Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
We are all one
Carmen Luca said:
Beautiful reflections. Maybe we are star dust temporarily clumped together in human form, too focused on the separation from other beings.
March 20th, 2026 04:17
Carmen Luca said:
Beautiful reflections. Maybe we are star dust temporarily clumped together in human form, too focused on the separation from other beings.
March 20th, 2026 04:17
We are all one
orchidee said:
Yes, KP\'s just a pile of dust. \'Who you calling a pile of dust?\' she asks me! lol.
March 20th, 2026 03:38
orchidee said:
Yes, KP\'s just a pile of dust. \'Who you calling a pile of dust?\' she asks me! lol.
March 20th, 2026 03:38
Cuts
Goldfinch60 said:
Those cuts in our life may always be there soren but in life they teach us how to move on in a better way.
Andy
March 20th, 2026 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Those cuts in our life may always be there soren but in life they teach us how to move on in a better way.
Andy
March 20th, 2026 02:19
Cuts
Kevin Hulme said:
Is there an equal balance between Good and Bad Memories? Depends on the person.
Maybe we focus on the Bad ones
Nice one again.
March 19th, 2026 19:23
Kevin Hulme said:
Is there an equal balance between Good and Bad Memories? Depends on the person.
Maybe we focus on the Bad ones
Nice one again.
March 19th, 2026 19:23
Cuts
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this carries a raw, physical sense of pain…from “shells of memory’s beaches” to those scars worn as trophies. It feels like movement through damage rather than away from it. And by the end…“Blood long dried seals pain inside” just closes it in. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 19th, 2026 10:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this carries a raw, physical sense of pain…from “shells of memory’s beaches” to those scars worn as trophies. It feels like movement through damage rather than away from it. And by the end…“Blood long dried seals pain inside” just closes it in. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 19th, 2026 10:25
Cuts
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I wondered if this would be about people \'cutting up\', which makes me shudder if reading anything on that theme.
March 19th, 2026 03:21
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I wondered if this would be about people \'cutting up\', which makes me shudder if reading anything on that theme.
March 19th, 2026 03:21
Enlightenment
Teddy.15 said:
Even in your last two lines a lesson so great for all to learn in this rollercoaster of life. Kudos! Love the creativity in the layout and the highlights in the words so very important, literally a tool box in a poem dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
March 18th, 2026 16:53
Teddy.15 said:
Even in your last two lines a lesson so great for all to learn in this rollercoaster of life. Kudos! Love the creativity in the layout and the highlights in the words so very important, literally a tool box in a poem dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
March 18th, 2026 16:53
Enlightenment
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t know how you find the time Soren, but clearly a tribute is applicable here.
March 18th, 2026 16:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t know how you find the time Soren, but clearly a tribute is applicable here.
March 18th, 2026 16:07
Enlightenment
Demar Desu said:
“In poverty one becomes rich” you must have been reading my poetry lately LOL. I definitely enjoy this poem though, great job. Interesting choice of font
March 18th, 2026 10:33
Demar Desu said:
“In poverty one becomes rich” you must have been reading my poetry lately LOL. I definitely enjoy this poem though, great job. Interesting choice of font
March 18th, 2026 10:33
Enlightenment
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this carries a deep, steady weight…each line building on the last like lived truth, not theory. The form holds it all together…those echoed end words give it a rhythm of return while the ideas keep moving forward. “In kneeling one is worshiped” anchors it for me. Really strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 18th, 2026 09:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this carries a deep, steady weight…each line building on the last like lived truth, not theory. The form holds it all together…those echoed end words give it a rhythm of return while the ideas keep moving forward. “In kneeling one is worshiped” anchors it for me. Really strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 18th, 2026 09:32
Enlightenment
Neville said:
You are quite the sage when ya puts yer mind to it don\'tcha .. ⭐🌟✨⭐🌟😎👍
March 18th, 2026 09:23
Neville said:
You are quite the sage when ya puts yer mind to it don\'tcha .. ⭐🌟✨⭐🌟😎👍
March 18th, 2026 09:23
Enlightenment
David Wakeling said:
An amazing piece with a truck load of wisdom. Ultimately for me it highlights the \"contrary\"nature of life.Opposites are shone.Poverty can make you rich and the Sun must die to be re-born.A wonderful poem.Got me thinking
March 18th, 2026 05:09
David Wakeling said:
An amazing piece with a truck load of wisdom. Ultimately for me it highlights the \"contrary\"nature of life.Opposites are shone.Poverty can make you rich and the Sun must die to be re-born.A wonderful poem.Got me thinking
March 18th, 2026 05:09
Adrift
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words we send out can go to so many places soren, and may they never stop.
Andy
March 18th, 2026 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words we send out can go to so many places soren, and may they never stop.
Andy
March 18th, 2026 02:16
Adrift
Kevin Hulme said:
Can\'t tell you how much I enjoyed this. Fave for sure. I remember playing Pooh Sticks a few years ago, and often wonder where they are now. Carried on , or snagged somewhere.
A fine Poem.
March 17th, 2026 19:40
Kevin Hulme said:
Can\'t tell you how much I enjoyed this. Fave for sure. I remember playing Pooh Sticks a few years ago, and often wonder where they are now. Carried on , or snagged somewhere.
A fine Poem.
March 17th, 2026 19:40
Baby
Joseph M Marion said:
Beautifully written speaks of great surrender of nature and beauty
March 17th, 2026 14:40
Joseph M Marion said:
Beautifully written speaks of great surrender of nature and beauty
March 17th, 2026 14:40
Adrift
Neville said:
is it just me or is there an abundance of displacement around here today .. I feel almost helpless and at the mercy of the wind, or fate, or of the current or summat .. there is a desire to get back on track somehow .. can\'t wait till tomorrow maybe .. 😎👍
March 17th, 2026 12:42
Neville said:
is it just me or is there an abundance of displacement around here today .. I feel almost helpless and at the mercy of the wind, or fate, or of the current or summat .. there is a desire to get back on track somehow .. can\'t wait till tomorrow maybe .. 😎👍
March 17th, 2026 12:42
Adrift
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hit me hard...there’s a quiet loneliness here that just keeps moving, line by line. “Washed up on a distant shore, broken, beat and sore” stays with me. It doesn’t ask for attention…it just is. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 17th, 2026 08:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hit me hard...there’s a quiet loneliness here that just keeps moving, line by line. “Washed up on a distant shore, broken, beat and sore” stays with me. It doesn’t ask for attention…it just is. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 17th, 2026 08:21
Miricale
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write. Some great lines. Nicely done, my friend.
March 17th, 2026 07:56
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write. Some great lines. Nicely done, my friend.
March 17th, 2026 07:56
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