Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



People
Alan R said:

Brilliant!

April 29th, 2024 14:07

People
Cassie58 said:

The imagery here is strange and chaotic. The world is changing, who knows what lies in store for the future. Glad I wonโ€™t be around in fifty years time to find out. The future looks bleak. Great read.

April 29th, 2024 12:15

People
orchidee said:

A fine write SB.
Ahh, an idea of what I can cook for KP\'s dinner - a dead snake! lol.

April 29th, 2024 07:51

People
Doggerel Dave said:

Nihilistic in the extreme, Soren. I both liked it and felt repelled by it. Best I can do - Sorry.

April 29th, 2024 07:31

People
2781 said:

It\'s a crazy, mixed up, shook up world.

April 29th, 2024 06:05

People
Teddy.15 said:

Wow, an unbelievable impact of imagery. ๐ŸŒน

April 29th, 2024 05:01

Ramanujan of music
Teddy.15 said:

Oh yes I adore the violin and I always say jazz is a mess to those who cannot hear it yet an orchestra on the ear to others, music really is so many things. ๐ŸŒน Gorgeous and to see your own mother in o e of your poems is truly a prevaliage ๐ŸŒน

April 29th, 2024 04:56

Ramanujan of music
Goldfinch60 said:

Music is so important in our lives soren.

Andy

April 29th, 2024 01:28

Ramanujan of music
Bella Shepard said:

The magic and mystery of music wrapped up in this beautiful poem. It has unimaginable powers, it opens wide the portals of emotion and caresses the senses. What a wonderful start to my Sunday. Thank you dear friend! P.S. I had never heard of the Ranamujen summation, so I googled and was fascinated by it. I also found a line saying that it originates from a human desire for beauty, I like that a lot.

April 28th, 2024 11:52

Ramanujan of music
orchidee said:

I never knew there was so much in music. Well, I know now! lol.

April 28th, 2024 04:38

We cut roses
Goldfinch60 said:

Roses both alive and dead are so beautiful. I have a rose behind my wife\'s urn of ashes that I took to her funeral over four years ago.

Andy

April 28th, 2024 02:23

The sound of nothing
Goldfinch60 said:

Silence can be a great healer soren.

Andy

April 28th, 2024 02:09

We cut roses
Bella Shepard said:

Remnants of a past, that when new and fresh delighted us, and is now a memory of what was. You turn the pages of a diary and find a pressed rose, which speaks of a yesterday oh so dear, and its faint scent is there, if only in your mind. You bring it all together beautifully in poem, soft and gentle.

April 27th, 2024 12:05

We cut roses
orchidee said:

Tricky to tell if she\'s stuffed or not these days (taxidermy). She won\'t need that though, being full of botox. lol.

April 27th, 2024 09:47

We cut roses
orchidee said:

Good write SB.
You know KP well - last verse, first line! lol.
She says I\'m the thorn between two roses - to change the picture round!

April 27th, 2024 09:42

We cut roses
Cassie58 said:

So beautiful. Cut fresh or even in decay there is beauty. This poem sent me traveling to times in the past and people long gone. Such lovely memories you gave me with a vase of roses. No thorns at all.

April 27th, 2024 07:10

We cut roses
Teddy.15 said:

Absolutely beautiful personally roses dead or dried I do love. Your metaphor is fabulous and brings death it\'s splendour. ๐ŸŒน

April 27th, 2024 06:02

The sound of nothing
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

April 26th, 2024 10:50

The sound of nothing
2781 said:

,and few there be that find it.

April 26th, 2024 07:05

Raising water
orchidee said:

Good write SB.
Ahh, sooooo - Verse 1, line 2 - you know my current state in marriage with KP?! lol.

April 25th, 2024 11:45

Raising water
Teddy.15 said:

My dear sorrenbarret I feel as if I\'m reading a last goodbye before an operation, I say this because it brought back the very feelings I had just 3 years ago. I hope I\'m wrong though. ๐ŸŒน

April 25th, 2024 09:58

Raising water
Doggerel Dave said:

Do you really believe there\'s relief from that kind of extreme psychic pain, Soren?
Rich write.

April 25th, 2024 07:04

Sans disgrace
Goldfinch60 said:

Good metaphoric words soren.

Andy

April 25th, 2024 01:23

Sans disgrace
Cassie58 said:

Wonderful strong metaphors here sorenbarrett. Give me an eagle any day of the week. Three perfectly penned stanzas. Have a happy Wednesday.

April 24th, 2024 08:43

Safe inside
Goldfinch60 said:

That tranquility can be within us all soren.

Andy

April 24th, 2024 01:52

Safe inside
Teddy.15 said:

Fabulous loved your last stanza, palpitations reading this. ๐ŸŒน

April 24th, 2024 01:13

Safe inside
Doggerel Dave said:

I\'d be offended if it wasn\'t so close to the truth, Soren. Conclusion redeeming.

April 23rd, 2024 20:31

Safe inside
orchidee said:

Ahh, so you know how KP will look in 40 years time. No make it 4 years, years time! lol. Can\'t tell with the botox on.

April 23rd, 2024 10:22

Wounds of the dead
Goldfinch60 said:

Those bad things remembered can be put in a box within your mind soren.

Andy

April 23rd, 2024 01:26

Wounds of the dead
Teddy.15 said:

I find myself leaning heavily towards regret, wow your imagery is completely visual, your pain your guilt caged in your very rib cage ouch, brilliant sorrenbarret just brilliant. ๐ŸŒน

April 22nd, 2024 07:40



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