Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Right to choose
orchidee said:
They are mad to trust that guy with the dodgy barnet (hair-style). Things will be all trumped up!
March 3rd, 2024 03:30
orchidee said:
They are mad to trust that guy with the dodgy barnet (hair-style). Things will be all trumped up!
March 3rd, 2024 03:30
While we had a dream
Cloie said:
The contrast between light and darkness adds depth to the emotional landscape. Well done!
March 2nd, 2024 10:52
Cloie said:
The contrast between light and darkness adds depth to the emotional landscape. Well done!
March 2nd, 2024 10:52
The smell of youth
Goldfinch60 said:
Smell can be the most evocative of our senses and can bring back so many memories soren.
Andy
March 2nd, 2024 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Smell can be the most evocative of our senses and can bring back so many memories soren.
Andy
March 2nd, 2024 02:15
While we had a dream
Teddy.15 said:
Amazing how you can articulate this with such elegant visions of the inevitable. sorrenbarret you brought a tear to my eye, the struggle and challenges and in the end the peace at least knowing pain and suffering is finished. That is my interpretation of this write. 🌹 Kudos in every way.
March 1st, 2024 03:49
Teddy.15 said:
Amazing how you can articulate this with such elegant visions of the inevitable. sorrenbarret you brought a tear to my eye, the struggle and challenges and in the end the peace at least knowing pain and suffering is finished. That is my interpretation of this write. 🌹 Kudos in every way.
March 1st, 2024 03:49
Love has many levels
Teddy.15 said:
a light once kindled, leads from far away
the rope strands frayed, decayed, hope lingers
vomiting emotions of a drowning day
clouds slip through my fingers
An incredible achievement to write about grief with such beauty and dignity, as I read every line it tells me someone is deeply missed. Absolutely beautiful all we can do when grief visits is to embrace it and embrace it you have. A light once lit is indeed always flickering. 🌹
February 29th, 2024 03:53
Teddy.15 said:
a light once kindled, leads from far away
the rope strands frayed, decayed, hope lingers
vomiting emotions of a drowning day
clouds slip through my fingers
An incredible achievement to write about grief with such beauty and dignity, as I read every line it tells me someone is deeply missed. Absolutely beautiful all we can do when grief visits is to embrace it and embrace it you have. A light once lit is indeed always flickering. 🌹
February 29th, 2024 03:53
Love has many levels
orchidee said:
Cooeee Jonah, you escaped yet?! A miracle that he was not digested by the whale/big fish.
February 29th, 2024 03:06
orchidee said:
Cooeee Jonah, you escaped yet?! A miracle that he was not digested by the whale/big fish.
February 29th, 2024 03:06
Love has many levels
Goldfinch60 said:
May that dove bring light and love to all soren.
Andy
February 29th, 2024 02:51
Goldfinch60 said:
May that dove bring light and love to all soren.
Andy
February 29th, 2024 02:51
Love has many levels
2781 said:
Thought provoking, again.
I think of redemption.
February 29th, 2024 02:04
2781 said:
Thought provoking, again.
I think of redemption.
February 29th, 2024 02:04
Past undone
Bella Shepard said:
They say that time can only go forward, we can only change the past in our mind. A chilling write my friend, that speaks to ghosts of the past. The time ticks on and your words capture its indifference. Kudos!!
February 28th, 2024 16:51
Bella Shepard said:
They say that time can only go forward, we can only change the past in our mind. A chilling write my friend, that speaks to ghosts of the past. The time ticks on and your words capture its indifference. Kudos!!
February 28th, 2024 16:51
Past undone
Teddy.15 said:
3 incredibly powerful stanza\'s so much imagery and emotion your last lines gave me goosebumps as the imagery is painful. Superb as ever. 🌹
February 28th, 2024 03:38
Teddy.15 said:
3 incredibly powerful stanza\'s so much imagery and emotion your last lines gave me goosebumps as the imagery is painful. Superb as ever. 🌹
February 28th, 2024 03:38
Past undone
orchidee said:
Doh! They wish all my songs would begin at the end - when I\'m singing \'em, that is! lol.
February 28th, 2024 03:03
orchidee said:
Doh! They wish all my songs would begin at the end - when I\'m singing \'em, that is! lol.
February 28th, 2024 03:03
Majesty
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, I could see the Universe in your words.
Andy
February 28th, 2024 02:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, I could see the Universe in your words.
Andy
February 28th, 2024 02:17
Majesty
Meera Mere said:
\'Night\'s silver crescent smile.\' It painted such a beautiful and serene picture in my mind. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of writing
February 27th, 2024 12:06
Meera Mere said:
\'Night\'s silver crescent smile.\' It painted such a beautiful and serene picture in my mind. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of writing
February 27th, 2024 12:06
Majesty
Cassie58 said:
Three stanzas of penned delight. You never fail to please with the beauty and wisdom in your words. You have gifted your readers with a gem. Have a lovely day.
February 27th, 2024 03:55
Cassie58 said:
Three stanzas of penned delight. You never fail to please with the beauty and wisdom in your words. You have gifted your readers with a gem. Have a lovely day.
February 27th, 2024 03:55
Majesty
Teddy.15 said:
Utterly beautiful I found myself thinking of those already in that distant sky above, I cannot choose a favourite line because as you always do, you create such beauty and make it come alive. So much to enjoy in this dear sorrenbarret, I just love it. 🌹
February 27th, 2024 03:17
Teddy.15 said:
Utterly beautiful I found myself thinking of those already in that distant sky above, I cannot choose a favourite line because as you always do, you create such beauty and make it come alive. So much to enjoy in this dear sorrenbarret, I just love it. 🌹
February 27th, 2024 03:17
The candle
Goldfinch60 said:
No matter how bad things get soren we all rise from the ashes into the light.
Andy
February 27th, 2024 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
No matter how bad things get soren we all rise from the ashes into the light.
Andy
February 27th, 2024 02:23
The candle
Teddy.15 said:
Simply exquisite, with dark there is always hope of light, sometimes the candles go out or just flicker and sometimes they can guide. 🌹
February 26th, 2024 15:15
Teddy.15 said:
Simply exquisite, with dark there is always hope of light, sometimes the candles go out or just flicker and sometimes they can guide. 🌹
February 26th, 2024 15:15
The candle
Accidental Poet said:
Great write soren. Reminds me of \"The Candle of Life\" by Moody Blues. 🎼🎶
February 26th, 2024 09:57
Accidental Poet said:
Great write soren. Reminds me of \"The Candle of Life\" by Moody Blues. 🎼🎶
February 26th, 2024 09:57
The candle
orchidee said:
I said to KP \'You get on my wick (on my nerves)\'. She replied: \'Ya got no wick; ya candle\'s all burnt up!\' lol.
February 26th, 2024 09:10
orchidee said:
I said to KP \'You get on my wick (on my nerves)\'. She replied: \'Ya got no wick; ya candle\'s all burnt up!\' lol.
February 26th, 2024 09:10
Song of a siren
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words of lust and seduction for blood soren.
Andy
February 26th, 2024 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words of lust and seduction for blood soren.
Andy
February 26th, 2024 02:20
Song of a siren
Accidental Poet said:
Man, is it hot in here? Thought I was in a fantasy there for a minute. I\'m surprised Orchi wasn\'t swooning. Very well penned soren. 😊👍
February 25th, 2024 10:31
Accidental Poet said:
Man, is it hot in here? Thought I was in a fantasy there for a minute. I\'m surprised Orchi wasn\'t swooning. Very well penned soren. 😊👍
February 25th, 2024 10:31
Song of a siren
Doggerel Dave said:
Soren, if you keep on like this , I\'m going to have to have my GP re-evaluate my BP medication - in the meantime I\'m going to enjoy it while I can...
A well crafted write.
February 25th, 2024 05:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Soren, if you keep on like this , I\'m going to have to have my GP re-evaluate my BP medication - in the meantime I\'m going to enjoy it while I can...
A well crafted write.
February 25th, 2024 05:24
Song of a siren
Cloie said:
Your poem dives deep into the tangled web of desire with such vivid imagery! It\'s like a rollercoaster of emotions and sensations. Keep weaving those words!
February 25th, 2024 05:13
Cloie said:
Your poem dives deep into the tangled web of desire with such vivid imagery! It\'s like a rollercoaster of emotions and sensations. Keep weaving those words!
February 25th, 2024 05:13
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