Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Sleep child
Cassie58 said:
Nightmares. So graphic is this write Soren. You reminded me why I donβt visit the butchers. Itβs the hanging carcasses that send my mind wandering. Eight lines which have brutal impact.
December 6th, 2024 04:35
Cassie58 said:
Nightmares. So graphic is this write Soren. You reminded me why I donβt visit the butchers. Itβs the hanging carcasses that send my mind wandering. Eight lines which have brutal impact.
December 6th, 2024 04:35
The bee and the fox
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, we all return to where we were from.
Andy
December 6th, 2024 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, we all return to where we were from.
Andy
December 6th, 2024 02:19
The bee and the fox
Dan Williams said:
You manage to convey most of a message in ten lines that takes me five verses. This is more fine work.
December 6th, 2024 00:56
Dan Williams said:
You manage to convey most of a message in ten lines that takes me five verses. This is more fine work.
December 6th, 2024 00:56
The bee and the fox
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem
short and sweet!! π
Great rhyme and flow,
to read a real treat!!!π―π€©
Best regards βοΈ peace Thad
December 5th, 2024 21:38
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem
short and sweet!! π
Great rhyme and flow,
to read a real treat!!!π―π€©
Best regards βοΈ peace Thad
December 5th, 2024 21:38
The bee and the fox
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. The rhyme and meter is impeccable.
December 5th, 2024 12:54
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. The rhyme and meter is impeccable.
December 5th, 2024 12:54
The bee and the fox
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My dog once ran away and eventually came running home side-by-side with a fox. No joke. The two made friends! LOL! She\'s also been stung by bees before. They did not make friends! π€£ A wonderful poem, Soren. Enjoyed it thoroughly, my friend! β€οΈπ
December 5th, 2024 08:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My dog once ran away and eventually came running home side-by-side with a fox. No joke. The two made friends! LOL! She\'s also been stung by bees before. They did not make friends! π€£ A wonderful poem, Soren. Enjoyed it thoroughly, my friend! β€οΈπ
December 5th, 2024 08:15
The bee and the fox
arqios said:
An interesting meeting of differing species, coated in humour and possibly more!
December 5th, 2024 06:42
arqios said:
An interesting meeting of differing species, coated in humour and possibly more!
December 5th, 2024 06:42
The bee and the fox
Poetic Licence said:
A very enjoyable read, thank you Soren
December 5th, 2024 06:36
Poetic Licence said:
A very enjoyable read, thank you Soren
December 5th, 2024 06:36
The bee and the fox
Teddy.15 said:
Fabulous rhyme and subject we can never forget natures beauty when you are around, love your imagery, and your very clever poetry. πΉ
December 5th, 2024 04:06
Teddy.15 said:
Fabulous rhyme and subject we can never forget natures beauty when you are around, love your imagery, and your very clever poetry. πΉ
December 5th, 2024 04:06
Mourn the morn
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words soren, may that sadness bring light to our lives in time.
Andy
December 5th, 2024 02:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words soren, may that sadness bring light to our lives in time.
Andy
December 5th, 2024 02:06
Mourn the morn
Thad Wilk said:
ππ
Two thumbs up my friend!!π€©
A very evocative piece
of art, great rhyme, flow and blend!π―
My pleasure to read indeed!! π
Best regards βοΈ Thad
December 4th, 2024 21:27
Thad Wilk said:
ππ
Two thumbs up my friend!!π€©
A very evocative piece
of art, great rhyme, flow and blend!π―
My pleasure to read indeed!! π
Best regards βοΈ Thad
December 4th, 2024 21:27
Mourn the morn
David Wakeling said:
This made me think of the days on the farm where everything is dependent on good weather but the good weather never comes.Powerful poem
December 4th, 2024 17:40
David Wakeling said:
This made me think of the days on the farm where everything is dependent on good weather but the good weather never comes.Powerful poem
December 4th, 2024 17:40
Mourn the morn
aDarkerMind said:
dark indeed Soren,
and worthy of many reads and many more comments.
December 4th, 2024 13:33
aDarkerMind said:
dark indeed Soren,
and worthy of many reads and many more comments.
December 4th, 2024 13:33
Mourn the morn
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem is filled with despair and darkness and yet a glimmer of hope. Love the last line. Indeed. A hauntingly beautiful write my friend! πΉπ
December 4th, 2024 09:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem is filled with despair and darkness and yet a glimmer of hope. Love the last line. Indeed. A hauntingly beautiful write my friend! πΉπ
December 4th, 2024 09:56
Mourn the morn
orchidee said:
I dunno if it\'s morn[ing], noon, or night. By the time I found out what \'carpe diem\' meant, there was no day left to seize - night had fallen! Doh! lol.
December 4th, 2024 09:40
orchidee said:
I dunno if it\'s morn[ing], noon, or night. By the time I found out what \'carpe diem\' meant, there was no day left to seize - night had fallen! Doh! lol.
December 4th, 2024 09:40
Mourn the morn
Cassie58 said:
Darker than dark, but still with a glint of feint light. Brimful of metaphor and wonderful language Soren.
December 4th, 2024 08:13
Cassie58 said:
Darker than dark, but still with a glint of feint light. Brimful of metaphor and wonderful language Soren.
December 4th, 2024 08:13
Mourn the morn
Teddy.15 said:
Your language is outstanding in this, I felt I was dancing all the way through, right to the end, brilliant title and imagery still the king π€£
December 4th, 2024 05:38
Teddy.15 said:
Your language is outstanding in this, I felt I was dancing all the way through, right to the end, brilliant title and imagery still the king π€£
December 4th, 2024 05:38
Mourn the morn
Neville said:
I fear we are about to loose it .. there are too many fingers hovering above too many buttons .. and for now, I shall keep digging ..
December 4th, 2024 05:37
Neville said:
I fear we are about to loose it .. there are too many fingers hovering above too many buttons .. and for now, I shall keep digging ..
December 4th, 2024 05:37
Mourn the morn
arqios said:
This poem captures the essence of a world steeped in despair yet holding onto fragments of hope and beauty. It\'s captivating imagery and metaphors evoke a powerful sense of struggle and resilience, highlighting the complex interplay between light and darkness in our lives. Another stirring poem Soren!
December 4th, 2024 05:16
arqios said:
This poem captures the essence of a world steeped in despair yet holding onto fragments of hope and beauty. It\'s captivating imagery and metaphors evoke a powerful sense of struggle and resilience, highlighting the complex interplay between light and darkness in our lives. Another stirring poem Soren!
December 4th, 2024 05:16
Jewel discarded
Cassie58 said:
There is loveliness everywhere for those who look. Sadly some donβt have the time to notice what is within their grasp. Beautiful poetry and multifaceted too. A jewel of a poem Soren. Fine work. A lovely read. This touched me particularly regarding the natural environment.
December 4th, 2024 03:41
Cassie58 said:
There is loveliness everywhere for those who look. Sadly some donβt have the time to notice what is within their grasp. Beautiful poetry and multifaceted too. A jewel of a poem Soren. Fine work. A lovely read. This touched me particularly regarding the natural environment.
December 4th, 2024 03:41
Jewel discarded
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren and so very true, poems can come from so many items and places.
Andy
December 4th, 2024 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren and so very true, poems can come from so many items and places.
Andy
December 4th, 2024 01:56
Jewel discarded
Dan Williams said:
Damn the critics, a jewel indeed. Hard to look past where you are bound. Nice.
December 4th, 2024 01:21
Dan Williams said:
Damn the critics, a jewel indeed. Hard to look past where you are bound. Nice.
December 4th, 2024 01:21
Jewel discarded
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem and
thoughts penned!! π
There\'s beauty all around
abound and still yet found!
So it\'s told,
One mans trash ποΈ
another man\'s gold! πͺ
Great read love the
rhyme scheme!! π
Best regards βοΈ Thad
December 3rd, 2024 18:35
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem and
thoughts penned!! π
There\'s beauty all around
abound and still yet found!
So it\'s told,
One mans trash ποΈ
another man\'s gold! πͺ
Great read love the
rhyme scheme!! π
Best regards βοΈ Thad
December 3rd, 2024 18:35
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