Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Chuang Tzu
Bella Shepard said:

\"dance nature\'s dance\", such a perfect metaphor for giving one\'s self wholly and completely to the rhyrhm of life. You express beautifully the flow that emcompases us all, if we simply allow it to. What could be more wonderful!!!

July 21st, 2024 10:04

Chuang Tzu
2781 said:

I don\'t know why, but I am thinking of a winding path on level ground.


July 21st, 2024 08:43

Chuang Tzu
Jerry Reynolds said:

Goor write, SB.


July 21st, 2024 08:18

Hope
orchidee said:

This reminds me - I played Russian Roulette wrong. I loaded all the chambers EXCEPT one. Doh!
A game I should play with KP. lol.

July 21st, 2024 01:48

Hope
Goldfinch60 said:

Intriguing lines soren.

Andy

July 21st, 2024 00:54

Hope
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work.

July 20th, 2024 23:32

Hope
Thad Wilk said:

Short and succinct,
that\'s what hope is surely! πŸ‘
Great read,
penned superbly!! 😊
Best regards poet!! ✌️
Thad

July 20th, 2024 12:40

Hope
Teddy.15 said:

Your lines are most powerful and I can\'t help but see Politics. 🌹

July 20th, 2024 10:59

The dagger
Goldfinch60 said:

Strong words soren but life is so much better in reality.

Andy

July 20th, 2024 01:13

The wash
Dan Williams said:

OK. Short but to the point. Nice.

July 19th, 2024 23:42

The dagger
Cassie58 said:

A sign of our times. The knives are out and on the streets. So many young people killed in the blink of an eye. A worrying trend. Wish it was all a dream, but it isn’t. Your lines create strong imagery and concern dear poet.

July 19th, 2024 23:33

The dagger
Bella Shepard said:

You extoll beautifully the wonderful properties of sleep, to heal grief and put all in perspective. Kudo my friend!

July 19th, 2024 13:24

The dagger
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work. Great flow.

July 19th, 2024 10:44

The dagger
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

July 19th, 2024 09:49

The dagger
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

July 19th, 2024 09:00

The dagger
Teddy.15 said:

Dreams, one of my favourite subjects and you just gave me a glimpse of what it\'s like when everything returns sweet. 🌹

July 19th, 2024 08:37

The wash
Teddy.15 said:

Simply beautiful 🌹

July 19th, 2024 03:23

The wash
Goldfinch60 said:

Opposites seem to attract in strange ways in our lives soren nut all comes clear in the end.

Andy

July 19th, 2024 01:18

The wash
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful.

July 19th, 2024 00:06

The wash
Bella Shepard said:

Each day begins anew my friend? In the dark of night the clutter of mind is washed away, that we may begin anew to face each day. The cycle of life, beautifully written.

July 18th, 2024 10:25

The wash
Neville said:

This, or these could very easily be two separate but otherwise inextricably linked poems ..

Conversely as one, they comprise more than the sum of its secular parts .. Neville

July 18th, 2024 07:22

The wash
orchidee said:

It has to be symbolic when it says in the Bible - they washed their garments clean in the blood of the Lamb (Jesus). Otherwise, blood will stain and not clean.
Or is it a metaphor? Or an analogy? Something like that anyway. I\'m not sure of the differences.

July 18th, 2024 07:15

Doubt
Cassie58 said:

A thought provoking write. Guilt isn’t an easy emotion to deal with for most people. It leaves them suffering. I wonder how people who have committed heinous crimes deal with it? Maybe they have the power to click off the thinking switch altogether. Great write and visuals.

July 18th, 2024 01:44

Doubt
Goldfinch60 said:

Guilt needs to admitted and the world would be a better place soren.

Andy

July 18th, 2024 01:24

Friends, Republicans, Countrymen
Accidental Poet said:

A great read soren. Trump or Biden, either way we lose. What if there was an election, and no one showed up to vote? Think that would get the message across? 🫀

July 17th, 2024 21:18

Doubt
Thad Wilk said:

Powerful penning, πŸ–‹οΈ
very evocative indeed!
Great rhyme, flow
and blend and my
pleasure to read!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad

July 17th, 2024 19:53

Doubt
Thomas W Case said:

Wow. Powerful work.

July 17th, 2024 16:47

Doubt
Neville said:


Guilt is undoubtedly the most destructive of all emotions .. a great analysis in poetic form ..

July 17th, 2024 12:56

Doubt
hzugman said:

Good write, Soren.

July 17th, 2024 10:19

Doubt
orchidee said:

A fine write SB.

July 17th, 2024 09:13



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