Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Broken toys
teardrop said:

Ice cream boats on lemonade seas , you penned a very beautiful piece here poet. Looking forward to
reading more of your work.

April 19th, 2025 06:56

Who died and made you God
teardrop said:

Words penned perfectly. Message well spoken. Judge not, throw the first stone, etc. Thank you for a beautiful read this morning.

April 19th, 2025 05:51

Bard
Reynaldo Casison said:

Nice one Soren

Eloquently Reflective and profound

April 19th, 2025 04:52

Not what it seems
Teddy.15 said:

Absolutely wonderful, I\'ve actually had the priveliage to hold a chameleon in my very hands and watch it change colour in Madagascar in the wild, your metaphor is truly graceful. Whether is the serpent or the angel. 🌹

April 19th, 2025 03:46

Not what it seems
arqios said:

A definite fave, Soren. Nicely presented on the page as wellπŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

April 19th, 2025 03:08

Acts
Goldfinch60 said:

But those birds will live in your words soren.

Andy

April 19th, 2025 01:41

Muse\'s blood
shadowbones said:

Really love this poem.

April 18th, 2025 23:09

Passing on
maydanae said:

I love the use of repetitive rhyming here in the different stanzas! Very simple but is nicely tied together :)

April 18th, 2025 21:20

Acts
Tristan Robert Lange said:

An excellent poem that acknowledges the reality that the very animals we admire are the same animals \"we\" kill to eat in a savory meal. (I put \"we\" in quotes because I am a vegetarian...but at one time I was not). Anyway, this is a powerful poem, Soren. πŸŒΉπŸ‘

April 18th, 2025 16:12

Acts
Teddy.15 said:

I\'m not too sure you should ever share this with KFC 🀣 you always write with grace dear friend 🌹

April 18th, 2025 15:37

Acts
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

April 18th, 2025 09:59

Acts
Jerry Reynolds said:

A fine Write, SB. We all love the birds.

April 18th, 2025 07:28

Acts
Mutley Ravishes said:

Love the birds, Soren! Many of them come so close to the human world. Perhaps they\'re being prepared? Yes, I have eaten many of them.
Beautiful write.

April 18th, 2025 05:15

Acts
Poetic Licence said:

I sense this is about killing beautiful birds just to have a bit of lunch at the shooting party, something I do not agree with, nicely crafted write

April 18th, 2025 04:55

Acts
arqios said:

A meal of game done well is a wonderful thing and yet its tragedy 🎭 brings us to a deeper awareness of what surrounds us.πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

April 18th, 2025 03:33

Acts
David Wakeling said:

Birds are wonderful.They sing and fly.This is a clever tribute.Well done comendatore

April 18th, 2025 03:00

Muse\'s blood
Goldfinch60 said:

Poems come from so many places that reach our minds soren.

Andy

April 18th, 2025 01:56

Flower
Kevin Hulme said:

Didn\'t know all that . Good write also.

April 17th, 2025 19:34

You will argue
mya said:

I love the feeling of uncertainty in this, and the questions with no easy answers are so thought provoking too!! amazing piece.

April 17th, 2025 14:30

Muse\'s blood
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

April 17th, 2025 10:00

Muse\'s blood
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Writing has been my life, my saving grace, the way I get to process my inner and outer worlds and connect with others in the world around me. It has been a blessing to me beyond all compare. Well done in expressing that so eloquently, Soren. πŸŒΉπŸ‘

April 17th, 2025 08:37

Muse\'s blood
arqios said:

A poem’s intimate history no less!πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

April 17th, 2025 06:34

Muse\'s blood
Poetic Licence said:

Writing is what keeps me slightly connected to the normal world, and has been the only outlet i have ever felt comfortable in saying i feel, loved the read

April 17th, 2025 06:18

Muse\'s blood
David Wakeling said:

Well-constructed, with the trademark middle rhyme. A tribute to poesy. Well done mi amigo

April 17th, 2025 05:29

Muse\'s blood
MDStone said:

I find it therapeutic to write and read. It’s like a piece of art. Created Uniquely by one’s craft of constructing felt experiences that are common to all. Thoughts, feelings, art that flow from the very soul. Well done, Soren.

April 17th, 2025 04:56

Muse\'s blood
dimpy said:

ahaan.. Excellent write-up...

April 17th, 2025 03:58

Redeemer pains through window panes
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words soren, more things that I didn\'t know.

An dy

April 17th, 2025 01:48

Scent of the past
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

Intelligently written. A poem about past and future which one has no control over one or the other.

April 16th, 2025 13:18

Who died and made you God
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

A powerful message. Well written and stated.

April 16th, 2025 12:56

Redeemer pains through window panes
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

April 16th, 2025 12:05



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