Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Lost on a mobius strip
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
Is that the same thing as those strips, where one twists it, then cuts it in half down the centre, and tapes it together to become twice as long but half the breadth? If you follow my ramblings. lol.
Yes, I studied a little of old Mobius.
July 20th, 2023 00:59
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
Is that the same thing as those strips, where one twists it, then cuts it in half down the centre, and tapes it together to become twice as long but half the breadth? If you follow my ramblings. lol.
Yes, I studied a little of old Mobius.
July 20th, 2023 00:59
Lost on a mobius strip
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever words Soren, many things in life are becoming undistinguishable.
Andy
July 20th, 2023 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever words Soren, many things in life are becoming undistinguishable.
Andy
July 20th, 2023 00:36
Two sides
Goldfinch60 said:
Totally agree with you soren, nature is wonderful and will one day lead us all to a wonderful place in our lives.
Andy
July 19th, 2023 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Totally agree with you soren, nature is wonderful and will one day lead us all to a wonderful place in our lives.
Andy
July 19th, 2023 01:21
The Scarecrow
L. B. Mek said:
effortless flow
rich with vivid and unique imagery
a great write! dear Poet
\'unseasoned loneliness tastes bland
salted with a handful of dirt
the sun smelled cold
In the blackness of its light
came the music of silence\'
July 17th, 2023 03:06
L. B. Mek said:
effortless flow
rich with vivid and unique imagery
a great write! dear Poet
\'unseasoned loneliness tastes bland
salted with a handful of dirt
the sun smelled cold
In the blackness of its light
came the music of silence\'
July 17th, 2023 03:06
Broken Albatross
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
infuriated passion, purposed
to inform with poetic eloquence
(I read and learn)
July 17th, 2023 03:03
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
infuriated passion, purposed
to inform with poetic eloquence
(I read and learn)
July 17th, 2023 03:03
The Scarecrow
Bella Shepard said:
I read this poem aloud several times, and each time I did, I felt that I found a clue to the nature of the scarecrow\'s suffering, in the illusion of life. My interpretation may be off, but I loved the mental exercise. Thank you dear friend, you always keep me thinking.
July 16th, 2023 13:52
Bella Shepard said:
I read this poem aloud several times, and each time I did, I felt that I found a clue to the nature of the scarecrow\'s suffering, in the illusion of life. My interpretation may be off, but I loved the mental exercise. Thank you dear friend, you always keep me thinking.
July 16th, 2023 13:52
Broken Albatross
Bobby O said:
Atrocious atrocities always arrive abominably. It’s there though, that whole ignorance is bliss thing never lasted long enough for me,
Like Sly said, if you dance to the music you’re gonna have to pay to the piper.
July 15th, 2023 12:31
Bobby O said:
Atrocious atrocities always arrive abominably. It’s there though, that whole ignorance is bliss thing never lasted long enough for me,
Like Sly said, if you dance to the music you’re gonna have to pay to the piper.
July 15th, 2023 12:31
Fear\'s enslavement
L. B. Mek said:
fear is misunderstood
it isn\'t a weakness or a hurdle
it\'s a state of mind, designed
by our evolutionary prerequisite\'s
to help us survive, if we but learn
to utilise it, instead
of wagging a war against it..
(but what do i know)
Bella was right \'Powerful\', indeed
thank you! dear Poet
July 14th, 2023 02:23
L. B. Mek said:
fear is misunderstood
it isn\'t a weakness or a hurdle
it\'s a state of mind, designed
by our evolutionary prerequisite\'s
to help us survive, if we but learn
to utilise it, instead
of wagging a war against it..
(but what do i know)
Bella was right \'Powerful\', indeed
thank you! dear Poet
July 14th, 2023 02:23
Corps of a fool
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'Desperation\'s white water rapids of tears
erode a stone sky, bedrock of my will
Tangled in coils of barbwire fears,\'
July 14th, 2023 02:16
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'Desperation\'s white water rapids of tears
erode a stone sky, bedrock of my will
Tangled in coils of barbwire fears,\'
July 14th, 2023 02:16
Daybreak
L. B. Mek said:
sunrays of promise inked
with poetic intent
(feels like a friend\'s comforting whisper
worded eloquently succinct)
\'soothing\'
thank you kind Poet, lovely
July 14th, 2023 02:14
L. B. Mek said:
sunrays of promise inked
with poetic intent
(feels like a friend\'s comforting whisper
worded eloquently succinct)
\'soothing\'
thank you kind Poet, lovely
July 14th, 2023 02:14
Fear\'s enslavement
Bella Shepard said:
Powerful words my friend. I think you capture perfectly finding the moment of courage to act, it can come in so many different forms. Superbly written dear poet, and truly a fav.
July 13th, 2023 08:02
Bella Shepard said:
Powerful words my friend. I think you capture perfectly finding the moment of courage to act, it can come in so many different forms. Superbly written dear poet, and truly a fav.
July 13th, 2023 08:02
Corps of a fool
Teddy.15 said:
A wonderful poem ❤️
Desperation\'s white water rapids of tears
erode a stone sky, bedrock of my will
Tangled in coils of barbwire fears,
submerged below debris, thorn crowned lungs fill
Kudos X
July 11th, 2023 14:39
Teddy.15 said:
A wonderful poem ❤️
Desperation\'s white water rapids of tears
erode a stone sky, bedrock of my will
Tangled in coils of barbwire fears,
submerged below debris, thorn crowned lungs fill
Kudos X
July 11th, 2023 14:39
Character
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, we curate our character
from the sensations we experience
sculpting ourselves with each
deed or spoken word and aspiring
to become, that which we
desire to be recognised for, by those
in our lives, we care about
(a great write! wise Poet
words to contemplate, not just read and forget)
July 7th, 2023 02:17
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, we curate our character
from the sensations we experience
sculpting ourselves with each
deed or spoken word and aspiring
to become, that which we
desire to be recognised for, by those
in our lives, we care about
(a great write! wise Poet
words to contemplate, not just read and forget)
July 7th, 2023 02:17
Deicide
L. B. Mek said:
Spinoza would so agree, my wise friend!
if you\'re going to afford your chosen deity
all the praise and blame, then surely
it behoves you to witness, that deity\'s
presence, in all that you see and feel...
(when the sky is choking
from all the fumes we send up
it rains it back down on us
but those humble trees, getting
chopped every second
and forced to inhale humanity\'s
toxic legacy, merely - steadfastly
afford us a constant supply
of the oxygen, we need to exist..)
such a great write! thank you
July 7th, 2023 02:10
L. B. Mek said:
Spinoza would so agree, my wise friend!
if you\'re going to afford your chosen deity
all the praise and blame, then surely
it behoves you to witness, that deity\'s
presence, in all that you see and feel...
(when the sky is choking
from all the fumes we send up
it rains it back down on us
but those humble trees, getting
chopped every second
and forced to inhale humanity\'s
toxic legacy, merely - steadfastly
afford us a constant supply
of the oxygen, we need to exist..)
such a great write! thank you
July 7th, 2023 02:10
From the heart
L. B. Mek said:
beyond our ink\'s projected personas
let us, reveal boldly
scribble defiantly, to insure
imbued in all that we seek to share
with the world, is a lasting legacy
curated by our writing\'s, innate sincerity
and thereby
letting our poems become a part
of our integrity and worth...
(a write i really relate to dear Poet
as, in aspiring to reach our artistic heights
we sometimes forget, that
our words need to be a reflection
of ourselves, not just a description
of all that surrounds, us
thank you! such a meaningful write)
I read and try to heed
July 7th, 2023 02:00
L. B. Mek said:
beyond our ink\'s projected personas
let us, reveal boldly
scribble defiantly, to insure
imbued in all that we seek to share
with the world, is a lasting legacy
curated by our writing\'s, innate sincerity
and thereby
letting our poems become a part
of our integrity and worth...
(a write i really relate to dear Poet
as, in aspiring to reach our artistic heights
we sometimes forget, that
our words need to be a reflection
of ourselves, not just a description
of all that surrounds, us
thank you! such a meaningful write)
I read and try to heed
July 7th, 2023 02:00
Character
Neville said:
I like the way you look at things .. and then .. you see them .. well penned my friend ... Neville
July 6th, 2023 11:54
Neville said:
I like the way you look at things .. and then .. you see them .. well penned my friend ... Neville
July 6th, 2023 11:54
Mists of Melville
christopher c cohen said:
As a (former) sailor, I enjoy these descriptions. Very evocative.
July 5th, 2023 19:18
christopher c cohen said:
As a (former) sailor, I enjoy these descriptions. Very evocative.
July 5th, 2023 19:18
Deicide
orchidee said:
Did the spellchecker come up with \'Decide\'?! heehee.
There\'s somewhat cryptic, yet true, phrases, about God - All-Knowing, All-Encompassing, etc.
July 5th, 2023 02:10
orchidee said:
Did the spellchecker come up with \'Decide\'?! heehee.
There\'s somewhat cryptic, yet true, phrases, about God - All-Knowing, All-Encompassing, etc.
July 5th, 2023 02:10
Fire, water, air and earth
Caring dove said:
Beautiful writing )) I liked reading your poem 🙂 lovely way with words
July 4th, 2023 16:03
Caring dove said:
Beautiful writing )) I liked reading your poem 🙂 lovely way with words
July 4th, 2023 16:03
Listen
Caring dove said:
This is so nice ! Lovely poem
Your last lines ‘ you only need to listen ‘ that’s very similar to what I wrote in my latest poem about birds
Nature has so much to say ))
July 4th, 2023 15:54
Caring dove said:
This is so nice ! Lovely poem
Your last lines ‘ you only need to listen ‘ that’s very similar to what I wrote in my latest poem about birds
Nature has so much to say ))
July 4th, 2023 15:54
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