Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Flies
arqios said:
The onset of a maggoty process, I’m afraid… prevention is always more effective than curative measures… 🙏🏻
February 21st, 2025 06:08
arqios said:
The onset of a maggoty process, I’m afraid… prevention is always more effective than curative measures… 🙏🏻
February 21st, 2025 06:08
Flies
Teddy.15 said:
I\'d say this is about greed, I see the generosity of the peaceful narrator acceptance of what is going on, knowing he cannot change it, he reflects on what good he can get from the bad situation. I would go as far to say this could also be about politics. But who am I to say. 🌹 Ah yes lots to munch on. 🌹
February 21st, 2025 04:34
Teddy.15 said:
I\'d say this is about greed, I see the generosity of the peaceful narrator acceptance of what is going on, knowing he cannot change it, he reflects on what good he can get from the bad situation. I would go as far to say this could also be about politics. But who am I to say. 🌹 Ah yes lots to munch on. 🌹
February 21st, 2025 04:34
Relics of the lost
Emile Dubois said:
Beautiful, I guess even in dementia the mind has the key, and yet one is sadly lost to oneself. Thanks for a stimulating read
February 21st, 2025 03:11
Emile Dubois said:
Beautiful, I guess even in dementia the mind has the key, and yet one is sadly lost to oneself. Thanks for a stimulating read
February 21st, 2025 03:11
Ultimate weapon
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words of understanding soren.
Andy
February 21st, 2025 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words of understanding soren.
Andy
February 21st, 2025 02:12
Ultimate weapon
James Michael said:
Great flow, rhyming and rhythm to this one. Metaphorically relatable. Well done!
February 20th, 2025 19:38
James Michael said:
Great flow, rhyming and rhythm to this one. Metaphorically relatable. Well done!
February 20th, 2025 19:38
All loss
Ladywithaquill said:
I thought the first line was biting but then the rest of it hits you and wow this poem really pierces your heart!
February 20th, 2025 15:36
Ladywithaquill said:
I thought the first line was biting but then the rest of it hits you and wow this poem really pierces your heart!
February 20th, 2025 15:36
Ultimate weapon
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a lot to unpack.I had to read it twice to appreciate it.Pity sympathy compassion they are all there .Amazing poem
February 20th, 2025 15:20
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a lot to unpack.I had to read it twice to appreciate it.Pity sympathy compassion they are all there .Amazing poem
February 20th, 2025 15:20
Ultimate weapon
Tristan Robert Lange said:
At first read, this comes off as a poem about empathy and compassion; however, some clues might alter that initial reading. Words such as pity and weapon. The lines: “no one can ignore / This a weapon of the mind refined / Treating the enemy as one below, disarming the hardest blow / Now shrunken the largest foe, disemboweled their ego”, are further evidence that this is someone who is using pity, compassion and empathy against others as weapon, perhaps utilizing it as a way of building themselves up why cutting others down. So, while this initially sounds like a sincerely compassionate person, he/she turns out to be a narcissist, weaponizing those otherwise good things against others for their own gain. Well done on this, my friend. A multi-layered and rewarding read. ❤️🙏 I apologize for my absence for the last couple of days. Been hit hard with a nasty cold. Finally, I feel somewhat alive again! LOL!
February 20th, 2025 08:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
At first read, this comes off as a poem about empathy and compassion; however, some clues might alter that initial reading. Words such as pity and weapon. The lines: “no one can ignore / This a weapon of the mind refined / Treating the enemy as one below, disarming the hardest blow / Now shrunken the largest foe, disemboweled their ego”, are further evidence that this is someone who is using pity, compassion and empathy against others as weapon, perhaps utilizing it as a way of building themselves up why cutting others down. So, while this initially sounds like a sincerely compassionate person, he/she turns out to be a narcissist, weaponizing those otherwise good things against others for their own gain. Well done on this, my friend. A multi-layered and rewarding read. ❤️🙏 I apologize for my absence for the last couple of days. Been hit hard with a nasty cold. Finally, I feel somewhat alive again! LOL!
February 20th, 2025 08:41
Ultimate weapon
Friendship said:
This is a powerful poem, Soren. Your poem advocates for a change in perspective regarding how we approach conflict. It suggests that fostering understanding and compassion can lead to more effective and just resolutions than reliance on violence and revenge. I like how you use the metaphor of weapons to represent emotional and psychological tools. For example, You use \"Pity\'s sword of steel\" which symbolizes the strength of compassion. You create a striking contrast between violence and kindness.
February 20th, 2025 08:25
Friendship said:
This is a powerful poem, Soren. Your poem advocates for a change in perspective regarding how we approach conflict. It suggests that fostering understanding and compassion can lead to more effective and just resolutions than reliance on violence and revenge. I like how you use the metaphor of weapons to represent emotional and psychological tools. For example, You use \"Pity\'s sword of steel\" which symbolizes the strength of compassion. You create a striking contrast between violence and kindness.
February 20th, 2025 08:25
Ultimate weapon
Salvia.S said:
Such a beautiful and thought provoking poem! Well done!
February 20th, 2025 06:41
Salvia.S said:
Such a beautiful and thought provoking poem! Well done!
February 20th, 2025 06:41
Ultimate weapon
Neville said:
At times when one has a clear advantage, pity per se is indeed the most welcome and ultimate gift .. however, those that use it as a weapon will ultimately lose that advantage on what will become an uneven playing field .. this feels like something that is being played out write now .. and I note not a drop of ink wasted .. Neville
February 20th, 2025 05:28
Neville said:
At times when one has a clear advantage, pity per se is indeed the most welcome and ultimate gift .. however, those that use it as a weapon will ultimately lose that advantage on what will become an uneven playing field .. this feels like something that is being played out write now .. and I note not a drop of ink wasted .. Neville
February 20th, 2025 05:28
Ultimate weapon
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m a grand believer that some thrive on pity, I myself am not a fan of those sorts, I am a grand believer of justice ⚖️ and ego well, you know me well enough to know that\'s a thing I really dislike, I want to show you a line I love more but in this case it\'s every line, so powerful and indeed is the very reason I myself do not believe in God. Kudos, you just interpreted my own thoughts of today. 🤗 🌹
February 20th, 2025 05:25
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m a grand believer that some thrive on pity, I myself am not a fan of those sorts, I am a grand believer of justice ⚖️ and ego well, you know me well enough to know that\'s a thing I really dislike, I want to show you a line I love more but in this case it\'s every line, so powerful and indeed is the very reason I myself do not believe in God. Kudos, you just interpreted my own thoughts of today. 🤗 🌹
February 20th, 2025 05:25
Ultimate weapon
Poetic Licence said:
Loved this read of honest observations, with some great lines in.
February 20th, 2025 05:14
Poetic Licence said:
Loved this read of honest observations, with some great lines in.
February 20th, 2025 05:14
Ultimate weapon
arqios said:
How so very true! And no less in a poem too🙏🏻🕊
February 20th, 2025 03:48
arqios said:
How so very true! And no less in a poem too🙏🏻🕊
February 20th, 2025 03:48
Friendship
Friendship said:
Soren, Your poem aims to celebrate the power of friendship, offering comfort and hope to those who may feel isolated or in mourning. It serves as a reminder that true friendships can transcend challenges and continue to provide light and warmth in our lives.You used Words like \"sun,\" \"light,\" \"darkest storm,\" \"cold world,\" and \"mourning\" to evoke strong visual and emotional responses. The juxtaposition of warmth and cold highlights the contrast between friendship and loneliness.
February 19th, 2025 12:41
Friendship said:
Soren, Your poem aims to celebrate the power of friendship, offering comfort and hope to those who may feel isolated or in mourning. It serves as a reminder that true friendships can transcend challenges and continue to provide light and warmth in our lives.You used Words like \"sun,\" \"light,\" \"darkest storm,\" \"cold world,\" and \"mourning\" to evoke strong visual and emotional responses. The juxtaposition of warmth and cold highlights the contrast between friendship and loneliness.
February 19th, 2025 12:41
Fear
Friendship said:
Soren, your poem revolves around the overwhelming sensation of fear and anxiety. It depicts the paralyzing effect of fear that looms over time, creating a sense of impending doom and dread. Your poem focuses on the internal struggle with fear, how it manifests physically and emotionally, and the desire to avoid confronting the reality that fuels this fear, which I know so well. Yet there\'s nobody there to help or understand you. you\'re alone with all these fears in a dark box Feeling so hopeless alone and most of all Broken!
February 19th, 2025 12:29
Friendship said:
Soren, your poem revolves around the overwhelming sensation of fear and anxiety. It depicts the paralyzing effect of fear that looms over time, creating a sense of impending doom and dread. Your poem focuses on the internal struggle with fear, how it manifests physically and emotionally, and the desire to avoid confronting the reality that fuels this fear, which I know so well. Yet there\'s nobody there to help or understand you. you\'re alone with all these fears in a dark box Feeling so hopeless alone and most of all Broken!
February 19th, 2025 12:29
Divine waste
NinjaGirl said:
Beautiful write...a lot of anger and questions which I can second!
February 19th, 2025 11:23
NinjaGirl said:
Beautiful write...a lot of anger and questions which I can second!
February 19th, 2025 11:23
Missing You
Friendship said:
Your Poem seems to have theme of disconnection and the unpredictability of emotions.to me how one becomes a Ghost.
February 19th, 2025 10:10
Friendship said:
Your Poem seems to have theme of disconnection and the unpredictability of emotions.to me how one becomes a Ghost.
February 19th, 2025 10:10
Relics of the lost
whats write for me said:
Excellent prose, dark tinged memory.
February 19th, 2025 10:06
whats write for me said:
Excellent prose, dark tinged memory.
February 19th, 2025 10:06
Where it all began
Friendship said:
Very well written,Soren,as a person myself that grow up on water,Your poem can be interpreted as a reflection on humanity\'s relationship with the sea, exploring both its nurturing and destructive aspects. The imagery evokes a timeless quality, suggesting a connection to ancient myths and the origins of life. The overall tone indicates a reverence for nature, urging a person to contemplate their place within this vast, interconnected ecosystem.
February 19th, 2025 09:06
Friendship said:
Very well written,Soren,as a person myself that grow up on water,Your poem can be interpreted as a reflection on humanity\'s relationship with the sea, exploring both its nurturing and destructive aspects. The imagery evokes a timeless quality, suggesting a connection to ancient myths and the origins of life. The overall tone indicates a reverence for nature, urging a person to contemplate their place within this vast, interconnected ecosystem.
February 19th, 2025 09:06
In dreams
Friendship said:
Soren, Your poem seeks to articulate the complex emotions surrounding loss and the difficulty of holding onto joyful memories, the bittersweet reality of memories that fade over time.it is what it is.
February 19th, 2025 08:55
Friendship said:
Soren, Your poem seeks to articulate the complex emotions surrounding loss and the difficulty of holding onto joyful memories, the bittersweet reality of memories that fade over time.it is what it is.
February 19th, 2025 08:55
Divine waste
Poetic Licence said:
That caught me off guard, powerful words of anger directed above,raw, passionate and to the point and i Loved it
February 19th, 2025 08:31
Poetic Licence said:
That caught me off guard, powerful words of anger directed above,raw, passionate and to the point and i Loved it
February 19th, 2025 08:31
Divine waste
Cassie58 said:
The poet’s words fall
as tear drops
Whatever horrors befall this earth, there will always be poets around who will record it with their own tears. There’s going to be alot of rain before the sun comes out.
Powerful write. Thought provoking.
February 19th, 2025 08:19
Cassie58 said:
The poet’s words fall
as tear drops
Whatever horrors befall this earth, there will always be poets around who will record it with their own tears. There’s going to be alot of rain before the sun comes out.
Powerful write. Thought provoking.
February 19th, 2025 08:19
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