Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
A taste of honey
Cassie58 said:
Thank goodness it was a friendly bee and you didn’t get stung. A lovely sweet poem Soren. Have a happy day.
August 15th, 2024 06:24
Cassie58 said:
Thank goodness it was a friendly bee and you didn’t get stung. A lovely sweet poem Soren. Have a happy day.
August 15th, 2024 06:24
A taste of honey
Doggerel Dave said:
In \'love\' and passion a sting is always a possibility......
August 15th, 2024 05:15
Doggerel Dave said:
In \'love\' and passion a sting is always a possibility......
August 15th, 2024 05:15
A taste of honey
Neville said:
some B\'s just tease .. how sweet is that .. now I can\'t close my eyes without seeing fields of cornflowers .. against a backdrop of humming ..
August 15th, 2024 05:14
Neville said:
some B\'s just tease .. how sweet is that .. now I can\'t close my eyes without seeing fields of cornflowers .. against a backdrop of humming ..
August 15th, 2024 05:14
A taste of honey
Bobby O said:
So as per this date the bee has eluded me
“ maybe you wanna give me kisses, sweet but only for one night and no repeat or maybe you’ll go away and never call a taste of honey is worse than none at all”
August 15th, 2024 05:01
Bobby O said:
So as per this date the bee has eluded me
“ maybe you wanna give me kisses, sweet but only for one night and no repeat or maybe you’ll go away and never call a taste of honey is worse than none at all”
August 15th, 2024 05:01
A taste of honey
2781 said:
Is that how those lovely ladies stumbled on the beauty of botox
August 15th, 2024 04:54
2781 said:
Is that how those lovely ladies stumbled on the beauty of botox
August 15th, 2024 04:54
A taste of honey
Teddy.15 said:
This is incredibly sweet. Did you know, some of the best honey in Europe can be found in Tuscany and indeed on the island of Elba, fun fact. 🌹
August 15th, 2024 03:58
Teddy.15 said:
This is incredibly sweet. Did you know, some of the best honey in Europe can be found in Tuscany and indeed on the island of Elba, fun fact. 🌹
August 15th, 2024 03:58
A bad rap(tor)?
Dan Williams said:
Well deserved praise for the subject and the author. nice.
August 15th, 2024 00:07
Dan Williams said:
Well deserved praise for the subject and the author. nice.
August 15th, 2024 00:07
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2781 said:
I saw an angel standing in the sun, shouting to all the flying birds in Middle-Heaven, \"Come to the Great Supper of God! Feast on the flesh of kings, captains and champions, horses and their riders. Eat your fill of them all- free and slave, small and great!\"
For wheresoever the carcass is, there the vultures will gather.
August 14th, 2024 21:49
2781 said:
I saw an angel standing in the sun, shouting to all the flying birds in Middle-Heaven, \"Come to the Great Supper of God! Feast on the flesh of kings, captains and champions, horses and their riders. Eat your fill of them all- free and slave, small and great!\"
For wheresoever the carcass is, there the vultures will gather.
August 14th, 2024 21:49
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Thad Wilk said:
A powerful and
captivating write! 👍
Intriguing to the
very last bite! 👌
Thanks for sharing
to read A delight!! 🦤
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 14th, 2024 21:48
Thad Wilk said:
A powerful and
captivating write! 👍
Intriguing to the
very last bite! 👌
Thanks for sharing
to read A delight!! 🦤
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 14th, 2024 21:48
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Cassie58 said:
You know vultures get bad press. For the first time Soren I am looking at them in a different light, after reading your poem. Normally they give me the creeps. All the best.
August 14th, 2024 18:32
Cassie58 said:
You know vultures get bad press. For the first time Soren I am looking at them in a different light, after reading your poem. Normally they give me the creeps. All the best.
August 14th, 2024 18:32
Time eroded memories
Thomas W Case said:
Superb and powerful work. Magnificent.
August 14th, 2024 17:52
Thomas W Case said:
Superb and powerful work. Magnificent.
August 14th, 2024 17:52
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Bobby O said:
I love your list or at least my imagined view of it. First I imagine a question for a survey. Now this is not a commentary or judgement , it’s a survey to present just a raw number and observation of contrast
A thousand people asked one question.
“Do you regularly think of paying tribute and listing positive attributes of vultures in a poem?” The contrast without comment is that if surveyed your answer would be yes.
August 14th, 2024 17:20
Bobby O said:
I love your list or at least my imagined view of it. First I imagine a question for a survey. Now this is not a commentary or judgement , it’s a survey to present just a raw number and observation of contrast
A thousand people asked one question.
“Do you regularly think of paying tribute and listing positive attributes of vultures in a poem?” The contrast without comment is that if surveyed your answer would be yes.
August 14th, 2024 17:20
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Bella Shepard said:
I see them in the neighborhood, and marvel as they soar just as beautifully as an eagle. You raise them up in lovely verse. Such a good write!
August 14th, 2024 07:58
Bella Shepard said:
I see them in the neighborhood, and marvel as they soar just as beautifully as an eagle. You raise them up in lovely verse. Such a good write!
August 14th, 2024 07:58
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Neville said:
Being both a bit of a horneythologist and a nortyculturist .. I know a thing or two about raptors, including Egyptian Vultures ..
When I was working in Africa a few years back one fell out of the sky and just missed me .. I think it may have had a heart attack .. I know that I nearly did .. Let\'s call that a rap for now eh\' .. Neville
August 14th, 2024 07:18
Neville said:
Being both a bit of a horneythologist and a nortyculturist .. I know a thing or two about raptors, including Egyptian Vultures ..
When I was working in Africa a few years back one fell out of the sky and just missed me .. I think it may have had a heart attack .. I know that I nearly did .. Let\'s call that a rap for now eh\' .. Neville
August 14th, 2024 07:18
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orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, so there\'s method in my madness of feeding sewage to KP. Well, as you say here, it keeps others free from disease. heehee.
August 14th, 2024 07:04
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, so there\'s method in my madness of feeding sewage to KP. Well, as you say here, it keeps others free from disease. heehee.
August 14th, 2024 07:04
Familiarity of the nonexistent
Tom Dylan said:
A chilling poem, Soren. Really enjoyed that. Loved the tone and the rhyme. Reminded me of Poe. A fine write.
August 14th, 2024 06:28
Tom Dylan said:
A chilling poem, Soren. Really enjoyed that. Loved the tone and the rhyme. Reminded me of Poe. A fine write.
August 14th, 2024 06:28
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Doggerel Dave said:
As one argument for Nature to be left to sort itself, without mankind’s intervention, this is one step towards a greater understanding, Soren.
August 14th, 2024 06:07
Doggerel Dave said:
As one argument for Nature to be left to sort itself, without mankind’s intervention, this is one step towards a greater understanding, Soren.
August 14th, 2024 06:07
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Teddy.15 said:
I\'d say a quite brilliant rap(tor) I actually rapped it, a very powerful ending. Most entertaining dear sorrenbarret 🌹
August 14th, 2024 05:16
Teddy.15 said:
I\'d say a quite brilliant rap(tor) I actually rapped it, a very powerful ending. Most entertaining dear sorrenbarret 🌹
August 14th, 2024 05:16
Time eroded memories
Bobby O said:
Wind molded clouds of earth —-
Greatly descriptive - and then you pinch home the point of it all. It has power
August 14th, 2024 01:58
Bobby O said:
Wind molded clouds of earth —-
Greatly descriptive - and then you pinch home the point of it all. It has power
August 14th, 2024 01:58
Familiarity of the nonexistent
Bobby O said:
I read this three times, it’s solidly written and its quality flows through first line until last. I thought the opening was especially perfect.
August 14th, 2024 01:52
Bobby O said:
I read this three times, it’s solidly written and its quality flows through first line until last. I thought the opening was especially perfect.
August 14th, 2024 01:52
Familiarity of the nonexistent
Goldfinch60 said:
Those things are always there soren but sometime they come back to us when they are not expected.
Andy
August 14th, 2024 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Those things are always there soren but sometime they come back to us when they are not expected.
Andy
August 14th, 2024 01:24
Familiarity of the nonexistent
Dan Williams said:
I\'m running out of adjectives to describe your work; this is just . . wonderful? Graceful? So sincere? I read it and like it so much before I realized who wrote it, I could easily have predicted it would be you., so consistently eloquent. Bravo.
August 14th, 2024 00:36
Dan Williams said:
I\'m running out of adjectives to describe your work; this is just . . wonderful? Graceful? So sincere? I read it and like it so much before I realized who wrote it, I could easily have predicted it would be you., so consistently eloquent. Bravo.
August 14th, 2024 00:36
Familiarity of the nonexistent
Doggerel Dave said:
Those dreams, Soren….. You’ve just hauled memories back of tormented nights.…. Far too uncomfortable. I feel fortunate that currently my dreams are much more linear and untroubled – But am I (fortunate)?
August 13th, 2024 17:50
Doggerel Dave said:
Those dreams, Soren….. You’ve just hauled memories back of tormented nights.…. Far too uncomfortable. I feel fortunate that currently my dreams are much more linear and untroubled – But am I (fortunate)?
August 13th, 2024 17:50
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