Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Too bad (metaphor)
arqios said:

That indeed is sad. Not so sure if that’s gonna change anytime soon. πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

March 22nd, 2025 05:36

Too bad (metaphor)
David Wakeling said:

I can\'t image how annoying it would be if the other team didn\'t turn up.Interesting poem about the challenge being taken away when the opposition doesn\'t get involved.Excellent

March 22nd, 2025 05:19

Flies
Jan bach said:

Loved this poem. Enjoyed the style of writing. Very clever and subtle.
The content really sums up my thoughts about flies in the kitchen. ( Why can\'t they stay outside?)
Extremely well written, you feel the frustration of a delicious meal spoilt.

Jan W

March 22nd, 2025 03:56

Old coat
Goldfinch60 said:

Those old friends can be so memorable soren.

Andy

March 22nd, 2025 02:56

Webs of words
Quemis said:

Such a narrative, punchy opening.

Bravo!

March 21st, 2025 19:36

Old coat
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Excellent poem, my friend! The metaphor works so well and yet can also be read literally. Speaking of literally, when I was a kid we would literally wear our clothes out. Like it was cool for holes to appear in them and wear them that way until you couldn\'t anymore. Now, we simply design clothes to have holes in them and charge extra for it! πŸ€·β€β™‚οΈ That\'s neither here nor there regarding the poem, but it made me think of that, so I share! 🀣 Well done, Soren! πŸŒΉπŸ‘ A fave for sure!

March 21st, 2025 08:38

Old coat
arqios said:

What a saga! And the imagery of the \"wild wings flap at zipper\'s gap\" particularly evocative. It\'s as if the coat has a life of its own, fluttering like wings despite its age.πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

March 21st, 2025 05:27

Old coat
Poetic Licence said:

I don\'t know if the younger generation do this anymore but my generation kept their clothing until the bitter end, and the favourite item of clothing was nearly always the tattiest, enjoyed the read

March 21st, 2025 05:02

Old coat
David Wakeling said:

I see a much loved jumper here keeping warm even if it isa little tattered.I liked the rhyme Excellent

March 21st, 2025 04:52

Old coat
orchidee said:

Yes, I bought KP a \'new\' coat just like that one! lol.

March 21st, 2025 03:13

Liberated
Goldfinch60 said:

Writing is our way of life soren.

Andy

March 21st, 2025 02:44

Liberated
Reynaldo Casison said:

Nice one Soren

The rain is reflective
Nourishing with enlightenment

March 20th, 2025 18:21

Liberated
orchidee said:

Good write SB. If you\'re a tree, how do ya get past the verify check on here? I\'m getting obsessed with that! lol.

March 20th, 2025 13:45

Liberated
ChrisLynπŸ•Š said:

Interesting use of words , nice one

March 20th, 2025 10:37

Liberated
Lorenz said:

A wonderful landscape that blends words, colors,and seasons in a tender dawn dance !

March 20th, 2025 10:25

The circle
rebellion_in_sanity said:

WOW and WOW. Let me not embarras myself by repeating the same word. A last wow perhaps for \"Reclined infinity the masculine devouring femininity\"

March 20th, 2025 10:08

Liberated
Tony36 said:

BRAVO

March 20th, 2025 09:57

Liberated
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Ah, to be truly free of our human trappings to be, completely one, as opposed to at war, with nature. This poem speaks to that yearning we all have, whether we realize it or not. Or, at least, that is what I get out of it. Either way, my friend, this is a wonderful poem! An easy fave for its connection to nature and for its beautiful profundity. πŸŒΉπŸ‘

March 20th, 2025 09:08

The circle
Tom Dylan said:

A fascinating write, Soren. Really informative

March 20th, 2025 08:35

Liberated
Salvia.S said:

Breathtakingly beautiful, a poetic longing for transcendence and creative freedom!

March 20th, 2025 07:20

Liberated
John Prophet said:

Emotive write yearning for more.πŸ‘πŸΌ

March 20th, 2025 06:04

Liberated
Mutley Ravishes said:

There\'s a standing exercise from Chinese Taoism called \"Holding the Tree,\" or \"Stake standing.\" It\'s traditionally done while standing in front of a tree.
Beautiful write, by the way!

March 20th, 2025 05:40

Liberated
Poetic Licence said:

To see through the eyes of nature would be a wonderful thing, it conjures up lovely thoughts and emotions that would be truly liberating, a lovely write

March 20th, 2025 05:05

Liberated
arqios said:

There is a sense of deep yearning to express emotions and beauty that can\'t be captured by traditional means, and to connect with the natural world on a fundamental level, feeling and seeing with the roots and leaves of a tree. It\'s a beautiful and evocative piece that captures the desire for a more enlightened existence.πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

March 20th, 2025 04:05

The circle
Goldfinch60 said:

Immortality is a circle of life soren that goes on for eternity. Good words.

Andy

March 20th, 2025 02:22

The circle
Doggerel Dave said:

Yer working class hoop snake got a promotion........ No?..... sorry I interposed.....

Short, neat explanatory write, Soren.

March 19th, 2025 17:42

The circle
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous.

March 19th, 2025 16:30

The circle
Neilton said:

Before I saw your comment I had to look it up and I can sincerely admit that your poem explained it perfectly!! Amazing work

March 19th, 2025 15:30

The circle
Lorenz said:

fascinating subject !

March 19th, 2025 11:44

The circle
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Profound! And excellent poem and an excellent representation of Ourboros. Well done on this, Soren! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

March 19th, 2025 08:40



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