Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Rust and steel
Doggerel Dave said:
You bring out these nuggets nearly every day, all well polished and honed, Soren.
This one deserves greater prominence. I agree with Teddy completely here re those four lines.
When do you find time to eat?
Faved because I\'ll want to return.
September 10th, 2024 08:41
Doggerel Dave said:
You bring out these nuggets nearly every day, all well polished and honed, Soren.
This one deserves greater prominence. I agree with Teddy completely here re those four lines.
When do you find time to eat?
Faved because I\'ll want to return.
September 10th, 2024 08:41
Rust and steel
Teddy.15 said:
My husband being a PHD in physics and I with my PHD in Poetry
In science, all is sadness
In the mind of a philosopher all is joy
In chaos there is madness
A poetβs Hope none can destroy
Probably one of the best stanza\'s I\'ve ever read. πΉ By the way I\'m the Steel believe it or not πΉ
September 10th, 2024 06:58
Teddy.15 said:
My husband being a PHD in physics and I with my PHD in Poetry
In science, all is sadness
In the mind of a philosopher all is joy
In chaos there is madness
A poetβs Hope none can destroy
Probably one of the best stanza\'s I\'ve ever read. πΉ By the way I\'m the Steel believe it or not πΉ
September 10th, 2024 06:58
A thirsty dream
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
It doesn\'t matter if you write in prose or meter, as long a there is meaning to what you write.
I am a rhyme person myself, but sometimes I enjoy other form of writing.
I feel what your thoughts.π
September 10th, 2024 01:49
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
It doesn\'t matter if you write in prose or meter, as long a there is meaning to what you write.
I am a rhyme person myself, but sometimes I enjoy other form of writing.
I feel what your thoughts.π
September 10th, 2024 01:49
A thirsty dream
Goldfinch60 said:
Weeds are only flowers in the wrong place but your words are all in the right place soren, good \'planting\'.
Andy
September 10th, 2024 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Weeds are only flowers in the wrong place but your words are all in the right place soren, good \'planting\'.
Andy
September 10th, 2024 01:47
A thirsty dream
Dan Williams said:
Ah yes, the plight of the writer, expressed so eloquently. I especially like the poems falling out of a dream; a large part of mine originate in slumber. Nice.
September 10th, 2024 00:55
Dan Williams said:
Ah yes, the plight of the writer, expressed so eloquently. I especially like the poems falling out of a dream; a large part of mine originate in slumber. Nice.
September 10th, 2024 00:55
A thirsty dream
Neilton said:
So much talent here ! The rhyming words are perfect and it is really fun to read it !
September 10th, 2024 00:26
Neilton said:
So much talent here ! The rhyming words are perfect and it is really fun to read it !
September 10th, 2024 00:26
Bricks of hope
Thad Wilk said:
ππ
Two thumbs up
you get from me!! π
Very evocative and
penned superbly!! π―
Best regards βοΈ Thad
September 9th, 2024 19:03
Thad Wilk said:
ππ
Two thumbs up
you get from me!! π
Very evocative and
penned superbly!! π―
Best regards βοΈ Thad
September 9th, 2024 19:03
Tattoos and scars
River123 said:
Thatβs original 21st century relevant poem.
Luv it lots π«Ά
September 9th, 2024 16:02
River123 said:
Thatβs original 21st century relevant poem.
Luv it lots π«Ά
September 9th, 2024 16:02
A thirsty dream
orchidee said:
Ahh, more menu ideas for KP in the last half of the poem! heehee.
September 9th, 2024 12:58
orchidee said:
Ahh, more menu ideas for KP in the last half of the poem! heehee.
September 9th, 2024 12:58
A thirsty dream
Thad Wilk said:
A terrific poem indeed! π
Bones of metaphor on the plate,
minutes spat out sprouting seeds,
my favorite lines! π―
Thanks for sharing
a treat to read!
Best regards βοΈ Thad
September 9th, 2024 09:22
Thad Wilk said:
A terrific poem indeed! π
Bones of metaphor on the plate,
minutes spat out sprouting seeds,
my favorite lines! π―
Thanks for sharing
a treat to read!
Best regards βοΈ Thad
September 9th, 2024 09:22
A thirsty dream
Doggerel Dave said:
Certainly made me thirsty, Soren.............................................
Many times here (present company excepted) I feel words could be weeded or better placed or re arranged or not appear at all..........................π
September 9th, 2024 08:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Certainly made me thirsty, Soren.............................................
Many times here (present company excepted) I feel words could be weeded or better placed or re arranged or not appear at all..........................π
September 9th, 2024 08:13
A thirsty dream
2781 said:
Let both grow up together until the harvest: and in the time of harvest I will say to the reapers, Gather ye together first the tares, and bind them in bundles to burn them: but gather the wheat into my barn.
September 9th, 2024 07:45
2781 said:
Let both grow up together until the harvest: and in the time of harvest I will say to the reapers, Gather ye together first the tares, and bind them in bundles to burn them: but gather the wheat into my barn.
September 9th, 2024 07:45
A thirsty dream
Teddy.15 said:
What a scummy dream, dipped in free verse, poetic weeds you say? Are you still in Brazil? π€£ Such a wonderful write. πΉ
September 9th, 2024 06:45
Teddy.15 said:
What a scummy dream, dipped in free verse, poetic weeds you say? Are you still in Brazil? π€£ Such a wonderful write. πΉ
September 9th, 2024 06:45
Bricks of hope
Tom Dylan said:
Such an intriguing short poem. Nicely done. Cheers, Tom.
September 9th, 2024 05:21
Tom Dylan said:
Such an intriguing short poem. Nicely done. Cheers, Tom.
September 9th, 2024 05:21
Bricks of hope
Goldfinch60 said:
May that rope pull us all up into a better life soren.
Andy
September 9th, 2024 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
May that rope pull us all up into a better life soren.
Andy
September 9th, 2024 01:44
Bricks of hope
orchidee said:
KP\'s at the end of her rope, or tether - she\'s out of botox! lol.
September 8th, 2024 11:46
orchidee said:
KP\'s at the end of her rope, or tether - she\'s out of botox! lol.
September 8th, 2024 11:46
Bricks of hope
Cassie58 said:
So much truth in this brevity sorenbarrett. My father was a scientist. I guess I have been influenced by him, but for sure we are all going to die one day. No escape from that.
September 8th, 2024 10:45
Cassie58 said:
So much truth in this brevity sorenbarrett. My father was a scientist. I guess I have been influenced by him, but for sure we are all going to die one day. No escape from that.
September 8th, 2024 10:45
Bricks of hope
Doggerel Dave said:
Precisely - \'the same end\'
Faved for its truth and concision.
That\'s poetry, Soren.
September 8th, 2024 06:50
Doggerel Dave said:
Precisely - \'the same end\'
Faved for its truth and concision.
That\'s poetry, Soren.
September 8th, 2024 06:50
My brother
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
Mercy and compassion should be shown to all, humans and animals alike.
Do not expect mercy and compassion from our creator in heavens, if you treat his creation otherwise.
Great write my friend.
September 8th, 2024 01:42
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
Mercy and compassion should be shown to all, humans and animals alike.
Do not expect mercy and compassion from our creator in heavens, if you treat his creation otherwise.
Great write my friend.
September 8th, 2024 01:42
My brother
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, there are many good people out there who do there bit but those who could help all are there on their thrones looking down on us all.
Andy
September 8th, 2024 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, there are many good people out there who do there bit but those who could help all are there on their thrones looking down on us all.
Andy
September 8th, 2024 01:26
My brother
Dan Williams said:
periods of, well, poorer circumstance have taught me to be a little sensitive about the plights of others. People will claaim money you give to a street person likely will be spent on other than food; so what? I keep thinking of the old adage \"There but for grace... \" This is very nicely put.
September 8th, 2024 00:45
Dan Williams said:
periods of, well, poorer circumstance have taught me to be a little sensitive about the plights of others. People will claaim money you give to a street person likely will be spent on other than food; so what? I keep thinking of the old adage \"There but for grace... \" This is very nicely put.
September 8th, 2024 00:45
My brother
orchidee said:
I was troubled by Jeus\' saying \'In as much have you have not done it unto one of the least of my brethren - helped, assisted, etc - you have not done it unto me\'.
But it does not mean - forget to help just ONE person, and it\'s damnation for you. But rather \'If you do not help ANYone, not even one person\'.
The reverse is true too, if we help anyone, we do it as unto Jesus, He says.
September 7th, 2024 13:35
orchidee said:
I was troubled by Jeus\' saying \'In as much have you have not done it unto one of the least of my brethren - helped, assisted, etc - you have not done it unto me\'.
But it does not mean - forget to help just ONE person, and it\'s damnation for you. But rather \'If you do not help ANYone, not even one person\'.
The reverse is true too, if we help anyone, we do it as unto Jesus, He says.
September 7th, 2024 13:35
My brother
orchidee said:
Well, KP never gets off her throne, so I best get off mine! In her case \'throne\' means \'the loo\'! It\'s the sewage I feed her, you see (heehee).
September 7th, 2024 13:32
orchidee said:
Well, KP never gets off her throne, so I best get off mine! In her case \'throne\' means \'the loo\'! It\'s the sewage I feed her, you see (heehee).
September 7th, 2024 13:32
My brother
Cassie58 said:
How could you not show compassion to the suffering? Whether it is our own or the animal kingdom, how can you ignore them?
There but for the grace of God go I.
This is a beautiful poem which touches the heartstrings sorenbarrett. Fine stanzas.
September 7th, 2024 11:47
Cassie58 said:
How could you not show compassion to the suffering? Whether it is our own or the animal kingdom, how can you ignore them?
There but for the grace of God go I.
This is a beautiful poem which touches the heartstrings sorenbarrett. Fine stanzas.
September 7th, 2024 11:47
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