Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Carpe diem without conscience
Friendship said:
I like this, \"Living on Edge,\" Soren. Your poem masterfully captures the thrill and uncertainty of living on edge, highlighting the dynamic interplay between the pursuit of freedom and the recognition of life\'s preciousness. It powerfully reflects on existence, mortality, and the choices that shape our lives, inspiring a deeper appreciation for the beauty and complexity of human experience.
February 11th, 2025 08:11
Friendship said:
I like this, \"Living on Edge,\" Soren. Your poem masterfully captures the thrill and uncertainty of living on edge, highlighting the dynamic interplay between the pursuit of freedom and the recognition of life\'s preciousness. It powerfully reflects on existence, mortality, and the choices that shape our lives, inspiring a deeper appreciation for the beauty and complexity of human experience.
February 11th, 2025 08:11
Carpe diem without conscience
arqios said:
Our freedom needs to be exercised and stood up for. No one ever pioneered nor thrived sitting down. A thesis well taken in this poem. 🙏🏻🕊️
February 11th, 2025 05:27
arqios said:
Our freedom needs to be exercised and stood up for. No one ever pioneered nor thrived sitting down. A thesis well taken in this poem. 🙏🏻🕊️
February 11th, 2025 05:27
Carpe diem without conscience
Teddy.15 said:
Living for today, as much as we may wish too, there hopefully will be a tomorrow so being cautious of what we do is a must some don\'t have that and live on the edge always, I\'ve lived both, I took a massive gamble with nothing to lose and I gained, yet not always the case. A brilliant peice of poetry dearest sorrenbarret that will.make many reflect on your lines. 🌹 Wonderful title too. 🌹
February 11th, 2025 03:56
Teddy.15 said:
Living for today, as much as we may wish too, there hopefully will be a tomorrow so being cautious of what we do is a must some don\'t have that and live on the edge always, I\'ve lived both, I took a massive gamble with nothing to lose and I gained, yet not always the case. A brilliant peice of poetry dearest sorrenbarret that will.make many reflect on your lines. 🌹 Wonderful title too. 🌹
February 11th, 2025 03:56
Tickles from the past
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true soren, we all leave marks in our lives for others to see.
Andy
February 11th, 2025 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true soren, we all leave marks in our lives for others to see.
Andy
February 11th, 2025 02:23
Flocks
Shetonya Latryce said:
Love this. Birds and their unique ability to do what they do, has always fascinated me. Flocking to formations all the things birds are exciting. Thank you for your impeccable words.
February 10th, 2025 17:02
Shetonya Latryce said:
Love this. Birds and their unique ability to do what they do, has always fascinated me. Flocking to formations all the things birds are exciting. Thank you for your impeccable words.
February 10th, 2025 17:02
Tickles from the past
Neville said:
One would have to be a fool not to give this the thumbs up .. it’s a complete knockout 👍
February 10th, 2025 16:06
Neville said:
One would have to be a fool not to give this the thumbs up .. it’s a complete knockout 👍
February 10th, 2025 16:06
Tickles from the past
Hey! said:
Love it, keep writing I\'d love to see more!!!!
February 10th, 2025 15:10
Hey! said:
Love it, keep writing I\'d love to see more!!!!
February 10th, 2025 15:10
Tickles from the past
Cassie58 said:
Lovely meaningful and reflective write Soren. Beautiful poetry. All the best.
February 10th, 2025 15:04
Cassie58 said:
Lovely meaningful and reflective write Soren. Beautiful poetry. All the best.
February 10th, 2025 15:04
Tickles from the past
Thomas W Case said:
I love this. Powerful and poignant. Brilliant writing.
February 10th, 2025 09:24
Thomas W Case said:
I love this. Powerful and poignant. Brilliant writing.
February 10th, 2025 09:24
Tickles from the past
Friendship said:
Lovely. You created a profoundly moving painting, Soren. Your poem transcends time, resonating deeply with anyone who has ever experienced love and its intricate complexities. It beautifully captures the intense, often conflicting emotions that arise from love, attachment, and desire.
February 10th, 2025 09:11
Friendship said:
Lovely. You created a profoundly moving painting, Soren. Your poem transcends time, resonating deeply with anyone who has ever experienced love and its intricate complexities. It beautifully captures the intense, often conflicting emotions that arise from love, attachment, and desire.
February 10th, 2025 09:11
Tickles from the past
arqios said:
“The prayer yet to pray” now there is an excellent line ! 🙏🏻🕊
February 10th, 2025 07:38
arqios said:
“The prayer yet to pray” now there is an excellent line ! 🙏🏻🕊
February 10th, 2025 07:38
Tickles from the past
Poetic Licence said:
And all hearts should be treated with care, nicely worded reflective poem, enjoyed the read
February 10th, 2025 05:30
Poetic Licence said:
And all hearts should be treated with care, nicely worded reflective poem, enjoyed the read
February 10th, 2025 05:30
Tickles from the past
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Soren
Nice And Reflective
February 10th, 2025 04:14
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Soren
Nice And Reflective
February 10th, 2025 04:14
Tickles from the past
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful, yes we should never ignore an igling 🌹
February 10th, 2025 03:35
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful, yes we should never ignore an igling 🌹
February 10th, 2025 03:35
Tickles from the past
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Doh! I used a ticket of the past - it was dated last year. (Did I? lol).
February 10th, 2025 03:19
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Doh! I used a ticket of the past - it was dated last year. (Did I? lol).
February 10th, 2025 03:19
Flocks
Goldfinch60 said:
Those signs fro Nature are always around us soren and they can be hard to interpret so often.
Andy
February 10th, 2025 03:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Those signs fro Nature are always around us soren and they can be hard to interpret so often.
Andy
February 10th, 2025 03:00
Flocks
Dan Williams said:
I think you also are often led by magnetic lines; \'Cryptic lines of life\'s flow\'. Nice.
February 10th, 2025 01:27
Dan Williams said:
I think you also are often led by magnetic lines; \'Cryptic lines of life\'s flow\'. Nice.
February 10th, 2025 01:27
Flocks
NinjaGirl said:
What I love most about this symbolism, is the idea that when the bird flying in the front gets tired from breaking the wind, the other birds let it fall to the back where there is no more wind resistance due to their triangle-shaped flight. It\'s this sense of community, that someone doesn\'t have to be strong for the whole flight--they can be tired, and take a step back.
February 9th, 2025 16:16
NinjaGirl said:
What I love most about this symbolism, is the idea that when the bird flying in the front gets tired from breaking the wind, the other birds let it fall to the back where there is no more wind resistance due to their triangle-shaped flight. It\'s this sense of community, that someone doesn\'t have to be strong for the whole flight--they can be tired, and take a step back.
February 9th, 2025 16:16
Flocks
Neville said:
It’s that time of year again isn’t it .. I can tell I’m going to be watching the sky now for quite some time .. Tis indeed quite lovely 👍
February 9th, 2025 11:33
Neville said:
It’s that time of year again isn’t it .. I can tell I’m going to be watching the sky now for quite some time .. Tis indeed quite lovely 👍
February 9th, 2025 11:33
Flocks
Friendship said:
Nicely put, Soren. Your poem prompts introspection regarding the natural world\'s significance and the subtle messages we often overlook daily. As a reader, it inspires me to contemplate the profound meanings underlying observed phenomena and the vital importance of connection and understanding in life\'s journey. I appreciate how you examine themes of communication and the pursuit of meaning within the natural world, particularly through the metaphor of birds in flight. This raises questions about the messages conveyed by these creatures and the broader significance of their journey.
February 9th, 2025 09:10
Friendship said:
Nicely put, Soren. Your poem prompts introspection regarding the natural world\'s significance and the subtle messages we often overlook daily. As a reader, it inspires me to contemplate the profound meanings underlying observed phenomena and the vital importance of connection and understanding in life\'s journey. I appreciate how you examine themes of communication and the pursuit of meaning within the natural world, particularly through the metaphor of birds in flight. This raises questions about the messages conveyed by these creatures and the broader significance of their journey.
February 9th, 2025 09:10
Flocks
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. I try to be \'The Birdman\' to fly away from KP! lol.
February 9th, 2025 08:57
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. I try to be \'The Birdman\' to fly away from KP! lol.
February 9th, 2025 08:57
Flocks
Teddy.15 said:
How truly beautiful and how true that nature has its own way of feeling the aura 🌹
February 9th, 2025 05:10
Teddy.15 said:
How truly beautiful and how true that nature has its own way of feeling the aura 🌹
February 9th, 2025 05:10
Flocks
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a powerful metaphor.I read it twice to appreciate it.Excellent work.Well constructed and an incredible last line.
February 9th, 2025 04:44
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a powerful metaphor.I read it twice to appreciate it.Excellent work.Well constructed and an incredible last line.
February 9th, 2025 04:44
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