Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Succulent
Demar Desu said:

Metaphor for the ladies I’m assuming… great write SB

June 9th, 2025 03:57

Years
Goldfinch60 said:

Time is there for us all and will never stop but I always look for the good in life soren, it is there for us but many do not recognise it.

Andy

June 9th, 2025 02:05

Sleep on
AwHec8 said:

I like (love) actually this short & Sweet Poem. Don

June 9th, 2025 00:30

Too many
AwHec8 said:

Nice Poem. I mean really Sweet. Don

June 9th, 2025 00:27

The artisan
Reynaldo Casison said:

Nice soren

Artisan rhythms nice sculpted metaphor

June 8th, 2025 18:16

Old closet
Alan R said:

Very touching!

June 8th, 2025 14:47

Years
hzugman said:

Good write sorenbarrett.

June 8th, 2025 13:06

Years
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

June 8th, 2025 12:14

Years
Damaso said:

Oh, beautiful! As always, it captivates me and takes me to beautiful landscapes and an elemental metaphor. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.

June 8th, 2025 09:59

Years
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

June 8th, 2025 09:15

Years
RSM0812 said:

I like how you compared nature to life. We are a reflection of nature and have to cohere to its laws. Great write.

June 8th, 2025 08:46

Years
Poetic Licence said:

How age takes its toll not just in appearance or physically, but on our remaining hope and dreams as time repidly runs out, enjoyed the read

June 8th, 2025 08:00

Years
Soman Ragavan said:

The years take their toll, little by little. When we look at pictures of ourselves going back a long time, we refuse to believe that we have changed so much. Yet, age wreaks its havoc little by little. Not only physical features, but mentally too we age.
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June 8th, 2025 07:25

Years
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Time\'s harsh soil chokes even the strongest seeds of hope—yet still, we till the dust, aching for one more bloom.

June 8th, 2025 05:21

Damaged
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true soren.

Andy

June 8th, 2025 01:22

Damaged
Doggerel Dave said:

Nothing there I cannot understand and nothing there I cannot but agree with.
Well said Soren.
Preconditions would include the removal of much of the human species.....

June 7th, 2025 17:46

Damaged
orchidee said:

Good write SB. I said to KP \'If it ain\'t broke; don\'t fix it\'. She replied \'The ball and chain that I locked on your ankle ain\'t broke, so I won\'t fix it, I will leave it on you!\' lol.

June 7th, 2025 12:49

Damaged
hzugman said:

Short and sweet and entirely complete. Nice work.

June 7th, 2025 09:44

Head of wheat
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Great metaphor, my friend. Not just chaff blowing in the wind, this wheat is an essential ingredient to life. There\'s many ways this can be interpreted to. The wheat and the vine draw up images of the Eucharist, for me, among other things. So, whether one is reading this metaphor more straight forward or whether one is divining mystical insights, this poem delivers all the way around my friend. Well done!!! 🌹👏

June 7th, 2025 09:19

Damaged
Damaso said:

Mother Earth, mother of all flavors and colors, some of us ask for your forgiveness! Beautifully written and very thoughtful. As always, a pleasure to read. Best regards!

June 7th, 2025 08:46

Damaged
Poetic Licence said:

Nature has abilities we will never have to survive and adapt over time and repair the damage we cause to it, enjoyed the read

June 7th, 2025 06:39

Damaged
Teddy.15 said:

Patience and time. Beautiful dear sorrenbarret. 🌹

June 7th, 2025 04:57

Damaged
Soman Ragavan said:

Indeed, nature creates wonders of a kind that humans cannot match. We can only admire them.

June 7th, 2025 04:48

Damaged
David Wakeling said:

Indeed a short and sweet portrayal of the need to repair the damage in our lives and the human limitations we endure.

June 7th, 2025 04:23

Head of wheat
Teddy.15 said:

This just makes me smile it\'s stunning, your poetry is truly breathtaking dearest sorrenbarret 🌹

June 7th, 2025 02:13

Head of wheat
Salvia.S said:

This is a beautiful and meaning poem. Well written!

June 7th, 2025 01:18

Head of wheat
Goldfinch60 said:

Life grows in all soren and will always do so.

Andy

June 7th, 2025 01:16

Habit or addiction
Salvia.S said:

This poem makes us think about when something is simply a pleasure and when it turns into a problem. Well done!

June 7th, 2025 01:15

Demise of a poem
Sylvia Somaduroff said:

Isn\'t it feel like this though?

June 7th, 2025 00:29

Weeds grow
Sylvia Somaduroff said:

I really like this flow and I\'ve been in my yard all spring so far and it resonates :).

June 7th, 2025 00:28



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