Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Broken toys
RSM0812 said:

It explains a form of social conditioning. We are born innocent, like a sponge. Experiences can definitely shape a man.

April 1st, 2025 10:24

Broken toys
Poetic Licence said:

We should organise a coach trip back to those days that many remember fondly, the innocence before it is taken by the reality of life, lovely write

April 1st, 2025 06:25

Broken toys
MDStone said:

Steal your eyes poison your brain schooled to be insane
Wow, love these lines. I feel like in the space where we create, we have a little time to be that innocent and imaginative child again. As always, thanks for sharing your gift with us.

April 1st, 2025 05:17

Broken toys
arqios said:

I do want to return there as well! How much are the tickets? One way please๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

April 1st, 2025 03:49

Broken toys
Teddy.15 said:

How very different the world does seem when we are so young and innocent of all the things our parents and peers try to protect us from. Every day is a lesson I do believe. Beautiful rhyme and a wonderful subject, if we are lucky we get Tom experience it all. ๐Ÿ’œ

April 1st, 2025 03:48

Fallen sand
Goldfinch60 said:

Holding hands throughout our times together is so meaningful soren, as are your words.

Andy

April 1st, 2025 01:48

Fallen sand
Tony36 said:

Love it

March 31st, 2025 20:08

Fallen sand
Mutley Ravishes said:

I once read that Christ can be seen as a symbol of Imagination. I sometimes wonder if all those games we played in our imaginations as children were, in fact, training.

March 31st, 2025 18:58

Fallen sand
Lorenz said:

It\'s a deep and complex poem that pass through the senses !

March 31st, 2025 13:06

Fallen sand
Tristan Robert Lange said:

My imagination was captured and taken on a most fantastically beautiful and rapturing journey. Thank you Soren! I loved this and fave it to reflect that! Wonderful job! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

March 31st, 2025 12:29

Fallen sand
NinjaGirl said:

So beautiful; a story of love and life...it really does give a sense of flavor and purpose to the world.

March 31st, 2025 12:20

Fallen sand
hzugman said:

Absolutely lovely.

March 31st, 2025 11:44

Fallen sand
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

March 31st, 2025 11:44

Fallen sand
Salvia.S said:

A beautiful, nostalgic, and poignant reflection on love, loss, and the passage of time. Well written!!!

March 31st, 2025 07:32

Two daughters
Tom Dylan said:

Lovely words, Soren. The affection comes though so strongly. Thanks for sharing.

March 31st, 2025 06:59

Fallen sand
Poetic Licence said:

That is a truly beautiful love poem, enjoyed thoroughly

March 31st, 2025 05:39

Fallen sand
MDStone said:

Soren,
I was transported to that mystical shore. Thank you for the nostalgic trip to a place and time where time no longer matters. A great write and one that strums the heart strings.

March 31st, 2025 05:34

Fallen sand
arqios said:

Enjoyed this so much ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธLiked and Faved๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

March 31st, 2025 04:14

Two daughters
Goldfinch60 said:

Two beautiful pieces soren.

Andy

March 31st, 2025 01:46

Two daughters
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful.

March 30th, 2025 18:44

Two daughters
John Prophet said:

Heartfelt write. Wonderful!

March 30th, 2025 18:40

Two daughters
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Had to be a favr

March 30th, 2025 12:13

Two daughters
RSM0812 said:

Your daughter is a sunbeam in your heart. As mine is to me. A beautiful. Write.

March 30th, 2025 10:46

Two daughters
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

March 30th, 2025 10:42

Two daughters
Neilton said:

\"Your faults in my blind eyes decay and into dreams melt away\"
What an amazing line ! Your kids are very lucky! Beautiful poem

March 30th, 2025 09:19

Two daughters
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Parental love is different, being a parent of two adult daughters, this really resonates. The love is equal and yet different people equal different expressions of that love. This moved me, my friend. A most wonderful write! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

March 30th, 2025 07:57

Two daughters
MDStone said:

Soren,
Beautiful expression of a father of daughter(s). I have found that the two might even be one but at different times. A parents love and longing for his childrenโ€™s success and their presence in his life, never wanes.

March 30th, 2025 07:37

Two daughters
Lorenz said:

Sublime last line ! wonderful text !

March 30th, 2025 07:25

Two daughters
Poetic Licence said:

A beautiful read of a parents love and dedication to their children, very enjoyable

March 30th, 2025 04:05

Two daughters
arqios said:

That is beautiful to read. One day I shall write about my own brood. ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š

March 30th, 2025 03:37



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