Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Sirens
gray0328 said:
The rhythm and flow of this poem is something I aspire to gain. Great Job
August 3rd, 2024 10:55
gray0328 said:
The rhythm and flow of this poem is something I aspire to gain. Great Job
August 3rd, 2024 10:55
Don\'t be afraid
gray0328 said:
The peace in the darkness brings contentment. Well Done Soren, I enjoyed it.
August 3rd, 2024 10:49
gray0328 said:
The peace in the darkness brings contentment. Well Done Soren, I enjoyed it.
August 3rd, 2024 10:49
Sannyasi to love
Alan R said:
That last stanza….should be sung out loud!! Brilliant
August 3rd, 2024 10:11
Alan R said:
That last stanza….should be sung out loud!! Brilliant
August 3rd, 2024 10:11
Where zero meets infinity
MendedFences27 said:
Your line, \"death becomes life in the vastness of eternity\" caused me to think. Negative Matter and Negative Energy, which they say must exist or the Universe collapses, may be the souls of the expired. Perhaps, the negative energy and matter occupy space everywhere, undetectable, and attach to new life . This cycle could continue through infinity. Well needless to say I admired your poem. - Phil A,
August 3rd, 2024 09:17
MendedFences27 said:
Your line, \"death becomes life in the vastness of eternity\" caused me to think. Negative Matter and Negative Energy, which they say must exist or the Universe collapses, may be the souls of the expired. Perhaps, the negative energy and matter occupy space everywhere, undetectable, and attach to new life . This cycle could continue through infinity. Well needless to say I admired your poem. - Phil A,
August 3rd, 2024 09:17
Sannyasi to love
Teddy.15 said:
For me this reads, take your chance on love instead of hiding behind your own soul. I love your title and had to translate it.🌹
August 3rd, 2024 07:16
Teddy.15 said:
For me this reads, take your chance on love instead of hiding behind your own soul. I love your title and had to translate it.🌹
August 3rd, 2024 07:16
Sannyasi to love
2781 said:
Reminds me of the parable of the tares, where the good stuff grows amongst the weeds...
August 3rd, 2024 06:54
2781 said:
Reminds me of the parable of the tares, where the good stuff grows amongst the weeds...
August 3rd, 2024 06:54
Where zero meets infinity
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren and so very true.
Andy
August 3rd, 2024 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren and so very true.
Andy
August 3rd, 2024 01:23
Where zero meets infinity
Thad Wilk said:
A terrific write,
very creative and
thought provoking! 🤔
Thanks for sharing
much enjoyed my friend,!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 2nd, 2024 22:35
Thad Wilk said:
A terrific write,
very creative and
thought provoking! 🤔
Thanks for sharing
much enjoyed my friend,!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 2nd, 2024 22:35
Where zero meets infinity
hzugman said:
Finally I can divide zero by zero. Thanx, Soren
August 2nd, 2024 19:31
hzugman said:
Finally I can divide zero by zero. Thanx, Soren
August 2nd, 2024 19:31
Where zero meets infinity
Neville said:
I\'ll take two tabs of what you just took .. amazing mate, absolutely 10/10 +
August 2nd, 2024 12:39
Neville said:
I\'ll take two tabs of what you just took .. amazing mate, absolutely 10/10 +
August 2nd, 2024 12:39
Where zero meets infinity
Bella Shepard said:
Eight beautifully succinct lines that put into perspective the incomprehensible nature of life in the universe, which the vast majority of us never really understand. Thank God for those who do. Exquisite write my friend, loved it!
August 2nd, 2024 08:10
Bella Shepard said:
Eight beautifully succinct lines that put into perspective the incomprehensible nature of life in the universe, which the vast majority of us never really understand. Thank God for those who do. Exquisite write my friend, loved it!
August 2nd, 2024 08:10
Where zero meets infinity
Bobby O said:
In the vastness of eternity
The hourglass of eternity
I really like this piece
August 2nd, 2024 06:57
Bobby O said:
In the vastness of eternity
The hourglass of eternity
I really like this piece
August 2nd, 2024 06:57
Where zero meets infinity
Teddy.15 said:
My husband is a physicist, I absolutely love this, all I can see is reincarnation and I think its brilliant, how you tease the mind dearest sorrenbarret. This is a Masterpiece 🌹
August 2nd, 2024 06:45
Teddy.15 said:
My husband is a physicist, I absolutely love this, all I can see is reincarnation and I think its brilliant, how you tease the mind dearest sorrenbarret. This is a Masterpiece 🌹
August 2nd, 2024 06:45
Honey on toast
Dan Williams said:
\"Passion walks into love on a broken crutch\" = killer line. Whole thing shines. nice work. I\'ve come to expect it from you, sorenbarrett.
August 2nd, 2024 00:12
Dan Williams said:
\"Passion walks into love on a broken crutch\" = killer line. Whole thing shines. nice work. I\'ve come to expect it from you, sorenbarrett.
August 2nd, 2024 00:12
Perfect
rrodriguez said:
Indeed! Perfect! I enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you for sharing.
August 1st, 2024 19:20
rrodriguez said:
Indeed! Perfect! I enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you for sharing.
August 1st, 2024 19:20
Vampire of blame
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful poem and
terrific use of metaphor indeed! 😳
Quite the bite, 🦇 🦇
a real pleasure to read!!
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 1st, 2024 13:03
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful poem and
terrific use of metaphor indeed! 😳
Quite the bite, 🦇 🦇
a real pleasure to read!!
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 1st, 2024 13:03
Vampire of blame
Teddy.15 said:
So very true dear sorrenbarret. Blinded by the very need to believe it is never our fault, our world is in grave and deep denial. Beautifully done as your poems always are. 🌹 Powerful and deeply appreciated 🌹
August 1st, 2024 10:10
Teddy.15 said:
So very true dear sorrenbarret. Blinded by the very need to believe it is never our fault, our world is in grave and deep denial. Beautifully done as your poems always are. 🌹 Powerful and deeply appreciated 🌹
August 1st, 2024 10:10
Vampire of blame
John Prophet said:
Humanity, so far from enlightenment.
Well put!
August 1st, 2024 07:57
John Prophet said:
Humanity, so far from enlightenment.
Well put!
August 1st, 2024 07:57
Vampire of blame
Neville said:
I know for sure we are experiencing an increased & unprecedented escalation of what seems to be a generalised culture of blame where the pointy finger points blindly in order to place an often unwarranted claim .. but that\'s not why I wear a dab of garlic behind each of my lobes and carry a silver bullet .. I would stake my life you will get a whole raft of reviews in the wake I have left for others to now find .. Neville 👍
August 1st, 2024 07:05
Neville said:
I know for sure we are experiencing an increased & unprecedented escalation of what seems to be a generalised culture of blame where the pointy finger points blindly in order to place an often unwarranted claim .. but that\'s not why I wear a dab of garlic behind each of my lobes and carry a silver bullet .. I would stake my life you will get a whole raft of reviews in the wake I have left for others to now find .. Neville 👍
August 1st, 2024 07:05
Vampire of blame
2781 said:
For what the law could not do, in that it was weak through the flesh, God sending his own Son in the likeness of sinful flesh, and for sin, condemned sin in the flesh.
August 1st, 2024 06:16
2781 said:
For what the law could not do, in that it was weak through the flesh, God sending his own Son in the likeness of sinful flesh, and for sin, condemned sin in the flesh.
August 1st, 2024 06:16
Nature god
Dan Williams said:
I sure wish I had some of your optimism. Todays world has me leaning more towards almost despair. Rats.
August 1st, 2024 00:07
Dan Williams said:
I sure wish I had some of your optimism. Todays world has me leaning more towards almost despair. Rats.
August 1st, 2024 00:07
Honey on toast
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. Great imagery and use of the senses.
July 31st, 2024 21:31
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. Great imagery and use of the senses.
July 31st, 2024 21:31
Honey on toast
Thad Wilk said:
A splendid poem of
love a second time around!
Ones last love, unlike first, is
made of stronger stuff! YES! 👍
My pleasure to read indeed!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
July 31st, 2024 20:52
Thad Wilk said:
A splendid poem of
love a second time around!
Ones last love, unlike first, is
made of stronger stuff! YES! 👍
My pleasure to read indeed!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
July 31st, 2024 20:52
Rock, clay, mud and sand
rew4er2nail said:
grandeur summoned forth within my mind after perusing the contents of the poem titled Rock, clay, mud and sand - quite a profound metrical and magical evocation of (my interpretation) the corporeal connection of man (singular or plural) part and parcel of Gaia, that living and breathing oblate spheroid lodged within the infinite abyss of space.
July 31st, 2024 17:40
rew4er2nail said:
grandeur summoned forth within my mind after perusing the contents of the poem titled Rock, clay, mud and sand - quite a profound metrical and magical evocation of (my interpretation) the corporeal connection of man (singular or plural) part and parcel of Gaia, that living and breathing oblate spheroid lodged within the infinite abyss of space.
July 31st, 2024 17:40
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