Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Dust of life
Niki said:
\"Time\'s tears turned to mud becomes today\'s flesh and blood\"
I love this line, it really stands out to me. Well done!!!
May 16th, 2025 05:12
Niki said:
\"Time\'s tears turned to mud becomes today\'s flesh and blood\"
I love this line, it really stands out to me. Well done!!!
May 16th, 2025 05:12
Damnatio memoriae read or we die
arqios said:
Let no verse fade into silence, no thought wither in the dark. Words breathe when carried forward, stitched into the fabric of time. We are not here to let them die, but to lift them where hands can reach, to scatter them like autumn leaves, where new voices take root and rise. You have been such a stalwart proponent of poetry and reading. Lead the way!🙏🏻🕊️
May 16th, 2025 04:47
arqios said:
Let no verse fade into silence, no thought wither in the dark. Words breathe when carried forward, stitched into the fabric of time. We are not here to let them die, but to lift them where hands can reach, to scatter them like autumn leaves, where new voices take root and rise. You have been such a stalwart proponent of poetry and reading. Lead the way!🙏🏻🕊️
May 16th, 2025 04:47
Damnatio memoriae read or we die
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your verses bloom like eternal seeds, ensuring no poem truly dies. A timeless ode to words that breathe and readers who keep them alive.
May 16th, 2025 04:17
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your verses bloom like eternal seeds, ensuring no poem truly dies. A timeless ode to words that breathe and readers who keep them alive.
May 16th, 2025 04:17
Damnatio memoriae read or we die
David Wakeling said:
A well constructed poem with a great message extolling the virtues of writing to live forever.
May 16th, 2025 03:42
David Wakeling said:
A well constructed poem with a great message extolling the virtues of writing to live forever.
May 16th, 2025 03:42
Dust of life
Goldfinch60 said:
Life is just a dust in various forms soren producing the differences that we become.
Andy
May 16th, 2025 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Life is just a dust in various forms soren producing the differences that we become.
Andy
May 16th, 2025 01:49
Give and take
Doggerel Dave said:
Wish I had rhythm like that. A fresh tilt at what seems an inexhaustible topic. Well writ, Soren.
May 15th, 2025 21:44
Doggerel Dave said:
Wish I had rhythm like that. A fresh tilt at what seems an inexhaustible topic. Well writ, Soren.
May 15th, 2025 21:44
Footprints on a beaten path
Soman Ragavan said:
Indeed, one should never write off embers. They are capable of springing back to to life at any moment. They smolder unseen. They can whip up some backlash. They are deceptive. Embers of past fires can be the hidden sparks of future ones. Otherwise put, the \"past\" is never over.
May 15th, 2025 20:42
Soman Ragavan said:
Indeed, one should never write off embers. They are capable of springing back to to life at any moment. They smolder unseen. They can whip up some backlash. They are deceptive. Embers of past fires can be the hidden sparks of future ones. Otherwise put, the \"past\" is never over.
May 15th, 2025 20:42
Dust of life
orchidee said:
It may sound insulting - some Biblical description of \'man\' (meaning including male and female) - to say \'You pile of dust, you worm, you!\' But it\'s what I call KP every day, as she\'s too big for her boots. lol.
May 15th, 2025 11:39
orchidee said:
It may sound insulting - some Biblical description of \'man\' (meaning including male and female) - to say \'You pile of dust, you worm, you!\' But it\'s what I call KP every day, as she\'s too big for her boots. lol.
May 15th, 2025 11:39
Dust of life
arqios said:
Metaphors allow the mind and thought to bring together vast complexities 🙏🏻🕊️
May 15th, 2025 06:12
arqios said:
Metaphors allow the mind and thought to bring together vast complexities 🙏🏻🕊️
May 15th, 2025 06:12
Dust of life
Salvia.S said:
Stunning! Your poem weaves together spirituality, nature, and human experience in a captivating way. The imagery is vivid, and the themes are both personal and universally relatable.
Well done!!!!!
May 15th, 2025 04:44
Salvia.S said:
Stunning! Your poem weaves together spirituality, nature, and human experience in a captivating way. The imagery is vivid, and the themes are both personal and universally relatable.
Well done!!!!!
May 15th, 2025 04:44
Dust of life
David Wakeling said:
A great poem about star-gazing and the human condition.Very cleverly constructed as usual.Very powerful mi amigo
May 15th, 2025 04:28
David Wakeling said:
A great poem about star-gazing and the human condition.Very cleverly constructed as usual.Very powerful mi amigo
May 15th, 2025 04:28
Give and take
Caring dove said:
Lovely and interesting writing .. I liked the read ) there’s a softness to the words in this
May 15th, 2025 03:57
Caring dove said:
Lovely and interesting writing .. I liked the read ) there’s a softness to the words in this
May 15th, 2025 03:57
Dust of life
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Profound reflections on life\'s fleeting essence, where dust and divinity intertwine. A poetic dance of nature, myth, and human existence—beautifully haunting.
May 15th, 2025 03:51
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Profound reflections on life\'s fleeting essence, where dust and divinity intertwine. A poetic dance of nature, myth, and human existence—beautifully haunting.
May 15th, 2025 03:51
Dust of life
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderfully enjoyable read, some lovely lines and imagery, nicely done
May 15th, 2025 03:46
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderfully enjoyable read, some lovely lines and imagery, nicely done
May 15th, 2025 03:46
Give and take
Teddy.15 said:
An incredible sense of peace in this beautiful poem your imagery once again is a kudos 🌹
May 15th, 2025 02:56
Teddy.15 said:
An incredible sense of peace in this beautiful poem your imagery once again is a kudos 🌹
May 15th, 2025 02:56
Give and take
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderfully true words soren, new worlds exist from those things that are thrown out.
Andy
May 15th, 2025 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderfully true words soren, new worlds exist from those things that are thrown out.
Andy
May 15th, 2025 01:23
Give and take
Dan Williams said:
\"deep thoughts that are mined\' indeed. That\'s what poetry is all about, eh?
May 15th, 2025 00:48
Dan Williams said:
\"deep thoughts that are mined\' indeed. That\'s what poetry is all about, eh?
May 15th, 2025 00:48
A lot of wind
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice one Soren
Reflective and surreal
Like the light and wind
May 14th, 2025 16:46
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice one Soren
Reflective and surreal
Like the light and wind
May 14th, 2025 16:46
Give and take
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem, everything in life is a give and take. Sometimes there is more take than give, and vice versa. Sometimes there is a balance. Very thought-provoking and powerfully written, my friend. 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 11:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem, everything in life is a give and take. Sometimes there is more take than give, and vice versa. Sometimes there is a balance. Very thought-provoking and powerfully written, my friend. 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 11:19
Give and take
orchidee said:
Good write SB. And yes - KP gives all to me; I take it all from her! heehee.
May 14th, 2025 11:17
orchidee said:
Good write SB. And yes - KP gives all to me; I take it all from her! heehee.
May 14th, 2025 11:17
What
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The darkness shines in this poem my friend. Having slept in the woods many times throughout my life, this one felt home to me. Love it, Soren. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 10:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The darkness shines in this poem my friend. Having slept in the woods many times throughout my life, this one felt home to me. Love it, Soren. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 10:53
Give and take
Salvia.S said:
Your poem is really beautiful! It weaves together nature and creativity in a thoughtful way. Very well written ❤️!
May 14th, 2025 09:24
Salvia.S said:
Your poem is really beautiful! It weaves together nature and creativity in a thoughtful way. Very well written ❤️!
May 14th, 2025 09:24
Give and take
arqios said:
What a beautiful and thought-provoking piece! 🌿 The interplay of nature’s cycle and the creativity of the mind is captured with such elegance here. The metaphor of roots and leaves mirroring how thoughts and ideas grow and evolve is especially striking. I love how it turns discarded elements—whether fallen leaves or \"rejected words\"—into sources of renewal and inspiration. 🙏🏻🕊
May 14th, 2025 05:46
arqios said:
What a beautiful and thought-provoking piece! 🌿 The interplay of nature’s cycle and the creativity of the mind is captured with such elegance here. The metaphor of roots and leaves mirroring how thoughts and ideas grow and evolve is especially striking. I love how it turns discarded elements—whether fallen leaves or \"rejected words\"—into sources of renewal and inspiration. 🙏🏻🕊
May 14th, 2025 05:46
Give and take
David Wakeling said:
I think give and take is a fundamental process in life and nature.Although my X wife only ever took.She never gave much.Just kidding.This is a wonderfully structure piece .Many examples of how there is a balance of give and take in life.Enjoyable read
May 14th, 2025 04:28
David Wakeling said:
I think give and take is a fundamental process in life and nature.Although my X wife only ever took.She never gave much.Just kidding.This is a wonderfully structure piece .Many examples of how there is a balance of give and take in life.Enjoyable read
May 14th, 2025 04:28
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