Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Ants
arqios said:

All we like ants are up for extermination, thatโ€™s how it feels on certain days. And speaking of scents, there were the tiniest of flowers that I caught a whiff of association, a scent that reminded me of bees, while I was walking to the mailbox today.

November 14th, 2024 05:28

Ants
Demar Desu said:

Have you ever seen the movie Antz?! I believe you would really enjoy it. That being said, Iโ€™m just happy people are dancing

November 14th, 2024 04:58

Scraps
Tom Dylan said:

A fine write, brutal, and the last line just nails it.

November 14th, 2024 03:21

Scraps
Goldfinch60 said:

Strnge things can happen behind closed doors soren, we may never know.

Andy

November 14th, 2024 02:59

Scraps
Dan Williams said:

OK I have noticed falling rain on a sunny day. Clever all the same.

November 14th, 2024 00:24

Scraps
John Prophet said:

Interesting writeโ€ฆ.

November 13th, 2024 19:56

Scraps
sorenbarrett said:

Thank you Mutley

November 13th, 2024 19:07

Scraps
Mutley Ravishes said:

Time to get off the wheel?!
Great write, Soren.

November 13th, 2024 18:56

Scraps
Teddy.15 said:

I see the need to be grateful for what we have ๐ŸŒน beautiful dearest sorrenbarret ๐ŸŒน

November 13th, 2024 14:11

Scraps
orchidee said:

Ahh, supper for KP tonight - scraps! lol.

November 13th, 2024 10:55

Romp (acrostic)
Tom Dylan said:

Love this, Soren. Can relate to this from my own childhood scrapes.

November 13th, 2024 10:52

Scraps
Neville said:



familiarity does not always breed contempt .. sometimes, and more often than not, behind closed doors, it fosters fear too .. Neville

November 13th, 2024 08:46

Romp (acrostic)
Doggerel Dave said:

Did civilization come later??๐Ÿ˜œ

November 13th, 2024 08:08

Scraps
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Powerfully provocative, Soren! This poem hits and causes us to reflect on our own desensitization to the suffering we see around us! Brilliantly done my friend! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ–คโค๏ธ๐Ÿ–ค

November 13th, 2024 07:12

Let go
RSM0812 said:

One of my favorites for sure.

November 13th, 2024 06:39

Scraps
arqios said:

Wow! Now thatโ€™s a style I canโ€™t say I see often from youโ€ฆ. Wow, just wow!

November 13th, 2024 05:22

Romp (acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true soren, you rarely saw lads without scabs on their knees when I was a kid.

Andy

November 13th, 2024 02:18

Glass prison
RSM0812 said:

The one that got away. That\'s what this reminds me of.

November 13th, 2024 00:44

Whispers
RSM0812 said:

I really liked this one. You have definitely mastered rhyme and contemplation bringing your reader through a journey of words that have more inner meaning than they can comprehend. It\'s like understanding the vastness of the universe in infinite thought and emotion.

November 13th, 2024 00:42

Romp (acrostic)
Teddy.15 said:

lol most endearing ๐ŸŒน

November 12th, 2024 15:31

Romp (acrostic)
Thad Wilk said:

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
A great Acrostic!! ๐Ÿ’ฏ
Got flashbacks from
days gone by! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Thanks for sharing
much enjoyed!!
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad

November 12th, 2024 15:08

Romp (acrostic)
David Wakeling said:

Short and sweet. It sums up childhood. Its a wonder we survived

November 12th, 2024 15:05

Differences
FrasMac said:

Clever and thought provoking juxtapositions, makes for mental gymnastics in the reader.

November 12th, 2024 12:44

Romp (acrostic)
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 12th, 2024 12:25

Differences
Tom Dylan said:

An intriguing write, Soren. Works on so many levels.

November 12th, 2024 10:44

Romp (acrostic)
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wonderful acrostic my friend that rings true of many a romp in my childhood years! Well done! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

November 12th, 2024 07:07

Romp (acrostic)
arqios said:

Not to mention the thick or cut lips and cauliflower ears!

November 12th, 2024 05:34

Romp (acrostic)
Neville said:



and did we listen .. nah\' not on your nelly ..

November 12th, 2024 04:45

Differences
Goldfinch60 said:

Opposites do attract in many cases soren.

Andy

November 12th, 2024 03:14

Differences
Thad Wilk said:

So many changes in this
World ๐ŸŒŽ their be!! ๐Ÿ˜ฑ
Sooo thought provoking, ๐Ÿค”
fantastic imagery!!! ๐Ÿ’ฏ
Best regards my friend! โœŒ๏ธ. Thad


November 11th, 2024 20:51



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