Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Little boy blue come blow your horn
David Wakeling said:
I see Donald Trump in this poem. He certainly is one worth keeping an eye on. A wonderful thoughtful poem. Excellent cadence and construction. Enjoyed
January 31st, 2025 15:23
David Wakeling said:
I see Donald Trump in this poem. He certainly is one worth keeping an eye on. A wonderful thoughtful poem. Excellent cadence and construction. Enjoyed
January 31st, 2025 15:23
Little boy blue come blow your horn
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wait and learn we shall see. Did you know that Diversity, Equity, and Inclusion can cause severe air traffic problems evidently? Who knew oppression kept the airways safe? 🤷♂️ I am not sure whether to laugh or cry at this poem, nor what it will take for his supporters to wake up, if that is even possible at this point. Methinks not. Anywho. Well done, on this Soren, and you will see that our poems today share a certain...ehem...theme! LOL! 😝
January 31st, 2025 08:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wait and learn we shall see. Did you know that Diversity, Equity, and Inclusion can cause severe air traffic problems evidently? Who knew oppression kept the airways safe? 🤷♂️ I am not sure whether to laugh or cry at this poem, nor what it will take for his supporters to wake up, if that is even possible at this point. Methinks not. Anywho. Well done, on this Soren, and you will see that our poems today share a certain...ehem...theme! LOL! 😝
January 31st, 2025 08:22
Sonnett of an old man
RSM0812 said:
Pretty deep. I\'m going to have to read it a few times. Lol
January 31st, 2025 08:09
RSM0812 said:
Pretty deep. I\'m going to have to read it a few times. Lol
January 31st, 2025 08:09
Little boy blue come blow your horn
arqios said:
Raising that banner in this sociopolitical commentary in verse 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 31st, 2025 06:48
arqios said:
Raising that banner in this sociopolitical commentary in verse 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 31st, 2025 06:48
Little boy blue come blow your horn
Teddy.15 said:
Oh my, you say it all so poetically, what a ghastly world in which we have these ugly good for nothing loaded politicians, and none are worse as Trump. My very sore point, it\'s hard to believe he got the votes from the very people he will now screw over. Sorry I can\'t say it better than that. He speaks from his arsehole. Again please forgive my language I cannot say it more politely. A very clever way of making a point millions are now scratching their heads to fathom. 🌹
January 31st, 2025 06:01
Teddy.15 said:
Oh my, you say it all so poetically, what a ghastly world in which we have these ugly good for nothing loaded politicians, and none are worse as Trump. My very sore point, it\'s hard to believe he got the votes from the very people he will now screw over. Sorry I can\'t say it better than that. He speaks from his arsehole. Again please forgive my language I cannot say it more politely. A very clever way of making a point millions are now scratching their heads to fathom. 🌹
January 31st, 2025 06:01
Little boy blue come blow your horn
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful description and very accurate one of the man that is going to cause the world an awful lot of problems and take his own country (that he reportedly loves ) back by about 50 years. Well expressed, great read
January 31st, 2025 05:55
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful description and very accurate one of the man that is going to cause the world an awful lot of problems and take his own country (that he reportedly loves ) back by about 50 years. Well expressed, great read
January 31st, 2025 05:55
Sonnett of an old man
Neville said:
Old men dream too, don\'t they .. and not only of the past and those halcyon days of their own youth, when most, felt and thought they were young gods .. but also, of what delights may be left for them to harvest in the dwindling time of their future .. Neville
January 31st, 2025 04:31
Neville said:
Old men dream too, don\'t they .. and not only of the past and those halcyon days of their own youth, when most, felt and thought they were young gods .. but also, of what delights may be left for them to harvest in the dwindling time of their future .. Neville
January 31st, 2025 04:31
Sonnett of an old man
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren old age can be surprisingly wonderful.
Andy
January 31st, 2025 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren old age can be surprisingly wonderful.
Andy
January 31st, 2025 02:24
Sonnett of an old man
Mutley Ravishes said:
It doesn\'t have to be this way.
A dead man was put in a cave
And came out three days
Later in rude health!
Great write, Soren
January 30th, 2025 18:50
Mutley Ravishes said:
It doesn\'t have to be this way.
A dead man was put in a cave
And came out three days
Later in rude health!
Great write, Soren
January 30th, 2025 18:50
Call of the earth
Firefall said:
You really captured the realities and sadness of growing older.
January 30th, 2025 13:06
Firefall said:
You really captured the realities and sadness of growing older.
January 30th, 2025 13:06
Sonnett of an old man
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Aging is not for the faint of heart! I am only mid-aged (depending on how long I live too, of course) and, truthfully, I have already experienced things I never thought would happen. I know that only increases as the years go by, but we\'re all in it...so cheers! 🍻 Well done, my friend. Thoroughly enjoyed this sonnet. 🌹👏
January 30th, 2025 08:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Aging is not for the faint of heart! I am only mid-aged (depending on how long I live too, of course) and, truthfully, I have already experienced things I never thought would happen. I know that only increases as the years go by, but we\'re all in it...so cheers! 🍻 Well done, my friend. Thoroughly enjoyed this sonnet. 🌹👏
January 30th, 2025 08:51
Sonnett of an old man
Poetic Licence said:
I did not think you knew me !!, have had many a day feeling like this, wish it felt like reading this though, quite soothing and calming, enjoyed the read
January 30th, 2025 07:09
Poetic Licence said:
I did not think you knew me !!, have had many a day feeling like this, wish it felt like reading this though, quite soothing and calming, enjoyed the read
January 30th, 2025 07:09
Sonnett of an old man
Teddy.15 said:
Magnificent 👏👏👏👏👏 please do take your bow sir! Wow 🌹 age really does bring wisdom and so much more. 🌹
January 30th, 2025 04:42
Teddy.15 said:
Magnificent 👏👏👏👏👏 please do take your bow sir! Wow 🌹 age really does bring wisdom and so much more. 🌹
January 30th, 2025 04:42
Sonnett of an old man
arqios said:
Truly feeling this these days, it will only ripen more in the coming years should I get to see them. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 30th, 2025 03:43
arqios said:
Truly feeling this these days, it will only ripen more in the coming years should I get to see them. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 30th, 2025 03:43
All ever desired
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words soren but I am sure Chronos will bring all goodness and love in time.
Andy
January 30th, 2025 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words soren but I am sure Chronos will bring all goodness and love in time.
Andy
January 30th, 2025 02:22
All ever desired
NinjaGirl said:
I love poems about poisons, and the flower being part of it is amazing
January 29th, 2025 19:25
NinjaGirl said:
I love poems about poisons, and the flower being part of it is amazing
January 29th, 2025 19:25
All ever desired
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful poem,
poignant and pain filled too!!😢
A \"poisonous\" romance
can do this it\'s true! 😉
Thank for sharing my friend!! 🙏☺️
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
January 29th, 2025 18:44
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful poem,
poignant and pain filled too!!😢
A \"poisonous\" romance
can do this it\'s true! 😉
Thank for sharing my friend!! 🙏☺️
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
January 29th, 2025 18:44
All ever desired
Cassie58 said:
How sad that this relationship should turn toxic with the years. Not uncommon these days and it appears to be her own fault. I looked up oleander, a plant I didn’t know much about only to discover just how poisonous it is. The metaphor works well here sorenbarrett. Another fab write.
January 29th, 2025 18:26
Cassie58 said:
How sad that this relationship should turn toxic with the years. Not uncommon these days and it appears to be her own fault. I looked up oleander, a plant I didn’t know much about only to discover just how poisonous it is. The metaphor works well here sorenbarrett. Another fab write.
January 29th, 2025 18:26
All ever desired
David Wakeling said:
This is quite sad.Certainly a well constructed poem. I see a aging beauty here.
January 29th, 2025 15:48
David Wakeling said:
This is quite sad.Certainly a well constructed poem. I see a aging beauty here.
January 29th, 2025 15:48
All ever desired
Michael Edwards said:
A joyous use of this rich language of ours = a delghtful, albeit sombre, read.
January 29th, 2025 09:40
Michael Edwards said:
A joyous use of this rich language of ours = a delghtful, albeit sombre, read.
January 29th, 2025 09:40
All ever desired
arqios said:
Imagine developing a resistance to toxins or even turning toxic herself… how utterly possibly horrible. Fantastic poem! 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 29th, 2025 08:32
arqios said:
Imagine developing a resistance to toxins or even turning toxic herself… how utterly possibly horrible. Fantastic poem! 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 29th, 2025 08:32
All ever desired
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! In this I read the journey of a woman whose sole desire was to be loved. This desire, however, led her into a toxic relationship, symbolized by the poison tea. I have often wondered what leads one to be attracted to toxic people, but that really oversimplifies relationships and how they progress. In fact, that stands out in this poem: the progression shows how initial passion fades over time, leaving her abandoned and disillusioned. There is a sense of resignation in the final stanza, the years of pain having accumulated and hopes having been devoured by time (Chronos). This, my friend, is image-rich and a wonderful poetic expression. Loved the inclusion of Eros and Chronos too! 🌹👏
January 29th, 2025 08:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! In this I read the journey of a woman whose sole desire was to be loved. This desire, however, led her into a toxic relationship, symbolized by the poison tea. I have often wondered what leads one to be attracted to toxic people, but that really oversimplifies relationships and how they progress. In fact, that stands out in this poem: the progression shows how initial passion fades over time, leaving her abandoned and disillusioned. There is a sense of resignation in the final stanza, the years of pain having accumulated and hopes having been devoured by time (Chronos). This, my friend, is image-rich and a wonderful poetic expression. Loved the inclusion of Eros and Chronos too! 🌹👏
January 29th, 2025 08:15
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