Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Footprints on a beaten path
Teddy.15 said:
So very beautifully said, in a poem, ironic as it is, it just brings me back to the great Vincent Van Gogh, who I once had the great privilege to study, I always believe he was a poet and a painter and he used his work so very carefully with his muse, he always believed he should have had recognition and in the end was his downfall. A wonderful theme and read dear sorrenbarret 🌹
April 29th, 2025 04:02
Teddy.15 said:
So very beautifully said, in a poem, ironic as it is, it just brings me back to the great Vincent Van Gogh, who I once had the great privilege to study, I always believe he was a poet and a painter and he used his work so very carefully with his muse, he always believed he should have had recognition and in the end was his downfall. A wonderful theme and read dear sorrenbarret 🌹
April 29th, 2025 04:02
Good taste
NafisaSB said:
unlucky neighbor, and lucky shark - lol..enjoyed the read
April 29th, 2025 00:33
NafisaSB said:
unlucky neighbor, and lucky shark - lol..enjoyed the read
April 29th, 2025 00:33
Sleep on
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Been there, and get it entirely! The problem is when the sleeping on halts and reality hits. Still, damn that lemonade sounds worth the delay. 😉 All jokes aside, a well done. Powerful metaphor. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
April 28th, 2025 14:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Been there, and get it entirely! The problem is when the sleeping on halts and reality hits. Still, damn that lemonade sounds worth the delay. 😉 All jokes aside, a well done. Powerful metaphor. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
April 28th, 2025 14:51
Sleep on
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, SB. I can\'t afford Lemmons enough for lemonade. But there is some cheap vodka I pop into Ginger ale.
April 28th, 2025 07:48
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, SB. I can\'t afford Lemmons enough for lemonade. But there is some cheap vodka I pop into Ginger ale.
April 28th, 2025 07:48
Sleep on
Salvia.S said:
Love the raw honesty and clever wordplay in this poem!
April 28th, 2025 06:48
Salvia.S said:
Love the raw honesty and clever wordplay in this poem!
April 28th, 2025 06:48
Sleep on
David Wakeling said:
i know the feelings expressed here.Very relatable.Well done mi amigo
April 28th, 2025 05:02
David Wakeling said:
i know the feelings expressed here.Very relatable.Well done mi amigo
April 28th, 2025 05:02
Sleep on
arqios said:
The blood vessels doing shadow dances in translucence🙏🏻🕊️
April 28th, 2025 04:54
arqios said:
The blood vessels doing shadow dances in translucence🙏🏻🕊️
April 28th, 2025 04:54
Sleep on
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Any spare sewage for KP\'s dinner? lol.
April 28th, 2025 03:55
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Any spare sewage for KP\'s dinner? lol.
April 28th, 2025 03:55
Sleep on
RSM0812 said:
It\'s like the lemonade is a medicine. However too much of a good thing is bad.
April 28th, 2025 03:49
RSM0812 said:
It\'s like the lemonade is a medicine. However too much of a good thing is bad.
April 28th, 2025 03:49
Sleep on
Lorenz said:
A popular french expression to designate an unpleasant situation : \'\' C\'est une mauvaise limonade ! \'\' (Its a bad lemonade ! )
April 28th, 2025 03:49
Lorenz said:
A popular french expression to designate an unpleasant situation : \'\' C\'est une mauvaise limonade ! \'\' (Its a bad lemonade ! )
April 28th, 2025 03:49
Sleep on
Teddy.15 said:
Lemonade is delicious and so is the fighting spirit within this, take what comes and ride with it. 🌹
April 28th, 2025 03:41
Teddy.15 said:
Lemonade is delicious and so is the fighting spirit within this, take what comes and ride with it. 🌹
April 28th, 2025 03:41
Good taste
Doggerel Dave said:
Famous Last Words there for all to digest. The rhyme the seasoning.
April 28th, 2025 00:04
Doggerel Dave said:
Famous Last Words there for all to digest. The rhyme the seasoning.
April 28th, 2025 00:04
Fallen sand
NafisaSB said:
so romantic, and so touching, and so many truths of life laid bare here
fantastic
April 27th, 2025 23:54
NafisaSB said:
so romantic, and so touching, and so many truths of life laid bare here
fantastic
April 27th, 2025 23:54
Good taste
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Humorous this time! Very good! I like the switch up.
April 27th, 2025 13:00
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Humorous this time! Very good! I like the switch up.
April 27th, 2025 13:00
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hzugman said:
The unsaid powerfully spoken. Good read. Innovative! A mind at rest is the quickest route to your inner self.
April 27th, 2025 12:49
hzugman said:
The unsaid powerfully spoken. Good read. Innovative! A mind at rest is the quickest route to your inner self.
April 27th, 2025 12:49
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orchidee said:
Here\'s an extended version of your poem: ............................ LOL.
April 27th, 2025 11:56
orchidee said:
Here\'s an extended version of your poem: ............................ LOL.
April 27th, 2025 11:56
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Tony Grannell said:
Yes, much shorter than, Nashe\'s, Adam/Had\'em. You could actually title this poem: On Maleviche\'s \'Black Square\'. Both pieces have a zillion interpretations and are very alike. When I beheld the, \'.\' the word, \'now\' came to mind. A perfect poem, to baffle any critic. Very well done.
All the best,
Tony.
April 27th, 2025 11:01
Tony Grannell said:
Yes, much shorter than, Nashe\'s, Adam/Had\'em. You could actually title this poem: On Maleviche\'s \'Black Square\'. Both pieces have a zillion interpretations and are very alike. When I beheld the, \'.\' the word, \'now\' came to mind. A perfect poem, to baffle any critic. Very well done.
All the best,
Tony.
April 27th, 2025 11:01
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, if the note doesn\'t count (and it doesn\'t in my book), this IS the shortest poem ever written without a doubt. And yet in the space around the period, so much is said. Brilliantly expressed, my friend. This is far more brilliant than a damn banana duct taped to a wall, that is for sure! And, at least you don\'t have to keep replacing it. 🤣 All jokes aside, the period alone can mean so much...let alone the white space around it. Again. blown away. 🌹👏
April 27th, 2025 07:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, if the note doesn\'t count (and it doesn\'t in my book), this IS the shortest poem ever written without a doubt. And yet in the space around the period, so much is said. Brilliantly expressed, my friend. This is far more brilliant than a damn banana duct taped to a wall, that is for sure! And, at least you don\'t have to keep replacing it. 🤣 All jokes aside, the period alone can mean so much...let alone the white space around it. Again. blown away. 🌹👏
April 27th, 2025 07:48
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Salvia.S said:
Your poem is profound in its simplicity. The dot (.) symbolizes completion, yet also emptiness, sparking thought on existence and meaning. Beautiful!! Loved it!!
April 27th, 2025 07:03
Salvia.S said:
Your poem is profound in its simplicity. The dot (.) symbolizes completion, yet also emptiness, sparking thought on existence and meaning. Beautiful!! Loved it!!
April 27th, 2025 07:03
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Doggerel Dave said:
Wot can one do with that? Only response is to endeavour to be as short as the poem... Or as that well known small furry animal poeticus orchidus might have ...and so on....
April 27th, 2025 06:21
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot can one do with that? Only response is to endeavour to be as short as the poem... Or as that well known small furry animal poeticus orchidus might have ...and so on....
April 27th, 2025 06:21
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Jerry Reynolds said:
Stunning, SB. You could end it at this point. But I hope you won\'t.
April 27th, 2025 06:20
Jerry Reynolds said:
Stunning, SB. You could end it at this point. But I hope you won\'t.
April 27th, 2025 06:20
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Teddy.15 said:
Most profound dear sorrenbarret as always you are incredibly inspiring. A true earth poet. 🌹
April 27th, 2025 03:51
Teddy.15 said:
Most profound dear sorrenbarret as always you are incredibly inspiring. A true earth poet. 🌹
April 27th, 2025 03:51
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