Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Lines on the floor
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words come from some amazing places soren.
Andy
March 30th, 2025 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words come from some amazing places soren.
Andy
March 30th, 2025 01:52
Lines on the floor
NinjaGirl said:
\"but not before it leaves marks on the floor\" what a beautiful closing line!
March 29th, 2025 14:34
NinjaGirl said:
\"but not before it leaves marks on the floor\" what a beautiful closing line!
March 29th, 2025 14:34
Lines on the floor
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, the materials that go into all that been written and read. A wonderful read, my friend! 🌹
March 29th, 2025 11:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, the materials that go into all that been written and read. A wonderful read, my friend! 🌹
March 29th, 2025 11:21
Lines on the floor
orchidee said:
I make the mess, and KP clears up after me - soot, dust, dirt, etc. lol.
March 29th, 2025 09:38
orchidee said:
I make the mess, and KP clears up after me - soot, dust, dirt, etc. lol.
March 29th, 2025 09:38
Lines on the floor
MDStone said:
Soren,
I love the depth and meaning found here in smoke and ashes. The imagery stirs and connects with the fires of other trees burned into souls ; and like the smell of burning leaves delight the nose, these words delight the soul. Thanks for sharing.
March 29th, 2025 08:41
MDStone said:
Soren,
I love the depth and meaning found here in smoke and ashes. The imagery stirs and connects with the fires of other trees burned into souls ; and like the smell of burning leaves delight the nose, these words delight the soul. Thanks for sharing.
March 29th, 2025 08:41
Lines on the floor
arqios said:
We don’t always think of it that way but books were once forests and reeds and fibres. That just blew my mind away! 🙏🏻🕊️
March 29th, 2025 05:31
arqios said:
We don’t always think of it that way but books were once forests and reeds and fibres. That just blew my mind away! 🙏🏻🕊️
March 29th, 2025 05:31
Lines on the floor
Poetic Licence said:
A very enjoyable read while relaxing with me tea, lovely write
March 29th, 2025 04:45
Poetic Licence said:
A very enjoyable read while relaxing with me tea, lovely write
March 29th, 2025 04:45
Sweet and bitter
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren but the sweetness of cake will always come to us all in time.
Andy
March 29th, 2025 02:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren but the sweetness of cake will always come to us all in time.
Andy
March 29th, 2025 02:55
Sweet and bitter
Thomas W Case said:
I li9ke the symbolism and metaphors. Great work.
March 28th, 2025 09:29
Thomas W Case said:
I li9ke the symbolism and metaphors. Great work.
March 28th, 2025 09:29
Sweet and bitter
rebellion_in_sanity said:
An absolute gem. You may laugh but it teansported me to a state of mind when I listen to gothic rock - dark and deep. The contrasts are masterful and they feel absolutely natural - a rare feat.
March 28th, 2025 08:10
rebellion_in_sanity said:
An absolute gem. You may laugh but it teansported me to a state of mind when I listen to gothic rock - dark and deep. The contrasts are masterful and they feel absolutely natural - a rare feat.
March 28th, 2025 08:10
Sweet and bitter
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Soren, this is a potent little poem that really packs a powerful punch! I love how you explore the theme—how beauty can hide rot, how love and hate blur. Love is just the icing on a much uglier, hate-rich cake. It\'s dark, thoughtful, and layered in such a compact space. Really well done, my friend. 🌹👏
March 28th, 2025 07:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Soren, this is a potent little poem that really packs a powerful punch! I love how you explore the theme—how beauty can hide rot, how love and hate blur. Love is just the icing on a much uglier, hate-rich cake. It\'s dark, thoughtful, and layered in such a compact space. Really well done, my friend. 🌹👏
March 28th, 2025 07:46
Never good enough
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Soren. Some great lines and perfectly written. Nicely done.
March 28th, 2025 07:37
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Soren. Some great lines and perfectly written. Nicely done.
March 28th, 2025 07:37
Sweet and bitter
arqios said:
The bit about gold rusting got me quite good as it isn’t physically possible! Good stuff🙏🏻🕊️
March 28th, 2025 05:22
arqios said:
The bit about gold rusting got me quite good as it isn’t physically possible! Good stuff🙏🏻🕊️
March 28th, 2025 05:22
Sweet and bitter
David Wakeling said:
yes Love is often confused with Lust.This raises some deep questions.Powerful
March 28th, 2025 05:19
David Wakeling said:
yes Love is often confused with Lust.This raises some deep questions.Powerful
March 28th, 2025 05:19
Sweet and bitter
Poetic Licence said:
That sums up my experience of marriage very nicely, wonderful write enjoyed the read
March 28th, 2025 05:16
Poetic Licence said:
That sums up my experience of marriage very nicely, wonderful write enjoyed the read
March 28th, 2025 05:16
Sweet and bitter
orchidee said:
Ahh, more recipe ideas for me to feed KP with. lol.
March 28th, 2025 03:54
orchidee said:
Ahh, more recipe ideas for me to feed KP with. lol.
March 28th, 2025 03:54
Never good enough
Goldfinch60 said:
Opposites do attract soren but they can learn to live together in harmony.
Andy
March 28th, 2025 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Opposites do attract soren but they can learn to live together in harmony.
Andy
March 28th, 2025 02:22
Poems in the wind
Teddy.15 said:
Wow dearest sorrenbarret I\'m glad I haven\'t missed this masterpiece. Absolutely everything of you is in here. Kudos my friend such style and modesty humbling your reader with your class. 🌹 Ps. I\'ve missed you, I\'m on some courses so my time has been taken, I\'ll be back soon dear friend. 🌹
March 27th, 2025 15:44
Teddy.15 said:
Wow dearest sorrenbarret I\'m glad I haven\'t missed this masterpiece. Absolutely everything of you is in here. Kudos my friend such style and modesty humbling your reader with your class. 🌹 Ps. I\'ve missed you, I\'m on some courses so my time has been taken, I\'ll be back soon dear friend. 🌹
March 27th, 2025 15:44
Old coat
Damaso said:
\"In Storm Homeless, a Hearth and Fire\" I really liked. Cheers.
March 27th, 2025 15:10
Damaso said:
\"In Storm Homeless, a Hearth and Fire\" I really liked. Cheers.
March 27th, 2025 15:10
Never good enough
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This could really be read into any dysfunctional relationship. A dysfunctional parent/child relationship came to mind when I read the words, \"Your observations shun corrections begun my errors become your regret\". But, it need not be a parent/child relationship. It could be a dysfunctional relationship between a couple (married or otherwise), or any other relationship. I love the way the poem starts...feeling very disjointed and yet, reminiscent of Yoda! To me, that is profound because something disjointed hardly seems wise (Yoda), and yet there is an inherent wisdom in the disjointed words. Whether the Yoda bit was intentional, it is how it hit me at least by the second half of the first line. Anywho, really love this. Yoda says, \"From me, a favorite this is. Yes, hmmm.\" 🌹👏
March 27th, 2025 07:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This could really be read into any dysfunctional relationship. A dysfunctional parent/child relationship came to mind when I read the words, \"Your observations shun corrections begun my errors become your regret\". But, it need not be a parent/child relationship. It could be a dysfunctional relationship between a couple (married or otherwise), or any other relationship. I love the way the poem starts...feeling very disjointed and yet, reminiscent of Yoda! To me, that is profound because something disjointed hardly seems wise (Yoda), and yet there is an inherent wisdom in the disjointed words. Whether the Yoda bit was intentional, it is how it hit me at least by the second half of the first line. Anywho, really love this. Yoda says, \"From me, a favorite this is. Yes, hmmm.\" 🌹👏
March 27th, 2025 07:46
Never good enough
MDStone said:
So often what draws us together is that we are different and then what drives us apart is that we are different. Well done, dear Poet.
March 27th, 2025 06:29
MDStone said:
So often what draws us together is that we are different and then what drives us apart is that we are different. Well done, dear Poet.
March 27th, 2025 06:29
Never good enough
Lorenz said:
\'\' Two side of one coin ,born twins of a same mother \'\'
For the mercurian I am this sentence is a mental delight ! \'\'
March 27th, 2025 06:24
Lorenz said:
\'\' Two side of one coin ,born twins of a same mother \'\'
For the mercurian I am this sentence is a mental delight ! \'\'
March 27th, 2025 06:24
Never good enough
arqios said:
Reminds me of shoulder angel and devil and a host of other things. Very engaging read! 🕊🙏🏻
March 27th, 2025 05:27
arqios said:
Reminds me of shoulder angel and devil and a host of other things. Very engaging read! 🕊🙏🏻
March 27th, 2025 05:27
Never good enough
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of never living up to someone\'s expectations be a parent or partner, no matter what you do or how hard you try it will never be enough, lovely write
March 27th, 2025 05:00
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of never living up to someone\'s expectations be a parent or partner, no matter what you do or how hard you try it will never be enough, lovely write
March 27th, 2025 05:00
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