Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Maybe
Jerry Reynolds said:
Wow! SB, the work that went into that. A great poem. Wonderful read.
July 30th, 2025 06:13
Jerry Reynolds said:
Wow! SB, the work that went into that. A great poem. Wonderful read.
July 30th, 2025 06:13
Maybe
Poetic Licence said:
I have to say that is so well written, so clever and maybe I will find the answers one day, wonderful write, enjoyed.
July 30th, 2025 06:00
Poetic Licence said:
I have to say that is so well written, so clever and maybe I will find the answers one day, wonderful write, enjoyed.
July 30th, 2025 06:00
Maybe
RSM0812 said:
Lots of great rhyming here describing the it or what it could be. Masterfully done.
July 30th, 2025 05:05
RSM0812 said:
Lots of great rhyming here describing the it or what it could be. Masterfully done.
July 30th, 2025 05:05
Night\'s refuge
Neville said:
Excellent ink my friend .. & then some .. Neville
July 30th, 2025 01:46
Neville said:
Excellent ink my friend .. & then some .. Neville
July 30th, 2025 01:46
Memories
Damaso said:
Wow I am very happy that I have connected that way with the text, an approach and alignment number. Very grateful to read and return. As always a pleasure. Kind regards
July 29th, 2025 11:39
Damaso said:
Wow I am very happy that I have connected that way with the text, an approach and alignment number. Very grateful to read and return. As always a pleasure. Kind regards
July 29th, 2025 11:39
Memories
Friendship said:
To me, this poem explores the tragic complexity of a chemistry teacher\'s life, juxtaposing his chaotic professional persona with the dark personal turmoil that ultimately leads to his demise. It reflects on the instability of human existence, the consequences of neglect and violence, and the irony of a life dedicated to education ending in tragedy. The outcome to me is that. The poem deals with themes of education, mental health, domestic violence, and the often-hidden struggles of individuals in positions of authority. It paints a picture of a teacher who is deeply flawed and whose failures in both his career and personal life culminate in tragic outcomes.
July 29th, 2025 07:25
Friendship said:
To me, this poem explores the tragic complexity of a chemistry teacher\'s life, juxtaposing his chaotic professional persona with the dark personal turmoil that ultimately leads to his demise. It reflects on the instability of human existence, the consequences of neglect and violence, and the irony of a life dedicated to education ending in tragedy. The outcome to me is that. The poem deals with themes of education, mental health, domestic violence, and the often-hidden struggles of individuals in positions of authority. It paints a picture of a teacher who is deeply flawed and whose failures in both his career and personal life culminate in tragic outcomes.
July 29th, 2025 07:25
Memories
Priya Tomar said:
Nice to read it......
Humour to tragic end .....
Well written
July 29th, 2025 06:29
Priya Tomar said:
Nice to read it......
Humour to tragic end .....
Well written
July 29th, 2025 06:29
Memories
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this starts with absurdity and ends in tragedy…like a punchline that forgets it’s supposed to be funny. The tone walks a razor’s edge...crude, chaotic, and then suddenly, brutally quiet. You captured memory not as nostalgia, but as a wound. Well done! 🖤🙏🕯️
July 29th, 2025 06:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this starts with absurdity and ends in tragedy…like a punchline that forgets it’s supposed to be funny. The tone walks a razor’s edge...crude, chaotic, and then suddenly, brutally quiet. You captured memory not as nostalgia, but as a wound. Well done! 🖤🙏🕯️
July 29th, 2025 06:24
Memories
Poetic Licence said:
An intriguing write drifting from the chaos of the classroom to the chaos of someone\'s mind and actions, nicely done
July 29th, 2025 05:38
Poetic Licence said:
An intriguing write drifting from the chaos of the classroom to the chaos of someone\'s mind and actions, nicely done
July 29th, 2025 05:38
Memories
Demar Desu said:
Hold on let me grab my tea and pastry dish before I start reading
July 29th, 2025 04:50
Demar Desu said:
Hold on let me grab my tea and pastry dish before I start reading
July 29th, 2025 04:50
Memories
arqios said:
This piece crackles with dark energy; mixing slapstick chemistry gags and sudden tragedy.
The voice feels raw and unfiltered, driving us from classroom chaos straight into a grim finale.
That jarring pivot, while shocking, gives the poem an unforgettable sting. Some memories do have \'em!
July 29th, 2025 04:19
arqios said:
This piece crackles with dark energy; mixing slapstick chemistry gags and sudden tragedy.
The voice feels raw and unfiltered, driving us from classroom chaos straight into a grim finale.
That jarring pivot, while shocking, gives the poem an unforgettable sting. Some memories do have \'em!
July 29th, 2025 04:19
Memories
Neville said:
Sh ** happens, yet sadly enjoyed .. Memories eh\' who would have em .. Neville
July 29th, 2025 03:34
Neville said:
Sh ** happens, yet sadly enjoyed .. Memories eh\' who would have em .. Neville
July 29th, 2025 03:34
Forest fig
NafisaSB said:
wonderful - what one wants, and what one gets is not always the same - so well explained...
July 29th, 2025 00:25
NafisaSB said:
wonderful - what one wants, and what one gets is not always the same - so well explained...
July 29th, 2025 00:25
Vanity
Neville said:
I guess you could say she was tickled pink soren .. I\'m pretty sure my pooch is pawtistic .. she only licks what she pre-furrs or she likes a lot .. but then, its a dogs life innit .. Neville
July 28th, 2025 23:05
Neville said:
I guess you could say she was tickled pink soren .. I\'m pretty sure my pooch is pawtistic .. she only licks what she pre-furrs or she likes a lot .. but then, its a dogs life innit .. Neville
July 28th, 2025 23:05
Vanity
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
A feline fashionista fleeing the amorous dog. I feel sorry for the poor dog, a love unrequited. A most humorous offering in your usual excellent style and a true tale to boot.
Fond regards,
Tony.
July 28th, 2025 13:19
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
A feline fashionista fleeing the amorous dog. I feel sorry for the poor dog, a love unrequited. A most humorous offering in your usual excellent style and a true tale to boot.
Fond regards,
Tony.
July 28th, 2025 13:19
Vanity
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. Donald Duck wears no...... underwear! Oops. lol.
July 28th, 2025 09:42
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. Donald Duck wears no...... underwear! Oops. lol.
July 28th, 2025 09:42
Vanity
Doggerel Dave said:
Interspeces interaction can be a funny thing - and this certainly is; good for you, Soren.
July 28th, 2025 09:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Interspeces interaction can be a funny thing - and this certainly is; good for you, Soren.
July 28th, 2025 09:02
Vanity
Poetic Licence said:
Very entertaining and well captured in the write, I have seen a dog and cat have this type of relationship, the dog wishing to be a bit more amorous than the cat would like, enjoyed the read
July 28th, 2025 06:08
Poetic Licence said:
Very entertaining and well captured in the write, I have seen a dog and cat have this type of relationship, the dog wishing to be a bit more amorous than the cat would like, enjoyed the read
July 28th, 2025 06:08
Vanity
Friendship said:
The poem \"Vanity\" revolves around the theme of pride and its consequences. It explores the humorous dynamics between a dapper cat and a dog who becomes infatuated with him. The poem touches on topics such as self-image, romantic advances, and the awkwardness of relationships, ultimately highlighting the cat\'s struggle with vanity and his decision to flee from unwanted attention.
July 28th, 2025 05:37
Friendship said:
The poem \"Vanity\" revolves around the theme of pride and its consequences. It explores the humorous dynamics between a dapper cat and a dog who becomes infatuated with him. The poem touches on topics such as self-image, romantic advances, and the awkwardness of relationships, ultimately highlighting the cat\'s struggle with vanity and his decision to flee from unwanted attention.
July 28th, 2025 05:37
Vanity
arqios said:
This vivid fable of a dapper cat undone by canine infatuation brilliantly skewers vanity with perfect comedic timing. I adore how your clever rhymes and playful twists invite us to chuckle at pride’s folly ...keep spinning these charming tales! 🙏🏻🕊️
July 28th, 2025 04:09
arqios said:
This vivid fable of a dapper cat undone by canine infatuation brilliantly skewers vanity with perfect comedic timing. I adore how your clever rhymes and playful twists invite us to chuckle at pride’s folly ...keep spinning these charming tales! 🙏🏻🕊️
July 28th, 2025 04:09
The circle
ElizabethMoroz said:
Profound symbolism and visual imagery here Soren, with the masculine devouring the feminine lines being particularly powerful: thanks for the explanation of Ouruborous. The depth of the symbolism evoked goes right into the heart of the mystery of life itself. So beautifully done. Thankyou ! Elizabeth
July 28th, 2025 01:40
ElizabethMoroz said:
Profound symbolism and visual imagery here Soren, with the masculine devouring the feminine lines being particularly powerful: thanks for the explanation of Ouruborous. The depth of the symbolism evoked goes right into the heart of the mystery of life itself. So beautifully done. Thankyou ! Elizabeth
July 28th, 2025 01:40
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