Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



A cynic\'s meal (stick it to em)
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

April 9th, 2024 18:37

A cynic\'s meal (stick it to em)
Bella Shepard said:

A very profound write my friend. We have little regard for charity these days, \"me\" comes before \"we\". You skillfully present a sad but unfortunetly true commentery on all parts of society. A fine write!

April 9th, 2024 15:01

A cynic\'s meal (stick it to em)
2781 said:

Absolutely. I\'ve seen a pie chart or two and I didn\'t need to be Einstein to see who got the biggest slice.
Now it\'s a corporate takeover.
God bless the poor.

April 9th, 2024 07:23

A cynic\'s meal (stick it to em)
Teddy.15 said:

A very powerful poem of utter truth. I was actually in Rome a couple of weeks ago, incredible to see the Vatican verse all the tents on the lungotevere River. ๐ŸŒน

April 9th, 2024 06:48

Dirty Love
Goldfinch60 said:

Very strong and intriguing words soren.

Andy

April 9th, 2024 01:07

Dirty Love
Bella Shepard said:

After reading this poem several times I felt a connection between \"born as a leak of love\" and \"a torn privates glove\", perhaps reference to a condom? The result, an unwanted and perhaps abandoned child left in poverty, after dirty love. Stunning write my friend. Or, maybe I\'ve misinterpreted.

April 8th, 2024 15:49

Dirty Love
Teddy.15 said:

Wow, way to go dear sorrenbarret, having read this a few times it is very powerful. ๐ŸŒน

April 8th, 2024 11:45

Dirty Love
orchidee said:

It\'s rat droppings for KP\'s dinner tonight! I\'m cooking! She dunno why I keep a pet rat. lol.

April 8th, 2024 11:08

Broken sun rays
Goldfinch60 said:

They will always be with you soren.

Andy

April 8th, 2024 01:11

Broken sun rays
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful work. Powerful and vivid.

April 7th, 2024 21:37

Broken sun rays
Bella Shepard said:

You paint A bittersweet memory upon this canvas with every stroke, carefully chosen words from your pallete, a true work of art my friend.

April 7th, 2024 12:31

Broken sun rays
Teddy.15 said:

Forever close to you dear sorrenbarret forever close. โค๏ธ Stunning my friend. โค๏ธ

April 7th, 2024 08:41

Trash of gold
Goldfinch60 said:

Many tears ago in the UK a ship was in trouble and cans of cyanide it was carrying washed up on the shore. In an interview a doctor was asked \"What are the symptoms of cyanide poisoning\" His reply was \"Death!\"

April 7th, 2024 01:26

Trash of gold
Bella Shepard said:

I suppose we\'ve taken a natural element and compounded it, for better or worse, to achieve our economic goals, and our environment suffers. It\'s what we do. Chilling, such a great write my friend!

April 6th, 2024 13:18

Trash of gold
orchidee said:

Someone can have the cyanide (you know who) and I\'ll have the gold! lol. Not that she has to eat it.
She gives me the bashing, etc, every day!

April 6th, 2024 09:35

Trash of gold
Teddy.15 said:

Very powerful and this one I could almost smell. ๐ŸŒน

April 6th, 2024 09:17

Trash of gold
2781 said:

Fire is also used.

April 6th, 2024 07:17

Depends
Goldfinch60 said:

Intriguing words soren, questions that many do ask that have no answers.

Andy

April 6th, 2024 00:38

Depends
Mase โ™ช said:

Wow, no sorry can\'t answer thoses๐Ÿ™…๐Ÿ˜‚

April 5th, 2024 19:34

Depends
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful and poignant.

April 5th, 2024 19:25

Depends
Teddy.15 said:

You have turned the soul inside out my friend. Incredibly provoking. ๐ŸŒน

April 5th, 2024 16:14

Depends
orchidee said:

Good write SB.
For me - will my day be good? Depends - if I see KP or not! lol.

April 5th, 2024 10:39

Depends
2781 said:

Hard questions to answer.

April 5th, 2024 08:58

Reflection of a whisper
Goldfinch60 said:

Super words soren, may that vision change to one of hope and love.

Andy

April 5th, 2024 01:07

Reflection of a whisper
Teddy.15 said:

Oh this is truly stunning I\'m overwhelmed by this the imagery the meaning just stunning, I particularly love this line

Lacrimal rains pours ..... Tears just beautiful. Kudos dear sorrenbarret ๐ŸŒน

April 4th, 2024 12:30

A one way street
Bella Shepard said:

The selfless heart recognizes need in others, before the self. To truly love, is to give, and in giving find the life worth living. I love your last line, I love the whole package. Increcible!

April 4th, 2024 08:21

Reflection of a whisper
Bella Shepard said:

Stunning imagery in this poem of a doomed love, and the last word seems to beg a question. Incredible words my friend.

April 4th, 2024 08:08

Reflection of a whisper
orchidee said:

A fine write SB.
Ain\'t no double meanings with KP. She says - it\'s about all she says - is \'Botox is botox, and nothing else, and I must have it more, more, more!\' heehee.

April 4th, 2024 08:03

A one way street
orchidee said:

Good write SB.
It\'s a one-way street with KP, to be sure. The street is called \'Me, me, me\' - that\'s KP who is \'me\'. lol.

April 3rd, 2024 02:45

A one way street
Teddy.15 said:

One way streets I\'ve had mine in my lifetime, lucky I was bright enough to close the book. I\'ve read this so many times dear sorenbarret, it\'s absolutely beautiful it breathes such power, one has to love and respect one\'s self I will never choose one sided love over my dignity. So truly brilliant. Inspired as always sir. ๐ŸŒน

April 3rd, 2024 02:32



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