Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Twilight
dusk arising said:
My favourite time of day... just add the evening song of a blackbird and I\'m content.
Lovely poem to contemplate.
April 24th, 2022 06:42
dusk arising said:
My favourite time of day... just add the evening song of a blackbird and I\'m content.
Lovely poem to contemplate.
April 24th, 2022 06:42
We were not created in God\'s image we created God in ours
Distant View said:
I must agree with your words here. The trouble with religion is that each different belief thinks that theirs is the one true religion, and everybody else is wrong!
April 23rd, 2022 08:32
Distant View said:
I must agree with your words here. The trouble with religion is that each different belief thinks that theirs is the one true religion, and everybody else is wrong!
April 23rd, 2022 08:32
We were not created in God\'s image we created God in ours
dusk arising said:
Very well said but ... ssshhh the brainwashed may be watching and you\'ll upset them. I have... regularly.
Though I\'ll admit it\'s fun to watch their rhetotic struggling for logic.
When I was a small child I used to wonder who were these sinners who my religious instruction teachers would talk of and why did they always seem to be sinning. Religious instruction actually introduced sin into my young life.
April 23rd, 2022 08:15
dusk arising said:
Very well said but ... ssshhh the brainwashed may be watching and you\'ll upset them. I have... regularly.
Though I\'ll admit it\'s fun to watch their rhetotic struggling for logic.
When I was a small child I used to wonder who were these sinners who my religious instruction teachers would talk of and why did they always seem to be sinning. Religious instruction actually introduced sin into my young life.
April 23rd, 2022 08:15
Just a mollusk
Rozina said:
I never knew. Such interesting creatures. Monogamous like the albatross although climate change has brought some changes to their lifestyle. Thank you for this intriguing poem.
April 22nd, 2022 19:52
Rozina said:
I never knew. Such interesting creatures. Monogamous like the albatross although climate change has brought some changes to their lifestyle. Thank you for this intriguing poem.
April 22nd, 2022 19:52
Just a mollusk
Bella Shepard said:
What an extraordinary relationship you have had with octopuses, I did look up the plural, and what wonderful observations. I\'ve seen several documentaries on the species and you\'re right, they are the most intelligent of creatures. Your poem is so beautiful and loving, and expresses the very nature of these sentient beings.
April 22nd, 2022 16:43
Bella Shepard said:
What an extraordinary relationship you have had with octopuses, I did look up the plural, and what wonderful observations. I\'ve seen several documentaries on the species and you\'re right, they are the most intelligent of creatures. Your poem is so beautiful and loving, and expresses the very nature of these sentient beings.
April 22nd, 2022 16:43
Thoughts of a narcissist
Rocky Lagou said:
Sorrennnnn SORRENNNNN!!! YOU ATE IT UP with this one. I\'m literally at a loss for words. I love your sass and your sarcasm with the lines \"Selfish? I never sold a fish in my life\" I literally gagged when i read that line, and this poem LITERALLY encapsulates my messages in most of my poetry: live for yourself. In the poem \"Giving Up Poetry\" I tried to convey that message of, \"Just because I promote focusing on self, doesn\'t mean we shouldn\'t focus on others.\" I totally live for kindness and generosity, but to put it straightforward, if we can\'t love ourselves, how in the world are we going to love others. Wonderful job!
April 22nd, 2022 12:40
Rocky Lagou said:
Sorrennnnn SORRENNNNN!!! YOU ATE IT UP with this one. I\'m literally at a loss for words. I love your sass and your sarcasm with the lines \"Selfish? I never sold a fish in my life\" I literally gagged when i read that line, and this poem LITERALLY encapsulates my messages in most of my poetry: live for yourself. In the poem \"Giving Up Poetry\" I tried to convey that message of, \"Just because I promote focusing on self, doesn\'t mean we shouldn\'t focus on others.\" I totally live for kindness and generosity, but to put it straightforward, if we can\'t love ourselves, how in the world are we going to love others. Wonderful job!
April 22nd, 2022 12:40
Just a mollusk
L. B. Mek said:
I favourited for your author\'s comment, alone..
a great write, introducing
a world many have little access to
I for one, thank you!
April 22nd, 2022 05:59
L. B. Mek said:
I favourited for your author\'s comment, alone..
a great write, introducing
a world many have little access to
I for one, thank you!
April 22nd, 2022 05:59
Just a mollusk
dusk arising said:
Wonderful words about these incredible beasties. ive heard it said that of all the creations on the planet they are the most likely to be of alien origin. Each tentacle has a mind of its own too.
Super celebration of these creations from you today.
April 22nd, 2022 05:36
dusk arising said:
Wonderful words about these incredible beasties. ive heard it said that of all the creations on the planet they are the most likely to be of alien origin. Each tentacle has a mind of its own too.
Super celebration of these creations from you today.
April 22nd, 2022 05:36
Thoughts of a narcissist
Rozina said:
Enjoyed this play on words which describes this personality perfectly.
April 21st, 2022 17:44
Rozina said:
Enjoyed this play on words which describes this personality perfectly.
April 21st, 2022 17:44
Thoughts of a narcissist
Vamsi Sudha said:
Quite interesting to read a poem on a personality. You did get the pulse of narcissist perfectly. Nice write !!
April 21st, 2022 13:38
Vamsi Sudha said:
Quite interesting to read a poem on a personality. You did get the pulse of narcissist perfectly. Nice write !!
April 21st, 2022 13:38
Thoughts of a narcissist
Bella Shepard said:
I read this through the first time, and enjoyed. Upon the second reading I got the Selfish, never sold a fish in my life and had to burst out laughing. How did I miss that the first time? The true narcissist can justify anything, and you\'ve captured that to a tee.
April 21st, 2022 13:12
Bella Shepard said:
I read this through the first time, and enjoyed. Upon the second reading I got the Selfish, never sold a fish in my life and had to burst out laughing. How did I miss that the first time? The true narcissist can justify anything, and you\'ve captured that to a tee.
April 21st, 2022 13:12
Thoughts of a narcissist
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Interesting it is to try to understand. Thank you for sharing
April 21st, 2022 12:31
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Interesting it is to try to understand. Thank you for sharing
April 21st, 2022 12:31
Thoughts of a narcissist
L. B. Mek said:
\'blame it on my ego
for letting you go
but never blame my vanity
for letting loose your audacity
it\'s all just nature
to you and me...\'
(lol
such a fun reading treat
thank you, dear Poet)
April 21st, 2022 06:49
L. B. Mek said:
\'blame it on my ego
for letting you go
but never blame my vanity
for letting loose your audacity
it\'s all just nature
to you and me...\'
(lol
such a fun reading treat
thank you, dear Poet)
April 21st, 2022 06:49
Thoughts of a narcissist
Caring dove said:
Narcissists think they are perfect .. they also think their all it .. they can’t think of themselves as less than
April 21st, 2022 06:48
Caring dove said:
Narcissists think they are perfect .. they also think their all it .. they can’t think of themselves as less than
April 21st, 2022 06:48
In and outside
Rozina said:
Excellent metaphor. Some couples do end up looking like each other, finish each other\'s sentences........
April 20th, 2022 17:50
Rozina said:
Excellent metaphor. Some couples do end up looking like each other, finish each other\'s sentences........
April 20th, 2022 17:50
In and outside
dusk arising said:
I have decided to go it alone but so as not to appear unusual i have now grown to the size of two to keep up appearances.
P.S. it\'s not working for me.
April 20th, 2022 04:44
dusk arising said:
I have decided to go it alone but so as not to appear unusual i have now grown to the size of two to keep up appearances.
P.S. it\'s not working for me.
April 20th, 2022 04:44
Ups and downs
Rozina said:
Really enjoyed reading these lines. The English language is so interesting and often perplexing!
April 19th, 2022 17:53
Rozina said:
Really enjoyed reading these lines. The English language is so interesting and often perplexing!
April 19th, 2022 17:53
Ups and downs
dusk arising said:
Enjoyed your clever and fun words today - smiling.
April 19th, 2022 11:56
dusk arising said:
Enjoyed your clever and fun words today - smiling.
April 19th, 2022 11:56
Ups and downs
Bella Shepard said:
I love a good brain teaser and this is a gem. You have played with the oddities of our language in the most delightful way. Thank you!
April 19th, 2022 09:23
Bella Shepard said:
I love a good brain teaser and this is a gem. You have played with the oddities of our language in the most delightful way. Thank you!
April 19th, 2022 09:23
Ups and downs
Rocky Lagou said:
Quite the contradictions you portray. Truly thought-provoking and I\'m intrigued to journey further. Very well done!
April 19th, 2022 08:56
Rocky Lagou said:
Quite the contradictions you portray. Truly thought-provoking and I\'m intrigued to journey further. Very well done!
April 19th, 2022 08:56
Psychotic world
dusk arising said:
Hmm fool or wise? I look at the trees and consider all they have seen in their long life and they sway nonchelantly. Immoveable presence. Are they wise or just a dumb life we overlook. What can we learn from these fool like trees.
Being around a tree or trees can teach a spiritual type person much as can the fool.
Maybe I have thought this through long and hard for i have a daughter who some might call a fool. She is merry and smiley and has no living skills, now in her forties she has taught me lots.
April 18th, 2022 16:44
dusk arising said:
Hmm fool or wise? I look at the trees and consider all they have seen in their long life and they sway nonchelantly. Immoveable presence. Are they wise or just a dumb life we overlook. What can we learn from these fool like trees.
Being around a tree or trees can teach a spiritual type person much as can the fool.
Maybe I have thought this through long and hard for i have a daughter who some might call a fool. She is merry and smiley and has no living skills, now in her forties she has taught me lots.
April 18th, 2022 16:44
Psychotic world
Dahlia said:
Excellently penned
like who is the pschyco now eh?!
great work poet 👌
April 18th, 2022 12:06
Dahlia said:
Excellently penned
like who is the pschyco now eh?!
great work poet 👌
April 18th, 2022 12:06
Psychotic world
Rocky Lagou said:
The one not doing. The observer idly spending life annoying others. I love your works. Very well done.
April 18th, 2022 10:08
Rocky Lagou said:
The one not doing. The observer idly spending life annoying others. I love your works. Very well done.
April 18th, 2022 10:08
Psychotic world
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you so much for your welcome comments. I appreciate you taking your time to review this always good to hear from you.
April 18th, 2022 07:16
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you so much for your welcome comments. I appreciate you taking your time to review this always good to hear from you.
April 18th, 2022 07:16
Psychotic world
L. B. Mek said:
I know this person
recognise those self-serving
traits
in so many people\'s, indifferent gaze
but most of all, I recognise
that glint, I\'ve known my whole life
in that mirror reflection
I tend, to pretend
doesn\'t greet, every morning
knowingly, judging
ever-so silently..
(great write, dear poet
so many levels you touch upon)
thank you!
April 18th, 2022 06:57
L. B. Mek said:
I know this person
recognise those self-serving
traits
in so many people\'s, indifferent gaze
but most of all, I recognise
that glint, I\'ve known my whole life
in that mirror reflection
I tend, to pretend
doesn\'t greet, every morning
knowingly, judging
ever-so silently..
(great write, dear poet
so many levels you touch upon)
thank you!
April 18th, 2022 06:57
All or nothing
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello sorenbarett
This is chill, good job!
tchau!
April 17th, 2022 10:32
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello sorenbarett
This is chill, good job!
tchau!
April 17th, 2022 10:32
All or nothing
dusk arising said:
Have you been reading the buddha? These are some of his teachings.
April 17th, 2022 09:26
dusk arising said:
Have you been reading the buddha? These are some of his teachings.
April 17th, 2022 09:26
Moment to moment
Bella Shepard said:
I connect with that feeling of being frozen, yet having to move forward as time demands. Good write!
April 16th, 2022 12:16
Bella Shepard said:
I connect with that feeling of being frozen, yet having to move forward as time demands. Good write!
April 16th, 2022 12:16
Two sides of a coin
Bella Shepard said:
If only we had a crystal ball to look into the future and see the unforeseen consequence of our actions, whatever they may be. You have expressed this in such a thoughtful and intelligent way, I\'m blown away. Great write!
April 15th, 2022 14:56
Bella Shepard said:
If only we had a crystal ball to look into the future and see the unforeseen consequence of our actions, whatever they may be. You have expressed this in such a thoughtful and intelligent way, I\'m blown away. Great write!
April 15th, 2022 14:56
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