Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



The End
Rocky Lagou said:

Wow what a message! This was written very well and the evolution is felt. A passing of time and an understanding of the inevitable. 💖

March 1st, 2022 10:29

The End
sorenbarrett said:

Thank you so much for your review and comment

March 1st, 2022 08:49

Another point of view
sorenbarrett said:

Thank you for your review and kind comment.

March 1st, 2022 07:40

Another point of view
Bella Shepard said:

We have to have the opposites of life, the beginnings and ends. It\'s how we make sense of our world. It\'s how we learn from infancy. The trick is to find the balance, the equilibrium, which takes a lifetime of work and commitment for each one of us individually and collectively. Thank you for this stunning piece, loved it.
The pendulum has swung

February 28th, 2022 12:29

Another point of view
sorenbarrett said:

Thank you so much for your review and kind words. Sometimes you have to be crazy to see the truth.

February 28th, 2022 12:00

Another point of view
Rocky Lagou said:

Wow! This was so freaking GOOD! I literally love how candid this poem was like absolutely no restraint and I live for that boldness. The social issues you touched on really made me feel hope. I love the way you worded this piece. The line \"The entrance to heaven is through hell\'s door\" literally captivated me! Like that\'s some profound stuff! I totally agree with this \"new point of view.\" Morality is in the eye of the beholder! 💖💖

February 28th, 2022 11:07

Snow
sorenbarrett said:

Thank you so much for your review. Your comments are greatly welcomed.

February 28th, 2022 08:09

Snow
Rozina said:

Beautiful.

February 27th, 2022 18:34

Snow
Christina8 said:

Beautiful Haiku. Easy to picture and then smell the pines. Wonderful!

February 27th, 2022 09:58

Seasons of a life
sorenbarrett said:

Thank you ao very much for taking your precious time to read and comment on it with such kind words.

February 26th, 2022 20:07

Seasons of a life
Rozina said:

Beautiful memories written in such a lovely way. I loved reading your poem. Thank you for sharing.

February 26th, 2022 18:21

Seasons of a life
Desertwind said:

Nicely wrote .

February 26th, 2022 13:29

Seasons of a life
sorenbarrett said:

Thank you so much for taking your time to review it and for your kind comments. They are most appreciated.

February 26th, 2022 13:19

Seasons of a life
dusk arising said:

This is the most beautiful poem I have read in a long, long time. I knew it would go into my favourites long before i neared the ending.
I was hooked on the romance of childhood in your words and gently taken through acceptance of our own children moving on which you phrased so delicately and on.... to our senior years which i share now.

Yes a beautiful work. Well done and thank you so much for such a fine read today

February 26th, 2022 11:01

Dommer was a vegan
sorenbarrett said:

Thanks for your review and comment Rocky

February 25th, 2022 17:23

Dommer was a vegan
Rocky Lagou said:

Wow what a trip! Veganism is definitely a controversial area but I love the way you presented this. Funny ending and the words were exquisite!

February 25th, 2022 10:57

Ted, Tell A Vision
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:

As someone who is the prime audience for this, I feel as though it\'s been a tad Over hated. Not that I like it, but there is good to this. Being said, I have a personal distaste to it.

February 24th, 2022 18:15

I am
Rozina said:

I was guilty of this, with my children. I wish I could have done things differently although I just wanted them to have an easier life, avoid my own pitfalls. A great message.

February 23rd, 2022 18:27

I am
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:

Man the amount of people I wish I could show this to.

February 23rd, 2022 16:08

Man\'s Attempt at Justice
Rocky Lagou said:

Wow. That last line hit hard. What a great poem! Bravo! 💖

February 22nd, 2022 10:21

Night
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful haiku soren.

Andy

February 22nd, 2022 01:43

Night
sorenbarrett said:

Thank you so much for you review and comment. Taking your precious time with your encouraging and poetic response is truly inspiring.

February 21st, 2022 08:03

Night
L. B. Mek said:

(a great shorty
thanks for sharing and inspiring
my own little reply, dear poet)
\'darkest of scenes
bleakest of feats
Nature, screams
vociferous deeds
and we, heed outcome
as-if watching Hollywood\'s
special-effect, scenes...\'

February 21st, 2022 07:37

Liberty and justice for all (by their acts ye shall know them)
sorenbarrett said:

Thank you for taking your precious time to review and comment on this poem. Your kind words are deeply appreciated.

February 19th, 2022 12:31

Liberty and justice for all (by their acts ye shall know them)
Paul Bell said:

Isn\'t it strange that the same race is now making the weapons for other countries to do the exact same thing as their ancestors did. If anything, the power has got stronger.

February 19th, 2022 06:09

Missing You
sorenbarrett said:

Thank you so much for taking you time to review my poem, Your comment was most wonderful and poetic itself. Thank you again

February 18th, 2022 15:26

Missing You
L. B. Mek said:

\'prickly emotional reverbs
that resonate, long
after, love\'s drumsticks
have been relinquished...\'
(a wonderfully worded shorty
so relatable, thanks for sharing)

February 18th, 2022 07:07

Bending time
sorenbarrett said:

Thank you for your review and comment

February 17th, 2022 10:34

Bending time
sorenbarrett said:

Thank you for your review and comment. It was quite startling

February 17th, 2022 09:32

Bending time
Rocky Lagou said:

Dreams are so elusive. It\'s nice to see your description of your own though. I enjoyed this one! 👏✨

February 17th, 2022 09:17



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