Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Flower
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the font, which really works well for this poem, as well as your use of Bennu, the Ravens, Elijah, the Manna...all of it brilliantly woven into deep, philosophical, metaphor. Well done, Soren! 🌹👏
April 10th, 2025 16:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the font, which really works well for this poem, as well as your use of Bennu, the Ravens, Elijah, the Manna...all of it brilliantly woven into deep, philosophical, metaphor. Well done, Soren! 🌹👏
April 10th, 2025 16:21
Flower
Lorenz said:
A hard rock orchid ? What a tempting musical inspiration !
April 10th, 2025 10:02
Lorenz said:
A hard rock orchid ? What a tempting musical inspiration !
April 10th, 2025 10:02
Liberated
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice one soren
A poem with a spectrum of beauty
April 10th, 2025 05:38
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice one soren
A poem with a spectrum of beauty
April 10th, 2025 05:38
Flower
MDStone said:
Soren,
Love the font. It matches the message that blooms in this poem. Hope thriving even when the surroundings say it shouldn’t be so, beauty in the hard places. Thank you for sharing and for the educational piece as well. Loved it!
April 10th, 2025 05:25
MDStone said:
Soren,
Love the font. It matches the message that blooms in this poem. Hope thriving even when the surroundings say it shouldn’t be so, beauty in the hard places. Thank you for sharing and for the educational piece as well. Loved it!
April 10th, 2025 05:25
Flower
David Wakeling said:
I love the egyptian connection here.I actually learned something.Great poem.
April 10th, 2025 05:14
David Wakeling said:
I love the egyptian connection here.I actually learned something.Great poem.
April 10th, 2025 05:14
Flower
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you for the beautiful write and a little history lesson, I had never heard of that before. This one did test my eye sight !!!, enjoyed the read
April 10th, 2025 04:13
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you for the beautiful write and a little history lesson, I had never heard of that before. This one did test my eye sight !!!, enjoyed the read
April 10th, 2025 04:13
How odd is odd
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren but for me I look outside the box and see more.
Andy
April 10th, 2025 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren but for me I look outside the box and see more.
Andy
April 10th, 2025 01:41
Unknot the not
NinjaGirl said:
I don\'t know that I entirely understand the title\'s relation to the poem, but the message is truly a beautiful and motivating one.
April 9th, 2025 14:11
NinjaGirl said:
I don\'t know that I entirely understand the title\'s relation to the poem, but the message is truly a beautiful and motivating one.
April 9th, 2025 14:11
You will argue
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s difficult because what\'s right and what\'s wrong? What justifies the means to justify the ends? I often hear the saying along the lines of \"whoever abandoned you in the ocean has no right to know what the sharks did to you or what you had to do to get to the shore\" which makes sense, until you think what was done is worse than what happened. These kinds of moral questions make me think I could be a good philosopher.
April 9th, 2025 14:10
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s difficult because what\'s right and what\'s wrong? What justifies the means to justify the ends? I often hear the saying along the lines of \"whoever abandoned you in the ocean has no right to know what the sharks did to you or what you had to do to get to the shore\" which makes sense, until you think what was done is worse than what happened. These kinds of moral questions make me think I could be a good philosopher.
April 9th, 2025 14:10
How odd is odd
Salvia.S said:
A poignant reflection on the tension between conformity and individuality. Well written!!!
April 9th, 2025 10:41
Salvia.S said:
A poignant reflection on the tension between conformity and individuality. Well written!!!
April 9th, 2025 10:41
How odd is odd
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. How much difference rattles our bones...and yet, how different are we? In one sense, vastly different. There are entire universes with in people, perhaps multiverses. Yet, in another way, not very different at all. Sometimes we find ourselves having to comply, but I determined a long time ago that I will never conform. I am who I am. Wonderful write, Soren. This one hit home! 🌹👏
April 9th, 2025 10:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. How much difference rattles our bones...and yet, how different are we? In one sense, vastly different. There are entire universes with in people, perhaps multiverses. Yet, in another way, not very different at all. Sometimes we find ourselves having to comply, but I determined a long time ago that I will never conform. I am who I am. Wonderful write, Soren. This one hit home! 🌹👏
April 9th, 2025 10:09
How odd is odd
Mutley Ravishes said:
I\'ve tried to con-form, but the limitation is unbearable. Great write, Soren.
April 9th, 2025 07:33
Mutley Ravishes said:
I\'ve tried to con-form, but the limitation is unbearable. Great write, Soren.
April 9th, 2025 07:33
How odd is odd
arqios said:
Us and Them is an old game that resurrects every now and again…corporate defence mechanism perhaps?🙏🏻🕊
April 9th, 2025 06:07
arqios said:
Us and Them is an old game that resurrects every now and again…corporate defence mechanism perhaps?🙏🏻🕊
April 9th, 2025 06:07
How odd is odd
MDStone said:
In all “reality” there is but one race, the Human Race. If we would only learn to love the human, the rest would fall in to place. Nicely done, Soren. Thanks for sharing.
April 9th, 2025 05:17
MDStone said:
In all “reality” there is but one race, the Human Race. If we would only learn to love the human, the rest would fall in to place. Nicely done, Soren. Thanks for sharing.
April 9th, 2025 05:17
How soon we forget
Teddy.15 said:
A memory in which sometimes we hope will stay lost. I have many of these. 🌹 Beautifully done dearest Sorrenbarret 🌹
April 9th, 2025 03:06
Teddy.15 said:
A memory in which sometimes we hope will stay lost. I have many of these. 🌹 Beautifully done dearest Sorrenbarret 🌹
April 9th, 2025 03:06
How soon we forget
Goldfinch60 said:
The heat of the sun can bring such things soren but it also brings us the light in our lives.
Andy
April 9th, 2025 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
The heat of the sun can bring such things soren but it also brings us the light in our lives.
Andy
April 9th, 2025 01:19
How soon we forget
David Wakeling said:
A delightful view of the seasons and the best part of the day.Very well constructed
April 8th, 2025 22:10
David Wakeling said:
A delightful view of the seasons and the best part of the day.Very well constructed
April 8th, 2025 22:10
How soon we forget
Tristan Robert Lange said:
One prefers to burn \"under a cold blanketing heaven.\" Marvelous, my friend. I so get this and relate to in so many ways. This is that type of poem that enters the soul and speaks to the person where they are. Wonderful job on this! 🌹👏
April 8th, 2025 09:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
One prefers to burn \"under a cold blanketing heaven.\" Marvelous, my friend. I so get this and relate to in so many ways. This is that type of poem that enters the soul and speaks to the person where they are. Wonderful job on this! 🌹👏
April 8th, 2025 09:39
How soon we forget
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
For me this seemed a multi layered poem where there is more than what meets the eyes. It seemed an unfolding of a period perhaps a day though at the same time it could be a week month or season. As each cycle opens it ends only into new beginnings.Each grain of sand in the hourglass is renewed again. I enjoyed the read! Greetings and blessings,
R
April 8th, 2025 08:58
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
For me this seemed a multi layered poem where there is more than what meets the eyes. It seemed an unfolding of a period perhaps a day though at the same time it could be a week month or season. As each cycle opens it ends only into new beginnings.Each grain of sand in the hourglass is renewed again. I enjoyed the read! Greetings and blessings,
R
April 8th, 2025 08:58
You will argue
RSM0812 said:
It reminds me of the momentum of change and transformation. Something starts small, like someone coughing in a crowd. Then it turns into a brawl. You are an amazing writer.
April 8th, 2025 06:50
RSM0812 said:
It reminds me of the momentum of change and transformation. Something starts small, like someone coughing in a crowd. Then it turns into a brawl. You are an amazing writer.
April 8th, 2025 06:50
How soon we forget
Poetic Licence said:
Each season has different memories and meanings to different people, a change in seasons can also see a change in some people, as I always feel emotions and feeling better are linked to seasons of nature, lovely write, enjoyed the read
April 8th, 2025 05:59
Poetic Licence said:
Each season has different memories and meanings to different people, a change in seasons can also see a change in some people, as I always feel emotions and feeling better are linked to seasons of nature, lovely write, enjoyed the read
April 8th, 2025 05:59
How soon we forget
MDStone said:
Soren,
How soon we forget, indeed. Always thinking that another season is better than the one we are in now. Forgetting the hardships of that season at the altar of the season we face now. Failing to see the good days of this season for the clouded memories of “the good old days.” It’s time to stop the madness and enjoy the moments of right here and right now. Thanks for stirring my heart and thought towards the present.
April 8th, 2025 05:30
MDStone said:
Soren,
How soon we forget, indeed. Always thinking that another season is better than the one we are in now. Forgetting the hardships of that season at the altar of the season we face now. Failing to see the good days of this season for the clouded memories of “the good old days.” It’s time to stop the madness and enjoy the moments of right here and right now. Thanks for stirring my heart and thought towards the present.
April 8th, 2025 05:30
How soon we forget
arqios said:
Now that is where the circuits jumble and fry, only to return to that state once the overpowering present stimuli leaves 🕊️🙏🏻
April 8th, 2025 03:49
arqios said:
Now that is where the circuits jumble and fry, only to return to that state once the overpowering present stimuli leaves 🕊️🙏🏻
April 8th, 2025 03:49
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