Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Canned expression
MDStone said:

So true, Soren. Oh to have fresh grown, fresh cooked, real or raw… but there is something so nourishing about something genuine, real, and heartfelt. Wonderfully written piece. Thank you!

March 2nd, 2025 07:56

Canned expression
Tristan Robert Lange said:

The futility of it all, no? But still, here we are and here we keep plodding along. Indeed, some days my expressions seem far more canned than others, but they\'re always canned. Except when I write poetry. Nothing canned about that, which is why I love the artform. So freeing. Anywho, well done on this my friend. It got me thinking and therefore it gets a fave.

March 2nd, 2025 07:22

Flocks
NafisaSB said:

birds are smarter than us - they know that \'winging it alone\' can be challenging, hence have the common sense to fly in a formation that does not cause them as much pressures if they were to fly alone..
good message here

March 2nd, 2025 06:56

Canned expression
Poetic Licence said:

The impossible is only impossible until someone does it, entertaining and enjoyable read

March 2nd, 2025 05:48

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Teddy.15 said:

Bottled sunbeams, packaged wind, a thunder cloud to the sky pinned

Wow you do make me smile dearest sorrenbarret, you are one of my favourite poets Sir.

Last lines kudos πŸ‘ πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ

March 2nd, 2025 05:00

Space pirate speed demons
Teddy.15 said:

Magnificent, on a ride with you in your words of poetic magic, no black holes here. 🌹

March 2nd, 2025 04:45

Canned expression
Salvia.S said:

The image of bottled sunbeams made me smile.
Beautiful poem!!!

March 2nd, 2025 04:43

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arqios said:

And we still do so, in spite of! It’s marvellous symbiosis πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

March 2nd, 2025 03:36

Canned expression
orchidee said:

I know there\'s canned laughter on some - so-called - comedy shows. Doh!
I wondered why I wasn\'t getting anywhere, using a sieve to try to fill a bottle with water. (heehee).

March 2nd, 2025 03:34

Space pirate speed demons
Goldfinch60 said:

Photons go through all life and the universe without us knowing soren, Good words.

Andy

March 2nd, 2025 02:52

Space pirate speed demons
John Prophet said:

Nice write, very nice write.
John

March 1st, 2025 16:51

Too much
gray0328 said:

The complexities of life and the resilience needed to get through them
Well Done Soren

March 1st, 2025 12:14

Space pirate speed demons
Tristan Robert Lange said:

🀯 So, there\'s science fiction...which definitely is imaginative. This, rather, is simply imaginative science. It uses the imagination and science to reveal something profoundly deep and true. Well done! This gets a fave! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

March 1st, 2025 08:34

Space pirate speed demons
arqios said:

Some thing in us, about us are like photons, where distance is no issue. Now that rings quite clear and true! πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

March 1st, 2025 06:39

Space pirate speed demons
Poetic Licence said:

Science i am ignorant to, enjoyment i am not, I don\'t understand this write completely but i did enjoy reading it, very creative

March 1st, 2025 06:34

Space pirate speed demons
David Wakeling said:

This may sound odd but I think at the quantum level the universe performs Magic. Not just like magic.It is real Magic.Its God\'s way of making sure we never understand the jail we live in. This poem is very clever.Made me think

March 1st, 2025 06:15

Space pirate speed demons
Salvia.S said:

Wow! Your creativity in blending science, imagination and poetry is spot on. Loved it ❀️!

March 1st, 2025 05:10

Inside out
Reynaldo Casison said:

Nice One Soren
Sweet And Reflective

March 1st, 2025 04:45

Space pirate speed demons
orchidee said:

You already there, as those photons are? I met myself coming back from town (did I?) - is that similar? lol.

March 1st, 2025 04:18

Too much
Goldfinch60 said:

Clever words soren showing both sides of life.

Andy

March 1st, 2025 02:47

Too much
Teddy.15 said:

So wonderful, i believe you with all my heart

Love every line especially the ending

Too many of sun\'s hot demons, I spent too much time in the shade

Oh I like this very much, inspiring words.

🌹

February 28th, 2025 15:02

It doesn\'t matter anymore
whats write for me said:

This piece has mountain top highs and valley lows. An incredible journey in words, Bravo.

February 28th, 2025 09:48

Too much
Poetic Licence said:

The good and the bad, the successes and the failure\'s, the love and the hate, the despair and the hope, all wrapped up in this wonderful write, enjoyed the read

February 28th, 2025 07:57

Too much
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Flows and rings beautifully. A wonderful expression of time, struggle, and the beautiful yet puzzling futility of it all. πŸŒΉπŸ‘ Well done, Soren. This gets a fave!

February 28th, 2025 07:28

Too much
arqios said:

Sweetened citrus acids can have challenging effects when taken in large quantities πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

February 28th, 2025 07:21

Too much
Mutley Ravishes said:

The last two lines, Soren. Really hit.
Life? I guess we all seen more than enough of this one. Time for a different dimension?!


February 28th, 2025 06:52

Too much
Salvia.S said:

This is so powerful and emotional. Your words paint a vivid picture of resilience and the human struggle. Very moving.

February 28th, 2025 06:35

Too much
MDStone said:

Soren,
We certainly live in days and times where too much happens too often. Ah, but taking time to reflect, that can remind that this too shall pass. There is too much yet to be seen, too much good to do, too much to say and write, to give up on the beautiful life. Thanks for taking me through this time to reflection and refocus.

February 28th, 2025 06:33

It doesn\'t matter anymore
Goldfinch60 said:

We need to form our own ways in life and not be life others soren, if we believed all the lies we are told it could be even a worse world.

Andy

February 28th, 2025 02:49

It doesn\'t matter anymore
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Great job, Soren. This is a deep exploration of time, disillusionment, and existential inquiry, of which you know I am a fan of. 🀣 This poem causes readers to reflect on their own beliefs about truth, morality, and the passage of time, leaving them with profound questions about life’s meaning…rather than answers, the hallmark of great philosophical thought and poetry. Again, well done on this my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ‘

February 27th, 2025 18:10



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