Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
It doesn\'t matter anymore
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great job, Soren. This is a deep exploration of time, disillusionment, and existential inquiry, of which you know I am a fan of. 🤣 This poem causes readers to reflect on their own beliefs about truth, morality, and the passage of time, leaving them with profound questions about life’s meaning…rather than answers, the hallmark of great philosophical thought and poetry. Again, well done on this my friend. 🌹👏
February 27th, 2025 18:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great job, Soren. This is a deep exploration of time, disillusionment, and existential inquiry, of which you know I am a fan of. 🤣 This poem causes readers to reflect on their own beliefs about truth, morality, and the passage of time, leaving them with profound questions about life’s meaning…rather than answers, the hallmark of great philosophical thought and poetry. Again, well done on this my friend. 🌹👏
February 27th, 2025 18:10
It doesn\'t matter anymore
David Wakeling said:
This is brilliant.Rhyme cadence and purpose.What more could they want.Exceptional
February 27th, 2025 15:00
David Wakeling said:
This is brilliant.Rhyme cadence and purpose.What more could they want.Exceptional
February 27th, 2025 15:00
It doesn\'t matter anymore
Salvia.S said:
Beautifully written, thought-provoking, and emotionally resonant. Your poem explores complex themes and emotions with simplicity and clarity. Well done!
February 27th, 2025 11:59
Salvia.S said:
Beautifully written, thought-provoking, and emotionally resonant. Your poem explores complex themes and emotions with simplicity and clarity. Well done!
February 27th, 2025 11:59
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NinjaGirl said:
And time continues to pass...until we do. But one day it will be better...but it will get worse first. Beautifully written, I love this poem.
February 27th, 2025 10:34
NinjaGirl said:
And time continues to pass...until we do. But one day it will be better...but it will get worse first. Beautifully written, I love this poem.
February 27th, 2025 10:34
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whats write for me said:
A stark remembrance of indigenous peoples in North America. Great writing and a good read.
February 27th, 2025 09:14
whats write for me said:
A stark remembrance of indigenous peoples in North America. Great writing and a good read.
February 27th, 2025 09:14
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Poetic Licence said:
As we age with time I guess we get a little wiser and knowledgeable and learn to see the world as it really is, not how we wished or believe, and sadly that does make for good viewing, really enjoyed today\'s offering
February 27th, 2025 08:02
Poetic Licence said:
As we age with time I guess we get a little wiser and knowledgeable and learn to see the world as it really is, not how we wished or believe, and sadly that does make for good viewing, really enjoyed today\'s offering
February 27th, 2025 08:02
It doesn\'t matter anymore
MDStone said:
What a great reminder of how ephemeral our lives are. Like looking into the mirror and seeing past, present, and future all at the same time. Thanks for giving me a time of reflection as I read your words. As always, masterfully written.
February 27th, 2025 07:38
MDStone said:
What a great reminder of how ephemeral our lives are. Like looking into the mirror and seeing past, present, and future all at the same time. Thanks for giving me a time of reflection as I read your words. As always, masterfully written.
February 27th, 2025 07:38
It doesn\'t matter anymore
Teddy.15 said:
Us humans have a lot in common with sunset, they are each unique and full of fiery colour, yet as we grow old they do not
A very powerful piece and sad what with your very brilliant title,
Years through a torn sieve pour
Day melts to night, night condenses into day
A frown, just a wilted smile I once wore
Black of night, light of day all turn to gray
I guess this will always depend on if our glass was half empty or full. Such wonderful reflection of an incredible time of day when that sun comes to rest leaving the day behind. 🌹
February 27th, 2025 05:26
Teddy.15 said:
Us humans have a lot in common with sunset, they are each unique and full of fiery colour, yet as we grow old they do not
A very powerful piece and sad what with your very brilliant title,
Years through a torn sieve pour
Day melts to night, night condenses into day
A frown, just a wilted smile I once wore
Black of night, light of day all turn to gray
I guess this will always depend on if our glass was half empty or full. Such wonderful reflection of an incredible time of day when that sun comes to rest leaving the day behind. 🌹
February 27th, 2025 05:26
It doesn\'t matter anymore
Cassie58 said:
Sadly when you look at the news and what is going on in the world your title seems very apt. In the UK everything seems topsy turvy. We have to make our own happiness, especially as we age. Still trying to see blue sky through rose tinted glasses. A lovely poem sorenbarrett. Fine imagery.
February 27th, 2025 04:03
Cassie58 said:
Sadly when you look at the news and what is going on in the world your title seems very apt. In the UK everything seems topsy turvy. We have to make our own happiness, especially as we age. Still trying to see blue sky through rose tinted glasses. A lovely poem sorenbarrett. Fine imagery.
February 27th, 2025 04:03
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Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderfully true words soren, such an awful shame.
Andy
February 27th, 2025 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderfully true words soren, such an awful shame.
Andy
February 27th, 2025 02:49
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David Wakeling said:
The history of the native indians is quite sad. Quite a nice tribute here though.Well done
February 26th, 2025 16:58
David Wakeling said:
The history of the native indians is quite sad. Quite a nice tribute here though.Well done
February 26th, 2025 16:58
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Distant View said:
Yes, and these are the TRUE American people! People who have suffered treachery and exploitation -- not to mention massacre! Treaties signed and later torn up by the white man because gold was found in \"them thar hills!\"
February 26th, 2025 16:21
Distant View said:
Yes, and these are the TRUE American people! People who have suffered treachery and exploitation -- not to mention massacre! Treaties signed and later torn up by the white man because gold was found in \"them thar hills!\"
February 26th, 2025 16:21
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GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Always appreciate your work my friend.
February 26th, 2025 16:13
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Always appreciate your work my friend.
February 26th, 2025 16:13
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NinjaGirl said:
There\'s so much unsaid, that should have been said
February 26th, 2025 12:51
NinjaGirl said:
There\'s so much unsaid, that should have been said
February 26th, 2025 12:51
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Neville said:
absolutely fascinating not just this post but the whole First Nation history and culture .. Neville
February 26th, 2025 11:49
Neville said:
absolutely fascinating not just this post but the whole First Nation history and culture .. Neville
February 26th, 2025 11:49
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orchidee said:
I name KP Big Chief Trout - or She Who Must Be Obeyed. It don\'t matter if I obey her or not, she still does whatever she wants! lol. We agree in our marriage. I suggest something, then we always do what she wants. I say to her\' You\'re gonna do it anyaay, whatever I say or think!\' heehee.
February 26th, 2025 11:37
orchidee said:
I name KP Big Chief Trout - or She Who Must Be Obeyed. It don\'t matter if I obey her or not, she still does whatever she wants! lol. We agree in our marriage. I suggest something, then we always do what she wants. I say to her\' You\'re gonna do it anyaay, whatever I say or think!\' heehee.
February 26th, 2025 11:37
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes!!! Love this! The white pages of Colonial and American history bleed red. No matter how white we make the pages, the blood soaks through and we, as artists and social commentators, cannot allow that history to be forgotten. Wonderful write, my friend! Well done, Soren. 🌹👏
February 26th, 2025 11:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes!!! Love this! The white pages of Colonial and American history bleed red. No matter how white we make the pages, the blood soaks through and we, as artists and social commentators, cannot allow that history to be forgotten. Wonderful write, my friend! Well done, Soren. 🌹👏
February 26th, 2025 11:14
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Teddy.15 said:
History repeating,? I hope not but there isn\'t so much hope is there, a dark brilliant poem my dear friend. The thing is that no matter how far the lunacy goes we as humans seem to just except it. 🌹
February 26th, 2025 09:08
Teddy.15 said:
History repeating,? I hope not but there isn\'t so much hope is there, a dark brilliant poem my dear friend. The thing is that no matter how far the lunacy goes we as humans seem to just except it. 🌹
February 26th, 2025 09:08
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Poetic Licence said:
How one country completely ignores the facts of their history and how they got there country, by massacring the native American Indian, very close to my heart and am delighted to see people writing and reminding people what a great race of people they were and are.
February 26th, 2025 08:48
Poetic Licence said:
How one country completely ignores the facts of their history and how they got there country, by massacring the native American Indian, very close to my heart and am delighted to see people writing and reminding people what a great race of people they were and are.
February 26th, 2025 08:48
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Lorenz said:
Bravo ! I also have a text (to come)on these martyred native peoples !
February 26th, 2025 06:36
Lorenz said:
Bravo ! I also have a text (to come)on these martyred native peoples !
February 26th, 2025 06:36
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arqios said:
And se we endeavour to fill the gaps of our cultural consciousness with poetry that reflects and depicts people, places and events that are now inaccessible or erased from said consciousness 🙏🏻🕊
February 26th, 2025 05:34
arqios said:
And se we endeavour to fill the gaps of our cultural consciousness with poetry that reflects and depicts people, places and events that are now inaccessible or erased from said consciousness 🙏🏻🕊
February 26th, 2025 05:34
True story (to be or not to be)
Demar Desu said:
Damn this was a tough read… still a poem that needs to be read
February 26th, 2025 02:54
Demar Desu said:
Damn this was a tough read… still a poem that needs to be read
February 26th, 2025 02:54
True story (to be or not to be)
Goldfinch60 said:
It is amazing how people change when reality come to them soren.
Andy
February 26th, 2025 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
It is amazing how people change when reality come to them soren.
Andy
February 26th, 2025 02:50
Secret of the hive
NafisaSB said:
your last line says it all - beautiful poem
February 26th, 2025 00:42
NafisaSB said:
your last line says it all - beautiful poem
February 26th, 2025 00:42
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