Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Frigid conversation
arqios said:
A resonating poem wherein Silence does not mean absence, and despair does not mean permanence. We are still here, and that means something. And even in the coldest moments, warmth is never truly beyond reach. We are not alone in this.🙏🏻🕊️
June 16th, 2025 20:33
arqios said:
A resonating poem wherein Silence does not mean absence, and despair does not mean permanence. We are still here, and that means something. And even in the coldest moments, warmth is never truly beyond reach. We are not alone in this.🙏🏻🕊️
June 16th, 2025 20:33
Frigid conversation
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Haunting and vivid—your imagery chills to the bone. A masterpiece of despair, beautifully bleak.
June 16th, 2025 20:15
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Haunting and vivid—your imagery chills to the bone. A masterpiece of despair, beautifully bleak.
June 16th, 2025 20:15
Frigid conversation
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I of course don\'t get many of the cryptic meanings! lol.
June 16th, 2025 11:12
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I of course don\'t get many of the cryptic meanings! lol.
June 16th, 2025 11:12
Frigid conversation
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful, my dear friend. This poem punches in all the right ways. I know of what it speaks and its message works on multiple levels. Profound poetic truth. Well done, Soren! 🌹👏
June 16th, 2025 06:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful, my dear friend. This poem punches in all the right ways. I know of what it speaks and its message works on multiple levels. Profound poetic truth. Well done, Soren! 🌹👏
June 16th, 2025 06:53
Frigid conversation
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of impending doom and death, question being do we go quietly or do we try to change it, enjoyed the read
June 16th, 2025 04:49
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of impending doom and death, question being do we go quietly or do we try to change it, enjoyed the read
June 16th, 2025 04:49
Frigid conversation
David Wakeling said:
A very powerful poem. For me it represents the inevitabilty of Death and we are all on death row. Wonderful poem
June 16th, 2025 04:13
David Wakeling said:
A very powerful poem. For me it represents the inevitabilty of Death and we are all on death row. Wonderful poem
June 16th, 2025 04:13
Frigid conversation
Lorenz said:
Inspiring conversation for a frigid climate of nothingness ...
June 16th, 2025 03:28
Lorenz said:
Inspiring conversation for a frigid climate of nothingness ...
June 16th, 2025 03:28
Frigid conversation
Teddy.15 said:
For your imagery alone this is a kudos but speaks so loudly in this new dawn of weirdness of our world today. Brilliant on so many levels. 🌹
June 16th, 2025 03:24
Teddy.15 said:
For your imagery alone this is a kudos but speaks so loudly in this new dawn of weirdness of our world today. Brilliant on so many levels. 🌹
June 16th, 2025 03:24
Father
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Soren,
\'If any question why he died. Tell them, because our fathers lied.\' Kipling. Your poem reminds me of Kipling, how he sought favour for his son to go to war and as a consequence never to return. This one really provokes the mind, so, too, the soul. A profoundly powerful verse and perfectly composed. The poem should be awarded accolades galore and its author lionised. Happy Father\'s Day and may you have many more.
Kind regards,
Tony.
June 15th, 2025 11:53
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Soren,
\'If any question why he died. Tell them, because our fathers lied.\' Kipling. Your poem reminds me of Kipling, how he sought favour for his son to go to war and as a consequence never to return. This one really provokes the mind, so, too, the soul. A profoundly powerful verse and perfectly composed. The poem should be awarded accolades galore and its author lionised. Happy Father\'s Day and may you have many more.
Kind regards,
Tony.
June 15th, 2025 11:53
Father
orchidee said:
Not to be facetious, but yes, He did send His Son down to the \'parish\' to save us - should be \'perish\'. Oops!
June 15th, 2025 10:21
orchidee said:
Not to be facetious, but yes, He did send His Son down to the \'parish\' to save us - should be \'perish\'. Oops!
June 15th, 2025 10:21
Father
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Happy Father’s Day, Soren. Quite a fitting poem/metaphor for the day. It, of course, will poke at people with fragile faiths; however, so be it. Or as Jesus would say, “Amen.” This poem is quite profound and very thought-provoking on many levels. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
June 15th, 2025 08:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Happy Father’s Day, Soren. Quite a fitting poem/metaphor for the day. It, of course, will poke at people with fragile faiths; however, so be it. Or as Jesus would say, “Amen.” This poem is quite profound and very thought-provoking on many levels. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
June 15th, 2025 08:24
Father
Teddy.15 said:
So powerful my dear sorrenbarret, I guess as a mother of a child I hope that my son\'s dad is inspiring with all the right features, but no man is perfect. Happy father\'s day to you dear friend. 🌹
June 15th, 2025 04:51
Teddy.15 said:
So powerful my dear sorrenbarret, I guess as a mother of a child I hope that my son\'s dad is inspiring with all the right features, but no man is perfect. Happy father\'s day to you dear friend. 🌹
June 15th, 2025 04:51
Father
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is a lot to think about. The good book is a bit weird if I\'m honest. What father giveth his only begotten son to take away the sins of a million strangers. Sorry but it is beyond laughable. This capture the anger we have about the absurdity of the scriptures. I really enjoyed reading this it fits the atheist manifesto really well.
June 15th, 2025 04:25
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is a lot to think about. The good book is a bit weird if I\'m honest. What father giveth his only begotten son to take away the sins of a million strangers. Sorry but it is beyond laughable. This capture the anger we have about the absurdity of the scriptures. I really enjoyed reading this it fits the atheist manifesto really well.
June 15th, 2025 04:25
Father
Poetic Licence said:
I like to think I would not consent, for me a very thought provoking write, nicely expressed and written
June 15th, 2025 04:13
Poetic Licence said:
I like to think I would not consent, for me a very thought provoking write, nicely expressed and written
June 15th, 2025 04:13
Father
arqios said:
Happy Father\'s Day 🙏🏻🕊️ I have a feeling perfection-imperfection dynamic is on many a mind today.
June 15th, 2025 03:53
arqios said:
Happy Father\'s Day 🙏🏻🕊️ I have a feeling perfection-imperfection dynamic is on many a mind today.
June 15th, 2025 03:53
Junk
Tony Grannell said:
Like a ruderal bloom appearing out of the junk in this splendid poem. Sometimes the subject of a poem can distract from its excellence, as is the case here. I always love reading your poetry but this one really got me. Line into line with perfect continuity and wording balances the poem complete in its artistry. If you found this one in the trash, please keep searching. Excellent, Soren, truly.
All the best,
Tony.
June 14th, 2025 14:03
Tony Grannell said:
Like a ruderal bloom appearing out of the junk in this splendid poem. Sometimes the subject of a poem can distract from its excellence, as is the case here. I always love reading your poetry but this one really got me. Line into line with perfect continuity and wording balances the poem complete in its artistry. If you found this one in the trash, please keep searching. Excellent, Soren, truly.
All the best,
Tony.
June 14th, 2025 14:03
Junk
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Even in decay, your verses shine—mending despair into hope, one scrap at a time.
June 14th, 2025 13:01
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Even in decay, your verses shine—mending despair into hope, one scrap at a time.
June 14th, 2025 13:01
Junk
orchidee said:
Ahh, more ideas for KP\'s dinners - scraps, junk, sewage, debris, trash, etc. She loves \'em! lol.
June 14th, 2025 12:33
orchidee said:
Ahh, more ideas for KP\'s dinners - scraps, junk, sewage, debris, trash, etc. She loves \'em! lol.
June 14th, 2025 12:33
Junk
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Writer\'s block. The muse takes a vacay. Every writer\'s dread turned into an eventual triumph. And, look what we have here, a poem about junk that isn\'t junk at all! That\'s the beauty of it really. Even when all we have are scraps of ideas left over of what we wanted to write, even when the muse has gone, something brilliant can emerge. This is one such emergence, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
June 14th, 2025 08:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Writer\'s block. The muse takes a vacay. Every writer\'s dread turned into an eventual triumph. And, look what we have here, a poem about junk that isn\'t junk at all! That\'s the beauty of it really. Even when all we have are scraps of ideas left over of what we wanted to write, even when the muse has gone, something brilliant can emerge. This is one such emergence, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
June 14th, 2025 08:27
Junk
Poetic Licence said:
That is an incredibly harsh self critiques of ones poetry from a wonderful writer, that gives so much pleasure in their writing,
June 14th, 2025 06:43
Poetic Licence said:
That is an incredibly harsh self critiques of ones poetry from a wonderful writer, that gives so much pleasure in their writing,
June 14th, 2025 06:43
Junk
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, SB. Rambling through the clutter-land of my mind OH the things I find.
June 14th, 2025 06:43
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, SB. Rambling through the clutter-land of my mind OH the things I find.
June 14th, 2025 06:43
Junk
Soman Ragavan said:
It happens to writers. Sometimes it\'s a travel through a desert. The words, the ideas don\'t turn up. Inspiration is a mystery and is beyond anyone\'s control. When it happens you must make the most of it. Reading Wordsworth\'s (1770-1850) work, you will notice that as from a certain point, his writings became rather bland.
June 14th, 2025 06:31
Soman Ragavan said:
It happens to writers. Sometimes it\'s a travel through a desert. The words, the ideas don\'t turn up. Inspiration is a mystery and is beyond anyone\'s control. When it happens you must make the most of it. Reading Wordsworth\'s (1770-1850) work, you will notice that as from a certain point, his writings became rather bland.
June 14th, 2025 06:31
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