Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Mr. Cotter
Salvia.S said:

This is truly amazing! Well written!!!

June 1st, 2025 04:39

Mr. Cotter
arqios said:

And now Mr. Cotter is immortalised in verse, thanks to you, Soren. ๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

June 1st, 2025 04:32

Mr. Cotter
David Wakeling said:

What a wonderful piece of personal history put to verse.Well done.

June 1st, 2025 04:12

Recognition
Teddy.15 said:

I love your opening lines

I walked so far but there is so little I know

just not enough time in one\'s lifetime. ๐ŸŒน Wonderful poetry.


June 1st, 2025 02:47

Recognition
arqios said:

Our pace is steady as is our hand, and poetry shall blanket all the land.๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

June 1st, 2025 01:44

Recognition
Goldfinch60 said:

Super words soren, life brings such wonderful unexpected gifts to us.

Andy

June 1st, 2025 01:40

The forge
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Nice Soren. I would change \'extacy\' to ecstasy.\'

May 31st, 2025 11:20

Recognition
GenXer Shamrocker โ˜˜๏ธ said:

Beautiful ๐Ÿคฉ

May 31st, 2025 09:06

Recognition
Tristan Robert Lange said:

I cannot imagine any poet not getting this. This is a wonderful write, one of which I definitely relate to. Observers, aren\'t we all? ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

May 31st, 2025 07:29

Recognition
Doggerel Dave said:

\"I walked so far but there is so little I know\" - Good of you to give us the rest, Soren.... thoroughly appreciated.

May 31st, 2025 07:25

Recognition
Salvia.S said:

This is a very beautiful piece of writing with vivid & evocative imagery, capturing the essence of - seasonal transitions, nature\'s beauty, life cycles & ephemeral joy. Very well written ๐ŸŒน

May 31st, 2025 05:52

Recognition
Poetic Licence said:

I am always staggered by how little I actually know in relation to others, but one thing I do know is arrogance is not a nice quality, enjoyed the read

May 31st, 2025 05:45

Recognition
Soman Ragavan said:

\"there is so little I know...\" We think we have seen a lot, we have gone through a lot. Still, life surprises us everyday. We get surprises even at home, even from people we have known for years... Life is full of surprises. In fact, the signs were always there, it is just that we did not notice, we did not know where to look.

May 31st, 2025 04:19

Recognition
David Wakeling said:

This is quite beautiful.Packed with powerful imagery. Mingling each moment to get a poem written and a Life lived. An enjoyable read

May 31st, 2025 04:01

The forge
Goldfinch60 said:

Passion is the heating of our world soren.

Andy

May 31st, 2025 01:17

The forge
Dan Williams said:

Sometimes have to destroy something to save it, eh?

May 31st, 2025 01:06

Good taste
spilleronsheet said:

Dark humour I must sayโ€ฆbut I ended up enjoying especially the last line, the dental floss๐Ÿ˜‚

May 31st, 2025 00:20

Dance with the wind
rrodriguez said:

This is so alive, so rhythmic! So full of energy. It paints wind as a force of motion and freedom. I love to feel the wind. I live next to the mountains, and the wind is so wonderful. This is excellent! I enjoy reading about the wind.

May 30th, 2025 20:08

Just old
Keeter C said:

My best friend is of an age I will never get.
Birthed she did but did she ever regret?
In old age I try to make amends as much as I am able.

May 30th, 2025 17:22

The forge
Tristan Robert Lange said:

I so get this. A Shamanic rite, passage through fire ๐Ÿ”ฅ Purged. Purified. Transformed. Brilliant poem that can be taken many different ways. Still, its magic is potent! Well done, my friend! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

May 30th, 2025 16:21

The forge
Tony36 said:

Awesome

May 30th, 2025 10:44

The forge
Salvia.S said:

This is intense and beautifully raw. It captures the pain and power of transformation with striking imagery and emotion. A fave ๐ŸŒน

May 30th, 2025 09:57

Sleep on
Reynaldo Casison said:

Nice one soren

Nice paradox and rhythms

May 30th, 2025 07:42

The forge
Poetic Licence said:

My sense is being consumed by passion thinking it is love and it\'s not, leaving you badly burned and scared, I can see there are possibles, very enjoyed the read

May 30th, 2025 06:27

Pebbles
Soman Ragavan said:

We will notice the fleetingness of the following :
--melting snowman
--burning log
--eaten meal
--sand castle washed away
--ice sculpture melted
-- a song sung, with the echoes lost
The metaphor of the pebble skipping on water is an intriguing one. You drop the pebble vertically and it sinks. You flip it horizontally and it skips over the water for some time, bounding over, but it will finally sink. The ripples that arise will disappear.
Many scenes of fleetingness.
Poets seek immortality through their works.
โ€œ(On GAUTHIER). In a world in which everything is impermanent, the poet, by rearranging reality into art, can create something that will have more permanent value. ...... Art can thus provide the poet with a solace for his mortality while he is alive and the hope of immortality in deathโ€ฆ.โ€ \"TWELVE FRENCH POETS. 1820-1900. AN ANTHOLOGY OF 19TH CENTURY FRENCH POETRY.\" London : Longmans, Green and Co., 1957. (Third impression, 1959). (With an Introduction and Notes by Douglas Parmรฉe). Full acknowledgements are made to the authors, publishers and rights-holders.
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May 30th, 2025 05:48

The forge
David Wakeling said:

This is a fascinating piece. It can be taken in many different ways. For me its about Passion and the effect on the human condition. Made me think. Well done compadre

May 30th, 2025 04:02

Dance with the wind
Goldfinch60 said:

Keep on dancing soren, life is full of music to dance to.

Andy

May 30th, 2025 01:21

Dance with the wind
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Love the wind and love to dance. Love this metaphor even more...though this could just be taken literally too. I\'ve witnessed such days around a clothes line. And guess whose childhood butt had to go pick the pins up? ๐Ÿคฃ Excellent job, Soren! ๐Ÿ‘๐ŸŒน

May 29th, 2025 20:37

Redemption in deception
Kevin Hulme said:

Nothing wrong in bending the Truth to protect feelings. Well Said.

May 29th, 2025 18:58

Damnatio memoriae read or we die
sunshine777 said:

Absolutely ๐Ÿ’ฏ real truth

May 29th, 2025 18:05



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