Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Let go
arqios said:

Now that’s the way to go! Sign me up compadre!

October 16th, 2024 06:49

Let go
David Wakeling said:

This is amazing. Very well constructed. I love the rhyme. Well done compadre

October 16th, 2024 06:02

Don\'t
Bobby O said:

A sequel to Jim Croce?

October 16th, 2024 04:07

Don\'t
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words soren, I find that in situations where trouble may rise if there is an argument apathy can be a strong weapon.

Andy

October 16th, 2024 01:14

Don\'t
Thad Wilk said:

Terrific poem
thoughts and
message I must say! 😳
Last stanza
most surely a triple play! βšΎπŸ’―
Thanks for sharing!! ☺️
Best regards ✌️ Thad

October 15th, 2024 20:44

Don\'t
Tony36 said:

Excellent

October 15th, 2024 14:23

Destination\'s dream
peet said:

Lovely write.

October 15th, 2024 13:25

Don\'t
peet said:

So much depth in those lines. The world is turning hostile and these lines do send a strong message across to all to calm down and let live.

October 15th, 2024 13:01

Don\'t
orchidee said:

Verse 3 line 2 applies to KP - garbage...rose! lol.

October 15th, 2024 10:36

A drop
Alan R said:

Gorgeous!!

October 15th, 2024 08:20

Don\'t
Doggerel Dave said:

You talking to me? No mask to that - It\'s clear.

PS: didn\'t stay away long did she?

October 15th, 2024 05:35

Don\'t
arqios said:

Such an odd feeling washes over when we metaphorically bite our tongues- a truly exhaustive coverage of the situation!

October 15th, 2024 04:59

Don\'t
Teddy.15 said:

I just couldn\'t have put it better myself my dear sorrenbarret 🌹 kudos and I\'m smiling from ear to ear. πŸ’™

October 15th, 2024 04:42

Destination\'s dream
Goldfinch60 said:

We have those dreams of life soren and in my life many have come true, I am very lucky.

Andy

October 15th, 2024 01:26

Destination\'s dream
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

October 14th, 2024 10:43

Destination\'s dream
Doggerel Dave said:

All life, it seems Soren is propelled by a Random Generator.....

October 14th, 2024 05:56

Ants
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words soren, ants are amazing creatures but they are also an awful nuisance.

Andy

October 14th, 2024 00:48

Ants
Thad Wilk said:

Awesome poem!! πŸ’―
We have ( Fire Ants )
here In Texas,
One burning πŸ”₯ bite you\'ll be
a scratching for a week! πŸ˜”
Don\'t wanna step on their nest!
Best regards peace ✌️ Thad

October 13th, 2024 18:40

Ants
Thomas W Case said:

You paint this scene well.

October 13th, 2024 12:42

Ants
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

October 13th, 2024 08:28

Ants
Doggerel Dave said:

Very true, Soren: Organisation, exploitation, military might.
Text book ant study there.

October 13th, 2024 04:46

Unknown self
Goldfinch60 said:

The unknown can also bring such wonder to our lives soren. Very good words.

Andy

October 13th, 2024 02:04

Unknown self
Dan Williams said:

I so wish I could embrace this view, another of your classics.

October 12th, 2024 23:53

A drop
Dan Williams said:

oooh, \"Droplets now cling adhesively
infinitesimally small\" is just magic. \"to ocean, original giver\" isn\'t bad either. You continue to better yourself.

October 12th, 2024 23:34

Unknown self
arqios said:

β€˜Know thyself,” it has been said but not as easy as jam and bread!

October 12th, 2024 19:43

Unknown self
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

October 12th, 2024 18:55

Unknown self
rebellion_in_sanity said:

The theme of self discovery feels so necessary. The line which seemed to leap at me and asked me to take notice was \'making our inner nest, host to a ghost\'. Just WOW! Great theme expressed in lovely way. Thank you

October 12th, 2024 07:30

A drop
Goldfinch60 said:

So true soren, I habve written about this many times.

Andy

October 12th, 2024 01:58

A drop
Thad Wilk said:

A wonderful poem
thought provoking and
eloquently expressed! πŸ‘
Great rhyme and \'flows\'
like a gentle stream! πŸ’¦
My pleasure to read!!
Best regards peace ✌️ Thad

October 11th, 2024 21:18

A drop
peet said:

Water can flow. Water can crash. Be water, my friend.
(Words by Bruce Lee).
Very well written. Looking forward to read more from ya.

October 11th, 2024 13:51



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