Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Smoke signals
Teddy.15 said:

Ah, your last lines made me chuckle 🤭 wonderful imagery, a poem can be interpreted in which ever way the reader may see it. That\'s why I simply love poetry. 🌹

June 30th, 2024 09:03

Innocence of a poet
Dan Williams said:

\"Doily in a spiderweb spun\" is just as imagery evoking as can be. Nice work.

June 30th, 2024 01:10

Innocence of a poet
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work. You nailed this.

June 29th, 2024 21:45

Innocence of a poet
Mase ♪ said:

If a poets innocent, I ain\'t no poet. lol.

June 29th, 2024 13:58

Innocence of a poet
Teddy.15 said:

From the eyes of a child, how very beautiful, the things I remember as a child if I revisit after a very long time, they are completely different, simply because my mind and indeed eyes are wider ❤️ This is beautiful. 🌹

June 29th, 2024 09:11

Innocence of a poet
2781 said:

It\'s essential for entry into the kingdom...

June 29th, 2024 06:13

Innocence of a poet
Cassie58 said:

Let that inner child out. Beautiful stanzas. I love the innocence of little children. You say it so well here sorenbarrett. Have a glorious Saturday.

June 29th, 2024 05:25

Arising
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

June 28th, 2024 05:15

Arising
Teddy.15 said:

Well this is simply glorious with a stunning vision of grace and serenity, I\'d climb those stairs happily when the time is right. Ah I am such a lover of Angels, beautiful poetic art dearest sorrenbarret 🌹

June 28th, 2024 04:40

Orphan
Teddy.15 said:

So very powerful, even when we do have a mother and father it simply doesn\'t mean all our dreams come true and we feel safe or.indeed have a home, a wonderful piece of inspiring reflection dear sorrenbarret 🌹 kudos my friend.

June 27th, 2024 14:58

Eyes of a child
Teddy.15 said:

From the eyes of a child indeed, what a stunning vision of simple innocence and happiness without rules. 🌹

June 27th, 2024 14:54

Orphan
orchidee said:

A sensitive write SB.

June 27th, 2024 07:24

Eyes of a child
Goldfinch60 said:

That masterpiece will never be finished within our minds soren.

Andy

June 27th, 2024 01:22

Eyes of a child
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful.

June 26th, 2024 21:15

Eyes of a child
Doggerel Dave said:

A child observes, begins to interpret, acquires language attempts to marry the two (well some do, at least0and then describe has, for me, much resonance in this poem, Soren.

June 26th, 2024 07:38

Eyes of a child
orchidee said:

Good write SB.
But why is that gal in the video wearing a pair of curtains?! lol.

June 26th, 2024 07:35

The immortal
Goldfinch60 said:

I too have plants like this and they have moved with me but still remain alive. Immortality is certainly with us.
One of them is over fifty years old and is now with my daughter.

Andy

June 26th, 2024 01:14

The immortal
Teddy.15 said:

So mysterious, once again I thought you were writing about marriage. 🤣 Hey sorrenbarret you gave me the shivers, but may I ask what it\'s called? You have my mind so curious. Now it could also be as your title suggests however I\'m asking, even if I look silly. 🌹

June 25th, 2024 14:22

The immortal
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

June 25th, 2024 10:08

The immortal
NafisaSB said:

some thrive with care, and some grow even if you ignore them and don\'t care..
but i love plants and when you literally get to eat the fruits of your labor, it\'s just a wonderful experience.. well written
by the way, your \'who i am\' is just amazing and all encompassing.. wow and wow again and again

June 25th, 2024 08:21

The immortal
2781 said:

Plants are amazing. My wife has an indoor lilly that refuses to die, no matter the rejection!
I prefer growing herbs.

June 25th, 2024 07:03

Melted dreams
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words soren, living with Nature can be wonderful.

Andy

June 25th, 2024 01:22

Melted dreams
Bloomingcereus said:

Great poem. keep up the good work.

June 24th, 2024 22:33

Melted dreams
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

June 24th, 2024 09:32

Melted dreams
Teddy.15 said:

Such stunning imagery. 🌹

June 24th, 2024 07:58

Melted dreams
2781 said:

Sounds like a night in the woods.

June 24th, 2024 07:01

Judas
orchidee said:

And yet chosen as one of the 12 disciples - the bad apple in the bunch?

June 23rd, 2024 14:31

Judas
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful image.

June 23rd, 2024 13:24

Trapped
Doggerel Dave said:

I very much like the portrayal of a transition to a better person you describe here, Soren.

June 22nd, 2024 17:55

Trapped
orchidee said:

Why, yes, it is about marriage too - me and KP. I will have to chew me leg off then, to get free from this ball and chain she has tied to it, and thrown away the key! lol.
Dunno how else I\'m gonna get free. Could drag me leg down to the locksmiths and get another key made.
Why does it only happen to me - these mad adventures?! lol.

June 22nd, 2024 15:07



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