Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
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Tony Grannell said:
Yes, much shorter than, Nashe\'s, Adam/Had\'em. You could actually title this poem: On Maleviche\'s \'Black Square\'. Both pieces have a zillion interpretations and are very alike. When I beheld the, \'.\' the word, \'now\' came to mind. A perfect poem, to baffle any critic. Very well done.
All the best,
Tony.
April 27th, 2025 11:01
Tony Grannell said:
Yes, much shorter than, Nashe\'s, Adam/Had\'em. You could actually title this poem: On Maleviche\'s \'Black Square\'. Both pieces have a zillion interpretations and are very alike. When I beheld the, \'.\' the word, \'now\' came to mind. A perfect poem, to baffle any critic. Very well done.
All the best,
Tony.
April 27th, 2025 11:01
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, if the note doesn\'t count (and it doesn\'t in my book), this IS the shortest poem ever written without a doubt. And yet in the space around the period, so much is said. Brilliantly expressed, my friend. This is far more brilliant than a damn banana duct taped to a wall, that is for sure! And, at least you don\'t have to keep replacing it. 🤣 All jokes aside, the period alone can mean so much...let alone the white space around it. Again. blown away. 🌹👏
April 27th, 2025 07:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, if the note doesn\'t count (and it doesn\'t in my book), this IS the shortest poem ever written without a doubt. And yet in the space around the period, so much is said. Brilliantly expressed, my friend. This is far more brilliant than a damn banana duct taped to a wall, that is for sure! And, at least you don\'t have to keep replacing it. 🤣 All jokes aside, the period alone can mean so much...let alone the white space around it. Again. blown away. 🌹👏
April 27th, 2025 07:48
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Salvia.S 🌹 said:
Your poem is profound in its simplicity. The dot (.) symbolizes completion, yet also emptiness, sparking thought on existence and meaning. Beautiful!! Loved it!!
April 27th, 2025 07:03
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
Your poem is profound in its simplicity. The dot (.) symbolizes completion, yet also emptiness, sparking thought on existence and meaning. Beautiful!! Loved it!!
April 27th, 2025 07:03
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Doggerel Dave said:
Wot can one do with that? Only response is to endeavour to be as short as the poem... Or as that well known small furry animal poeticus orchidus might have ...and so on....
April 27th, 2025 06:21
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot can one do with that? Only response is to endeavour to be as short as the poem... Or as that well known small furry animal poeticus orchidus might have ...and so on....
April 27th, 2025 06:21
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Jerry Reynolds said:
Stunning, SB. You could end it at this point. But I hope you won\'t.
April 27th, 2025 06:20
Jerry Reynolds said:
Stunning, SB. You could end it at this point. But I hope you won\'t.
April 27th, 2025 06:20
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Teddy.15 said:
Most profound dear sorrenbarret as always you are incredibly inspiring. A true earth poet. 🌹
April 27th, 2025 03:51
Teddy.15 said:
Most profound dear sorrenbarret as always you are incredibly inspiring. A true earth poet. 🌹
April 27th, 2025 03:51
Within a hair
sunshine777 said:
The hair is dead yet it grows. Life must go on. Great write!!
April 26th, 2025 17:16
sunshine777 said:
The hair is dead yet it grows. Life must go on. Great write!!
April 26th, 2025 17:16
Good taste
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem. Loved the humor in it. The shark gets a meal and a floss. 🤣 It flowed very nicely when read aloud, my friend. 🌹👏
April 26th, 2025 12:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem. Loved the humor in it. The shark gets a meal and a floss. 🤣 It flowed very nicely when read aloud, my friend. 🌹👏
April 26th, 2025 12:37
Good taste
Jerry Reynolds said:
That is so good, SB. I am still laughing from the first 19 words to now. I almost spilled my coffee.
April 26th, 2025 07:55
Jerry Reynolds said:
That is so good, SB. I am still laughing from the first 19 words to now. I almost spilled my coffee.
April 26th, 2025 07:55
Good taste
isa kemmy said:
I like ur neighbours ignorance,sometimes u know facts in life still u lie to urself to console the mind ,the shark did get him,
April 26th, 2025 07:26
isa kemmy said:
I like ur neighbours ignorance,sometimes u know facts in life still u lie to urself to console the mind ,the shark did get him,
April 26th, 2025 07:26
Good taste
arqios said:
Kinda like loan sharks cocktail with keeping up with the Joneses! Personal and credit card debts, gambling and 1900 calls are all killers. 🕊🙏🏻
April 26th, 2025 05:33
arqios said:
Kinda like loan sharks cocktail with keeping up with the Joneses! Personal and credit card debts, gambling and 1900 calls are all killers. 🕊🙏🏻
April 26th, 2025 05:33
Good taste
David Wakeling said:
This certainly is clever.A touch of Sardonic humour here.Made me laugh. Well done
April 26th, 2025 05:13
David Wakeling said:
This certainly is clever.A touch of Sardonic humour here.Made me laugh. Well done
April 26th, 2025 05:13
Good taste
Teddy.15 said:
LoL how very clever of that Shark, I do believe they are truly intelligent and sparky like that. Kudos. 🌹 🦈
April 26th, 2025 05:08
Teddy.15 said:
LoL how very clever of that Shark, I do believe they are truly intelligent and sparky like that. Kudos. 🌹 🦈
April 26th, 2025 05:08
Within a hair
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have our ways in life soren and grow into the unique person we each are.
Andy
April 26th, 2025 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have our ways in life soren and grow into the unique person we each are.
Andy
April 26th, 2025 01:13
Within a hair
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write SB. I tried the Jesus reference on Linda once. Didn\'t work. She said when you can walk on water you can have a beard.
April 25th, 2025 08:20
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write SB. I tried the Jesus reference on Linda once. Didn\'t work. She said when you can walk on water you can have a beard.
April 25th, 2025 08:20
Blinded by the light
Akshadha_Joshi1310 said:
This is one of the most powerful poems I\'ve ever read. You have a real talent of capturing emotions in your writing 💖
April 25th, 2025 08:13
Akshadha_Joshi1310 said:
This is one of the most powerful poems I\'ve ever read. You have a real talent of capturing emotions in your writing 💖
April 25th, 2025 08:13
Within a hair
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful poem that, as I read it, is sending the message that each of us are unique...and should be comfortable in our own \"beards\" so-to-speak. Really enjoyed. A fave from me. 🧔♂️ 🌹👏
April 25th, 2025 08:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful poem that, as I read it, is sending the message that each of us are unique...and should be comfortable in our own \"beards\" so-to-speak. Really enjoyed. A fave from me. 🧔♂️ 🌹👏
April 25th, 2025 08:12
Child innocence
Thoughtless said:
A complaint about every new technology. However, social media may be a successful villain.
April 25th, 2025 07:43
Thoughtless said:
A complaint about every new technology. However, social media may be a successful villain.
April 25th, 2025 07:43
Within a hair
Tony Grannell said:
Bearded and moustachioed myself, I have no choice but to agree wholeheartedly with your poem - haha! A well groomed passage of poetry with a gem of an ending.
All the best,
Tony.
April 25th, 2025 07:40
Tony Grannell said:
Bearded and moustachioed myself, I have no choice but to agree wholeheartedly with your poem - haha! A well groomed passage of poetry with a gem of an ending.
All the best,
Tony.
April 25th, 2025 07:40
Within a hair
orchidee said:
The 3 little pigs story - the hair of my chinny chin chin! lol.
April 25th, 2025 07:22
orchidee said:
The 3 little pigs story - the hair of my chinny chin chin! lol.
April 25th, 2025 07:22
Within a hair
David Wakeling said:
Nothing wrong with a beard. Keeps you warm in winter. Interesting poem
April 25th, 2025 05:19
David Wakeling said:
Nothing wrong with a beard. Keeps you warm in winter. Interesting poem
April 25th, 2025 05:19
Within a hair
arqios said:
My reading of this today takes me to the thought of conscientious living through decades being true to self as hair takes time to grow and requires maintenance to keep it durable for years and may even crown our appearance 🙏🏻🕊️
April 25th, 2025 03:16
arqios said:
My reading of this today takes me to the thought of conscientious living through decades being true to self as hair takes time to grow and requires maintenance to keep it durable for years and may even crown our appearance 🙏🏻🕊️
April 25th, 2025 03:16
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