Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Sonnett of an old man
Poetic Licence said:
I did not think you knew me !!, have had many a day feeling like this, wish it felt like reading this though, quite soothing and calming, enjoyed the read
January 30th, 2025 07:09
Poetic Licence said:
I did not think you knew me !!, have had many a day feeling like this, wish it felt like reading this though, quite soothing and calming, enjoyed the read
January 30th, 2025 07:09
Sonnett of an old man
Teddy.15 said:
Magnificent πππππ please do take your bow sir! Wow πΉ age really does bring wisdom and so much more. πΉ
January 30th, 2025 04:42
Teddy.15 said:
Magnificent πππππ please do take your bow sir! Wow πΉ age really does bring wisdom and so much more. πΉ
January 30th, 2025 04:42
Sonnett of an old man
arqios said:
Truly feeling this these days, it will only ripen more in the coming years should I get to see them. ππ»ππ»π
January 30th, 2025 03:43
arqios said:
Truly feeling this these days, it will only ripen more in the coming years should I get to see them. ππ»ππ»π
January 30th, 2025 03:43
All ever desired
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words soren but I am sure Chronos will bring all goodness and love in time.
Andy
January 30th, 2025 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words soren but I am sure Chronos will bring all goodness and love in time.
Andy
January 30th, 2025 02:22
All ever desired
NinjaGirl said:
I love poems about poisons, and the flower being part of it is amazing
January 29th, 2025 19:25
NinjaGirl said:
I love poems about poisons, and the flower being part of it is amazing
January 29th, 2025 19:25
All ever desired
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful poem,
poignant and pain filled too!!π’
A \"poisonous\" romance
can do this it\'s true! π
Thank for sharing my friend!! πβΊοΈ
Best regards βοΈ peace Thad
January 29th, 2025 18:44
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful poem,
poignant and pain filled too!!π’
A \"poisonous\" romance
can do this it\'s true! π
Thank for sharing my friend!! πβΊοΈ
Best regards βοΈ peace Thad
January 29th, 2025 18:44
All ever desired
Cassie58 said:
How sad that this relationship should turn toxic with the years. Not uncommon these days and it appears to be her own fault. I looked up oleander, a plant I didnβt know much about only to discover just how poisonous it is. The metaphor works well here sorenbarrett. Another fab write.
January 29th, 2025 18:26
Cassie58 said:
How sad that this relationship should turn toxic with the years. Not uncommon these days and it appears to be her own fault. I looked up oleander, a plant I didnβt know much about only to discover just how poisonous it is. The metaphor works well here sorenbarrett. Another fab write.
January 29th, 2025 18:26
All ever desired
David Wakeling said:
This is quite sad.Certainly a well constructed poem. I see a aging beauty here.
January 29th, 2025 15:48
David Wakeling said:
This is quite sad.Certainly a well constructed poem. I see a aging beauty here.
January 29th, 2025 15:48
All ever desired
Michael Edwards said:
A joyous use of this rich language of ours = a delghtful, albeit sombre, read.
January 29th, 2025 09:40
Michael Edwards said:
A joyous use of this rich language of ours = a delghtful, albeit sombre, read.
January 29th, 2025 09:40
All ever desired
arqios said:
Imagine developing a resistance to toxins or even turning toxic herselfβ¦ how utterly possibly horrible. Fantastic poem! ππ»ππ»π
January 29th, 2025 08:32
arqios said:
Imagine developing a resistance to toxins or even turning toxic herselfβ¦ how utterly possibly horrible. Fantastic poem! ππ»ππ»π
January 29th, 2025 08:32
All ever desired
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! In this I read the journey of a woman whose sole desire was to be loved. This desire, however, led her into a toxic relationship, symbolized by the poison tea. I have often wondered what leads one to be attracted to toxic people, but that really oversimplifies relationships and how they progress. In fact, that stands out in this poem: the progression shows how initial passion fades over time, leaving her abandoned and disillusioned. There is a sense of resignation in the final stanza, the years of pain having accumulated and hopes having been devoured by time (Chronos). This, my friend, is image-rich and a wonderful poetic expression. Loved the inclusion of Eros and Chronos too! πΉπ
January 29th, 2025 08:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! In this I read the journey of a woman whose sole desire was to be loved. This desire, however, led her into a toxic relationship, symbolized by the poison tea. I have often wondered what leads one to be attracted to toxic people, but that really oversimplifies relationships and how they progress. In fact, that stands out in this poem: the progression shows how initial passion fades over time, leaving her abandoned and disillusioned. There is a sense of resignation in the final stanza, the years of pain having accumulated and hopes having been devoured by time (Chronos). This, my friend, is image-rich and a wonderful poetic expression. Loved the inclusion of Eros and Chronos too! πΉπ
January 29th, 2025 08:15
Wake of a muse
NafisaSB said:
such a raw searing poem, full of heartfelt emotions
beautiful
January 29th, 2025 07:20
NafisaSB said:
such a raw searing poem, full of heartfelt emotions
beautiful
January 29th, 2025 07:20
All ever desired
Teddy.15 said:
As usual so much to digest so much metaphor, I\'m going for the shrub today dreams dying or flowers, to me your beauty is in each. πΉ
January 29th, 2025 06:27
Teddy.15 said:
As usual so much to digest so much metaphor, I\'m going for the shrub today dreams dying or flowers, to me your beauty is in each. πΉ
January 29th, 2025 06:27
All ever desired
Neville said:
They say one mans meat is another mans poison .. gods forbid, there\'s poison everywhere nowadays .. most finely writ sir sorenbarrett .. Neville
January 29th, 2025 04:56
Neville said:
They say one mans meat is another mans poison .. gods forbid, there\'s poison everywhere nowadays .. most finely writ sir sorenbarrett .. Neville
January 29th, 2025 04:56
All ever desired
Poetic Licence said:
Beware of the poison that lies within, enjoyed todays read.
January 29th, 2025 04:24
Poetic Licence said:
Beware of the poison that lies within, enjoyed todays read.
January 29th, 2025 04:24
Word of rocks
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words will go on forever on those rocks soren.
Andy
January 29th, 2025 02:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words will go on forever on those rocks soren.
Andy
January 29th, 2025 02:47
Word of rocks
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning
strong message too!! π³
Sometimes
words can cause
more damage
than rocks can do! π
Great read thank you!
Best regards βοΈ Thad
January 28th, 2025 20:02
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning
strong message too!! π³
Sometimes
words can cause
more damage
than rocks can do! π
Great read thank you!
Best regards βοΈ Thad
January 28th, 2025 20:02
Word of rocks
NinjaGirl said:
You are truly an extremely skilled poet, beautiful imagery so lovely and full of meaning
January 28th, 2025 12:13
NinjaGirl said:
You are truly an extremely skilled poet, beautiful imagery so lovely and full of meaning
January 28th, 2025 12:13
Word of rocks
Cassie58 said:
Reminds me how painful emotional wounds are, however they are caused, but words can inflict far greater damage. Best to hold that tongue in and say nothing. Wounds from rocks have a whole different meaning for me. There is much here metaphorically to contemplate. Many strong images contained in these lines. Very well penned sorenbarrett.
January 28th, 2025 11:44
Cassie58 said:
Reminds me how painful emotional wounds are, however they are caused, but words can inflict far greater damage. Best to hold that tongue in and say nothing. Wounds from rocks have a whole different meaning for me. There is much here metaphorically to contemplate. Many strong images contained in these lines. Very well penned sorenbarrett.
January 28th, 2025 11:44
Word of rocks
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A word thrown of rocks is worse than any rock thrown. I always hated the phrase, \"Sticks and stones may break my bones by names will never hurt me.\" The first part of the proposition is certainly true enough; however, the last part is really not true at all. In fact, I would rather have broken bones (which heal) than emotional wounds that linger an entire lifetime. Of course, that might depend on the extent of the break in a bone...but still, emotional wounds are very hurtful...very damaging....deadly even. Anyway, this poem inspired me to think of this. Well done, my friend. πΉπ
January 28th, 2025 08:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A word thrown of rocks is worse than any rock thrown. I always hated the phrase, \"Sticks and stones may break my bones by names will never hurt me.\" The first part of the proposition is certainly true enough; however, the last part is really not true at all. In fact, I would rather have broken bones (which heal) than emotional wounds that linger an entire lifetime. Of course, that might depend on the extent of the break in a bone...but still, emotional wounds are very hurtful...very damaging....deadly even. Anyway, this poem inspired me to think of this. Well done, my friend. πΉπ
January 28th, 2025 08:20
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