Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
A one way street
Goldfinch60 said:
When that one you love is found and you ae loved back as I am life is wonderful.
Andy
April 3rd, 2024 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
When that one you love is found and you ae loved back as I am life is wonderful.
Andy
April 3rd, 2024 01:13
A one way street
Doggerel Dave said:
\"To give more than all that you find\" Is, I feel a good starting point for a perhaps partial answer to a definition of \'love\' as a concept, Soren. Far too many of the poems I found here (or this was so until I gave up) seemed to be seeking to be loved....on what grounds?
Your piece is full of good questions.
April 2nd, 2024 18:33
Doggerel Dave said:
\"To give more than all that you find\" Is, I feel a good starting point for a perhaps partial answer to a definition of \'love\' as a concept, Soren. Far too many of the poems I found here (or this was so until I gave up) seemed to be seeking to be loved....on what grounds?
Your piece is full of good questions.
April 2nd, 2024 18:33
Visions of not
Bobby O said:
A bent line is shortest and a funnel is wherever we dance. I love this. I don’t yet no why but maybe that’s the special element , I keep going back
March 21st, 2024 07:09
Bobby O said:
A bent line is shortest and a funnel is wherever we dance. I love this. I don’t yet no why but maybe that’s the special element , I keep going back
March 21st, 2024 07:09
Up mine
Teddy.15 said:
Up yours? LoL this is fabulous I feel like this most days. This is so wonderful , hey I\'m one of those who see the funny side of everything, Italians don\'t really get it though. 🌹 Fabulous one of my new favourite faves of yours lol 😆
March 20th, 2024 07:20
Teddy.15 said:
Up yours? LoL this is fabulous I feel like this most days. This is so wonderful , hey I\'m one of those who see the funny side of everything, Italians don\'t really get it though. 🌹 Fabulous one of my new favourite faves of yours lol 😆
March 20th, 2024 07:20
Up mine
Bragee said:
Nobody can successfully ridicule one laughs at himself first
March 19th, 2024 23:30
Bragee said:
Nobody can successfully ridicule one laughs at himself first
March 19th, 2024 23:30
Visions of not
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
We are never doing nothing, in one sense. We are at least breathing, if doing nothing else.
Well, I was breathing the last time I checked. How about you?! lol.
March 19th, 2024 02:57
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
We are never doing nothing, in one sense. We are at least breathing, if doing nothing else.
Well, I was breathing the last time I checked. How about you?! lol.
March 19th, 2024 02:57
Visions of not
Teddy.15 said:
Nothing is what we see
A mirror of nonexistence
We live in painted clouds of illusion
A bent line is the shortest distance
My dear sorrenbarret kudos. Such poetic power throughout. 🌹
March 19th, 2024 02:05
Teddy.15 said:
Nothing is what we see
A mirror of nonexistence
We live in painted clouds of illusion
A bent line is the shortest distance
My dear sorrenbarret kudos. Such poetic power throughout. 🌹
March 19th, 2024 02:05
Visions of not
Doggerel Dave said:
You are making it all up, Soren....😊
With my inability to fully appreciate metaphor - I can still agree/endorse your first three lines. You cracked it then, as far as I\'m concerned.
March 18th, 2024 16:20
Doggerel Dave said:
You are making it all up, Soren....😊
With my inability to fully appreciate metaphor - I can still agree/endorse your first three lines. You cracked it then, as far as I\'m concerned.
March 18th, 2024 16:20
Yellow
orchidee said:
I don\'t like yellow (I do like it really). I looked for yellow things but tripped on a banana skin! lol (Did I?).
March 18th, 2024 03:27
orchidee said:
I don\'t like yellow (I do like it really). I looked for yellow things but tripped on a banana skin! lol (Did I?).
March 18th, 2024 03:27
Yellow
Teddy.15 said:
My dear sorrenbarret, the colour yellow, supposed to bring happiness and sunshine, yet for me, my most unfavourable colour. Your poem is beautiful and truly appreciate that deep yellow 💛
March 18th, 2024 03:11
Teddy.15 said:
My dear sorrenbarret, the colour yellow, supposed to bring happiness and sunshine, yet for me, my most unfavourable colour. Your poem is beautiful and truly appreciate that deep yellow 💛
March 18th, 2024 03:11
Time squozen
Teddy.15 said:
A dark reality beautiful and you too have invented a new word? squozen
wonderful Dear sorrenbarret 🌹
March 15th, 2024 01:47
Teddy.15 said:
A dark reality beautiful and you too have invented a new word? squozen
wonderful Dear sorrenbarret 🌹
March 15th, 2024 01:47
Greed\'s contentment
Teddy.15 said:
So very powerful dear sorrenbarret we are living in times which have never been seen, computers will eventually be the only thing living. So terrifying 🤗
March 14th, 2024 15:20
Teddy.15 said:
So very powerful dear sorrenbarret we are living in times which have never been seen, computers will eventually be the only thing living. So terrifying 🤗
March 14th, 2024 15:20
Time squozen
orchidee said:
It\'s like those Dali melting clocks picture.
Or that girl \'I\'ll scweam and scweam until I\'m sick\'
Or - it\'s cold today; my hands are scouqzen!\' lol
March 14th, 2024 11:22
orchidee said:
It\'s like those Dali melting clocks picture.
Or that girl \'I\'ll scweam and scweam until I\'m sick\'
Or - it\'s cold today; my hands are scouqzen!\' lol
March 14th, 2024 11:22
Greed\'s contentment
Goldfinch60 said:
We seem to be getting so much lazier with modern technology in our hands soren.
Andy
March 14th, 2024 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
We seem to be getting so much lazier with modern technology in our hands soren.
Andy
March 14th, 2024 01:44
Greed\'s contentment
2781 said:
I\'m probably way off...Communication breakdown
March 13th, 2024 05:38
2781 said:
I\'m probably way off...Communication breakdown
March 13th, 2024 05:38
Resurrection men
Alan R said:
The dark imagery of this poem is oddly captivating, very unique
March 12th, 2024 10:38
Alan R said:
The dark imagery of this poem is oddly captivating, very unique
March 12th, 2024 10:38
Resurrection men
Doggerel Dave said:
If form trumps content, then we\'re all in the poo?
March 12th, 2024 07:48
Doggerel Dave said:
If form trumps content, then we\'re all in the poo?
March 12th, 2024 07:48
Fossil echoes
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant painting of the scene. Great work.
March 11th, 2024 21:06
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant painting of the scene. Great work.
March 11th, 2024 21:06
Fossil echoes
Teddy.15 said:
A dirty mirror, cracked and broken
Blind visions reversed, distorted
A revenant from a torn cocoon of words spoken
Years in silk chains leaves hope contorted
Such drama in your entire poem I do love this stanza,
naturally we are born with a bad streak and it is nurturing that makes us who we hopefully become as good people. Your poem is incredibly powerful. We are born from something and when gone maybe some bones will be one day found. A masterpiece today. 🌹
March 8th, 2024 06:41
Teddy.15 said:
A dirty mirror, cracked and broken
Blind visions reversed, distorted
A revenant from a torn cocoon of words spoken
Years in silk chains leaves hope contorted
Such drama in your entire poem I do love this stanza,
naturally we are born with a bad streak and it is nurturing that makes us who we hopefully become as good people. Your poem is incredibly powerful. We are born from something and when gone maybe some bones will be one day found. A masterpiece today. 🌹
March 8th, 2024 06:41
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