Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Leaves
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing .. sometimes we feel so close to someone or someone can feel a part of us ..
I like how you wrote this
March 15th, 2025 15:50
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing .. sometimes we feel so close to someone or someone can feel a part of us ..
I like how you wrote this
March 15th, 2025 15:50
Leaves
David Wakeling said:
This is so poetic.I like the metaphor of leaves.There is a sadness here but hey thats life.
March 15th, 2025 15:23
David Wakeling said:
This is so poetic.I like the metaphor of leaves.There is a sadness here but hey thats life.
March 15th, 2025 15:23
Leaves
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great job, Soren. This rings so nicely and the poem is beautiful, using nature to symbolize any number of things from loving relationships to our hopes and aspirations. Wonderful job, my friend! 🌹👏
March 15th, 2025 14:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great job, Soren. This rings so nicely and the poem is beautiful, using nature to symbolize any number of things from loving relationships to our hopes and aspirations. Wonderful job, my friend! 🌹👏
March 15th, 2025 14:31
Leaves
Ellen Marsell said:
Through the metaphor of a tree and its leaves, you delicately expressed the evolution of human relationships, marked by growth, separation, and ultimately, the acceptance of fate that leads each to different horizons. Beautiful poem!
March 15th, 2025 14:30
Ellen Marsell said:
Through the metaphor of a tree and its leaves, you delicately expressed the evolution of human relationships, marked by growth, separation, and ultimately, the acceptance of fate that leads each to different horizons. Beautiful poem!
March 15th, 2025 14:30
Leaves
Salvia.S said:
Beautifully written! Your poem captures the bittersweet pain of growing apart and the memories that remain, with words that dance like leaves in the wind....
March 15th, 2025 10:56
Salvia.S said:
Beautifully written! Your poem captures the bittersweet pain of growing apart and the memories that remain, with words that dance like leaves in the wind....
March 15th, 2025 10:56
Leaves
Friendship said:
Well written, Your poem is a poignant reflection on the bond between siblings, employing the metaphor of two leaves on a tree to illustrate a close relationship that evolves over time, leading to both distance and acceptance. You explore the transition from youthful intimacy to the inevitable divergence that comes with personal growth and change. Ultimately, it reflects on the memories of a past connection while acknowledging the separate paths individuals take in life. Your poem delves into the complexities of relationships, emphasizing the inevitability of growth and change while cherishing memories of intimacy. It seeks to resonate with anyone who has experienced the bittersweet nature of moving on from a close bond.
March 15th, 2025 08:34
Friendship said:
Well written, Your poem is a poignant reflection on the bond between siblings, employing the metaphor of two leaves on a tree to illustrate a close relationship that evolves over time, leading to both distance and acceptance. You explore the transition from youthful intimacy to the inevitable divergence that comes with personal growth and change. Ultimately, it reflects on the memories of a past connection while acknowledging the separate paths individuals take in life. Your poem delves into the complexities of relationships, emphasizing the inevitability of growth and change while cherishing memories of intimacy. It seeks to resonate with anyone who has experienced the bittersweet nature of moving on from a close bond.
March 15th, 2025 08:34
Leaves
Teddy.15 said:
How truly beautiful, a child\'s friendship with a tree, how it\'s so different yet very similar in so many ways. Such imagery has given me a glimpse of a young boy and his huge appreciation of life. 🌹
March 15th, 2025 07:13
Teddy.15 said:
How truly beautiful, a child\'s friendship with a tree, how it\'s so different yet very similar in so many ways. Such imagery has given me a glimpse of a young boy and his huge appreciation of life. 🌹
March 15th, 2025 07:13
Verses of dust
rebellion_in_sanity said:
So nice! Felt like personification of the poems and telling each has its own life.
March 15th, 2025 06:13
rebellion_in_sanity said:
So nice! Felt like personification of the poems and telling each has its own life.
March 15th, 2025 06:13
Leaves
arqios said:
Sometimes I feel that one or both of us was grafted and replanted elsewhere and our common roots and main trunk no longer shared. Speaks the state of several of my bygone younger relationships. 🙏🏻🕊
March 15th, 2025 05:51
arqios said:
Sometimes I feel that one or both of us was grafted and replanted elsewhere and our common roots and main trunk no longer shared. Speaks the state of several of my bygone younger relationships. 🙏🏻🕊
March 15th, 2025 05:51
Leaves
Poetic Licence said:
I get the sense of siblings growing up together but gradually drifting apart, then the loss of one while the other remembers fondly of their youth, enjoyed the read
March 15th, 2025 05:47
Poetic Licence said:
I get the sense of siblings growing up together but gradually drifting apart, then the loss of one while the other remembers fondly of their youth, enjoyed the read
March 15th, 2025 05:47
Verses of dust
Goldfinch60 said:
We all write poems and hope others read them as I do yours soren.
Andy
March 15th, 2025 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
We all write poems and hope others read them as I do yours soren.
Andy
March 15th, 2025 02:10
Verses of dust
Ellen Marsell said:
Not everything created will endure; some will crumble, but the process of creation remains meaningful.
March 14th, 2025 14:05
Ellen Marsell said:
Not everything created will endure; some will crumble, but the process of creation remains meaningful.
March 14th, 2025 14:05
Verses of dust
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, the poet\'s craft. Not every piece will be of the same quality, but they will be crafted all the same. Wonderful poem, my friend. 🌹👏
March 14th, 2025 09:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, the poet\'s craft. Not every piece will be of the same quality, but they will be crafted all the same. Wonderful poem, my friend. 🌹👏
March 14th, 2025 09:58
Verses of dust
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting and enjoyable read, I have had many days like that with my poetry and emotions, the complexity is sometimes to daunting,
March 14th, 2025 09:22
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting and enjoyable read, I have had many days like that with my poetry and emotions, the complexity is sometimes to daunting,
March 14th, 2025 09:22
Verses of dust
Teddy.15 said:
And that is everything that makes you into a great poet. 🌹 Love this. 🌹
March 14th, 2025 08:55
Teddy.15 said:
And that is everything that makes you into a great poet. 🌹 Love this. 🌹
March 14th, 2025 08:55
Verses of dust
Friendship said:
You use clay as a metaphor for experiences and emotions. The act of molding clay parallels the way we shape our thoughts and feelings into art. Your poem seeks to express the complexities of creation, acknowledging both the ephemeral and lasting aspects of artistic endeavors and inviting readers to consider their own creative journeys.
March 14th, 2025 05:49
Friendship said:
You use clay as a metaphor for experiences and emotions. The act of molding clay parallels the way we shape our thoughts and feelings into art. Your poem seeks to express the complexities of creation, acknowledging both the ephemeral and lasting aspects of artistic endeavors and inviting readers to consider their own creative journeys.
March 14th, 2025 05:49
Verses of dust
arqios said:
Amazing 🤩 a vivid portrayal that I’ve myself experienced 🙏🏻🕊Liked and Faved
March 14th, 2025 05:35
arqios said:
Amazing 🤩 a vivid portrayal that I’ve myself experienced 🙏🏻🕊Liked and Faved
March 14th, 2025 05:35
Verses of dust
Salvia.S said:
Your words are like clay, molded into a beautiful, poignant reflection on the human experience. Every line is a testament to the fragile, yet resilient nature of life.
March 14th, 2025 05:25
Salvia.S said:
Your words are like clay, molded into a beautiful, poignant reflection on the human experience. Every line is a testament to the fragile, yet resilient nature of life.
March 14th, 2025 05:25
Verses of dust
David Wakeling said:
I know the feeling.Some of mine are like arrows that hit the target others miss by a mile.A very thought provoking piece
March 14th, 2025 05:00
David Wakeling said:
I know the feeling.Some of mine are like arrows that hit the target others miss by a mile.A very thought provoking piece
March 14th, 2025 05:00
Thanatos night visitor
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, SB. Death is uninvited even though we know it will come to the party.
March 13th, 2025 14:21
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, SB. Death is uninvited even though we know it will come to the party.
March 13th, 2025 14:21
Thanatos night visitor
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Felt this one deeply. Very powerful
March 13th, 2025 13:13
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Felt this one deeply. Very powerful
March 13th, 2025 13:13
Thanatos night visitor
orchidee said:
A daft comment - I wanted the No.11 bus to Torremolinos but caught the No.7 bus to Thanatos by mistake. Doh! lol.
March 13th, 2025 12:10
orchidee said:
A daft comment - I wanted the No.11 bus to Torremolinos but caught the No.7 bus to Thanatos by mistake. Doh! lol.
March 13th, 2025 12:10
Thanatos night visitor
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. Powerful and poignant.
March 13th, 2025 09:41
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. Powerful and poignant.
March 13th, 2025 09:41
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