense of yearning for the comfort of night and dreams, contrasting with the harshness of day.
March 17th, 2025 18:54
Friendship said:
A powerful poem,sorenbarrett, Your poem explores themes of pain, longing, and the dichotomy between dreams and reality. The imagery of suffering, such as \"ants beaten by cane poles\" and \"broken glass,\" suggests a struggle or hardship. The juxtaposition of dreams and reality indicates a desire for escape, with dreams serving as a refuge from the harshness of waking life. Ultimately, the poem conveys a sense of yearning for the comfort of night and dreams, contrasting with the harshness of day.
March 17th, 2025 18:54
Leaves
Neilton said:
The words you use in your poems always amaze me ! Beautiful poem
March 17th, 2025 18:05
Neilton said:
The words you use in your poems always amaze me ! Beautiful poem
March 17th, 2025 18:05
Bard
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful reflection on poetry, where inky rivers flow across paper skies and the messages tap into seemingly unchartable regions (namely the psyche of the the poet\'s reader). What a thought provoking piece, one that I and I am sure many others on here relate to. 🌹👏🎩☘️
March 17th, 2025 13:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful reflection on poetry, where inky rivers flow across paper skies and the messages tap into seemingly unchartable regions (namely the psyche of the the poet\'s reader). What a thought provoking piece, one that I and I am sure many others on here relate to. 🌹👏🎩☘️
March 17th, 2025 13:36
Muddy shoes
Parisab said:
So true to this season of mud-your words make this sound like my dilemma of washing or discarding some of the shoes…
March 17th, 2025 12:09
Parisab said:
So true to this season of mud-your words make this sound like my dilemma of washing or discarding some of the shoes…
March 17th, 2025 12:09
Bard
Parisab said:
Lots of creativity went into this enigma of poetry -thanks for sharing
March 17th, 2025 12:02
Parisab said:
Lots of creativity went into this enigma of poetry -thanks for sharing
March 17th, 2025 12:02
Smell of color
Tom Dylan said:
Excellent, Soren. Love the tone and the layout. Nicely done.
March 17th, 2025 09:21
Tom Dylan said:
Excellent, Soren. Love the tone and the layout. Nicely done.
March 17th, 2025 09:21
Bard
Friendship said:
a beautiful painting,sorenbarrett, Your poem delves into the creative process of poetry writing, illustrating how poets perceive the world differently. you seem to convey the importance of poetry in expressing complex emotions and truths, illustrating the unique insights that poets bring to the human experience. It serves both as a celebration of poetry and as an exploration of the craft itself. your choice of words reflects a deep emotional resonance and a connection to nature and human experience.
March 17th, 2025 08:29
Friendship said:
a beautiful painting,sorenbarrett, Your poem delves into the creative process of poetry writing, illustrating how poets perceive the world differently. you seem to convey the importance of poetry in expressing complex emotions and truths, illustrating the unique insights that poets bring to the human experience. It serves both as a celebration of poetry and as an exploration of the craft itself. your choice of words reflects a deep emotional resonance and a connection to nature and human experience.
March 17th, 2025 08:29
Smell of color
Tommy B Goode said:
Not only do I like the poem itself, but I also like the visual way it\'s presented.
The shape of a bouquet of flowers is a nice extra layer in this piece.
March 17th, 2025 07:45
Tommy B Goode said:
Not only do I like the poem itself, but I also like the visual way it\'s presented.
The shape of a bouquet of flowers is a nice extra layer in this piece.
March 17th, 2025 07:45
Bard
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful Way of summing it up in a nutshell, enjoyed the read
March 17th, 2025 06:13
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful Way of summing it up in a nutshell, enjoyed the read
March 17th, 2025 06:13
Bard
Teddy.15 said:
A most perfect description of what poet means. Beautiful and so is the form that you have used along with your title.
🌹 Bravo, Bravo 👏
March 17th, 2025 03:37
Teddy.15 said:
A most perfect description of what poet means. Beautiful and so is the form that you have used along with your title.
🌹 Bravo, Bravo 👏
March 17th, 2025 03:37
Smell of color
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren bring the smell and view of Nature to us all.
Andy
March 17th, 2025 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren bring the smell and view of Nature to us all.
Andy
March 17th, 2025 02:25
Smell of color
David Wakeling said:
Good to be alive and witness it all.Enjoyable read mi amigo
March 16th, 2025 18:22
David Wakeling said:
Good to be alive and witness it all.Enjoyable read mi amigo
March 16th, 2025 18:22
What I left behind
Friendship said:
Well written ,sorenbarrett, Your poem is to encourage readers to reflect on their own experiences in nature, the marks they leave behind, and the emotional resonances of their interactions with the world and others. It invites contemplation on the beauty of existence and the significance of seemingly small actions.
March 16th, 2025 18:20
Friendship said:
Well written ,sorenbarrett, Your poem is to encourage readers to reflect on their own experiences in nature, the marks they leave behind, and the emotional resonances of their interactions with the world and others. It invites contemplation on the beauty of existence and the significance of seemingly small actions.
March 16th, 2025 18:20
A grip too tight
Alan R said:
Quite an accurate representation of several disproportionate things I’ve seen in this life! Cheers!!
March 16th, 2025 17:19
Alan R said:
Quite an accurate representation of several disproportionate things I’ve seen in this life! Cheers!!
March 16th, 2025 17:19
Smell of color
Bella Shepard said:
This poem is a feast for the senses, exquisite imagery filled with natures delight. You have created a most interesting shape with your words, I envision a tree in that shape, bursting with life. Beautiful!
March 16th, 2025 13:06
Bella Shepard said:
This poem is a feast for the senses, exquisite imagery filled with natures delight. You have created a most interesting shape with your words, I envision a tree in that shape, bursting with life. Beautiful!
March 16th, 2025 13:06
Sigh of a storm
spilleronsheet said:
And these are lines are giving me glimmer amidst darkness…keep writing dear poet
March 16th, 2025 12:18
spilleronsheet said:
And these are lines are giving me glimmer amidst darkness…keep writing dear poet
March 16th, 2025 12:18
Canned expression
spilleronsheet said:
Those poetic words truly playing with every note…good one dear, keep penning…
March 16th, 2025 12:17
spilleronsheet said:
Those poetic words truly playing with every note…good one dear, keep penning…
March 16th, 2025 12:17
Smell of color
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP has lovely smell of colour of rotten maggots that I feed her with for dinner. lol. It\'s gross here at meal-times.
March 16th, 2025 11:29
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP has lovely smell of colour of rotten maggots that I feed her with for dinner. lol. It\'s gross here at meal-times.
March 16th, 2025 11:29
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