Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Technology/Mental Health
orchidee said:
Were crisps better in the age of CRISPR? Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
May 25th, 2023 04:55
orchidee said:
Were crisps better in the age of CRISPR? Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
May 25th, 2023 04:55
Sins to Pardon
Goldfinch60 said:
May those fields of gold be there for you Soren.
Andy
https://youtu.be/-qw0gS7BrCo
May 21st, 2023 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
May those fields of gold be there for you Soren.
Andy
https://youtu.be/-qw0gS7BrCo
May 21st, 2023 01:09
Sins to Pardon
Bella Shepard said:
This piece so sad and yet so beautiful in it\'s splendid verse. I enjoyed every line of it!
May 20th, 2023 16:02
Bella Shepard said:
This piece so sad and yet so beautiful in it\'s splendid verse. I enjoyed every line of it!
May 20th, 2023 16:02
Sins to Pardon
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
You fallen to pieces yet? You a heap of dust or ash yet?!
May 20th, 2023 09:27
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
You fallen to pieces yet? You a heap of dust or ash yet?!
May 20th, 2023 09:27
Lazarus Sun
L. B. Mek said:
\'a bee\'s vibrato humming, cicadas in ostinato singing,\'
\' the heavens quaking, cloud bottoms breaking,\'
delightfully worded, a delicious read
words roll-off and twist that tongue
while showering that internal voice
with serenading worded musicality
Brilliant!
(a study of that nourishing Sun\'s
symbolic daily rebirth
Ra, Helios, Apollo or many other
names, its lore endless
no wonder the annals of humanity
do so laud and acclaim
our emblem of Phoenix rebirth
that great, Sun!)
May 19th, 2023 02:33
L. B. Mek said:
\'a bee\'s vibrato humming, cicadas in ostinato singing,\'
\' the heavens quaking, cloud bottoms breaking,\'
delightfully worded, a delicious read
words roll-off and twist that tongue
while showering that internal voice
with serenading worded musicality
Brilliant!
(a study of that nourishing Sun\'s
symbolic daily rebirth
Ra, Helios, Apollo or many other
names, its lore endless
no wonder the annals of humanity
do so laud and acclaim
our emblem of Phoenix rebirth
that great, Sun!)
May 19th, 2023 02:33
The Night
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
no need for explanations
your poetry, transcends
a need for context\'s clarity:
(\'Light\'s penumbra on blackness lies,\'
\'Gravity seduces heavy eyes,\'
\'As weight of darkness takes control\'
\'Falling into that black hole,\'
\'As the event horizon we traverse
in other dimensions we fall,
where with oracles we converse
From here we may not return at all\'
\'With the softness of the night\'
\'glorious slumber without fright,\'
\'Fear not the darkness and its peace\'
\'Revel in obscurities release\')
I fear, you fail
to realise your own brilliance
my kind friend
I bow to your superior talent!
May 19th, 2023 02:23
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
no need for explanations
your poetry, transcends
a need for context\'s clarity:
(\'Light\'s penumbra on blackness lies,\'
\'Gravity seduces heavy eyes,\'
\'As weight of darkness takes control\'
\'Falling into that black hole,\'
\'As the event horizon we traverse
in other dimensions we fall,
where with oracles we converse
From here we may not return at all\'
\'With the softness of the night\'
\'glorious slumber without fright,\'
\'Fear not the darkness and its peace\'
\'Revel in obscurities release\')
I fear, you fail
to realise your own brilliance
my kind friend
I bow to your superior talent!
May 19th, 2023 02:23
Eclipse
L. B. Mek said:
\'The hour\'s thief makes life so brief\'
so true, wise Poet
a lovely read, great to read out loud
thank you!
May 19th, 2023 02:13
L. B. Mek said:
\'The hour\'s thief makes life so brief\'
so true, wise Poet
a lovely read, great to read out loud
thank you!
May 19th, 2023 02:13
Lazarus Sun
orchidee said:
Just think - I would miss all this, if I don\'t \'get my coat\' and \'get out more\', as the sayings go! Well, I might not need a coat if it\'s warm enough. lol.
May 19th, 2023 01:56
orchidee said:
Just think - I would miss all this, if I don\'t \'get my coat\' and \'get out more\', as the sayings go! Well, I might not need a coat if it\'s warm enough. lol.
May 19th, 2023 01:56
The Night
sorenbarrett said:
I still have room for morning, evening and afternoon since I have already done twilight. Thanks for the review
May 17th, 2023 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
I still have room for morning, evening and afternoon since I have already done twilight. Thanks for the review
May 17th, 2023 09:40
Eclipse
orchidee said:
A good write sorting that lot out SB. I thought you was doing algebra! lol.
May 15th, 2023 10:16
orchidee said:
A good write sorting that lot out SB. I thought you was doing algebra! lol.
May 15th, 2023 10:16
Eclipse
sorenbarrett said:
Thanks Cryptic just thought I would give myself a new challenge to an old rhyme scheme. I\'m so glad that you liked it.
May 15th, 2023 09:50
sorenbarrett said:
Thanks Cryptic just thought I would give myself a new challenge to an old rhyme scheme. I\'m so glad that you liked it.
May 15th, 2023 09:50
Eclipse
arqios said:
A very pleasurable journey of rhyme Soren. And the eclipse is quite taking as well both in heart and mind.
May 15th, 2023 08:26
arqios said:
A very pleasurable journey of rhyme Soren. And the eclipse is quite taking as well both in heart and mind.
May 15th, 2023 08:26
Mourning Doves
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you so much dear friend. Your comments mean so much. They are most deeply appreciated.
May 15th, 2023 06:46
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you so much dear friend. Your comments mean so much. They are most deeply appreciated.
May 15th, 2023 06:46
Mourning Doves
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
beautifully realised, dear Poet
thank you! for choosing to share
I bow to your superior talent
(this, that
poetic tonality of melancholy
of ill-destiny, aside
a yearning to prevail and survive
fight,
against that certainty of change
in a gust of wind\'s promise
of all things, finite
we so desperately, try to deny)
\'a selfless sacrifice,
from the frigid, icy sting,
one lifts a sheltering, angel\'s wing,
to shield its companion\'
May 15th, 2023 03:47
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
beautifully realised, dear Poet
thank you! for choosing to share
I bow to your superior talent
(this, that
poetic tonality of melancholy
of ill-destiny, aside
a yearning to prevail and survive
fight,
against that certainty of change
in a gust of wind\'s promise
of all things, finite
we so desperately, try to deny)
\'a selfless sacrifice,
from the frigid, icy sting,
one lifts a sheltering, angel\'s wing,
to shield its companion\'
May 15th, 2023 03:47
If I were
L. B. Mek said:
...change!
and so I do, try
increments at a time
like finding out, what a horrid practise
is used to produce our milk
and so now, I\'m almost total soya
does it impact anything, no
does it make a difference
to my mind and spirit\'s, balance
n health
YES!
should everyone do it, hell no..
do we need to butcher
and stunt a calves life, for that veal
decadence.. no
then again, do I have a right
to oppress another\'s way of life
because of my moral compass?
hell no
should we write and help widen
the awareness of those
less informed of our food culture
absurdities
Yes, Yes, Yes!
(what a brilliant utilisation
of your poetic talent, my friend
an important write, ever timely)
thank you!
(and don\'t waste your time
on ill-informed critiques
sprouting, reactionary
unconsidered, self centred garbage
just do you
no apologies, we\'re lucky to have you
if you listen their bul sht
they\'ll exhast your relatiosnhip with Poesy
which is the intent if their toxic comment
you know, because
only \'they\' know what poetry should be
since you know, everything
they write is a gift to humanity...
pffft
fckin morons!
do you brother
fck anyone\'s blinkered \'opinion\'..
don\'t try to be nice, to malice
\'reflect\', that you receive
with double the potency!)
May 12th, 2023 02:19
L. B. Mek said:
...change!
and so I do, try
increments at a time
like finding out, what a horrid practise
is used to produce our milk
and so now, I\'m almost total soya
does it impact anything, no
does it make a difference
to my mind and spirit\'s, balance
n health
YES!
should everyone do it, hell no..
do we need to butcher
and stunt a calves life, for that veal
decadence.. no
then again, do I have a right
to oppress another\'s way of life
because of my moral compass?
hell no
should we write and help widen
the awareness of those
less informed of our food culture
absurdities
Yes, Yes, Yes!
(what a brilliant utilisation
of your poetic talent, my friend
an important write, ever timely)
thank you!
(and don\'t waste your time
on ill-informed critiques
sprouting, reactionary
unconsidered, self centred garbage
just do you
no apologies, we\'re lucky to have you
if you listen their bul sht
they\'ll exhast your relatiosnhip with Poesy
which is the intent if their toxic comment
you know, because
only \'they\' know what poetry should be
since you know, everything
they write is a gift to humanity...
pffft
fckin morons!
do you brother
fck anyone\'s blinkered \'opinion\'..
don\'t try to be nice, to malice
\'reflect\', that you receive
with double the potency!)
May 12th, 2023 02:19
If I were
Bobby O said:
Dude, not like your usual stellar write. It’s just sorta arbitrary rhyme , like any old rhyme would do. It doesn’t build tension or purpose or bring any group through phrase together to enrich. An ox in a box a fish on a dish, they be flog a dog, how did you miss a frog on a log or a bison fighting Tyson or make a Siamese say please … whenever there’s a million easy thing to grab without thinking or just to fill a line, well maybe that’s a project to skip. Dude, I say this w love and out of respect for the multiple pieces that were great to read. Don’t be mad. If and when I stray from standard I hope you call me out.
May 11th, 2023 06:27
Bobby O said:
Dude, not like your usual stellar write. It’s just sorta arbitrary rhyme , like any old rhyme would do. It doesn’t build tension or purpose or bring any group through phrase together to enrich. An ox in a box a fish on a dish, they be flog a dog, how did you miss a frog on a log or a bison fighting Tyson or make a Siamese say please … whenever there’s a million easy thing to grab without thinking or just to fill a line, well maybe that’s a project to skip. Dude, I say this w love and out of respect for the multiple pieces that were great to read. Don’t be mad. If and when I stray from standard I hope you call me out.
May 11th, 2023 06:27
Reflections
Bella Shepard said:
The hall of mirrors contains so many iterations of ourselves, layer upon layer, which one is who we really are, or is it perhaps who we really become. This is a feast for the mind dear poet.
May 10th, 2023 13:54
Bella Shepard said:
The hall of mirrors contains so many iterations of ourselves, layer upon layer, which one is who we really are, or is it perhaps who we really become. This is a feast for the mind dear poet.
May 10th, 2023 13:54
Reflections
sorenbarrett said:
Glad to see you saw the image in the title. I hope that this is no reflection on me. Appreciate the review L.B.
May 8th, 2023 11:22
sorenbarrett said:
Glad to see you saw the image in the title. I hope that this is no reflection on me. Appreciate the review L.B.
May 8th, 2023 11:22
Reflections
sophin said:
Incredibly written!
\"Universal laws shattered by glass\"
\"One smile turns into limitless grins,
with no energy expended\"
An exquisite blend of raw emotion and the beauty of science.
May 8th, 2023 10:19
sophin said:
Incredibly written!
\"Universal laws shattered by glass\"
\"One smile turns into limitless grins,
with no energy expended\"
An exquisite blend of raw emotion and the beauty of science.
May 8th, 2023 10:19
Reflections
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(one moment of reflection
as a multiplicative inducement
to formulate
our refracted hope\'s, within
lightning
in midsummer, lunch hour
a spark
dissonance crazed hair, as our
self-worth\'s, Phoenix flower
\'One sparkle instantaneously multiplying
glimmering stars in an expanding universe
One smile turns into limitless grins,
with no energy expended\'
just, One
helpful hand, kind gesture
or relatable empathy
worded irresistibly, majestic
just, One)
May 8th, 2023 07:56
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(one moment of reflection
as a multiplicative inducement
to formulate
our refracted hope\'s, within
lightning
in midsummer, lunch hour
a spark
dissonance crazed hair, as our
self-worth\'s, Phoenix flower
\'One sparkle instantaneously multiplying
glimmering stars in an expanding universe
One smile turns into limitless grins,
with no energy expended\'
just, One
helpful hand, kind gesture
or relatable empathy
worded irresistibly, majestic
just, One)
May 8th, 2023 07:56
We need
L. B. Mek said:
love this
\'We need imaginary supermen
to save us from a defunct society\'
Nietzsche\'s entire idyllic philosophy
distilled within seven words
now that\'s what I call a Poetic, feat!
lol
(for that last verse
may I humbly suggest
\'We need medicine, scares
reminder of good-health\'s, precious grace\')
just a thought, forgive my rudeness
dear Poet, I mean no disrespect
May 8th, 2023 03:42
L. B. Mek said:
love this
\'We need imaginary supermen
to save us from a defunct society\'
Nietzsche\'s entire idyllic philosophy
distilled within seven words
now that\'s what I call a Poetic, feat!
lol
(for that last verse
may I humbly suggest
\'We need medicine, scares
reminder of good-health\'s, precious grace\')
just a thought, forgive my rudeness
dear Poet, I mean no disrespect
May 8th, 2023 03:42
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