Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Who we are
aDarkerMind said:
powerful and scarey Soren...
this world is a very darrk place right now.
another well written poem.
March 9th, 2025 07:46
aDarkerMind said:
powerful and scarey Soren...
this world is a very darrk place right now.
another well written poem.
March 9th, 2025 07:46
Who we are
Teddy.15 said:
So much more than a history lesson in this. Kudos dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
March 9th, 2025 06:15
Teddy.15 said:
So much more than a history lesson in this. Kudos dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
March 9th, 2025 06:15
Who we are
Poetic Licence said:
It is a shame that real history is not taught in schools anymore, the amount of people who do not the true of where they live is astonishing in this day and age, a great write around the dark side of human history
March 9th, 2025 05:47
Poetic Licence said:
It is a shame that real history is not taught in schools anymore, the amount of people who do not the true of where they live is astonishing in this day and age, a great write around the dark side of human history
March 9th, 2025 05:47
Who we are
Distant View said:
There is much injustice in this world. Some nations are, or have been, more guilty than others - mostly the white empire builders, past and present! Some prominent world leaders claim to be peacemakers right now, but as Bob Dylan said, \"Sometimes Satan comes as a man of peace!\"
March 9th, 2025 05:29
Distant View said:
There is much injustice in this world. Some nations are, or have been, more guilty than others - mostly the white empire builders, past and present! Some prominent world leaders claim to be peacemakers right now, but as Bob Dylan said, \"Sometimes Satan comes as a man of peace!\"
March 9th, 2025 05:29
Who we are
David Wakeling said:
Wow this sure does shine a light on our ancestors.I guess we all live in shame really.You don\'t have to go far back to see genocide and murder.Its happening as we speak in Gaza and Ukraine.I wish I had an answer.I remember being horrified by the genocide of the Tasmanian aborigines. Powerful and important poem
March 9th, 2025 05:08
David Wakeling said:
Wow this sure does shine a light on our ancestors.I guess we all live in shame really.You don\'t have to go far back to see genocide and murder.Its happening as we speak in Gaza and Ukraine.I wish I had an answer.I remember being horrified by the genocide of the Tasmanian aborigines. Powerful and important poem
March 9th, 2025 05:08
Who we are
Salvia.S said:
So powerful and haunting.....
A necessary reflection on the darker aspects of human history.
March 9th, 2025 04:50
Salvia.S said:
So powerful and haunting.....
A necessary reflection on the darker aspects of human history.
March 9th, 2025 04:50
Who we are
arqios said:
Boiled down to vapour can also be a case of a pot calling the kettle black and vice versa; our crazy society 🙏🏻🕊
March 9th, 2025 03:05
arqios said:
Boiled down to vapour can also be a case of a pot calling the kettle black and vice versa; our crazy society 🙏🏻🕊
March 9th, 2025 03:05
A grip too tight
Goldfinch60 said:
Dependency can bring so many obstacles in our lives soren.
Andy
March 9th, 2025 02:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Dependency can bring so many obstacles in our lives soren.
Andy
March 9th, 2025 02:59
A parent\'s burden
Friendship said:
Well written Soren,Yes we do reject them,,,,,,,,,,,My father once stated that, as a parent, one experiences each child\'s pain more profoundly than their own, which underscores the emotional complexity and depth of parental investment in their children\'s lives and the challenges they encounter. Following the incidents that transpired many years ago, I observed a profound transformation in my parents\' demeanor, which was reflected in their emotional expression, conveying an unspoken awareness that I had undergone a significant change. This poignant dynamic illustrates a bond that transcends mere biological ties, emphasizing feelings of love, concern, and helplessness in the face of their child\'s challenges. Essentially, my actions had a profound impact on my parents, inducing feelings of shame and prompting them to relocate me 1,640 miles away, providing me with a residence.
March 8th, 2025 17:18
Friendship said:
Well written Soren,Yes we do reject them,,,,,,,,,,,My father once stated that, as a parent, one experiences each child\'s pain more profoundly than their own, which underscores the emotional complexity and depth of parental investment in their children\'s lives and the challenges they encounter. Following the incidents that transpired many years ago, I observed a profound transformation in my parents\' demeanor, which was reflected in their emotional expression, conveying an unspoken awareness that I had undergone a significant change. This poignant dynamic illustrates a bond that transcends mere biological ties, emphasizing feelings of love, concern, and helplessness in the face of their child\'s challenges. Essentially, my actions had a profound impact on my parents, inducing feelings of shame and prompting them to relocate me 1,640 miles away, providing me with a residence.
March 8th, 2025 17:18
A grip too tight
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I am not sure if this inspired by a real event, but the metaphor for relationships is stark and real! Well done, an easy fave! ❤️🙏
March 8th, 2025 11:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I am not sure if this inspired by a real event, but the metaphor for relationships is stark and real! Well done, an easy fave! ❤️🙏
March 8th, 2025 11:13
A grip too tight
Teddy.15 said:
I have a 12 year old and this is truly and remarkably relatable, you know from one day to the next he has changed, I will reason always and try to shine a beacon but it\'s bloody hard. Thank you dear friend, almost as if you are my inner voice. 🌹
March 8th, 2025 09:58
Teddy.15 said:
I have a 12 year old and this is truly and remarkably relatable, you know from one day to the next he has changed, I will reason always and try to shine a beacon but it\'s bloody hard. Thank you dear friend, almost as if you are my inner voice. 🌹
March 8th, 2025 09:58
A grip too tight
Neville said:
Damn ........................ we were not expecting that .. but I don\'t know why not because it happens all the time .. Neville
March 8th, 2025 08:19
Neville said:
Damn ........................ we were not expecting that .. but I don\'t know why not because it happens all the time .. Neville
March 8th, 2025 08:19
A grip too tight
Friendship said:
Well crafted, Soren, Your poem is about control! Your poem explores the complex nature of dependency and independence in relationships, particularly between a caregiver and a dependent individual. It highlights the tension between nurturing and suffocating, illustrating how over-reliance can lead to a struggle for autonomy. The concluding imagery suggests the dangers of unmonitored freedom and the potential consequences of emotional neglect. Metaphor, The \"iron glove\" symbolizes harsh control, while the \"bubble of reliance\" represents a false sense of security. Soren, Your poem could be interpreted as a reflection of the speaker\'s observations or experiences related to dependency in relationships, possibly informed by personal or societal perspectives. encouraging readers to reflect on their own relationships and the potential consequences of dependency. It serves as a cautionary tale about the importance of fostering independence alongside care.
March 8th, 2025 06:23
Friendship said:
Well crafted, Soren, Your poem is about control! Your poem explores the complex nature of dependency and independence in relationships, particularly between a caregiver and a dependent individual. It highlights the tension between nurturing and suffocating, illustrating how over-reliance can lead to a struggle for autonomy. The concluding imagery suggests the dangers of unmonitored freedom and the potential consequences of emotional neglect. Metaphor, The \"iron glove\" symbolizes harsh control, while the \"bubble of reliance\" represents a false sense of security. Soren, Your poem could be interpreted as a reflection of the speaker\'s observations or experiences related to dependency in relationships, possibly informed by personal or societal perspectives. encouraging readers to reflect on their own relationships and the potential consequences of dependency. It serves as a cautionary tale about the importance of fostering independence alongside care.
March 8th, 2025 06:23
A grip too tight
Poetic Licence said:
A well written thought provoking write, those who create dependency are reliant on our compliance to fulfill their own insecurities and needs, to be in control, loved the read it
March 8th, 2025 05:30
Poetic Licence said:
A well written thought provoking write, those who create dependency are reliant on our compliance to fulfill their own insecurities and needs, to be in control, loved the read it
March 8th, 2025 05:30
A grip too tight
cellinic said:
Very sincere, deep and multi-faceted view on dependency associated with \" bubble of reliance with walls of compliance\". Sorry for delay in reply. best wishes
March 8th, 2025 05:22
cellinic said:
Very sincere, deep and multi-faceted view on dependency associated with \" bubble of reliance with walls of compliance\". Sorry for delay in reply. best wishes
March 8th, 2025 05:22
A grip too tight
arqios said:
Reminds me of the Conor Clapton toddler tragedy… “Tears in Heaven” but on the reverse side the iron grip that ruins people for life- far too many resulting crimes against humanity demonstrate this. 🙏🏻🕊
March 8th, 2025 04:45
arqios said:
Reminds me of the Conor Clapton toddler tragedy… “Tears in Heaven” but on the reverse side the iron grip that ruins people for life- far too many resulting crimes against humanity demonstrate this. 🙏🏻🕊
March 8th, 2025 04:45
A grip too tight
David Wakeling said:
Wow this certainly puts forward the argument against High rise buildings.Very well constructed poem and argument
March 8th, 2025 04:25
David Wakeling said:
Wow this certainly puts forward the argument against High rise buildings.Very well constructed poem and argument
March 8th, 2025 04:25
A grip too tight
Salvia.S said:
A haunting and thought-provoking exploration of the delicate dance between dependence and independence. Well written!
March 8th, 2025 03:53
Salvia.S said:
A haunting and thought-provoking exploration of the delicate dance between dependence and independence. Well written!
March 8th, 2025 03:53
Too warm
Goldfinch60 said:
That heat can be so overwhelming, it is only 12 at the moment and may be 16 durung the day which is OK by me. Hope you can find some coolness soren.
Andy
March 8th, 2025 02:59
Goldfinch60 said:
That heat can be so overwhelming, it is only 12 at the moment and may be 16 durung the day which is OK by me. Hope you can find some coolness soren.
Andy
March 8th, 2025 02:59
Flies
NafisaSB said:
this is such a true and telling message - these obnoxious creatures defile whatever they land on.
wonderfully explained in good detail
March 8th, 2025 00:00
NafisaSB said:
this is such a true and telling message - these obnoxious creatures defile whatever they land on.
wonderfully explained in good detail
March 8th, 2025 00:00
Mourning Doves
Friendship said:
Lovely written, Soren, Your poem is rich and evocative, creating vivid imagery that draws me as the reader into the scene. Words like \"chilling,\" \"bare,\" \"mourn,\" and \"frigid\" evoke a sense of coldness and desolation, while terms like \"cuddle,\" \"caress,\" and \"comforter\" highlight the warmth and intimacy shared between the doves. Your poem revolves around themes of companionship, vulnerability, and the harshness of nature. It portrays the bond between two mourning doves as they seek warmth and solace amidst the cold and desolation of winter. The subject matter reflects on the fragility of life and the inevitable threats that come with it, emphasizing both the tenderness of their relationship and the looming presence of danger.
March 7th, 2025 19:53
Friendship said:
Lovely written, Soren, Your poem is rich and evocative, creating vivid imagery that draws me as the reader into the scene. Words like \"chilling,\" \"bare,\" \"mourn,\" and \"frigid\" evoke a sense of coldness and desolation, while terms like \"cuddle,\" \"caress,\" and \"comforter\" highlight the warmth and intimacy shared between the doves. Your poem revolves around themes of companionship, vulnerability, and the harshness of nature. It portrays the bond between two mourning doves as they seek warmth and solace amidst the cold and desolation of winter. The subject matter reflects on the fragility of life and the inevitable threats that come with it, emphasizing both the tenderness of their relationship and the looming presence of danger.
March 7th, 2025 19:53
Too warm
Doggerel Dave said:
Stap me vitals - you never told me you lived next door....
March 7th, 2025 19:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Stap me vitals - you never told me you lived next door....
March 7th, 2025 19:38
Mass hysteria
Friendship said:
This poem is very deep and dark, yet a little disturbing. Soren, Your poem explores the themes of destruction and transformation as prerequisites for social change, suggesting that dismantling existing structures, even functional ones, is necessary to address societal issues. The imagery of violence and sacrifice represents the harsh realities of change and the moral ambiguities involved in challenging the status quo. References to mythological figures like Charon, the ferryman of the dead, and the butcher evoke a sense of inevitability and darkness surrounding the process of change.
March 7th, 2025 17:22
Friendship said:
This poem is very deep and dark, yet a little disturbing. Soren, Your poem explores the themes of destruction and transformation as prerequisites for social change, suggesting that dismantling existing structures, even functional ones, is necessary to address societal issues. The imagery of violence and sacrifice represents the harsh realities of change and the moral ambiguities involved in challenging the status quo. References to mythological figures like Charon, the ferryman of the dead, and the butcher evoke a sense of inevitability and darkness surrounding the process of change.
March 7th, 2025 17:22
Between a rock and a hard place
Friendship said:
Soren , poem reflects on the unpredictability of life, the inherent dangers of living closely with nature, and the suddenness of loss. It serves as a meditation on the vulnerability of human existence in the face of powerful natural forces.it has me thinking!
March 7th, 2025 11:37
Friendship said:
Soren , poem reflects on the unpredictability of life, the inherent dangers of living closely with nature, and the suddenness of loss. It serves as a meditation on the vulnerability of human existence in the face of powerful natural forces.it has me thinking!
March 7th, 2025 11:37
Soliloquy of courage, honesty and forgiveness
Friendship said:
Wow a very powerful poem, Soren, Forgiveness seems to be a complex word to comprehend at times! Your poem centers around the theme of self-honesty and the courage required to confront one\'s true self. It emphasizes the importance of acknowledging one\'s flaws, taking responsibility for them, and the liberating power of forgiveness. Ultimately, it advocates for authenticity, suggesting that one must be true to oneself to foster genuine relationships with others. the psychological and emotional struggles of self-acceptance, the perils of self-deception, and the transformative power of forgiveness. It reflects on the internal battle one faces when confronting personal inadequacies and the importance of owning one\'s truth. Yet Your poem serves as a call to action, encouraging readers to confront their own truths, embrace their flaws, and find freedom through self-forgiveness. It aims to inspire courage in the pursuit of self-honesty and authenticity.
March 7th, 2025 11:21
Friendship said:
Wow a very powerful poem, Soren, Forgiveness seems to be a complex word to comprehend at times! Your poem centers around the theme of self-honesty and the courage required to confront one\'s true self. It emphasizes the importance of acknowledging one\'s flaws, taking responsibility for them, and the liberating power of forgiveness. Ultimately, it advocates for authenticity, suggesting that one must be true to oneself to foster genuine relationships with others. the psychological and emotional struggles of self-acceptance, the perils of self-deception, and the transformative power of forgiveness. It reflects on the internal battle one faces when confronting personal inadequacies and the importance of owning one\'s truth. Yet Your poem serves as a call to action, encouraging readers to confront their own truths, embrace their flaws, and find freedom through self-forgiveness. It aims to inspire courage in the pursuit of self-honesty and authenticity.
March 7th, 2025 11:21
Flies
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Seemed like a mesterly picture of decay embedded into our lives. Great write
March 7th, 2025 07:49
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Seemed like a mesterly picture of decay embedded into our lives. Great write
March 7th, 2025 07:49
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