Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Trapped
Mutley Ravishes said:

Prisoner of memory? Great write, Soren.

November 17th, 2024 06:11

Trapped
Neville said:



.......................... exemplary poetry will neva loose it\'s universal appeal .. and that\'s just me trying to think outside the box .. 😎🐧👍

November 17th, 2024 05:59

Trapped
2781 said:

Solomon wrote, we are caught in an evil time.

November 17th, 2024 05:58

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arqios said:

Love it! “Intellection” now that’s gonna fly, perhaps not far but it will lift off for sure.

November 17th, 2024 05:57

One in all, all in one
Amit.Singh said:

https://wmmtboc2013.fpo.pt/

November 17th, 2024 04:09

Bonsai
Goldfinch60 said:

So true, I used to grow bonsai many, many years ago.

Andy

November 17th, 2024 02:49

Bonsai
Doggerel Dave said:

For me it is tree by name only. Different entirely. Love and admire both.
Bonsai, well maintained by an expert and with plenty of age is fascinating and right up there with high end art.
A tree, perhaps an old English oak, a majestic gum tree (eucalyptus) has power and majesty.
Your poem made me sort this out, Soren.




November 16th, 2024 23:49

Bonsai
David Wakeling said:

This is a great poem. Short and sweet. The truth is though I don\'t think Bonsai is about the tree much at all. I think it allows the gardener to get away from his nagging wife for some quality time.

November 16th, 2024 20:58

Serrated pages
2781 said:

Sounds like my shed.

November 16th, 2024 19:28

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2781 said:



November 16th, 2024 19:28

Bonsai
Neville said:



I have a thing about bonsai .. it is of course just another passion .. and can take over one\'s life .. deceiving little bugga\'s too, just when you think one may have died on ya .. it may spring into life again ..

November 16th, 2024 10:43

Bonsai
Cassie58 said:

Lovely. A miniature tree. Just because it is small, it doesn’t take away from its worth and its beauty. Some very nice things come in small packages. I love these trees. All that stunted growth producing something so visually beautiful and it can grow indoors.

November 16th, 2024 09:37

Bonsai
Teddy.15 said:

I see a very special tree that brings peace yet is really hard to grow and to keep therefore defeating the peace lol I have very recently learnt how to grow orchids. Beautiful as ever dearest sorrenbarret 🌹 could also be metaphor for humans 💙

November 16th, 2024 09:06

Serrated pages
Neilton said:

Impressed by your writing i admit !
You conveyed the emotions so well

November 16th, 2024 09:04

Bonsai
orchidee said:

A fine write SB.

November 16th, 2024 07:51

Bonsai
Maplespal said:

It is more than just a tree,
it remains all the images you see.
Each time you look at the tree it still be,
new visions your mind does see.

November 16th, 2024 07:17

Bonsai
arqios said:

Stunted by intention pure at its core.

November 16th, 2024 07:16

Bonsai
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Ah the beloved bonsai! And I am not going to lie, this gave me nostalgic memories of Pat Morita as Mr. Myagi! That aside and on its own, this pays the little tree, and the care put into it, a wonderful tribute. Well done, friend!

November 16th, 2024 07:10

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Goldfinch60 said:

It is so surprising what memories come to us when going through old things behind locked doors soren.

Andy

November 16th, 2024 02:18

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Bigguy said:

Oh man, you can really throw down! Very refreshing!

November 16th, 2024 01:50

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

Silverfish and rat urine! This poem is vivid in its descriptive imagery. This beautifully describes the our memories through the passage of time...\"memory\'s graveyard of holes\", my favorite line (though every line is brilliant). This is a cathartic write my friend! Well done! 🌹👏🖤❤️🖤

November 15th, 2024 16:49

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Cassie58 said:

Wow, so brilliantly penned. All those nasties. I think I’ll just stay outside Soren. Very vivid imagery.

November 15th, 2024 16:44

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Thomas W Case said:

Vivid and sharp imagery. Great work.

November 15th, 2024 16:31

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Tony36 said:

BRAVO

November 15th, 2024 10:49

Glass prison
NafisaSB said:

wonderful way of describing a commonplace item, and the reactions.
keep it coming

November 15th, 2024 09:20

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orchidee said:

Ahh, more menu ideas for KP! lol.

November 15th, 2024 09:18

Ants
Tom Dylan said:

An intriguing piece, Soren. Works on so many levels. Nicely done.

November 15th, 2024 09:10

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arqios said:

Like the story of my vagabond life- familiar odours and textures; what a capture!

November 15th, 2024 07:57

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Neville said:



You sure got the edge over many of em .. You are also the only person other than me that I know, that has referenced silver fish (the kind I suspect you mean) in a poem ..

November 15th, 2024 05:54

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Teddy.15 said:

Jagged edges of a page, so powerful and brilliant, your imagery brought me into see the paper shavings devoured by the rat. Beautifully done. 🌹 Your title is superb.

November 15th, 2024 05:00



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